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14 日记类
(2012年，上海卷）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according
to the instructions given below in Chinese.
上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你
用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括：
1.对两堂绘画课的具体描述；
2.你从中获得的启发。
【参考答案】
Date: June 8, 2012
Last week, I sat in on two painting classes at a primary school. In one class a student dipped
her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints. By contrast, the same student used a brush to
make a breath-taking landscape painting—so vivid that one could almost smell the refreshing
rivers and hear the chirping birds.
Though standing in stark contrast, the two paintings both intrigued me. In fact, they reminded
me of what Facebook founder Mark Zuckerberg said, “Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet
on the ground.” It’s this maxim on success that lends insight into the two paintings. The first
painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with
temporary success. A kite stays afloat because it’s attached to a reel; otherwise it will instantly lose
its balance before eventually crashing into the ground. So it is with us.
However, success requires more than being simply down-to-earth, with a lofty ideal being
another crucial factor. So grand was the scenery portrayed in the second painting that it embodiedthe reach of our dreams. Instead of ignoring the gleam of light, the spark of wisdom that flashes
across our mind and worshipping the luster of the sky of geniuses, we’d be better off trusting that
the gleam and the spark will one day shine as brightly as a search light if we have faith in
ourselves.
The paintings taught me to dream big and act small. And I believe, by doing so, the warm
light of success will cascade into my life.
【范文点评】
这是一篇看图写话，体裁是日记的形式。内含两个要点：介绍对两堂绘画课的具体描
述和你从中获得的启发。文章要紧紧围绕这两个要点展开。各个要点表达要清晰，要点要
根据图的内容进行具体描述。然后谈谈自己的启发。层次要分明，衔接要自然。需要考生
自己做合理的联想，启发要有新意，内容要符合图的逻辑。
日记分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。建议大家在学习写日记的过程中，可按
以下步骤进行：
①将一天所经历的主要事情和过程依次简要地记下来，不附加任何感情色彩，这是最
简单的记日记的方法;
②阅读别人的日记，并利用所学过的句型来表达个人在一天中观察到的或感受到的事
情。
例如：
March 12th，20xx，Tuesday Sunny (Fine)
Today is Tree Planting Day. At 7∶30 in the morning，all the students in our class
met at the school gate. We walked to the park. Miss Gao and other teachers went and
worked with us. All the students worked very hard，and we planted about 200 trees.
Though we were dirty and tired，we still felt very happy.模板①
March 12th, 2020, Tuesday Sunny (fine)
Ｍy parents are teachers, so they want me to read more books. ＷhenＩstarted to
learn reading, they bought me a lot of novel books, such as Ｈarry Ｐotter, ＡliceＩn
the Ｗonderland and so on.Ｉsaw the movie first, and thenＩwould have the interest to
read the novels.Ｉfound that the novel were with much more details andＩwas absorbed
in it. Ｔhe literary books not only described an attractive world, but the more important
thing was that it enlightened me to be a better girl. What learned from these novels helps
me to be independent andＩhave my own thinking.
模板②
December,10,Sunday Fine
This afternoon I went to the park with Wang Neng, where there was a pond. We
saw several boys skating there. Suddenly we heard a cry for help. One of the boys had
fallen into the water. Wang Neng jumped into the icy water immediately and managed to
pull the boy to safety. Then the boy was given first aid and soon came to himself. The
boy’s parents came soon after they received the phone call. They were very thankful to
Wang Neng, who was trembling with cold.
日记是每日生活的记载，是一种记事文体。
一、基本要求
1. 注意日期、星期和天气的书写位置
英语日记日期和星期要写在正文的左上角，其顺序多是“星期 + 月、日、年”（也
有把星期放在后面的），如“ 20XX 年 11 月 22 日，星期一”可写为“ Ｍonday Ｎ
ovember 22， 20XX 或 Ｎovember 22， 20XX Ｍonday ”。天气情况应写在正文的右上角，如： Ｆine， Ｒainy， Ｃloudy， Ｗindy 等。
2. 关于题目的书写
在日期和天气的下一行中间可以写上日记小题目，也可以不写题目。
3. 关于正文的书写
正文是关于一天生活的记载，也是日记的主习题。在书写正文时要做到：
1 ）要选择当天感受最深刻、最有意义的事件来描述，不要写成简单的流水帐；
2 ）日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用第一人称来写；
3 ）日记多是在当天晚上来记述当天发生过的事情，因为动词时态常使用过去时，但
使用时必须灵敏掌握并且要简明扼要，层次清楚，写出真实感。
二、主要格式
英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见
所闻、所做或所想的事情。中、英文的日记三格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是专门写日
记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情
况，如：Ｓunny, Ｆine, Ｒainy, Ｗindy, Ｓnowy, Ｃloudy等。
1.日期表达有多种形式
英语日记年、月、日都写时，通常以月、日、年为顺序，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗
号隔开。例如： December 18, 2019 或者 Ｄec. 18, 2019
2.星期的特殊性
星期也可以省略不写，可将其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之间不用标点，但要空一
格，星期也可缩写。如：
Saturday, October 22nd, 2019；October 22nd, 2019 Saturday
3.天气情况必不可少
天气一般用一个形容词如 :Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Snowy 等表示。写在日期之后，用逗
号隔开，位于日记的右上角。如：
Saturday, Ｍarch 4, 2020, Windy；1st January, 2019, Fine
三、日记的类型和训练
日记分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。建议大家在学习写日记的过程中，可按
以下步骤进行：
①将一天所经历的主要事情和过程依次简要地记下来，不附加任何感情色彩，这是最
简单的记日记的方法；②阅读别人的日记，并利用所学过的句型来表达个人在一天中观察到的或感受到的事
情。
1．每年3月是植树活动月，假定你是李华，你们班开展了一次植树活动，请你根据以下要
点，写一篇日记，叙述记录这次植树活动，并在英语课上向同学们展示。
1．活动目的：亲近自然，美化环境；
2．具体活动过程；
3．活动感受。
注意：1．词数80 左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假定你是李华，你正在英国某高中参加你们学校的“交换生”项目，请你用英语写一篇
日记，叙述你在新学校第一周的学习生活。内容包括：
1.学校印象;
2.同学印象;
3.个人感受。
注意：1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
September 12th，Saturday Sunny
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3．假定你是高一学生李华，高中生活已经过了一周，一切都很新鲜。在此，你写下一篇日
记，记下了你对高中新生活的感受，并制订计划调整自己。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．日记的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Wednesday Sept.7 Sunny
Now, my high school life has been on for a week. High school life gave me the feeling that
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I think I will adapt myself to the high school life as soon as possible.
4．假如你是李华，今天你参加了班级春游活动。请你写一篇英文日记。
内容包括：1. 活动时间、地点、参加人员；
2. 活动过程；
3. 活动意义。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
An Unforgettable Spring Outing
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5．假定你是李华，本周你校开展了“记录美好生活”系列活动。请你用英语写一篇日记，
记录你本周的美好生活。内容包括：
1. 你的生活情况；
2. 谈谈你的感受。注意：1、日记的格式已给出；
2、写作词数应为80左右；
3、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Saturday January 16th, 2022 Sunny
Dear Diary,
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6．假定你是李华，进入高中后，你加入了羽毛球俱乐部。请你以日记的形式记录，向校英
文报投稿。内容包括：
1.参加的原因；
2.安排或活动；
3.收获及感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thursday l5 December
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7．假定你是李华，昨天你和你的美国朋友Mary一起去市图书馆参加高中生如何交友的讲
座。请你据此写一篇英文日记。
要点：1.时间、地点；
2.讲座内容；
3.参加讲座收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dec. 6, 2021
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8．今天下午，你校手工俱乐部（handcraft club）邀请民间艺人来校给你们传授了灯笼制作
技术。请你写一篇英语日记，内容包括：
1.活动过程；
2.你的感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：lanternmaking activity
May 15 Sunday Sunny
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9．你是校陶艺社团（pottery club）的成员李华，参加了10月18日（周二）的社团活动，请写一篇日记，内容包括：
1.活动时间、地点；
2.活动内容；
3.活动感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；
3.开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Tuesday 18 October
Today is our pottery day.
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10．假定你是李华，上周日你和班里同学游览参观了长城。请你用英语写一篇日记，内容
要点包括：1.游览心情；2.具体见闻；3.事后感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
My weekend
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11．假如你是李华，一周前参加了夏令营活动，结识了安静、喜欢读书的Lily和外向、幽
默的Rose两位室友，并成为好友，在一起愉快地度过了一周的时光。请你用英语写一篇日
记，描述这一周的夏令营生活。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：卧室bedchamber
Friday, 16 August, 2019 hot
How time flies!
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12．今天下午，你校手工俱乐部(handcraft club)邀请民间艺人来校给你们传授了灯笼制作技
术。请你写一篇英语日记，内容包括：
1．活动过程；
2．你的感受。
注意：
1．写作词数应为100左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
May 15 Sunday Sunny
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13．假定你是李华，寒假期间，你参加了WWF举办的为期一周的野生动物保护冬令营。
请你写一篇日记分享这段有意义的经历。1.活动的时间、地点及内容；
2.你对野生动物保护的看法和感悟。
注意：短文词数80字左右。
参考词汇：冬令营：winter camp
Sunday, 8 January, Sunny
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14．今天下午，你班在学校操场上组织了一次制作并放风筝的室外班会，请你根据以下要
点用英语写一篇日记，记录本次活动经历。
写作要点：
1.你对风筝的喜爱；
2.描述放风筝的过程；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.短文词数不少于100词。
2.开头部分已写好，不计入总数。
3.文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
March 3, 2022 Monday Sunny
In China, there is a long history to fly a kite in the spring while usually the weather and wind
are so suitable for this leisure.
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参考答案
1．
March 12 SunnyToday our class held a tree planting activity which aimed to get close to nature and beautify
the environment.
In the morning, we took a bus to Western Hill which is 5 kilometers away from our school.
On arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and
planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a board
reminding people to protect the trees. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.
Before leaving we took some photos to record our action.
Through this activity, we learned that it was our duty to protect the environment.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“班级开展了一次植树活动”一事，
写一篇日记，叙述记录这次植树活动，并在英语课上向同学们展示。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
举办：hold→conduct
立即：immediately→in no time
挖掘：dig→unearth
责任：duty→responsibility
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.
拓展句：When we saw the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Today our class held a tree planting activity which aimed to get close to nature
and beautify the environment. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Through this activity, we learned that it was our duty to protect the environment.
(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2．September 12th, Saturday Sunny
One week has passed since I came to this school as an exchange student.
It is the first time that I have been away from my parents alone, so I felt homesick.However, I
soon got used to the new environment.To begin with, the campus is quite different from my school
at home.It lies at the foot of a mountain where there is natural scenery all around.As for my
classmates, they are so friendly that they make me less homesick.I think I’ll spend this period of studying here happily and I can surely benefit much from my
stay here.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇日记，叙述自己在新学校
第一周的学习生活。内容包括:你对新学校、同学的印象个人的感受。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
到达；come to→get to/arrive at
然而； however →nevertheless
首先；to begin with→first of all
受益； benefit→be of beneficial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: To begin with, the campus is quite different from my school at home.
拓展句: To begin with,what impresses me is that the campus is quite different from my school at
home.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】 It lies at the foot of a mountain where there is natural scenery all around. (运用
了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I think I’ll spend this period of studying here happily and I can surely benefit
much from my stay here.(运用了省略that的宾语从句）
3．One possible version：
Wednesday Sept.7 Sunny
Now, my high school life has been on for a week. High school life gave me the feeling that
there was very much free time.
Firstly, I make a plan every day, and follow it strictly. Before going to bed at night, I will
check whether I have finished it. If not, I’ll give myself a little punishment, such as playing less
computer games on the weekend. Secondly, I’ll prepare the second day course after finishing my
homework.
In a word, I will often summarize my learning to find problems a period later. And if I do it
well, I will reward myself.I think I will adapt myself to the high school life as soon as possible.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。 假定你是高一学生李华，高中生活已经过了一周，
一切都很新鲜。在此，你写下一篇日记，记下了你对高中新生活的感受，并制订计划调整
自己。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
遵循：follow→ adhere to
首先：Firstly→ First of all
完成：finish→ complete
总之：In a word→ In short
2.句式拓展
简单句变复杂句
原句：Firstly, I make a plan every day, and follow it strictly.
拓展句：Firstly, I make a plan every day, which I need to follow strictly.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Before going to bed at night, I will check whether I have finished it.（运用了
whether连接的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】And if I do it well, I will reward myself.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
4．参考范文
An Unforgettable Spring Outing
Today, I participated in our class spring outing at the nearby park. Our entire class was
present, including our teachers and some parents who accompanied us.
During the outing, we engaged in many activities such as playing games, singing, dancing,
and taking pictures. We also had a lovely picnic with some delicious food and drinks. It was a fun-
filled day, and everyone had a great time.
Apart from the enjoyment and relaxation, this outing was also essential as it helped us bond
and create stronger relationships with our classmates and teachers. Additionally, it provided an
opportunity for us to appreciate nature, which is not only helpful but also crucial to our personal
development and mental wellbeing.
Overall, the outing was a success, and I’m grateful to have been part of it. I look forward to
more fun-filled activities in the future.【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是李华，今天你参加了班级春游活动。请
你写一篇英文日记。内容包括：1.活动时间、地点、参加人员；2. 活动过程；3.活动意义。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→ engage oneself in
许多：many→ various
美味的：delicious→ flavorful
有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：We also had a lovely picnic with some delicious food and drinks.
拓展句：A lovely picnic with some delicious food and drinks was also enjoyed by us.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Our entire class was present, including our teachers and some parents who
accompanied us.（现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】Additionally, it provided an opportunity for us to appreciate nature, which is not
only helpful but also crucial to our personal development and mental wellbeing.（非限制性定语
从句）
5．Saturday January 16th, 2022 Sunny
Dear Diary,
Recently, I participated in the activity of recording your beautiful life held by my school. And
through it, I learn to appreciate the beauty lying in everyday life.
This week, I was busy with my preparations for the final exams. To achieve ideal grades, I
not only made a practical review plan but also followed it without any delay. Besides, I got much
encouragement from both my teachers and parents, which helped me build confidence to face the
challenges. Last but not least, my best friend phoned me to arrange a winter holiday trip together.
All these beautiful moments make me feel delighted to move for the day ahead.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，本周你校开展了“记录美好生
活”系列活动。请你用英语写一篇日记，记录你本周的美好生活。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累欣赏：appreciate→admire
参加：participate in→take part in
高兴的：delighted→glad
此外：besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To achieve ideal grades, I not only made a practical review plan but also followed it
without any delay.
拓展句：I not only made a practical review plan but also followed it without any delay so that I
can achieve ideal grades.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] To achieve ideal grades, I not only made a practical review plan but also followed it
without any delay. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] Besides, I got much encouragement from both my teachers and parents, which
helped me build confidence to face the challenges. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．Thursday l5 December
Sports play an important part in our daily life. After entering high school, I joined the
badminton club.
My passion for badminton was from Yu Yang. It was her graceful moves and jumps that
motivated me into badminton. In the club, I play badminton with my teammates three times a
week, and sometimes I join in a badminton match.
It is a great sport, which makes me meet lots of new people and enjoy myself at the same
time! Badminton is not only fun but also good for my health.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校英文报投稿，介绍自己加入羽毛球
俱乐部的初衷、体验和感受。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
激励：motivate→inspire
参加：join in→take part in
比赛：match→competition
有趣的：fun→interesting2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Sports play an important part in our daily life.
拓展句：There is no doubt that sports play an important part in our daily life.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】It was her graceful moves and jumps that motivated me into badminton. (运用了
强调句型结构)
【高分句型2】It is a great sport, which makes me meet lots of new people and enjoy myself at
the same time! (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．Dec. 6, 2021
My American friend Mary and I attended a lecture held in our city library yesterday. It was
aimed at how senior high students could make friends and what mattered most to maintain a firm
friendship.
An experienced professor gave the lecture. His talk was informative, humorous and
interesting, attracting hundreds of students plus parents. To our satisfaction, he replied to our
questions patiently and clearly. So absorbed in the lecture were we that we were unwilling to wave
him goodbye.
From this lecture we figured out some practical approaches to making close friends.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英语短文介绍自己和美国朋友
Mary去市图书馆参加高中生如何交友的讲座，内容包括时间、地点、内容和参加讲座的收
获。
【写作分析】
1. 词汇积累
参加：attend→present/ take part in
涨知识的：informative→intellectual
方法：approach→method
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：My American friend Mary and I attended a lecture held in our city library yesterday. It was
aimed at how senior high students could make friends and what mattered most to maintain a firm
friendship.拓展句：My American friend Mary and I attended a lecture held in our city library yesterday,
which was aimed at how senior high students could make friends and what mattered most to
maintain a firm friendship.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】 His talk was informative, humorous and interesting, attracting hundreds of
students plus parents.（使用了现在分词作结果状语）
【高分句型2】 So absorbed in the lecture were we that we were unwilling to wave him
goodbye.（运用了so＋adj.+that引导的结果状语从句和部分倒装）
8．May 15 SundaySunny
This afternoon, our handcraft club held a lanternmaking activity, where a famous folk artist
was invited to teach us how to make lanterns by hand. He first told us the history and origin of
lanterns, and the various materials forming them. After that, he showed us the basic steps and
skills of lantern-making.Then came the time for us to have a try. Under the guidance of the artist,
all of us finished our works successfully.
Through this activity, not only have I improved my handcraft skills, but I have also deepened
my understanding of the symbolic meanings of lanterns. I’ve come to realize why Shuey Rhon
Rhon lantern figure is so popular worldwide.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇日记，记录学校手工俱乐部邀请
民间艺人来校给你们传授了灯笼制作技术；内容包括：活动过程以及个人感受。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
举办：hold→ host
各种各样的：various → a variety of
展示：show→ display
提升：improve→ prompt/advance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：He first told us the history and origin of lanterns, and the various materials forming them.
拓展句：He first told us the history and origin of lanterns, and the various materials forming
them, which are greatly amazing.
【典型句式】【高分句型1】This afternoon, our handcraft club held a lantern-making activity, where a famous
folk artist was invited to teach us how to make lanterns by hand. （运用了where引导的非限制
性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Through this activity, not only have I improved my handcraft skills, but I have
also deepened my understanding of the symbolic meanings of lanterns. （运用了not only…but
also…连接句子时，not only位于句首，该部分用部分倒装）
9．Tuesday 18 October
Today is our pottery day. We had the honor to participate in the pottery club activity held in
the Activity Center this afternoon.
As scheduled, the activity started with the excellent presentation made by our instructor Mr.
Wang, who designed the task for this session. We all observed carefully how a mass of clay was
transformed fantastically into a vivid artwork. He also encouraged us to make one of the twelve
animal signs. Thanks to the teacher’s help, we accomplished our own work, with which we had
photos taken together proudly.
Through the activity, we knew more about Chinese pottery and what it took to make a
craftsman.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生写一篇日记，记录10月18日（周二）
的陶艺社团活动情况。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
举办、组织：hold→organize
鼓励：encourage→inspire
帮助：help→assistance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We had the honor to participate in the pottery club activity held in the Activity Center this
afternoon.
拓展句：We had the honor to participate in the pottery club activity which was held in the
Activity Center this afternoon.
【典型句式】【高分句型1】As scheduled, the activity started with the excellent presentation made by our
instructor Mr. Wang, who designed the task for this session. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语
从句)
【高分句型2】Thanks to the teacher’s help, we accomplished our own work, with which we had
photos taken together proudly. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10．
Last Sunday, I went to visit the Great Wall with my classmates. It was a sunny day, which
brought us good moods. Beyond our imagination, there were a large number of visitors from home
and abroad. No wonder that it is well known worldwide. Climbing up the Great Wall and seeing
how splendid the scenery is , we couldn’t help taking photos around. What make us excited then
was completing the Hero Slope. Standing on the slope, I felt myself to be a real man then.
That day I walked too much. Tired as I was, I was feeling happy. I was rewarded and taught a
lot. If there were another chance one day, how I wish I could pay a visit to the great man-made
wonder a second time.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在游览参观了长城后，用英语写一篇日
记。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
参观，游览：visit → pay a visit to
众所周知的，出名的：well known → famous
疲倦的：tired → exhausted
高兴的：happy→ pleased
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Last Sunday, I went to visit the Great Wall with my classmates.
拓展句：It was Last Sunday that I went to visit the Great Wall with my classmates.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] It was a sunny day, which brought us good moods. (运用了which引导非限制性定
语从句)
[高分句型2] No wonder that it is well known worldwide.(运用了that引导同位语从句)
11．佳作展示Friday, 16 August, 2019
hot
How time flies! A week has passed. Thinking back to the things that happened during the last
week, I found the life here full of happiness and joy.
I can still remember the first day of the summer camp. I came to my bedchamber by myself.
When I opened the door, I saw a girl with short hair sitting in a chair with a book in her hands. She
must be a quiet girl who liked reading, I thought to myself at the time. Her name was Lily. As
soon as we said hello to each other, another girl came in. Her name was Rose. She was so
outgoing and humorous that both Lily and I couldn’t help laughing. Then we studied and had
meals together, and became good friends.
I can’t forget the days we spent together, and I will remember these precious moments
forever, no matter how far we will be away in the future.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于开放式作文。假如你是李华，一周前参加了夏令营活动，
结识了安静、喜欢读书的Lily和外向、幽默的Rose两位室友，并成为好友，在一起愉快地
度过了一周的时光。请你用英语写一篇日记，描述这一周的夏令营生活。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
时光流逝：pass→go by
充满：be full of→be filled with
坐着：sitting→seated
一……就……：as soon as→immediately
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I can still remember the first day of the summer camp. I came to my bedchamber by
myself.
拓展句：I can still remember the first day of the summer camp when I came to my bedchamber
by myself.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Thinking back to the things that happened during the last week, I found the life
here full of happiness and joy.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】When I opened the door, I saw a girl with short hair sitting in a chair with a bookin her hands.（运用了when引导时间状语从句，现在分词作宾语补足语，和with+宾语+宾
语补足语复合结构）
12．
May 15 Sunday
Sunny
This afternoon, our handcraft club held a lantern-making activity, where a famous folk artist
was invited to teach us how to make lanterns by hand. He first told us the history and origin of
lanterns, and the various materials forming them. After that, he showed us the basic steps and
skills of lantern making. Then came the time for us to have a try. Under the guidance of the artist,
all of us finished our works successfully.
Through this activity, not only have I improved my handcraft skills, but I have also deepened
my understanding of the symbolic meanings of lanterns. I’ve come to realize why Shuey Rhon
Rhon lantern figure is so popular worldwide.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校手工俱乐部邀请民间艺人传授灯
笼制作技术活动写一篇日记，描述活动过程和自己的感受。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
举办、发起：hold→launch
演示：show→demonstrate
完成：finish→complete
意识到：realize→be aware of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：After that, he showed us the basic steps and skills of lantern making.
拓展句：After that, he showed us the basic steps and skills we use to make lanterns.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】This afternoon, our handcraft club held a lantern-making activity, where a famous
folk artist was invited to teach us how to make lanterns by hand.（运用了where引导的非限制
性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Through this activity, not only have I improved my handcraft skills, but I have
also deepened my understanding of the symbolic meanings of lanterns. （运用了not only开头的部分倒装）
13．
I am a middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents
with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the
rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered
in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept
and mopped the floors.
At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy
and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I
was, I never felt so happy
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇日记，分享寒假期间参加WWF
举办的为期一周的野生动物保护冬令营的经历。
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
首先：Firstly →To begin with
帮助：help →aid
就在这时：At this very moment →At this time
惊讶的：surprised →amazed
2.句式拓展
句式转化
原句：I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.
拓展句：As I have been busy with my study, I seldom helped my parents with the housework.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.(运用了现在分
词作状语)
[高分句型2] Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.(运用了as引导的部分倒装句)
14．March 3,2022 Monday Sunny
In China, there is a long history to fly a kite in the spring while usually the weather and wind
are so suitable for this leisure. Since my childhood, I have been fond of flying the kite for fun,
which is my first childhood love.Our class organized a kite-flying event this afternoon. We went to the playground with the
kites made by ourselves. On arrival, we were divided into several groups and couldn’t wait to get
started. With the string in my hand and my friends holding the kite, I started to run fast and fly the
kite. Seeing kites of different shapes and colors flying higher in the sky, we shouted with joy,
jumping up and down.
It was an unforgettable and rewarding activity. Kite-flying takes skills as well as patience.
Not only did I get relaxed but also felt a sense of success from this activity. It also promoted the
friendship among us. What a wonderful time!
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于日记，要求考生用英语写一篇日记，记录你班在学校操场
上组织的一次制作并放风筝的室外班会活动。
【写作分析】
1. 词汇积累
开始：start→begin
快速地：fast→quickly
高兴：joy→delight
技巧：skill→technique
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We went to the playground with the kites made by ourselves.
拓展句：We went to the playground with the kites which had been made by ourselves.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]Since my childhood, I have been fond of flying the kite for fun, which is my first
childhood love.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Not only did I get relaxed but also felt a sense of success from this activity.(运用了
部分倒装句)
