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专题 15 遭遇动物攻击 （人与自然）
【考情分析】
年份 卷别 主题 话题
2024 九省联考适应性试题 人与自然之人与动物 海豚玛雅的秘密
2023 浙江1月卷 人与自然之人与动物 我与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅
2017 浙江卷 人与自然之人与动物 野外遇狼
【写作指导】
读后续写中涉及常见话题“野外遇险”中大多是遭遇如狗熊、狼等猛兽。（如2017年浙江卷“野外遇
到狼的袭击”）相关词块及句式如下：
词汇积累
______________ n.&v. 咆哮 ______________ n.&v. 喘息，喘气
______________ n.&v. 哀鸣 ______________ v. （尤指动物)轻跳着奔跑
______________ n.短促的尖叫声； v.尖 ______________ 猛扑
叫；
______________ n.&v. 嚎叫 ______________ 撕开
______________ n.&v. 呜咽 ______________ 撕裂
______________ n.&v. 摇摆 ______________ 逼近
______________ n.爪子；v.撕扯，抓 ______________大踏步
______________ v 嗅；n.吸气，一股气味 ______________ 追赶上
______________北极熊 ______________棕熊
______________灰熊 ______________黑熊
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金句积累
1. With nothing in the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf.
他们手里什么也没有，不敢与狼搏斗。
2. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf.
然后，麦克跳下了自行车，准备与狼搏斗。
3. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly.
与此同时，狼可能会感觉到周围人们的威胁，所以它开始慢慢地后退。
4. Then it lunged at the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag.
然后它冲向麦克的自行车后面，撕开了他的帐篷袋.
5. With one hand on the bars, he fired the bear spray at the wolf.
他单手紧握自行车把手，朝狼喷防熊喷雾剂。
6. The wolf was bearing down, just a dozen yards away now.
狼正向前下来，现在就在十几码之外.
7. A bit later they spotted a wolf loping with immense strides alongside a man on a bike.
不久之后，他们发现一匹狼在骑车人的旁边大步疾跑。
8. Becky looked out the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac’s bike as if it were a
kill. Shortly after, the animal ran off.
Becky从后窗望去，看见那匹狼站在Mac的自行车旁边观察，好像这是它的猎物似的。不久，这野兽跑掉
了。
9. The night was dark, the snow blew continually, and the dark fir-trees roared all around us.
夜很黑，雪不停地刮，黑暗的冷杉树在我们周围呼啸。
10. He just growled and went back to trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.
它只是咆哮着，又试图用它那巨大的爪子撕掉栅栏。
11. He clawed, bit, and shoved the wire mesh. He stood on his hind legs and pushed at the wooden
fence posts.
他抓，咬，推铁丝网。他用后腿站起来，推着木栅栏的柱子。
12. At the the sight of a huge timber wolf, I froze in my tracks.
一看到一只巨大的木狼，我就僵住了脚步。更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
13. Jim’s muscles twitched. All he wanted was to get away from here.
吉姆的肌肉抽搐。他只想离开这里。
14. There was a dead silence except for the sound of her heavy breathing and sniffing.
除了她沉重的呼吸声和嗅探声之外，一片一片寂静。
15. My heart in my mouth, I sat down eight feet from her.
我的心提到了嗓子眼里，我坐在离她八英尺远的地方。
16. He could hear nothing but the sound of his hearts throbbing violently in his chest.
他什么也听不见，只有他的心在他的胸口剧烈地跳动着的声音。
17. Terrified, she looked down at the holes which were as deep as graves.
她吓坏了，低头看着那些像坟墓一样深的洞。
18. His heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocated.
他的心跳如此剧烈，几乎窒息了。
19. So frightened was he that he was frozen on the spot.
他非常害怕，当场就呆住了。
20. A shiver of fright ran through him when the wolf stared at him in silence.
当狼默默地盯着他时，他吓了一阵寒颤。
万能写作模板
Step 1 通读语篇，精准理解
1．语篇类型：记叙文
2．关键信息:根据记叙文六要素who, when, where, what, why, how, 把握故事梗概.
Step 2 把握全局，梳理故事情节
Step 3 推动情节，寻找线索，展开续写
1．发现问题
2．情节发展
设置矛盾与冲突
合理的解决办法
3．主旨升华
Step 4 激活表达，精品输出
1．语言润色
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多变句式结构9r
2．结构衔接
3．高分范文赏读
【 高考真题】
1.（2017年浙江卷读后续写）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to
Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to
carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his
wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he
looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the
wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later,
it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a
second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw
a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth
would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it
when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too,
assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf.
Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards
away now.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
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【 名校模拟题提升练】
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As The Jungle Book song Bear Necessities goes, “forget about your worries and your conflict” can be a little
bit difficult when you find yourself face to face with a real bear.
Bears are common in the Northern Hemisphere. As human habitats stretch toward the wilderness, more and
more animals cross their paths with those of humans. This can lead to dangerous encounters especially when
precautions are not in place. In these situations, keeping your distance is still the best advice.
According to the National Park Service, one should also remain calm as bears, more often than not, are not
really willing to attack you. Once in a standoff (对峙), avoid making sudden moves or loud noises as these can
trigger aggression. 7-year-old Huxley did exactly what he was told when he encountered a massive bear.
It was a Sunny morning. Huxley was wandering on his way home when a big hulking (笨重的) figure emerges
from behind him. A hurried glance backward, he knew it was a black bear. The bear approached cautiously at first,
probably sizing up the figure in front of him. A second later, perhaps judging that Huxley was no match for it, the
bear burst into a full sprint (冲刺) and ran its way toward the boy.
At first, Huxley was really frightened. However, he knew it was impossible to run or fight with the big beast.
In the moment of crisis, he remembered his mother reminds him regularly about these possible encounters. She tells
him that if Huxley finds himself face to face with a bear and there are no adults around, he should remain calm.
Huxley calmed down at thinking of this. He stared at the bear down without any movement. This might have
been the reason why the young bear stopped dead in its tracks. They faced each other motionless, and there was
only a foot distance between them.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
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From around the corner, a neighbor hurriedly walked to the scene.
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The neighbor continued to pressure the bear while the animal tried its best to find an escape route.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Evan was 13, he wanted to have a dog. His mom Octavia refused since raising a dog would need lots of
attention and care.
The boy once joined the Forest Exploration club of his school where Octavia taught. And the mother was in
charge of the club. One morning, guided by Octavia, Evan and his schoolmates went hiking in a forest. During the
hike, some purple flowers caught Evan’s eye. Evan thought those beautiful flowers could surely impress his mother.
So he walked to the riverside secretly to pick those flowers. Unfortunately, Evan got separated from the group and
got lost.
He anxiously kept walking, hoping he could catch up with the group. Suddenly, a dog appeared. At first, Evan
thought it might be a wolf, so he tensed and stood there still. When the dog got closer, he saw its tail wagging (摇
摆) gently.
“Oh, buddy. You scared me,” he said, petting the dog. “You must be a stray (走失的) dog, huh?” The dog
looked at him with the most sincere expression. Evan wanted to find his way home, not only for himself but also
for the animal. Therefore, he walked again. The moment Octavia realized Evan was gone, she and others began
looking for Evan desperately, but in vain.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
It was getting darker and colder. Evan discovered a cave. He went inside and made a fire to keep warm. He
knew his mom and other schoolmates must have been searching the forest for him. “Buddy, let’s wait here and see
if we can hear my group calling,” Evan told the dog. And they sat near each other. Before long, Evan fell asleep.
At some point, he heard the sound of animal growling (低声吼叫) and noticed the dog at the entrance of their
shelter. The dog was growling at something that Evan couldn’t see well. But there was another animal growling
back. Evan wiped his eyes and tried to see what made the dog so alert and angry. He then saw a big fox, and said to
himself, “Thank goodness! I’m not alone!” But he was still frightened. The fox moved forward, wanting to attack
Evan.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Without stepping back, the brave dog continued barking, ready to attack the fox.
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“It’s my mom! Let’s go!” Evan excitedly told the dog and ran to Octavia.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a kid in Pennsylvania, my family rehabilitated (康复治疗) wild animals. I grew up with raccoons
(浣熊) and a fox running around the house. We would go travelling to Bermuda and I would watch the whales off
the shore. I fell in love with them and wanted to know more about what they got up to underwater. Now I’ve been
studying whales for more than 30 years and am the president of the Center for Cetacean Research and
Conservation.
In 2017, I was on a boat around Rarotonga in the Cook Islands, working on a film about whale conservation.
The crew wanted to get more footage (镜头) of me in the water with the humpback whales — I often slip in quietly更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
to record their behaviour for research. Seeing a couple of humpbacks in the distance, I slid off the boat wearing a
snorkel mask and a GoPro, and swam towards them.
As I was approaching, one of the male humpbacks came right up to me, nuzzling (用鼻爱抚) me with his head
and pushing me through the water. I felt a rush of pleasure mixed with fear. I tried to keep calm, never taking my
eyes off him. Then the whale swam underneath me and lifted me out of the water on his flipper (鳍). I signalled to
the boat, then — swoosh — I was pushed back under.
After seven and a half minutes of being pushed around by the humpback, I saw what I thought was a second,
smaller whale. But then I noticed the tail — whales move theirs up and down, and this one was moving side to side.
I realized with horror that it belonged to a huge, 18ft tiger shark! Tiger sharks are known to attack people,
sometimes fatally (致命的).
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The shark had arched its body in attack mode.
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I told the whale that I loved him and thanked him as he was to swim off.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Grady and his family go camping every summer. As it was becoming hotter, here came the camping time.
Having planned the camp long, the family finally decided the destination—the Great National Forest. With
food, necessity and cookers loaded onto the car, the family squeezed (挤进) into the car. The car door closed, heat更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
was shut outside.
In the car, Jared, Grady’s younger brother was playing with a toy, making great noise. Grady’s mother talked
excitedly with his father. As soon as he sat in the car, Grady put on the earphones and turned on the music. He
neither wanted to join his brother nor joined any talk. After what seemed to be hours, the car stopped where they
headed. Grady threw down his backpack and slammed (砰地关上) the car door.
“This will be a lengthy week,” he said unhappily to no one in particular. He looked around the campground.
Hundreds of tall and green fir trees covered the mountainside like a green carpet. The sun would be setting soon.
Grady thought maybe the heat wouldn’t be unbearable. But actually now in the mountain, the hot July left him
extremely uncomfortable.
Grady hated camping, but it was something his family insisted on every summer. His father liked cooking over
an open air, telling stories about how to survive things like bear attacks and bites of bees. His mother and Jared
liked to hike and take pictures of animals. Jared had a collection of insect pictures that he had put on the walls in his
half of their room. Grady thought they were just scary and that Jared was a strange kid.
They set up camp—two tents, one for his parents and one for himself and Jared. While everyone else started
preparing dinner, Grady, looking for some place to cool down, set off for the nearby river, which was deep enough
to swim in.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Grady got close to the river, he saw a cute bear cub (幼崽).
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Turning around, he saw an angry bear moving fast towards him.
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Fortunate Escape
“Truth or Dare, Ben?” Max questioned. Max, Ben and I were walking home together while I took small bites
of the beef burger I had grabbed from a shop nearby. “Truth or Dare” was a game we usually played to amuse
ourselves on the lengthy, boring journey home. Ben wanted a dare. “Well, Ben, I dare you to carry my bag all the
way home!” Max commanded as we laughed at poor Ben’s trouble.
As Ben pulled the heavy bag up his shoulder and adjusted the bag straps, he noticed that Max’s bag was
partially open. When he hurriedly put it on his back, an object flew out of the bag, and over the fence of our
neighbour’s house.
“Oh, no,” Max cried, “I think that was my English assignment.” Stretching his hand out and trying to
crawl(爬)under the fence to save the paper, Ben found that it was just out of reach.
“Well, I guess I’ll just have to climb over the fence to get it,” Ben said. He was barely able to climb up, using
the small gaps in the wooden fence as handholds as the fence was nearly as tall as him(which was not very tall),
and low enough for something to be thrown over it. Sliding down the fence, Ben grabbed the valued piece of paper,
complaining about injured dignity. Just then, a loud and frightening bark cut his words short.
“Woof, Woof!” Our neighbour, Mr Mason, owned a German shepherd(kind of dog), well-known for its
fierceness, which guarded the house. It was something we had overlooked, too focused on bringing back Max’s
assignment. Ben’s legs trembled like jelly and his face turned a deathly white as the German shepherd advanced
slowly on him like a wolf moving towards its target.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Max and I stared at it in fear.
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Just then I caught sight of my half-eaten burger on the path.
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6．阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tom was a skilled teenage surfer. He had always been attracted by the ocean and the challenge of riding its
waves. He had trained tirelessly for years, sharpening his skills and perfecting his technique. He had participated in
many competitions and won several titles. But one day, his world was turned upside down.
It was a routine training day. While Tom was concentrating on his training in the sea, a shark came in through
the broken shark-proof net and approached him. The animal knocked over Tom’s surfboard and bit his right leg,
tearing through his flesh (肉体) and causing massive damage. Despite the seriousness of his injuries, Tom was
lucky to survive the attack. He was rushed to the hospital, where he received an emergency operation. With the
efforts of doctors, his leg was saved.
Tom’s recovery was long and painful, but he refused to give up on his dream of surfing. At first, his progress
