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2025年菁优高考英语解密之读后续写
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•新高考Ⅰ）ㅤI met Gunter on a cold，wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had
planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm，my flight
had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the
departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane，I ran like crazy through the
airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second sought.
ㅤThat was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going ，but he said he hadn't heard of the
bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem，so I explained again more slowly，but he
still looked confused.When I was about to give up，Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a
friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century，Gunter put his phone
down and started the car.
ㅤFinally，with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully，there was a long
queue still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus，turned around，and
looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it， "he said.
ㅤJust then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled
out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times，but the card machine just did not play along.A
feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
ㅤAt this moment，Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There at the entrance，
was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car，made a mad run for the machine，and popped my card
in，only to read the message："Out of order.Sorry."
ㅤI ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news._____
ㅤFour days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised._____
2．（2024•深圳一模） In our weekly staff meeting，our editor Ashley was not pleased with the
quality of our reporting."Our readership is way down.We need better stories for this Thursday's school
newspaper.Does anybody have any ideas？"she said.
I handed her my article about our basketball team beating Deerfield High School the previous night
by one point."Sports stories are fun，"she said，"but not good enough for the front page.We need
something to really get people's attention."
After our meeting，we left the newsroom together and heard someone screaming，"Perry is
1missing!"Perry was a big red parrot and had been our school mascot（吉祥物） for ten years.He played
an important role in students"lives，both in and out of class.He had also been a constant presence at
school events，inspiring a sense of unity among students.
Everyone gathered around Perry's empty cage，heartbroken.Suddenly，a student from the crowd
came over and showed me a photo. "You're a reporter for the school paper，right？I happened to take
this yesterday，"he said.In the photo was a Deerfield High School basketball player with something large
hidden under his shirt around the size of a parrot.
"He must have stolen Perry to get back at us for winning the game!"Ashley cried.We hurried back
to the newsroom，agreeing to run the photo on the front page with the headline "Deerfield Stole
Perry.""This is just the story we need.Everyone will read it，"Ashley said confidently.
After she left，I took a closer look at the photo.The clock in the background read 4：15 pm，but
our game against Deerfield hadn't started until 4：30 pm.Why would the boy have taken Perry before
we even played？An uneasy feeling came over me that we might have falsely accused someone.
I went to Perry's usual caretaker to ask if he knew Perry was missing."He's not missing.He's
retired.He's ready for some quieter days，"he said.Learning the truth，I immediately told Ashley and
suggested writing a story to say goodbye to Perry.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise，Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story.______
On Thursday，the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye，Perry" on the front page.______
3．（2024•广东模拟） It took a day's drive，but distance was beside the point.I always enjoyed
long journeys in my father's car with my family.However，things went different that time.We were
moving to a new town，not for any tourist destination，but to settle down，for my father had a new
job there.My mother，sitting on the passenger seat in the front，was talking with my father.She
looked excited for the coming new life.But I was down，feeling nervous about starting a new school
life.Entering a new school meant adapting to a completely different environment and meeting new
classmates and teachers，which I was not good at.
On my first day at the new school，I felt lost and out of place.The students already knew each
other well，and they chatted happily during breaks.I missed my old friends terribly and wished I could
go back to my old school.Feeling lonely，I often spent time alone during breaks and after classes，
reading books in the library or drawing pictures in the art room.I missed the good days I had with my
2old friends and longed for that sense of belonging.
As the days went by，I still found it hard to fit in.I was shy and found it difficult to strike up
conversations with my classmates.Some of the kids in my class noticed my discomfort and tried to be
friendly，but I couldn't shake off the feeling of being an outsider.I only had words with my deskmate，
Alex，when necessary.Things took a turn for the worse when I knocked off Alex's water bottle by
accident，although I picked up the bottle immediately and apologized to him.He got mad at me and
seemed not to forgive me.Soon I found we were avoiding each other.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However，I was assigned to pair up with Alex to design a poster.______
Alex proudly introduced that the fantastic picture was drawn by me._______
4．（2024•勐海县校级模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
When I was in middle school，my family moved to Seattle，where my parents started their new
business﹣a small grocery store downstairs my house.As a girl of shy and reserved nature，I had to take
a fresh start to fit into the sophisticated city life.
One sunny day，my school announced an exciting event，a talent show for the local food
bank.Students were encouraged to showcase their unique talents in front of the public in the city hall on
National Day.A buzz of excitement filled the school as everyone began preparing for the big day.Deep
down，I felt a spark of curiosity and a desire to participate.However，my self﹣doubt held me back，
"I don't have any special skills to share."
Days turned into weeks，and the talent show drew closer.I couldn't shake the upsetting feeling until
one day Emma，one of the most popular girls in my class，came to me while I was helping in the
grocery store after class. "How about singing together in the talent show？" She grinned， "I heard
you singing a tune，along the way back home.I can't help following you here." Gosh，I couldn't believe
my ears.Emma，with personality and popularity，acknowledged my little talent.Since Emma had the
world's prettiest voice，I felt like being favoured by fortune.
"You two？The talent show for the food bank？" My mum bent towards us and her face lit up."
A big occasion." Then a light bulb seemed to go in her head. "Why not practise right now upstairs？I
bet you'll be a perfect match." Winking at us，she seemed to know we were thinking alike.
Emma and I embarked on rehearsing almost every single day after school.We brainstormed，
3exchanged ideas and rehearsed the scene.As the days rolled by，I was feeling pretty good about our
act.But the day before the performance，Emma called that she had an acute stomachache and was not in
any shape to perform.
注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
I was completely knocked out by the news.___________
Finally came the big moment.___________
5．（2024•于都县校级模拟）
My Best Examination
One day，while at work in a coal﹣mine in Malden，I happened to overhear two miners talking
about a great school for poor people in Virginia.It was Hampton Institute.The school was established to
provide opportunities for poor but worthy students who could work out all or a part of the cost of
board，and at the same time be taught some trade or industry.
I was on fire constantly with one ambition，and that was to go to school.I decided at once to go
to that school.Finally the great day came and I started for Hampton.I had only a small，cheap bag that
contained what few articles of clothing I could get.The distance from Malden to Hampton is about five
hundred miles.I had not been away from home many hours before it began to grow painfully evident
that I did not have enough money to pay my fare （路费） to Hampton.
By walking and begging rides in some way，I finally reached the grounds of the Hampton Institute
after a number of days，tired and dirty.As soon as possible after reaching，I presented myself before the
head teacher for assignment to a class.Having been so long without proper food，a bath，and change of
clothing，I was like a worthless loafer （游荡者）.
I did not，of course，make a very favourable impression upon her，and I could see at once that
there were doubts in her mind about the wisdom of admitting me as a student.I tried to impress her in
all the ways I could with my worthiness.How I wished that I could get a chance to show what was in
me.
After some time，the head teacher said to me， "The adjoining （隔壁的） classroom needs
sweeping.Take the broom and sweep it."
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
4（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.______
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.______
6．（2024•许昌模拟） It was time for the ice cream event that my small youth group had waited
for many months.The group consisted of five boys；one of them was Scott.
Scott always had a positive attitude.He looked on the bright side of things and never criticized
anyone.But Scott was different from the rest of us because he was disabled，suffering from a disease
which caused hands shaking constantly.Therefore，he was unable to participate in activities in most
cases.No one ever made fun of him to his face，but at times，people would laugh or stare in his
presence.But Scott never worried；he just kept his head up high and ignored them.
Finally，the night of the ice cream event descended.My friends and I rushed to the church
basement and waited with scoops （冰淇淋勺） in hand for the guests to arrive.One by one，people
filed in，all hoping to get a creamy and tasty scoop of ice cream.But what they ended up getting was a
hard and frozen mass.We waited for a while for the ice cream to melt，and eventually it did.
Once the ice cream melted，we had another problem.It had turned into three pools of coconut，
chocolate，and strawberry.But we persisted in serving it.We had our chance to serve，except for
Scott.So，being as kind as possible，I gave Scott a chance to scoop and serve.As soon as Scott gripped
the scoop，our ice cream troubles grew beyond control.Milky ice cream was flung in every direction
and made a mess on people，but there was no sign for him to come to a stop on account of his
terrible control of trembling hands.At that moment，a stir of unrest and dissatisfaction rippled through
the crowd.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Abruptly，a woman stormed forward and grabbed the scoop.______
Tears blurred his eyes as Scott got hold of the scoop again._____
7．（2024秋•寻甸县校级月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇
完整的短文．续写词数应为 150 左右．
It was time to go home． "Remember to work on your class speeches for homework，" Miss
Walker called as everyone started talking and packing their school bags．Jenny felt sick．She hated
having to read aloud in class．She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her．Once，when
Jenny was reading out her holiday diary，Lee was even looking at his watch，a silver and blue one
5which seemed just magical．
Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school．He seemed so clever，and he had a
certain sort of shining confidence．He was just one of those people who were good at everything．
Jenny sighed．As she turned the corner，she saw Lee's watch lying right in the middle of the path．
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him，but she didn't want to run after him．
Jenny bent down quickly，picked up the watch and ran home．On arriving home，Jenny put it on
almost without thinking．She was surprised it fitted so well．She walked to the mirror and started
practising her speech．Words just flooded out of her． "I'm going to talk about swimming．I have been
lucky．I've won lots of competitions．But when I'm in a race，I'm not really thinking about winning．
I'm just loving the feeling of being in the water…" Jenny laughed with excitement．She walked across
the room．She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence．Turning back to the mirror，
Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass．The flashes of silver seemed almost magical．
So maybe Lee's watch really DID have something magic about it．
The next day，as the lesson began，Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first．
Nobody moved．Jenny slowly raised her arm．Before Miss Walker could say anything，there was a
shout from behind ． "She's stolen my watch!" Lee said angrily ， "It went missing at school
yesterday．"
Paragraph 1：
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny，waiting for an explanation．_________．
Paragraph 2：
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first．_______．
8．（2024•江西模拟） Bonnie raised her granddaughter alone after the girl's parents died.She hated
her granddaughter's art and wanted her to stop drawing.But everything changed when Mr.Henderson，
a famous cartoonist，appeared at her doorstep.
One day，Bonnie called out to Amy as she took the chicken out."Dinner is ready，honey!Come
soon!"But Amy didn't answer.
Bonnie finished setting the table and served them dinner，but she still didn't hear a response from
Amy."Amy？Honey，your dinner is getting cold!Are you coming？"she asked her 10﹣year﹣old
granddaughter again.
When Amy didn't respond，Bonnie climbed the stairs to the girl's room and pushed the door
open.Amy sat at her desk，with her headphones on.At first，Bonnie thought Amy was studying，but
then she noticed the drawing sheet on the table in front of Amy.Bonnie frowned（皱眉） in anger.
6"Amy!"Bonnie screamed，and the girl turned around and removed her headphones.
"Granny？L…I was just..."Amy said.
Bonnie stormed up to Amy's desk，and the little girl tried to cover the drawing，but it was too
late.
"Did you finish your math homework，little girl？Mrs.Warren called me today.And she told me
you've been ignoring her assignments!"Bonnie said angrily.
"I'll finish the homework，"Amy said."I was planning on doing it once I finished the sketch（素
描） I was working on，Granny."
"I'm tired of that hobby of yours，Amy!You're no longer doing those drawings!"Bonnie went
on."Those things you draw are not going to help you in the future!You finish your dinner，and then
you'll be doing your homework.You're not leaving the house to play with your friends until you finish
your homework.Am I clear？"Bonnie said and stormed out of Amy's room.
Minutes later，Amy walked into the kitchen and quietly sat at the table.They began eating dinner in
silence.Bonnie was already in a terrible mood，so she didn't ask about Amy's day like she usually
did.Suddenly，the doorbell rang.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr.Henderson._______
Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs.Warren for advice.________
9．（2024•合川区校级模拟） Every Sunday，the competition started.The three of us would set our
alarm clocks to wake up earlier than anyone else.I had set my alarm clock to six in the morning，
hoping that my brothers wouldn't start before me.
Beep.Beep.Beep.Groaning，I reached over to my nightstand and slapped the top of my alarm clock.
"Too early on this cold winter day，" I murmured.I curled back into my warm blanket and fell asleep
again.
My eyes blinked open to the whirring sound of the vacuum cleaner. "They chose their chores first!"
I thought with despair.I jumped up from my bed and rushed to the bathroom，where I started the only
chore that was left for me.I would definitely be shoveling （铲） the driveway while they built an
igloo （冰屋） ，I thought cheerlessly，rubbing and wiping madly at the toilet bowl.
When I finished cleaning the toilet and sink，my brothers came into the bathroom to watch me
clean the bathtub as they mocked me about how I'd overslept and got stuck with the longest chore.
7"Whoever finishes last has to shovel the driveway，remember？" my older brother reminded me with a
triumphant smile when we put on our big coats and snow pants to go outside.
The three of us stepped outside into the knee﹣deep snow and shielded our eyes from the
brightness.My brothers wasted no time and dashed off to play in the yard，leaving me behind to tackle
the frustrating task of shoveling the driveway.With a heavy sigh，I inched through the thick snow to the
driveway，my boots sinking with each step.I grunted （嘟哝） with effort as my brothers yelled with
joy.Sunday would never be my day，I sighed.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly，I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete.
______
After we finished，we sat inside the igloo，laughing about our morning adventures.
______
10．（2024•固始县校级二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
Lily was renowned for her desire to achieve perfection in everything she undertook.Whether it was
school projects，art assignments，or even helping her parents with household chores，Lily's commitment
to excellence was unwavering.
One sunny summer day，Lily's family decided to spend a day at the beach.As they arrived，Lily's
eyes were immediately drawn by a group of children who playfully built and then tore down their
sandcastles.They giggled and shouted，their excitement on full display. "How silly， " she thought，not
quite getting why they enjoyed doing that.
Lily，being herself，decided to build a perfect sandcastle that would become the envy of all
beachgoers.She began to plan every detail in her mind，from the balanced structures of the towers to
the delicate decorations.Then ， she set about piling sand to make the towers and walls of her
sandcastle.Painstakingly，she crafted each feature of her work，carefully smoothed the surfaces and
adjusting every detail to her vision.
Jake，Lily's younger brother，didn't seem too concerned with building a fantastic sandcastle.He
picked a spot nearby and amused himself with the sand.He scooped up handfuls of sand，let it slip
through his fingers like grains of time，and then molded it into careless shapes with the carefree
abandon of a child.Jake's happiness was contagious.Mom and Dad joined him，laughing and joking over
8Jake's playful creations.From time to time，they called out to Lily and invited her to join the fun，
knowing that the pursuit of perfection could be exhausting.
Nevertheless，Lily stayed where she was，determined to create an impressive sandcastle.She frowned
at Jake's unconventional，abstract art﹣like sandcastle shapes and persisted in her efforts.However，the
process didn't go as smoothly as she had anticipated.The sand didn't always hold its shape，and the
waves constantly lapped at the edges of her creation.
Para 1：As the day wore on，Lily's sandcastle kept losing its form.___________
Para 2：With bitter smile，Lily decided to join her family.___________
11．（2024•上杭县校级模拟） I didn't like Del so much.He always called me the nickname
"Germy，" which meant"dirty，"instead of my real name"Jamie."Besides，he was known as a trouble
﹣maker in school.So when the head teacher Mr.Smith asked Del to come to his office，I naturally
thought that Del had done something mean to someone.Through the window，I caught sight of a
smaller boy crying.Del seemed unhappy，too.
He did not return to class that day.All of us were discussing what had happened to him.What else
could such an annoying boy do？"He must have hit the boy and was sent home，"I whispered to my
friends.Their eyes widened.It felt good to see them so interested in what I said.
The next morning，the whole school was talking about Del being expelled （开除） for beating up
a kid.I was surprised that my assumptions were passed on so quickly.So when Del walked into the
classroom，all the kids were shocked.The kids next to him shifted their desks away."What's your
problem？"Del asked."I don't want you to attack me，"one kid said.Some laughed."Yeah，I might，"said
Del.I could tell he was joking，but many kids thought he admitted he did beat up someone.
During recess（课间休息），Del tried to join the kickball game."Neither team wants you，"one of
the players said."Why？"Del asked，looking confused."I always play with you guys."They ignored him
and went on playing.Del sat by himself while the rest of the school enjoyed their recess away from
him.Del looked lonely and sad，much different from before.I started to feel sorry for him.
Later that day，I learned what really happened.The kid was Del's little brother and he was crying
because their mother fell ill and was sent to hospital.I felt even sorrier for what I said before.I started a
rumor （谣言）.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
9At recess the next day，I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game.
Now that Del had forgiven me，I decided to do more before the recess was over.
12．（2024•绍兴二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Kevin woke to the blaring beep of his alarm clock. "Can't wait for that camping trip，" Kevin
thought，filled with excitement.As he was leaving home，his dad grabbed him by the hand and said，
"Before you go，just tell me the directions on where you and your friends are going to stay."
"But dad!" Kevin complained.
"No buts!" Kevin's dad added.
"Fine." Kevin told him the directions and left.
The three friends，Kevin，Jay and Nathan，had been planning this adventure for weeks，packing
their stuff﹣tents，snacks，and a map﹣preparing for a 3﹣day outdoor exploration.Excitement ran
through Kevin as they departed for their campsite. "This trip is going to be awesome， " Nathan
excitedly yelled as they set off.But little did they know that nature had a surprise in store for them.
The first day at the campsite was going great，setting up tents，collecting firewood，and sharing
stories. "Man，we nailed these tents， " Kevin said. "I know it was easy really，" Nathan replied.The
friends were happy.
Yet towards night，as the dark clouds gathered overhead，the atmosphere shifted，and a sudden
storm erupted with unforgiving anger.Rain poured down from the heavens like a relentless waterfall，
transforming the peaceful campsite into a muddy battleground.Worse still，a huge tree was uprooted and
crashed down with a deafening crack on their only means of escape ﹣ their car.Kevin's eyes widened
in horror as he spotted the damaged wreckage beneath the fallen giant. "Our car!" he screamed over the
howling wind，his voice a mix of disbelief and despair. "We're stuck here，" he declared，his words
barely audible against the backdrop of thunder and raindrops.They realized that their plans had been
violently spoiled by forces beyond their control.The once quiet campsite now stood as a deserted
battlefield，the fallen tree serving as a painful reminder of the unpredictable nature of the world around
them.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：The next day，they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding
water.________
10Paragraph 2：On the third night，a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.________
13．（2024•湖北二模） I faced a tight budget when I was nine.On November 1st，I used up most
of the money I saved.With a small amount of pocket money left before Christmas I didn't have
enough to buy presents for the family.
I was seriously considering going to my dad and asking for an advance on the next year's pocket
money，so I could at least buy gifts for my family members.But then，one evening，I was sitting in
my room reading advertisements in the back of a magazine.Several greeting﹣card companies were telling
us how people could make money by selling their cards and stationery （文具）.Normally，I would
have passed right over the ads，but this time my situation was so difficult that I felt I had nothing to
lose.
The ad that attracted me most was one by a well﹣known greeting﹣card company in my nation，
whose products were of high quality.With my parents' help，I contacted the company，although they
preferred adults or older kids to advertise their products.After my sincere request，they agreed to give
me，a nine﹣year﹣old boy，a chance.
My sales materials arrived within the week.I had expected something small and neat，but the
package looked like a dinosaur's shoebox it was close to three feet long and nearly a foot wide，full of
stuff.There was a thick binder （活页夹） containing a complete selection of the cards and some
writing paper，which I would be selling for around ＄3 per box.
Although my parents supported my try to make money by myself，they had little confidence in my
success；after all，instead of an outgoing kid，I was somewhat shy.However，I was determined to have
a try to challenge myself.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Wasting no time，I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood.________
Eventually，I earned over ＄20，a large sum of money for a 9﹣year﹣old kid in 1954.________
14．（2024•广东二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
After a busy week，Emily and her parents decided to go on a mountain picnic.They longed to fully
experience nature's beauty and enjoy quality family time.Little did they know，this outing would be
filled with unexpected twists and turns （波折）.
Arriving at the mountain's base，they discovered a house，in front of which Mike and his father
11had just finished loading a boat onto Mike's truck.Emily approached them and asked for the best picnic
spot in the area.Knowing the mountain well，Mike suggested a location about two hours' walk away.
"It's worth the effort，" he assured them.
Parking their car next to Mike's truck and carrying their picnic supplies，Emily and her parents set
off on the winding road.Tall green trees on one side，a flowing stream on the other，the road
eventually led them to a breathtaking clearing dotted with colorful wildflowers.They enjoyed their
delicious sandwiches，fruits，and snacks，engaging in pleasant conversations.
Just as they finished their meal and settled down to relax，dark clouds unexpectedly rolled in.It
looked like rain.Panicked，they hurriedly set up the tent they had brought.No sooner had they entered
than raindrops began pouring on the roof.Heavy rain enveloped the surroundings，making it impossible
to see anything.They had no choice but to patiently wait it out.
After what felt like a century，the rain ceased.Emily and her parents wasted no time packing up
their belongings，ready to get downhill.However，their excitement turned to worry when they discovered
that the small stream they had previously crossed had turned into a wide and impassable river.With no
cellphone signal，they were trapped without a means of seeking help.To make matters worse，darkness
was approaching.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly，they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river.________
Emily and her parents boarded the boat.________
15．（2024•上城区校级模拟） Tom and Jane planned a holiday at the lake，and they decided to
take their children，Tim and Sarah，with them.However，Tim and Sarah wanted：to visit Disney
World for their holiday or hire a yacht （游艇） in Hawaii.Camping by the lake wasn't even on
their list of holiday adventures.
"We can visit some of the islands too，" Jane said. "Your dad and I always wanted to explore the
mysterious cabin on Moose Island."
Mysterious cabin？The children were now far more interested in this lake holiday idea.
"We might see Big foot，" Tim said.
"Or some unusual species!" Sarah turned to her parents. "We're in.When do we leave？"
The children's excitement quickly disappeared when they arrived at the lake.While their parents were
carrying their suitcases inside，Timand Sarah stood on the path and stared at the cabin they'd be staying
12in for the next week，complaining about the smell around，the dust，and the various small insects.
"We're in nature now，kids.Enjoy the experience!Your dad is building a fire so we can have
barbecued fish and potatoes baked in the coals.Isn't that great？"
Sarah choked. "I am not eating food cooked in coals!I want takeaway instead."
"Me too." Tim was about to cry. "Holidays are supposed to be fun，Mom."
"Come on，guys.There's a lot of joy to be found in living a simple life and spending time together
as a family."
"People in the suburbs live a simple life，which is more like being homeless!" Sarah shouted
"Yeah，" Tim added. "How can there not be a single restaurant that delivers here？How do these
people survive？"
"They eat coal potatoes!" Sarah laughed. "And fish they kill with their bare hands!"
Sarah ran away，and Tim followed.Jane buried her head in her hands.She realized she had to do
something to correct their children's attitude towards simple life.After dinner，she told all about this to
Tom，who agreed with Jane.Then they came up with an idea.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：The next morning，Tim and Sarah entered the main room to demand they leave
immediately，but neither Mom nor Dad was in there.
______
Paragraph 2：When Tim was about to fall asleep，he heard the sound of heavy footsteps outside，
which were approaching.
______
16．（2024•洪山区校级二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a cold，snowy evening.Tommy was running as fast as he could，focused on nothing but his
destination — the shop on the street comer.Two weeks ago he saw figurines（小塑像）of Marvel
superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one.He's been walking the neighbor's dog ever since
then to earn money to fulfill his little dream.He was so excited and barely noticing the world around
him.Maybe that's why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman，who was sitting on the
pavement，her back against the wall.He murmured（低语）"sorry" and moved on to his destination.
Once he entered the shop，he went straight to the shelves with figurines.Hulk，Thor，Captain
America，Iron Man，and many more — all of his admired heroes.With his heart pounding like crazy he
13reached for Spiderman.
"You like these，true believer？"
Tommy turned around.An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face.
"Y﹣yes，...Yes，they're awesome!" answered Tommy. "They're strong and fast and help other
people a lot ..." the boy looked at figurines in admiration. "I wish I could be a superhero（超级英雄）
too."
"Then become one!" said the old man.
"How？" Tommy asked in surprise. "I don't have any superpowers."
"And why would you need them？" the old man smiled.Seeing the confusion on the boy's face，he
squatted（蹲下）and put his hands on Tommy's arms. "Did you know that shopkeeper lady over there
has a disabled husband？She's been working hard and taking care of him for years.I've never heard a
word of complaint from her.And this person —" he pointed at a redhead man，who just entered the
shop. "He's a firefighter，he's saved countless lives.He never gives up，no matter how dangerous the
situation seems to be."
The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. "You don't need a superpower to be a hero
for someone else.The path of a superhero starts not in the mind，not in the muscles，but in the heart."
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.__________
The homeless woman was right there，where he saw her last time._________
17．（2024•武汉二模） Most people think that procrastination （拖延症） is a negative habit.But
people like me who routinely put off doing assignments，are likely to defend our "slower" approach
to getting tasks done.
I'm the only procrastinator in my family.My parents and sister were all born with the "do it right
now" gift.They are always in a rush，as if closely rushed by an invisible deadline.Personally，I prefer a
more relaxed pace.When my parents voiced their concern about my tendencies，saying "Don't put off
until tomorrow what you can do today，" "No way!" I responded，confidently presenting my research as
a defense.It said people procrastinated when they need to solve a problem or commit to a topic or
project.In these cases，delaying a decision can be beneficial.This was because our minds continue to
reflect on problems even when we were not actively thinking about them，which could lead to more
creative solutions.My findings filled me with satisfaction and pride.My method of getting things done
was just as good as my sister's…or so I thought.
14At school we'd been talking about architecture and design.As part of the final assessment my
teacher Mr.Smith announced an exciting project that each student would have a month to complete.We
were expected to choose our materials，construct a small building and make use of things we had
learned in class.Not only would the winners receive extra credit，but the winning constructions would be
proudly displayed in the cafeteria. "I have no clue how I could get it done，" my friend Nate sighed in
despair.I didn't say anything.Not because I shared his anxiety﹣but because I was not nervous at all.I
loved hands﹣on projects!Picturing my brilliant!work exhibited in the cafeteria，I was fully convinced
that I would definitely produce something that could impress everyone.So relaxed was I that I didn't
give it a second thought for weeks.
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（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Before I knew it，I had only one day left for the project.
That taught me a great lesson.
18．（2024•辽宁一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
On a sunny Friday morning，Mr.Stone，the Grade 4 head teacher，walked into the classroom with
a new student following him.She was a lively girl from Mexico，and her red mushroom hair cut
immediately drew everyone's eyes.With a welcoming smile，Mr.Stone gestured for her to sit beside
Mike，a student known for teasing others.
During break time，Mike couldn't help but laugh when he caught sight of his new deskmate.Sara's
distinctive hairstyle seemed like an open invitation for him to make fun of her.Leaning in towards
Sara，he playfully suggested， "Hey，Sara.Ever thought about changing your name to Dora？You look
just like Dora the Explorer!" His words caused laughter and cheers from the others in the classroom.
Sara's eyes filled with tears，her cheeks turning red with embarrassment.Feeling hurt and upset，she
stood up suddenly，rushing to the teacher's office to seek support from Mr.Stone.After hearing her
story，Mr.Stone offered her gentle comfort，saying， "Sara，your hairstyle is truly pretty.Remember，
everyone has their own sense of beauty."
Mr.Stone then directed his attention to Mike，expressing his disappointment and urging Mike to
apologize to Sara. "Mike，" he continued， "your actions were unkind.We must treat everyone with
empathy（同情）.Laughing at Sara's hair has deeply hurt her."
This conflict was temporarily settled，but Mr.Stone found himself lost in thought.Reflecting on his
15own childhood，Mr.Stone recalled how he had been teased for being overweight.The pain caused by
hurtful words was like wrinkles on a crumpled（压皱的）ball of paper.Even if you smoothed them
out，the wrinkles stayed.
He wanted to teach an important lesson to Mike，the troublemaker.Then，a unique strategy came to
mind.He contacted Mike's mother，explaining the situation and discussing a plan with her to develop
empathy in her son.They agreed that over the weekend，Mike's mother would arrange for Mike to have
his hair cut extremely short.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
On Monday morning，Mike unwillingly approached the classroom.________
At that moment，Mr.Stone walked into the classroom with a ball of paper.________
19．（2024•南昌二模） Today was February 5th，a cold rainy morning，the sort of start that made
me wish that I could skip school and bead back to my warm home，and bed.Though it was my
senior year，most days seemed to remain the same boredom.
Being late for 5 minutes，I dashed up the stairs，swung open the door to my British Literature
class like a sopping wet dog，and plopped down（砰然坐下） in my seat.The eyes around the room
glared at me as my teacher cleared her throat."Mathew maybe go and see the lost﹣and﹣found for a
change of clothes" I felt my face turn red and stormed out quickly.
The lost﹣and﹣found bin did not look promising，until I came across an oversized navy coat at
the bottom.I pot it on and zipped up，this would do for the next couple of hours.Freezing up.I dug my
hands deeper down into the pockets to keep warm.Then I hit something.and pulled out a somewhat
crinkled（皱巴巴的） piece of notebook paper with some words."To you，yes you."I read aloud，
realizing that this must be a letter from someone."Dear Person，I don't know exactly who you are，but
I believe that this letter found you for a reason.I am the least likely of people to write something of
this sort，but it'，my senior year，and I thought that I would make true friends.If you would like to
participate in this experiment ，please leave your response in locker 115，second floor."My eyes
brightened.
I finished my letter by the bell，as I made my way through the crowd，Charlie jammed his
shoulder into mine from the opposite direction."Hey!Out of my way!"I shouted.He just ignored me.not
looking back.Charlie is popular in our school and people like him （but not me）.I know Charlie never
likes me，ever since primary school.I finally made it to the second floor，slipped the letter unto the
16locker.and left secretly.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1：
Soon my unseen pen pal and I wrote letters every day.______
Paragraph 2：
I waited for my pen pal in the stadium after school that day.______
20．（2024•邵阳二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短
文。
It was a beautiful sunny morning in early summer，when the world seemed full of sunlight and
new green leaves.I was in a good mood as my parents had just given me ＄300 for my daily expenses
during the week that they would be away in Mexico to visit my mother's sick grandfather.I was
extremely overjoyed，thinking hard about the things I could do with the money.If I survived on bread
and butter the whole week，I would have an unexpected windfall of ＄200 to buy the latest Kobe
Bryant basketball shoes!What a terrific idea!
As usual，the physical education class was thrilling.I felt most at case on the basketball court.After
playing several fierce games，I could hardly catch my breath as I headed back towards the classroom，
sweaty and exhausted.When I entered，I found my classmates gathered around Steven's desk as he
searched through his books and some other personal items anxiously.Steven had always been popular.Not
only was he intelligent and well﹣mannered，but he also came from a well﹣off family.And he shared
everything he had with us.
Right away，I learned Steven had lost the money he would donate to a children's welfare institute
that afternoon.Then I informed Miss Jones，the class teacher.She rushed over immediately and organized
a search around the classroom.We stood by our desks and emptied the contents of our schoolbags onto
the desk for inspection.
It was my turn.As Miss Jones took out the ＄300 from my wallet，the class fell into a shock.I
didn't know the amount lost was exactly ＄300 until then.I kept proving my innocence，but in vain.Miss
Jones confiscated （没收） the ＄300 and decided I was getting kicked out of the school.I stayed home
alone the whole week，living only on bread.I felt wronged，angry，and loss of self﹣esteem.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
17（2）按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally，my parents returned home and talked with me.________
Miss Jones had just accepted my parents' advice when Steven came.________
21．（2024•张家港市校级模拟） By the age of sixteen years old，Ben had always been an
outstanding student.He went to great lengths to achieve high grades and managed to keep his parents
delighted and proud.Neither of his parents had the opportunity to attend university and it was their
biggest ambition that Ben could land a well﹣paid and decent job as a lawyer.He knew that achieving
this goal would make his parents walk on air，but he wasn't certain whether he would feel the same.
Since he was only a child，Ben had been passionate about computer programming.He taught himself
how to use a computer，and by the age of 12，he had been proficient in three different programming
languages.He did all of this in his spare time.He was quite an introvert （内向的人），so he preferred
staying in with his computer，rather than going out socializing with his fellow classmates or playing
sports in the brilliant sunshine.It was acceptable with his parents，as long as he continued to focus on
his studies.
One day，while reading an article online about a young technology billionaire called Tom，Ben was
fascinated by the magical power of technology and the wisdom and innovation of the young CEO.The
inner voice told him that he longed to become a computer programmer.Everything changed for Ben.In
the article，the CEO said that his company was trying to create a new and improved way of paying for
goods online but that they were struggling with the security system.He said if they could overcome
this，they could launch the biggest and best online payment system in the world.It occurred to Ben that
he had an innovative idea on how to handle this problem.Thinking that it wouldn't come to anything，
he emailed the CEO，introducing himself and explaining his idea.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He forgot all about it，but then a month later；the most amazing thing happened.________
With all these concerns in mind，Ben determined to communicate with his parents frankly.________
22．（2024•大连模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
I spotted my neighbor，Monica，working in her garden one day when I returned home from
school.It was sunny，and the smell of cut grass made me feel refreshed.I popped my head over the
fence，and Monica and I got talking.
18"I've seen you're very good at using a lawn mower（割草机） and gardening tools，" Monica said.
"There's a hedge（树篱） growing over the pathway near here.It's so overgrown that it becomes a head
ache for the passers﹣by.I was planning to cut it back myself.Would you like to help out？"
I loved the idea of helping Monica and our community.We agreed to cut the hedge the following
Sunday.My brother Ivan，aged 10，also came along to help us.We wheeled Monica's garbage can down
to the hedge，which the community council was responsible for.All three of us cut it with shears （大
剪刀） until a trouble﹣free pathway came in sight.Mr.Brown，a wheelchair user，was grateful that he
didn't have to make a detour（绕行） any more to pass the hedge.Encouraged by his words，I
suggested doing more for our community，to make it a better place.
When we first started，we just made the best of the equipment we already had in my parents'
garage.But as time went on，donations came in from the local community.Our garage got filled up
quickly with brushes，gardening tools，and even donated power tools like leaf blowers.With everything
ready，our first project was to beautiful park near our houses，which looked a bit run﹣down.Ivan was
in charge of painting the fence around，Monica cleared the lawn with a leaf blower，and I was
responsible for repairing the benches where our neighbors usually sat at their leisure.After two weeks'
hard work，we felt stunned when stepping back and appreciating the clean and brand new small
park.My heart swelled with pride because our efforts paid off.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为 150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I posted photos of our hard work on our local Facebook Group.________
With more neighbors joining in，we headed for the flower bed near the community center.________
23．（2024•长春模拟） I remember a time when I learned the true meaning of forgiveness.It was a
period in my life that tested my patience and my ability to understand others.
It all started when I was in middle school.I had a close friend named Emily，and we spent a lot
of time together.One day，Emily introduced me to a new girl in our class，named Olivia.Olivia was
quiet and shy，but we quickly became friends as well.
One afternoon，after school，we were all working on a project in the classroom.As we were
discussing our ideas，Olivia suddenly exclaimed out something that completely contradicted what I had
been saying.I was shocked and felt a little embarrassed.I tried to explain my point of view，but Olivia
was very stubborn and insisted on her own idea.
Emily，who was sitting next to me，tried to mediate （调节） the situation.But Olivia got angry
19and said some unkind words to me.I was hurt and angry，and I couldn't believe that Olivia would treat
me like that.I stormed out of the classroom，leaving Emily and Olivia behind.
The next few days were very difficult for me.I avoided Olivia as much as possible，and our
friendship with Emily seemed to be stressed.I felt like I had been betrayed by Olivia，and I couldn't
understand why she would do such a thing.
One day，I asked Emily why she was still friends with Olivia after what she had done.Emily
looked at me with a sad expression and said，"You know，Olivia has been through a lot lately.Her
parents are going through a divorce，and she's really struggling.Maybe she was rude to you because she
was feeling overwhelmed and insecure."
Hearing this，I felt a surge of guilt.I realized that I hadn't taken the time to understand Olivia's
situation.I had been too quick to judge her and too focused on my own feelings of hurt.I decided to
talk to Olivia and apologize for my behavior.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I found Olivia，she was sitting alone in the hallway.______
Olivia accepted my apology and we had a long conversation.__________
24．（2024•常德模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
At one time children made May Day baskets to celebrate spring and enjoy the rewards of giving
surprising gifts to their beloved ones.When I was in perhaps the third grade，our class took on such an
adventure.For several days，we worked on creating paper baskets.We cut colorful stripes of construction
paper and wove them together，following our teacher，Miss Anderson.We cut and wove and glued.Then
we decorated them with our crayons and more cutting and gluing.Finally，we fitted paper handles onto
the tops so that we could secretly hang our creations on the doors of unsuspecting receivers：surely our
mothers.
We were finished right on time.Miss Anderson brought armloads of flowers for us to use in stuffing
our prizes.Lilacs and tulips and al the colorful flowers of spring.We had to wait until the day was
nearly over before we were allowed to choose the flowers that were just right for our baskets.I chose
the biggest，most beautiful blossoms，allowing myself to be selfish for the sake of my mother.Then we
fidgeted （烦躁） away what remained of our day，waiting for the clock to tick down the minutes to
our release.
20Finally，mercifully，the bell rang!We threw on our coats，gathered our homework and our lunch
boxes，tied on our scarves and then，carefully，we cradled our offerings of love and off we ran to our
individual homes!I was so excited!I ran as fast as I could down the hill，across the street，up the
block ， heading home.I paused at the corner of my house ， to catch my breath and savor the
moment.Then I glanced down to admire my offering one last time before I hung it lovingly over the
doorknob.Horrors!Shock，dread and depression!My flowers were gone!Apparently，bouncing out on my
mad dash home，all that was left was a sad，messed﹣up，wrinkled little empty basket!I stood on the
doorway and burst into mournful sobbing tears.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Para 1
By and by，my mom came to the door to discover the source of the sorrow.___________
Para 2
Soon，my newly﹣decorated basket was ready to be offered again.___________
25．（2024•晋城三模） I was always afraid of water.This fear could not be explained，but I knew
that the moment I stepped near any body of water，my legs would turn to jelly （果冻）.I would
imagine myself drowning in the water and thrashing around （乱扑腾） helplessly.That was why I
had never gone into a swimming pool until swimming became a school requirement.My school
wanted all pupils to pass a swimming test，and if they could not，then they would have to attend
weekly swimming lessons in school，which made me tremble.
Thus，my parents signed me up for swimming lessons at the pool near my house.With great
unwillingness，I attended those weekly lessons，and each one was great suffering for me.I was naturally
clumsy，and my fear of water did not help at all.Every lesson，I would be spending my time thrashing
about in the water，while my classmates would be swimming countless laps effortlessly and even turning
over like dolphins in the water.How was I going to pass the test at this rate？
In my swimming class，there was an exceptionally athletic girl.Tall and muscular，her name was
Kathy.She was the best swimmer in our class and always looked at me with disdain （鄙视），
especially when I thrashed about hopelessly in the water.
Once，after a particularly long and hard swimming lesson，I spotted Kathy swimming gracefully in
the pool.Gathering my courage，I asked gently， "Kathy，can you teach me to swim？" She stared at
21me coldly.It was as if I stood at the edge of an endless ocean of inadequacy，my fears appearing like
dark storm clouds threatening to drown me.Yet，in that moment，a glimmer of hope flashed within
me，a desperate longing for guidance and acceptance.Would Kathy's icy exterior （外表） melt under
the warmth of empathy，or would I remain forever thrashing in the sea of my own fears？
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise，she nodded after a few moments of silence.
______
"Congratulations!" Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test.
______
222025年菁优高考英语解密之读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•新高考Ⅰ）ㅤI met Gunter on a cold，wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had
planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm，my flight
had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the
departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane，I ran like crazy through the
airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second sought.
ㅤThat was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going ，but he said he hadn't heard of the
bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem，so I explained again more slowly，but he
still looked confused.When I was about to give up，Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a
friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century，Gunter put his phone
down and started the car.
ㅤFinally，with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully，there was a long
queue still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus，turned around，and
looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it， "he said.
ㅤJust then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled
out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times，but the card machine just did not play along.A
feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
ㅤAt this moment，Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There at the entrance，
was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car，made a mad run for the machine，and popped my card
in，only to read the message："Out of order.Sorry."
ㅤI ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news._____
ㅤFour days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised._____
【考点】读后续写．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章讲述了一个充满压力的夜晚，作者与一位名叫Gunter的出租车司机的难
忘邂逅。作者赶公共汽车去布拉格参加会议的时间很紧，但由于暴风雨，他的航班延误了。在与时间
的赛跑中，作者遇到了Gunter，Gunter起初不知道公交车站，但通过他的努力和帮助，他们及时赶到
23了车站。然而，作者意识到他没有现金支付给Gunter，车站的银行卡机也出了故障。尽管遇到了种种
障碍，Gunter还是表现出了善意，并确保作者登上了公共汽车。
高分句型一：As I boarded the bus，I promised him that I would repay him as soon as I returned to
Vienna.
译文：当我登上公共汽车时，我向他承诺，我一回到维也纳就会还钱他。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句，as soon as引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Just as you can see，a random kindness in a cold night turned out to be a warm
encounter.
译文：正如你所看到的，在寒冷的夜晚，一次随意的善意变成了一次温暖的邂逅。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.His face fell，but he quickly recovered
and said， "Don't worry，you can get on the bus first and go to conference.You can pay me back
when you coma back." With those words，he waved goodbye to me and urged me to go on the
bus.As I boarded the bus，I promised him that I would repay him as soon as I returned to Vienna.
【高分句型一】His kind gesture had saved me from missing the conference，and I was deeply
grateful.（尽管作者没有现金，Gunter还是让作者上了公共汽车，作者承诺会还钱给他）
Four days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised.He was delighted to hear
from me and told me to meet him at the same taxi rank.I brought with me the exact amount money he
had charged me plus a little extra as a token of my appreciation.As I handed him the money，he
smiled warmly and said， "I was just doing my job.But it's always good to have friends in unexpected
places." Just as you can see，a random kindness in a cold night turned out to be a warm encounter.
【高分句型二】（四天后，作者联系Gunter，并将钱还给他）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
24（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
2．（2024•深圳一模） In our weekly staff meeting，our editor Ashley was not pleased with the
quality of our reporting."Our readership is way down.We need better stories for this Thursday's school
newspaper.Does anybody have any ideas？"she said.
I handed her my article about our basketball team beating Deerfield High School the previous night
by one point."Sports stories are fun，"she said，"but not good enough for the front page.We need
something to really get people's attention."
After our meeting，we left the newsroom together and heard someone screaming，"Perry is
missing!"Perry was a big red parrot and had been our school mascot（吉祥物） for ten years.He played
an important role in students"lives，both in and out of class.He had also been a constant presence at
school events，inspiring a sense of unity among students.
Everyone gathered around Perry's empty cage，heartbroken.Suddenly，a student from the crowd
came over and showed me a photo. "You're a reporter for the school paper，right？I happened to take
this yesterday，"he said.In the photo was a Deerfield High School basketball player with something large
hidden under his shirt around the size of a parrot.
"He must have stolen Perry to get back at us for winning the game!"Ashley cried.We hurried back
to the newsroom，agreeing to run the photo on the front page with the headline "Deerfield Stole
Perry.""This is just the story we need.Everyone will read it，"Ashley said confidently.
After she left，I took a closer look at the photo.The clock in the background read 4：15 pm，but
our game against Deerfield hadn't started until 4：30 pm.Why would the boy have taken Perry before
we even played？An uneasy feeling came over me that we might have falsely accused someone.
I went to Perry's usual caretaker to ask if he knew Perry was missing."He's not missing.He's
retired.He's ready for some quieter days，"he said.Learning the truth，I immediately told Ashley and
suggested writing a story to say goodbye to Perry.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise，Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story.______
On Thursday，the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye，Perry" on the front page.______
【考点】读后续写．
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【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了作者在一家报社工作，他们的吉祥物佩里被迪尔菲尔德高中的篮球运
动员偷走了，调查得知是佩里退休了。阿什利本来想报道被偷这件事，但是作者说明了可能对选手和
报纸的声誉造成的潜在伤害。最后阿什利放弃了，他们报道了佩里退休的新闻，这一报道取得了成功。
高分句型一：Noticing her hesitant expression，I further explained the potential harm it would cause
to the player and our paper 's reputation.
译文：注意到她犹豫的表情，我进一步解释了这会对球员和我们报纸的声誉造成的潜在伤害。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语 Noticing her hesitant expression作状语，it would cause to the
player and our paper 's reputation是省略关系代词的定语从句修饰the potential harm。
高分句型二：Many were disappointed with Perry's sudden departure，but were comforted by the fact
that he was in good care.
译文：许多人对佩里的突然离开感到失望，但他得到了很好的照顾，这让他们感到安慰。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的同位语从句。
【解答】To my surprise，Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story. "This is the
very story we need to attract more readers，"she argued.To convince her，I defended that if we
wrote this article，we would be telling a lie.Noticing her hesitant expression，I further explained the
potential harm it would cause to the player and our paper 's reputation. 【高分句型一】After some
discussion，Ashley finally gave in，"OK，let's try with real stories." Then I went to gather all the
necessary information to write an article about Perry and the precious memories we shared over the
years. （作者反对这一决定，说明了其中的危害以及他们最后决定报道佩里退休的事情）
On Thursday，the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye，Perry" on the front page.Soon，it
sparked heated discussions among students about Perry.Many were disappointed with Perry's sudden
departure，but were comforted by the fact that he was in good care. 【高分句型二】The story also
evoked sweet memories of Perry.Some students even requested to share their stories of him in our
paper!Seeing the story's success，Ashley came to me and said sincerely，"You are right!It's a good
story." Her words brought me a great sense of fulfillment.Indeed，true stories might not always draw
attention，but they have the power to touch and connect.（报道佩里退休的新闻产生的影响以及取得
成功）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
26还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
3．（2024•广东模拟） It took a day's drive，but distance was beside the point.I always enjoyed
long journeys in my father's car with my family.However，things went different that time.We were
moving to a new town，not for any tourist destination，but to settle down，for my father had a new
job there.My mother，sitting on the passenger seat in the front，was talking with my father.She
looked excited for the coming new life.But I was down，feeling nervous about starting a new school
life.Entering a new school meant adapting to a completely different environment and meeting new
classmates and teachers，which I was not good at.
On my first day at the new school，I felt lost and out of place.The students already knew each
other well，and they chatted happily during breaks.I missed my old friends terribly and wished I could
go back to my old school.Feeling lonely，I often spent time alone during breaks and after classes，
reading books in the library or drawing pictures in the art room.I missed the good days I had with my
old friends and longed for that sense of belonging.
As the days went by，I still found it hard to fit in.I was shy and found it difficult to strike up
conversations with my classmates.Some of the kids in my class noticed my discomfort and tried to be
friendly，but I couldn't shake off the feeling of being an outsider.I only had words with my deskmate，
Alex，when necessary.Things took a turn for the worse when I knocked off Alex's water bottle by
accident，although I picked up the bottle immediately and apologized to him.He got mad at me and
seemed not to forgive me.Soon I found we were avoiding each other.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
27However，I was assigned to pair up with Alex to design a poster.______
Alex proudly introduced that the fantastic picture was drawn by me._______
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【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者因父亲工作原因搬到新城镇并转学的经历。在新学校，作者感
到孤独和难以融入，尽管有同学试图友好相处，但作者仍感到自己是个局外人。一次意外导致作者与
同桌关系紧张，使情况进一步恶化。
高分句型一：I was worried that working with Alex would be very difficult because of our previous
relationship.
翻译：我担心由于我们之前的关系，与亚历克斯合作会非常困难。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Moving to a new town was not only challenging，but it also opened up a world of
opportunities and new experiences for me.
翻译：搬到一个新城不仅具有挑战性，而且为我打开了一个充满机遇和新体验的世界。
分析：本句使用了动名词短语Moving to a new town作主语。
【解答】However，I was assigned to pair up with Alex to design a poster.Reluctantly，we started
working together.I was worried that working with Alex would be very difficult because of our
previous relationship.【高分句型一】But to my surprise，as the work progressed，we found that we
shared many common interests.We put a lot of efforts into the drawings and texts，and finally we
completed a quite outstanding poster.Alex seemed to forgive me.He appreciated my efforts and began
to care about my feelings.The teacher highly praised our work and our classmates were amazed at the
picture on the poster.（两人通过合作，关系逐渐得到了改善）
Alex proudly introduced that the fantastic picture was drawn by me.I smiled shyly but happily as my
classmates crowned me and gave me a thumbs up.Slowly but surely ， I started feeling more
comfortable in my new school.I made new friends，including Alex，and began to participate in
activities in and after classes.Moving to a new town was not only challenging，but it also opened up
a world of opportunities and new experiences for me.【高分句型二】（两人的作品很成功，作者也适
应了新的环境）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
28一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
4．（2024•勐海县校级模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
When I was in middle school，my family moved to Seattle，where my parents started their new
business﹣a small grocery store downstairs my house.As a girl of shy and reserved nature，I had to take
a fresh start to fit into the sophisticated city life.
One sunny day，my school announced an exciting event，a talent show for the local food
bank.Students were encouraged to showcase their unique talents in front of the public in the city hall on
National Day.A buzz of excitement filled the school as everyone began preparing for the big day.Deep
down，I felt a spark of curiosity and a desire to participate.However，my self﹣doubt held me back，
"I don't have any special skills to share."
Days turned into weeks，and the talent show drew closer.I couldn't shake the upsetting feeling until
one day Emma，one of the most popular girls in my class，came to me while I was helping in the
grocery store after class. "How about singing together in the talent show？" She grinned， "I heard
you singing a tune，along the way back home.I can't help following you here." Gosh，I couldn't believe
my ears.Emma，with personality and popularity，acknowledged my little talent.Since Emma had the
world's prettiest voice，I felt like being favoured by fortune.
"You two？The talent show for the food bank？" My mum bent towards us and her face lit up."
A big occasion." Then a light bulb seemed to go in her head. "Why not practise right now upstairs？I
bet you'll be a perfect match." Winking at us，she seemed to know we were thinking alike.
Emma and I embarked on rehearsing almost every single day after school.We brainstormed，
exchanged ideas and rehearsed the scene.As the days rolled by，I was feeling pretty good about our
act.But the day before the performance，Emma called that she had an acute stomachache and was not in
any shape to perform.
注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
29（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
I was completely knocked out by the news.___________
Finally came the big moment.___________
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
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【专题】书面表达．
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【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了不自信的作者在中学时期参加才艺表演的故事，原本与同学合作，但
同学突然生病无法表演，作者只好独自登台，最终获得了成功。
高分句型一：As I stood there，feeling at a loss，a gentle touch on my shoulder brought me back to
reality.
译文：当我站在那里不知所措时，轻轻地碰了碰肩膀，我回到了现实。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的时间状语从句，feeling at a loss是现在分词短语作状语。
高分句型二：The crowd watched in awe，their applause and cheers echoing in the hall.
译文：人群肃然起敬地看着，他们的掌声和欢呼声在大厅里回响。
分析：这句话使用了独立主格结构their applause and cheers echoing in the hall作状语。
【解答】I was completely knocked out by the news.Without Emma's voice to guide me，I would
definitely mess up and this was not how everything was supposed to go!As I stood there，feeling at
a loss，a gentle touch on my shoulder brought me back to reality.【高分句型一】It was my mom，
wearing a comforting smile.After having a brief idea of my story，she said in a firm tone，"You've
worked so hard.You can make it on your own." Memories of countless rehearsal came flooding
back，drowning my fears and losses.Swinging into action，I adjusted my performance to a solo，
practicing in no time.（作者得知Emma身体不适不能表演，心里忐忑不安，几番思索，决定独自登
台）
Finally came the big moment.Taking a deep breath，I stepped onto the stage，enveloped in the glow
of the lights.At first，my voice trembled with nervousness，but as the song progressed，my
confidence soared.I poured my emotions into the performance，letting my voice carry my feelings
into the air.The crowd watched in awe，their applause and cheers echoing in the hall.【高分句型二】
Faced with the overwhelming response，I knew that I had overcome my fears.Yes，the unexpected
discouragement can be a blessing in disguise on condition that we have a belief in ourselves and
never give up our dreams.（作者鼓起勇气终于战胜了恐惧，歌唱的很好，取得了成功和作者的感
30悟。）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
5．（2024•于都县校级模拟）
My Best Examination
One day，while at work in a coal﹣mine in Malden，I happened to overhear two miners talking
about a great school for poor people in Virginia.It was Hampton Institute.The school was established to
provide opportunities for poor but worthy students who could work out all or a part of the cost of
board，and at the same time be taught some trade or industry.
I was on fire constantly with one ambition，and that was to go to school.I decided at once to go
to that school.Finally the great day came and I started for Hampton.I had only a small，cheap bag that
contained what few articles of clothing I could get.The distance from Malden to Hampton is about five
hundred miles.I had not been away from home many hours before it began to grow painfully evident
that I did not have enough money to pay my fare （路费） to Hampton.
By walking and begging rides in some way，I finally reached the grounds of the Hampton Institute
after a number of days，tired and dirty.As soon as possible after reaching，I presented myself before the
head teacher for assignment to a class.Having been so long without proper food，a bath，and change of
clothing，I was like a worthless loafer （游荡者）.
I did not，of course，make a very favourable impression upon her，and I could see at once that
there were doubts in her mind about the wisdom of admitting me as a student.I tried to impress her in
all the ways I could with my worthiness.How I wished that I could get a chance to show what was in
31me.
After some time，the head teacher said to me， "The adjoining （隔壁的） classroom needs
sweeping.Take the broom and sweep it."
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.______
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.______
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【答案】It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.Never did I receive an order with more
delight.I knew I could sweep，for my parents thoroughly taught me how to do that when I was
young.I swept the room three times.Then I got a dusting﹣cloth and I dusted it four times.All the
woodwork around the walls，every bench，table and desk，I went over four times with my dusting﹣
cloth，I had the feeling that in a large measure my future depended upon the impression I made
upon the teacher in the cleaning of that room.When I was through，I reported to her.
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.Then she took her
handkerchief and rubbed it on the woodwork about the walls，and over the table and benches.When
she was unable to find one bit of dirt on the floor，or a particle of dust on any of the furniture，
she quietly remarked， "I guess you will do to enter this institution." I was one of the happiest souls
on earth.The sweeping of that room was my college examination!I have passed several examinations
since then，but I have always felt that this was the best one I had ever passed.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者想要去一个为穷人开设的学校去上学，但是没能给班主
任留下好印象。最终作者因为打扫教室一尘不染通过了班主任的测验，被成功认可。
高分句型一：Never did I receive an order with more delight.
翻译：我从未如此高兴地收到订单。
分析：本句使用了never位于句首的部分倒装。
高分句型二：When I was through，I reported to her.
翻译：当我结束时，我向她报告。
分析：本句使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.Never did I receive an order with more
delight.【高分句型一】I knew I could sweep，for my parents thoroughly taught me how to do that
32when I was young.I swept the room three times.Then I got a dusting﹣cloth and I dusted it four
times.All the woodwork around the walls，every bench，table and desk，I went over four times with
my dusting﹣cloth ，I had the feeling that in a large measure my future depended upon the
impression I made upon the teacher in the cleaning of that room.When I was through，I reported to
her.【高分句型二】（作者认真打扫教室的经过以及完成后向班主任报告）
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.Then she took her
handkerchief and rubbed it on the woodwork about the walls，and over the table and benches.When
she was unable to find one bit of dirt on the floor，or a particle of dust on any of the furniture，
she quietly remarked， "I guess you will do to enter this institution." I was one of the happiest souls
on earth.The sweeping of that room was my college examination!I have passed several examinations
since then，but I have always felt that this was the best one I had ever passed.（班主任检查的结果
以及作者被认可）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
6．（2024•许昌模拟） It was time for the ice cream event that my small youth group had waited
for many months.The group consisted of five boys；one of them was Scott.
Scott always had a positive attitude.He looked on the bright side of things and never criticized
anyone.But Scott was different from the rest of us because he was disabled，suffering from a disease
which caused hands shaking constantly.Therefore，he was unable to participate in activities in most
cases.No one ever made fun of him to his face，but at times，people would laugh or stare in his
presence.But Scott never worried；he just kept his head up high and ignored them.
Finally，the night of the ice cream event descended.My friends and I rushed to the church
basement and waited with scoops （冰淇淋勺） in hand for the guests to arrive.One by one，people
33filed in，all hoping to get a creamy and tasty scoop of ice cream.But what they ended up getting was a
hard and frozen mass.We waited for a while for the ice cream to melt，and eventually it did.
Once the ice cream melted，we had another problem.It had turned into three pools of coconut，
chocolate，and strawberry.But we persisted in serving it.We had our chance to serve，except for
Scott.So，being as kind as possible，I gave Scott a chance to scoop and serve.As soon as Scott gripped
the scoop，our ice cream troubles grew beyond control.Milky ice cream was flung in every direction
and made a mess on people，but there was no sign for him to come to a stop on account of his
terrible control of trembling hands.At that moment，a stir of unrest and dissatisfaction rippled through
the crowd.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Abruptly，a woman stormed forward and grabbed the scoop.______
Tears blurred his eyes as Scott got hold of the scoop again._____
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【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，这篇文章讲述了一个年轻团体的冰淇淋活动，其中一个名叫 Scott的
残障人士在众人的嘲笑与失望中勇敢地尝试去参与。最初，他的手的颤抖导致冰淇淋到处乱飞，引起
了不满和愤怒。但随后，有人解释了Scott的奉献精神，人们开始理解并帮助他。最终，活动圆满结束，
展现了理解、温暖和善意的力量。
高分句型一：Astonishment and then silence took hold of the crowd，after which she apologized and
returned the scoop.
翻译：人群中充满了惊讶和沉默，随后她道了歉，把独家新闻还了回去。
分析：本句运用了由介词+关系代词which引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：It was at this moment that I came to the enlightenment that this experience was a
testament of understanding，warmth and kindness.
翻译：就在那一刻，我领悟到，这段经历证明了理解、温暖和善良。
分析：本句运用了强调句"It is+被强调部分+that+其他"。
【解答】 Abruptly，a woman stormed forward and grabbed the scoop.She clenched her fist，
knitted her eyebrows and glared at Scott.Suddenly ， she held the scoop high and roared to
blame.Meanwhile，a flush of dissatisfaction and then fury overwhelming the crowd，they began to
34yell.Evidently，Scott was scared，rooted to the spot，with his forehead sweaty and his face pale.At
the sight of this，I stepped forward，cleared my throat and shouted to explain Scott's spirit of
devotion despite disability.Astonishment and then silence took hold of the crowd，after which she
apologized and returned the scoop.【高分句型一】（描写了该女士对Scott的行为感到生气，对其责备
和怒吼，并且描述Scott害怕和失落的情绪及表现，以及描写作者为Scott的情况进行解释）
Tears blurred his eyes as Scott got hold of the scoop again.He strained every nerve to control his
hands to scoop ice cream.So regretful was the woman that she even came to assist him.Now，fully
aware of the situation，the crowd settled down and stood in line.They beamed with smiles and offered
words of encouragement as they received ice cream.As the last scoop of ice cream was served，a
symphony of laughter and euphoria permeated the basement.It was at this moment that I came to the
enlightenment that this experience was a testament of understanding，warmth and kindness.【高分句型
二】（描写了Scott对作者的行为表示感激，并且愤怒女士了解Scott的情况后感到后悔，以及描写作者
的感悟）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
7．（2024秋•寻甸县校级月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇
完整的短文．续写词数应为 150 左右．
It was time to go home． "Remember to work on your class speeches for homework，" Miss
Walker called as everyone started talking and packing their school bags．Jenny felt sick．She hated
having to read aloud in class．She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her．Once，when
Jenny was reading out her holiday diary，Lee was even looking at his watch，a silver and blue one
which seemed just magical．
35Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school．He seemed so clever，and he had a
certain sort of shining confidence．He was just one of those people who were good at everything．
Jenny sighed．As she turned the corner，she saw Lee's watch lying right in the middle of the path．
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him，but she didn't want to run after him．
Jenny bent down quickly，picked up the watch and ran home．On arriving home，Jenny put it on
almost without thinking．She was surprised it fitted so well．She walked to the mirror and started
practising her speech．Words just flooded out of her． "I'm going to talk about swimming．I have been
lucky．I've won lots of competitions．But when I'm in a race，I'm not really thinking about winning．
I'm just loving the feeling of being in the water…" Jenny laughed with excitement．She walked across
the room．She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence．Turning back to the mirror，
Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass．The flashes of silver seemed almost magical．
So maybe Lee's watch really DID have something magic about it．
The next day，as the lesson began，Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first．
Nobody moved．Jenny slowly raised her arm．Before Miss Walker could say anything，there was a
shout from behind ． "She's stolen my watch!" Lee said angrily ， "It went missing at school
yesterday．"
Paragraph 1：
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny，waiting for an explanation．_________．
Paragraph 2：
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first．_______．
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【分析】高分句型一：She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all．
译文：她觉得很害怕，手表一点也不神奇．
分析：使用so+形容词+that+从句的句型．
高分句型二：Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech Jenny
smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence．
译文：十分钟后，全班同学都站起来为珍妮精彩的演讲鼓掌．珍妮终于意识到了真正的信心来源，她
笑了．
分析：as引导时间状语从句．
【解答】Paragraph 1：
36Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny，waiting for an explanation．Jenny didn't answer．How
could she explain about the watch and its magic ？No one could understand．No one could
believe．"But I saw you wearing it yesterday，"Miss Walker gently reminded him．For a moment
Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that Jenny was relieved saying
she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech．（Lee说出真相）
Paragraph 2：
Everybody was puzzled and asked why．Jenny again was speechless．
At that，Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speach first．Jenny walked
slowly to the front She couldn't think properly．All round her，a sea of faces was watching．She
felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all． 【高分句型一】Suddenly she saw Miss
Walker's encouraging eyes．Jenny took a deep breath．"I'm going to talk about swimming.."Ten
minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech Jenny smiled as she
eventually realized the real source of confidence．【高分句型二】（Jenny成功演讲获得自信）
【点评】读后续写，简言之，就是阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后，根据要求和提示把这篇文章未写
完部分补充完整，使之浑然﹣体．它一方面很好地考查考生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力，而另方
面，它也培养学生的发散思维能力．根据《考试说明》该部分的规定，考生在续写文章时，要注意续
写部分"与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度"，"内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况"，"应
用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性"以及"上下文的连贯性"．根据这些规定，我们会发现读后续写有
如下特点：（1）读后续写不是随心所欲，是要在引导语（开头语）和提示词的帮助下完成续写部分．
如《考试说明》样题中规定"应使用5个以上短文中标有下划绨的关键词语（10处）"．这些关键词语
类似于传统写作中的要点提示，如人物、地点、事件，但是不同点在于这些关键词语并不是全用．这
样考生可根据自己的理解有很大的自主权．另外，所续写部分不能脱离各自段落的首句开头语，即：
不能另起炉灶．这些开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在某种程度E引导的思路向哪方面发展．
8．（2024•江西模拟） Bonnie raised her granddaughter alone after the girl's parents died.She hated
her granddaughter's art and wanted her to stop drawing.But everything changed when Mr.Henderson，
a famous cartoonist，appeared at her doorstep.
One day，Bonnie called out to Amy as she took the chicken out."Dinner is ready，honey!Come
soon!"But Amy didn't answer.
Bonnie finished setting the table and served them dinner，but she still didn't hear a response from
Amy."Amy？Honey，your dinner is getting cold!Are you coming？"she asked her 10﹣year﹣old
granddaughter again.
When Amy didn't respond，Bonnie climbed the stairs to the girl's room and pushed the door
37open.Amy sat at her desk，with her headphones on.At first，Bonnie thought Amy was studying，but
then she noticed the drawing sheet on the table in front of Amy.Bonnie frowned（皱眉） in anger.
"Amy!"Bonnie screamed，and the girl turned around and removed her headphones.
"Granny？L…I was just..."Amy said.
Bonnie stormed up to Amy's desk，and the little girl tried to cover the drawing，but it was too
late.
"Did you finish your math homework，little girl？Mrs.Warren called me today.And she told me
you've been ignoring her assignments!"Bonnie said angrily.
"I'll finish the homework，"Amy said."I was planning on doing it once I finished the sketch（素
描） I was working on，Granny."
"I'm tired of that hobby of yours，Amy!You're no longer doing those drawings!"Bonnie went
on."Those things you draw are not going to help you in the future!You finish your dinner，and then
you'll be doing your homework.You're not leaving the house to play with your friends until you finish
your homework.Am I clear？"Bonnie said and stormed out of Amy's room.
Minutes later，Amy walked into the kitchen and quietly sat at the table.They began eating dinner in
silence.Bonnie was already in a terrible mood，so she didn't ask about Amy's day like she usually
did.Suddenly，the doorbell rang.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr.Henderson._______
Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs.Warren for advice.________
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【答案】Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr.Henderson.He said he had received a
letter with some samples of Amy's art work and was so impressed by her talent.Mr.Henderson asked
if Amy would like to apply for an art training program this summer.He would personally teach Amy
and the other students.And if everything went well，Amy would be able to enroll at his academy
and pursue her dream for art.Although she wanted to go，she had to ask her grandmother for
permission.
Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs.Warren for advice.Bonnie called up
Mrs.Warren，who answered the phone and learned about Amy's situation.She said excitedly，"Since
38Amy is gifted in drawing，this is a golden opportunity for her!"Bonnie finally accepted Mrs.Warren's
suggestion.Hearing their conversation on the phone.Amy promised to finish her math homework on
time in the future，and couldn't help jumping.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了Amy喜欢美术，Amy奶奶的态度从不支持到支持的改变。
高分句型一：Mr.Henderson asked if Amy would like to apply for an art training program this
summer.
翻译：Henderson先生问Amy是否愿意申请今年夏天的艺术培训项目。
分析：本句使用了if引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Although she wanted to go，she had to ask her grandmother for permission.
翻译：尽管她想去，但还是得征得祖母的同意。
分析：本句使用了although引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr.Henderson.He said he had received a
letter with some samples of Amy's art work and was so impressed by her talent.Mr.Henderson asked
if Amy would like to apply for an art training program this summer.【高分句型一】He would
personally teach Amy and the other students.And if everything went well，Amy would be able to
enroll at his academy and pursue her dream for art.Although she wanted to go，she had to ask her
grandmother for permission.【高分句型二】（Mr.Henderson来家里，希望Amy可以学美术）
Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs.Warren for advice.Bonnie called up
Mrs.Warren，who answered the phone and learned about Amy's situation.She said excitedly，"Since
Amy is gifted in drawing，this is a golden opportunity for her!"Bonnie finally accepted Mrs.Warren's
suggestion.Hearing their conversation on the phone.Amy promised to finish her math homework on
time in the future，and couldn't help jumping.（在征求了Mrs.Warren的意见后，奶奶同意了Amy学
美术）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
39在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
9．（2024•合川区校级模拟） Every Sunday，the competition started.The three of us would set our
alarm clocks to wake up earlier than anyone else.I had set my alarm clock to six in the morning，
hoping that my brothers wouldn't start before me.
Beep.Beep.Beep.Groaning，I reached over to my nightstand and slapped the top of my alarm clock.
"Too early on this cold winter day，" I murmured.I curled back into my warm blanket and fell asleep
again.
My eyes blinked open to the whirring sound of the vacuum cleaner. "They chose their chores first!"
I thought with despair.I jumped up from my bed and rushed to the bathroom，where I started the only
chore that was left for me.I would definitely be shoveling （铲） the driveway while they built an
igloo （冰屋） ，I thought cheerlessly，rubbing and wiping madly at the toilet bowl.
When I finished cleaning the toilet and sink，my brothers came into the bathroom to watch me
clean the bathtub as they mocked me about how I'd overslept and got stuck with the longest chore.
"Whoever finishes last has to shovel the driveway，remember？" my older brother reminded me with a
triumphant smile when we put on our big coats and snow pants to go outside.
The three of us stepped outside into the knee﹣deep snow and shielded our eyes from the
brightness.My brothers wasted no time and dashed off to play in the yard，leaving me behind to tackle
the frustrating task of shoveling the driveway.With a heavy sigh，I inched through the thick snow to the
driveway，my boots sinking with each step.I grunted （嘟哝） with effort as my brothers yelled with
joy.Sunday would never be my day，I sighed.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly，I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete.
______
After we finished，we sat inside the igloo，laughing about our morning adventures.
______
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【答案】 Suddenly，I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete.Turning
around，I saw my brothers busily scooping snow from the driveway. "We're not helping：we just
40need blocks of snow for our igloo，" my younger brother explained hastily.Watching them，I couldn't
help but smile.Despite their explanation，it was clear that they were helping me，which greatly
warmed my heart.With their help，the task became easier，and soon scoop by scoop，we cleared out
the driveway together，laughing and chatting as we worked.We dug up enough snow to build the
igloo of our dreams.
After we finished，we sat inside the igloo，laughing about our morning adventures.As we sipped on
some hot cocoa，the warmth of the cocoa and the snugness of the igloo made me forget all about the
cold outside.Looking around at my brothers' smiling faces.I felt a warm sense of contentment.Despite our
silly competitions and occasional teasing ， there was nowhere else I'd rather be than right
there.surrounded by my family.As we sat together.I couldn't help but feel grateful for these moments.It
wasn't just about the igloo or the hot cocoa：it was about the bond we shared as siblings.That day，as
we sat in our cozy snow fortress.I realized that our rivalry was just a small part of the love and
support we had for each other.And that's what made our Sundays so special.
【分析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者因为比兄弟们起床晚不得不做最繁重的家务并清理车道，
作者因此非常沮丧，后来兄弟们来帮助作者清理积雪，作者心情放松下来，与兄弟们建立了冰屋，一
起坐在冰屋里喝着热可可，作者感到非常满足，对家人充满感激。
高分句型一：Turning around，I saw my brothers busily scooping snow from the driveway.
翻译：转过身，我看到我的兄弟们正忙着从车道上铲雪。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语Turning around作状语。
高分句型二：Despite their explanation，it was clear that they were helping me，which greatly
warmed my heart.
翻译：尽管他们解释了，但很明显他们是在帮助我，这让我很温暖。
分析：本句运用了that引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 Suddenly，I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete.Turning
around，I saw my brothers busily scooping snow from the driveway. 【高分句型一】"We're not
helping：we just need blocks of snow for our igloo，" my younger brother explained hastily.Watching
them，I couldn't help but smile.Despite their explanation，it was clear that they were helping me，
which greatly warmed my heart.【高分句型二】With their help，the task became easier，and soon
scoop by scoop，we cleared out the driveway together，laughing and chatting as we worked.We dug
up enough snow to build the igloo of our dreams.（描写了兄弟们帮助作者一起清理积雪的过程和作
者内心的感受）
After we finished，we sat inside the igloo，laughing about our morning adventures.As we sipped on
41some hot cocoa，the warmth of the cocoa and the snugness of the igloo made me forget all about the
cold outside.Looking around at my brothers' smiling faces.I felt a warm sense of contentment.Despite our
silly competitions and occasional teasing ， there was nowhere else I'd rather be than right
there.surrounded by my family.As we sat together.I couldn't help but feel grateful for these moments.It
wasn't just about the igloo or the hot cocoa：it was about the bond we shared as siblings.That day，as
we sat in our cozy snow fortress.I realized that our rivalry was just a small part of the love and
support we had for each other.And that's what made our Sundays so special.（描写了兄弟们在冰屋里一
起的快乐时光以及作者的感悟）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
10．（2024•固始县校级二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
Lily was renowned for her desire to achieve perfection in everything she undertook.Whether it was
school projects，art assignments，or even helping her parents with household chores，Lily's commitment
to excellence was unwavering.
One sunny summer day，Lily's family decided to spend a day at the beach.As they arrived，Lily's
eyes were immediately drawn by a group of children who playfully built and then tore down their
sandcastles.They giggled and shouted，their excitement on full display. "How silly， " she thought，not
quite getting why they enjoyed doing that.
Lily，being herself，decided to build a perfect sandcastle that would become the envy of all
beachgoers.She began to plan every detail in her mind，from the balanced structures of the towers to
the delicate decorations.Then ， she set about piling sand to make the towers and walls of her
42sandcastle.Painstakingly，she crafted each feature of her work，carefully smoothed the surfaces and
adjusting every detail to her vision.
Jake，Lily's younger brother，didn't seem too concerned with building a fantastic sandcastle.He
picked a spot nearby and amused himself with the sand.He scooped up handfuls of sand，let it slip
through his fingers like grains of time，and then molded it into careless shapes with the carefree
abandon of a child.Jake's happiness was contagious.Mom and Dad joined him，laughing and joking over
Jake's playful creations.From time to time，they called out to Lily and invited her to join the fun，
knowing that the pursuit of perfection could be exhausting.
Nevertheless，Lily stayed where she was，determined to create an impressive sandcastle.She frowned
at Jake's unconventional，abstract art﹣like sandcastle shapes and persisted in her efforts.However，the
process didn't go as smoothly as she had anticipated.The sand didn't always hold its shape，and the
waves constantly lapped at the edges of her creation.
Para 1：As the day wore on，Lily's sandcastle kept losing its form.___________
Para 2：With bitter smile，Lily decided to join her family.___________
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【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了Lily在海滩上建造沙堡的经历，并对比了她追求完美主义和弟弟 Jake
享受快乐的态度。通过这个故事，作者表达了接受并欣赏生活中的不完美和欢乐的重要性。
高分句型一：But no matter how hard she tried，the elements seemed to conspire against her.
译文：但是，无论她多么努力，这些因素似乎都对她不利。
分析：这句话使用了no matter how引导的让步状语从句。
高分句型二：It was in that moment that she truly began to understand the beauty of imperfection
and the importance of enjoying the simple things in life.
译文：正是在那一刻，她真正开始理解不完美的美和享受生活中简单事物的重要性。
分析：这句话使用了强调句。
【解答】Para 1：As the day wore on，Lily's sandcastle kept losing its form.Despite her best efforts
to mold and shape the sand，the waves and the wind seemed determined to undo her hard
work.Frustration started to creep in as she watched her masterpiece crumble time and time
again.Determined not to give up，Lily redoubled her efforts，trying to salvage what was left of her
sandcastle.But no matter how hard she tried，the elements seemed to conspire against her.【高分句型
43一】The once﹣perfect sandcastle now resembled a lopsided ruin，a stark reminder of her failed
attempt at perfection.（虽然Lily一直在努力，但是却阻止不了自己的沙堡被海浪毁了）
Para 2：With bitter smile，Lily decided to join her family.Sitting down next to Jake，she observed
his carefree laughter and the joy on her parents' faces.For the first time that day，she realized that
perhaps there was more to life than striving for perfection.In that moment，Lily made a choice.She
let go of her obsession with the sandcastle and joined in the fun.She laughed，played，and created
sandcastles without the burden of expectations.It was in that moment that she truly began to
understand the beauty of imperfection and the importance of enjoying the simple things in life.【高分
句型二】 （Lily和家人堆沙堡时终于感悟到不完美也是快乐的）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
11．（2024•上杭县校级模拟） I didn't like Del so much.He always called me the nickname
"Germy，" which meant"dirty，"instead of my real name"Jamie."Besides，he was known as a trouble
﹣maker in school.So when the head teacher Mr.Smith asked Del to come to his office，I naturally
thought that Del had done something mean to someone.Through the window，I caught sight of a
smaller boy crying.Del seemed unhappy，too.
He did not return to class that day.All of us were discussing what had happened to him.What else
could such an annoying boy do？"He must have hit the boy and was sent home，"I whispered to my
friends.Their eyes widened.It felt good to see them so interested in what I said.
The next morning，the whole school was talking about Del being expelled （开除） for beating up
a kid.I was surprised that my assumptions were passed on so quickly.So when Del walked into the
44classroom，all the kids were shocked.The kids next to him shifted their desks away."What's your
problem？"Del asked."I don't want you to attack me，"one kid said.Some laughed."Yeah，I might，"said
Del.I could tell he was joking，but many kids thought he admitted he did beat up someone.
During recess（课间休息），Del tried to join the kickball game."Neither team wants you，"one of
the players said."Why？"Del asked，looking confused."I always play with you guys."They ignored him
and went on playing.Del sat by himself while the rest of the school enjoyed their recess away from
him.Del looked lonely and sad，much different from before.I started to feel sorry for him.
Later that day，I learned what really happened.The kid was Del's little brother and he was crying
because their mother fell ill and was sent to hospital.I felt even sorrier for what I said before.I started a
rumor （谣言）.
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At recess the next day，I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game.
Now that Del had forgiven me，I decided to do more before the recess was over.
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【分析】本文为记叙文。文章主要讲述了一个叫Del的男孩总是叫作者外号。作者不喜欢他。一天作
者看见Del在老师办公室，另外还有一个男孩在哭。作者告诉其他同学，Del欺负这个小男孩，被开除
了。这个谣言在学校传开。在Del回到学校后，同学们都不愿意和Del在一起。
高分句型一：I sat next to him and gradually uttered the whole thing about how my hasty assumption
turned into such a terrible rumor.
译文：我坐在他旁边，渐渐地说出了我草率的假设是如何变成如此可怕的谣言的。
分析：这句话使用了how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：His words soothed me，but I could feel he was still sad.
译文：他的话安慰了我，但我能感觉到他仍然很难过。
分析：这句话使用了省略了关系代词的宾语从句he was still sad。
【解答】 At recess the next day，I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game.I hated the
nickname "Germy，" but seeing him isolated was also not what I wanted.Guilt pushed me to him.
"What do you want，Germy？" Del asked，his voice sounding more hurt than angry.I sat next to
him and gradually uttered the whole thing about how my hasty assumption turned into such a terrible
45rumor.【高分句型一】 "I'm sorry.I wish I had never said that，" I apologized，daring not to look
into his eyes.Annoyance and surprise flickered across his face.But seconds later，he lowered his head
and said quietly， "It's okay.I guess I wasn't very nice to you，either." His words soothed me，but I
could feel he was still sad. 【高分句型二】（作者向Del道歉，Del也为之前给作者起外号向作者道
歉）
Now that Del had forgiven me，I decided to do more before the recess was over.I walked towards
the kickball players and called for their attention.Everyone stopped in surprise. "Del didn't beat up
anyone，" I stated，explaining what actually happened.Whispers of astonishment spread and finally one
player shouted， "Alright，Del，do you want to join my team？" A smile broke through Del's gloomy
face， "Yes，and I want Jamie on it，too!" He glanced at me shyly，and I could tell his use of my
real name was his way of making an apology.Soon the playground was filled with laughter and talks.But
this time they made me realize something—words have the power to hurt and heal. （作者向同学们解
释Del并没有欺负男孩，他们冰释前嫌，作者意识到语言有伤害和治愈的力量。）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
12．（2024•绍兴二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Kevin woke to the blaring beep of his alarm clock. "Can't wait for that camping trip，" Kevin
thought，filled with excitement.As he was leaving home，his dad grabbed him by the hand and said，
"Before you go，just tell me the directions on where you and your friends are going to stay."
"But dad!" Kevin complained.
46"No buts!" Kevin's dad added.
"Fine." Kevin told him the directions and left.
The three friends，Kevin，Jay and Nathan，had been planning this adventure for weeks，packing
their stuff﹣tents，snacks，and a map﹣preparing for a 3﹣day outdoor exploration.Excitement ran
through Kevin as they departed for their campsite. "This trip is going to be awesome， " Nathan
excitedly yelled as they set off.But little did they know that nature had a surprise in store for them.
The first day at the campsite was going great，setting up tents，collecting firewood，and sharing
stories. "Man，we nailed these tents， " Kevin said. "I know it was easy really，" Nathan replied.The
friends were happy.
Yet towards night，as the dark clouds gathered overhead，the atmosphere shifted，and a sudden
storm erupted with unforgiving anger.Rain poured down from the heavens like a relentless waterfall，
transforming the peaceful campsite into a muddy battleground.Worse still，a huge tree was uprooted and
crashed down with a deafening crack on their only means of escape ﹣ their car.Kevin's eyes widened
in horror as he spotted the damaged wreckage beneath the fallen giant. "Our car!" he screamed over the
howling wind，his voice a mix of disbelief and despair. "We're stuck here，" he declared，his words
barely audible against the backdrop of thunder and raindrops.They realized that their plans had been
violently spoiled by forces beyond their control.The once quiet campsite now stood as a deserted
battlefield，the fallen tree serving as a painful reminder of the unpredictable nature of the world around
them.
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（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：The next day，they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding
water.________
Paragraph 2：On the third night，a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.________
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【分析】本文以人物为线索展开。凯文和朋友杰伊和内森要去露营，在爸爸的追问下告诉爸爸方向，
然后离开了。然而，夜幕降临时，一场突如其来的风暴带着无情的愤怒爆发了。一棵大树，轰然倒下，
击中了他们唯一的逃生工具——他们的汽车。他们意识到他们的计划被他们无法控制的力量粗暴地破
坏了。
47高分句型一：However，with time passing by，more challenges emerged ﹣limited food，frightful
night filled with wilderness sounds，and the uncertainty of survival in the wild.
翻译：然而，随着时间的推移，更多的挑战出现了——食物有限，充满荒野声音的可怕夜晚，以及野
外生存的不确定性。
分析：运用了with time passing by的with复合结构。
高分句型二：The emotions that played across their faces ﹣ disbelief，gratitude，and overwhelming
joy﹣ mirrored the shared trouble that had forged a deep bond among them.
翻译：他们脸上流露出的情绪——难以置信、感激和压倒性的喜悦﹣﹣反映了在他们之间建立深厚联
系的共同麻烦。
分析：运用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】The next day，they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water.The
search for water soon drained their energy.They were about to give up when they heard a small
sound，a splash of some sort.They ran as fast as they could and found a small stream﹣a lifeline in
all the challenges.However，with time passing by，more challenges emerged ﹣limited food，frightful
night filled with wilderness sounds，and the uncertainty of survival in the wild.【高分句型一】Their
nerves were near the edge of breaking down after long hours of uncertainty in the wilderness.（他们
寻找水的艰难过程和面临的其它挑战。）
On the third night，a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.Relief washed over the weary
faces as they witnessed the approach of a rugged vehicle.Kevin's dad stepped out to meet the
group.The emotions that played across their faces ﹣ disbelief，gratitude，and overwhelming joy﹣
mirrored the shared trouble that had forged a deep bond among them.【高分句型二】Back home，
Kevin's dad said， "Good thing you told me those directions，" teaching them the importance of
informing someone about plans.The experience turned into tales of courage and resilience，embedded
in their memories as lessons for a lifetime.（他们获救的过程和感悟。）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
要注意续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
48根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
13．（2024•湖北二模） I faced a tight budget when I was nine.On November 1st，I used up most
of the money I saved.With a small amount of pocket money left before Christmas I didn't have
enough to buy presents for the family.
I was seriously considering going to my dad and asking for an advance on the next year's pocket
money，so I could at least buy gifts for my family members.But then，one evening，I was sitting in
my room reading advertisements in the back of a magazine.Several greeting﹣card companies were telling
us how people could make money by selling their cards and stationery （文具）.Normally，I would
have passed right over the ads，but this time my situation was so difficult that I felt I had nothing to
lose.
The ad that attracted me most was one by a well﹣known greeting﹣card company in my nation，
whose products were of high quality.With my parents' help，I contacted the company，although they
preferred adults or older kids to advertise their products.After my sincere request，they agreed to give
me，a nine﹣year﹣old boy，a chance.
My sales materials arrived within the week.I had expected something small and neat，but the
package looked like a dinosaur's shoebox it was close to three feet long and nearly a foot wide，full of
stuff.There was a thick binder （活页夹） containing a complete selection of the cards and some
writing paper，which I would be selling for around ＄3 per box.
Although my parents supported my try to make money by myself，they had little confidence in my
success；after all，instead of an outgoing kid，I was somewhat shy.However，I was determined to have
a try to challenge myself.
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Wasting no time，I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood.________
Eventually，I earned over ＄20，a large sum of money for a 9﹣year﹣old kid in 1954.________
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【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，以人物为线索。作者九岁的时候预算紧张，没有足够的钱给家人买圣诞
礼物。一天他在看杂志的时候发现了一则关于如何卖贺卡和文具赚钱的广告，于是作者在父母的帮助
下联系了国内最知名的一家贺卡公司，请求给自己一个机会。作者收到贺卡公司寄来的销售材料后就
开始了行动，他挨家挨户地推销产品，获得了不错的反馈。这个经历不仅缓解了作者的财务状况，也
让作者产生了成就感和自信心。
高分句型一：Gathering my courage，I introduced myself as the young representative of the well﹣
known greeting﹣card company.
翻译：我鼓起勇气，介绍自己是一家著名贺卡公司的年轻代表。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语Gathering my courage作状语和as引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：The community's response exceeded my expectations，and the support that I received
went beyond mere financial transactions.
翻译：社区的反应超出了我的预期，我得到的支持也超越了单纯的金融交易。
分析：本句运用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Wasting no time，I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood.Gathering my
courage，I introduced myself as the young representative of the well﹣known greeting﹣card company.
【高分句型一】The initial responses were mixed — some were hesitant，while others were fascinated
by the idea of a child engaged in such a venture.As I showcased the high﹣quality cards and shared
the story behind each design ， the doubt began to fade away ， replaced by genuine
interest.Surprisingly，my shy character transformed into enthusiasm，and I found myself engaging in
conversations that extended beyond the purpose of sales.（描写了作者挨家挨户推销贺卡的经历）
Eventually，I earned over ＄20，a large sum of money for a 9﹣year﹣old kid in 1954.The
community's response exceeded my expectations，and the support that I received went beyond mere
financial transactions.【高分句型二】Neighbors were not just buying cards；they were encouraging a
young entrepreneur.This unexpected journey into sales not only alleviated my financial concerns for
Christmas but also instilled a sense of accomplishment and self﹣confidence.It broadened my horizons
and laid the foundation for a newfound belief in the possibilities that determination and courage could
unfold，regardless of age.（描写了这次经历不仅给作者带来了经济收益，还让作者有了成就感和自信
心）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
50（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
14．（2024•广东二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
After a busy week，Emily and her parents decided to go on a mountain picnic.They longed to fully
experience nature's beauty and enjoy quality family time.Little did they know，this outing would be
filled with unexpected twists and turns （波折）.
Arriving at the mountain's base，they discovered a house，in front of which Mike and his father
had just finished loading a boat onto Mike's truck.Emily approached them and asked for the best picnic
spot in the area.Knowing the mountain well，Mike suggested a location about two hours' walk away.
"It's worth the effort，" he assured them.
Parking their car next to Mike's truck and carrying their picnic supplies，Emily and her parents set
off on the winding road.Tall green trees on one side，a flowing stream on the other，the road
eventually led them to a breathtaking clearing dotted with colorful wildflowers.They enjoyed their
delicious sandwiches，fruits，and snacks，engaging in pleasant conversations.
Just as they finished their meal and settled down to relax，dark clouds unexpectedly rolled in.It
looked like rain.Panicked，they hurriedly set up the tent they had brought.No sooner had they entered
than raindrops began pouring on the roof.Heavy rain enveloped the surroundings，making it impossible
to see anything.They had no choice but to patiently wait it out.
After what felt like a century，the rain ceased.Emily and her parents wasted no time packing up
their belongings，ready to get downhill.However，their excitement turned to worry when they discovered
that the small stream they had previously crossed had turned into a wide and impassable river.With no
cellphone signal，they were trapped without a means of seeking help.To make matters worse，darkness
was approaching.
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51（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly，they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river.________
Emily and her parents boarded the boat.________
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【答案】Suddenly，they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river.It was Mike and his
father returning from their fishing trip.Upon seeing Emily and her parents stranded，Mike immediately
jumped into action.He quickly tied a rope to his truck and threw it across the river. "Grab the rope
and we'll pull you across!" shouted Mike's father.With trembling hands，Emily and her parents
grasped the rope and were slowly pulled to the other side.
Emily and her parents boarded the boat.Mike's father skillfully navigated the boat through the
turbulent waters，while Mike provided comfort and reassurance.As they made their way down the
mountain，Emily and her parents were filled with gratitude.The experience had been unexpectedly
challenging，but they had come out stronger and with newfound friends.The memory of that day
would forever be etched in their hearts.
【分析】Emily和父母周末去山上野餐，想享受自然美景和家庭时光。不料遭遇意外天气，被困山上。
幸遇Mike父子，他们用绳子和船将他们救回，让他们得以安全下山。这次经历让他们感激不已，也收
获了新朋友。
高分句型一：Mike's father skillfully navigated the boat through the turbulent waters，while Mike
provided comfort and reassurance.
翻译：迈克的父亲熟练地驾驶着船穿过汹涌的海水，而迈克则提供了安慰和保证。
分析：本句使用了while引导的比较状语从句。
高分句型二：As they made their way down the mountain，Emily and her parents were filled with
gratitude.
翻译：当他们下山时，艾米丽和她的父母充满了感激之情。
分析：本句使用了as引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Suddenly，they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river.It was Mike and his
father returning from their fishing trip.Upon seeing Emily and her parents stranded，Mike immediately
jumped into action.He quickly tied a rope to his truck and threw it across the river. "Grab the rope
and we'll pull you across!" shouted Mike's father.With trembling hands，Emily and her parents
grasped the rope and were slowly pulled to the other side.（Mike和他的父亲捕鱼归来，用绳子将他
52们拉过河流）
Emily and her parents boarded the boat.Mike's father skillfully navigated the boat through the
turbulent waters，while Mike provided comfort and reassurance.【高分句型一】As they made their
way down the mountain，Emily and her parents were filled with gratitude. 【高分句型二】The
experience had been unexpectedly challenging，but they had come out stronger and with newfound
friends.The memory of that day would forever be etched in their hearts.（这次经历虽然充满了挑战，
但也让他们结识了新的朋友，留下了深刻的记忆）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
15．（2024•上城区校级模拟） Tom and Jane planned a holiday at the lake，and they decided to
take their children，Tim and Sarah，with them.However，Tim and Sarah wanted：to visit Disney
World for their holiday or hire a yacht （游艇） in Hawaii.Camping by the lake wasn't even on
their list of holiday adventures.
"We can visit some of the islands too，" Jane said. "Your dad and I always wanted to explore the
mysterious cabin on Moose Island."
Mysterious cabin？The children were now far more interested in this lake holiday idea.
"We might see Big foot，" Tim said.
"Or some unusual species!" Sarah turned to her parents. "We're in.When do we leave？"
The children's excitement quickly disappeared when they arrived at the lake.While their parents were
carrying their suitcases inside，Timand Sarah stood on the path and stared at the cabin they'd be staying
in for the next week，complaining about the smell around，the dust，and the various small insects.
"We're in nature now，kids.Enjoy the experience!Your dad is building a fire so we can have
barbecued fish and potatoes baked in the coals.Isn't that great？"
53Sarah choked. "I am not eating food cooked in coals!I want takeaway instead."
"Me too." Tim was about to cry. "Holidays are supposed to be fun，Mom."
"Come on，guys.There's a lot of joy to be found in living a simple life and spending time together
as a family."
"People in the suburbs live a simple life，which is more like being homeless!" Sarah shouted
"Yeah，" Tim added. "How can there not be a single restaurant that delivers here？How do these
people survive？"
"They eat coal potatoes!" Sarah laughed. "And fish they kill with their bare hands!"
Sarah ran away，and Tim followed.Jane buried her head in her hands.She realized she had to do
something to correct their children's attitude towards simple life.After dinner，she told all about this to
Tom，who agreed with Jane.Then they came up with an idea.
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（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：The next morning，Tim and Sarah entered the main room to demand they leave
immediately，but neither Mom nor Dad was in there.
______
Paragraph 2：When Tim was about to fall asleep，he heard the sound of heavy footsteps outside，
which were approaching.
______
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【分析】本文以人物为线索展开。汤姆和简计划去湖边度假，但他们的孩子蒂姆和萨拉不愿意。汤姆
和简说服了孩子们。但是孩子们到达之后不喜欢大自然，尤其是不想吃炭火烤鱼和土豆。夫妻二人决
定想办法改变孩子们的看法。
高分句型一：They looked everywhere for the figure of father and mother，inside and outside，but
only to find that they were indeed not here.
翻译：他们到处寻找爸爸和妈妈的身影，里里外外，却发现他们确实不在这里。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：This time，they seemed so delicious，which nothing could be compared with.
翻译：这一次，他们似乎是如此美味，没有什么可以与之相比。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
54【 解 答 】 The next morning ， Tim and Sarah entered the main room to demand they leave
immediately，but neither Mom nor Dad was in there.They looked everywhere for the figure of father
and mother，inside and outside，but only to find that they were indeed not here.【高分句型一】They
began to panic，thinking Tom and Jane had abandoned them.Soon it was noon.Seeing that there was
nothing to eat at once，they were desperate.Suddenly they remembered that her parents had said that
they could cook barbecued fish and potatoes，so they immediately put into practice，hoping to
quickly fill their stomachs.But they could do nothing and it was getting dark.（描写了他们发现父母
不在后的心理活动和动作）
When Tim was about to fall asleep，he heard the sound of heavy footsteps outside，which were
approaching.Tim woke up quickly to see who was coming.He saw his mother and father，waking
Sarah up happily.Mom and dad saw their faces were blackened because of coal，moved to hug and
praise them，and said "This is a simple life，children.You must enjoy the experience of nature." And
quickly they brought out the barbecued fish and potatoes.This time，they seemed so delicious，which
nothing could be compared with.【高分句型二】（描写了父母回来后孩子们的动作和心理活动）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
16．（2024•洪山区校级二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a cold，snowy evening.Tommy was running as fast as he could，focused on nothing but his
destination — the shop on the street comer.Two weeks ago he saw figurines（小塑像）of Marvel
superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one.He's been walking the neighbor's dog ever since
then to earn money to fulfill his little dream.He was so excited and barely noticing the world around
him.Maybe that's why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman，who was sitting on the
55pavement，her back against the wall.He murmured（低语）"sorry" and moved on to his destination.
Once he entered the shop，he went straight to the shelves with figurines.Hulk，Thor，Captain
America，Iron Man，and many more — all of his admired heroes.With his heart pounding like crazy he
reached for Spiderman.
"You like these，true believer？"
Tommy turned around.An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face.
"Y﹣yes，...Yes，they're awesome!" answered Tommy. "They're strong and fast and help other
people a lot ..." the boy looked at figurines in admiration. "I wish I could be a superhero（超级英雄）
too."
"Then become one!" said the old man.
"How？" Tommy asked in surprise. "I don't have any superpowers."
"And why would you need them？" the old man smiled.Seeing the confusion on the boy's face，he
squatted（蹲下）and put his hands on Tommy's arms. "Did you know that shopkeeper lady over there
has a disabled husband？She's been working hard and taking care of him for years.I've never heard a
word of complaint from her.And this person —" he pointed at a redhead man，who just entered the
shop. "He's a firefighter，he's saved countless lives.He never gives up，no matter how dangerous the
situation seems to be."
The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. "You don't need a superpower to be a hero
for someone else.The path of a superhero starts not in the mind，not in the muscles，but in the heart."
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2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.__________
The homeless woman was right there，where he saw her last time._________
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【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了汤米想成为超级英雄，在一个老人的开导下他学会了用自己的行动去
帮助他人的故事。
高分句型一：His eyes lit up﹣﹣﹣﹣ he already had an idea of what he should do.
译文：他的眼睛亮了起来——他已经知道该怎么办了。
分析：这句话使用what引导宾语从句。
高分句型二：When he finally stopped，he was breathing heavily，but he didn't feel tired.
译文：当他终于停下来时，他喘着粗气，但并不觉得累。
56分析：这句话使用when引导时间状语从句。
【解答】Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.Finally he raised his
head. "So I am supposed to..." he stopped mid﹣sentence when he realized that he was alone.He
turned his head left and right，but the old man was nowhere to be seen.His eyes lit up﹣﹣﹣﹣ he
already had an idea of what he should do.【高分句型一】He looked at figurines for the last time
and moved towards the counter. "Two sandwiches and a cup of tea please， "he said，and then
returned，food in hand.（汤米懂得了真正超级英雄的含义）
The homeless woman was right there，where he saw her last time.Tommy came closer and carefully
gave the woman his buys.Her eyes opened wide in surprise，then filled with tears. "Thank you，"
she whispered.Tommy bowed his head，turned around and went back home.He was moving faster and
faster and finally he started to run.Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could
fly.When he finally stopped，he was breathing heavily，but he didn't feel tired.【高分句型二】He
smiled happily ﹣﹣﹣ it was a wonderful feeling.And nothing could stop it.（汤米帮助了那个女人）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
17．（2024•武汉二模） Most people think that procrastination （拖延症） is a negative habit.But
people like me who routinely put off doing assignments，are likely to defend our "slower" approach
to getting tasks done.
I'm the only procrastinator in my family.My parents and sister were all born with the "do it right
now" gift.They are always in a rush，as if closely rushed by an invisible deadline.Personally，I prefer a
more relaxed pace.When my parents voiced their concern about my tendencies，saying "Don't put off
57until tomorrow what you can do today，" "No way!" I responded，confidently presenting my research as
a defense.It said people procrastinated when they need to solve a problem or commit to a topic or
project.In these cases，delaying a decision can be beneficial.This was because our minds continue to
reflect on problems even when we were not actively thinking about them，which could lead to more
creative solutions.My findings filled me with satisfaction and pride.My method of getting things done
was just as good as my sister's…or so I thought.
At school we'd been talking about architecture and design.As part of the final assessment my
teacher Mr.Smith announced an exciting project that each student would have a month to complete.We
were expected to choose our materials，construct a small building and make use of things we had
learned in class.Not only would the winners receive extra credit，but the winning constructions would be
proudly displayed in the cafeteria. "I have no clue how I could get it done，" my friend Nate sighed in
despair.I didn't say anything.Not because I shared his anxiety﹣but because I was not nervous at all.I
loved hands﹣on projects!Picturing my brilliant!work exhibited in the cafeteria，I was fully convinced
that I would definitely produce something that could impress everyone.So relaxed was I that I didn't
give it a second thought for weeks.
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（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Before I knew it，I had only one day left for the project.
That taught me a great lesson.
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【答案】Before I knew it，I had only one day left for the project.In a panic I hastily and quickly
glued together what I pulled out from our recycle bin，my hands shaking with the weight of each
hasty decision.The finished result looked miserable.Several of my classmates had created amazingly
detailed constructions.They used materials like clay，wood and so on and were highly praised by
Mr.Smith.When I saw their models，I felt even more embarrassed about mine.
That taught me a great lesson.I'm still more relaxed about deadlines than the rest of my family，but
something has changed.Now I tackle things a lot earlier than I would have in the past and my work
was chosen by Mr.Smith on another occasion.This means I don't have quite as much time for my
hobbies like drawing and gaming，but it is well worth it.I have the satisfaction of knowing that I
won't have to panic at the last minute.
58【分析】这是一篇记叙文。拖延症者辩护"慢节奏"完成任务，自信认为延迟决定可促发创意。但在学
校项目中，我因拖延而错过准备，最终未着手完成。
高分句型一：In a panic I hastily and quickly glued together what I pulled out from our recycle
bin，my hands shaking with the weight of each hasty decision.
翻译：在恐慌中，我匆忙而迅速地把我从回收站里取出的东西粘在一起，每一个匆忙的决定都让我的
手颤抖。
分析：本句使用了what引导的宾语从句以及独立主格结构my hands shaking with the weight of each
hasty decision。
高分句型二：I have the satisfaction of knowing that I won't have to panic at the last minute.
翻译：我很满意知道我不必在最后一刻惊慌失措。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Before I knew it，I had only one day left for the project.In a panic I hastily and quickly
glued together what I pulled out from our recycle bin，my hands shaking with the weight of each
hasty decision.【高分句型一】The finished result looked miserable.Several of my classmates had
created amazingly detailed constructions.They used materials like clay，wood and so on and were
highly praised by Mr.Smith.When I saw their models，I felt even more embarrassed about mine.（作
者最后匆忙完成了任务，完成情况很不乐观）
That taught me a great lesson.I'm still more relaxed about deadlines than the rest of my family，but
something has changed.Now I tackle things a lot earlier than I would have in the past and my work
was chosen by Mr.Smith on another occasion.This means I don't have quite as much time for my
hobbies like drawing and gaming，but it is well worth it.I have the satisfaction of knowing that I
won't have to panic at the last minute.【高分句型二】（作者决定改正自己拖延症的坏习惯）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
59句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
18．（2024•辽宁一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
On a sunny Friday morning，Mr.Stone，the Grade 4 head teacher，walked into the classroom with
a new student following him.She was a lively girl from Mexico，and her red mushroom hair cut
immediately drew everyone's eyes.With a welcoming smile，Mr.Stone gestured for her to sit beside
Mike，a student known for teasing others.
During break time，Mike couldn't help but laugh when he caught sight of his new deskmate.Sara's
distinctive hairstyle seemed like an open invitation for him to make fun of her.Leaning in towards
Sara，he playfully suggested， "Hey，Sara.Ever thought about changing your name to Dora？You look
just like Dora the Explorer!" His words caused laughter and cheers from the others in the classroom.
Sara's eyes filled with tears，her cheeks turning red with embarrassment.Feeling hurt and upset，she
stood up suddenly，rushing to the teacher's office to seek support from Mr.Stone.After hearing her
story，Mr.Stone offered her gentle comfort，saying， "Sara，your hairstyle is truly pretty.Remember，
everyone has their own sense of beauty."
Mr.Stone then directed his attention to Mike，expressing his disappointment and urging Mike to
apologize to Sara. "Mike，" he continued， "your actions were unkind.We must treat everyone with
empathy（同情）.Laughing at Sara's hair has deeply hurt her."
This conflict was temporarily settled，but Mr.Stone found himself lost in thought.Reflecting on his
own childhood，Mr.Stone recalled how he had been teased for being overweight.The pain caused by
hurtful words was like wrinkles on a crumpled（压皱的）ball of paper.Even if you smoothed them
out，the wrinkles stayed.
He wanted to teach an important lesson to Mike，the troublemaker.Then，a unique strategy came to
mind.He contacted Mike's mother，explaining the situation and discussing a plan with her to develop
empathy in her son.They agreed that over the weekend，Mike's mother would arrange for Mike to have
his hair cut extremely short.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
On Monday morning，Mike unwillingly approached the classroom.________
At that moment，Mr.Stone walked into the classroom with a ball of paper.________
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【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了小学四年级的班主任 Mr.Stone在一次课间休息时发现新
学生Sara被同学Mike因为发型而嘲笑，感到伤心。Mr.Stone不仅安慰了Sara，还教育了Mike要尊重
他人，对Mike进行了深刻的反思，想起自己童年也曾因体重被嘲笑。为了帮助 Mike理解别人的感受，
Mr.Stone与Mike的母亲合作，计划让Mike体验被嘲笑的滋味，通过这种方式培养他的同理心。
高分句型一：Feeling nervous and embarrassed，his heart was heavy with worry that his classmates
would tease him.
翻译：他感到紧张和尴尬，心里很担心同学会取笑他。
分析：运用了现在分词Feeling nervous and embarrassed作状语。
高分句型二：As Mr.Stone made his way to the platform，the room fell silent.
翻译：斯通先生走到站台时，房间里一片寂静。
分析：运用了As引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】On Monday morning，Mike unwillingly approached the classroom.Feeling nervous and
embarrassed，his heart was heavy with worry that his classmates would tease him.【高分句型一】His
hair had been cut so short that the skin under the hair was nearly visible.As he stepped through the
door，the room erupted in giggles，nicknaming him "Baldy." A few curious boys came up and
attempted to touch his newly shaved head.Overwhelmed by shame and anger，Mike shouted out，
"You are mean!" Tears welled up in his eyes as Mike stood up and ran towards the door.（描写他走
进教室后被同学们嘲笑，还有同学给他起外号，他羞愧且愤怒的跑出教室。）
At that moment，Mr.Stone walked into the classroom with a ball of paper.With a gentle pat on
Mike's shoulder，he guided him back to his seat.As Mr.Stone made his way to the platform，the
room fell silent.【高分句型二】Holding up the crumpled ball of paper，he began to smooth out its
wrinkles. "Each fold represented a scar of hurtful words.Even when we try to apologize，" Mr.Stone
explained softly， "the wounds remain.Let us always speak with kindness and warmth." From that
day on，Mike learned a valuable lesson：the importance of kindness and empathy.（描写引导Mike回
到座位，用褶皱的纸形象的说明伤人的话语对人造成的伤害，以及Mike的感悟。）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇
文章的写作线索。（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求要注意续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心
中有数"。（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路
结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句 拟写时，注意句子结构
的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
6119．（2024•南昌二模） Today was February 5th，a cold rainy morning，the sort of start that made
me wish that I could skip school and bead back to my warm home，and bed.Though it was my
senior year，most days seemed to remain the same boredom.
Being late for 5 minutes，I dashed up the stairs，swung open the door to my British Literature
class like a sopping wet dog，and plopped down（砰然坐下） in my seat.The eyes around the room
glared at me as my teacher cleared her throat."Mathew maybe go and see the lost﹣and﹣found for a
change of clothes" I felt my face turn red and stormed out quickly.
The lost﹣and﹣found bin did not look promising，until I came across an oversized navy coat at
the bottom.I pot it on and zipped up，this would do for the next couple of hours.Freezing up.I dug my
hands deeper down into the pockets to keep warm.Then I hit something.and pulled out a somewhat
crinkled（皱巴巴的） piece of notebook paper with some words."To you，yes you."I read aloud，
realizing that this must be a letter from someone."Dear Person，I don't know exactly who you are，but
I believe that this letter found you for a reason.I am the least likely of people to write something of
this sort，but it'，my senior year，and I thought that I would make true friends.If you would like to
participate in this experiment ，please leave your response in locker 115，second floor."My eyes
brightened.
I finished my letter by the bell，as I made my way through the crowd，Charlie jammed his
shoulder into mine from the opposite direction."Hey!Out of my way!"I shouted.He just ignored me.not
looking back.Charlie is popular in our school and people like him （but not me）.I know Charlie never
likes me，ever since primary school.I finally made it to the second floor，slipped the letter unto the
locker.and left secretly.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1：
Soon my unseen pen pal and I wrote letters every day.______
Paragraph 2：
I waited for my pen pal in the stadium after school that day.______
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
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【答案】Soon my unseen pen pal and I wrote letters every day.Our words flowed freely，sharing
secrets，dreams，and the struggles of our senior year.Each letter was a small gift，a surprise waiting
62in locker 115.I found myself looking forward to these exchanges more than anything else in
school.Our stories intertwined ， building a bond stronger than any friendship I had ever
known.Gradually，the anonymity of our correspondence became less important.What mattered was the
connection we had formed through words on paper.
I waited for my pen pal in the stadium after school that day.My heart raced as I anticipated the
reveal of our secret identity.The crowd thinned out，and then I saw him.Charlie，standing there with
a nervous smile. "It's you!" we exclaimed in unison.The surprise was quickly replaced by a warm
embrace.Our letters had bridged the gap between us，and now we stood as true friends.Charlie
apologized for his past behavior，and I admitted my own fears and misunderstandings.Together，we
walked out of the stadium，knowing that our friendship would be a lasting one.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者和他看不见的笔友之间发生的故事。
高分句型一：Our words flowed freely，sharing secrets，dreams，and the struggles of our senior year.
翻译：我们畅所欲言，分享秘密、梦想和高三的奋斗历程。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语sharing secrets，dreams，and the struggles of our senior year作状语。
高分句型二：Together，we walked out of the stadium，knowing that our friendship would be a
lasting one.
翻译：我们一起走出体育场，知道我们的友谊将是持久的。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语knowing that our friendship would be a lasting one作状语以及that
引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Soon my unseen pen pal and I wrote letters every day.Our words flowed freely，sharing
secrets，dreams，and the struggles of our senior year.【高分句型一】Each letter was a small gift，a
surprise waiting in locker 115.I found myself looking forward to these exchanges more than anything
else in school.Our stories intertwined，building a bond stronger than any friendship I had ever
known.Gradually，the anonymity of our correspondence became less important.What mattered was the
connection we had formed through words on paper.（作者和笔友之间保持着联系）
I waited for my pen pal in the stadium after school that day.My heart raced as I anticipated the
reveal of our secret identity.The crowd thinned out，and then I saw him.Charlie，standing there with
a nervous smile. "It's you!" we exclaimed in unison.The surprise was quickly replaced by a warm
embrace.Our letters had bridged the gap between us，and now we stood as true friends.Charlie
apologized for his past behavior，and I admitted my own fears and misunderstandings.Together，we
walked out of the stadium，knowing that our friendship would be a lasting one.【高分句型二】（两
人见面之后，发现作者的笔友是查理，两人延续了这场友谊）
63【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
20．（2024•邵阳二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短
文。
It was a beautiful sunny morning in early summer，when the world seemed full of sunlight and
new green leaves.I was in a good mood as my parents had just given me ＄300 for my daily expenses
during the week that they would be away in Mexico to visit my mother's sick grandfather.I was
extremely overjoyed，thinking hard about the things I could do with the money.If I survived on bread
and butter the whole week，I would have an unexpected windfall of ＄200 to buy the latest Kobe
Bryant basketball shoes!What a terrific idea!
As usual，the physical education class was thrilling.I felt most at case on the basketball court.After
playing several fierce games，I could hardly catch my breath as I headed back towards the classroom，
sweaty and exhausted.When I entered，I found my classmates gathered around Steven's desk as he
searched through his books and some other personal items anxiously.Steven had always been popular.Not
only was he intelligent and well﹣mannered，but he also came from a well﹣off family.And he shared
everything he had with us.
Right away，I learned Steven had lost the money he would donate to a children's welfare institute
that afternoon.Then I informed Miss Jones，the class teacher.She rushed over immediately and organized
a search around the classroom.We stood by our desks and emptied the contents of our schoolbags onto
the desk for inspection.
It was my turn.As Miss Jones took out the ＄300 from my wallet，the class fell into a shock.I
didn't know the amount lost was exactly ＄300 until then.I kept proving my innocence，but in vain.Miss
Jones confiscated （没收） the ＄300 and decided I was getting kicked out of the school.I stayed home
64alone the whole week，living only on bread.I felt wronged，angry，and loss of self﹣esteem.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally，my parents returned home and talked with me.________
Miss Jones had just accepted my parents' advice when Steven came.________
【考点】读后续写．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了父母给了作者300美元作为一周的生活费，作者上完体育课
走进教室发现同学Steven把他当天下午要捐给儿童福利机构的钱弄丢了，Jones老师在班里进行搜查，
当从作者那里搜出300美元时把它没收了，作者被赶出学校，作者只靠面包一个人在家里熬了一个星
期，感到委屈、愤怒，失去了自尊。
高分句型一：It was during this emotional conversation that I heard about Steven's admission，which
would change the situation.
翻译：正是在这场情绪激动的谈话中，我听说了史蒂文的录取，这将改变局面。
分析：本句使用了强调句式以及which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高 分 句 型 二 ： Steven's sincere apology and our collective understanding brought us closer as
classmates，restoring the warmth of our friendship.
翻译：史蒂文真诚的道歉和我们的集体理解拉近了我们作为同学的距离，恢复了我们友谊的温暖。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语restoring the warmth of our friendship作状语。
【解答】Finally，my parents returned home and talked with me.They patiently listened to my side of
the story，their understanding and support helping to boost my hurt feelings and self﹣esteem.I told
the whole story of what happened，including the expensive misunderstanding，and the relief of
sharing my tough experience was clear in the room.It was during this emotional conversation that I
heard about Steven's admission，which would change the situation.【高分句型一】（作者向父母倾诉
发生的事情）
Miss Jones had just accepted my parents' advice when Steven came.He genuinely looked sorry，with
a hint of regret in his eyes.To everyone's relief，he confessed that he had found the lost money in
his backpack.The immense relief and joy I felt were hard to put into words ， showing how
misunderstandings and hasty judgments can lead to serious problems.Steven's sincere apology and our
collective understanding brought us closer as classmates，restoring the warmth of our friendship.【高
65分句型二】（向作者道歉，作者感到宽慰和喜悦，同学关系更加亲密）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
21．（2024•张家港市校级模拟） By the age of sixteen years old，Ben had always been an
outstanding student.He went to great lengths to achieve high grades and managed to keep his parents
delighted and proud.Neither of his parents had the opportunity to attend university and it was their
biggest ambition that Ben could land a well﹣paid and decent job as a lawyer.He knew that achieving
this goal would make his parents walk on air，but he wasn't certain whether he would feel the same.
Since he was only a child，Ben had been passionate about computer programming.He taught himself
how to use a computer，and by the age of 12，he had been proficient in three different programming
languages.He did all of this in his spare time.He was quite an introvert （内向的人），so he preferred
staying in with his computer，rather than going out socializing with his fellow classmates or playing
sports in the brilliant sunshine.It was acceptable with his parents，as long as he continued to focus on
his studies.
One day，while reading an article online about a young technology billionaire called Tom，Ben was
fascinated by the magical power of technology and the wisdom and innovation of the young CEO.The
inner voice told him that he longed to become a computer programmer.Everything changed for Ben.In
the article，the CEO said that his company was trying to create a new and improved way of paying for
goods online but that they were struggling with the security system.He said if they could overcome
this，they could launch the biggest and best online payment system in the world.It occurred to Ben that
he had an innovative idea on how to handle this problem.Thinking that it wouldn't come to anything，
he emailed the CEO，introducing himself and explaining his idea.
注意：
66（1）续写词数应为150个左右
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He forgot all about it，but then a month later；the most amazing thing happened.________
With all these concerns in mind，Ben determined to communicate with his parents frankly.________
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】He forgot all about it，but then a month later，the most amazing thing happened.He
received a response directly from the CEO，which informed him that his brilliant idea struck a chord
and that he was welcome to fly to America to share his forward thinking on the security system.Ben
was overjoyed，staring at the email with his lips curving into a smile.But a wave of worry took hold
of him.What about his parents' ambition for him？Should he turn down the offer against his own
passion？Would he let his parents down if he followed his own heart to realize his potential？
With all these concerns in mind，Ben determined to communicate with his parents frankly.When Ben
got home from school，he took a deep breath and plucked up his courage to confess everything to
his parents.Ben told them he didn't think he would become a qualified lawyer.Instead，he guaranteed
that he could do something brilliant in a career as a computer programmer.Hearing this，his parents
felt very surprised，but they didn't blame him.They stroked his head gently，whispering that they
would accompany him to visit the CEO in person.Bathed in the harmonious atmosphere，Ben was
inspired to seize the opportunity to pursue his own dreams.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了Sam的父母一直希望他成为律师，而Sam也不想辜负父母的期望。
可是，Sam内心真正喜欢的是计算机。后来，Sam机缘巧合之下获得了一份科技公司的工作。
高分句型一：He received a response directly from the CEO，which informed him that his brilliant
idea struck a chord and that he was welcome to fly to America to share his forward thinking on the
security system.
翻译：他直接收到了首席执行官的回复，首席执行官告诉他，他的绝妙想法引起了共鸣，欢迎他飞往
美国，分享他对安全系统的前瞻性思考。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及两个that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Hearing this，his parents felt very surprised，but they didn't blame him.
翻译：听到这里，他的父母感到非常惊讶，但他们没有责怪他。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Hearing this作状语。
【解答】He forgot all about it，but then a month later，the most amazing thing happened.He
received a response directly from the CEO，which informed him that his brilliant idea struck a chord
67and that he was welcome to fly to America to share his forward thinking on the security system.【高
分句型一】Ben was overjoyed，staring at the email with his lips curving into a smile.But a wave of
worry took hold of him.What about his parents' ambition for him？Should he turn down the offer
against his own passion？Would he let his parents down if he followed his own heart to realize his
potential？（CEO认可了Ben的想法，并邀请他一块讨论关于系统安全性的问题。但是Ben犹豫了，
不知道父母会不会同意他去）
With all these concerns in mind，Ben determined to communicate with his parents frankly.When Ben
got home from school，he took a deep breath and plucked up his courage to confess everything to
his parents.Ben told them he didn't think he would become a qualified lawyer.Instead，he guaranteed
that he could do something brilliant in a career as a computer programmer.Hearing this，his parents
felt very surprised，but they didn't blame him.【高分句型二】They stroked his head gently，
whispering that they would accompany him to visit the CEO in person.Bathed in the harmonious
atmosphere，Ben was inspired to seize the opportunity to pursue his own dreams.（Ben和父母坦白了
一切，父母并没有责怪他，反而鼓励他去追求自己的梦想）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
22．（2024•大连模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
I spotted my neighbor，Monica，working in her garden one day when I returned home from
school.It was sunny，and the smell of cut grass made me feel refreshed.I popped my head over the
fence，and Monica and I got talking.
"I've seen you're very good at using a lawn mower（割草机） and gardening tools，" Monica said.
"There's a hedge（树篱） growing over the pathway near here.It's so overgrown that it becomes a head
68ache for the passers﹣by.I was planning to cut it back myself.Would you like to help out？"
I loved the idea of helping Monica and our community.We agreed to cut the hedge the following
Sunday.My brother Ivan，aged 10，also came along to help us.We wheeled Monica's garbage can down
to the hedge，which the community council was responsible for.All three of us cut it with shears （大
剪刀） until a trouble﹣free pathway came in sight.Mr.Brown，a wheelchair user，was grateful that he
didn't have to make a detour（绕行） any more to pass the hedge.Encouraged by his words，I
suggested doing more for our community，to make it a better place.
When we first started，we just made the best of the equipment we already had in my parents'
garage.But as time went on，donations came in from the local community.Our garage got filled up
quickly with brushes，gardening tools，and even donated power tools like leaf blowers.With everything
ready，our first project was to beautiful park near our houses，which looked a bit run﹣down.Ivan was
in charge of painting the fence around，Monica cleared the lawn with a leaf blower，and I was
responsible for repairing the benches where our neighbors usually sat at their leisure.After two weeks'
hard work，we felt stunned when stepping back and appreciating the clean and brand new small
park.My heart swelled with pride because our efforts paid off.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为 150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I posted photos of our hard work on our local Facebook Group.________
With more neighbors joining in，we headed for the flower bed near the community center.________
【考点】读后续写．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】I posted photos of our hard work on our local Facebook Group.Shared and forwarded，the
photos made a splash immediately.Hundreds of likes poured in like snowflakes after people knew the
story.Someone commented that it inspired him to help the community.Thinking highly of the small
park，another expressed his gratitude for our effort to bring convenience to the residents here.With
our project getting around，we felt thrilled.Many people wanted to get involved to make our
community more beautiful.Then，the second project was born.
With more neighbors joining in，we headed for the flower bed near the community center.The task
of this time was heavier than before.Trimming the bushes with shears，turning the soil with spades，
and tidying the withered fallen leaves with leaf blowers，we put our project in full swing.Some time
later various beautiful flowers donated by our neighbors were transplanted perfectly.Seeing the brand
69new flower bed，I was consumed with joy，because we all devoted ourselves to making a difference
to our community，making it a better place for the residents.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者与Monica以及10岁大的Ivan一起清理社区，得到了邻居们的
响应，越来越多邻居加入进来，共同提升社区环境。
高分句型一：Someone commented that it inspired him to help the community.
翻译：有人评论说，这激励了他帮助社区。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Thinking highly of the small park，another expressed his gratitude for our effort to
bring convenience to the residents here.
翻译：另一位网友高度评价这个小公园，并对我们为这里的居民带来的便利表示感谢。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Thinking highly of the small park作状语。
【解答】I posted photos of our hard work on our local Facebook Group.Shared and forwarded，the
photos made a splash immediately.Hundreds of likes poured in like snowflakes after people knew the
story.Someone commented that it inspired him to help the community.【高分句型一】Thinking highly
of the small park，another expressed his gratitude for our effort to bring convenience to the residents
here.【高分句型二】With our project getting around，we felt thrilled.Many people wanted to get
involved to make our community more beautiful.Then，the second project was born.（作者的事迹在
互联网上获得的响应）
With more neighbors joining in，we headed for the flower bed near the community center.The task
of this time was heavier than before.Trimming the bushes with shears，turning the soil with spades，
and tidying the withered fallen leaves with leaf blowers，we put our project in full swing.Some time
later various beautiful flowers donated by our neighbors were transplanted perfectly.Seeing the brand
new flower bed，I was consumed with joy，because we all devoted ourselves to making a difference
to our community，making it a better place for the residents.（邻居们的努力带给社区的变化以及我
们的感受）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
70路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
23．（2024•长春模拟） I remember a time when I learned the true meaning of forgiveness.It was a
period in my life that tested my patience and my ability to understand others.
It all started when I was in middle school.I had a close friend named Emily，and we spent a lot
of time together.One day，Emily introduced me to a new girl in our class，named Olivia.Olivia was
quiet and shy，but we quickly became friends as well.
One afternoon，after school，we were all working on a project in the classroom.As we were
discussing our ideas，Olivia suddenly exclaimed out something that completely contradicted what I had
been saying.I was shocked and felt a little embarrassed.I tried to explain my point of view，but Olivia
was very stubborn and insisted on her own idea.
Emily，who was sitting next to me，tried to mediate （调节） the situation.But Olivia got angry
and said some unkind words to me.I was hurt and angry，and I couldn't believe that Olivia would treat
me like that.I stormed out of the classroom，leaving Emily and Olivia behind.
The next few days were very difficult for me.I avoided Olivia as much as possible，and our
friendship with Emily seemed to be stressed.I felt like I had been betrayed by Olivia，and I couldn't
understand why she would do such a thing.
One day，I asked Emily why she was still friends with Olivia after what she had done.Emily
looked at me with a sad expression and said，"You know，Olivia has been through a lot lately.Her
parents are going through a divorce，and she's really struggling.Maybe she was rude to you because she
was feeling overwhelmed and insecure."
Hearing this，I felt a surge of guilt.I realized that I hadn't taken the time to understand Olivia's
situation.I had been too quick to judge her and too focused on my own feelings of hurt.I decided to
talk to Olivia and apologize for my behavior.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I found Olivia，she was sitting alone in the hallway.______
Olivia accepted my apology and we had a long conversation.__________
【考点】读后续写．
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【答案】 When I found Olivia，she was sitting alone in the hallway.I walked towards her slowly，
my heart pounding.As I reached her，I took a deep breath and sat down next to her.She looked up
at me，her eyes filled with sadness and uncertainty.I start to speak，telling her how sorry I was for
my actions and for not being more understanding.I conveyed my realization that we all have our
struggles and that I should have been more empathetic.Olivia listened quietly，and as I finished，a
small smile appeared on her face.
Olivia accepted my apology and we had a long conversation.She opened up to me about her
feelings during that difficult time.I listened attentively，feeling a deep bond with her.We discussed how
we could move forward and stand up for each other.We also discussed the significance of forgiveness
and how it can heal relationships.As we ended our conversation，I felt a weight lifted off my
shoulders.I knew that our friendship would be stronger than ever，and that this experience had taught
me a valuable lesson about empathy and forgiveness.
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者和Emily是好朋友。Emily又将Olivia介绍给作者，三个
人成为了好朋友。但是一次Olivia对作者说出无理的话，作者很伤心。她和Emily和Olivia疏远了。
后来作者询问Emily为什么还和Olivia做朋友。Emily告诉作者Olivia正在经历人生的困境，作者开始
反思自己。
高分句型一：I walked towards her slowly，my heart pounding.
译文：我慢慢地向她走去，心跳加速。
分析：这句话使用了独立主格结构my heart pounding。
高分句型二：I knew that our friendship would be stronger than ever，and that this experience had
taught me a valuable lesson about empathy and forgiveness.
译文：我知道我们的友谊将比以往任何时候都更加牢固，这段经历给了我一堂关于同理心和宽恕的宝
贵一课。
分析：这句话使用了and连接两个that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 When I found Olivia，she was sitting alone in the hallway.I walked towards her
slowly，my heart pounding.【高分句型一】As I reached her，I took a deep breath and sat down
next to her.She looked up at me，her eyes filled with sadness and uncertainty.I start to speak，telling
her how sorry I was for my actions and for not being more understanding.I conveyed my realization
that we all have our struggles and that I should have been more empathetic.Olivia listened quietly，
and as I finished，a small smile appeared on her face.（作者为自己的行为向Olivia道歉，Olivia安静
地听，脸上露出了一丝微笑。）
72Olivia accepted my apology and we had a long conversation.She opened up to me about her
feelings during that difficult time.I listened attentively，feeling a deep bond with her.We discussed how
we could move forward and stand up for each other.We also discussed the significance of forgiveness
and how it can heal relationships.As we ended our conversation，I felt a weight lifted off my
shoulders.I knew that our friendship would be stronger than ever，and that this experience had taught
me a valuable lesson about empathy and forgiveness.【高分句型二】（和Olivia交谈后，作者感到肩上的
重量减轻了。她们的友谊将比以往任何时候都更加牢固。）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
24．（2024•常德模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
At one time children made May Day baskets to celebrate spring and enjoy the rewards of giving
surprising gifts to their beloved ones.When I was in perhaps the third grade，our class took on such an
adventure.For several days，we worked on creating paper baskets.We cut colorful stripes of construction
paper and wove them together，following our teacher，Miss Anderson.We cut and wove and glued.Then
we decorated them with our crayons and more cutting and gluing.Finally，we fitted paper handles onto
the tops so that we could secretly hang our creations on the doors of unsuspecting receivers：surely our
mothers.
We were finished right on time.Miss Anderson brought armloads of flowers for us to use in stuffing
our prizes.Lilacs and tulips and al the colorful flowers of spring.We had to wait until the day was
nearly over before we were allowed to choose the flowers that were just right for our baskets.I chose
73the biggest，most beautiful blossoms，allowing myself to be selfish for the sake of my mother.Then we
fidgeted （烦躁） away what remained of our day，waiting for the clock to tick down the minutes to
our release.
Finally，mercifully，the bell rang!We threw on our coats，gathered our homework and our lunch
boxes，tied on our scarves and then，carefully，we cradled our offerings of love and off we ran to our
individual homes!I was so excited!I ran as fast as I could down the hill，across the street，up the
block ， heading home.I paused at the corner of my house ， to catch my breath and savor the
moment.Then I glanced down to admire my offering one last time before I hung it lovingly over the
doorknob.Horrors!Shock，dread and depression!My flowers were gone!Apparently，bouncing out on my
mad dash home，all that was left was a sad，messed﹣up，wrinkled little empty basket!I stood on the
doorway and burst into mournful sobbing tears.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Para 1
By and by，my mom came to the door to discover the source of the sorrow.___________
Para 2
Soon，my newly﹣decorated basket was ready to be offered again.___________
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为母亲精心制作了花篮，结果作者放学回家路上因为跑
得太快导致花都掉了。作者十分伤心。好在母亲及时安慰了作者，让作者再次从花园里摘了花装饰花
篮，母亲还很配合假装惊讶，令作者非常难忘。
高分句型一：Seeing each petal radiating the purest colors of spring，I felt my enthusiasm began to
return.
翻译：看到每一片花瓣都散发着春天最纯净的色彩，我觉得我的热情开始回归。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语Seeing each petal radiating the purest colors of spring作状语。
高分句型二：My pride of giving barely allowed me to maintain the surprise but what mattered was
to show mom she was remembered on this special day.
翻译：我对给予的自豪感几乎让我无法保持惊喜，但重要的是让妈妈知道，在这个特殊的日子里，我
74记得她。
分析：本句运用了what引导的主语从句。
【解答】By and by，my mom came to the door to discover the source of the sorrow.As she let me
in and relieved me of my school things，I tried to relate my horrible dilemma and the depth of my
sadness.Mom listened attentively，and her comforting presence brought a glimmer of hope to my
disappointed heart.Having wiped my tears tenderly，she gave me the scissors fetched from the kitchen
and suggested I find some replacement flowers from our garden.This time，I chose smaller and more
resilient flowers，carefully arranging them inside the basket.Seeing each petal radiating the purest
colors of spring，I felt my enthusiasm began to return.【高分句型一】（描写了母亲安慰作者并建议
作者再次从花园里摘了花装饰花篮）
Soon，my newly﹣decorated basket was ready to be offered again.With the revived basket cradled in
my arms，I embarked on a second journey towards home.Awkwardly，I placed the paper handle over
the knob，knocked hesitantly，and made an embarrassed retreat.Mom slowly came and answered the
door.Oh!She was so surprised!I stepped out of my hiding place. "Well，Mary!" she exclaimed! "Look
what someone left here!Aren't they lovely! " With her excitement all my worries vanished.My pride
of giving barely allowed me to maintain the surprise but what mattered was to show mom she was
remembered on this special day.【高分句型二】（描写了作者给母亲送花篮以及母亲配合作者）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
25．（2024•晋城三模） I was always afraid of water.This fear could not be explained，but I knew
that the moment I stepped near any body of water，my legs would turn to jelly （果冻）.I would
imagine myself drowning in the water and thrashing around （乱扑腾） helplessly.That was why I
75had never gone into a swimming pool until swimming became a school requirement.My school
wanted all pupils to pass a swimming test，and if they could not，then they would have to attend
weekly swimming lessons in school，which made me tremble.
Thus，my parents signed me up for swimming lessons at the pool near my house.With great
unwillingness，I attended those weekly lessons，and each one was great suffering for me.I was naturally
clumsy，and my fear of water did not help at all.Every lesson，I would be spending my time thrashing
about in the water，while my classmates would be swimming countless laps effortlessly and even turning
over like dolphins in the water.How was I going to pass the test at this rate？
In my swimming class，there was an exceptionally athletic girl.Tall and muscular，her name was
Kathy.She was the best swimmer in our class and always looked at me with disdain （鄙视），
especially when I thrashed about hopelessly in the water.
Once，after a particularly long and hard swimming lesson，I spotted Kathy swimming gracefully in
the pool.Gathering my courage，I asked gently， "Kathy，can you teach me to swim？" She stared at
me coldly.It was as if I stood at the edge of an endless ocean of inadequacy，my fears appearing like
dark storm clouds threatening to drown me.Yet，in that moment，a glimmer of hope flashed within
me，a desperate longing for guidance and acceptance.Would Kathy's icy exterior （外表） melt under
the warmth of empathy，or would I remain forever thrashing in the sea of my own fears？
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise，she nodded after a few moments of silence.
______
"Congratulations!" Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test.
______
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
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【答案】 To my surprise，she nodded after a few moments of silence.From then on，Kathy
stayed back for about an hour after every swimming lesson to coach me.She taught me how to
propel myself forward in the water and I gradually gained confidence in the pool.Slowly but surely，
I improved under her guidance and encouragement.Four months later，it was time for me to take my
swimming test.I jumped into the pool and followed all of Kathy's advice.I swam gracefully，just like
a fish，and passed the test with flying colours.
76"Congratulations!" Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test.I threw my arms
around her and hugged her tightly. "Thank you!You're a wonderful friend!If it had not been for you，I
would not have done so well!" I exclaimed.Since then，our friendship has blossomed.We met frequently
to have fun with each other，sharing both joy and sorrow.Surprisingly，I grew to love the water.A
friend like Kathy is hard to come by.She has a heart of gold and I will definitely treasure our precious
friendship.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者非常怕水，但是学校要求所有学生都要通过游泳考试，
于是父母在家附近为作者报了游泳课程，作者不情愿地去上课，上课过程也非常痛苦，Kathy是游泳
课上表现最好的学生，一次艰难的游泳课后作者鼓起勇气问Kathy能否教自己有用，忐忑地等待Kathy
的回答。
高分句型一：If it had not been for you，I would not have done so well！
翻译：如果没有你，我不会做得这么好！
分析：本句运用了由if引导的虚拟条件句表示与过去事实相反。
高分句型二：We met frequently to have fun with each other，sharing both joy and sorrow.
翻译：我们经常见面，一起玩耍，分享快乐和悲伤。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语sharing both joy and sorrow作状语。
【解答】 To my surprise，she nodded after a few moments of silence.From then on，Kathy
stayed back for about an hour after every swimming lesson to coach me.She taught me how to
propel myself forward in the water and I gradually gained confidence in the pool.Slowly but surely，
I improved under her guidance and encouragement.Four months later，it was time for me to take my
swimming test.I jumped into the pool and followed all of Kathy's advice.I swam gracefully，just like
a fish，and passed the test with flying colours.（描写了Kathy指导作者游泳，作者顺利通过了游泳考
试）
"Congratulations!" Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test.I threw my arms
around her and hugged her tightly. "Thank you!You're a wonderful friend!If it had not been for you，I
would not have done so well!【高分句型一】" I exclaimed.Since then，our friendship has blossomed.We
met frequently to have fun with each other，sharing both joy and sorrow.【高分句型二】Surprisingly，I
grew to love the water.A friend like Kathy is hard to come by.She has a heart of gold and I will
definitely treasure our precious friendship.（描写了作者感谢Kathy并和Kathy成为了朋友）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
77（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
78考点卡片
1．记叙文
【考点介绍】
记叙文是英语写作中常见的一种文体，主要通过叙述人物的经历、事件的发展和环境的描绘来表达情感
展示主题。在各类英语考试中，记叙文写作常常是作文部分的考查重点。
【典型例题】
观察下面的图片，根据图片内容和其中的角色分配，用第一人称写一个英文小故事，体现戴头盔的重要
性。
注意：
（1）可以适当添加细节，以使情节连贯；
（2）词数100左右；
（3）首句已经给出，不计入词数。
*词汇提示：helmet n.头盔，安全帽；crash v. & n.冲撞
分析：高分句型一：It happened so suddenly that we were shocked and lost control of our bicycles.
翻译：事情发生得太突然了，我们都惊呆了，自行车失控了。
分析：运用了so…that引导的结果状语从句。
高分句型二：Knowing what had happened，Dad said to me， "It would have been avoided if you had
worn your helmet."
翻译：知道发生了什么，爸爸对我说："如果你戴上头盔的话，这是可以避免的。"
分析：运用了what引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句。
解答：Last Thursday，I met David at the school gate and we decided to cycle back home together.All
the way we were chatting happily when a cat dashed out on the road，followed by an angry dog.It
happened so suddenly that we were shocked and lost control of our bicycles.
（高分句型一）Before realizing what was happening，I bumped into a rock and fell off the bicycle，
David falling too because of the crash.I was bleeding and sent to hospital immediately while David was
79slightly injured on his elbow.（因为没戴头盔路上发生的事情）Knowing what had happened，Dad said
to me， "It would have been avoided if you had worn your helmet." （高分句型二）I nodded
regretfully and promised I would never cycle without a helmet again.（认识到了头盔的重要性）
点评：写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同
时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与构思：明确题目要求的主题和内容后，根据主题构思故事的大致情节和人物。
2.确定时态和人称：根据题目要求，确定要使用的时态。
3.开始写作：首先写出一个简短的开头，引入主题。接着，按照时间顺序或情节发展，逐步展开故事。在
写作过程中，注意保持逻辑清晰、表达准确。
4.结尾：在故事的结尾部分，要对主题进行总结或给出一些启示。同时，也可以根据需要添加一些情感色
彩或寓意。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的语法、拼写和句子结构等，进行必要的修改和润色。
2．读后续写
【考点介绍】
读后续写是一种结合阅读和写作的考查方式，主要考查考生的理解能力、想象力、创造力和语言表达能
力。在英语写作中，读后续写通常提供一段阅读材料，要求考生根据材料的内容和情节，发挥想象力，
续写接下来的故事或论述。这类题型在各类英语考试中较为常见，主要考查学生的阅读理解能力、思维
能力和语言表达能力。
1．选材特点
（1）所需阅读的短文动在350以内；
（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻
辑性比较强．
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语猴接程度
（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词歌覆盖情况
（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性
（4）上下文的连贯性
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：理解材料的主旨和重要细节，注意把握材料中的人物、情节、时间和地点等信息。
2.确定主题和情节：注意与材料中的情节和人物保持连贯性，同时可以加入自己的想象力和创造力来丰富
情节。
3.构建框架：包括开头、发展和结尾三个部分。开头部分应与提供的阅读材料相衔接，可以简要概括前文；
80发展部分应展开情节，使故事或论述更加丰富；结尾部分则应总结全文，并为读者留下一定的思考空间。
4.写作过程：首先写开头部分，与提供的阅读材料进行衔接，确保文章的连贯性；然后写发展部分，根据
自己确定的情节发展进行拓展，可以使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析。同时，注
意与前文保持逻辑上的连贯性；最后写结尾部分，总结全文，并为读者留下一定的思考空间。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否与阅读材料保持连贯性，是否遵循了给出的主题和情节发展进行拓展，是否达到了写作的目的。同时
检查语言表达是否准确、自然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
3．生活感悟
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"生活感悟"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对生活的理解和思考。这
类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就生活中的某个事件或观察到的某个现象发表自己的
观点和感悟。
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：首先仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的目的和要求，把握题目的主题和要点，了解需要涉及的
范围和重点。
2.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及生活中的某个事件或观察到
的某个现象，以及由此产生的思考和感悟。
3.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述生活感悟的相关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；结论部分可以总
结全文并强调生活感悟的重要性和意义。
4.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述生活感悟的相
关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调生
活感悟的重要性和意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时
保证语法和拼写的准确性。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
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