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遇困脱险类
必备词汇
1.be trapped in/by...
 
  被困在…… 中 
2.find oneself in a dilemma
 
  发现自己陷入困境 
3.be caught in a dangerous situation
 
  陷入危险的境地 
4.be stuck in a difficult position
 
  陷入艰难的处境 
5.in a desperate situation 
 
 处于绝望的境地 
6.with no way out 
 
 无路可走 
7.struggle to escape
 
  努力逃脱 
8.try hard to find a way out
 
  努力寻找出路 
9.take risks to break free 
 
 冒险挣脱 
10.manage to escape
 
  设法逃脱 
11.succeed in getting out
 
  成功出去 
12.find a way to safety
 
  找到通往安全的路
必备句子
1. 陷入困境描述
Suddenly, they found themselves trapped in a deep cave with no obvious way out.
①
 
突然,他们发现自己被困在一个很深的洞穴里,没有明显的出路。 
Caught in a violent storm, they were in a desperate situation, not knowing what to do.
②
 
被困在一场猛烈的暴风雨中,他们处于绝望的境地,不知道该怎么办。 
It was completely dark except the faint light given out by a few stars in the sky.We had no
③
 
idea where we were.除了几颗星星发出微弱的光外,天完全黑了。我们不知道我们在哪
里。
When we reached deep into the forest, suddenly the smog spread everywhere and we were
④
 
not able to see each other clearly and lost our way.
当我们到达森林深处时,突然烟雾弥漫,我们看不清彼此,迷了路。
When buried under snow, Scott drifted between terror and panic, hoping that his friend
⑤
 
Paul was not buried so deep.He held on to that faint possibility like a rope which could pull 
him to safety.
当斯科特被埋在雪下时,他惊恐万分,希望他的朋友保罗没有被埋得那么深。他紧紧抓住
这个渺小的可能性,就像抓住一根能把他拉到安全地带的绳子。
2. 努力脱险过程
Desperate to get out, they tried every possible means, even taking great risks.
①
 
他们不顾一切地想出去,尝试了每一种可能的方法,甚至冒了很大的风险。 
In the face of the difficult situation, they remained calm and made every effort to find a
②
 
way to escape. 
面对困境,他们保持冷静,竭尽全力寻找逃脱的方法。 
He shook off the snow, moved snow away with bare hands, and managed to pull himself
③
 
out.
他抖掉雪,徒手把雪弄开,然后设法爬了出来。
He painstakingly took only tiny breaths, fighting to stay positive by focusing on this
④
 
breathing.
他费力地做着微小的呼吸,努力把注意力集中在这种呼吸上,以保持乐观的心态。
Time ticked away slowly.Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team
⑤
 
arrived.
时间慢慢流逝。就在他感觉要死了的时候,救援队赶到了。
3. 脱险后的感慨
Finally breaking free from the danger, they breathed a sigh of relief and felt an
①
 
overwhelming sense of joy. 
终于摆脱了危险,他们松了一口气,感到一种强烈的喜悦。 
After a long and tough struggle, they were rescued and realized the value of life and
②
 
friendship. 
经过漫长而艰苦的挣扎,他们被营救了,并且意识到了生命和友谊的价值。 
Frightened and tired as I was, I congratulated myself on returning safe and sound.
③
尽管我又害怕又累,我还是庆幸自己安然无恙地回来了。
主题升华句
1. The accident enabled them to cherish every moment and treasure meaningful
 
  
connections.
事故让他们珍惜每一刻并重视有意义的人际关系。
2. October 20 was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
10 月20 日是如此难忘,它将永远留在我的记忆。
3. It occurred to me that helping others is priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.
我突然意识到,帮助别人是无价的,每个人都应该是一个救生员。
4. One simple act of kindness is a blessing for both the giver and the receiver.
一个简单的善举是给予者和接受者的祝福。
5. She felt warmth in the cold day, and believed there was kindness in every corner.
她在寒冷的日子里感受到了温暖,她相信世界充满善意。
6. I realized how lucky I was to be rescued and how blessed I am to have such supportive 
friends.
我意识到能够被营救、能够有这样支持我的朋友是多么幸运。
7. I will be always careful when I go outdoors. After all, safety always comes first.
以后外出时我会注意安全。毕竟安全总是第一位的。
8. The story shows that everyone should have a good knowledge of first aid, for every second 
will count in an emergency.
这个故事表明,每个人都应该学点急救知识,因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。
9. Only then did I realize that actions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties.
直到那时,我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧,勇敢可以战胜困难。
10. This painful adventure teaches me not to despair even in the darkest hour, because after 
every night there is a day.
这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望,因为黑夜之后就是黎明。
11. “Be patient! The rescue team is on the way.” these words brought a ray of hope to the 
seemingly hopeless situation.
“救援队已经在路上了。”这句话给看似绝望的处境带来了一线希望。
12. This unforgettable experience forever reminds me to cherish those who shower us with 
boundless love.
这段难忘的经历永远提醒我要珍惜那些给我们带来无限爱的人。
13. When they learned I was safe, they were relieved. What an unforgettable experience!
当他们得知我很安全时,他们松了一口气。多么难忘的经历啊!
14. It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced 
with, we shouldn't lose heart.
正是这种独特的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困难,我们都不应失去信心。
典例分析:2024 年T8 第二次联考——电梯惊魂
第二节(满分25 分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When we were finally dismissed from the last class of the day, the students streamed out of 
the classrooms. It was another boring day after school. I dragged my feet home as I sighed. Yet 
another uneventful day, I thought. Little did I know that the day would take a turn for the worse.
The lift lobby(电梯间)of my flat was old and dirty. The walls,which were painted white, 
had been dirtied over many years. I reached my flat's lobby, and pressed the lift button and went 
in. Just then, Mrs Lim,my elderly neighbour,hobbled(蹒跚)in.She looked ancient with 
tissue paper white hair, wearing a faded old-fashioned dress. I held the lift door open. flashing a 
friendly smile, and politely greeted her. I asked her how she felt that day and pressed the buttons. 
She thanked me for being so polite, then we were silent for the rest of the ride.
The lift fell down increasingly fast. There were loud clanking sounds here and there while the 
lift grew slower and slower. My heart beat hard and fast as my hands turned cold and wet with 
sweat. Unfortunately, the lift came to an abrupt stop at the fifth floor. I pressed the buttons hard 
several times, but it was of no help. The lights on the buttons had gone out. It soon dawned on me 
that we were trapped. An icy fear crept up my spine. Mrs Lim was hysterical(歇斯底里).
“We will never get out!” she cried with her face pale. It had become a colourless mask. I had 
no time to lose. I pressed the bell in the lift immediately. The sound was surely deafening, but 
what other choice did I have? Mrs Lim burst into tears. I tried my very best to comfort her,telling 
her that everything would be all right and that we needed to find out how to get out safely. Mrs 
Lim began having trouble breathing, and I immediately helped her sit down and loosened her 
collar.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Several minutes passed, but no help came.
Paragraph 2: Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of 
the lift door.

解读故事(5R)
Read for characters
I,Mrs Lim,my elderly neighbour,the firefighters
Read for plot
After school, when the author went home and entered the elevator, he 
met his neighbor, Mrs.Lin, who also went in. The elevator suddenly 
broke down and they were trapped. Mrs.Lin was very afraid.
放学后,作者回家进入电梯时遇到邻居林太太也进了,电梯突然坏
了,他们被困。林太太非常害怕。
Read for conflict
如何从电梯中逃脱?
How to escape from the elevator?
Read for emotional 
changes
bored(无聊)→panicked(惊慌)→calm(冷静)→worried(担
忧)
Read for theme
The story shows the author and a neighbor trapped in a faulty elevator. 
The author tries to comfort the neighbor, reflecting calmness and care in 
adversity.
文章讲述电梯故障后作者与邻居被困,作者努力安慰邻居,体现了
在困境中保持冷静与关爱他人的品质。

写作思路(十句五定法)
小试牛刀(十大语法句式)
1.“救命啊!!! " 我声嘶力竭地尖叫,一次又一次地按响紧急警报,试图引起某人的注意
(非谓语作状语)但所有的努力都是徒劳的。 
  
 
  
 
2.似乎过了几个小时(宾语从句),电梯里一片寂静,只有林女士的抽泣声打破了寂静
(非谓语作状语)。 
  
 
  
 
3.老太太是如此的害怕和惊慌(倒装),以至于她的脸变得苍白,她的手不停地颤抖,泪
水不受控制地顺着她的脸流下来。(with 复合结构) 
  
 
  
 
4.我把她搂在怀里,拍拍她的背,告诉他一切都会好的(三连动)。 
  
 
第一段思路 (5 句)
呼喊救命
“救命啊!!! "我声嘶力竭地尖叫,一次又一次地按响紧急警报,试图
引起某人的注意但所有的努力都是徒劳的。
电梯一片寂静,
只有林女士的抽
泣声
似乎过了几个小时,电梯里一片寂静,只有林女士的抽泣声打破了寂
静。
老太太害怕和惊
慌
老太太是如此的害怕和惊慌,以至于她的脸变得苍白,她的手不停地颤
抖,泪水不受控制地顺着她的脸流下来。
我的安慰
我把她搂在怀里,拍拍她的背,告诉他一切都会好的。
担心救援是否会
来
当我们等待有人来救我们时,时间似乎停止了,不知道救援是否会来。
第二段思路(5 句)
消防员的救援
随着他们的声音越来越大,伴随着工具敲击门的声音,一种如释重负的
感觉淹没了我。
我的指引:呼救
带着重新燃起的希望,我大声呼救,指引他们到了我们的位置。
成功获救
门刚被撞开,明亮的光线就射了进来,驱散了电梯里的黑暗,也驱散了
我们心中的黑暗。
表达感谢
“谢谢你”我们对消防队员重复道,感激的泪水模糊了我们的双眼。
主题升华
在我内心深处,我知道这平静的一天,变成了如此奇迹的一天,将永远
扎根在我的记忆中。
5.当我们等待有人来救我们时(状语从句),时间似乎停止了,不知道救援是否会来(非
谓语作状语)。 
  
 
6.随着他们的声音越来越大(状语从句),伴随着工具敲击门的声音(非谓语作状语),
一种如释重负的感觉淹没了我(无灵主语)。 
  
 
  
 
7.带着重新燃起的希望,我大声呼救,指引他们到了我们的位置(非谓语作状语)。 
  
 
8.门刚被撞开(倒装),明亮的光线就射了进来,驱散了电梯里的黑暗(非谓语作状
语),也驱散了我们心中的黑暗。 
  
 
  
 
9.“谢谢你” 我们对消防队员重复道,感激的泪水模糊了我们的双眼。(with 复合结构) 
  
 
10.在我内心深处,我知道这平静的一天,变成了如此奇迹的一天(定语从句),将永远扎
根在我的记忆中。 
  
 
  
 
练习
1
Early one weekend morning, I was sleeping like a log when the telephone rang. When I 
answered, I heard my Grandma’s voice, “Hey, sweetheart. I have missed you so much lately. Why 
don’t you come to the countryside and enjoy some fine views?” she asked.
“Dad, Grandma is inviting us to her home,” I shouted to my father who was busy in the 
kitchen.
“Fine with me,” he responded in a casual tone.
After a quick breakfast, we drove to Grandma’s. Once we arrived, we were both thrilled by 
the breathtaking landscape. The plum trees in the backyard were ripe with fruit, while millions of 
wildflowers colored the valley. Grandma prepared delicious lunch including her special 
homemade apple jam, which was my favorite. Talking and laughing, we didn't even notice that it 
was late in the afternoon. Though somewhat cooler than it had been that morning, Grandma 
suggested that we take her homemade wooden boat for a tour along the nearby river.
Seated in the boat, looking up at the sky, I felt like the clouds were greeting us cheerfully 
from above. In the vast fields, the golden trees were like brides in the sun. The breeze skimmed 
over the surface of the field, carrying the sweet smell of the flowers.
“It is so nice to spend some quality time with family,” Dad murmured.
“It feels like we're on an adventure,” I added.
While we were admiring the splendid setting around us, the weather started getting hot and 
humid again. At first, we ignored this change, but when Dad looked up at the sky, he saw dark, 
low clouds were approaching us. Then a fierce gale sprang up. Lightning flashed within the black 
clouds, followed by a roar of thunder.
“Row!” Dad shouted, trembling, “A tornado is coming!”
Para1: There was no time to think.
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Para 2:Grandma opened the door for us.
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练习2
A Reason to Run
    Justin and his friend David had known each other before they became classmates. David 
didn’t seem to mind that Justin was small for his age. But on the first day of school, when David 
and Justin had lunch with the rest of the fifth- grade boys, Steven asked when David had started 
playing with babies. David laughed out loud and Justin felt uneasy.
    Several weeks later, David called to invite Justin to his birthday party at his grandfather’s 
farm. Justin didn’t want to go. He had wanted to spend the day running. When he ran, the 
problems at school didn’t matter, and being the smallest kid in his class didn’t matter, either. So 
every day after school he practiced. And Saturday morning was the best time to run.
    This Saturday, however, he reached the farm with Steven and the rest of David’s friends. 
David’s mother suggested that David show the boys around, so David asked his grandfather, Mr. 
Hamilton, to drive them to the foot of a hill. Mr. Hamilton left to prepare for the party. The boys 
decided to enter a cave, go out from a hole at its top, climb the hill and then hike back.
    The entrance to the cave was a big stone room with huge wooden beams (梁) bordering the 
doorway. About thirty feet in was a wall of rocks blocking further entrance. From the hole in the 
ceiling, light shone on the back wall. David started to show the boys how to climb up the hack 
wall. “Let me go first,” Steven demanded. He grabbed David’s belt and pulled him off the rock, 
throwing him into Rafael.
“Watch it!” shouted David. But it was too late. He and Rafael fell hard against a beam and 
the wood started to crack. A second later the beam fell. Then part of the ceiling collapsed. Dust 
filled the air. When the dust finally settled, the six boys found themselves trapped in the cave and 
the only exit was the hole in the ceiling, which became smaller — too small for anyone to go out. 
Worse still, a stream of water was flowing into the cave.
Paragraph 1: Justin looked up at the hole and said, “I might be small enough to get out.”
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Paragraph 2: Suddenly, Justin saw the farmhouse.
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练习3:
Jake, Leo and Tom had been fascinated by the legend of the "Square Treasure" ever since 
Mr. Higgins, the elderly librarian of Willow Town, shared it with them during storytime. The tale 
went that a notorious pirate named Captain Blackbeard had hidden a chest of priceless treasure in 
the town’s central square a century ago, with a riddle: "Only those who value loyalty more than 
greed shall uncover what’s hidden." The boys had spent weeks poring over old library books, 
finally copying a tattered map from a 1920s 航海日志 (nautical journal) that marked the 
treasure’s possible location.
On a crisp Saturday morning, the three 12-year-olds set off, their backpacks bulging with 
peanut butter sandwiches, apple slices, water bottles, and a first-aid kit Tom’s mom had insisted 
on. They followed the map through the overgrown woods behind Willow Town, their laughter 
echoing as they pushed aside thorny branches and hopped over gurgling brooks. Jake, the oldest, 
led the way, while Leo, the most adventurous, kept checking the map, and Tom, the careful one, 
trailed slightly behind, watching for obstacles.
Just as they emerged from the woods and stepped onto the gravel path leading to the central 
square—only ten minutes away—Tom’s foot slipped on a moss-covered stone. He let out a sharp 
cry and crumpled to the ground, clutching his right ankle. Jake and Leo spun around, their grins 
fading as they saw Tom’s face twist in pain. When he tried to stand, a wave of agony washed over 
him, and tears pooled in his eyes. Leo knelt down and gently touched Tom’s ankle, which was 
already swelling rapidly. "It’s definitely twisted," he said solemnly. Jake bit his lip, glancing at the 
path ahead then back at Tom. "We’re so close," he muttered. "But we can’t leave him here alone." 
The two boys fell into a tense silence, torn between their long-awaited treasure hunt and their 
friend in need.
Para1 :Jake knelt down to examine Tom’s ankle gently while Leo rummaged through his 
backpack
 
for
 
the
 
elastic 
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Para2:When they finally stumbled into the central square, the sun was already setting, painting 
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练习4
Uncle Jed, a 68-year-old retired carpenter, had lived in the small town for forty years. He was 
a quiet man who spent most of his time tending to his flower bed or mending things for neighbors. 
One summer afternoon, he was watering roses in his yard when thick black smoke suddenly 
billowed from the house next door. The house belonged to the Carters, whose parents had left for 
the city that morning, leaving 10-year-old Lila and 7-year-old Milo at home.
“Fire! Help!” A shrill cry from Lila cut through the air. Uncle Jed dropped his watering can 
and rushed over. The front door was blocked by flames, and the windows were glowing red. He 
banged on the door frantically, but only frightened sobs came from inside. Without a second 
thought, he grabbed a wet blanket from his porch, wrapped it around his shoulders, and smashed a 
side window with a nearby shovel. The scorching heat and smoke made him cough violently, but 
he climbed through the window without hesitation.
Inside, the house was filled with choking smoke. He called out the kids’ names loudly. A 
weak “We’re here!” came from the staircase. He stumbled toward the sound, his eyes stinging 
from the smoke. When he found Lila and Milo huddled on the steps, trembling with fear, he knelt 
down and pulled them close.
“Hold onto me tightly, don’t let go!” he said hoarsely.
He lifted Milo in one arm and held Lila’s hand tightly, heading for the broken window. 
Para 1. Just as they were about to reach it, a burning beam creaked and fell from the ceiling. 
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Para2. Neighbors who had gathered around quickly carried Uncle Jed away from the burning 
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练习5
As mountains go, 1,642-foot Squaw Peak isn't particularly impressive. But its inviting views 
of western Massachusetts have tricked hikers into becoming content among its steep, slippery 
cliffs, resulting in countless injuries and even deaths. Henry Grant, a week shy of starting his 
freshman year at Ithaca College, respected Squaw Peak's record. As such, he stayed a good ten 
feet from the edge while waiting for his mother to catch up to him one day in August 2019.
He watched 15 or so other hikers enjoy the splendid view; one hiker, around 60 and dressed 
in pink, was peeking over the lip of the high cliff with her husband, busy taking photos of the 
distant valleys. When Grant’s mother rejoined him, the two headed down the trail. Suddenly, he 
heard something frightening: “Paula! Paula!" a man yelled. Grant wheeled around. The woman in 
pink was nowhere to be seen. She'd fallen off the side of the mountain.
Several hikers immediately started looking for her, but their view was blocked by trees. Grant 
decided to lend a hand. After assuring his mother that he would be safe, Grant walked off the trail 
alone. After 15 minutes of climbing over very large rocks, pushing past sharp brush, and slipping 
down patches of loose dirt, Grant spotted a figure about 25 feet above him. She was dressed in 
pink and crumpled in a kneeling position on a small rock outcropping. The woman had fallen 
about 75 feet. Incredibly, she was alive. “Paula!” Grant shouted. “Paula! Is that you?” The woman 
hardly responded. He called 911 to report her location. He waited where he was for a bit, but she 
kept trying to move, and every time she moved, she slipped a little more.
Para 1: She was moaning and hardly making sense.
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Para 2: About 45 minutes later, the rescuers arrived on the top of the mountain.
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