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第 39 讲 短文改错（核心考点精讲精练）
1. 三年真题短文改错考点细目表
2. 命题规律及备考策略
错词 多词、缺词
形
非 从 非
容 谓 并 谓 情
谓 句 谓
名 冠 代 介 词 语 列 冠 代 介 语 连 态
语 引 数词 语
词 词 词 词 、 动 连 词 词 词 动 词 动
动 导 动
副 词 词 词 词
词 词 词
词
甲
2023 1 1 1 0 1 1 1 1 1 0 0 0 1 0 0 1 0
卷
年全
乙
国卷 1 0 1 0 1 2 1 1 1 0 1 0 1 0 0 0 0
卷
甲
2022 1 1 1 2 2 1 1 1
卷
年全
乙
国卷 1 1 1 1 2 1 1 1 1
卷
乙
2021 1 1 2 2 1 1 1 1
卷
年全
甲
国卷 1 2 1 2 1 1 1 1
卷
卷
2020 1 1 1 1 2 1 1 1 1
Ⅰ
年全
卷
国卷 1 1 2 1 1 2 2
Ⅱ
卷
1 1 1 2 2 1 1 1
Ⅲ
卷
2019 2 3 1 1 1 1 1
Ⅰ
年全
卷
国卷 1 4 1 1 1 1
Ⅱ
卷
1 1 1 1 1 2 1 1 1
Ⅲ【命题规律】
短文改错共10处错误，包括1个多词、1个缺词和8个错词，做完题后，可按此常规查验，根据上面
考点出现的频率，在做题时要注意以下几点。
1.动词的形态变化。
2.人称代词的一致性和关联词的正确性。
3.根据在句中的功能来确定词性(例如，名词常作主语和宾语：形容词常作定语和表语；副词常作状语)。
4.全文的时态及逻辑是否一致。
短文改错从词法、句法和语篇三个方面来考查语言综合运用能力，兼顾考查句子结构的分析能力和习
惯搭配。
词法方面：错词涉及名词、形容词/副词、动词的时态和语态、非谓语动调，介词、冠词，代词等错误；
多词、缺词涉及介词、冠词、代词、be动词、不定式符号to等。
句法方面：主要涉及连接并列句和各种从句的连接词或主谓一致。
语篇方面：上下文的一致性，如时态的一致、代词的一致以及行文逻辑的一致等。
【备考策略】
1．通读全文，掌握大意：把握好文章的“基调和要素”，如时态、语态、人称、过程、结果等。
2．整句理解，上下兼顾：以句子为单位，从语法、前后逻辑等方面对句子成分进行分析。
3．逐句分析，把握结构：动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓动词细辨别，习惯用法记心中；
句子成分多分析，逻辑错误需关注。
4．对照作答，复读全文：检查修正后的文章是否意思通畅，逻辑合理，结构完整。
【命题预测】
从近三年命题的发展趋势来看，预测2024年高考短文改错其难度、错误类型设置、文章长度通常不会
有太大变化。考查更加注重语用功能，取材范围将更广泛，并注重语言的综合应用能力。。
题型总览
一、短文改错的命题特征
1.试题的立意特征
短文改错中的错误虽然大部分都是所谓“语法”错误，但是，这种试题并不是单纯检测语法知识的，而是
检测考生写作能力中的校验能力。这种能力是进行书面表达的必备能力，写作的成效需要良好的写作程序
的支持，而在写作程序中，校验能力是不可缺少的要素。把短文改错当作语法练习是对高考中短文改错的
误解。
2.试题的情景特征
（1）语言材料通常取自学生自己的作品，或类似学生的作品；
（2）内容来自学生身边的常见话题；
（3）篇章结构的难易程度符合学生的实际水平；（4）语言明白易懂；
（5)基本上不涉及生僻的语言现象和繁难的语句结构。
3.试题的设问特征
（1）设问的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻辑。从这三个角度考查学生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的
准确性。
（2）错词情况中，涉及动词的情况最多。
（3）多词错误中，多余的主要是介词；少词错误中，主要涉及介词或冠词。
试题的这些设问特征为我们答题提供了重要的信息：
一要注意动词的形态变化；
二要看人称代词的一致性和连接词的正确性；
三要根据单词在句子中的功能来确定词性：名词(通常作主语、宾语）、形容词（表语、定语）和副词（状
语）；
四要看是否多或少了介词或冠词。
二、短文改错解题步骤
1.从语篇入手，理解文章大意
短文改错不是单句改错，每一句的语意表达、结构选择是受上下文制约的。如谓语动词时态的选择，代词
的指代功能等都要依照上下文的线索进行判断。因此，考生应立足于上下文，正确理解作者意图，把握短
文的题材，从整体上把握全文。
2.在理解大意的基础上，审查句子结构
通读全文，了解文章大意、写作方式之后，应把主要注意力放在句子层次上，判断句子的表达是否符合行
文逻辑，是否符合语法规范。从历年高考题来看，短文改错绝大多数题目还是句子层次的问题，侧重语言
的准确性，所以，对句子结构正确与否的审查是关键的一步。
3.从语法结构入手，进行语法改错
在正误判断的基础上，根据语法规则改正句子中的错误之处。改错时应注意改错设计规律，如：有一项正
确，九项错误；每一行只有一个错误；改动之处只能有一个词，或删掉或增词，或修改。
4.通读全文
错误改完之后要通读全文，以检查改错过程中是否有因上下文制约疏忽导致的误改。
三、短文改错解题技巧
1.正确理解做题要求，搞清楚改什么(改动一个单词，不是两个，也不是改标点符号），怎么改（删除、补
漏、纠错）。答卷一定要规范，各种符号不能缺少，形式和位置要正确。
2.短文改错以句为单位设置错误。
3.并非每句都有错，但若做题结果为多句无错，则说明可能有未被发现的错误，需进一步查找。
4.拼写错误考点已被取消，不要把注意力用在寻找拼错的单词上，但应注意名词的单复数形式是否有问题。
5.短文改错有别于单句改错，要重视文章的整体内容和前后照应。既要从单句入手检查语言错误，又要从
全文着眼发现行文逻辑方面的问题。注意句与句之间的关系、前后文之间的联系和统一，这样才能将在单
个句子中不易发现的错误，如连词运用不当、人称混乱、前后矛盾等问题全部找出来，进行全面改正。
6.答题时，不仅要注意语法和用词方面的错误，还要注意篇章结构方面的错误。在不少情况下，判断是否
有错误不能只看某个词语本身，甚至不能只看某个句子本身，而要弄清文章的含义及内在的逻辑关系等，
再根据上下文去判断。
7.要在弄清整篇内容的基础上，逐句寻查错误。可着重注意以下几个方面：
（1）看句子结构是否完整；
（2）看文中的习惯用法、固定搭配是否正确；（3）看上下文的逻辑是否合理；
(4）看主谓是否一致，时态是否正确，冠词、代词、连词、关系代词和关系副词、名词的数和格、介词、
形容词、副词使用是否得当。
8.短文改错题集多项语法规则和多种语言技能于一身，在约 100个词的短文中任何一处都可能出现错误。
因此，解题时要力求判断准确，不要在本来正确的地方随意改动。
9.答题时应注意先易后难，先改题中比较明显易辨的错误，剩下的错误用错误类型排比法，就比较容易解
答了。
四、突破方法
1.备考过程中，注意掌握基本的词法、句法知识；
2.做题时，应注意以下问题：
（1）在训练和考试中要严格按照体例要求和解题说明，用规定的符号改错，不要用文字去说明或用箭头
表示，更不能随意在原题中乱标。、
（2）做题原则：
四不改：
①单词拼写错误不改；
②大小写不改；
③词序错误不改（应从错词或少词方面考虑）；
④标点符号不改。
五原则：
①忠实原文原则（不改变原文的原意）；
②错误以改动最少为原则；
③虚词以添加或删除为原则；
④实词以改变形式为原则；
⑤以多改少添加或删除为原则。
题型1词法类错误
考点一谓语动词错误
1. (2022全国乙卷)I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary.
2. （2021·全国甲卷）Their answers also show that they disliking talk to others. They kept very much to
themselves.
1.（2023·四川成都·统考模拟预测） For example, you can sign up for flood insurance, check the roof, puttingaway the outdoor items and so on.
2.（2023·陕西西安·西安市大明宫中学校考一模）I was asked the lady whether she was OK and she said she felt
a few sick.
考点二 非谓语动词错误
1. (2022全国甲卷)I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my
friends too late.
2. (2022全国甲卷)Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others.
1.（2023·陕西西安·西安市大明宫中学校考一模）After hearing what I had done, my parents felt proud, say we
should give a hand to those in needs.
2.（2023·甘肃·统考三模）I always enjoy myself following the stories and communicate with the characters.
考点三 名词单复数错误
1 (2022年全国乙卷)Our city will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.
2 (2021年全国乙卷)I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals.
1.（2023·陕西宝鸡·统考二模）As soon as I arrived somewhere, I would have more than one places to stay.
2.（2023·甘肃·统考三模）Namely, those good quality in the characters will shape one into a good person than
now.
考点四 代词错误1. (2022全国乙卷) When you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon
dioxide and not causing air pollution.
2. （2021 全国甲卷）Some will turn to their parents or teachers for help. Only a few choose to deal
with the problems on our own.
1.（2023·甘肃·统考三模）I am used to reading English classics in our spare time.
考点五 冠词错误
例1 (2020年，全国卷I）Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.
例2 (2020课标全国Ⅲ卷) For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I have to
eat an apple.
（2023·四川·棠湖中学校考模拟预测） Up to now, he has become member of our family and everyone have
enjoyed his company.
考点六 介词和数词错误
1 (2022全国乙卷)Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movements and exercise.
例2 (2021全国乙卷) In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework.（2023·陕西宝鸡·统考二模）Instead of, I went backpacking.
考点七 形容词和副词错误
1 (2022年全国乙卷)We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise.
2（2021·全国甲卷）In my opinion, when in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust mostly.
（2023·甘肃·统考三模）Additionally, we will definite improve ourselves by reading English classics.
题型2句法类错误
考点一 时态和主谓一致性错误
1 (2022全国乙卷) They often run at high speeds, which may put our lives in danger. And there were
traffic jams.
例2 （2021·全国甲卷）One of the questions are：Who will you go to in times of trouble?
（2023·四川成都·统考模拟预测） It usually mean the difference between major destruction or minor wind
damage.
考点二定语从句错误例1（2022·全国卷乙卷）They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger.
例2 (2020 课标全国II卷)Thank you for the letter, what really made me happy.
1.（2023·甘肃·统考三模）Also, it broadens our horizons as it like traveling through time and space, where is a
good way to learn more about the world.
2.（2023·四川·模拟预测）I gave out all my rest time including summer and winter vacation with all weekends,
that was highly odd and extreme in other’s eyes.
考点三、状语从句和名词性从句错误
例1 (2022全国乙卷)Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol.
例2 (2021全国甲卷) In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust most.
1.（2023·陕西西安·西安市大明宫中学校考一模）It turned out which this lady fell ill.
2.（2023·陕西宝鸡·统考二模）But I didn’t plan carefully when I would stay the night.
题型3逻辑类错误
考点一逻辑类错误
1. (2022全国甲卷) One day, he talked with me or hoped to mend our relations.
2 (2020课标全国I卷) First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside.
1.（2023·西藏日喀则·统考一模）They teach me not only knowledge, and also how to adapt themselves to thesociety.
2.（2023·四川·校考模拟预测）At the times, houses don’t have water and electricity.
过关检测
（2024·四川成都·树德中学校考模拟预测）
It’s not all that hard to build the advanced and large vocabulary. Like many things in life, it’s an ongoing
process. The best part of it is that there’s enough room for improvement, which means you would keep getting
good. But you have to work at it. As we know, a little months of exercise in your teens won’t be enough for your
lifelong health. That’s also true to building your vocabulary. One of the most effective way is to read good books.
You need to read at least one good book a week, preferable a classic. It is not hard and far better than any other
method because that you improve your vocabulary while reading a piece of literature. Besides, you learn both new
words and their uses unconsciously, meaning you will tend use the words learning this way almost automatically.
2．（2023·河南开封·统考三模）
Today, the once-in-500-years total solar eclipse (日食) took place. Unfortunate, I was ill and couldn’t observe
it myself, so I had to watch it on television. I clearly watched the Diamond Ring, Bailey’s Beads (贝利珠) or solar
eclipses in other areas. The sun on TV was originally round, what later became a boat, like a dog taking off a big
bite of a biscuit. Gradually, the sun became thin than an eyebrow. Suddenly, Bailey’s Beads and the Diamond Ring
jump out naughtily. Then, a large black disk obviously hung in the sky, the sky became as black as night. After the
while, the sun slowly recovered. Ah ha, the dog couldn’t swallow the biscuit and spat out.
3．（2023·甘肃酒泉·统考三模）
It was Father’s Day. Having been finished my homework, I together with my sister went to buy some
vegetables as well as a gift as planned. We were supposed to giving our father a big surprise. On our way home, we
met with Grandpa Li, an old neighbour without children. Suddenly, I came up an idea. Then we went to his home
with what we had bought. With his help, we cooked a delicious meal. After that we made a phone call to our
parents but told them that we will have lunch at Grandpa Li’s. Hearing what we had done, we were very pleased,
saying we were really caring. We helped Grandpa Li do a thorough clean after lunch. Tiredly as we were, we felt
we had spent a meaning day. I believe it is a day when will be remembered by me forever in my future life.
4．（2023·甘肃陇南·统考二模）I enjoy learning English but can remember individual words easy. However,
when it comes to reading comprehension, it’s really the challenge. Last weekend, I tried to read a storybook write in
English to improve my reading. At first, I refer to the dictionary every time I came across a new word, which Ifound it not very helpful. I often felt puzzling about what I had read. Then I tried to finish a chapter completely
with looking up the new words. What surprised me was I could understand the story merely from the context. I
hope I will make great progresses in English in this way.
5．（2023·河南安阳·统考三模）Anxieties, which are easily seen during an exam, may be good for us in some
degree. However, too much tension can led to failure. Luckily, here are some tips to help you remain positively.
First, keep in minds that good preparation is the key to ensure your efforts do not go fruitless. You should
optimistic to deal with the exam. In the addition, relax yourself properly but don’t always be nervous. If the first
paper ends up extremely tough for me, remember that the next one will be easier and that you will do better. Last
but not least, planning a trip for yourself after an exam are good enough.
6．（2023·四川成都·模拟预测）This morning, I got up very early because I was worried about my beans what I
put in the basin the other days. When I remove the towel on the basin, my face lit up with laughter immediately.
The original soybeans became big with less water, like little babies with full stomachs, lying comfortable. The
delicate germs (萌芽) covered with transparent clothes. After supper, I couldn’t wait to open the towel again. Some
of the beans broke out their clothes. A small bud grew on one side of the bean. It looked like a little doll stretched
out one arm, waving to me. Ah! I was exciting then. The sprouts eventually came out, but I tasted the joy of
success.
7．（2023·河南·统考二模）In the past few years, it has noticed that a number of people watching short videos is
significantly increasing.
The main reason behind the popularity of short videos is because people don’t have enough time to watch long
ones because they’re burying in their work and study. Besides, short videos contain information which are easy to
understand. Therefore, the accuracy of the information can’t be guaranteed, for that people will waste much time if
they are absorbed in thousands of short videos.
In my opinions, watching short videos can be efficiently. We should set a time limit. Moreover, we must be
cautious about the content because of its inaccuracy does exist.
8．（2023·贵州·校联考模拟预测）Jack, my best friend, is my classmate. Our friendship is like a stream of
flowed water. We often help each another in our studies. I was once weakness in English. Only he always explained
various English problems to me patient, With his help, my English got better, as which I was grateful to him. As for
him, he found it difficult learn math at that time. So I spare no effort to help him with math problems. At last, he
made a great progress in math. Now, we are learning painting. No matter what difficult the high school courses are,we’ll work hard to be admitting to the best art university.
9．（2023·四川巴中·统考一模）Last week, one of my favorite day arrived — the Library’s Book Sale Day.
When my mom and I waited in line, the workers chatted in the front of us. They said it was ten but the last book
sale, because the people who ran them would retire. Hear their words, we were very sad. Then, an idea occurred me
that we could volunteer to run the book sale but my mom agreed. Final, we made an application to the library
officer. To our delight, we get the chance. It’s exciting for us to be able to run the book sale in person.
10．（2023·四川攀枝花·统考二模）I’m one of your students in Class Six. Now I met many difficulties while
studying English. First, it’s difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. Secondly, grammar is too
complex that I find it is hard to understanding it. And my performance on reading and writing are not satisfying.
Would you recommend me some effectively methods? Finally, I believe that I will have good command of what
you teach, if you slow down our teaching speed. I’m confident that I will achieve great progresses in the near future
and my English will become more better with your help.
11．（2023·四川·校联考模拟预测）Nowadays there are many students who are fond of American pop music
like me. And with easy access the Internet, now we can enjoy all the music of the singers we love them like Taylor
Swift and Sam Smith. I listen to American pop music with the purpose of improve my English at first. And as time
goes on, I have found the new world in it. Every time I listen to American pop music, I feel exciting. The more song
I listen to, the more I learn about the culture and people’s life of America. I real benefit a lot from it.
I can talk about American pop music all day because it bring me more than I expected. If you are a lover of it
too, making it a lifelong habit.
12．（2023·四川·校联考模拟预测）Aimed at enriching our after-school life and develop our awareness of
protecting our traditional culture, a Chinese folk music club is scheduled to be found soon. So club members are
required now. Whoever had a good command of traditional Chinese folk music is warmly welcome to join in the
club. The club will undoubtedly hold a variety of appealing activities, which are of greatly benefit to you. It is a
club that you are bound to enjoy yourself while gaining knowledges and joy. Therefore, it is so a golden
opportunity that you’d better not miss it.
To sign up for the club, you are supposed to hand in your person information to the Student Union by e-mail
before the evening of May 3rd.
Hope all the students will take active part in it.
13．（2023·四川成都·成都七中校考模拟预测）Last Friday, we held our five discussion about what to present
in our annual school art festival. And we decide to invite an elderly man fond of playing the erhu near our schooljoin us. His music was very beauty but couldn’t get any attention from the rush-hour passer-by. The big day finally
arrived where our festival took place. As a special guest played, all of us were lost in his music. After his
performance, we rose to applaud hardly. From this experience, I learned about that, to people like them, what really
matters is not sympathy but more attention and appreciation, which will brighten their life.
14．（2023·四川绵阳·四川省绵阳南山中学校考模拟预测）The first time I heard the expression “Know
yourself” by Socrates, I didn’t realize its meaning until I go to university. I started my university life unwillingly,
because of I didn’t want to leave my parents and a university of engineering was not my dream school, too.
However, I changed my mind completely after semester. My schoolmate are from different places, some of which
are really brilliant. This makes me realized there is always someone much more outstandingly. Since then, to know
myself have become an important part of my life. Only by knowing who I am and where I am can you follow the
right path.
15．（2023·江西·濂溪一中校联考模拟预测）Last month,I finish reading Romance of the Three Kingdoms
writing by Luo Guanzhong. It is a Chinese historical novel based upon the events what happened between the late
Eastern Han Dynasty or the Three Kingdoms. h is praised as one of the Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese
literature. I’ve learned a lot of from the novel. I really like reading, which can broaden your horizon and make me
learn knowledges. A good book is like a wise man, a teacher, a friend and a partner. I do advise chose a good book
to read. lf everyone does it regular, the history culture and many other aspects will handed down from generation to
generation.
16．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）Last month, I finish reading Romance of the Three Kingdoms writing by
Luo Guanzhong. It is a Chinese historical novel based upon the events what happened between the late Eastern Han
Dynasty or the Three Kingdoms. It is praised as one of the Four Great Clas-sical Novels of Chinese literature. I’ve
learned a lot of from the novel. I really like reading, which can broaden your horizon and make me learn
knowledges. A good book is like a wise man, a teacher, a friend and a partner. I do advise chose a good book to
read. If everyone does it regular, the history, culture and many other aspects will handed down from generation to
generation.
17．（2023·河南开封·统考模拟预测）Last Tuesday a mental health activity held in our school to help students
relieve their study pressure. The activity was organized by the psychology club, where students with psychological
problems could turn to for help. First of all, Mr. Chen, the psychology professor, gave a lecture on what to settle the
study pressure. He analyzes the most common psychological problems that students may encounter but put forward
some valuable suggestions. All the students listened to attentively and benefited a lot. Then, a short play wasperformed by the member of the psychology club. The students got relaxing both mentally and physically. This
activity was thought high of by the whole school.
18．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）There are many events that one can not forget them forever. My first exam at
primary school is one of the most memorable event. I still remember how I spent a sleepless night.
Therefore, on the following day, I felt extremely tiring and forgot everything I had reviewed. During an exam,
my mind went blank, so that I wanted to do was cheat. Thus, when the teacher was turning around, I decide to open
my copybook. I was too frightened that my fingers were trembling. Suddenly, my teacher came next to me, put her
hand gently on my shoulder and saying softly, “You forgot put away your copybook!” I was real ashamed that day.
19．（2023·河南郑州·洛宁县第一高级中学校联考模拟预测）Our annual sports day, held earlier this month,
was full fun and excitement. The entirely school, including the playground, was decorated with flags and flowers.
Many boys and girls took part in the event. The games have included football and basketball matches, races, jumps
and other track event. I took part in the 50m and 100m races or received a silver cup in the former. The 100m race,
which was very excited, was won by my friend Mansoor. My friend Rajat gets the first place in the long jump. But
my classmate Lucy fell and injured himself during the high jump. The event came to the close with the distribution
of prizes, which was given away by our headmaster.
20．（2023·广西梧州·苍梧中学校考模拟预测）It was 7:15 in the morning of January 8th, 2023. I was walking
along Park Road towards the east while a passer-by of average build came out of the park on the other side of the
road. Just at that moment, I see a yellow car driving up the Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road.
Unlucky, the car hit the man when she was crossing the road. And he knocked down with a painful cry. However,
instead of stopping, the car drove off even faster. Seeing this, about two minute later, I stopped a passing car and
rushed the man to the most nearest hospital. When his family came, they were moving to tears.
21．（2023·宁夏银川·银川一中校联考二模）
Dear all present,
With the online paper-cutting course comes to an end, I’m here to convey my congratulations to all of you that
take active part in the course.
I still remember that you watched attentively and follow the instructions closely in every class. Under the help
of art teachers, all of you have made great progresses in paper cutting. That impresses me most is the works you
created on my own. But for your constant efforts, so you wouldn’t have enjoyed the charm of the old form of
Chinese art.
Congratulations again to all of you involving in the course. You are enthusiastic invited to pay a visit to ourschool at your earliest convenience. Wish you all the best!
22．（2023·河南新乡·统考二模）
Hello, Senior One students! May I have your attention, please? Here is a good news. A trip to Happy Farm in
Western Hill Village organized for you this Saturday. You will meet in the school gate at 8:00 am. The school bus
would take you there in less than an hour. And there are different activities, including take part in the farm work,
from that you can experience the farm life.
By the way, do remember to wearing a hat and sunscreen to protect your skin. To make your trips more
convenient and comfortable, we had better wear sportswear. I’m sure you will have a well time.
形容词good作定语。故将well改为good。
23．（2023·河南·校联考三模）A hobby is nothing but a gentle and pleasant occupation being designed to free
the tired brain for the burden of the main task. I had a favorite hobby, which is riding a bicycle. It is my favorite
sport to do wherever I have free time. It is a good exercise improve relationships between family members and
friends. Most of the time I cycle with my best friend. I think the benefits of it are numerous not just for the person
cycled but for the environment. It’s a hobby what promotes the brain activity and reduce CO release. It’s also an
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fun outdoor activity that can stimulate the senses dulled by staying indoor.
24．（2023·广西·统考二模）
Today, it has been almost 30 years when I first started volunteering at the local library for “Children’s Story
Hour”. Every week, I go there to read to kids. Also, I answer question that they are curious about them. This job,
what I have kept doing for so long, help me escape from the daily stress. I am really happy to be with them.
Yesterday our local news channel completed a program naming “Local Heroes”. 127 adults voted me, saying
something like, “Cheryl’s Story Hour is one of the warm memories from my childhood.” And interesting enough,
all the others names on the top of the list were firefighters, policemen, and politicians.
25．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）Qingming Festival is one of most important traditional festivals in China. It
falls on April 4th or 5th, where most Chinese people enjoy a public holiday. Qingming Festival was also called
Tomb Sweeping Day. It is the time for Chinese people to showing respect for their ancestors by cleaning their
ancestors’ tombs and place offerings. In addition to, Qingming in Chinese means “clearness” or “brightness”. It is
the fifth of the 24 solar term of the traditional Chinese solar calendar. Beside, it also marks the start of the warm
weather of spring and the beginning of busily farming season.
26．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）
When I was a boy, I was a football fan. I always played the football with some other boy in the backyard. Oneday, I came into the yard with a football and played it happy. But suddenly, the ball flies through the window or
nearly hit my dad. Dad took my football and cut it in half. I didn’t cry because I knew what terrible my mistake
was. I didn’t expect to getting a football again. But to mine surprise, Dad bought me a new one the next week. He
said, “You have punished for your mistake already. Now, you have another chance. Please be more careful.” I was
really grateful to my father’s forgiveness.
27．（2023·江西·江西师大附中校考三模）
I find it interested that many great or success people come from a poor family. This proves that being poor not
always a bad thing. In some way, it may be very precious to you, because of difficult situations will make you a
person of strong character, upon what you can depend for success. So don’t feel sorry if you were a student from a
poor family. Work hard and they will have a great future although other have rich parents.
In a word, it isn’t matter where you come from if you have a positive attitude to life. So, when life gives you
100 reasons to cry, showing life that you have 1, 000 reasons to smile.
28．（2023·河南郑州·统考模拟预测）
As my mum’s birthday approached, I was considering give her a unique gift. Finally, I decided to make short
video to celebrate her fifty birthday. To do this successful, I did short interviews with my other family members or
her friends, in which they all wished her a happy birthday. I include their birthday wishes in the video. Then, I
added some photo and music to it and did some editing work. All this was done without my knowledge. On the day
when I played the video for her, she was too touched that she gave me a warm hug. How happy I was to bring about
joy to my mum!
29．（2023·陕西西安·陕西师大附中校考二模）
Are students’ grades matter of personal privacy? Should test score be made public? Opinions vary from person
to person.
I think it’s good to recognize for the top scorers — they will be inspired and keep try to maintain their high
grades. There are some disadvantages, therefore, for the low performers. Some say they are greatly discouraged and
feel depressed. But competition is a life’s skill that needed to be learned to be successful in the real world. The
earlier, the better. Regardless of the type of competition, it will keep them motivating. It is not just about winning or
losing; it is also about when they get involved, enjoy the process and improve them.
30．（2023·陕西·西北工业大学附属中学校考模拟预测）
At the age of 10, I begin to chat with foreigners. At first, I was very shy, and gradually with foreigners’ help, I
became more and more confidence. The following year, I went to Lintong with two foreigners as our guide. Wevisited the Terra-Cotta Warriors Museum where we took lots of photos, enjoying the beautiful scenery. After that,
they went to buy souvenir. The sellers couldn’t speak English. Though it was little hard for me, I tried my best to
translate their words on both sides. Finally, the two foreigners accompanying by me bought satisfactory goods. This
unforgettable experience made me to understand where “Practice makes perfect.” means.
真题演练
2023年短文改错
Text 1
【2023年全国乙卷】Last Friday my mom decided to color his hair. She studied with all the hair products at
the drugstore. The color she choose came in a box which had a picture of a woman that hair color looked just
perfect. Mom was sure same color would look great on her. She put the new color on her hair or sat still for 30
minutes, just as the directions saying. However, instead of the brownish red hair she had hoped for, she final got
purple hair. She went right into the shower to washing it, but it was no use. At least one thing proved truth: the color
wouldn’t wash out.
Test 2
【2023年全国甲卷】I used to afraid of insects, but last Friday’ s biology class make a big change in me. In
that class, Miss Zhao, our biology teacher, showed we insects on stamps. The bees, butterfly and many other insects
looked lovely and beautifully on the stamps. Miss Zhao told us the names of the insects or described their living
habits. She even played some recordings of their singing, what was fun. Now, I’ve come to love those of small
living things. In the evening, when I take the walk in the school garden, the singing of insects become more
meaningful to me.
2022年短文改错
Test 1
【2022年全国乙卷】We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest
are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether
you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just
see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And
there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.
Test2【2022年全国甲卷】My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school. He showed me how
his medical instruments was used. I felt so closely to him. However, after I went to high school, somehow I become
distant from him. I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my friends too
late. The disagreement was too sharp that neither he nor I knew what to settle it. One day, he talked with me or
hoped to mend our relations. With the efforts made by all sides, we began to understand each other better.
2021年短文改错
Test 1
【2021年全国甲卷】Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are：
Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or
classmates because they're of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or
teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they
dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help
from those we trust mostly.
Test 2
【2021年全国乙卷】I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also
water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can
benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it
gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What’s most, doing
housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That’s our view on housework. And hopes this can
inspire more thinking on the topic!
2020年短文改错
Text 1
【2020年新课标Ⅰ】Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and
I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but
put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into
a pan and turned off the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten
eggs into pan together. ＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out
as I had wished.Test 2
【2020年新课标Ⅱ】Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve
come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to
learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two
weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on
every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
Test 3
【2020年新课标Ⅲ】My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to
make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad
has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I
tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.
But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided
by Mom with appreciation.
2019年短文改错
Text 1
【2019年全国卷 Ⅰ】I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where
I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but
almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball
went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From
now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
Text 2
【2019年全国卷Ⅱ】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform
looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teachertoo much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two
reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after
seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
Test 3
【2019年全国卷III】 On our way to the house，it was raining ___61___ hard that we couldn't help
wondering how long it would take ___62___ (get)there. It was in the middle of Pearl City.
We were first greeted with the barking by a pack ___63___ dogs，seven to be exact. They were well trained
by their masters ___64___ had great experience with caring for these animals. Our hosts shared many of their
experiences and ___65___(recommend)wonderful places to eat，shop，and visit. For breakfast，we were able to
eat papaya(木瓜)and other fruits from their trees in the backyard.
When they were free from work ，they invited us to local events and let us know of an interesting
___66___(compete)to watch ， together with the story behind it. They also shared with us many
___67___(tradition)stories about Hawaii that were ___68___ (huge)popular with tourists. On the last day of our
week-long stay，we ___69___(invite)to attend a private concert on a beautiful farm on the North Shore under the
stars，___70___ (listen)to musicians and meeting interesting locals.
Test 4
【2019年全国卷III】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it
required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe
have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical
environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes
in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
