脱险型故事
写作导图
一、环境描写（制造紧张感）
自然危险
1. The storm outside was roaring like an angry monster, making the cabin windows shake.
（暴风雨像发怒的怪兽在屋外咆哮，震得木窗咯咯作响）
解析：用"roaring"替代复杂动词，比喻句帮助理解场景氛围
2. Lightning suddenly lit up the dark sky, showing our broken boat in the sea.
（闪电突然照亮夜空，映出海上破损的小船）
解析：简化视觉描写，"broken boat"直接传达危险信息
3. The waves were beating our raft like giant hands, trying to flip us over.
（海浪像巨人的手掌拍打救生筏，想把我们掀翻）
解析：使用"beat"和"flip"等基础动词，比喻贴近生活经验
4. Dirty water rose quickly to my chest, making it hard to breathe.（污水快速涨到胸口，呼吸变得困难）
解析：简化身体感受描写，用基础形容词"dirty"构建场景
生物威胁
1. A shark's fin appeared above the water, moving closer to our raft.
（鲨鱼鳍浮出水面，朝着救生筏逼近）
解析：用"appeared"替代复杂动词，聚焦关键视觉元素
2. The jellyfish's long arms looked like poisonous ropes in the moonlight.
（水母的长触手在月光下像有毒的绳子）
解析：用"ropes"比喻触手，避免专业术语
3. The crocodile's yellow eyes stared at us from the muddy river.
（鳄鱼黄眼睛从泥泞河水中盯着我们）
解析：颜色描写增加画面感，基础动词"stare"易理解
4. Strange glowing things surrounded the plane wreck, making everything look scary.
（发光的怪东西围着飞机残骸，让一切显得可怕）
解析：用"glowing things"替代专业生物名词，保持神秘感
二、心理描写（情绪变化）
陷入绝望
1. My frozen fingers could barely hold the rock, and I felt tears mixing with rain on my face.
（冻僵的手指几乎抓不住岩石，泪水混着雨水流下）
解析：具体身体反应+自然现象，易产生共鸣
2. The avalanche's noise was so loud that I couldn't hear my own shouting.
（雪崩声大得盖过我的呼喊）
解析：用对比手法表现无助感，动词"shout"简单明确3. Salt water burned my eyes, and I started coughing badly.
（盐水刺痛眼睛，我开始剧烈咳嗽）
解析：基础生理反应描写，动词"burn"直接传达感受
4. The quicksand was pulling me down like invisible hands.
（流沙像无形的手把我往下拉）
解析：基础比喻句，避免复杂形容词
希望出现
1. A flashing red light in the distance made my heart jump.
（远方闪烁的红灯让我的心猛地一跳）
解析：用"jump"形容心跳，动作描写替代抽象情感
2. The helicopter sound grew louder, bringing new strength to my tired arms.
（直升机声越来越响，给酸软的手臂注入新力量）
解析：连接听觉与身体反应，动词"grow"表现变化过程
3. My hand touched something hard - it was a rusty hook stuck in the ice!
（手碰到硬物——是卡在冰里的生锈铁钩！）
解析：破折号制造发现惊喜，日常物品增加真实感
4. Someone was shouting! The voice cut through the storm like a knife.
（有人在喊叫！声音像刀子划破暴风雨）
解析：基础比喻句，用"cut"强化希望来临的力度
三、脱险行动（过程描写）
智慧应对
1. Using a broken plank as a paddle, we tried to steer toward the light.（用破木板当桨，我们试图划向亮光）
解析：具体动作描写，用"steer"替代复杂动词
2. I shot the last flare into the sky, praying someone would see it.
（射出最后信号弹，祈祷有人能看见）
解析：基础求生动作+心理活动组合
3. We tied empty bottles to the raft to make it float better.
（把空瓶子绑在救生筏上增加浮力）
解析：日常物品的创造性使用，动词"tie"简单明确
4. Following the radio's static noise, we found the rescue team.
（顺着收音机杂音，我们找到了救援队）
解析：用"static noise"替代专业术语，保持科技元素
四、主题升华（成长感悟）
1. The rescue worker's warm hands taught me the meaning of hope.
（救援人员温暖的手教会我希望的意义）
解析：具体细节承载抽象概念，动词"taught"点明成长
2. As the helicopter lifted us up, I understood how precious life is.
（直升机升起时，我懂得了生命的珍贵）
解析：用"precious"替代复杂形容词，直接传达感悟
3. The survivors' smiles in the hospital made me believe in miracles.
（医院里幸存者的笑容让我相信奇迹）
解析：具体场景+抽象信念，用"believe"连接
4. Now when I see storm warnings, I always prepare carefully - that experience changed me forever.
（如今看到暴雨预警总会认真准备——那次经历永远改变了我）
解析：破折号连接行动与感悟，用"changed"总结成长背精彩句子，让表达出彩
1．Tom was shocked to find that the water kept rising．He was trapped in his house and his
heart suddenly jumped into his throat.汤姆震惊地发现水一直上涨。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一
下子提到了嗓子眼。
2．Frozen with fear，he stood rooted to the spot，various terrible thoughts flooding in.吓得僵
住了，他站在那里一动不动，各种可怕的想法向他涌来。
3．Luckily，some rescue workers came to his aid，bringing him the last glimmer of hope.A
sense of calmness immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in his mind.幸运的是，一些
救援人员来帮助他了，给他带来了最后一线希望。镇静立即替代了心里不断增加的恐惧和不安。
4．Having suffered so much，Tom couldn’t contain his emotions and tears of gratitude
trickled down his cheeks，like a broken line of beads.遭受了这么多，汤姆再也不能抑制自己的情绪，
感激的泪水像断了线的珠子一样滚下他的脸颊。
5．With desperate tears, she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on it． She waved and cried
for help with all her strength. 在绝望的泪水中，她突然看到一条船，上面有一个人在走动。她挥挥手，
用尽全身力气喊救命。
6．She was soon picked up and taken towards where her father and sister were． Fortunately, they didn't
drown but her father seemed to be giving out, with one hand holding tight to the boat, the other holding
Cierrah.
她很快被人抱起，带他们到她父亲和姐姐所在的地方。幸运的是，他们没有被淹死，但她的父亲
似乎快不行了，一只手紧紧地抓着船，另一只抓着Cierrah。
7．Later, when asked what gave her the strength and perseverance to continue both in the cold
water and in great fear. Kiana thought it had to do with family. “I just wanted to save my family, and I didn't
want anything bad to happen to them. So I couldn't spare a second to worry or fear.” She said.
后来，当被问及是什么给了她在冰冷的水中和极度的恐惧中继续下去的力量和毅力时，Kiana认为
这和家庭有关。 “我只是想救我的家人，我不希望他们发生任何不好的事情。所以我没有时间去担心
或害怕。”她说。
8．The man heard Sydney's cry and rushed over. Sydney briefed him on the situation, and the man did
not hesitate to help the woman.
那个人听到Sydney的叫声就冲了过来。Sydney向他简要介绍了情况，男子毫不犹豫地帮助了女子。
9．Happily, it worked this time． As a result, the woman threw up the food stuck in her throat and
began gasping for air, and she was saved.
幸运的是，这一次成功了。 因此，那位女士把卡在喉咙里的食物吐了出来，开始大口喘气，她得
救了。
10.Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to
Simmons.尽管紧张和焦虑，Norwood努力让自己镇静下来，并对Simmons进行了急救。
11.Seeing Simmons wake up from passing out, Norwood breathed a sigh of relief.
看到Simmons从昏倒中醒来，Norwood松了一口气。
12.We have learnt from the incident that life is valuable and the skill of saving is more valuable.
我们从这个事件中学到：生命非常有价值，拯救生命的技能更有价值。
13.The big wind roared through our ears, and we were pushed away from the shore farther and
farther.
大风呼啸着穿过我们的耳朵，我们被推得离海岸越来越远。
14.After what seemed a century, I felt very exhausted while swimming hard to keep myself afloat.
似乎过了一个世纪之后，我感到筋疲力尽，同时，我努力游着以使自己浮在水面上。
15.Hearing the screams, Henry ran to the riverside, threw off his clothes and jumped into the water
without hesitation.
听到尖叫声，亨利跑到河边，扔掉衣服，毫不犹豫地跳进了水里。
高考真题演练
2020年7月浙江卷
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research
camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals —
should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a
camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and
smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled
and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and
fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar
bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes
before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp
manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So Iapproached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼
叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
注意：
1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2． 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4． 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1:
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Para 2:
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模拟演练
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One of my most memorable trips took place during the summer vacation about three years ago, when my
sister, my aunt and I took a trip to Spain because we were moving. On the day of the trip, I lay in bed thinking
about my friends whom I was going to leave behind and thoughts were flooding in.
When we arrived at the hire station, we seemed to have some problems with our luggage because it was
too much for a taxi, so we had to book a van (厢式送货车) to take our luggage to the airport. We waited for a
long period to find a perfect van that would fit our luggage.
Before leaving, I felt very bad because I was going to a different country and was going to miss all my
friends and family. I was not comfortable and cried.
The journey was almost perfect at the beginning, but soon it began to rain. Because of the rain, the
drivers could not see far away, which caused a huge traffic jam. I was sitting by the window with a can of
Coke that I had bought in the store earlier. My aunt and sister fell asleep, and during this time. I felt bored and
thought about other things that bothered me. My eyes turned to the mountain in front of us.
A bus suddenly appeared in the picture. It was very close to us. Cars sped past us without any speed limit.
Beside me was a very deep lake: I wondered to myself what if something or someone fell inside it. Suddenly, a
bus in front of our van stopped, and because it was raining heavily and the van was going fast, no one could
see what was going to happen. Then, bang, we bumped into each other. Our van overturned, but luckily, itdidn’t fall into the lake. People came to help us get out of the van because we were blocked and the driver was
half-dead.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone.
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I was losing a lot of blood and then the emergency aid came.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler booked off a week from his job as a
maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own,
finding a route he would eventually use to climb Mount Doggie Dowler.
His wife Jenifer didn't like the sound of her husband's latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on
adventures by himself, but this time he'd boat to an unknown bay, bike an unpopulated road , hike through
grizzly bear country, and camp overnights alone. There was too much room for disaster.
The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag witha handheld GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausage, and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss
Army knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel pocket knife given to him by his dad.
The weather that Sunday, July 28 was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port and quickly
launched and set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight o'clock in the morning, he
arrived at Ramsay Arm, and found a spot to tie the boat near a logging (伐木)camp where he chatted with
some logging workers.
One of the workers , Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin took off his
bike and backpack from the truck and started his hiking and route searching. In order not to lose the way back,
he marked his trail with blue ribbons (布条).
As he made his seven-kilometer marker, he came around a bend and suddenly put on the brakes—a dirty
grizzly bear stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin calculated his chances of
turning around for a quick escape, but the bear could easily catch up and stop him before he picked up speed.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way.
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After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。On my seventh birthday, I got a gift from my father, which was a book titled Guide to Reptiles and
Amphibians. It was my favorite. I kept it under my pillow and read every page over and over every night
enjoying the pictures of colorful animals. Some of the sakes were the most beautiful creatures I had ever seen.
Little did I know that my book would end up saving a life.
Years ago, my family moved into a new house near the woods. My father built a sandbox in our yard. The
cat sometimes used the sandbox for a litter box, so my father had to put a plastic cover over it .When I wanted
to build sand castles, I had to pull the cover off.
One day before dinner, I ran to the sandbox to build 8 miniature city. I pulled off the plastic cover, and
there in the sandbox was a snake. It was lying very sill, all coiled up, and it was beautiful. The snake had rings
of color around it. I had seen a picture just like it in my guidebook, and I remembered that it was one of the
prettiest snakes in it. It said in the book that the poisonous coral snake looked very much like the harmless
king snake, the only difference was in the order of the colors. 1 ran inside to get the guidebook.
“Mom! Mom! There’s a snake in the sandbox!” I yelled. “I have to find out what kind it is!”
Mom came running. “Don’t touch it, Chris! It might be poisonous!”
Dad was at work, so my mother went to get our neighbor, Mr. Cook.
“Mr. Cook!” my mother yelled across the fence, “We have a snake in the sandbox, and it might be
poisonous!”
Mr. Cook was retired and lived with his wife in the house on the other side of our back fence. He came
running toward the gale with a shovel and tried to kill the snake.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Wait!” I shouted, waving the guidebook in my hand.
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“So what to do now?” Mr. Cook put down the shovel.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There was a huge pond just a few kilometers from where we stayed. Since moving into our new home in
the countryside, my brother, Jim and I used to often sneak out to the pond where we would meet another
friend. Mom had warned us not to get close to the pond, especially after a friend informed her that an
alligator(鳄鱼) had been spotted there. We ignored her advice though.
On this particular afternoon, the three of us had fun in the pond. As evening approached, we finished
swimming. Jim and Syed were unwillingly making their way towards the place where they had left their
clothes. I stayed back and was bathing in the water when I suddenly became aware of ripples(涟漪) forming
on the surface of the water. I raised my head and looked at the ripples. My eyes caught a motion in the water.
A log, I thought. Then I saw it—its scary nose and its two mean eyes. “Jim…” I cried. Then I screamed with
all my might.
Jim turned his head in my direction and immediately recognized the danger. “Get out of the water, Jeff.
Hurry! It’s just behind you.”
I waded(瞠水) clumsily(笨拙地) in the water. With great effort, I reached the edge of the pond. I looked
over my shoulder. Moving quickly towards me was a huge alligator. I froze. Then suddenly I felt a great pain
in my leg. Meanwhile, Jim and Syed screamed and started throwing stones at the alligator and managed to
distract it. The alligator went for them now. As it opened its jaws, I could see its sharp teeth. I tried to move
but a pain shot through me. I was in a pool of blood. Jim and Syed were scared.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago.
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A holiday in Penang is an annual affair for my family. My parents grew up in Penang and are very fond
of Penang food. In December every year, we would drive up to the island to spend three days visiting their
favorite food haunts (常去的地方).
This year, we started our journey up north on a Friday morning. It took us six hours to reach our
destination. We always stayed at one of the hotels in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was just a short walk from the
hotel entrance and our rooms had a lovely view of the sea. We spent our first evening playing on the beach.
After dinner, we returned to our rooms to play games. My parents had a rule for our holidays which was that
we were to spend time doing things together. There was to be no TV and no Internet.
The next morning, we went to Bukit Bendera and then spent the rest of the afternoon in town visiting our
favorite hawker stalls (小贩摊位). As we were having tea at a coffee shop, we overheard people talking about
an earthquake near Sumatera, an island in Indonesia. We headed back to the hotel and then went to the beach.
We took a walk along the beach, picking up seashells along the way. Looking up, I saw the sun shining
brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree trembling in the distance as it reflected the sun’s rays. It never
occurred to us that something awful would take place. Suddenly, I noticed a strange thing. The sea seemed to
be leaving from the shore. I called my father to look at the curious occurrence. My father took one look and
went pale. We saw a grey line in the distance moving towards the shore. It seemed to grow taller by the
second.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.
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We waited a long time before going downstairs.
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6.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a fine summer morning, perfect to be outdoors. Two sisters had been out mushroom picking, and
were on their way home with heavy baskets full of mushrooms. They sang songs on the way, and played with
each other.
Soon they reached a point where they had to cross a railway track. They did not think twice about
crossing it since there was no train coming, and they could not hear any whistle. They slowly climbed the
steep railway embankment, taking care not to drop the baskets. They were very near the track and the little
sister Mary was about to cross it first when a train whistled in the distance.
Hearing the train coming, Rose the elder sister quickly ran down. She thought that the young one was
following her. But as she turned back, she was shocked to see her little sister still up there crossing the track.
“Come back here! Run back fast!” she shouted.
Mary seemed not to hear the whistle nor her sister’s cry as she was concentrating on stepping over the
track with her little feet, and holding on to the basket. Then she tripped and fell on the track, scattering her
mushrooms around.
The engine driver panicked on seeing a girl between the tracks who was on her hands and knees and he
blew the horn with all his strength. Poor Mary, who was frightened by the coming danger, froze and didn’t
know what to do. When Rose saw the scene, she screamed at the top of her voice for Mary’s attention. Mary
noticed that her sister was not around and cried for help.
With the train drawing near, the engine driver grew extremely anxious. As hard as he could, he kept
blowing the whistle and started reducing speed. Yet it was not possible for him to stop the heavy train within
such a short distance.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes.
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The train rolled over and finally stopped.
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7.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was last February. Noel, a 28-year-old marketing manager was heading from Iceland’s Keflavik
International Airport to the capital city Reykjavik with the modern traveler’s two essentials: a dream and a
GPSunit. What could go wrong?
The dream had been with him since April 14, 2010 when he watched TV news report of the volcano
eruption in Iceland. Dark-haired, with a youthful face and thick eyebrows, he had never travelled beyond the
United States and his native Mexico. “I want to see this through my own eyes,” he thought as he watched the
news on his couch.
Four months later, on a cold winter morning, he was driving from Keflavik Airport in a rented car
towards a hotel in Reykjavik, excited that his one-week journey was beginning. As the pink sun rose over the
ocean and shone light on the snow-covered lava rocks along the shore, he dutifully followed the commands of
the GPS that came with the car, a calm female voice directing him to an address—a left here, a right there.
But after stopping on a deserted road, he got a feeling that the voice might be steering (引导) him wrong.
He had been driving for nearly an hour, yet the GPS put his arrival time at around eight hours later. He entered
his destination again and got the same result. Though he sensed that something was off, he made a choice to
trust the machine.
The farther he drove, the fewer cars he saw. The roads became icier. He was sleepy, cold and hungry. He
hadn’t set up his phone for international use, so that was no help. Another three hours passed. As his tires
skidded (打滑) along a narrow mountain road that skirted a steep cliff.he knew that the device had failed him.
He was lost. He didn’t know where else to go. There was no one else on the road, and there was nothing
else to do but follow the line on the screen to its mysterious end.
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The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town.
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Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him.
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8.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was finally going to see Giant Rock with my brothers and Dad. I’d been snowshoeing before, and I
liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks. After putting on our
snowshoes, we studied the map. Dad said, “We start here on the red trail, and then we turn left onto the purple
one. That’s where Giant Rock is. Remember to stick together, guys!”
The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the
trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers. Half way up the hill, we turned onto the winding
purple trail. We settled into a rhythm, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back, crunch-
crunching through the snow. The late afternoon sun felt warm, although it was already sinking lower. I saw
lots of animal tracks-mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit prints, which I recognized from my field guide.
An hour later, we topped the hill and saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest. “It is really huge, as
big as a house!” my brother Josh said, gazing up. Breathlessly standing in the rock’s giant shadow, I noticed
the sun had dipped even lower.
“Let’s head back,” Dad said.
I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn’t recognize. They were hard to
see among the snowshoe prints, so I followed them off the trail for a closer look. There were no claw marks,
which meant they didn’t belong to a dog or a fox. Instead, they looked like tiny handprints and footprints.
“Must be a raccoon (浣熊),” I thought, matching them to prints in my guide.
I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. I was totally alone. “Hey!” I shouted.
“Where is everyone?” nothing. Just the sound of my own breathing. “They couldn’t have gone far. I’ll catch
up to them if I hurry,” I thought, stepping back onto the trail. The light had grown darker by the second.
Without flashlight and phone, I began running.
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1． 续写词数应为150左右；2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
I came to where I could turn right or go straight.
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“Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again.
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9.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day, my brother and I were coming back from the islands where we often risked going and got more
fish than others. All at once, the sky was covered with dark clouds and in less than a minute we were in a
terrible storm. A huge wave covered our boat and we nearly fell into the sea. My brother put his mouth close
to my ear and cried out “Moskoe-strom!” The moment I heard the word I became very frightened. I knew
what he meant by that one word well enough.
With the wind and waves, we were going in the direction of the whirlpool (漩涡). We were hopeless.
Nothing could save us. I felt sick, as if I was falling from a mountain top in a dream. We went round and
round, nearer and nearer to the horrible edge of the whirlpool. It may appear strange, but at that moment, when
we were on the edge of the whirlpool, I felt calmer than when we were moving towards it. I began to think
how amazing a thing it was to die in such a way, and how wonderful it was to see the power of nature.
Suddenly, we went over the edge. I thought my life was over. But moment after moment passed, and I was still
safe.
The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed. I saw
clearly that there were other objects in the whirlpool—trees and barrels (水桶). After a while, I became
curious about the whirlpool itself. I then made three important observations. The first, the larger the bodies
were, the more rapidly they fell; the second, between two objects of equal extent, round objects fell down less
rapidly; and the third, between two objects of the same size, objects shaped like a tube fell down more slowly.
So I tied myself to a barrel to help me float. I tried to make my brother understand, but he was too frightened
and stayed in the boat. Without waiting, I jumped into the sea to try and escape.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Some time after I left the boat, I saw my brother struggling in the sea.
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Soon after that, the whirlpool became less wild and then the sky was clear.
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10.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was an unusually hot day. Exhausted after football practice, I headed for the bus stop to wait for Bus
112 which would take me home. I was beginning to drift off to sleep when I saw the bus arriving. The sun was
in my eyes and that was probably the reason why I got onto Bus 113
I was glad to get a seat. Within minutes, I was sting against the window, fast asleep. When I opened my
eyes, it was dark outside. I was the only passenger left on the bus. I could not recognize the part of town we
were passing through. I pressed the bell and the bus stopped. I planned to hop across the road and catch a bus
going the opposite direction. However, I found myself on a quiet street with a row of shops that were all
closed. I kicked myself for not asking the driver for directions.
As I was wondering what to do, a motorcycle came down the road. The rider looked at me as he passed
and then stopped a short distance away. I went to him and asked him how to get back to the City Square. He
smiled and nodded. He patted the back seat and said that he would send me home. Without a second thought, I
climbed up behind the rider. He turned the motorcycle around and headed in the direction I wanted. We
travelled for about 15 minutes and the surroundings still looked unfamiliar to me. The rider made a few turns
and I knew I was hopelessly lost. I asked him where we were going, He did not answer but increased his
speed. Alarm bells started to ring in my head.
I tapped the man, shoulder and told him to stop. He leaned forward and went at high speed now. Then he
slowed down to turn into a dark and narrow road that led into an oil palm plantation. I had had enough.
注意:1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下超式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I jumped off the vehicle and fell onto the ground.
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I got off the taxi and rushed into my house.
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12.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It’s a beautiful sunny day. The Bonds boarded their boat for a carefree day trip to Dove Island for some
fishing as a family custom. Thomas Bond, a 30-year-old construction worker, loved the sport, especially
catching bass (鲈鱼) and had impressed on his oldest daughter, Lizzy, a love of the outdoors, teaching her how
to bait (下诱饵) a hook and cast a line and brave the waves.
The family spent the day fishing in the vast ocean, and then left the island in the early evening. Upon
setting off from the shore, they found thick fog rolling in. Lizzy fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old
sister, Molly, at a table on the boat’s lower deck (甲板). Their father’s sharp orders woke her up: “Get out of
the boat. The boat’s sinking!” Lizzy pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. Both girls wore life jackets.
The adults did not. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Bond, who was expecting a baby at that
time. Within seconds, the boat was damaged and was left just the tip of its bow in the air.
Looking into the faces of her father, mother, and sister, Lizzy wasn’t frightened. After some time, her
father told them he would swim for help. “I’ll be back,” he said before disappearing into the darkness.
“Dad is like the superhero to me. I believe he will get help to rescue us,” Lizzy said to herself. After some
time, her mother became quiet and stopped swimming. Lizzy wrapped a rope around her mother’s chest and
tied her to the boat so she wouldn’t float away. Then her sister fell quiet too and she stayed beside her.
To keep herself awake, Lizzy daydreamed about what they would do after they were rescued. They would
stay in a hotel, order room service, and lie comfortably under the blankets in bed, cozy and warm.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance.
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On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them.
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