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Harry slammed his bedroom door. He’d been begging Dad for a new tablet for
weeks — one with a fast camera to take photos for his art class(介词短语做后置定语). But Dad
just shook his head every time.
“We need to save for your younger sister’s school trip to the science
museum,” he’d said. Harry thought to himself, “It’s not fair. All my friends have
one for their projects.(冲突点)”
That evening, Dad found Harry sitting in the backyard, sad(adj做主语补语). He
pulled up a chair and sat down, asking Harry (现在分词短语做伴随动作), “Remember that red
bike in the storage room? That thing used to be my pride and joy.” Harry nodded,
thinking of the dusty thing (现在分词短语做伴随动作) covered by a strong cloth (过去分词短语做后置定语).
“I wanted a new bike more than anything when I was your age,” Dad said.
“Your grandpa found that red one at a junkyard — with a bent wheel. He said
we couldn’t afford a new one. So I spent every weekend out here, fixing that old
one(现在分词短语做伴随动作) — straightening the wheel, patching (修补) the tires, even
repainting it red with leftover paint found in the storage room .(过去分词短语做后置定语)” He
laughed softly. “When I finally rode it, I felt prouder than if it had been brand-new.
I earned it(伏笔).”
“Why are you telling me this? My tablet isn’t a bike,” Harry responded.
“Because wanting things is easy,” Dad said. “But working for them(再次强调)? That’s
when you start caring about how hard it is to get. That’s how you learn what
they’re really worth. I know you want a tablet very much. But your sister’s trip —
she’s been talking about it since the second grade. Maybe there’s a way to do both.”
Harry’s throat suddenly felt tight(无灵主语句，情绪描写). “What if ... what if I sold my old
stuff? Toys, books — have a yard sale?” Dad’s eyes lit up. “That’s a good plan. But
you have to do the work — pricing, setting up, and selling. Whatever you make,
every cent goes towards your tablet.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The next day, Harry dragged boxes full of old toys and books to the
yard.Paragraph 2: When the last customer left, Harry counted the day’s earnings.山东省齐鲁名校大联考2025-2026学年高三上学期10月月考英语试题
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文。
Harry slammed (猛关) his bedroom door. He’d been begging Dad for a new
tablet for weeks — one with a fast camera to take photos for his art class. But Dad
just shook his head every time.
“We need to save for your younger sister’s school trip to the science museum,”
he’d said. Harry thought to himself, “It’s not fair. All my friends have one for their
projects.”
That evening, Dad found Harry sitting in the backyard, sad. He pulled up a chair
and sat down, asking Harry, “Remember that red bike in the storage room? That thing
used to be my pride and joy.” Harry nodded, thinking of the dusty thing covered by a
strong cloth.
“I wanted a new bike more than anything when I was your age,” Dad said. “Your
grandpa found that red one at a junkyard — with a bent wheel. He said we couldn’t
afford a new one. So I spent every weekend out here, fixing that old one —
straightening the wheel, patching (修补) the tires, even repainting it red with leftover
paint found in the storage room.” He laughed softly. “When I finally rode it, I felt
prouder than if it had been brand-new. I earned it.”
“Why are you telling me this? My tablet isn’t a bike,” Harry responded.
“Because wanting things is easy,” Dad said. “But working for them? That’s when
you start caring about how hard it is to get. That’s how you learn what they’re really
worth. I know you want a tablet very much. But your sister’s trip — she’s been
talking about it since the second grade. Maybe there’s a way to do both.”
Harry’s throat suddenly felt tight. “What if ... what if I sold my old stuff? Toys,
books — have a yard sale?” Dad’s eyes lit up. “That’s a good plan. But you have to
do the work — pricing, setting up, and selling. Whatever you make, every cent goes
towards your tablet.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The next day, Harry dragged boxes full of old toys and books to the
yard.
Paragraph 2: When the last customer left, Harry counted the day’s earnings.一、文章类型分析
项目 内容
题材类型 家庭温情个人成长类（心理成长 / 亲情理解 / 价值观教育线）
主要人物 父亲 Dad、男孩 Harry（核心成长线人物）
情节类型 从“冲突—理解—行动—成长”的心理成长型续写
主题核心 学会珍惜、通过劳动换取所得、理解父爱与责任
续写思路 围绕“Harry通过自己的努力卖旧物赚取买平板的钱”展开，突出行
核心 动转折 → 内心成长 → 亲情升华
1. 承接原文的“计划”（yard sale）
2. 过程：行动与困难
续写重点
3. 结果：赚得部分钱 + 父亲补足 / 表达欣慰
4. 心理转变：从不满 → 理解 → 成熟
既要体现故事的连续性，又要突出主题深化；在动作和心理描写中体
写作目标
现“成长与理解父亲”。
二、续写布局与思路
段落 结构功能 内容建议 语言/技巧
承接“yard Harry准备售卖旧物，遇到挑 动作描写 + 环境描
第一段：行动展
sale”计划 战（天气、没人买、舍不得 写 + 心理变化；体
开（Paragraph
→ 进入行 旧玩具等），但逐渐坚持下 现“从被动到主
1）
动阶段 来，父亲远处关注 动”
Harry计算收入，虽未够买平
心理描写 + 对话收
第二段：情感升 结果与反思 板，却收获成就感。父亲补
束；呼应父亲的教
华（Paragraph → 主题升 贴部分资金，两人情感升
诲，主题照应
2） 华 温。Harry明白“earn it”的真
“earned pride”
正意义
三、故事山阶段 内容 原文/续写体现
原文首段 Harry不满、冲突建
开端 (Beginning) Harry想要平板，父亲拒绝
立
父亲讲述旧自行车故事，引 原文父亲的讲述 + 激发转变伏
上升 (Build-up)
出教育意义 笔
Harry决定卖旧物（行动开 段首句 Paragraph 1：The next
高潮 (Climax)
始） day, Harry...
下降 (Falling
过程艰辛但有成长与感悟 续写第一段中段到结尾处
action)
第二段结尾，心理升华，情感和
结局 (Resolution) Harry收获理解与自豪
解
四、原文衔接分析与情感线索整理
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
父亲：理智、含蓄教育者； “Dad just shook his head every time.” /
人物刻画
Harry：冲动→懂事 “Harry slammed his bedroom door.”
“It’s not fair.” → “Why are you telling
由“不满→理解→感激”三层
情感层次 me this?” → “Harry’s throat suddenly
递进
felt tight.”
1. 父亲拒绝；2. 讲述旧车经
关键情节 “Maybe there’s a way to do both.”（转
历；3. 启发Harry卖旧物；4.
点 折伏笔）
成长收尾
对话自然，情感递进，家庭语
语言特色 多处直接引语体现情感互动
境真实
关键词分 “earn it”, “worth”, “pride”, “work
全篇价值观线索核心词
析 for”
心理描写 Harry的不满、羞愧、顿悟 “Harry’s throat suddenly felt tight.”
“slammed his door”, “dragged
动作描写 boxes”, “counted the day’s 动作推动情节发展
earnings”分析角度 内容 原文反应句
“sitting in the backyard”——温
环境描写 家庭式对话场景
情氛围中展开教育
勤劳、自立、父爱的启迪、获
隐含主题 通过行动体悟“earning”之意义
得的价值感
从自我为中心 → 体谅家庭 →
情感转折 由冲突到理解的心理成长线
实践感悟
从室内（冲突）→后院（教
空间转换 空间递进体现心理转变
育）→庭院售卖（行动）
“That evening” → “The next
时间过渡 day” → “When the last customer 自然时间线推进故事发展
left”
五、伏笔与冲突
元素 内容 原文线索句
① 父亲讲旧自行车 → 引导劳动价值
观；
伏笔 “Maybe there’s a way to do both.”
② “Maybe there’s a way to do both.” → 暗
示解决方法
① Harry的自我需求与家庭责任冲突；
冲突 “It’s not fair.” / “We need to save
② 想要平板 vs. 妹妹的学费；
点 for your younger sister’s trip.”
③ 想得到 vs. 学会付出
隐含 “Earned pride” — 成长主题暗线；“yard
父亲故事中的“earned it”
线索 sale” — 劳动实践主线
解决 “Have a yard sale” + “Every cent
行动+理解+父爱引导
方案 goes towards your tablet.”
可在续写结尾设计父亲补贴部
情感
理解父亲并收获成就感 分费用或Harry决定继续努力攒
终点
钱六、续写思考
方向 建议与说明
段首句“Harry dragged boxes...”自然衔接“yard sale”计划；注意动作
承接原文
与环境描写延续“backyard”场景。
心理线延
重点描写Harry内心变化：开始抱怨→渐渐投入→感动→理解。
续
对话自然 父亲可适当出现对话，如鼓励或观察。收尾用父子交流形成情感升
化 华。
细节塑造
举例：小女孩路过买了旧玩具、邻居夸他勤劳等，细节体现价值观。
成长
呼应与照 结尾用父亲最初的那句 “You earned it” 或 “Now you know what
应 it’s worth” 呼应主题。
情节闭环 从“want something”到“earn something”形成完整的心理成长圆。
七、动作、环境、心理描写
动作描写
Harry dragged the heavy box across the yard, sweat dripping down his
forehead.
哈里拖着沉重的箱子穿过院子，额头上汗水直流。
He wiped his hands on his jeans and looked around nervously.
他把手在牛仔裤上擦了擦，紧张地环顾四周。
Customers bent over the table, picking up toys and flipping through old
books.
顾客弯下腰，在桌上挑选玩具、翻看旧书。
Dad stood by the door, arms crossed, watching quietly.
爸爸双臂交叉，静静地站在门口观察。
Harry forced a smile as he handed a toy to a little boy.
他挤出一丝笑容，把玩具递给一个小男孩。
He counted the coins one by one, his fingers trembling slightly.
他一枚一枚地数着硬币，手指微微颤抖。The boy brushed the dust off an old comic book.
男孩拍掉旧漫画书上的灰尘。
He packed the remaining items back into the boxes at sunset.
夕阳下，他把剩下的物品重新装回箱子。
Dad patted him gently on the shoulder.
爸爸轻轻拍了拍他的肩膀。
Harry lifted his head, meeting his father’s proud gaze.
哈里抬起头，迎上父亲骄傲的目光。
心理描写
A wave of disappointment washed over him.
一阵失望涌上心头。
He hesitated, wondering if anyone would buy these useless things.
他犹豫着，怀疑是否有人愿意买这些没用的旧物。
A lump formed in his throat as he realized how much Dad had done.
当他意识到爸爸为家人付出多少时，喉咙一阵发紧。
Guilt crept into his heart, replacing the anger from last night.
内疚悄然爬上心头，取代了昨晚的愤怒。
For the first time, he felt proud of his own effort.
他第一次为自己的努力感到自豪。
Doubt flickered in his eyes, but determination soon took its place.
他眼中闪过一丝犹疑，但随即被决心取代。
A smile spread across his face as the first customer stopped by.
当第一个顾客停下来时，他的脸上绽放出笑容。
His heart raced with excitement when a toy was sold.
当一件玩具卖出时，他激动得心跳加快。
He suddenly realized that earning was far sweeter than asking.
他突然明白，靠自己获得的，比索求来的更甜。
A quiet warmth filled his chest when Dad nodded approvingly.
当爸爸赞许地点头时，一股温暖悄然涌上心头。
环境描写The morning sun cast golden light across the yard.
清晨的阳光洒在院子里，泛着金光。
The air smelled faintly of cut grass and old paper.
空气中弥漫着青草和旧书的气味。
A light breeze lifted the price tags hanging from the boxes.
微风轻轻拂动箱子上悬挂的价签。
Children’s laughter echoed down the street.
孩子们的笑声在街道上回荡。
The setting sun painted the sky a soft orange.
夕阳把天空染成柔和的橙色。
The wooden table creaked under the weight of the old books.
旧书堆在木桌上，发出吱呀的响声。
Shadows grew longer as the day wore on.
随着时间推移，影子渐渐拉长。
The air was thick with the scent of summer dust.
空气中弥漫着夏日灰尘的气息。
A neighbor’s dog barked lazily from a distance.
邻居家的狗在远处懒洋洋地叫着。
When the yard finally emptied, a calm silence fell.
当院子终于空荡下来时，四周陷入了宁静。
高级词汇替换推荐
场景 普通词 高级替换
情感表 happy → delighted / overjoyed / He was thrilled to see his effort pay
达 thrilled off.
He felt frustrated when no one
生气 angry → frustrated / annoyed / irritated
stopped by.
sad → disheartened / discouraged / He looked disheartened after hours of
难过
disappointed waiting.
understand → realize / grasp / He finally grasped what his father
理解
appreciate meant by “earning.”
努力 work hard → make an effort / devote He devoted himself to making the场景 普通词 高级替换
oneself / put in effort yard sale work.
词汇、固定搭配
slam the door —— 猛关门
词性：动词短语
近义：shut the door violently
反义：close the door gently
例句：
- He slammed the door in anger.
- She closed the door gently behind her.
pull up a chair —— 拉把椅子坐下（常用于亲情或轻松语境）
近义：take a seat / sit down
反义：stand up / walk away
例句：
- Dad pulled up a chair and sat beside him.
- She pulled up a chair to join the talk.
work for something —— 为……而努力
词性：动词短语
近义：strive for / fight for / make efforts toward
反义：take for granted
例句：
- You must work for what you want.
- He fought for his dream job.
feel proud of —— 为……感到自豪
词性：动词短语
近义：take pride in / be pleased with
反义：be ashamed of
例句：- He felt proud of his own work.
- Dad took pride in his son’s effort.
every cent counts —— 每一分钱都重要（语义地道）
词性：句型表达
近义：money doesn’t grow on trees / save every penny
反义：waste money / spend carelessly
例句：
- Dad told him that every cent counts.
- She saved every penny for her trip.
可积累语料与表达拓展
A wave of + emotion + washed over sb.
→ 一阵……情绪涌上心头。
例：A wave of guilt washed over him.
It struck him that...
→ 他突然意识到……
例：It struck him that Dad was right all along.
be worth the effort / money / time
→ 值得付出努力 / 金钱 / 时间。
例：He realized the work was worth the effort.
look back on
→ 回顾；反思。
例：Looking back on the day, he felt content.
be caught up in
→ 陷入（情绪或活动中）。
例：He was caught up in the excitement of selling.
make a difference
→ 起到作用；改变局面。
例：Dad’s story really made a difference to him.from that day on
→ 从那天起。
例：From that day on, he understood the value of work.
turn out to be
→ 结果是……
例：The sale turned out to be more than just about money.
with a lump in his throat
→ 哽咽；激动。
例：With a lump in his throat, he thanked Dad softly.
by the time + 从句
→ 到……的时候。
例：By the time the sun set, he had sold most of his things.
心理+动作+结果句式模板：
He hesitated for a moment, then took a deep breath and stepped
forward.
Tears blurred his eyes, but a proud smile broke through.
因果句式模板：
Because he had earned it himself, the tablet meant far more to
him.
Having worked for it, he finally understood what Dad meant.八、 Possible Versions(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: The next day, Harry dragged box es full of old toys and books to
the yard. The sun rose gently over the quiet neighborhood, casting a warm glow on
the backyard . Each box contained items he had once loved. As
(现在分词短语做伴随动作) (无灵主语句)
he carefully placed the toys on the table, he hesitated.Harry straightened the price
tags, feeling a mix of nervousness and excitement . He approached a
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
small group of children who stopped to examine the toys. For the first time, he felt
responsible for something other than his own desires. His heart beat faster as a
little girl handed him a coin for a book. The moment, though simple, filled him
with pride he had never experienced before. By the end of the morning, he
(无灵主语句)
had sold several items, feeling the tablet was much closer.
Paragraph 2: When the last customer left, Harry counted the day’s earnings.
Harry carefully stacked the coins and bills, feeling the weight of his
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
work and the value of his determination. He smiled softly, realizing
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
that though the total was not enough for the tablet, he had learned an invaluable
lesson about effort, patience, and responsibility. Harry promised himself that he
would continue to save, perhaps by helping with extra chores or selling more
items in the coming weekends. The sun dipped lower, painting the sky with soft
hues of orange and pink. Harry looked around the backyard, wondering
(现在分词短语做伴随动
it was more than a yard sale; it was a first step toward independence and self-
作)
discipline. At last, Harry understood that the joy of earning something with one’s
own effort matters more than receiving it.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: The next day, Harry dragged boxes full of old toys and books to
the yard. He set up a small table, arranging toys and books neatly ,
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
trying to make them look appealing . He remembered his father’s
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
story about the red bike and the pride of earning it himself. A few neighbors paused,
asking about the items . Each coin he received made him more confident, and
gradually his initial anxiety faded. Harry noticed how some items reminded him of
happy childhood memories, and he found himself reflecting on how much he hadgrown. By midday, he had sold most of the toys and books, feeling a quiet but
profound sense of achievement .
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
Paragraph 2: When the last customer left, Harry counted the day’s earnings.
He carefully organized the coins into stacks, marveling at the result .
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
Although the amount was still short of the tablet’s price , Harry felt the satisfaction
of earning something. His father came to sit beside him, giving a gentle pat on the
shoulder. The sun began to set, and the yard was quiet, yet Harry’s mind was
buzzing with plans to continue working toward his goal. He realized that every
effort mattered and that through perseverance, even small actions could lead to
meaningful rewards. For the first time, Harry truly understood his father’s lesson:
things earned through work are far more valuable than things
(过去分词做后置定语)
received for free .
(过去分词做后置定语)
Version 3
Paragraph 1: The next day, Harry dragged boxes full of old toys and books to
the yard. He positioned the boxes carefully, making sure each item
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
was visible and orderly. Harry felt a twinge of nervousness As the first few
neighbors approached, he greeted them politely and explained the prices. Handling
the money and seeing smiles on customers’ faces filled him with
(动名词短语做主语)
unexpected pride. Every transaction reinforced the idea that effort was tied to
reward. Children laughed as they chose toys, and Harry found himself joining in,
picturing his tablet . By the time lunch came, he had sold many
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
items, and a sense of accomplishment settled over him, mingled with gratitude for
his father’s guidance .
(过去分词做后置定语)
Paragraph 2: When the last customer left, Harry counted the day’s earnings.
He sat on the grass, arranging coins and bills , feeling a mix of
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
satisfaction and reflection . While he still needed more to buy the
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
tablet, his father stood nearby, smiling quietly , offering reassurance. Harry
looked around at the empty boxes, realizing how much he had grown
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
in just one day. Then his father grinned “You did great today. I'll cover the
remaining amount, and I'll also take a small toy as today's customer.” In that moment,
Harry recognized that the joy of earned achievement could never be replaced byinstant gratification, a lesson that would guide him in the following days to
come.
非谓语结构强调动作或心理
arranging toys and books neatly, handling the money and seeing
smiles
倒装句强调感受
Never had he felt such pride
连接词及句式丰富逻辑
although, yet, by the time, for the first time, as the sun dipped lower
地道搭配与亮点词汇积累
类别 词/短语 同义词/替换词 例句
carry / haul / Harry dragged boxes to the yard. / She
动作描写 drag boxes
move hauled the books to the table.
lump in his choked up / Harry felt a lump in his throat. / He was
情绪描写
throat emotional choked up during the speech.
quiet sense of He felt a quiet sense of accomplishment.
sense of pride /
成就感 accomplishme / She experienced great satisfaction after
satisfaction
nt finishing the task.
work for / achieve He finally earned it himself. / She
努力价值 earn it
/ deserve worked hard to achieve her goals.
A sudden realization struck him. / He
understanding /
心理转变 realization came to an understanding about the
awakening
lesson.
His perseverance paid off. / She showed
persistence /
表示坚持 perseverance great determination in completing the
determination
project.
For the first time, he realized… → 强调心理转折
Feeling proud of himself, he… → 情绪+动作结合
By the end of the day, he had… → 时间推进+结果With each sale, he understood… → 动作→心理升华
A quiet smile spread across his face… → 内心感受外化官方version1
The next day, Harry dragged boxes full of old toys and books to the yard. He
worked hard all morning. First, he cleaned everything and set up tables neatly. Then,
he carefully wrote price stickers. When customers arrived , Harry felt shy at first.
He took a deep breath and started talking about his things. Some people asked
for lower prices. Harry learned to say no politely or agree to a little less. Seeing his
old toys and books find new homes was fun, but it was also hot work
(动名词短语做主语)
under the sun. He kept remembering Dad's story about the bike. Every time he sold
something, he pictured getting closer to his tablet. It made him feel proud of his
effort.
When the last customer left , Harry counted the day's earnings. He carefully
added up the coins and notes. He had earned $152! It was exactly enough for the
tablet he needed! Harry beamed, thrilled that he had earned it
(过去分词做adj主语补语)
himself. He couldn't wait to tell Dad. Rushing inside , he showed Dad
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
the money and said,“I did it! I earned enough for my tablet!” Dad felt really proud of
how hard Harry tried. Harry understood now. Working hard for it made
(动名词短语做主语)
the tablet truly his own, just like Dad's bike. Harry felt prouder than ever before.
Sometimes the best rewards, he realized, were the ones you worked hardest to
earn.
Version2
The next day, Harry dragged boxes full of old toys and books to the yard. He
carefully arranged each item, hoping to attract potential buyers (现在分词短语做伴随动作). As
he set up the stall, neighbors and passers-by began to stop by, intrigued by the
variety of goods on display(过去分词做原因状语). Harry enthusiastically explained the
features of each toy and book, sharing stories behind some of his favorites (现在分词短语
做伴随动作). The sun shone brightly overhead, and with each sale, Harry’s excitement
grew. Not only was he making progress towards his goal(倒装句), but he was also
learning valuable lessons about communication and negotiation.
When the last customer left, Harry counted the day’s earnings. To his surprise
and delight, the total took his breath away — it was more than enough for the
tablet’s basic model! A wave of fierce pride washed over him, stronger than any
excitement(adj做补语) he’d felt just wanting the device. He realized Dad was right: the
hours spent sorting, pricing, hauling, and selling (过去分词短语做后置定语) had transformedthe tablet from a mere object of desire into something deeply personal and
valuable. Through effort and perseverance, he could not only achieve his dream
but also develop a deeper appreciation for the value of hard work. This tablet
wouldn’t just be new; it would be earned.
