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09 慰问信
（2013年，山东卷）假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发
电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给
他回封邮件：
1.未及时回信的原因；
2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）
注意：1. 词数：120-150；
2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter
in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In
your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some
specific details.
Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-
time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by
myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some
famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery
and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great
contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life.
I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your
summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本书面表达考查提纲类作文。从写作要点和得分点来看，考生应在宏观上把握书信体
写作的要求，如格式、文体等，写作段落以三段式为宜，首段体现问候、写信背景等，尾
段再次致歉、也可询问Tom暑假里的打算，体现书信体的交际性；而中间段具体交待未及时回信的原因、假期的打算。考生在微观层面上应具体把握写作的内容和语言，做到句子
之间有效的连接，长短句结合，多用doing及物做主语，句子加半句原因、结果、目的等
具体细节的解释、利用简单而有效的中文思路扩展英文细节。考生若能在写作部分做到内
容充实符合要求、语言精彩与众不同、结构清晰一目了然，相信这样的文章能让考生获得
一个相对满意的成绩。
【范文点评】
此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：不
定式作目的状语：To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a
salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. 非谓
语动词和定语从句：What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution
to the society, which is able to enrich my life.
【经典套路】
第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的
第二段：“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)
第三段：“假期安排”部分
第四段：补充说明+客套话
慰问信（含抗“疫”慰问信）
开头句型
1. I was (awfully) sorry to hear that + 句子 (your team lost the game.)
2. I was shocked to hear of + sth. (your failure in the exam.)
3. I’m writing to tell you how sorry I am to hear about sth. (your loss …)
4. Knowing your situation, I feel terribly sorry about sth.…
中间段句型
1. I quiet understand how you feel now，but ...
我特别能理解你现在的感觉，但...
2. You have devoted yourself to ...
你在...方面付出了大量的精力和时间
3. But as we all know, it is extremely difficult to do ...但是众所周知，做...本身就极其困难
4. To prepare ... , you have made every effort.
为了准备这次... ,你已经尽了最大努力
5. It’s not your fault to do ...
.....不是你的错
结尾句型
1. If there is anything you need me to do, don’t hesitate to let me know.
2. If I can do anything for you, do let me know.
3. Remember, we won’t be far away if you need any help!
4. I hope you can find my encouragement helpful. Best wishes.
模板①
Dear ,
I was very sorry to hear that .（交代事由） It’s
understandable for you to . （ 表 明 主 要 观 点 ） However, if you
can adopt different perspectives, .（提出建议）First, it’s normal to lose
in a basketball match, for you can either win or lose. If you’ve tried your best, why not lift
your spirits to face up to（直面）the result? Anyway, . Besides, you
can also . Therefore, if , you will .I
hope you can find my encouragement helpful.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear______,
I am ______, I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are
so bitter after ________. / I am shocked at the news about______________(引出具体实情，
表示惋惜和同情)At present,_________ decides that it will give you________ when you receive a
letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all
kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.(进一步安慰并鼓励
对方)
I will try my best to________, which may help you .It will give more courage to
live on.(表示自己意愿提供帮助)
May you recover soon./Good luck and best wishes to you!(表达愿望与祝福)
Yours sincerely,
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一、题型特点
慰问信是向失败者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天灾人祸的人表示安慰或同情的信件
此类信要写得及时、简明扼要，感情要真诚，措辞要贴切，尽量以乐观的口吻减轻亲友的
烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对日后烦人生活、学习、工作充满信心。
二、写作思路
第一步：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；
第二步：安慰对方或鼓励对方，预测未来；
第三步：表达愿望和祝福。
二、套用句式：
1. I was shocked at the news about the earthquake in …
听闻……地震的消息我很震惊。
2. On…, an incredible and unknown earthquake suddenly happened in…,…Province.
在……，……省……市突然发生了一场惊人的、未曾预知的地震。
3. We are so sorry to hear the news about the earthquake.
听到地震的消息我们很难过。
4.We are very sorry to learn that …
我们非常遗憾地得知……
5.I just heard that you’ve been on the sickness last week.
我无法告知你当你听到你发生事故我是多么难过。6.I just can’t tell you how sorry I was to learn of your accident.
我刚刚得知上个星期你病了。
7.I was deeply concerned when I learned that…
当我听说……时，我非常关心
8.I just wanted to let you know how concerned we are.
我只想要你知道我们是多么担忧。
9.I hope you are getting some relief from the pain.
我真心希望能减轻你的痛苦。
10.We are hoping for your quick return to health/early recovery/rapid recovery.
我们真心/祈祷你能很快完全康复。
11.We are looking forward to /hoping and praying for your speedy and full recovery.
我们真心希望你早日康复。
12.Only we have the perseverance can we defeat the natural disaster.
我们只有不屈不挠才能战胜自然灾难。
13.Please extend our deep sympathy to your family.
请向你的家人转达我们最深切的同情。
14.If there is anything I can do to help you, please let me know.
如果需要我的帮助，请告知。
1．假定你是李华，得知你的笔友Mike的家乡最近发生了大地震，损失惨重。请你给他写
一封慰问信，内容包括：
1. 你所了解的灾情；
2. 你的担忧；
3. 你的帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假定你是李华，得知你的美国网友Bill的家乡发生山火，房屋被烧毁，他现在住在临时
避难所。请你写一封邮件慰问他，内容要点如下：
1.询问受灾情况，表示关心；
2.鼓励他振作起来，重建家园。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：山火 mountain fire
Dear Bill,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华。你的英国好友Joe竞选篮球队队长失败了。他给你来信说他很受挫败。
请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封慰问信。
要点：1. 得知消息；
2. 安慰并鼓励他；
3. 表达自己的关心和祝愿。
提示：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：不少于100词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
3. 参考词汇：竞选run for
Dear Joe,
I am sorry to hear that you failed in your attempt to run for the position of the basketball teamleader.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友 Zack来邮件告诉你说，他未能通过 "朗诵唐诗"选拔赛。
请你用英文给Zack写一封慰问邮件，主要内容包括：
1. 点明得知的情况；
2. 表达理解和安慰；
3. 鼓励对方。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加情节和连贯语。
参考词汇： "朗诵唐诗"选拔赛 the tryout for “Tang Poetry Recital Contest”
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5．据报道，7岁的美国男孩Trump得知自己身患癌症（cancer）后处于极度的痛苦之中，
美国抗癌协会（ACS）决定，每当Trump收到一封慰问信，就多为他分担3美元的治疗费。
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Trump写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：
1. 自我介绍；
2. 表亦鼓励；
3. 祝他早日康复。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假设你叫王红，得知你的英国朋友Andrew的爱犬Sparky发生了意外永远离开了他，请
你给他写—封慰问信。
注意:1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．假设你是李华。重阳节即将来临，校学生会决定组织大家去敬老院开展慰问活动。请你
给你的外国朋友一来自英国的交换生John写一封邮件，邀请他参加。
内容包括;
1.活动简介;
2.具体安排（出发时间、地点等）。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;
3.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 重阳节“Double Ninth Festival”;敬老院“nursing home”
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是某国际中学的李华，将参加校志愿者协会慰问社区的留守儿童。请写信邀请你
校交换生Cathy一起参加，内容包括：
1．活动内容；
2．发出邀请。
提示词：留守儿童left-behind children
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Cathy,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，
还不能适应新的环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回
信。
1. 向Jenny表示问候和慰问。
2. 针对她的问题提出几点建议。注意：
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Eric最近总吃外卖，导致消化不良。请你给他写一封电
子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示慰问；
2.提出建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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11．假如你是红星中学学生李华。得知英国好友Jim在他们学校运动会的接力赛(the relay
race)中摔倒，导致腿部骨折，请你用英文写一封邮件给他，内容包括：1.表示慰问；
2.康复建议。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.开头语和结语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．假设你是李华，你的网友David 刚随父母搬家并换了一所新学校，他希望在新学校交
到新朋友，并希望得到你的帮助。请你给他写一封电子邮件，提供在新学校交朋友的建议。
内容包括：1.对他搬新家表示慰问；2.提供在新学校交朋友的建议（至少两点）。
要求：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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13．假定你是李华，上周与交换生Henry一起参加为期三天的社区志愿者活动，但Henry
因故缺席了最后一天的活动，请根据以下要点向他介绍相关情况：
1. 表示慰问；
2. 活动内容及流程；
3. 个人感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案
1．
Dear Mike,
How are you doing? I am sorry to hear that a terrible earthquake happened in your
hometown. I can imagine how difficult this moment must be for you. I’m really worried about
you, your family and all your friends there. I’m crossing my fingers for you now in the hope that
you are all safe.
I’ve collected some donations from my classmates. To some extent, it may help you get over
the difficulty.
Best wishes to you all!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给家乡最近发生大地震的笔友Mike
写一封慰问信，需描述自己所了解的灾情，表达担忧，并说明自己的帮助。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
难过的：sorry→sad, sorrowful
糟糕的：terrible→dreadful, awful, horrible
发生：happen→occur, take place
困难的：difficult→hard, tough
为……担心：be worried about→be concerned about
一定程度上：to some extent→in some way, to a certain extent, to some degree
克服：get over→conquer, overcome
困难：difficulty→obstacle, barrier
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I’ve collected some donations from my classmates. To some extent, it may help you get
over the difficulty.拓展句：I’ve collected some donations from my classmates, which, to some extent, may help you
get over the difficulty.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that a terrible earthquake happened in your hometown. (运用了连
接词that引导名词性从句作hear的宾语)
[高分句型2] I can imagine how difficult this moment must be for you. (运用了连接副词how引
导名词性从句作imagine的宾语)
[高分句型3] I’m crossing my fingers for you now in the hope that you are all safe. (运用了连接
词that引导名词性从句作hope的同位语)
2．Dear Bill,
On hearing the news that the destructive mountain fire broke out in your hometown, I am
extremely worried about you.
Are you or your family injured? Your house was burned down and you are living in the
temporary shelter now. How about the conditions there? Do you have enough clothes and food?
The fire has caused great damage to your family, but I firmly believe that all things will get
better. Cheer up! I'm sure you will rebuild your hometown soon. Anyway, tomorrow is another
day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。得知你的美国网友Bill的家乡发生山火，房屋被
烧毁，他现在住在临时避难所，现要求你根据所给要点写一封邮件慰问他。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
非常：extremely→badly
担心的：worried→ anxious
损害：damage→harm
导致：cause→ lead to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your house was burned down and you are living in the temporary shelter now.
拓展句：Because your house was burned down, you are living in the temporary shelter now.
【典型句式】【高分句型1】On hearing the news that the destructive mountain fire broke out in your
hometown, I am extremely worried about you.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
【高分句型2】The fire has caused great damage to your family, but I firmly believe that all
things will get better.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
3．参考范文：
Dear Joe,
I am sorry to hear that you failed in your attempt to run for the position of the basketball team
leader. I know exactly how you feel. However, we can learn more lessons from failure than from
success Maybe it is a good thing for your future. Now what is important is to cheer up. Learn from
the experience and think about what to do next. To be exact, first, did you make good preparations
for the competition? It is very important to be well prepared for all kinds of activities. Second,
what are your strengths and shortcomings? This is another question for you to think deeply about,
because it will make your next attempt more successful.
Have faith in yourself. You are a capable, wise person and I believe in you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Joe写封信，对他竞选篮球队队
长失败，予以安慰。并简要分析失利的原因。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
竞争（岗位）：compete for→run for
聪明的：smart→wise
有能力的：able→capable
确切地说：exactly speaking=to be exact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It is very important to be well prepared for all kinds of activities.
拓展句：It is very important to be well prepared for all kinds of activities, which range from
practicing your speeches to drawing up a future work plan.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Now what is important is to cheer up. (运用了由what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] I am sorry to hear that you failed in your attempt to run for the position of thebasketball team leader. (运用由that引导的宾语从句)
4．
Dear Zack,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed the tryout for“Tang Poetry Recital Contest”, which means
that you have to wait for another year to attend the next one. I quite understand how you feel now,
but you still have many chances. You have devoted yourself to learning Chinese , especially
Chinese poetry. But as we all know, it is extremely difficult for Chinese themselves to learn
Chinese poetry well, much less a foreigner. To prepare the contest, you have made every effort.
It’s not your fault. So I sincerely hope that you will not take this to heart, and will get ready to try
again. You are certain to make it next time.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给加拿大朋友 Zack写一封慰问邮件，对他
未能通过“朗诵唐诗”选拔赛表示理解和安慰。
【写作分析】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时,少量一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 点明得知的情况；
2.表达理解和安慰；
3. 鼓励对方。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
devote to, as we all know, made every effort, get ready to, make it, best wishes,
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m sorry to hear that you failed the tryout for“Tang Poetry Recital Contest”, which means that
you have to wait for another year to attend the next one.
2.To prepare the contest, you have made every effort.
3. So I sincerely hope that you will not take this to heart, and will get ready to try again.4.You are certain to make it next time.
5. I quite understand how you feel now, but you still have many chances.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表转折对比关系：but,
2.表因果关系： So,
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]
I’m sorry to hear that you failed the tryout for“Tang Poetry Recital Contest”, which means that
you have to wait for another year to attend the next one.（运用which引导非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
So I sincerely hope that you will not take this to heart, and will get ready to try again.（运用that
引导宾语从句）
5．Dear Trump,
I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you have got a
cancer which has been bringing you great pain But you should realize that you are not alone in
fighting against the disease. Please cheer up and hold on! I’m sure that the doctors will find the
cure soon.
Don’t worry about the money because the ACS will donate three dollars for each comfort
letter you receive.
I will also tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you
will get enough money for your treatment.
Hope you will recover soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文中的书信写作。
【写作分析】题目要求假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Trump写一封慰问信，
主要内容包括：1. 自我介绍；2. 表示鼓励；3. 祝他早日康复。分析可知，应该以第一人
称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥
拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准
确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【典型句式】
这封书信的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，
同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I’m sorry to hear that you have got a cancer
which has been bringing you great pain But you should realize that you are not alone in fighting
against the disease.定语从句的运用；I’m sure that the doctors will find the cure soon.
宾语从句的运用。
6．Dear Andrew,
I'm so sorry to hear the news about your dog. As one who has had the same sad experience of
losing a pet dog, I know something of the sadness and loneliness you feel after Sparky's death.
Our pets give us much enjoyment and pleasant companionship. Sparky's warm greeting of running
circles around me when I arrived is one thing I will miss.
I know that our pets are not only animals but also our children. They are loyal to us and we
will find it interesting to play with our pets. They can know our emotions as a man thinks. They
can bring us joy and positive effects as well.
I hope the good memories will ease the feelings of loss.
Yours sincerely
Wang Hong
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【写作分析】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信：假设你叫王红，得知你的英国朋友
Andrew的爱犬Sparky发生了意外永远离开了他，请你给他写—封慰问信。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：sadness and loneliness（悲伤孤独）；
enjoyment and pleasant companionship（快乐和陪伴）；warm greeting（热烈欢迎）；not…
but（不是而是）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清
晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【典型句式】
本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显
示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。As one who has had the same sadexperience of losing a pet dog, I know something of the sadness and loneliness you feel after
Sparky's death.使用了定语从句；Sparky's warm greeting of running circles around me when I
arrived is one thing I will miss.运用了状语从句。显示出作者扎实的英语功底。值得大家学习
与借鉴。
7．Dear John,
Next weekend, an activity themed the Double Ninth Festival will be held by the Student
Union. Knowing you're into traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to join us.
Falling on September 9h of the lunar calendar, the Double Ninth Festival is held to show
respect and love for old people. This year, we're going to visit the old in the local nursing home.
Living away from their children, they often feel lonely and unhappy. To cheer them up, we plan to
bring some flowers to decorate their rooms and give some performances, such as singing and
dancing, which will be surely favored by them.
We'll gather at the school gate at 8 am next Saturday morning and go by bus. I would be glad
if you could come. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华。重阳节即将来临，校学生会决定
组织大家去敬老院开展慰问活动。请你给你的外国朋友一来自英国的交换生John写一封邮
件，邀请他参加。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
喜欢：be into→be fond of
参观：visit→pay a visit to
计划：plan→arrange
肯定：surely→definitely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Falling on September 9h of the lunar calendar, the Double Ninth Festival is held to show
respect and love for old people.
拓展句：The Double Ninth Festival, which falls on September 9h of the lunar calendar, is held to
show respect and love for old people.
【典型句式】【高分句型1】Knowing you're into traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to join
us.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】To cheer them up, we plan to bring some flowers to decorate their rooms and give
some performances, such as singing and dancing, which will be surely favored by them.（运用了
不定式作目的状语，which引导定语从句）
8．
Dear Cathy,
How is everything going? Our school volunteer association plans to visit the left-behind
children in the community this weekend. We are wondering whether you can join us?
With their parents working far away, those left-behind children are in need of love and care.
Therefore, we are scheduled to do our bits to help them. Not only will we bring them the
carefully-selected gifts, but also we will have fun together by playing games and giving
performances. Since you have always been enthusiastic about voluntary work, I sincerely invite
you to join us in playing the guitar. Your participation will surely add pleasure to this meaningful
day.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信邀请你校交换生Cathy一起参加校
志愿者协会慰问社区的留守儿童活动，内容包括：活动内容；发出邀请。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
因此：Therefore→Thus
计划做：be scheduled to do→plan to do
玩得开心：have fun→enjoy oneself
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Therefore, we are scheduled to do our bits to help them.
拓展句：Therefore, we are scheduled to do our bits to help them, which can make them feel
warm.
【典型句式】[高分句型1] Not only will we bring them the carefully-selected gifts, but also we will have fun
together by playing games and giving performances. (not only…but also连接句子时，not only
位于句首，该部分用部分倒装)
[高分句型2] Since you have always been enthusiastic about voluntary work, I sincerely invite
you to join us in playing the guitar. (运用了since引导的状语从句，不定式作宾语补足语)
9．Dear Jenny,
I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. I am writing to offer
you some useful advice, which can help you adjust to high school life faster.
Firstly, it is important that you should learn how to get along with your teachers and
classmates. You can build up a good relationship with them by respecting your teachers and
helping your classmates. Besides, focusing on your studies will give you a sense of achievement
and it will relieve your pressure. In addition, it is also helpful to develop various hobbies, which
can make your life more colorful. All in all, I hope you can enjoy your high school life.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求给朋友提出建议帮助她更好的适应高中
生活。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
适应：adjust to →adapt to
此外：beisides→what’s more
重要的：important→ vital
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：Besides, focusing on your studies will give you a sense of achievement and it will relieve
your pressure.
拓展句：Besides, focusing on your studies will give you a sense of achievement which will
relieve your pressure.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I am writing to offer you some useful advice, which can help you adjust to highschool life faster.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】Firstly, it is important that you should learn how to get along with your teachers
and classmates.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句。）
10．Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a digestive problem these days because you have eaten too
much takeout food. I understand how bad it is, so it’s urgent for you to make some changes.
Firstly, you should stop eating takeout food. Instead, it’s a good idea to cook by yourself. In
addition, regular exercise is also necessary because working out properly helps you digest better.
Last but not least, keep a good mood every day, which can positively affect your physical health.
If you still don’t get better after two days, you should see a doctor.
I hope my advice will work for you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Eric最近总吃外卖，
导致消化不良。请你给他写一封电子邮件，给出建议。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
紧急的：urgent→pressing
独自：by oneself→on one’s own
此外：in addition→moreover
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I understand how bad it is, so it’s urgent for you to make some changes.
拓展句：It’s urgent for you to make some changes because it is bad for your health.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you have a digestive problem these days because you have
eaten too much takeout food. (运用了that引导宾语从句和because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Instead, it’s a good idea to cook by yourself. (运用了it作形式主语句型)
11．Dear Jim,
I am so sorry to hear that you broke your leg in a terrible fall during the relay race. Please
don’t feel too distressed about your injury. Given your health condition and age, I believe you’llsoon be well.
As for how to speed your recovery, I’d like to share some advice from my own experience.
Without doubt, it is necessary to follow your doctor’s advice and take your medicine on time.
What’s more, a healthy diet, low in fat and high in protein and vitamins, contributes a lot to your
recovery. Additionally, proper regular exercise is beneficial to your health improvement after
enough rest.
If you need any help, do not hesitate to ask. Wish you a speedy recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友吉姆写一封邮件，对其在接
力赛中摔倒表示慰问，并提出康复建议。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
加速：speed→quicken
建议：advice→suggestion
此外：what’s more→besides
有益于：be beneficial to→benefit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Without doubt, it is necessary to follow your doctor’s advice and take your medicine on
time.
拓展句：Without doubt, it is necessary that you follow your doctor’s advice and take your
medicine on time.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I am so sorry to hear that you broke your leg in a terrible fall during the relay
race.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If you need any help, do not hesitate to ask.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
12．Dear David,
I’m really delighted to hear from you. I believe you can be accustomed to living in your new
house and your new school. I know you are lacking in friends around you. Now I give you some
advice on how to make friends at a new school.
First, I suggest you join clubs and after-school activities to find friends with similar interests.Next, you’d better talk to others actively. Talking to one or two people each day, you’ll figure out
who is interested in befriending you. After all, friendship starts with conversations.
Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【写作分析】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你的网友David 刚随父母搬家并换
了一所新学校，他希望在新学校交到新朋友，并希望得到你的帮助。请你给他写一封电子
邮件，提供在新学校交朋友的建议。内容包括：1.对他搬新家表示慰问；2.提供在新学校交
朋友的建议（至少两点）。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：hear from (收到来信)；be accustomed to(习惯)；
lack in(缺少)；advice(建议)；suggest(建议)；after-school activities(课外活动)；with similar
interests(有相似兴趣)；talk to(与……谈话)；figure out(弄清楚)；friendship(友谊)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主
要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清
晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【典型句式】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，
如Now I give you some advice on how to make friends at a new school.运用“疑问词+不定
式”结构；Talking to one or two people each day, you’ll figure out who is interested in
befriending you.运用定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的
能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
13．Dear Henry,
How are you going? Packed with you, our team members joined in the three-day community
volunteer activity last week. I’m sorry that you were absent on the last day for the sake of illness.
So I’m writing to tell you what we did that day.
As planned, we organized an activity to donate and make toys for lovely kids in the
community kindergarten. Instead of spending unnecessary money on new toys, kids were given
many interesting old toys. Besides, we taught them to make some DIY toys, such as kites, paper
boats and dolls. During the activity all of us were drowned in the ocean of happiness.We wish you early recovery and participate in our future activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于告知信。要求考生给交换生Henry介绍社区志愿者活动最后一
天的情况。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
参与：join in → participate in
计划：plan → schedule
可爱的：lovely → cute
此外：besides → in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As planned, we organized an activity to donate and make toys for lovely kids in the
community kindergarten.
拓展句：As planned, we organized an activity to donate and make toys for lovely kids who study
in the community kindergarten.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]So I’m writing to tell you what we did that day. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]As planned, we organized an activity to donate and make toys for lovely kids in the
community kindergarten. (运用了as引 导的方式状语从句和状语从句的省略)
