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7月25日大作文原题：

People these days prefer to watch films and TV programmes alone rather than with other people. Why is that? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

题目解读

话题分类：这道题属于“媒体类”（Media）与“科技与社会”（Technology & Society）的交叉话题，并且是一个近期的高频考题。

Why：

R: tech

E: tv to smartphone

Negative

R: fragmenting society

E: no common experiences

高分范文

The situation surrounding the decline in communal watching of TV and movies is a worthy topic of discussion. The primary reason for this trend is technological advancement, and I believe this development is detrimentalto our culture.

译文：电视与电影的集体观看行为日渐减少，这一现象值得探讨。造成这一趋势的主要原因是技术进步，而我认为这一发展对我们的文化有害无益。

When movies were projected onto a screen and the television in a family’s living room was the only means of watching TV shows, people had no choice but to sit together in a theater or gather around a TV, communally experiencing the show. However, as the means of delivering TV and movies to consumers diversified, through a combination of VCR and satellite broadcasting, people no longer had to watch TV programs at the same time as they aired and theaters were not the only place to watch films. In the more recent past, the emergence of online streaming platforms such as Netflix and the affordability of smartphones have further enabled the solitary viewing experience.

译文：过去，电影需要在银幕上放映，家庭客厅的电视是观看剧集的唯一途径，人们只能坐在影院里、或是围聚在电视机前，共同观赏节目。然而，随着电视与电影向受众的传播渠道日趋多元，录像机与卫星电视相继出现，人们不必再在节目播出时段准时收看，影院也不再是观影的唯一场所。近些年，网飞等在线流媒体平台的兴起，加上智能手机的普及可负担，进一步催生了单人观影的模式。

Turning to the impact of this new media consumption landscape, I would argue that the inconvenience created by the older technologies had an unintended benefit that is now sadly gone. The ritual of gathering around the family TV set or going to the local movie theater with friends created not only social bonding opportunities, but also a shared culture among the population. Now that each person watches TV and movies in isolation, the communal experience is gone. Gone is the possibility of striking up a casual conversation with a fellow passenger on the bus about the movie that premiered last week, because chances are, no two people on the bus know about the same movie. Consequently, the community has become more like a large number of individuals, each person living inside their own bubble.

译文：谈到这种新型媒体消费格局带来的影响，我认为旧技术带来的不便曾产生过一种意外的益处，可惜如今已经消失。一家人围坐看电视、或是和朋友去当地影院观影的固定仪式，不仅创造了社交联结的机会，也在大众中形成了共享文化。如今每个人都独自观影追剧，集体体验便不复存在。在公交车上和同乘的乘客随口聊聊上周首映的电影，这种情形也不再可能 —— 因为车上的两个人大概率看过的电影完全不同。最终，社群变得如同一个个分散的个体，每个人都活在自己的信息茧房里。

In summary, our viewing habits are a reflection of the state of technological development, and as the devices for entertainment became small enough for people to carry, our culture has also shrunk to alienate people from one another.

译文：总而言之，我们的观影习惯是技术发展水平的体现；当娱乐设备小巧到可以随身携带，我们的文化也随之萎缩，人与人之间也愈发疏远。

评分标准角度分析

Task Response（题目回应）：文章完整回应了两个问题：“为什么发生”和“是否积极”，并给出了清晰的立场（认为是消极发展），结构完整，观点鲜明。主体段充分展开了原因（技术进步、观看方式多样化）和影响（失去社交体验、文化碎片化），论证充分且有具体例子（如Netflix、智能手机）支撑，没有跑题或泛泛而谈。

Coherence & Cohesion（连贯与衔接）：段落层次清晰：首段立论，第二段讲原因，第三段讲影响，末段总结，逻辑推进自然，每段有明确的中心句，读者能轻松跟上思路。使用了恰当的衔接词（如However, Turning to the impact..., Consequently），句子之间的因果关系和转折关系处理得当，使文章整体流畅而不生硬。

Grammatical Range & Accuracy（语法范围与准确性）：句式结构多样，包括复合句（如as the means... diversified）、倒装结构（如 Gone is the possibility...）、定语从句等，句型变化丰富，不局限于简单句。整篇文章语法错误极少，时态使用准确（一般过去时讲过去，现在时讲现状），标点和主谓一致处理到位，显示了扎实的语法基础。

Lexical Resource（词汇资源）：用词精准且丰富，如solitary viewing experience、media consumption landscape、communal experience、alienate 等，展现了良好的词汇量和搭配能力。能够灵活运用同义替换（如collectively / communally / together 表达“共同”，isolated / solitary / alone 表达“独自”），避免重复，体现了较高的语言驾驭能力。

*本篇范文来自学为贵写作讲师黄德宝，请勿盗用

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