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2023 届高考各类作文写作思路精析
一、问题类现象
例:关注者、包裹、异想天开(新方法)、门与窗、张爱玲
试题1:【2018届闵行二模】生活中,我们自以为是某个事件的关注者,其实,我们往往不明就里,只凑了个
热闹,没过多久就忘记了,成为事件的忽视者。请写一篇文章,谈谈你对这种现象的思考。
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试题2:上天关上一扇门,也同时打开一扇窗。而我们却往往长久地注视着那扇关上的门,忘了去关注那扇为
我们新开的窗。针对这种现象,请写一篇文章谈谈你的思考。
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二、一个概念正反分析(中性现象)
例:比较、评价、被需要、点赞、善良
【试题】人们在生活中常常不自觉地将自己与他人进行比较,有些比较对个人生活以及社会风气带来了不同程
1度的影响。请写一篇文章,谈谈你对这种现象的思考。
【核心思路】
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三、对立统一的概念(A与B)(两者互相依存,最后统一)
例:忍与不忍、和解不和解、自由不自由、坚硬与柔软、曲线与直线、走与停、刚与柔
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【核心思路2】
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试题1:有人说要忍!有人却说不忍!你对“忍与不忍”有何看法?
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2试题2:【2019黄浦二模】我们常常听到“接受你自己”“要和你自己和解”这样的话,但是有人却说:“不和
解才有意思。要跟自己过不去,抬杠,找自己的茬。” 对此谈谈你的看法。
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四、相反/转折的两句话/事实(A句和B句)
例:给自己找理由然而世间原则不变(17春考)、道理简单却不简单、(13上海卷)做自认为重要但有更重要
事、(12上海卷)放弃微光然而却在天才作品中找到、坚持会出奇迹却也会导致平凡无奇、(21徐汇一模)我
们认为某些事“当然应该是这样”时反而是危险的
【核心思路】
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【试题1】人们往往为自己的行为找到充足的理由,然而,事情是怎样,它还是怎样,世界自有其原则。
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【试题2】:道理往往简单,但紧要关头却不简单。
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【试题3】有人说,当我们认为某些事“当然应该是这样”的时候,反而是危险的。
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五、并列两句话
【试题】偶像,指人们心中仰慕的对象,我们有时需要崇拜它,有时需要打破它。
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六、选择的两句话(不要A,要B)
试题1:有人说:生活中,不要在乎我们置身何处,而要思考前往何方。
试题2:有人说,现在不是去想缺少什么的时候,该想一想凭现有的东西能做什么。你是否同意这一说法?
【核心思路】可同意可反对
同意写法:
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【同意写法】以“不要在乎置身何处,而要思考前往何方”为例
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【类似题型】B比A更重要
例:(松江一模)生活中,人们总在努力创设各种“连接”,而有人认为保持一定的“间隔”更为重要。对此,
你怎么看?
(浦东一模)有人说,作为年轻人,确认我是谁比拒绝我是谁更重要。也有人不以为然。对此你有怎样的思考?
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七、陈述类、名言式作文题
例:世界上竟然有这么多我不需要的东西、皮囊也灵魂、人间不值得但你值得
试题1:古希腊哲学家苏格拉底曾经感叹:这个世界上竟然有那么多我不需要的东西。
5试题2:“人间不值得,但你值得”是一句常见的网络流行语。它最早源自著名脱口秀演员李诞的一套“开心
点,朋友们,人间不值得,但你值得”的微博。近来迅速传播开来并引发热议。
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试题2【原因部分】
可思考:为何人间不值得但你值得?也可思考:为何这句话会流行?
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3、为什么这句话能迅速传播开来(合理性)
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八、比喻类试题
【试题1】上天关上一扇门,也同时打开一扇窗。而我们却往往长久地注视着那扇关上的门,忘了去关注那扇
为我们新开的窗。针对这种现象,请写一篇文章谈谈你的思考。
【2012高考题】人们对自己心灵中闪过的微光,往往会将它舍弃,只因为这是自己的东西。而从天才的作品
中,人们却认出了曾被自己舍弃的微光。
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九、类比类试题
例:山与云、林中与山巅
试题1:漫步林中,你可以看到一棵树的枝干翠叶,却看不到森林的广袤;立足山巅,你可以看到群山的走势
6起伏,却看不到山腰的岩石与山脚的溪水。
试题2:【2020黄浦二模】 ①云来山更佳, 云去山如画, 山因云晦明, 云共山高下。上述四句话,展
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现了云与山的关系;也能引发我们对自己与其他人、事、物关系的思考。
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十、命题类试题(题目包含观点)
试题1:【2019上海春考】“在阳光里生活,需要有步入阳光的能力。”这句意蕴丰富的话引起了你怎样的思考?
试题2:【2017上海春考】有人说:“我走过许多地方,有崎岖的,有平坦的;我阅读过不少故事,有寒冷的,
有温暖的,……但没有哪一片土地、哪一个故事不值得我关注。”请写一篇文章,谈谈这段话引发了你怎样的
联想、思考。
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十一、提问类试题
例:【2020高考题】世上许多重要的转折是在意想不到时发生的,这是否意味着人对事物发展进程无能为力?
【2020黄浦】世上总有一些人,做事时“知不可为而为之”,这是否意味着人可以不顾自身的力量去做认定的
事情呢?
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常用关联词小诀窍:
1、说定义/原因:①不是,而是 ②与其说,不如说 ③本质上是,源于,本质上反映了 ④表面是,实际是
2、说重要性:①更重要的是… ②表面上……,然后这里隐含了更重要的事实 ③我们不能忽略这个事实…… ④
然后这一点往往容易被人忽略 ⑤不可否认的是 ⑥然而问题并非如此简单,其实与……息息相关
3、说递进:①再进一步 ②若从更长远的眼光来看……③若以更前瞻性的目光来看,……
4、说并列的另一点:然而我们还得看到事物的另外一面,即……
5、说自己观点:①固然...是对的,但是我认为……②认为……是自然的,但我们不应忽视
③我们应该看到其在……方面也有其进步意义,然而我更倾向于……
6、概括现象:①摆出现象……引人思考/值得深思 ②反映了在对待……问题上不同的人生哲学/生活理念/生命
哲学/生命理念
7、说缺点:局限性
8、说优点:①益处,裨益;②进步意义、积极意义;③前瞻性
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