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满分练(十一) 应用文写作+读后续写
(限时:40 分钟)
Ⅰ.应用文写作
(2023 河北沧州一模)
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter 暑假要来中国旅游,他希望你推荐一家中国主题公园,
请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.主题公园的名字和位置;
2.你推荐的理由;
3.表示欢迎。
注意:1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2023 广东佛山二模)
Alice and her family went on a camping trip along the seaside.Upon arrival,Dad called
for a meeting.He announced,“There are lots of jobs to be done.It’s no fun on holiday if Mum
and I do all the work,so I come up with this pocket money chart.In this way,everyone has to
do something,and you must do your own job every day!If you do your jobs well,you will get
some extra pocket money!”
Looking at the chart,which had their names on it next to a list of jobs,the kids frowned
(皱眉) at the idea.Unwillingly,they began to do their jobs.Alice washed up the
dishes.Mike,the youngest brother,dried the dishes.Jeff,Alice’s twin brother,took their dog for
a walk.
The next day they went to the beach.After playing some time in the sea,they went to
look for shells along the beach.Suddenly,Alice found a strange-looking rock.She picked it up
and showed it to Dad.“You’ve found a fossil (化石)!It was once a shellfish and has turned
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into a rock after millions of years!” Dad said happily.Greatly inspired,Alice continued her
search,determined to find a better one,but she failed.Darkness fell,and Alice had to head back
to the campsite with her family in disappointment.On the way back they stopped at a
shop,where Alice spotted some amazing fossils!But soon she found they were too expensive!
Back at the camp,Alice was still thinking of the amazing fossils in the shop.Suddenly an
idea occurred to her,“I’ll do everyone’s job and then I can get all the extra pocket money to
buy a fossil!” The next morning,Alice offered to dry the dishes and walk the dog,which
greatly pleased Mike and Jeff.But things didn’t go as Alice planned.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
When Dad saw Alice walking the dog,he was confused.__________________________
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Later that morning,Mike and Jeff approached Alice when they found she was unhappy._
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答案：
满分练(十一) 应用文写作+读后续写
Ⅰ.
Dear Peter,
I am so glad to hear from you.I’m writing to recommend you to go to Chinese Tea
Culture Theme Park located in the suburban area of Beijing.
Walking along the alley,you can see lots of different “tea” characters written by famous
scholars.The history of tea growing in China and the special ways of cooking different
tea,such as Longjing tea,and Pu’er tea are also shown on the cultural wall in the
park.Besides,the park is full of unique tea houses,which allows visitors to taste various tea.
I sincerely invite you to come here and experience our tea culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
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1.词汇积累
(1)位于:be located in;be situated in;lie in
(2)出名的:famous;well-known
(3)此外:besides;moreover;in addition
(4)各种各样的:various;varieties of;varied;all kinds of
2.高分句型
(1)Walking along the alley,you can see lots of different “tea” characters written by famous
scholars.(运用了现在分词短语Walking along 作状语)
(2)Besides,the park is full of unique tea houses,which allows visitors to taste various tea.(运
用了关系代词which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
Ⅱ.[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了Alice 和她的家人沿着海边露营,她的爸
爸提出每个孩子可以通过做一些工作来赚取零花钱,孩子们并不情愿做这些工作。第二
天,他们去了海滩。在海里玩了一段时间后,他们沿着海滩去找贝壳。突然,Alice 发现了
一块奇怪的石头,爸爸告诉她那是化石,Alice 决定寻找更好的,在一家商店里她发现了一
些令人惊奇的化石,但是太贵了,她决定干所有孩子们的工作来获得零花钱买化石,但事
情并没有像Alice 计划的那样发展。
[思路分析]
1.段落续写:
(1)由第一段首句内容“当爸爸看到爱丽丝在遛狗时,他很困惑。”可知,第一段可描写
爸爸对爱丽丝做其他孩子的工作一事不满意。
(2)由第二段首句内容“那天上午晚些时候,迈克和杰夫发现爱丽丝不开心,就去找
她。”可知,第二段可描写爱丽丝的兄弟们如何帮助爱丽丝,让爱丽丝高兴起来。
2.续写线索:爸爸询问——爱丽丝解释——爸爸教育爱丽丝——爱丽丝的感受——兄弟
们送给爱丽丝零花钱——爱丽丝高兴——感悟
[参考范文]
When Dad saw Alice walking the dog,he was confused.Obviously,he was not happy
about this.When Alice came back,Dad asked why she was doing Jeff’s job.Alice
stuttered,“I...I just want to earn all the extra pocket money to buy that fossil in the shop.”
“I’m sorry,Alice.I’m afraid you can’t.You all have to do the jobs—not just you.The point is
that we share the jobs,” Dad said.Hearing what Dad said,Alice was taken hold of by a surge
of disappointment mixed with sadness.She thought it was unfair that Dad just ignored her
hard work.
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Later that morning,Mike and Jeff approached Alice when they found she was
unhappy.They presented a small box and urged her to open it.Alice had no idea what was
going on,but seeing her two brothers’ eyes twinkling with eagerness,she opened it.The
moment she saw what was inside,Alice jumped up with joy.It was her brothers’ extra pocket
money,with which she could afford one of the fossils she dreamed about!She threw her arms
around her brothers,tears welling up in her eyes.Jeff said,“Dad told us your plan.” It dawned
on Alice that Dad was trying to tell her that rules are rules but love between family members
never fails.
1.词汇积累
(1)行为类
①询问:ask;inquire
②递交:present;hand
③拥抱:throw one’s arms around sb.;embrace sb.
(2)情绪类
①悲伤:sadness;sorrow
②高兴:joy;delight
2.高分句型
(1)When Alice came back,Dad asked why she was doing Jeff’s job.(由When 引导的时间状
语从句和why 引导的宾语从句)
(2)It dawned on Alice that Dad was trying to tell her that rules are rules but love between
family members never fails.(由that 引导的主语从句和that 引导的宾语从句)
