江苏省通州区+南通市区2026届高三九月调研测试英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Champa loves singing more than anything else in the whole wide world . She
sings in the bathroom. And on the roof, She sings to the hills. And to the moon. She
sings through rain. And through heat. When Champa sings , she is filled with the
most marvellous feeling in the world.
One day, when Champa sings, Basant’s eyes light up.“I have an amazing idea!”
he says. Basant is Champa’s best friend and he is always bursting with ideas. “You
should sing on Annual Day!” says Basant. “What a terrible idea!” says Champa.
“Why not! You love to sing.”
Champa hasn’t told Basant about the only time she got on stage and nearly
fainted with fear . “I…I can’t sing in front of so many people. I don’t even sing
(重要冲突点)
in front of Ma and Pa!” “You do sing around me! All you need is a little practice,
Champa.” “Should I?” “Yes! Yes!Yes!” “What if people laugh at me?” “If they do,
it just makes them silly and mean. You’re an amazing singer.” The very thought of
singing in front of a crowd fills her stomach with butterflies . Champa is
(人物情绪描写)
excited and terrified at the same time. But she loves singing so much! She decides to
give it a try.
Champa practises long and hard. She rolls out of bed with a soft hum. She sings
while multiplying and dividing . She makes her voice go up and down and
(状语从句省略)
down and up while taking a bath .
(状语从句省略)
Everyone at home is excited about Champa’s big day.They give her advice.
“Take long and deep breaths before you sing.” “Give the audience your widest smile.
Just be yourself.” “Drinking enough water and avoiding spicy and acidic food are
essential for protecting your throat.”
The day before her performance, Champa holds a special rehearsal. It is a roaring
success! Finally, it’s Annual Day. Champa is wearing the sweater that her
grandfather knit specially for the show.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When it was her turn to sing, she seemed to get tongue-tied.
Paragraph 2: That was when she saw Basant, waving wildly at her.通州区+南通市区2026届高三九月调研测试英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Champa loves singing more than anything else in the whole wide world. She
sings in the bathroom. And on the roof. She sings to the hills. And to the moon. She
sings through rain. And through heat. When Champa sings, she is filled with the most
marvellous feeling in the world.
One day, when Champa sings, Basant’s eyes light up.“I have an amazing idea!”
he says. Basant is Champa’s best friend and he is always bursting with ideas. “You
should sing on Annual Day!” says Basant. “What a terrible idea!” says Champa.
“Why not! You love to sing.”
Champa hasn’t told Basant about the only time she got on stage and nearly
fainted with fear. “I…I can’t sing in front of so many people. I don’t even sing in
front of Ma and Pa!” “You do sing around me! All you need is a little practice,
Champa.” “Should I?” “Yes! Yes!Yes!” “What if people laugh at me?” “If they do, it
just makes them silly and mean. You’re an amazing singer.” The very thought of
singing in front of a crowd fills her stomach with butterflies. Champa is excited and
terrified at the same time. But she loves singing so much! She decides to give it a
try.Champa practises long and hard. She rolls out of bed with a soft hum. She sings
while multiplying and dividing. She makes her voice go up and down and down and
up while taking a bath.
Everyone at home is excited about Champa’s big day.They give her advice.
“Take long and deep breaths before you sing.” “Give the audience your widest smile.
Just be yourself.” “Drinking enough water and avoiding spicy and acidic food are
essential for protecting your throat.”
The day before her performance, Champa holds a special rehearsal(排练). It is a
roaring success! Finally, it’s Annual Day. Champa is wearing the sweater that her
grandfather knit specially for the show.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When it was her turn to sing, she seemed to get tongue-tied.Paragraph 2: That was when she saw Basant, waving wildly at her.一、文章分析与续写构思
该文章属于成长励志克服恐惧+好友帮扶型读后续写。故事围绕Champa对
歌唱的热爱与舞台恐惧之间的冲突展开，重点描写她如何通过朋友的支持和自
我突破战胜心理障碍。
续写构思思路：
情感主线：从恐惧（紧张、舌头打结）到突破（看到Basant的鼓励）再到
成功（找回自信、享受歌唱）。
布局：第一段描写舞台上的紧张与失败感；第二段通过Basant的鼓励实现
转折，最终完成表演。
框架提炼：
承接开头语“舌头打结”，详细描写Champa的恐慌和心理活动。
通过外部线索（Basant的动作）和内部线索（对歌唱的热爱）实现情绪转
折。
以成功表演和情感升华结尾，点明主题（勇气、友谊与热爱）。
实施重点：
保持原文语言风格（简单句、比喻、情感描写）。
使用原文关键词（如“butterflies”“roaring success”）。
延续人物性格（Champa的敏感、Basant的积极）。
续写注意事项：
承接原文：
时间（Annual Day当天）、空间（舞台）、人物（Champa、Basant在
场）。
事件（表演失败需逆转）。
情绪（“excited and terrified”需延续）。
巧妙设计：
用动作描写体现心理（如“手抖”“深呼吸”）。用环境烘托（观众反应、灯光）。
用伏笔回收（Basant的“wildly waving”呼应前文“eyes light up”）。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
故事山模式：
开端：Champa热爱歌唱但恐惧舞台。
发展：Basant鼓励她参加Annual Day，她刻苦练习。
高潮：表演当天登台紧张（续写起点）。
转折：看到Basant的鼓励。
结局：克服恐惧，成功演唱。
原文衔接点：
直接衔接：段落开头语“she seemed to get tongue-tied”承接前文“nearly fainted
with fear”。
情绪衔接：但“excited and terrified”需延续。
动作衔接：Basant“waving wildly”呼应前文“eyes light up”。
关键词句分析：
分析角度 内容说明 原文反应句/关键词
“Champa loves singing...”,
Champa敏感但热爱歌
人物刻画 “Basant is always bursting with
唱；Basant积极支持
ideas”
“excited and terrified at the same
情感层次 兴奋与恐惧交织
time”, “stomach with butterflies”
“decides to give it a try”, “roaring
决定参赛、排练成功、登
关键情节点 success”, “get tongue-tied” (续写
台紧张
开头)
语言特色 简单句、比喻、口语化 “sings to the hills”, “bursting with分析角度 内容说明 原文反应句/关键词
ideas”, “stomach with butterflies”
butterflies（紧张）、
关键词分析 需在续写中复用
roaring（成功）
“What if people laugh at me?”,
心理描写 内心冲突与自我怀疑
“nearly fainted with fear”
“sings while multiplying”,
动作描写 练习歌唱、登台准备
“wearing the sweater”
原文未详细描写，需添加灯
环境描写 舞台场景（需续写补充）
光、观众等
隐含主题 勇气、友谊克服恐惧 Basant的鼓励与Champa的坚持
情感转折 从恐惧到自信 续写需通过Basant的鼓励实现
空间转换 从练习场所到舞台 续写需聚焦舞台
时间过渡 从赛前到表演中 续写需紧扣表演时刻
伏笔与冲突：
伏笔：Basant的“amazing idea”、Champa的练习成功、祖父的毛衣（象征支
持）。
冲突：内心恐惧（舞台恐惧症）vs. 外部支持（Basant、家庭）。
隐含线索：Basant始终相信Champa（“You’re an amazing singer”）。
解决方案：通过友谊与自我热爱突破心理障碍。
三、 动作环境心理描写与高级词汇
动作描写 (Action Descriptions):Her knees knocked together involuntarily.
她的膝盖不自觉地发抖。
A single bead of sweat traced a path down her temple.
一滴汗珠从她的太阳穴滑落。
Her fingers fumbled with the hem of her sweater.
她的手指紧张地摆弄着毛衣的边缘。
She drew in a shuddering breath, trying to steady herself.
她吸了一口颤抖的气，试图让自己镇定下来。
The microphone felt heavy and foreign in her clammy hands.
麦克风在她湿冷的手中显得沉重而陌生。
She cast a frantic glance towards the dark audience.
她慌乱地向黑暗的观众席瞥了一眼。
Her voice caught in her throat, coming out as a mere squeak.
她的声音卡在喉咙里，只发出一声微弱的吱吱声。
He was jumping up and down, giving her a thumbs-up.
他跳上跳下，对她竖起了大拇指。
She closed her eyes, shutting out the intimidating crowd.
她闭上眼睛，屏蔽了令人生畏的人群。
A wide, genuine smile finally broke across her face.
一个真诚的灿烂笑容终于在她脸上绽放。
心理描写
A wave of sheer panic washed over her, freezing her in place.
一阵彻底的恐慌席卷了她，让她僵在原地。
Her mind went completely blank, all lyrics vanishing into thin air.
她的脑子一片空白，所有歌词都消失得无影无踪。
The familiar dread of stage fright coiled tightly in her stomach.
那熟悉的怯场恐惧在她胃里紧紧缠绕。
A chorus of negative 'what-ifs' echoed in her head.
消极的“万一”想法在她脑中回荡。She felt utterly alone under the spotlight's harsh glare.
在聚光灯刺眼的照射下，她感到无比孤独。
For a fleeting moment, she regretted ever agreeing to this.
在短暂的一瞬间，她后悔答应了这件事。
Seeing her friend's face, a glimmer of hope pierced through her fear.
看到朋友的脸，一丝希望的光芒刺穿了她的恐惧。
The old passion for music began to stir deep within her soul.
对音乐古老的热情开始在她灵魂深处涌动。
The crippling self-doubt slowly gave way to fragile confidence.
令人崩溃的自我怀疑慢慢让位于脆弱的信心。
She was flooded with an overwhelming sense of triumph and relief.
她心中涌起一股巨大的胜利感和解脱感。
环境描写
The stage lights were blinding, creating a wall of white around her.
舞台灯光令人目眩，在她周围形成了一堵白色的墙。
A hushed silence fell over the auditorium, heavy with expectation.
礼堂里一片寂静，充满了沉重的期待。
The sea of faces in the audience blurred into an anonymous mass.
观众席上的张张面孔模糊成匿名的一团。
The weight of countless eyes upon her felt almost physical.
无数双眼睛注视着她的重量，几乎让她有生理上的感觉。
The familiar wool of her grandfather's sweater was a small comfort against her
skin.
祖父织的毛衣那熟悉的羊毛质感，贴着她的皮肤带来一丝小小的安慰。
A single spotlight beam pinned her to the center of the vast stage.
一束聚光灯将她定格在广阔舞台的中央。
The expectant murmur of the crowd faded into a distant buzz.
人群期待的窃窃私语渐渐变成遥远的嗡嗡声。
The air backstage was thick with tension and the scent of nervous sweat.
后台的空气充满了紧张和汗水的味道。The first note she sang cleanly cut through the tense silence.
她清晰唱出的第一个音符划破了紧张的寂静。
Thunderous applause erupted from the audience, washing over her like a warm
wave.
雷鸣般的掌声从观众席中爆发出来，像温暖的波浪一样冲刷着她。
常见单词高级替换与场景总结
常见词 高级替换词 (近义词) 适用场景
描述上台前、面对
Apprehensive (忧虑的), Trepidatious (惶恐
Nervous 挑战时的复杂紧张
的), Jittery (紧张不安的), Daunted (气馁的)
情绪
描述成功克服困难
Elated (兴高采烈的), Overjoyed (欣喜若狂
Happy 后极度的喜悦和兴
的), Ecstatic (狂喜的), Jubilant (欢呼的)
奋
Gaze (凝视), Peer (仔细看), Scan (扫描), Glan 精细刻画人物视线
Look
ce (瞥见) 的方向和意图
根据对话的情绪和
Urge (敦促), Exclaim (呼喊), Whisper (低语),
Say 音量选择更精准的
Mutter (咕哝)
动词
加强形容词或副词
Exceedingly (非常), Utterly (完全地), Thoroug
Very 的程度，避免very
hly (彻底地), Remarkably (显著地)
的滥用
常见搭配与词法解析
Eyes light up: (眼睛亮起来) 固定搭配，形象地表示“突然变得兴奋或喜悦”。
解析: Light up 是动词短语，此处用作不及物动词。Bursting with ideas: (充满了想法) 固定搭配。Burst with 表示“充满（某种感情
或特质）并几乎要溢出来”，非常生动。
解析: Bursting 是现在分词作形容词使用，描述一种持续的状态。
Filled with a feeling: (充满了一种感觉) 常见搭配。Be filled with 比 have 更能体
现情感充斥身心的状态。
Stomach with butterflies: (胃里有蝴蝶) 英语习语，表示“因紧张而引起的恶
心、颤抖的感觉”，即“忐忑不安”。
解析: 这是一个名词短语，with 表示“带有…特征”。
Roaring success: (巨大的成功) 固定搭配。Roaring 原意是“咆哮的”，这里用
作强化语，比喻成功声势浩大。
解析: Roaring 是动名词作形容词，修饰名词 success。
Tongue-tied: (舌头打结) 形容词复合词，字面意思是“舌头被绑住了”，指
“（因紧张、害羞而）说不出话的”。
解析: 名词+动词过去分词构成的复合形容词，非常地道。
可积累语料与生词短语
Marvellous (adj.) /ˈmɑːvələs/
词意: 不可思议的；极好的
近义词: wonderful, fantastic, extraordinary, tremendous
反义词: terrible, awful, ordinary
例句:
She had the most marvellous feeling when she sang.
It was a marvellous performance that moved everyone.
Rehearsal (n.) /rɪˈhɜːrsl/
词意: 排练，彩排
近义词: practice, run-through, drill
反义词: performance, show (实际演出)
例句:
They held a final rehearsal the day before the concert.The rehearsal process helped her memorize all the lines.
Roaring (adj.) /ˈrɔːrɪŋ/
词意: 咆哮的；喧闹的；巨大的（成功）
近义词: booming, thunderous, resounding, huge (success)
反义词: modest, slight, quiet (success)
例句:
The show was a roaring success.
The roaring fire kept them warm in the winter.
Tongue-tied (adj.) /ˈtʌŋ taɪd/
词意: （因紧张、尴尬而）说不出话的，张口结舌的
近义词: speechless, inarticulate, lost for words
反义词: articulate, eloquent, fluent
例句:
She became tongue-tied whenever she had to speak in public.
The surprising question left him completely tongue-tied.
Faint (v.) /feɪnt/
词意: 昏厥，晕倒
近义词: pass out, collapse, black out
反义词: come to, revive, regain consciousness
例句:
She nearly fainted from the shock and fear on stage.
The heat in the room was so intense that he felt like he might faint.五、Possible Versions(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1
When it was her turn to sing, she seemed to get tongue-tied. The bright lights
blinded her, and the silent audience felt like a giant wall staring down at her
(环境描写) (现
. Her throat tightened, and the first note came out as a shaky whisper.
在分词短语做伴随动作)
Sweat trickled down her back under the sweater her grandfather
(无灵主语句，刻画人物紧张)
had knit. She remembered the only time she had rehearsed before, the dizziness
and the shame of running away. "What if I fail again?" she thought, her heart
pounding like a drum . The more she tried to recall the lyrics, the more
(独立主格，强化心理)
her mind went blank. A few whispers from the crowd made her freeze completely
(环境及
, and she wished she could disappear.
心理描写)
Paragraph 2
That was when she saw Basant, waving wildly at her. He was standing at the
back of the hall, grinning and pointing to his own throat as if to say,
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
"Just sing!" Then he mimed taking a deep breath, just as her family had advised .
Champa closed her eyes for a second, imagining she was back on the
(现在分词做伴随动作)
roof singing to the hills. She took a long breath, and the butterflies in her stomach
slowly settled . When she opened her eyes, she focused only on Basant’s
(衔接原文刻画心理)
encouraging face. The first words came out softly, then grew stronger . She sang
(过程描写)
for the joy it brought her—through rain and heat, to the moon and the hills . By
(衔接原文)
the end, the audience was clapping along, and Champa knew she had conquered not
just the song, but her fear, through the help from Basant and her inner
strength.
Version 1
Paragraph 1
When it was her turn to sing, she seemed to get tongue-tied. Her lips trembled,
her palms sweated, and her mind went completely blank , as if every note
(人物心理刻画，并列)
she had practised for weeks had suddenly disappeared. Facing the rows of eager
faces under the bright lights , she felt as though the whole world was
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)staring into her deepest fear. “If only I could vanish right now,” she thought, her
heart pounding so violently that she almost wished the floor would swallow
(独立主格)
her . The memory of her last failure on stage flashed back, making her knees
(结果状从)
shake uncontrollably . She lowered her eyes, clutching the
(现在分词短语做刻画心理，衔接原文)
microphone so tightly that her knuckles turned white. A long
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
silence filled the hall , and Champa felt her confidence slipping away second
(环境描写)
by second . Just as she was about to turn around and escape, something
(强化心理描写)
unexpected caught her attention.
Paragraph 2
That was when she saw Basant, waving wildly at her. His smile was as warm
as sunlight, and his hands moved as if urging her to sing just for him. In that instant,
Champa took a deep breath, remembering her family’s advice —
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
“Give the audience your widest smile, just be yourself.” Slowly, almost
trembling , she let the first note slip out. To her surprise, the note was
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
clear and steady, and each word after that seemed to flow more naturally . As
(描写转变过程)
her voice soared higher, the audience leaned forward , enchanted by her
(观众描写)
melody . Applause erupted even before she finished the last line
(过去分词短语做原因状语) (无灵主语
, echoing through the hall. At that moment, she realised it wasn’t
句) (现在分词短语做伴随动作)
perfection people wanted, but the courage to share from the heart. With a grateful
glance at Basant, she stepped down the stage, her fear replaced with pride .
(独立主格)
Version 2
Paragraph 1
When it was her turn to sing, she seemed to get tongue-tied. The microphone
felt heavier than a mountain in her hand, and her throat tightened as
(心理描写)
though it had been locked. The longer the silence lasted, the louder the whispers
from the audience became . “What if they laugh at me? What if I make a
(环境描写刻画氛围)
fool of myself?” She recalled her friend’s repeated encouragement—“If they
(衔接原文)
laugh, it just makes them silly and mean.You are an amazing singer” Yet the
thought of so many eyes fixed on her froze her completely. Her sweater, lovingly
knitted by her grandfather , felt like a comforting hug, but even that
(过去分词短语做后置定语)failed to calm her shaking body . Seconds stretched into eternity .
(进一步刻画心理) (无灵主语句)
She was about to lower the microphone, convincing herself she could
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
never do it, when a familiar figure in the crowd came into view .
(承上启下)
Paragraph 2
That was when she saw Basant, waving wildly at her. His energy swept across
the hall like a breeze clearing away dark clouds . Meeting his
(现在分词短语做结果状语)
eyes , she felt an unexpected surge of courage. “I’ve practised long
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
enough. I owe it to myself to try.” Gathering her strength , she
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
started with a trembling note, but gradually her confidence grew . The melody
(过程变化)
flowed, soft at first, then strong, filling every corner of the hall . To
(现在分词短语做结果状语)
her astonishment, silence fell —not of mockery but of admiration. When the
(无灵主语句)
final note lingered in the air, thunderous applause broke out . Champa’s face
(环境描写)
glowed with joy, her earlier butterflies replaced by soaring freedom
(独立主格刻画人物心理的变
. In that moment, she understood: courage, once found , could
化) (过去分词短语做后置定语)
transform fear into the most marvellous feeling in the world.
Version 3
Paragraph 1
When it was her turn to sing, she seemed to get tongue-tied. The dazzling stage
lights blinded her for a second, and her breath came in short gasps. It felt as
though the butterflies in her stomach had turned into a storm . The audience
(心理描写)
waited expectantly, yet the only sound was the frantic beating of her heart
(强化人物心
. “This is just like last time,” she thought in despair, recalling how
理) (现在分词短语做伴随动作)
she had almost fainted. If she failed again, all her practice would mean nothing.
Tears threatened to well up in her eyes. She bit her lip hard, wishing
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desperately for a reason to stay instead of running away. Then, as if in answer to her
silent plea , she caught sight of something familiar in the crowd.
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That was when she saw Basant, waving wildly at her. His playful grin
reminded her of the times she had sung freely to the hills and to the moon, whenno one judged and no one mocked. With renewed determination, she straightened
her back. “Sing as if you are on the rooftop,” she told herself. Closing her eyes , she
let the song pour out like a stream finding its way downhill —hesitant
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at first, then unstoppable. By the time she opened her eyes again, the hall was filled
with captivated faces and shining eyes. The applause that followed shook her to
the core, but this time it was joy, not fear, that overwhelmed her . She
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stepped down, realising she had not only sung to the audience but also to her own
brave heart.
地道搭配
get tongue-tied → 紧张得说不出话
be filled with butterflies → 紧张不安
burst into applause / thunderous applause → 爆发出掌声
take a deep breath → 深吸一口气
clutch the microphone → 紧紧抓住麦克风
同义/替换词
afraid → terrified / horrified / panic-stricken
happy → delighted / thrilled / overjoyed
support → encouragement / backing / reassurance
practise → rehearse / train / polish
情绪描写亮点词
lips trembled / knees shook / palms sweated / heart pounded
butterflies in stomach → nervousnesseyes glowed / face lit up → joy, courage
动作描写亮点词
lean forward in silence → 全神贯注
wave wildly → 热烈挥手
tighten one’s grip → 紧握
straighten one’s back → 挺直身体，重拾信心
积累语料升级替换
I was very nervous. → My stomach twisted into knots, and my hands grew
clammy.
She was encouraged. → His smile sent a ripple of courage through her.
She began to sing. → A hesitant note slipped from her lips, unfolding into a
confident melody.
例句：
Her knees knocked together as if they had lost all strength.
The silence in the hall pressed down like an invisible weight.
With every word she sang, a layer of fear melted away.
The applause rolled over her like a wave, lifting her higher than she had ever
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Possible version:
When it was her turn to sing, she seemed to get tongue-tied . The bright stage
lights blinded her for a moment, and the sea of faces in the audience kept her heart
pounding . Her palms grew sweaty , and the lyrics she had practiced so
(环境描描写) (无灵主语句)
hard suddenly slipped her mind. An awkward silence filled the hall as she
(无灵主语句)
stood frozen, her throat tight with fear . Whispers rippling through
(独立主格刻画人物情绪)
the crowd , Champa felt her cheeks burning with embarrassment . She
(独立主格) (情绪心理描写)
clenched her fists, willing herself to remember the melody —but
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only her heartbeat answered .She was at a loss what to do next.
(心理描写)
That was when she sawBasant, waving wildly at her. His encouraging smile and
exaggerated thumbs-up were like a lifeline. Taking a deep breath ,
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Champa closed her eyes and imagined singing alone on the roof. Slowly, the
familiar tune returned to her. She started softly, then her voice grew louder, clearer
and stronger , filling the auditorium . The audience fell silent,
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then burst into applause when she finished the last tune. Basant jumped to his
(环境描写)
feet, cheering the loudest . At that moment, Champa realized that
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singing wasn’t about perfection—it was about sharing the love for music.
