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专题 03 人物负面情绪描写 （害怕、羞愧、悲伤、生气
等）
【考情分析】
在读后续写过程中，对人物心理情绪的描写，可以帮助读者更深入的了解人物的性格和心理状
态。并具备丰富人物形象、增强情感共鸣、推动情节发展、展现人物的复杂性、深化人物形象的作
用。通过描写人物在特定情境下的喜、怒、哀、乐，可以感受到人物的动机、行为和决策。这样的描
写使得故事更加引人入胜，使人物更加真实和立体。
【写作指导】
在进行心理描写时，常常使用下列方法：
1. 细腻的形容词来表达人物的内心。
2. 运用比喻和暗示来帮助读者感受到人物的挣扎和犹豫等复杂情感。
3. 构建心理冲突与矛盾。借助一些词汇或短语展示这些技巧。
句式：
1. 形容词+形容词，主语+谓语，ving....
2. A burst/flood/surge/sense of...+v.(seize/grasp/swallow/well up/surge/overwhelm)+主语，
3. so+adj./adv.+部分倒装+主语...
4. with+宾语+宾语补足语，主语+谓语...
5. -ving/-ved..., 主语+谓语...
【素材宝库】
词汇积累之“害怕”
前额出汗 ’s hands摊开双手
sweat on forehead spread one
tongue-tied结结巴巴的 a strong sense of horror 一阵恐怖
shake/tremble with fear吓得发抖 be struck dumb with astonishment吓得目瞪口呆
stand rooted to the spot with fear吓得呆若木鸡 pace back and forth来回踱步
heart beats violently心跳加快 Scared and shocked, sb....既害怕又震惊，某人....更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
“害怕”有关句式积累
1. With a pounding heart and cold, moist palms, I felt faint.
心怦怦直跳，手掌冰冷潮湿，我感到头晕。
2. Cautious and even a bit scared, he swiftly slipped into the quiet classroom, sweat on forehead.
他很谨慎，甚至有点害怕，迅速溜进安静的教室，额头上流汗。
3. A flood of fear welled up in him..
他心中涌起了一阵恐惧。。
4. Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。
5. He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.
他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。
6. At the sight of the ferocious tiger, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were
sweating.
一看到那只凶猛的老虎，我就被深深的恐惧感所控制，手心出汗。
词汇积累之“羞愧、绝望、悲伤”
sb. tightly/firmly紧紧拥抱
hugged/embraced be overcome with sorrow悲伤不已
great sorrow clouds sb’s eyes满眼忧伤 fall silent/be in total silence/hold one’s tongue默不作声
with hollow, pale face面色空洞苍白 tears roll/run/stream/flow down sb’s cheeks潸然泪下
a cloud of gloom一片阴云 hang/lower/bend/bow one’s head in sadness伤心地低下头
陷入绝望 fall into despair 情绪低落 be low in spirits
意志消沉 a broken spirit in low spirits/in an unpleasant mood情绪低落;沮丧
感到一阵悲伤 a flash of grief came upon 使某人悲痛 make one's heart bleed
sb.
怀着沉重的心情 with a heavy heart 减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼ease sb. of his pain/trouble
“羞愧、绝望、悲伤”有关句式积累更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
1. I ran over to my father, reached out my hands and hugged/embraced him tightly/firmly.
我跑到父亲身边，伸出双手，紧紧地拥抱着他。
2. A food of shame crowded into my mind.
一阵愧疚涌上心头。
3. He gave up the attempt in despair.
他在绝望中放弃了尝试。
4. As the result of an accident, James was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into
hopelessness.
由于事故,詹姆斯突然被投入黑暗之中,陷入绝望。
5. Upon hearing the bad news,her heart ached,tears streaming down her cheeks.
一听到这个坏消息，她心痛地眼泪直流。
6.They were immersed in sorrow.
他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
7. Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly.
一听到这个坏消息,她被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。
8. So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
她感到羞愧极了，血液涌上脸颊。
9.He went home ashamed, chocking with anger and confusion.
他羞愧地回到了家，哽咽着，内心充满愤怒和不解。
9. His heart sank when he heard the news that he failed to win a prize.
当得知没有获奖时,他心一沉。
词汇积累之“生气”
get mad/cross at sb对某人勃然大怒 stare at sb in anger/glare at sb 怒目而视
sb's face falls/darkens 脸沉/黑了下来 go/turn red with anger 气得满脸通红
ignore/disregard a complaint对抱怨不予理会 be speechless with indignation气得说不出话
arouse one's displeasure引起某人的不快 have a worried look愁眉苦脸
be easily annoyed at trifles易为琐事而恼火 flame with anger气得满脸通红
hit the ceiling/roof 或 explode with anger 勃然 be displeased at one's contact对某人的行为感到不满
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“生气”有关句式积累
1. His voice trembled with anger.
他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
2.He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
3. He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
4. Stamp one's feet with anger.气得直跺脚。
5. Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.
谢尔顿感到非常生气,他冲出房间,狠狠摔门。
6. My teacher's eyes were shining with anger.我老师的眼中充满怒火。
万能写作模板
1. 一看到那只凶猛老虎, 我害怕得嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。
At the sight of the ferocious tiger, I felt so ____________ that my throat ____________ and my knees
____________ .
4. 一种惊恐的感觉掠过他的心头。
A frightened feeling ____________ his heart.
3.她惊奇地看着我。
She looked at me____________ .
4. 汽车在几秒钟内就开走了，爱丽丝难以置信地摇头。
The car was gone in seconds, leaving Alice ______________________.
5. 他气得脸色阴沉。
His face ____________ .
6.我充满了愤怒。
I was ____________ .
7.他没有获奖的消息，立刻使他精神不振。
The news that he didn't win prize immediately ____________ .
8.离婚后他有着很强的失落感。
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9. 她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。
She felt ____________ she could feel her face ____________ .
10.一看到凶猛的狼，我吓得僵住了，吓得一动也不敢动。
At the sight of the fierce wolf, I____________ ， too ____________ .
11.孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头。
____________ comes in waves.
12.每一个夜晚，她把头埋在枕头里哭，肝肠寸断。
Every night she ____________ as though her heart would____________ .
13.我痛苦地抽泣着，尝到脸上流下泪水咸咸的味道。
I sobbed____________ , tasting the salt from the tears that ____________ my face.
14.他因恐惧而呆住，站在那儿一动不动。
Frozen ____________ , he stood ____________ .
15.回想起那一幕，简非常后悔，忍不住哭了起来，泪水夺眶而出。
Recalling the scene, so ____________ that she ____________ crying, tears ____________ .
16.保罗回想起这些伤人的字眼，气得暴跳如雷，重重地摔门而去，头也不回地大步走开。
Recalling _____________ words, so _____________ was Paul that he ____________ and ____________
the door heavily, ____________ looking back.
17. 他试图控制住自己的泪水。
He _______________________his tears.
18. 他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。
His eyes _______________________.
19. 跟老师讲出真相后，她不安地坐在座位上，手指交叉着，心跳得像打鼓一样。
Having told the teacher the truth, she sat ________________ with her fingers crossed and her heart
_______________.
20. 用灼热的目光怒视着我，他几乎控制不住自己的怒火，声音因愤怒而颤抖。
Glaring at me _____________, he could hardly/scarcely contain his rage, his voice ____________anger.
【 高考真题】
（2022年浙江卷）
Though I wanted to share my ideas with him fully, I failed to do so for fear that I would hold him back. I更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
just kept nodding when he asked me whether it is ok to do this way or that way.
虽然我想和他充分分享我的想法，但我没有这样做，因为我害怕我会阻止他。当他问我是可以这样做还是
那样做时，我只是一直在点头。
（2021年新高考I卷）
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father’s appearing was like a savior
to th当双胞胎失望地环顾四周，他们的父亲出现了。父亲的出现就像是这两个孩子的救世主。e two
children.
（2021年新高考I卷）
The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly,
“Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
这两个孩子就可以做完早餐了，这是她意想不到的。孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”妈妈紧紧地拥抱着
他们，一次又一次地吻着他们。
【 名校模拟题提升练】
1．（2023·广东揭阳·校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一
篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Jenny was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the
house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping (哭泣) sorrowfully (悲伤地) when she thought of the scolding (责骂)
from her mother.Having wandered (游荡) aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for
something to eat.She stood beside a stand (货摊) for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his
business. However, with no money in hand, she gave a sigh (叹气) and had to leave. The seller behind the stand
noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh, yes, but I don’t have money on
me,” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man “Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, the
smell so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly. “Nothing. Actually, I
was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped (擦拭) her tears. “Even a stranger on the street will
give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me. She is so
merciless (无情的) compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I
only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude (感激) to her?” Jenny
sat there, speechless and numb (麻木的) with shock; she remembered her mother’s familiar face and weathered (变
形) hands. “Why didn’t I think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted (感激的). Why
haven’t I thanked my mum for what she has done for me?” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an
apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
Paragraph 1：
Approaching the doorway,
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
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2．（2023·浙江·校联考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇
完整的短文。
I had all the usual child fears. I couldn’t go to sleep unless the light in my bedroom was on. I dreaded that
someday when my mother was distracted, Crazy Betty (our local small-town oddball) would grab me in the grocery
store. On the hottest summer nights, my feet had to be wrapped tightly in my bed sheets; if one of them hung bare
over the side of the bed, who knew what might grab it in its cold, slimy claw.
But all other frights paled in comparison with the Great Fear, the Titanic of my childhood terrors. That fear —
and I admit, I feel a tightening in stomach typing the words even today — was that something would happen to
Monk-Monk, my beloved toy monkey. That was the deepest fear of my childhood and I learned from it the lesson
of cherishing what’s important in my life.
Looking at Monk-Monk today, you wouldn’t see what I see. You’d see a torn, discolored sock monkey, very更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
much past his prime, stuffing leaking from his stumpy tail, holes on his sock-body inexpertly stitched up with
thread that doesn’t match. I see my dearest childhood friend, my companion of a thousand nights. When I was only
two and very ill, an aunt made him for me and delivered him to the hospital. I bonded with him fiercely and rarely
let him out of my sight. When no one else was around, Monk-Monk played endless games with me, soaked up my
tears, and listened to my secrets.
And then Uncle Ken came to visit. He lived in Ohio and occasionally he would come and stay with us for a
couple of days. I didn’t know Uncle Ken well, and I didn’t like him very much. I had the feeling that he didn’t
really like me, either. He clearly thought it was pretty silly that a big first-grader was dragging a sock monkey
around, and he teased me by saying he thought he’d take Monk-Monk home to Ohio with him. His words almost
scared me to death. I clutched Monk-Monk more tightly.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was at school a few days later when Uncle Ken left.
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Finally Monk-Monk was found jammed behind the sofa.
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3．（2023·浙江金华·统考模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A friend is best found in adversity.
Since my school had shut down for COVID-19, I was expected to study at home. Unfortunately, I had little
motivation to do any schoolwork. Whenever I sat down, my mind would wander off to other things. I had no focus
but the final exams were coming up.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
How could I possibly get myself prepared in one week? My hands started trembling and it was hard to breathe.
My heart was pounding and tears were rolling down my face. My head felt heavier and heavier, dragging my body
down to the ground as I started swaying back and forth and then plummeted(坠落) towards the floor. I couldn’t see
and I felt like I was slipping in and out of consciousness.
When I came to myself, I got up, took some medicine and never told anyone. I knew exactly what had
happened—I had just had a panic attack. I’d battled anxiety since I was twelve, and, because of the increasing
isolation due to COVID-19, my symptoms were worsening. I had experienced panic attacks before, though never as
extreme as this one.
I convinced myself that if I just got some rest, things would be better in the morning. The new term was
approaching and it stimulated my social anxiety. I wasn’t ready to step into a room full of people who I didn’t
know. The first day of in-person class wasn’t any better, as my heart pounded every time I spoke. Every day was a
new day for anxiety to have a bad effect on my physical and mental health.
I remembered when the first real panic attack struck me, I ran to the bathroom and isolated myself in a stall(小
隔间) for the whole period without anyone helping me. Although I powered through it, I still felt so lonely. I even
got to the point where I had to stay home from school for a week so that I felt I could focus more. However, when
Monday came again, I had to go back.
The first hour or so back at school was okay, I had to come up with excuses to explain my absence and re-
assess any missing work I had. But then a hurricane of anxiety came crashing into me, destroying any hope of
having a good day. I ran through the bustling(熙熙攘攘的) halls to the bathroom and closed myself into the last
stall, hoping this attack would pass quickly.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
But this time something was different; this time I wasn’t alone.
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Seeing Morgan, I forced a smile.
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4．（2023·山东聊城·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
Mrowwwwl! The cat meowed angrily as she clawed at Jennifer’s arm, drawing a thin line of blood. Just as
quickly as she struck out with her claw, the agile (灵活的) orange and-white cat leaped back to her hiding space
under Jennifer’s bed. From the Avec underneath the bed, two green eyes produced bright light, staring back out at
Jennifer.
Jennifer was starting to feel discouraged in a major way. She was never one for giving up; but it had been
sevetal days like this since she adopted the cat—Darla—from the animal shelter, struggling to win over the young
cat’s affection through treats and soft and gentle whispers. It was during her summer break, so she had plenty of
time to keep trying to win over the animal. But it wasn’t time that was the issue — it was Jennifer’s emotions that
were quickly fading.
It had been two years since Jennifer’s beloved brown tabby (斑猫)-Marlin-passed away. She never could quite
get over the shock and emptiness which remained in her heart here childlike joy once thrived. Marlin had been
Jennifer’s faithful friend and loving companion rough all the pains and trials of growing up. After Marlin died,
things were never quite the same again for Jennifer. It was the first real death to pierce Jennifer’s heart and signaled
the end of her carefree childhood.
She desperately wanted Darla to love her the way Marlin had and for ee to love Darla just the same; but what
was Jennifer supposed to do now? The cut on her arm was all she had to how for her effort. Jennifer sat on the
floor, burying her face in her hands, and her body trembled as she softly began to cry.
注意:1续写词数应为150左右
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
After a few minutes, Jennifer noticed a strange feeling - fur.
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Jennifer then reached out her hand toward the cat.
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5．（2023·辽宁葫芦岛·高三联考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇
完整的短文。
My mother was a teacher and she would tell me stories about my grandparents. When Grandma welcomed two
kids, my mom and my uncle, she decided to look for a brave business journey in coffee industry where no women
held any position at that time. She didn’t like the fact that Grandpa had to work for some other companies to make
a living. Instead, she hoped that they would have their own business. So she moved away from where Grandpa used
to live and bought a piece of land with two kids to help to start her own coffee farm.
When my mom and uncle grew up and went to school in the nearby village, my grandma, a brave woman.
worked endlessly on the land planting one coffee plant after another. By the time my mom and uncle were at junior
school. she had planted about 12 acres of coffee plants all alone. The business journey was very difficult. Grandpa
returned home only on Saturdays and Sundays. For ten years, Grandma hardly slept well at night. guarding her
land. resources and children. As the farm expanded, she had too much to do.
One Saturday morning. when Grandpa went back home, Grandma asked him. “Can you help me run the farm.
dear?” After much thought. Grandpa replied. “Yes. Let’s work together to face the future.” Finally, he gave up his
job and came to support Grandma both physically and emotionally.
Then Grandma realized that the farm was too large to rely on the labor of family members alone. More people
were needed to keep the farm going. When my mom and uncle were at high school, Grandma thought that the
village education wasn’t good enough for her kids, and later she sent them off to a town to study with their cousins.
Meanwhile, Grandma decided to ask other family members to work for the farm Grandpa often drove his truck
to pick them up in the early morning and drop them at dusk. But the jol of transporting the workers was really hard.
So Grandpa and Grandma wanted to think of a way to solve the problem.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
One day, my grandma offered to build houses for the workers.
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As the workers’ children grew up, Grandma began to worry about their education.
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6．（2023·湖北·华中师大一附中校考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
The boys and girls picked up the bus to Fort Lauderdale. Vingo was on board from the beginning.
As the bus passed through Jersey, they began to notice that Vingo never moved. He sat in front of the young
people, frozen into silence.
Somewhere outside of Washington, the bus pulled into a Howard Johnson’s, and everybody got off except
Vingo. He sat rooted in his seat, and the young people began to wonder about him, trying to imagine his life. When
they went back to the bus, the girl sat beside him and introduced herself.
“Want some wine?” she said. He smiled and took the bottle. He thanked her and retreated again into silence.
After a while, she went back to the others, as Vingo nodded into sleep.
In the morning they awoke outside another Howard Johnson’s, and this time Vingo went in. The girl insisted
that he join them. When they went back on the bus, the girl sat with Vingo again, after a while, slowly and painfully
and with great hesitation, he began to tell his story. He had been in jail in New York for the last four years, and now
he was going home.
“When I was in jail I wrote to my wife,” he said. “I told her, I understand if you can’t stay married to me, get a
new guy and forget about me. And she didn’t write to me. Not for three and a half years.”
“And you’re going home now, not knowing?”
“Yeah,” he said shyly. “Last week, I wrote her. I told her that if she had a new guy, I under-stood. But if she更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
didn’t, if she would take me back she should let me know. We used to live in Brunswick, with a great big oak tree. I
told her if she would take me back, she should put a yellow handkerchief on the tree, and I would get off and come
home. If she didn’t want me, forget it, no handkerchief, and I’d keep going on.”
“Wow,” the girl said. “Wow.”
She told the others, and soon all of them were in it, caught up in the approach of Brunswick, looking at the
pictures Vingo showed them of his wife and three children.
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