读后续写真题
2021年6月浙江卷:“我”的工资目
试题再现
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试题分析
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写作思路
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范文赏析
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CONTENTS历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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试题再现试题再现
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn’t understand my world of school
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
Moatchteivr iwtioeus.l dF broe mw haegne t1h4ey, hbero wugohrkt ehder. Abrnedak hfaiss td iand b, eAdl.b Tehret,y t oploakn nthede tmo omnaekye m Frye ndcahd teoaarsnt eadn da ncdhi uckseend pito trori dpgaey. fTahmeyil yh ad
watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
expenses.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the
I didn’t really understand his world either: He was a livestock (牲畜) trucker, and I thought that I would surpass
porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
pla(t超e a过nd) a adndyedth iinn gso hmee h madil ka.c Jceonmnap floisuhnedd t hbey btrheea dti amned Ip uwt atwlkoe dsl iaccerso isnst oth teh es teaggge m aitx htuigreh. Nscehxot,o Jle gffr atudrunaetdio onn. the second stove
burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
Summers in the mid-’70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football,
turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down
preparing for my future as a quarterback (四分卫) on*+ a3 football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or
the fire so it cooked nicely.
Tphraecnt Jiceeffd n motiyc etrdo smtebaomn seh (o长oti号ng) o.ut of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out
the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his
clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
field. He explained our basic task, the tractor (拖拉机) fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for
Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
blawcke aesd ws etoll. spray (喷洒) with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we
注意：
missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.
请co按ck如le下bu格rs式, l在am答b题’s-卡qu的ar相te应rs位, f置ox作ta答ils。, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn’t sure how much it would amount to.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.试题再现
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
At home, my dad said, “A job’s a big step to growing up. I’m glad you will be contributing to the household.”
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had
My dad’s words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn’t interested. I
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the
porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
注意： 所续写短文的词数应为 左右；
1. 150
turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down
*+3
the fire so it cooked nicely.
至少使用 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
2. 5
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out
the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
3.
clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
bla c k as w e ll . 4.
注意：
1.
续Th写e 词pa数y d应a为y a
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v 左ed右 at； last. _____________________________________________________________________
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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试题分析材料分析：
这篇读后续写以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者高中毕业后，参加
农场工作，辛辛苦苦挣到的钱，不情愿贡献给家庭，后来在看到
父亲的辛劳之后，理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不知奉献，
终于想通，并自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲的故事。故事容易
读懂，开放性却很强，可以发挥的余地很大。How to read
• My dad, George, only had an eighth grade
education. A quiet man, he didn’t understand my
world of school activities. From age 14, he worked.
Who:
My dad, I, a neighboring farmer
And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned
and used it to pay family expenses.
What:
work in the farm field
• I didn’t really understand his world either: He was a how to use money I earned
livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass
(超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I
walked across the stage at high school graduation.
• Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home
shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a
football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on
a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports
or practiced my trombone (长号).How to read
• The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a
neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task,
the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds
to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at When:
the summer before my eighth grade
a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over,
but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb’s-
Where:
quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring a neighboring farmer's field
at home
work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it
would amount to.
• At home, my dad said, “A job’s a big step to growing up. I’m glad you will
be contributing to the household.” My dad’s words made me realize that my
earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
• My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more
work, but I wasn’t interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute
my money.读后续写
高中英语写作 新题型
my dad with little education
didn't understand each other
Read for
my dream to be a quarterback
the plot
clue
work on the farm in summer
money I earned
do something for the household
unfair not to use my own money读后续写
高中英语写作 新题型
confident
Read for the emotion clue:
delighted
uninterested读后续写
高中英语写作 新题型
Two clues in the story
The surface level The deep level
The plot line
The emotion line理解材料 高中英语写作 新题型
阅读根下据面材短料文，根内据容其填内容空和。所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had
My dad is a _q_u_i_et_
watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
man and he only
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the
had an _e_ig_h_t_h
porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
grade education.
plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
He was glad that I He started to work from
burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
could earn money age __1_4_ and his money
turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down
and _c_o_n_tr_i_b_u_te_ to was spent to pay _f_a_m_i_ly_
the fire so it cooked nicely.
the household. My Dad _ e _ x _ p _ e _ n _ s _ e _ s _.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out
the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to
clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
black as well. He _d_i_d_n_’t_ u_n_d_e_r_s_ta_n_d_
He thought that a
注意：
my world of school
job’s a big step
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
to _ g _ ro _ w __ in _ g _ _u_p_. activities.
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.理解材料 高中英语写作 新题型
阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
3. Climax
Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had
My father praised me since I could work for the
watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. Thfea malailrym. Hraenagr iant g6 tah.mat., TI hfee lpt auirn fwaeirn tn doot wbne itnhge astbaliers t oqu uiestel y to the kitchen. They decided to boil the
porridge first. They put some rmicey ionwton a mpootn oefy w aantedr laonsdt tlhefet iint ttoe rbeositl iwn hmiloe rteh ewy omrkad. e the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
4. Resolution
plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
The pay day arrived at last.
burner to heat u2p. tBheu iflrdyi-nugp pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
How would I cope with my
turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down
I spent my summer vacation
the fire so it cooked nicely. depression caused by my dad’s
before the eighth grade
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minutew, othred sp?orridge boiled over and put out
the wfiroer. kJienngn ai np amniyc kneedi.g Thhbaonrk'sfu fliley,l dJ eff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to
cleaann idt ulopo skoe tdh efyo rcwoualrdd c toon ttihneu ep atoy .cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
5. Ending
Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
black as well. I understood immediately what
1. Opening
注意：
my parents were worried about.
1. 续 M 写 y 词 da 数 d 应 an 为 d I1 5d0id 左 n’ 右 t u ； nderstand Would I understand my dad
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
each other. finally?
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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写作思路首句精研 读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型
研读两段的给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
ThPea trwain 1s :w Terhe efi llpeda yw idtha eyx caitrermivenet das a tht elya tshto.u g ht of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had
watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
“I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money” mentioned in the text suggests “I
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the
porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
was upset”. Would this feeling continue as the pay day arrived? What happened in Para. 1 to make
plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
me “understand immediately what my parents were worried about” in Para. 2?
turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down
the fire so it cooked nicely.
ThPeanr Jae f2f n: oIt icuend dsteerasmt oshoodo tiinmg mouet odfi tahtee plyot wandh athte mlidy s tparatirnegn tots s hwakeer.e T hwe onerxrti emdin autbeo, tuhet. p orridge boiled over and put out
the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to
clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
What was my reaction after learning about my parents’ worries? “I understood my dad,
Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
black as well.
contributed my money willingly, learned about shouldering responsibilities” all seem good morals I
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
got at last. How can the ending be designed to achieve some or all of them?
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.二、分析续写段首，确定续写方向
读后续写
高中英语写作 新题型
由第一段首句内容
The pay day arrived at last.
（工资终于到了。）及时间线索词 可知，
The pay day
第一段可描写作者的工资到手后，高兴地计划自己
用这笔钱，不愿意交给父亲，因此此时应该表达开
心 失落 不想把钱交给父亲的场景。设问如下：
→ →
①
Which words or phrases should be focused on in the
given sentence?
，
(pay arrived )
②
How did I feel when I got payment from my work?
③
How did I plan the money at first?
④
What did his father say?二、分析续写段首，确定续写方向
读后续写
高中英语写作 新题型
根据第二段首句
I understand immediately what
（我立刻明白了父母
my parents were worried about.
的担心。）及时间线索词 可知，本段
immediately
一定是描写我发现父亲的辛劳 突然明白了父母
→
的焦虑 把钱给父母 自豪的场景。设问如下：
→ →
⑤
Which words or phrases should be focused on in
the given sentence?
，
(understand worried about)
⑥
What did I see and understand?
⑦
What did I realize and decide to do?
⑧
What’s the end of the story?读后续写
高中英语写作 新题型 How to write
[coherent]
逻辑要连贯
para 1 and para 2 { }
Plot and emotion with appropriate language读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型 How to write
pay
①由第一段首句内容 拿到工资 。可知，第一段可描写作者的工资到手后，
“ ”
高兴地计划自己用这笔钱，不愿意交给父亲。
②由第二段首句内容 父亲让我自己支配工资。 可知，作者惊讶之余，续
“ ”
。
写内容本着正能量的方向发展，应该为家庭有所付出How to write
读后续写
高中英语写作 新题型
续写线索
：
高兴 不情愿 理解 为家庭付出
—— —— ——How to write
读后续写
高中英语写作 新题型
词汇激活
①计划：
programme/plan
② 奉献：
. give/devote
③发现：
see/findHow to write
读后续写
高中英语写作 新题型
情绪类
① 不情愿的：
. unwilling/reluctant
② 自豪地：
. proudly/with pride
③ 高兴的
. : be delighted to do...润色句式：
读后续写
高中英语写作 新题型
段首：
On doing...,
His face lit up
I suddenly realized that...润色句式：
读后续写
高中英语写作 新题型
结尾升华：
不情愿为家庭付出 明白父母的难处 愿意付出
I took out my own money with pride and was delighted to hand
it to my dad. He gave me a tight hug with tears streaming down
his cheeks.②挖掘文章人物的情感
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade
education. A quiet man, he didn’t understand
读懂开头这两句可知父子两
my world of school activities.…
人彼此不理解，这是读后续
I didn’t really understand his world either:
写的伏笔，表达故事发展从
He was a li负ve面st情oc感k到 tr积uc极k情er,感 a的nd变 I化 thought that
过程（（最超后两过人）彼此理解了）
I would surpass anything he had
accomplished …
伏笔指将上文看似无关紧要的人物或事件作为在
续写下文时可能出现的人物或事件的预先提示或暗示，
目的达到“前有伏笔，后有照应”的效果。②挖掘文章人物的情感
这也是读后续写的 ，表达作
铺垫
者父亲很小开始工作，而且爷爷
拿走作者爸爸所以赚的钱，
铺垫
两方面内容：一是作者
了续写的
一家生活很辛苦，二是作者家庭
传统，赚钱上交帮助家庭开支
… From age 14. he worked. And his dad,
Albert, took the money my dad earned and
used it to pay family expenses. …
铺垫指故事高潮的前奏，如环境描写、
对话描述等，推动主要人物主要内容的展
示，帮助制造悬念和矛盾冲突。②挖掘文章人物的情感
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at
home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or
throwing a football, preparing for my future as
a quarterback on a football team. In poor
weather, I read about sports or practiced my
（长号）
trombone .
这也是读后续写的伏笔，本段通过恰当使用一连
串的节奏动词，生动具体地描述了主人公对体育
的酷爱，展示了极强的画面感，我们据此可以设
想作者赚钱后一定会得意洋洋地去计划如何去花
钱的故事②挖掘文章人物的情感
The summer before my eighth grade I was
one of a group of boys …. Then we began
again. This happened over and over, … It was
tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay,
even though I wasn’t sure how much it would
amount to.
通过 及 ，加上情绪
began again happened over and over
的形容词 来体现作者不肯出苦耐劳，但为了达
tiring
成愿望的不得不辛苦的矛盾心理②挖掘文章人物的情感
At home, my dad said, “A job’s a big step
to growing up. I’m glad you will be
contributing to the household.” My dad’s words
made me realize that my earnings might not be
mine to do with as I wished.
为后文作者最终把赚的
钱资助家用，最终 长大
“ ”
埋下了伏笔②挖掘文章人物的情感
My labors lasted about two weeks, and
the farmer said there might be more work,
but I wasn’t interested. I decided it was not
fair that I had to contribute my money.
这里使用精准化动词 ， 渲染作
decided contribute
者因为要把赚钱交给爸爸，感觉工作起来没有
动力，衬托了作者极不情愿交钱给爸爸的心理
活动描写，也为后续解决冲突埋下了伏笔历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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范文赏析范文学习 读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型
根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。
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A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
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the fire so it cooked nicely.
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Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out
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Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
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straight back to the farmer and took the extra work.
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.范文学习 读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型
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A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The pay day arrived at last. Though I had a total of $100 in my pocket, I still went home with
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
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watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
for ages. Not much was said over dinner. However, before I went to bed that night, I overheard a
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the
porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
conversation coming from my parents’ bedroom. “Sam can do without a personal football coach.
plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
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turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down
driving. A professional can help him make great progress in football. You know the boy’s future
the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out
dream,” said my dad.
the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to
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Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
misunderstood my dad all the time, not the other way around. The next morning, I handed Dad my
black as well.
注意：
hard-earned cash. It only seemed fair. But he just took some of it. “That’ll do for now and thanks
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
went straight back to the farmer and took the extra work.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.范文学习 读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型
2021 年 6 月浙江卷读后续写 —— 逻辑连贯 (coherent) 重复、指代、同义替换等 (cohesive)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
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plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
heart. How I wished I could use the money to buy a pair of new sports shoes I’d
burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down
wanted for ages. Not much was said over dinner. However, before I went to bed
the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out
that night, I overheard a conversation coming from my parents’ bedroom.
the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to
clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
“Sam can do without a personal football coach. Our budget is really tight this
Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
blackm aso wneltlh. ,” said my mom. “Don’t worry. I just need to do some extra driving. A
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future dream,” said my dad.
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.范文学习 读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型
2021 年 6 月浙江卷读后续写 —— 逻辑连贯 (coherent) 重复、指代、同义替换等 (cohesive)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
What did I react after knowing my parents’ worries?
Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had
watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
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porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
It was me who had misunderstood my dad all the time, not the other way
burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down
the fiarer soo uit ncodok.e dT nhicee lyn. ext morning, I handed Dad my hard-earned cash. It only seemed
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out
the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to
fair. But he just took some of it. “That’ll do for now and thanks for helping with
clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
the family expenses, son. You are really growing up,” he said. After the talk, I
black as well.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.范文学习 读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型
阅读下2面02材1 年料，6 月根据浙其江内卷容读和所后给续段写落—开头—语精续彩写语两段言，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thou让g步ht 状of语 th从e 句surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had
The pay day arrived at last. Though I had a total of $100 in my pocket, I still went home
watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
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porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
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the fire so it cooked nicely.
night, I overheard a conversation coming from my parents’ bedroom. “Sam can do without a
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out
the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned o形ff容 th词e 搭ga配s quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to
clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
personal football coach. Our budget is really tight this month,” said my mom. “Don’t worry. I
Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
black as well.
注意：just need to do some extra driving. A professional can help him make great progress in football.
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
You know the boy’s future dream,” said my dad.
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.范文学习 读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型
阅读下2面02材1 年料，6 月根据浙其江内卷容读和所后给续段写落—开头—语精续彩写语两段言，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
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Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. It was me who had
watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down固 t定he搭 s配tairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the
porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
misunderstood my dad all the time, not the other way around. The next morning, I
plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
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burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down
handed Dad my hard-earned cash. It only seemed fair. But he just took some of it.
the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out
the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to
“That’ll do for now and thanks for helping with the family expenses, son. You are
clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
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Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
black asr weealll.ly growing up,” he said. After the talk, I went straight back to the farmer and
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如to下ok格 式th在e 答ex题tr卡a 的w相or应k.位 置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.范文学习 读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型
检测一下你对范文的亮点语块掌握了吗？
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
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Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had
watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the
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porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
心情沉重 a heavy heart 想要某物很久了 w a n t sth. for ages
burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down
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the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out
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注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.范文学习 读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型
阅读下赏面材析料范，文根据的其亮内容点和语所句给段。落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
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watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the
porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
Though I had a total of $100 in my pocket, I still went home with a heavy heart.
plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
How I wished I could use the money to buy a pair of new sports shoes I’d wanted for
burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down
ages. Not much was said over dinner. (Para. 1)
the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out
本部分从作者的心理活动和外部情景两方面描写了作者的愤懑情绪。这种直
the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to
clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
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注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.THANK YOU
