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高考英语作文素材:28个仿写句,续写不愁
1. On/Upon hearing the news, we jumped with joy.
一听到这个消息，我们就高兴地跳了起来。（亮点点拨：On/Upon + doing结构，表示“一……就……”，开头干净利落。）
2. Reading his kind words, I breathed a sigh of relief.
读着他善意的话语，我松了一口气。（亮点点拨：现在分词短语Reading...作状语，结构紧凑。）
3. With these words, Bob left, excited and shocked.
说完这些话，鲍勃离开了，既兴奋又震惊。（亮点点拨：With these words承接上文；excited and shocked作伴随状语。）
4. When hearing what he said, I was frightened out of breath, thinking he was a really bad guy.
听到他的话，我吓得喘不过气来，觉得他是个真正的坏人。（亮点点拨：When hearing省略主语和be动词；thinking...补充心理活动。）
5. A sense of excitement controlled my body.
一股兴奋感控制了我的全身。（亮点点拨：抽象名词作主语 + 拟人动词controlled，情绪描写更高级。）
6. I was so frightened that I couldn’t move my legs.
我吓得双腿都无法动弹。（亮点点拨：so...that...结果状语从句强化程度；身体反应表现恐惧。）
7. What a wonderful and instructive experience it was!
这是一次多么精彩而富有教益的经历啊！（亮点点拨：What引导感叹句，适合结尾升华经历与收获。）
8. Not only did it let me feel my father’s love, but also it taught me a valuable lesson — Honesty makes a great difference.
它不仅让我感受到了父爱，还教会了我宝贵的一课——诚实至关重要。（亮点点拨：Not only置于句首引起倒装；破折号后点明主题。）
9. It was love and help that made our life more meaningful and colourful.
正是爱与帮助让我们的生活变得更加有意义和丰富多彩。（亮点点拨：It was...that...强调句突出主题词love and help。）
10. Now, wherever and whenever I see people in trouble, I’m ready to offer my help.
现在，无论何时何地我看到有人遇到困难，我都乐于伸出援手。（亮点点拨：wherever and whenever引导让步状语从句，体现成长。）
11. Standing still at the desk, Ms Yang felt moved by what she read, tears rolling down her cheeks.
杨老师静静地站在书桌前，被她所读的内容感动，泪水滚落脸颊。（亮点点拨：Standing...作伴随状语；tears rolling...为独立主格细节。）
12. Faced with the difficulty, he didn’t lose heart, full of confidence.
面对困难，他没有灰心，充满了信心。（亮点点拨：Faced with...过去分词短语作状语；full of confidence补充状态。）
13. The journey that he took was tough, but the memories made it worthwhile.
他经历的旅程是艰辛的，但那些记忆让它变得值得。（亮点点拨：that引导定语从句；but转折后点出经历意义。）
14. But for his patient and kind help, I couldn’t have made such rapid progress.
要不是他耐心而友善的帮助，我不可能取得如此快速的进步。（亮点点拨：But for...表示含蓄虚拟条件；couldn’t have done突出帮助。）
15. Inspired and moved, he set about his plan with his friends.
受到鼓舞和感动，他和朋友们着手实施他的计划。（亮点点拨：Inspired and moved作状语；set about sth.表示“着手做某事”。）
16. A great sense of relief flooded over him.
他深感宽慰。（亮点点拨：抽象情绪作主语，flooded作拟人化动词，避免平铺直叙。）
17. She told me sadly, with tears building up in her eyes.
她伤心地告诉我，眼中盈满了泪水。（亮点点拨：with + 名词 + doing构成伴随结构；细节表现悲伤。）
18. Too many terrible thoughts suddenly struck me.
太多可怕的想法突然涌上我的心头。（亮点点拨：thoughts作主语，struck作动词，化抽象心理为具体冲击。）
19. Never had Emily met such warm-hearted strangers before.
Emily 以前从未遇到过这么热心的陌生人。（亮点点拨：倒装句。）
20. I went on the stage with my legs trembling, blank in mind, completely forgetting what I was going to say.
我双腿发抖地走上舞台，大脑一片空白，完全忘了要说什么。（亮点点拨：with my legs trembling写身体反应；blank in mind写紧张。）
21. Standing at the door, he was waiting for the interview, excited but worried, sweat rolling down his forehead.
他站在门口等待面试，既兴奋又担忧，汗水从额头滑落。（亮点点拨：Standing...作伴随状语；excited but worried写矛盾情绪。）
22. Not only did it broaden my horizons, but also it taught me a valuable lesson—attitude is altitude.
它不仅开阔了我的视野，还教会了我宝贵的一课——态度决定高度。（亮点点拨：Not only置于句首使用倒装；broaden my horizons点明收获。）
23. Before I could say thanks, the man drove his car, hurriedly disappearing in the distance.
我还没来得及道谢，那人就开车匆匆消失在远处。（亮点点拨：Before I could...表示“还没来得及……”；disappearing...作伴随状语。）
24. So ashamed was I that I dared not look into his eyes.
我如此羞愧，以至于不敢直视他的眼睛。（亮点点拨：So + 形容词置于句首引起倒装；动作表现羞愧。）
25. Holding the present tightly, I stood by the table, a stream of warmth spreading through my body.
我紧紧握着礼物，站在桌边，一股暖流传遍全身。（亮点点拨：Holding...作伴随状语；独立主格表达感动与温暖。）
26. It was selflessness and care that made our society warmer and more harmonious.
正是无私与关爱让我们的社会变得更加温暖和谐。（亮点点拨：It was...that...强调句突出selflessness and care。）
27. The sound of applause filled the room.
掌声充满了整个房间。（亮点点拨：无灵主语The sound of applause搭配filled，烘托成功氛围。）
28. With the task finished, he went home, tired and hungry.
任务完成后，他回家了，又累又饿。（亮点点拨：with + 名词 + 过去分词的复合结构；tired and hungry作伴随状语。）
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