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2025年菁优高考英语解密之写作题型
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•新高考Ⅰ）ㅤI met Gunter on a cold，wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had
planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm，my flight
had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the
departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane，I ran like crazy through the
airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second sought.
ㅤThat was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going ，but he said he hadn't heard of the
bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem，so I explained again more slowly，but he
still looked confused.When I was about to give up，Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a
friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century，Gunter put his phone
down and started the car.
ㅤFinally，with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully，there was a long
queue still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus，turned around，and
looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it， "he said.
ㅤJust then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled
out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times，but the card machine just did not play along.A
feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
ㅤAt this moment，Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There at the entrance，
was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car，made a mad run for the machine，and popped my card
in，only to read the message："Out of order.Sorry."
ㅤI ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news._____
ㅤFour days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised._____
2．（2024•深圳一模） In our weekly staff meeting，our editor Ashley was not pleased with the
quality of our reporting."Our readership is way down.We need better stories for this Thursday's school
newspaper.Does anybody have any ideas？"she said.
I handed her my article about our basketball team beating Deerfield High School the previous night
by one point."Sports stories are fun，"she said，"but not good enough for the front page.We need
something to really get people's attention."
After our meeting，we left the newsroom together and heard someone screaming，"Perry is
1missing!"Perry was a big red parrot and had been our school mascot（吉祥物） for ten years.He played
an important role in students"lives，both in and out of class.He had also been a constant presence at
school events，inspiring a sense of unity among students.
Everyone gathered around Perry's empty cage，heartbroken.Suddenly，a student from the crowd
came over and showed me a photo. "You're a reporter for the school paper，right？I happened to take
this yesterday，"he said.In the photo was a Deerfield High School basketball player with something large
hidden under his shirt around the size of a parrot.
"He must have stolen Perry to get back at us for winning the game!"Ashley cried.We hurried back
to the newsroom，agreeing to run the photo on the front page with the headline "Deerfield Stole
Perry.""This is just the story we need.Everyone will read it，"Ashley said confidently.
After she left，I took a closer look at the photo.The clock in the background read 4：15 pm，but
our game against Deerfield hadn't started until 4：30 pm.Why would the boy have taken Perry before
we even played？An uneasy feeling came over me that we might have falsely accused someone.
I went to Perry's usual caretaker to ask if he knew Perry was missing."He's not missing.He's
retired.He's ready for some quieter days，"he said.Learning the truth，I immediately told Ashley and
suggested writing a story to say goodbye to Perry.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise，Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story.______
On Thursday，the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye，Perry" on the front page.______
3．（2024•广东模拟） It took a day's drive，but distance was beside the point.I always enjoyed
long journeys in my father's car with my family.However，things went different that time.We were
moving to a new town，not for any tourist destination，but to settle down，for my father had a new
job there.My mother，sitting on the passenger seat in the front，was talking with my father.She
looked excited for the coming new life.But I was down，feeling nervous about starting a new school
life.Entering a new school meant adapting to a completely different environment and meeting new
classmates and teachers，which I was not good at.
On my first day at the new school，I felt lost and out of place.The students already knew each
other well，and they chatted happily during breaks.I missed my old friends terribly and wished I could
go back to my old school.Feeling lonely，I often spent time alone during breaks and after classes，
reading books in the library or drawing pictures in the art room.I missed the good days I had with my
2old friends and longed for that sense of belonging.
As the days went by，I still found it hard to fit in.I was shy and found it difficult to strike up
conversations with my classmates.Some of the kids in my class noticed my discomfort and tried to be
friendly，but I couldn't shake off the feeling of being an outsider.I only had words with my deskmate，
Alex，when necessary.Things took a turn for the worse when I knocked off Alex's water bottle by
accident，although I picked up the bottle immediately and apologized to him.He got mad at me and
seemed not to forgive me.Soon I found we were avoiding each other.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However，I was assigned to pair up with Alex to design a poster.______
Alex proudly introduced that the fantastic picture was drawn by me._______
4．（2024•南宁模拟）你校英文报正在举办"最美微笑"的照片征集活动，请提交你的作品并对作品做英文
简介，内容包括：
（1）照片内容介绍；
（2）选择该照片的原因。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
5．（2024•金安区校级三模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mike对中国高中生"选科学习"（optional
study）很感兴趣，他想了解你是选择物理类还是历史类。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）介绍你的选择类别；
（2）陈述你的选择理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike，
How is everything going？________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
6．（2024•张家港市校级模拟）你校英文报正在开展以 Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise
Weekly为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）描述调查结果；
3（2）分析其原因并给出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Nowadays，many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise，although the time they
spend on it varies.
7．（2024•许昌模拟） It was time for the ice cream event that my small youth group had waited
for many months.The group consisted of five boys；one of them was Scott.
Scott always had a positive attitude.He looked on the bright side of things and never criticized
anyone.But Scott was different from the rest of us because he was disabled，suffering from a disease
which caused hands shaking constantly.Therefore，he was unable to participate in activities in most
cases.No one ever made fun of him to his face，but at times，people would laugh or stare in his
presence.But Scott never worried；he just kept his head up high and ignored them.
Finally，the night of the ice cream event descended.My friends and I rushed to the church
basement and waited with scoops （冰淇淋勺） in hand for the guests to arrive.One by one，people
filed in，all hoping to get a creamy and tasty scoop of ice cream.But what they ended up getting was a
hard and frozen mass.We waited for a while for the ice cream to melt，and eventually it did.
Once the ice cream melted，we had another problem.It had turned into three pools of coconut，
chocolate，and strawberry.But we persisted in serving it.We had our chance to serve，except for
Scott.So，being as kind as possible，I gave Scott a chance to scoop and serve.As soon as Scott gripped
the scoop，our ice cream troubles grew beyond control.Milky ice cream was flung in every direction
and made a mess on people，but there was no sign for him to come to a stop on account of his
4terrible control of trembling hands.At that moment，a stir of unrest and dissatisfaction rippled through
the crowd.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Abruptly，a woman stormed forward and grabbed the scoop.______
Tears blurred his eyes as Scott got hold of the scoop again._____
8．（2024秋•寻甸县校级月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇
完整的短文．续写词数应为 150 左右．
It was time to go home． "Remember to work on your class speeches for homework，" Miss
Walker called as everyone started talking and packing their school bags．Jenny felt sick．She hated
having to read aloud in class．She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her．Once，when
Jenny was reading out her holiday diary，Lee was even looking at his watch，a silver and blue one
which seemed just magical．
Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school．He seemed so clever，and he had a
certain sort of shining confidence．He was just one of those people who were good at everything．
Jenny sighed．As she turned the corner，she saw Lee's watch lying right in the middle of the path．
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him，but she didn't want to run after him．
Jenny bent down quickly，picked up the watch and ran home．On arriving home，Jenny put it on
almost without thinking．She was surprised it fitted so well．She walked to the mirror and started
practising her speech．Words just flooded out of her． "I'm going to talk about swimming．I have been
lucky．I've won lots of competitions．But when I'm in a race，I'm not really thinking about winning．
I'm just loving the feeling of being in the water…" Jenny laughed with excitement．She walked across
the room．She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence．Turning back to the mirror，
Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass．The flashes of silver seemed almost magical．
So maybe Lee's watch really DID have something magic about it．
The next day，as the lesson began，Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first．
Nobody moved．Jenny slowly raised her arm．Before Miss Walker could say anything，there was a
shout from behind ． "She's stolen my watch!" Lee said angrily ， "It went missing at school
yesterday．"
Paragraph 1：
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny，waiting for an explanation．_________．
5Paragraph 2：
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first．_______．
9．（2024•合川区校级模拟） Every Sunday，the competition started.The three of us would set our
alarm clocks to wake up earlier than anyone else.I had set my alarm clock to six in the morning，
hoping that my brothers wouldn't start before me.
Beep.Beep.Beep.Groaning，I reached over to my nightstand and slapped the top of my alarm clock.
"Too early on this cold winter day，" I murmured.I curled back into my warm blanket and fell asleep
again.
My eyes blinked open to the whirring sound of the vacuum cleaner. "They chose their chores first!"
I thought with despair.I jumped up from my bed and rushed to the bathroom，where I started the only
chore that was left for me.I would definitely be shoveling （铲） the driveway while they built an
igloo （冰屋） ，I thought cheerlessly，rubbing and wiping madly at the toilet bowl.
When I finished cleaning the toilet and sink，my brothers came into the bathroom to watch me
clean the bathtub as they mocked me about how I'd overslept and got stuck with the longest chore.
"Whoever finishes last has to shovel the driveway，remember？" my older brother reminded me with a
triumphant smile when we put on our big coats and snow pants to go outside.
The three of us stepped outside into the knee﹣deep snow and shielded our eyes from the
brightness.My brothers wasted no time and dashed off to play in the yard，leaving me behind to tackle
the frustrating task of shoveling the driveway.With a heavy sigh，I inched through the thick snow to the
driveway，my boots sinking with each step.I grunted （嘟哝） with effort as my brothers yelled with
joy.Sunday would never be my day，I sighed.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly，I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete.
______
After we finished，we sat inside the igloo，laughing about our morning adventures.
______
10．（2024•固始县校级二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
Lily was renowned for her desire to achieve perfection in everything she undertook.Whether it was
school projects，art assignments，or even helping her parents with household chores，Lily's commitment
6to excellence was unwavering.
One sunny summer day，Lily's family decided to spend a day at the beach.As they arrived，Lily's
eyes were immediately drawn by a group of children who playfully built and then tore down their
sandcastles.They giggled and shouted，their excitement on full display. "How silly， " she thought，not
quite getting why they enjoyed doing that.
Lily，being herself，decided to build a perfect sandcastle that would become the envy of all
beachgoers.She began to plan every detail in her mind，from the balanced structures of the towers to
the delicate decorations.Then ， she set about piling sand to make the towers and walls of her
sandcastle.Painstakingly，she crafted each feature of her work，carefully smoothed the surfaces and
adjusting every detail to her vision.
Jake，Lily's younger brother，didn't seem too concerned with building a fantastic sandcastle.He
picked a spot nearby and amused himself with the sand.He scooped up handfuls of sand，let it slip
through his fingers like grains of time，and then molded it into careless shapes with the carefree
abandon of a child.Jake's happiness was contagious.Mom and Dad joined him，laughing and joking over
Jake's playful creations.From time to time，they called out to Lily and invited her to join the fun，
knowing that the pursuit of perfection could be exhausting.
Nevertheless，Lily stayed where she was，determined to create an impressive sandcastle.She frowned
at Jake's unconventional，abstract art﹣like sandcastle shapes and persisted in her efforts.However，the
process didn't go as smoothly as she had anticipated.The sand didn't always hold its shape，and the
waves constantly lapped at the edges of her creation.
Para 1：As the day wore on，Lily's sandcastle kept losing its form.___________
Para 2：With bitter smile，Lily decided to join her family.___________
11．（2024•龙岗区校级模拟）假定你是李华，是阳光中学英语广播台的负责人。英语广播台将举办主题
为"志愿服务，从我做起"的英语演讲比赛。请你写一则英语通知发布到学校英文网站上，内容包括：
（1）活动目的；
（2）具体要求。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Notice
7English Speaking Competition
___________
Li Hua
English Radio Station
8th June 2024
12．（2024•绍兴二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Kevin woke to the blaring beep of his alarm clock. "Can't wait for that camping trip，" Kevin
thought，filled with excitement.As he was leaving home，his dad grabbed him by the hand and said，
"Before you go，just tell me the directions on where you and your friends are going to stay."
"But dad!" Kevin complained.
"No buts!" Kevin's dad added.
"Fine." Kevin told him the directions and left.
The three friends，Kevin，Jay and Nathan，had been planning this adventure for weeks，packing
their stuff﹣tents，snacks，and a map﹣preparing for a 3﹣day outdoor exploration.Excitement ran
through Kevin as they departed for their campsite. "This trip is going to be awesome， " Nathan
excitedly yelled as they set off.But little did they know that nature had a surprise in store for them.
The first day at the campsite was going great，setting up tents，collecting firewood，and sharing
stories. "Man，we nailed these tents， " Kevin said. "I know it was easy really，" Nathan replied.The
friends were happy.
Yet towards night，as the dark clouds gathered overhead，the atmosphere shifted，and a sudden
storm erupted with unforgiving anger.Rain poured down from the heavens like a relentless waterfall，
transforming the peaceful campsite into a muddy battleground.Worse still，a huge tree was uprooted and
crashed down with a deafening crack on their only means of escape ﹣ their car.Kevin's eyes widened
in horror as he spotted the damaged wreckage beneath the fallen giant. "Our car!" he screamed over the
howling wind，his voice a mix of disbelief and despair. "We're stuck here，" he declared，his words
barely audible against the backdrop of thunder and raindrops.They realized that their plans had been
violently spoiled by forces beyond their control.The once quiet campsite now stood as a deserted
battlefield，the fallen tree serving as a painful reminder of the unpredictable nature of the world around
them.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
8（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：The next day，they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding
water.________
Paragraph 2：On the third night，a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.________
13．（2024•广东二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
After a busy week，Emily and her parents decided to go on a mountain picnic.They longed to fully
experience nature's beauty and enjoy quality family time.Little did they know，this outing would be
filled with unexpected twists and turns （波折）.
Arriving at the mountain's base，they discovered a house，in front of which Mike and his father
had just finished loading a boat onto Mike's truck.Emily approached them and asked for the best picnic
spot in the area.Knowing the mountain well，Mike suggested a location about two hours' walk away.
"It's worth the effort，" he assured them.
Parking their car next to Mike's truck and carrying their picnic supplies，Emily and her parents set
off on the winding road.Tall green trees on one side，a flowing stream on the other，the road
eventually led them to a breathtaking clearing dotted with colorful wildflowers.They enjoyed their
delicious sandwiches，fruits，and snacks，engaging in pleasant conversations.
Just as they finished their meal and settled down to relax，dark clouds unexpectedly rolled in.It
looked like rain.Panicked，they hurriedly set up the tent they had brought.No sooner had they entered
than raindrops began pouring on the roof.Heavy rain enveloped the surroundings，making it impossible
to see anything.They had no choice but to patiently wait it out.
After what felt like a century，the rain ceased.Emily and her parents wasted no time packing up
their belongings，ready to get downhill.However，their excitement turned to worry when they discovered
that the small stream they had previously crossed had turned into a wide and impassable river.With no
cellphone signal，they were trapped without a means of seeking help.To make matters worse，darkness
was approaching.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly，they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river.________
Emily and her parents boarded the boat.________
14．（2024•上城区校级模拟） Tom and Jane planned a holiday at the lake，and they decided to
9take their children，Tim and Sarah，with them.However，Tim and Sarah wanted：to visit Disney
World for their holiday or hire a yacht （游艇） in Hawaii.Camping by the lake wasn't even on
their list of holiday adventures.
"We can visit some of the islands too，" Jane said. "Your dad and I always wanted to explore the
mysterious cabin on Moose Island."
Mysterious cabin？The children were now far more interested in this lake holiday idea.
"We might see Big foot，" Tim said.
"Or some unusual species!" Sarah turned to her parents. "We're in.When do we leave？"
The children's excitement quickly disappeared when they arrived at the lake.While their parents were
carrying their suitcases inside，Timand Sarah stood on the path and stared at the cabin they'd be staying
in for the next week，complaining about the smell around，the dust，and the various small insects.
"We're in nature now，kids.Enjoy the experience!Your dad is building a fire so we can have
barbecued fish and potatoes baked in the coals.Isn't that great？"
Sarah choked. "I am not eating food cooked in coals!I want takeaway instead."
"Me too." Tim was about to cry. "Holidays are supposed to be fun，Mom."
"Come on，guys.There's a lot of joy to be found in living a simple life and spending time together
as a family."
"People in the suburbs live a simple life，which is more like being homeless!" Sarah shouted
"Yeah，" Tim added. "How can there not be a single restaurant that delivers here？How do these
people survive？"
"They eat coal potatoes!" Sarah laughed. "And fish they kill with their bare hands!"
Sarah ran away，and Tim followed.Jane buried her head in her hands.She realized she had to do
something to correct their children's attitude towards simple life.After dinner，she told all about this to
Tom，who agreed with Jane.Then they came up with an idea.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：The next morning，Tim and Sarah entered the main room to demand they leave
immediately，but neither Mom nor Dad was in there.
______
Paragraph 2：When Tim was about to fall asleep，he heard the sound of heavy footsteps outside，
which were approaching.
10______
15．（2024•洪山区校级二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a cold，snowy evening.Tommy was running as fast as he could，focused on nothing but his
destination — the shop on the street comer.Two weeks ago he saw figurines（小塑像）of Marvel
superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one.He's been walking the neighbor's dog ever since
then to earn money to fulfill his little dream.He was so excited and barely noticing the world around
him.Maybe that's why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman，who was sitting on the
pavement，her back against the wall.He murmured（低语）"sorry" and moved on to his destination.
Once he entered the shop，he went straight to the shelves with figurines.Hulk，Thor，Captain
America，Iron Man，and many more — all of his admired heroes.With his heart pounding like crazy he
reached for Spiderman.
"You like these，true believer？"
Tommy turned around.An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face.
"Y﹣yes，...Yes，they're awesome!" answered Tommy. "They're strong and fast and help other
people a lot ..." the boy looked at figurines in admiration. "I wish I could be a superhero（超级英雄）
too."
"Then become one!" said the old man.
"How？" Tommy asked in surprise. "I don't have any superpowers."
"And why would you need them？" the old man smiled.Seeing the confusion on the boy's face，he
squatted（蹲下）and put his hands on Tommy's arms. "Did you know that shopkeeper lady over there
has a disabled husband？She's been working hard and taking care of him for years.I've never heard a
word of complaint from her.And this person —" he pointed at a redhead man，who just entered the
shop. "He's a firefighter，he's saved countless lives.He never gives up，no matter how dangerous the
situation seems to be."
The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. "You don't need a superpower to be a hero
for someone else.The path of a superhero starts not in the mind，not in the muscles，but in the heart."
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.__________
The homeless woman was right there，where he saw her last time._________
16．（2024•广西模拟）假定你是李华。为迎接爱尔兰姐妹学校来访，你校英语俱乐部将举行学生活动图
片展，现正向学生征集照片。你打算参与，请你写一封邮件，说明相关信息，内容包括：
11（1）描述照片内容；
（2）选择该照片的理由；
（3）表达入选期望。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear English Club，
I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Senior 3._____
Attached is the photo.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
17．（2024•龙凤区校级模拟） 假定你是校英语俱乐部负责人李华，你邀请到了英国环保专家 Smith
教授作主题为"Living in Harmony with Nature"的讲座。请你在讲座前简要发言，内容包括：
（1）相关介绍；
（2）注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students，
18．（2024•辽宁一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
On a sunny Friday morning，Mr.Stone，the Grade 4 head teacher，walked into the classroom with
a new student following him.She was a lively girl from Mexico，and her red mushroom hair cut
immediately drew everyone's eyes.With a welcoming smile，Mr.Stone gestured for her to sit beside
Mike，a student known for teasing others.
During break time，Mike couldn't help but laugh when he caught sight of his new deskmate.Sara's
distinctive hairstyle seemed like an open invitation for him to make fun of her.Leaning in towards
Sara，he playfully suggested， "Hey，Sara.Ever thought about changing your name to Dora？You look
just like Dora the Explorer!" His words caused laughter and cheers from the others in the classroom.
Sara's eyes filled with tears，her cheeks turning red with embarrassment.Feeling hurt and upset，she
stood up suddenly，rushing to the teacher's office to seek support from Mr.Stone.After hearing her
story，Mr.Stone offered her gentle comfort，saying， "Sara，your hairstyle is truly pretty.Remember，
12everyone has their own sense of beauty."
Mr.Stone then directed his attention to Mike，expressing his disappointment and urging Mike to
apologize to Sara. "Mike，" he continued， "your actions were unkind.We must treat everyone with
empathy（同情）.Laughing at Sara's hair has deeply hurt her."
This conflict was temporarily settled，but Mr.Stone found himself lost in thought.Reflecting on his
own childhood，Mr.Stone recalled how he had been teased for being overweight.The pain caused by
hurtful words was like wrinkles on a crumpled（压皱的）ball of paper.Even if you smoothed them
out，the wrinkles stayed.
He wanted to teach an important lesson to Mike，the troublemaker.Then，a unique strategy came to
mind.He contacted Mike's mother，explaining the situation and discussing a plan with her to develop
empathy in her son.They agreed that over the weekend，Mike's mother would arrange for Mike to have
his hair cut extremely short.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
On Monday morning，Mike unwillingly approached the classroom.________
At that moment，Mr.Stone walked into the classroom with a ball of paper.________
19．（2024•邵阳二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短
文。
It was a beautiful sunny morning in early summer，when the world seemed full of sunlight and
new green leaves.I was in a good mood as my parents had just given me ＄300 for my daily expenses
during the week that they would be away in Mexico to visit my mother's sick grandfather.I was
extremely overjoyed，thinking hard about the things I could do with the money.If I survived on bread
and butter the whole week，I would have an unexpected windfall of ＄200 to buy the latest Kobe
Bryant basketball shoes!What a terrific idea!
As usual，the physical education class was thrilling.I felt most at case on the basketball court.After
playing several fierce games，I could hardly catch my breath as I headed back towards the classroom，
sweaty and exhausted.When I entered，I found my classmates gathered around Steven's desk as he
searched through his books and some other personal items anxiously.Steven had always been popular.Not
only was he intelligent and well﹣mannered，but he also came from a well﹣off family.And he shared
everything he had with us.
Right away，I learned Steven had lost the money he would donate to a children's welfare institute
13that afternoon.Then I informed Miss Jones，the class teacher.She rushed over immediately and organized
a search around the classroom.We stood by our desks and emptied the contents of our schoolbags onto
the desk for inspection.
It was my turn.As Miss Jones took out the ＄300 from my wallet，the class fell into a shock.I
didn't know the amount lost was exactly ＄300 until then.I kept proving my innocence，but in vain.Miss
Jones confiscated （没收） the ＄300 and decided I was getting kicked out of the school.I stayed home
alone the whole week，living only on bread.I felt wronged，angry，and loss of self﹣esteem.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally，my parents returned home and talked with me.________
Miss Jones had just accepted my parents' advice when Steven came.________
20．（2024•广州模拟）假定你是李华，你校计划在暑假期间重修图书馆，校英文报举办主题为"Small
changes make an ideal library"的征文活动，向同学们征求意见，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）提出建议；
（2）说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Small changes make an ideal library
_____
21．（2024•大连模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
I spotted my neighbor，Monica，working in her garden one day when I returned home from
school.It was sunny，and the smell of cut grass made me feel refreshed.I popped my head over the
fence，and Monica and I got talking.
"I've seen you're very good at using a lawn mower（割草机） and gardening tools，" Monica said.
"There's a hedge（树篱） growing over the pathway near here.It's so overgrown that it becomes a head
ache for the passers﹣by.I was planning to cut it back myself.Would you like to help out？"
I loved the idea of helping Monica and our community.We agreed to cut the hedge the following
Sunday.My brother Ivan，aged 10，also came along to help us.We wheeled Monica's garbage can down
to the hedge，which the community council was responsible for.All three of us cut it with shears （大
14剪刀） until a trouble﹣free pathway came in sight.Mr.Brown，a wheelchair user，was grateful that he
didn't have to make a detour（绕行） any more to pass the hedge.Encouraged by his words，I
suggested doing more for our community，to make it a better place.
When we first started，we just made the best of the equipment we already had in my parents'
garage.But as time went on，donations came in from the local community.Our garage got filled up
quickly with brushes，gardening tools，and even donated power tools like leaf blowers.With everything
ready，our first project was to beautiful park near our houses，which looked a bit run﹣down.Ivan was
in charge of painting the fence around，Monica cleared the lawn with a leaf blower，and I was
responsible for repairing the benches where our neighbors usually sat at their leisure.After two weeks'
hard work，we felt stunned when stepping back and appreciating the clean and brand new small
park.My heart swelled with pride because our efforts paid off.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为 150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I posted photos of our hard work on our local Facebook Group.________
With more neighbors joining in，we headed for the flower bed near the community center.________
22．（2024•长春模拟） I remember a time when I learned the true meaning of forgiveness.It was a
period in my life that tested my patience and my ability to understand others.
It all started when I was in middle school.I had a close friend named Emily，and we spent a lot
of time together.One day，Emily introduced me to a new girl in our class，named Olivia.Olivia was
quiet and shy，but we quickly became friends as well.
One afternoon，after school，we were all working on a project in the classroom.As we were
discussing our ideas，Olivia suddenly exclaimed out something that completely contradicted what I had
been saying.I was shocked and felt a little embarrassed.I tried to explain my point of view，but Olivia
was very stubborn and insisted on her own idea.
Emily，who was sitting next to me，tried to mediate （调节） the situation.But Olivia got angry
and said some unkind words to me.I was hurt and angry，and I couldn't believe that Olivia would treat
me like that.I stormed out of the classroom，leaving Emily and Olivia behind.
The next few days were very difficult for me.I avoided Olivia as much as possible，and our
friendship with Emily seemed to be stressed.I felt like I had been betrayed by Olivia，and I couldn't
understand why she would do such a thing.
One day，I asked Emily why she was still friends with Olivia after what she had done.Emily
15looked at me with a sad expression and said，"You know，Olivia has been through a lot lately.Her
parents are going through a divorce，and she's really struggling.Maybe she was rude to you because she
was feeling overwhelmed and insecure."
Hearing this，I felt a surge of guilt.I realized that I hadn't taken the time to understand Olivia's
situation.I had been too quick to judge her and too focused on my own feelings of hurt.I decided to
talk to Olivia and apologize for my behavior.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I found Olivia，she was sitting alone in the hallway.______
Olivia accepted my apology and we had a long conversation.__________
23．（2024•靖远县校级模拟）假定你是某国际学校学生李华，你的爱尔兰笔友 Kelly对你提到的学校"多
元文化日"（Multicultural Day）活动很感兴趣。请回信告知他关于该活动的相关信息。内容包括：1.活
动时间；2.活动目的和内容。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Kelly，
________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
24．（2024•上城区校级模拟） 假定你是学生会主席李华，将为获得校英语辩论赛第一名的学生代表
致颁奖词。请写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）表示祝贺；
（2）回顾比赛过程；
（3）简述获奖理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
25．（2024•辽宁模拟）近年来，许多城市都流行兴建"口袋公园"，曾经的社区边角地摇身一变，成了家
门口高颜值的小公园，给市民带来了惊喜。假定你是李华，你所在的城市也逐渐建了一些口袋公园，
为此你校英文报社正在组织以"Pocket Parks in My Eyes"为主题的征文活动，请你撰写一篇短文投稿，
内容包括：
（1）简要介绍"口袋公园"；
（2）阐述"口袋公园"的好处；
16（3）号召绿色生活方式。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Pocket Parks in My Eyes
_____
172025年菁优高考英语解密之写作题型
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•新高考Ⅰ）ㅤI met Gunter on a cold，wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had
planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm，my flight
had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the
departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane，I ran like crazy through the
airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second sought.
ㅤThat was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going ，but he said he hadn't heard of the
bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem，so I explained again more slowly，but he
still looked confused.When I was about to give up，Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a
friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century，Gunter put his phone
down and started the car.
ㅤFinally，with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully，there was a long
queue still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus，turned around，and
looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it， "he said.
ㅤJust then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled
out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times，but the card machine just did not play along.A
feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
ㅤAt this moment，Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There at the entrance，
was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car，made a mad run for the machine，and popped my card
in，only to read the message："Out of order.Sorry."
ㅤI ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news._____
ㅤFour days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised._____
【考点】读后续写．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章讲述了一个充满压力的夜晚，作者与一位名叫Gunter的出租车司机的难
忘邂逅。作者赶公共汽车去布拉格参加会议的时间很紧，但由于暴风雨，他的航班延误了。在与时间
的赛跑中，作者遇到了Gunter，Gunter起初不知道公交车站，但通过他的努力和帮助，他们及时赶到
18了车站。然而，作者意识到他没有现金支付给Gunter，车站的银行卡机也出了故障。尽管遇到了种种
障碍，Gunter还是表现出了善意，并确保作者登上了公共汽车。
高分句型一：As I boarded the bus，I promised him that I would repay him as soon as I returned to
Vienna.
译文：当我登上公共汽车时，我向他承诺，我一回到维也纳就会还钱他。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句，as soon as引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Just as you can see，a random kindness in a cold night turned out to be a warm
encounter.
译文：正如你所看到的，在寒冷的夜晚，一次随意的善意变成了一次温暖的邂逅。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.His face fell，but he quickly recovered
and said， "Don't worry，you can get on the bus first and go to conference.You can pay me back
when you coma back." With those words，he waved goodbye to me and urged me to go on the
bus.As I boarded the bus，I promised him that I would repay him as soon as I returned to Vienna.
【高分句型一】His kind gesture had saved me from missing the conference，and I was deeply
grateful.（尽管作者没有现金，Gunter还是让作者上了公共汽车，作者承诺会还钱给他）
Four days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised.He was delighted to hear
from me and told me to meet him at the same taxi rank.I brought with me the exact amount money he
had charged me plus a little extra as a token of my appreciation.As I handed him the money，he
smiled warmly and said， "I was just doing my job.But it's always good to have friends in unexpected
places." Just as you can see，a random kindness in a cold night turned out to be a warm encounter.
【高分句型二】（四天后，作者联系Gunter，并将钱还给他）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
19（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
2．（2024•深圳一模） In our weekly staff meeting，our editor Ashley was not pleased with the
quality of our reporting."Our readership is way down.We need better stories for this Thursday's school
newspaper.Does anybody have any ideas？"she said.
I handed her my article about our basketball team beating Deerfield High School the previous night
by one point."Sports stories are fun，"she said，"but not good enough for the front page.We need
something to really get people's attention."
After our meeting，we left the newsroom together and heard someone screaming，"Perry is
missing!"Perry was a big red parrot and had been our school mascot（吉祥物） for ten years.He played
an important role in students"lives，both in and out of class.He had also been a constant presence at
school events，inspiring a sense of unity among students.
Everyone gathered around Perry's empty cage，heartbroken.Suddenly，a student from the crowd
came over and showed me a photo. "You're a reporter for the school paper，right？I happened to take
this yesterday，"he said.In the photo was a Deerfield High School basketball player with something large
hidden under his shirt around the size of a parrot.
"He must have stolen Perry to get back at us for winning the game!"Ashley cried.We hurried back
to the newsroom，agreeing to run the photo on the front page with the headline "Deerfield Stole
Perry.""This is just the story we need.Everyone will read it，"Ashley said confidently.
After she left，I took a closer look at the photo.The clock in the background read 4：15 pm，but
our game against Deerfield hadn't started until 4：30 pm.Why would the boy have taken Perry before
we even played？An uneasy feeling came over me that we might have falsely accused someone.
I went to Perry's usual caretaker to ask if he knew Perry was missing."He's not missing.He's
retired.He's ready for some quieter days，"he said.Learning the truth，I immediately told Ashley and
suggested writing a story to say goodbye to Perry.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise，Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story.______
On Thursday，the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye，Perry" on the front page.______
【考点】读后续写．
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【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了作者在一家报社工作，他们的吉祥物佩里被迪尔菲尔德高中的篮球运
动员偷走了，调查得知是佩里退休了。阿什利本来想报道被偷这件事，但是作者说明了可能对选手和
报纸的声誉造成的潜在伤害。最后阿什利放弃了，他们报道了佩里退休的新闻，这一报道取得了成功。
高分句型一：Noticing her hesitant expression，I further explained the potential harm it would cause
to the player and our paper 's reputation.
译文：注意到她犹豫的表情，我进一步解释了这会对球员和我们报纸的声誉造成的潜在伤害。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语 Noticing her hesitant expression作状语，it would cause to the
player and our paper 's reputation是省略关系代词的定语从句修饰the potential harm。
高分句型二：Many were disappointed with Perry's sudden departure，but were comforted by the fact
that he was in good care.
译文：许多人对佩里的突然离开感到失望，但他得到了很好的照顾，这让他们感到安慰。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的同位语从句。
【解答】To my surprise，Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story. "This is the
very story we need to attract more readers，"she argued.To convince her，I defended that if we
wrote this article，we would be telling a lie.Noticing her hesitant expression，I further explained the
potential harm it would cause to the player and our paper 's reputation. 【高分句型一】After some
discussion，Ashley finally gave in，"OK，let's try with real stories." Then I went to gather all the
necessary information to write an article about Perry and the precious memories we shared over the
years. （作者反对这一决定，说明了其中的危害以及他们最后决定报道佩里退休的事情）
On Thursday，the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye，Perry" on the front page.Soon，it
sparked heated discussions among students about Perry.Many were disappointed with Perry's sudden
departure，but were comforted by the fact that he was in good care. 【高分句型二】The story also
evoked sweet memories of Perry.Some students even requested to share their stories of him in our
paper!Seeing the story's success，Ashley came to me and said sincerely，"You are right!It's a good
story." Her words brought me a great sense of fulfillment.Indeed，true stories might not always draw
attention，but they have the power to touch and connect.（报道佩里退休的新闻产生的影响以及取得
成功）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
21还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
3．（2024•广东模拟） It took a day's drive，but distance was beside the point.I always enjoyed
long journeys in my father's car with my family.However，things went different that time.We were
moving to a new town，not for any tourist destination，but to settle down，for my father had a new
job there.My mother，sitting on the passenger seat in the front，was talking with my father.She
looked excited for the coming new life.But I was down，feeling nervous about starting a new school
life.Entering a new school meant adapting to a completely different environment and meeting new
classmates and teachers，which I was not good at.
On my first day at the new school，I felt lost and out of place.The students already knew each
other well，and they chatted happily during breaks.I missed my old friends terribly and wished I could
go back to my old school.Feeling lonely，I often spent time alone during breaks and after classes，
reading books in the library or drawing pictures in the art room.I missed the good days I had with my
old friends and longed for that sense of belonging.
As the days went by，I still found it hard to fit in.I was shy and found it difficult to strike up
conversations with my classmates.Some of the kids in my class noticed my discomfort and tried to be
friendly，but I couldn't shake off the feeling of being an outsider.I only had words with my deskmate，
Alex，when necessary.Things took a turn for the worse when I knocked off Alex's water bottle by
accident，although I picked up the bottle immediately and apologized to him.He got mad at me and
seemed not to forgive me.Soon I found we were avoiding each other.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
22However，I was assigned to pair up with Alex to design a poster.______
Alex proudly introduced that the fantastic picture was drawn by me._______
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【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者因父亲工作原因搬到新城镇并转学的经历。在新学校，作者感
到孤独和难以融入，尽管有同学试图友好相处，但作者仍感到自己是个局外人。一次意外导致作者与
同桌关系紧张，使情况进一步恶化。
高分句型一：I was worried that working with Alex would be very difficult because of our previous
relationship.
翻译：我担心由于我们之前的关系，与亚历克斯合作会非常困难。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Moving to a new town was not only challenging，but it also opened up a world of
opportunities and new experiences for me.
翻译：搬到一个新城不仅具有挑战性，而且为我打开了一个充满机遇和新体验的世界。
分析：本句使用了动名词短语Moving to a new town作主语。
【解答】However，I was assigned to pair up with Alex to design a poster.Reluctantly，we started
working together.I was worried that working with Alex would be very difficult because of our
previous relationship.【高分句型一】But to my surprise，as the work progressed，we found that we
shared many common interests.We put a lot of efforts into the drawings and texts，and finally we
completed a quite outstanding poster.Alex seemed to forgive me.He appreciated my efforts and began
to care about my feelings.The teacher highly praised our work and our classmates were amazed at the
picture on the poster.（两人通过合作，关系逐渐得到了改善）
Alex proudly introduced that the fantastic picture was drawn by me.I smiled shyly but happily as my
classmates crowned me and gave me a thumbs up.Slowly but surely ， I started feeling more
comfortable in my new school.I made new friends，including Alex，and began to participate in
activities in and after classes.Moving to a new town was not only challenging，but it also opened up
a world of opportunities and new experiences for me.【高分句型二】（两人的作品很成功，作者也适
应了新的环境）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
23一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
4．（2024•南宁模拟）你校英文报正在举办"最美微笑"的照片征集活动，请提交你的作品并对作品做英文
简介，内容包括：
（1）照片内容介绍；
（2）选择该照片的原因。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文；课外活动．
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【答案】I would like to submit a photo from my good friend，whose eyes sparking with joy.She
stands against flowers in full bloom，wearing a beaming smile.Her smile brings an instant sense of
delight to anyone who gazes upon it.
I believe this photo is a great choice because it not only highlights the spirit of smile but also shows
a positive attitude towards life.It provides a glimpse into the inner beauty of a teenager.Her smile
always has the power to brighten my day whenever I go through difficulties.
【分析】高分句型一：I would like to submit a photo from my good friend，whose eyes sparking
with joy.
译文：我想提交一张我的好朋友的照片，她的眼睛里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。
分析：这句话使用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：She stands against flowers in full bloom，wearing a beaming smile.
译文：她站在盛开的鲜花旁，面带笑容。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语wearing a beaming smile作状语。
【解答】I would like to submit a photo from my good friend，whose eyes sparking with joy. 【高
分句型一】She stands against flowers in full bloom，wearing a beaming smile. 【高分句型二】Her
smile brings an instant sense of delight to anyone who gazes upon it. （照片内容介绍）
24I believe this photo is a great choice because it not only highlights the spirit of smile but also shows
a positive attitude towards life.It provides a glimpse into the inner beauty of a teenager.Her smile
always has the power to brighten my day whenever I go through difficulties. （选择该照片的原因）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要
太多也不要太少。
5．（2024•金安区校级三模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mike对中国高中生"选科学习"（optional
study）很感兴趣，他想了解你是选择物理类还是历史类。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）介绍你的选择类别；
（2）陈述你的选择理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike，
How is everything going？________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；学习生活；书信类．
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【答案】Dear Mike，
How is everything going？I'm delighted to hear from you.I'm writing to tell you what subjects I'll
choose in my second year of high school.I intend to choose history，biology and chemistry.First，as a
fan of historical events，I wouldn't miss any chance to learn more about history.Also，biology is always
appealing to me because of many interesting experiments ， and I'm confident I'll do well in
biology.Although chemistry is known as a most challenging subject，it's also a subject widely applied to
many fields.It is believed that interest is the best teacher.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm writing to tell you what subjects I'll choose in my second year of high
school.
翻译：我写信是想告诉你我在高二的时候会选择什么科目。
分析：本句运用了what引导的宾语从句。
25高分句型二：Although chemistry is known as a most challenging subject，it's also a subject widely
applied to many fields.
翻译：虽然化学被认为是最具挑战性的学科，但它也是一门被广泛应用于许多领域的学科。
分析：本句运用了although引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
How is everything going？I'm delighted to hear from you.I'm writing to tell you what subjects I'll
choose in my second year of high school.【高分句型一】I intend to choose history，biology and
chemistry.（介绍自己的选择类别）First，as a fan of historical events，I wouldn't miss any chance to
learn more about history.Also ， biology is always appealing to me because of many interesting
experiments ， and I'm confident I'll do well in biology.Although chemistry is known as a most
challenging subject，it's also a subject widely applied to many fields.【高分句型二】It is believed that
interest is the best teacher.（陈述自己的选择理由）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
6．（2024•张家港市校级模拟）你校英文报正在开展以 Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise
Weekly为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）描述调查结果；
（2）分析其原因并给出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Nowadays，many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise，although the time they
spend on it varies.
26【考点】提纲作文；图表作文；文娱与体育．
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【答案】
Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Nowadays，many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise，although the time they
spend on it varies.
It can be seen from the survey that the percentage of students who spend 2﹣3 hours a week，3﹣4
hours a week and 4﹣5 hours a week is respectively 30%，40% and 18%.However，there are still
12% of students who only spend 1﹣2 hours a week.
The survey shows that a significant number of students are committed to physical exercise.This trend
may be due to increased awareness of the importance of physical fitness and promotion of sports
activities by the school.
As far as I'm concerned，by continuing to promote and support physical activities within the school
environment，we can ensure the overall well﹣being and health of our students.
【分析】高分句型一：However，there are still 12% of students who only spend 1﹣2 hours a week.
翻译：然而，仍有12%的学生每周只花1﹣2个小时。
分析：本句使用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：The survey shows that a significant number of students are committed to physical
exercise.
翻译：调查显示，相当多的学生致力于体育锻炼。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】
Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Nowadays，many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise，although the time they
27spend on it varies.
It can be seen from the survey that the percentage of students who spend 2﹣3 hours a week，3﹣4
hours a week and 4﹣5 hours a week is respectively 30%，40% and 18%.However，there are still
12% of students who only spend 1﹣2 hours a week.【高分句型一】（描述调查结果）
The survey shows that a significant number of students are committed to physical exercise.【高分句
型二】This trend may be due to increased awareness of the importance of physical fitness and
promotion of sports activities by the school.（分析其原因）
As far as I'm concerned，by continuing to promote and support physical activities within the school
environment，we can ensure the overall well﹣being and health of our students.（给出建议）
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，
同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
7．（2024•许昌模拟） It was time for the ice cream event that my small youth group had waited
for many months.The group consisted of five boys；one of them was Scott.
Scott always had a positive attitude.He looked on the bright side of things and never criticized
anyone.But Scott was different from the rest of us because he was disabled，suffering from a disease
which caused hands shaking constantly.Therefore，he was unable to participate in activities in most
cases.No one ever made fun of him to his face，but at times，people would laugh or stare in his
presence.But Scott never worried；he just kept his head up high and ignored them.
Finally，the night of the ice cream event descended.My friends and I rushed to the church
basement and waited with scoops （冰淇淋勺） in hand for the guests to arrive.One by one，people
filed in，all hoping to get a creamy and tasty scoop of ice cream.But what they ended up getting was a
hard and frozen mass.We waited for a while for the ice cream to melt，and eventually it did.
Once the ice cream melted，we had another problem.It had turned into three pools of coconut，
chocolate，and strawberry.But we persisted in serving it.We had our chance to serve，except for
Scott.So，being as kind as possible，I gave Scott a chance to scoop and serve.As soon as Scott gripped
the scoop，our ice cream troubles grew beyond control.Milky ice cream was flung in every direction
and made a mess on people，but there was no sign for him to come to a stop on account of his
terrible control of trembling hands.At that moment，a stir of unrest and dissatisfaction rippled through
the crowd.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
28Abruptly，a woman stormed forward and grabbed the scoop.______
Tears blurred his eyes as Scott got hold of the scoop again._____
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【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，这篇文章讲述了一个年轻团体的冰淇淋活动，其中一个名叫 Scott的
残障人士在众人的嘲笑与失望中勇敢地尝试去参与。最初，他的手的颤抖导致冰淇淋到处乱飞，引起
了不满和愤怒。但随后，有人解释了Scott的奉献精神，人们开始理解并帮助他。最终，活动圆满结束，
展现了理解、温暖和善意的力量。
高分句型一：Astonishment and then silence took hold of the crowd，after which she apologized and
returned the scoop.
翻译：人群中充满了惊讶和沉默，随后她道了歉，把独家新闻还了回去。
分析：本句运用了由介词+关系代词which引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：It was at this moment that I came to the enlightenment that this experience was a
testament of understanding，warmth and kindness.
翻译：就在那一刻，我领悟到，这段经历证明了理解、温暖和善良。
分析：本句运用了强调句"It is+被强调部分+that+其他"。
【解答】 Abruptly，a woman stormed forward and grabbed the scoop.She clenched her fist，
knitted her eyebrows and glared at Scott.Suddenly ， she held the scoop high and roared to
blame.Meanwhile，a flush of dissatisfaction and then fury overwhelming the crowd，they began to
yell.Evidently，Scott was scared，rooted to the spot，with his forehead sweaty and his face pale.At
the sight of this，I stepped forward，cleared my throat and shouted to explain Scott's spirit of
devotion despite disability.Astonishment and then silence took hold of the crowd，after which she
apologized and returned the scoop.【高分句型一】（描写了该女士对Scott的行为感到生气，对其责备
和怒吼，并且描述Scott害怕和失落的情绪及表现，以及描写作者为Scott的情况进行解释）
Tears blurred his eyes as Scott got hold of the scoop again.He strained every nerve to control his
hands to scoop ice cream.So regretful was the woman that she even came to assist him.Now，fully
aware of the situation，the crowd settled down and stood in line.They beamed with smiles and offered
words of encouragement as they received ice cream.As the last scoop of ice cream was served，a
symphony of laughter and euphoria permeated the basement.It was at this moment that I came to the
enlightenment that this experience was a testament of understanding，warmth and kindness.【高分句型
二】（描写了Scott对作者的行为表示感激，并且愤怒女士了解Scott的情况后感到后悔，以及描写作者
29的感悟）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
8．（2024秋•寻甸县校级月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇
完整的短文．续写词数应为 150 左右．
It was time to go home． "Remember to work on your class speeches for homework，" Miss
Walker called as everyone started talking and packing their school bags．Jenny felt sick．She hated
having to read aloud in class．She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her．Once，when
Jenny was reading out her holiday diary，Lee was even looking at his watch，a silver and blue one
which seemed just magical．
Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school．He seemed so clever，and he had a
certain sort of shining confidence．He was just one of those people who were good at everything．
Jenny sighed．As she turned the corner，she saw Lee's watch lying right in the middle of the path．
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him，but she didn't want to run after him．
Jenny bent down quickly，picked up the watch and ran home．On arriving home，Jenny put it on
almost without thinking．She was surprised it fitted so well．She walked to the mirror and started
practising her speech．Words just flooded out of her． "I'm going to talk about swimming．I have been
lucky．I've won lots of competitions．But when I'm in a race，I'm not really thinking about winning．
I'm just loving the feeling of being in the water…" Jenny laughed with excitement．She walked across
the room．She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence．Turning back to the mirror，
Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass．The flashes of silver seemed almost magical．
So maybe Lee's watch really DID have something magic about it．
30The next day，as the lesson began，Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first．
Nobody moved．Jenny slowly raised her arm．Before Miss Walker could say anything，there was a
shout from behind ． "She's stolen my watch!" Lee said angrily ， "It went missing at school
yesterday．"
Paragraph 1：
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny，waiting for an explanation．_________．
Paragraph 2：
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first．_______．
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【分析】高分句型一：She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all．
译文：她觉得很害怕，手表一点也不神奇．
分析：使用so+形容词+that+从句的句型．
高分句型二：Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech Jenny
smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence．
译文：十分钟后，全班同学都站起来为珍妮精彩的演讲鼓掌．珍妮终于意识到了真正的信心来源，她
笑了．
分析：as引导时间状语从句．
【解答】Paragraph 1：
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny，waiting for an explanation．Jenny didn't answer．How
could she explain about the watch and its magic ？No one could understand．No one could
believe．"But I saw you wearing it yesterday，"Miss Walker gently reminded him．For a moment
Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that Jenny was relieved saying
she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech．（Lee说出真相）
Paragraph 2：
Everybody was puzzled and asked why．Jenny again was speechless．
At that，Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speach first．Jenny walked
slowly to the front She couldn't think properly．All round her，a sea of faces was watching．She
felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all． 【高分句型一】Suddenly she saw Miss
Walker's encouraging eyes．Jenny took a deep breath．"I'm going to talk about swimming.."Ten
minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech Jenny smiled as she
31eventually realized the real source of confidence．【高分句型二】（Jenny成功演讲获得自信）
【点评】读后续写，简言之，就是阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后，根据要求和提示把这篇文章未写
完部分补充完整，使之浑然﹣体．它一方面很好地考查考生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力，而另方
面，它也培养学生的发散思维能力．根据《考试说明》该部分的规定，考生在续写文章时，要注意续
写部分"与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度"，"内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况"，"应
用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性"以及"上下文的连贯性"．根据这些规定，我们会发现读后续写有
如下特点：（1）读后续写不是随心所欲，是要在引导语（开头语）和提示词的帮助下完成续写部分．
如《考试说明》样题中规定"应使用5个以上短文中标有下划绨的关键词语（10处）"．这些关键词语
类似于传统写作中的要点提示，如人物、地点、事件，但是不同点在于这些关键词语并不是全用．这
样考生可根据自己的理解有很大的自主权．另外，所续写部分不能脱离各自段落的首句开头语，即：
不能另起炉灶．这些开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在某种程度E引导的思路向哪方面发展．
9．（2024•合川区校级模拟） Every Sunday，the competition started.The three of us would set our
alarm clocks to wake up earlier than anyone else.I had set my alarm clock to six in the morning，
hoping that my brothers wouldn't start before me.
Beep.Beep.Beep.Groaning，I reached over to my nightstand and slapped the top of my alarm clock.
"Too early on this cold winter day，" I murmured.I curled back into my warm blanket and fell asleep
again.
My eyes blinked open to the whirring sound of the vacuum cleaner. "They chose their chores first!"
I thought with despair.I jumped up from my bed and rushed to the bathroom，where I started the only
chore that was left for me.I would definitely be shoveling （铲） the driveway while they built an
igloo （冰屋） ，I thought cheerlessly，rubbing and wiping madly at the toilet bowl.
When I finished cleaning the toilet and sink，my brothers came into the bathroom to watch me
clean the bathtub as they mocked me about how I'd overslept and got stuck with the longest chore.
"Whoever finishes last has to shovel the driveway，remember？" my older brother reminded me with a
triumphant smile when we put on our big coats and snow pants to go outside.
The three of us stepped outside into the knee﹣deep snow and shielded our eyes from the
brightness.My brothers wasted no time and dashed off to play in the yard，leaving me behind to tackle
the frustrating task of shoveling the driveway.With a heavy sigh，I inched through the thick snow to the
driveway，my boots sinking with each step.I grunted （嘟哝） with effort as my brothers yelled with
joy.Sunday would never be my day，I sighed.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
32（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly，I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete.
______
After we finished，we sat inside the igloo，laughing about our morning adventures.
______
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【答案】 Suddenly，I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete.Turning
around，I saw my brothers busily scooping snow from the driveway. "We're not helping：we just
need blocks of snow for our igloo，" my younger brother explained hastily.Watching them，I couldn't
help but smile.Despite their explanation，it was clear that they were helping me，which greatly
warmed my heart.With their help，the task became easier，and soon scoop by scoop，we cleared out
the driveway together，laughing and chatting as we worked.We dug up enough snow to build the
igloo of our dreams.
After we finished，we sat inside the igloo，laughing about our morning adventures.As we sipped on
some hot cocoa，the warmth of the cocoa and the snugness of the igloo made me forget all about the
cold outside.Looking around at my brothers' smiling faces.I felt a warm sense of contentment.Despite our
silly competitions and occasional teasing ， there was nowhere else I'd rather be than right
there.surrounded by my family.As we sat together.I couldn't help but feel grateful for these moments.It
wasn't just about the igloo or the hot cocoa：it was about the bond we shared as siblings.That day，as
we sat in our cozy snow fortress.I realized that our rivalry was just a small part of the love and
support we had for each other.And that's what made our Sundays so special.
【分析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者因为比兄弟们起床晚不得不做最繁重的家务并清理车道，
作者因此非常沮丧，后来兄弟们来帮助作者清理积雪，作者心情放松下来，与兄弟们建立了冰屋，一
起坐在冰屋里喝着热可可，作者感到非常满足，对家人充满感激。
高分句型一：Turning around，I saw my brothers busily scooping snow from the driveway.
翻译：转过身，我看到我的兄弟们正忙着从车道上铲雪。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语Turning around作状语。
高分句型二：Despite their explanation，it was clear that they were helping me，which greatly
warmed my heart.
翻译：尽管他们解释了，但很明显他们是在帮助我，这让我很温暖。
分析：本句运用了that引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
33【解答】 Suddenly，I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete.Turning
around，I saw my brothers busily scooping snow from the driveway. 【高分句型一】"We're not
helping：we just need blocks of snow for our igloo，" my younger brother explained hastily.Watching
them，I couldn't help but smile.Despite their explanation，it was clear that they were helping me，
which greatly warmed my heart.【高分句型二】With their help，the task became easier，and soon
scoop by scoop，we cleared out the driveway together，laughing and chatting as we worked.We dug
up enough snow to build the igloo of our dreams.（描写了兄弟们帮助作者一起清理积雪的过程和作
者内心的感受）
After we finished，we sat inside the igloo，laughing about our morning adventures.As we sipped on
some hot cocoa，the warmth of the cocoa and the snugness of the igloo made me forget all about the
cold outside.Looking around at my brothers' smiling faces.I felt a warm sense of contentment.Despite our
silly competitions and occasional teasing ， there was nowhere else I'd rather be than right
there.surrounded by my family.As we sat together.I couldn't help but feel grateful for these moments.It
wasn't just about the igloo or the hot cocoa：it was about the bond we shared as siblings.That day，as
we sat in our cozy snow fortress.I realized that our rivalry was just a small part of the love and
support we had for each other.And that's what made our Sundays so special.（描写了兄弟们在冰屋里一
起的快乐时光以及作者的感悟）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
10．（2024•固始县校级二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
Lily was renowned for her desire to achieve perfection in everything she undertook.Whether it was
34school projects，art assignments，or even helping her parents with household chores，Lily's commitment
to excellence was unwavering.
One sunny summer day，Lily's family decided to spend a day at the beach.As they arrived，Lily's
eyes were immediately drawn by a group of children who playfully built and then tore down their
sandcastles.They giggled and shouted，their excitement on full display. "How silly， " she thought，not
quite getting why they enjoyed doing that.
Lily，being herself，decided to build a perfect sandcastle that would become the envy of all
beachgoers.She began to plan every detail in her mind，from the balanced structures of the towers to
the delicate decorations.Then ， she set about piling sand to make the towers and walls of her
sandcastle.Painstakingly，she crafted each feature of her work，carefully smoothed the surfaces and
adjusting every detail to her vision.
Jake，Lily's younger brother，didn't seem too concerned with building a fantastic sandcastle.He
picked a spot nearby and amused himself with the sand.He scooped up handfuls of sand，let it slip
through his fingers like grains of time，and then molded it into careless shapes with the carefree
abandon of a child.Jake's happiness was contagious.Mom and Dad joined him，laughing and joking over
Jake's playful creations.From time to time，they called out to Lily and invited her to join the fun，
knowing that the pursuit of perfection could be exhausting.
Nevertheless，Lily stayed where she was，determined to create an impressive sandcastle.She frowned
at Jake's unconventional，abstract art﹣like sandcastle shapes and persisted in her efforts.However，the
process didn't go as smoothly as she had anticipated.The sand didn't always hold its shape，and the
waves constantly lapped at the edges of her creation.
Para 1：As the day wore on，Lily's sandcastle kept losing its form.___________
Para 2：With bitter smile，Lily decided to join her family.___________
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【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了Lily在海滩上建造沙堡的经历，并对比了她追求完美主义和弟弟 Jake
享受快乐的态度。通过这个故事，作者表达了接受并欣赏生活中的不完美和欢乐的重要性。
高分句型一：But no matter how hard she tried，the elements seemed to conspire against her.
译文：但是，无论她多么努力，这些因素似乎都对她不利。
分析：这句话使用了no matter how引导的让步状语从句。
35高分句型二：It was in that moment that she truly began to understand the beauty of imperfection
and the importance of enjoying the simple things in life.
译文：正是在那一刻，她真正开始理解不完美的美和享受生活中简单事物的重要性。
分析：这句话使用了强调句。
【解答】Para 1：As the day wore on，Lily's sandcastle kept losing its form.Despite her best efforts
to mold and shape the sand，the waves and the wind seemed determined to undo her hard
work.Frustration started to creep in as she watched her masterpiece crumble time and time
again.Determined not to give up，Lily redoubled her efforts，trying to salvage what was left of her
sandcastle.But no matter how hard she tried，the elements seemed to conspire against her.【高分句型
一】The once﹣perfect sandcastle now resembled a lopsided ruin，a stark reminder of her failed
attempt at perfection.（虽然Lily一直在努力，但是却阻止不了自己的沙堡被海浪毁了）
Para 2：With bitter smile，Lily decided to join her family.Sitting down next to Jake，she observed
his carefree laughter and the joy on her parents' faces.For the first time that day，she realized that
perhaps there was more to life than striving for perfection.In that moment，Lily made a choice.She
let go of her obsession with the sandcastle and joined in the fun.She laughed，played，and created
sandcastles without the burden of expectations.It was in that moment that she truly began to
understand the beauty of imperfection and the importance of enjoying the simple things in life.【高分
句型二】 （Lily和家人堆沙堡时终于感悟到不完美也是快乐的）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
11．（2024•龙岗区校级模拟）假定你是李华，是阳光中学英语广播台的负责人。英语广播台将举办主题
36为"志愿服务，从我做起"的英语演讲比赛。请你写一则英语通知发布到学校英文网站上，内容包括：
（1）活动目的；
（2）具体要求。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Notice
English Speaking Competition
___________
Li Hua
English Radio Station
8th June 2024
【考点】提纲作文；课外活动；通知类．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
Notice
English Speaking Competition
In an effort to promote the spirit of volunteerism and inspire our students to actively engage in
community service，the English Radio Station will be hosting an English speaking competition with the
theme "Volunteering，Start with Me."
Requirements for the competition are as follows：Firstly，participants are required to deliver a 3﹣5
minute speech on their personal volunteering experiences or propose a volunteer project in areas such as
environmental conservation，education，or community support.Secondly，speeches should be in English，
demonstrating proper grammar，vocabulary，and pronunciation.The competition is going to be held in
our School Lecture Hall at 2 p.m.on 20th June.If you're interested to participate，please go to our
school website and fill in your entry form online before 15th June.
Li Hua
English Radio Station
8th June 2024
【分析】高分句型一：Secondly，speeches should be in English，demonstrating proper grammar，
vocabulary，and pronunciation.
37翻译：其次，演讲应该用英语，展示正确的语法、词汇和发音。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语demonstrating proper grammar，vocabulary，and pronunciation作状语。
高分句型二：If you're interested to participate，please go to our school website and fill in your entry
form online before 15th June.
翻译：如果你有兴趣参加，请在6月15日之前访问我们的学校网站并在线填写报名表。
分析：本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】
Notice
English Speaking Competition
In an effort to promote the spirit of volunteerism and inspire our students to actively engage in
community service，the English Radio Station will be hosting an English speaking competition with the
theme "Volunteering，Start with Me."（活动目的）
Requirements for the competition are as follows：Firstly，participants are required to deliver a 3﹣5
minute speech on their personal volunteering experiences or propose a volunteer project in areas such as
environmental conservation，education，or community support.Secondly，speeches should be in English，
demonstrating proper grammar，vocabulary，and pronunciation.【高分句型一】The competition is going
to be held in our School Lecture Hall at 2 p.m.on 20th June.If you're interested to participate，please
go to our school website and fill in your entry form online before 15th June.【高分句型二】（具体要
求）
Li Hua
English Radio Station
8th June 2024
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思
连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章
显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12．（2024•绍兴二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Kevin woke to the blaring beep of his alarm clock. "Can't wait for that camping trip，" Kevin
thought，filled with excitement.As he was leaving home，his dad grabbed him by the hand and said，
"Before you go，just tell me the directions on where you and your friends are going to stay."
"But dad!" Kevin complained.
38"No buts!" Kevin's dad added.
"Fine." Kevin told him the directions and left.
The three friends，Kevin，Jay and Nathan，had been planning this adventure for weeks，packing
their stuff﹣tents，snacks，and a map﹣preparing for a 3﹣day outdoor exploration.Excitement ran
through Kevin as they departed for their campsite. "This trip is going to be awesome， " Nathan
excitedly yelled as they set off.But little did they know that nature had a surprise in store for them.
The first day at the campsite was going great，setting up tents，collecting firewood，and sharing
stories. "Man，we nailed these tents， " Kevin said. "I know it was easy really，" Nathan replied.The
friends were happy.
Yet towards night，as the dark clouds gathered overhead，the atmosphere shifted，and a sudden
storm erupted with unforgiving anger.Rain poured down from the heavens like a relentless waterfall，
transforming the peaceful campsite into a muddy battleground.Worse still，a huge tree was uprooted and
crashed down with a deafening crack on their only means of escape ﹣ their car.Kevin's eyes widened
in horror as he spotted the damaged wreckage beneath the fallen giant. "Our car!" he screamed over the
howling wind，his voice a mix of disbelief and despair. "We're stuck here，" he declared，his words
barely audible against the backdrop of thunder and raindrops.They realized that their plans had been
violently spoiled by forces beyond their control.The once quiet campsite now stood as a deserted
battlefield，the fallen tree serving as a painful reminder of the unpredictable nature of the world around
them.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：The next day，they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding
water.________
Paragraph 2：On the third night，a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.________
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【分析】本文以人物为线索展开。凯文和朋友杰伊和内森要去露营，在爸爸的追问下告诉爸爸方向，
然后离开了。然而，夜幕降临时，一场突如其来的风暴带着无情的愤怒爆发了。一棵大树，轰然倒下，
击中了他们唯一的逃生工具——他们的汽车。他们意识到他们的计划被他们无法控制的力量粗暴地破
坏了。
39高分句型一：However，with time passing by，more challenges emerged ﹣limited food，frightful
night filled with wilderness sounds，and the uncertainty of survival in the wild.
翻译：然而，随着时间的推移，更多的挑战出现了——食物有限，充满荒野声音的可怕夜晚，以及野
外生存的不确定性。
分析：运用了with time passing by的with复合结构。
高分句型二：The emotions that played across their faces ﹣ disbelief，gratitude，and overwhelming
joy﹣ mirrored the shared trouble that had forged a deep bond among them.
翻译：他们脸上流露出的情绪——难以置信、感激和压倒性的喜悦﹣﹣反映了在他们之间建立深厚联
系的共同麻烦。
分析：运用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】The next day，they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water.The
search for water soon drained their energy.They were about to give up when they heard a small
sound，a splash of some sort.They ran as fast as they could and found a small stream﹣a lifeline in
all the challenges.However，with time passing by，more challenges emerged ﹣limited food，frightful
night filled with wilderness sounds，and the uncertainty of survival in the wild.【高分句型一】Their
nerves were near the edge of breaking down after long hours of uncertainty in the wilderness.（他们
寻找水的艰难过程和面临的其它挑战。）
On the third night，a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.Relief washed over the weary
faces as they witnessed the approach of a rugged vehicle.Kevin's dad stepped out to meet the
group.The emotions that played across their faces ﹣ disbelief，gratitude，and overwhelming joy﹣
mirrored the shared trouble that had forged a deep bond among them.【高分句型二】Back home，
Kevin's dad said， "Good thing you told me those directions，" teaching them the importance of
informing someone about plans.The experience turned into tales of courage and resilience，embedded
in their memories as lessons for a lifetime.（他们获救的过程和感悟。）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
要注意续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
40根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
13．（2024•广东二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
After a busy week，Emily and her parents decided to go on a mountain picnic.They longed to fully
experience nature's beauty and enjoy quality family time.Little did they know，this outing would be
filled with unexpected twists and turns （波折）.
Arriving at the mountain's base，they discovered a house，in front of which Mike and his father
had just finished loading a boat onto Mike's truck.Emily approached them and asked for the best picnic
spot in the area.Knowing the mountain well，Mike suggested a location about two hours' walk away.
"It's worth the effort，" he assured them.
Parking their car next to Mike's truck and carrying their picnic supplies，Emily and her parents set
off on the winding road.Tall green trees on one side，a flowing stream on the other，the road
eventually led them to a breathtaking clearing dotted with colorful wildflowers.They enjoyed their
delicious sandwiches，fruits，and snacks，engaging in pleasant conversations.
Just as they finished their meal and settled down to relax，dark clouds unexpectedly rolled in.It
looked like rain.Panicked，they hurriedly set up the tent they had brought.No sooner had they entered
than raindrops began pouring on the roof.Heavy rain enveloped the surroundings，making it impossible
to see anything.They had no choice but to patiently wait it out.
After what felt like a century，the rain ceased.Emily and her parents wasted no time packing up
their belongings，ready to get downhill.However，their excitement turned to worry when they discovered
that the small stream they had previously crossed had turned into a wide and impassable river.With no
cellphone signal，they were trapped without a means of seeking help.To make matters worse，darkness
was approaching.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly，they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river.________
Emily and her parents boarded the boat.________
41【考点】读后续写．
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【答案】Suddenly，they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river.It was Mike and his
father returning from their fishing trip.Upon seeing Emily and her parents stranded，Mike immediately
jumped into action.He quickly tied a rope to his truck and threw it across the river. "Grab the rope
and we'll pull you across!" shouted Mike's father.With trembling hands，Emily and her parents
grasped the rope and were slowly pulled to the other side.
Emily and her parents boarded the boat.Mike's father skillfully navigated the boat through the
turbulent waters，while Mike provided comfort and reassurance.As they made their way down the
mountain，Emily and her parents were filled with gratitude.The experience had been unexpectedly
challenging，but they had come out stronger and with newfound friends.The memory of that day
would forever be etched in their hearts.
【分析】Emily和父母周末去山上野餐，想享受自然美景和家庭时光。不料遭遇意外天气，被困山上。
幸遇Mike父子，他们用绳子和船将他们救回，让他们得以安全下山。这次经历让他们感激不已，也收
获了新朋友。
高分句型一：Mike's father skillfully navigated the boat through the turbulent waters，while Mike
provided comfort and reassurance.
翻译：迈克的父亲熟练地驾驶着船穿过汹涌的海水，而迈克则提供了安慰和保证。
分析：本句使用了while引导的比较状语从句。
高分句型二：As they made their way down the mountain，Emily and her parents were filled with
gratitude.
翻译：当他们下山时，艾米丽和她的父母充满了感激之情。
分析：本句使用了as引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Suddenly，they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river.It was Mike and his
father returning from their fishing trip.Upon seeing Emily and her parents stranded，Mike immediately
jumped into action.He quickly tied a rope to his truck and threw it across the river. "Grab the rope
and we'll pull you across!" shouted Mike's father.With trembling hands，Emily and her parents
grasped the rope and were slowly pulled to the other side.（Mike和他的父亲捕鱼归来，用绳子将他
们拉过河流）
Emily and her parents boarded the boat.Mike's father skillfully navigated the boat through the
turbulent waters，while Mike provided comfort and reassurance.【高分句型一】As they made their
way down the mountain，Emily and her parents were filled with gratitude. 【高分句型二】The
42experience had been unexpectedly challenging，but they had come out stronger and with newfound
friends.The memory of that day would forever be etched in their hearts.（这次经历虽然充满了挑战，
但也让他们结识了新的朋友，留下了深刻的记忆）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
14．（2024•上城区校级模拟） Tom and Jane planned a holiday at the lake，and they decided to
take their children，Tim and Sarah，with them.However，Tim and Sarah wanted：to visit Disney
World for their holiday or hire a yacht （游艇） in Hawaii.Camping by the lake wasn't even on
their list of holiday adventures.
"We can visit some of the islands too，" Jane said. "Your dad and I always wanted to explore the
mysterious cabin on Moose Island."
Mysterious cabin？The children were now far more interested in this lake holiday idea.
"We might see Big foot，" Tim said.
"Or some unusual species!" Sarah turned to her parents. "We're in.When do we leave？"
The children's excitement quickly disappeared when they arrived at the lake.While their parents were
carrying their suitcases inside，Timand Sarah stood on the path and stared at the cabin they'd be staying
in for the next week，complaining about the smell around，the dust，and the various small insects.
"We're in nature now，kids.Enjoy the experience!Your dad is building a fire so we can have
barbecued fish and potatoes baked in the coals.Isn't that great？"
Sarah choked. "I am not eating food cooked in coals!I want takeaway instead."
"Me too." Tim was about to cry. "Holidays are supposed to be fun，Mom."
"Come on，guys.There's a lot of joy to be found in living a simple life and spending time together
as a family."
43"People in the suburbs live a simple life，which is more like being homeless!" Sarah shouted
"Yeah，" Tim added. "How can there not be a single restaurant that delivers here？How do these
people survive？"
"They eat coal potatoes!" Sarah laughed. "And fish they kill with their bare hands!"
Sarah ran away，and Tim followed.Jane buried her head in her hands.She realized she had to do
something to correct their children's attitude towards simple life.After dinner，she told all about this to
Tom，who agreed with Jane.Then they came up with an idea.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：The next morning，Tim and Sarah entered the main room to demand they leave
immediately，but neither Mom nor Dad was in there.
______
Paragraph 2：When Tim was about to fall asleep，he heard the sound of heavy footsteps outside，
which were approaching.
______
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开。汤姆和简计划去湖边度假，但他们的孩子蒂姆和萨拉不愿意。汤姆
和简说服了孩子们。但是孩子们到达之后不喜欢大自然，尤其是不想吃炭火烤鱼和土豆。夫妻二人决
定想办法改变孩子们的看法。
高分句型一：They looked everywhere for the figure of father and mother，inside and outside，but
only to find that they were indeed not here.
翻译：他们到处寻找爸爸和妈妈的身影，里里外外，却发现他们确实不在这里。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：This time，they seemed so delicious，which nothing could be compared with.
翻译：这一次，他们似乎是如此美味，没有什么可以与之相比。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【 解 答 】 The next morning ， Tim and Sarah entered the main room to demand they leave
immediately，but neither Mom nor Dad was in there.They looked everywhere for the figure of father
and mother，inside and outside，but only to find that they were indeed not here.【高分句型一】They
began to panic，thinking Tom and Jane had abandoned them.Soon it was noon.Seeing that there was
44nothing to eat at once，they were desperate.Suddenly they remembered that her parents had said that
they could cook barbecued fish and potatoes，so they immediately put into practice，hoping to
quickly fill their stomachs.But they could do nothing and it was getting dark.（描写了他们发现父母
不在后的心理活动和动作）
When Tim was about to fall asleep，he heard the sound of heavy footsteps outside，which were
approaching.Tim woke up quickly to see who was coming.He saw his mother and father，waking
Sarah up happily.Mom and dad saw their faces were blackened because of coal，moved to hug and
praise them，and said "This is a simple life，children.You must enjoy the experience of nature." And
quickly they brought out the barbecued fish and potatoes.This time，they seemed so delicious，which
nothing could be compared with.【高分句型二】（描写了父母回来后孩子们的动作和心理活动）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
15．（2024•洪山区校级二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a cold，snowy evening.Tommy was running as fast as he could，focused on nothing but his
destination — the shop on the street comer.Two weeks ago he saw figurines（小塑像）of Marvel
superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one.He's been walking the neighbor's dog ever since
then to earn money to fulfill his little dream.He was so excited and barely noticing the world around
him.Maybe that's why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman，who was sitting on the
pavement，her back against the wall.He murmured（低语）"sorry" and moved on to his destination.
Once he entered the shop，he went straight to the shelves with figurines.Hulk，Thor，Captain
America，Iron Man，and many more — all of his admired heroes.With his heart pounding like crazy he
reached for Spiderman.
45"You like these，true believer？"
Tommy turned around.An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face.
"Y﹣yes，...Yes，they're awesome!" answered Tommy. "They're strong and fast and help other
people a lot ..." the boy looked at figurines in admiration. "I wish I could be a superhero（超级英雄）
too."
"Then become one!" said the old man.
"How？" Tommy asked in surprise. "I don't have any superpowers."
"And why would you need them？" the old man smiled.Seeing the confusion on the boy's face，he
squatted（蹲下）and put his hands on Tommy's arms. "Did you know that shopkeeper lady over there
has a disabled husband？She's been working hard and taking care of him for years.I've never heard a
word of complaint from her.And this person —" he pointed at a redhead man，who just entered the
shop. "He's a firefighter，he's saved countless lives.He never gives up，no matter how dangerous the
situation seems to be."
The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. "You don't need a superpower to be a hero
for someone else.The path of a superhero starts not in the mind，not in the muscles，but in the heart."
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.__________
The homeless woman was right there，where he saw her last time._________
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【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了汤米想成为超级英雄，在一个老人的开导下他学会了用自己的行动去
帮助他人的故事。
高分句型一：His eyes lit up﹣﹣﹣﹣ he already had an idea of what he should do.
译文：他的眼睛亮了起来——他已经知道该怎么办了。
分析：这句话使用what引导宾语从句。
高分句型二：When he finally stopped，he was breathing heavily，but he didn't feel tired.
译文：当他终于停下来时，他喘着粗气，但并不觉得累。
分析：这句话使用when引导时间状语从句。
【解答】Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.Finally he raised his
head. "So I am supposed to..." he stopped mid﹣sentence when he realized that he was alone.He
turned his head left and right，but the old man was nowhere to be seen.His eyes lit up﹣﹣﹣﹣ he
46already had an idea of what he should do.【高分句型一】He looked at figurines for the last time
and moved towards the counter. "Two sandwiches and a cup of tea please， "he said，and then
returned，food in hand.（汤米懂得了真正超级英雄的含义）
The homeless woman was right there，where he saw her last time.Tommy came closer and carefully
gave the woman his buys.Her eyes opened wide in surprise，then filled with tears. "Thank you，"
she whispered.Tommy bowed his head，turned around and went back home.He was moving faster and
faster and finally he started to run.Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could
fly.When he finally stopped，he was breathing heavily，but he didn't feel tired.【高分句型二】He
smiled happily ﹣﹣﹣ it was a wonderful feeling.And nothing could stop it.（汤米帮助了那个女人）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
16．（2024•广西模拟）假定你是李华。为迎接爱尔兰姐妹学校来访，你校英语俱乐部将举行学生活动图
片展，现正向学生征集照片。你打算参与，请你写一封邮件，说明相关信息，内容包括：
（1）描述照片内容；
（2）选择该照片的理由；
（3）表达入选期望。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear English Club，
I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Senior 3._____
47Attached is the photo.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；课外活动；书信类．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear English Club，
I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Senior 3.I would like to submit for the Exhibition an amazing photograph
I took last week.It captures a heartwarming scene in a nursing home，where some of my classmates
are seen dishing out hot meals and others are engaged in lively conversations with the seniors.All
their faces are bright with smiles and glowing with happiness.
This photo can be shown to our international friends as an example of the integration of our school
and community.Also，it perfectly exemplifies the beliefs our school values：compassion，empathy，
and unity.
I hope that you will consider my work and thank you for your efforts in making the exchange
program a memorable one.
Attached is the photo.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It captures a heartwarming scene in a nursing home，where some of my
classmates are seen dishing out hot meals and others are engaged in lively conversations with the
seniors.
翻译：它捕捉到了养老院里一个感人的场景，在那里，我的一些同学正在分发热腾腾的饭菜，另一些
同学则与老年人进行了生动的交谈。
分析：本句使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I hope that you will consider my work and thank you for your efforts in making the
exchange program a memorable one.
翻译：我希望你能考虑我的工作，并感谢你为使交流项目成为一个难忘的项目所做的努力。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear English Club，
I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Senior 3.I would like to submit for the Exhibition an amazing photograph
I took last week.It captures a heartwarming scene in a nursing home，where some of my classmates
are seen dishing out hot meals and others are engaged in lively conversations with the seniors.【高分
48句型一】All their faces are bright with smiles and glowing with happiness.（描述照片内容）
This photo can be shown to our international friends as an example of the integration of our school
and community.Also，it perfectly exemplifies the beliefs our school values：compassion，empathy，
and unity.（选择该照片的理由）
I hope that you will consider my work and thank you for your efforts in making the exchange
program a memorable one.【高分句型二】（表达入选期望）
Attached is the photo.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思
连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章
显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
17．（2024•龙凤区校级模拟） 假定你是校英语俱乐部负责人李华，你邀请到了英国环保专家 Smith
教授作主题为"Living in Harmony with Nature"的讲座。请你在讲座前简要发言，内容包括：
（1）相关介绍；
（2）注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students，
【考点】提纲作文；环境保护．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear fellow students，
So privileged are we that today Professor Smith will deliver a lecture themed Living in Harmony
with Nature for us.Therefore，please allow me to represent us students to express our heartfelt
gratitude and warm welcome to him.During this lecture，not only will Professor Smith share with us
how to cause less pollution to the world，but he will also lead us to live a greener life.Most
importantly，while enjoying this lecture，we will surely have a brand﹣new understanding of our
earth.
Moreover，everyone attending this lecture is required to listen carefully，take notes if necessary and
positively follow his instructions as requested.Hopefully，we will have a pleasant time together.
That's all.Thank you!
49【分析】高分句型一：During this lecture，not only will Professor Smith share with us how to cause
less pollution to the world，but he will also lead us to live a greener life.
翻译：在这次讲座中，史密斯教授不仅将与我们分享如何减少对世界的污染，而且他还将带领我们过
上更环保的生活。
分析：本句使用了not only位于句首的部分倒装。
高分句型二：Moreover，everyone attending this lecture is required to listen carefully，take notes if
necessary and positively follow his instructions as requested.
翻译：此外，参加本次讲座的每个人都必须认真听讲，必要时做笔记，并根据要求积极遵循他的指示。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语attending this lecture作后置定语以及if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear fellow students，
So privileged are we that today Professor Smith will deliver a lecture themed Living in Harmony
with Nature for us.Therefore，please allow me to represent us students to express our heartfelt
gratitude and warm welcome to him.During this lecture，not only will Professor Smith share with us
how to cause less pollution to the world，but he will also lead us to live a greener life.【高分句型
一】Most importantly，while enjoying this lecture，we will surely have a brand﹣new understanding
of our earth.（相关介绍）
Moreover，everyone attending this lecture is required to listen carefully，take notes if necessary and
positively follow his instructions as requested.【高分句型二】Hopefully，we will have a pleasant time
together.（注意事项）
That's all.Thank you!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思
连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章
显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
18．（2024•辽宁一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
On a sunny Friday morning，Mr.Stone，the Grade 4 head teacher，walked into the classroom with
a new student following him.She was a lively girl from Mexico，and her red mushroom hair cut
immediately drew everyone's eyes.With a welcoming smile，Mr.Stone gestured for her to sit beside
Mike，a student known for teasing others.
During break time，Mike couldn't help but laugh when he caught sight of his new deskmate.Sara's
distinctive hairstyle seemed like an open invitation for him to make fun of her.Leaning in towards
Sara，he playfully suggested， "Hey，Sara.Ever thought about changing your name to Dora？You look
50just like Dora the Explorer!" His words caused laughter and cheers from the others in the classroom.
Sara's eyes filled with tears，her cheeks turning red with embarrassment.Feeling hurt and upset，she
stood up suddenly，rushing to the teacher's office to seek support from Mr.Stone.After hearing her
story，Mr.Stone offered her gentle comfort，saying， "Sara，your hairstyle is truly pretty.Remember，
everyone has their own sense of beauty."
Mr.Stone then directed his attention to Mike，expressing his disappointment and urging Mike to
apologize to Sara. "Mike，" he continued， "your actions were unkind.We must treat everyone with
empathy（同情）.Laughing at Sara's hair has deeply hurt her."
This conflict was temporarily settled，but Mr.Stone found himself lost in thought.Reflecting on his
own childhood，Mr.Stone recalled how he had been teased for being overweight.The pain caused by
hurtful words was like wrinkles on a crumpled（压皱的）ball of paper.Even if you smoothed them
out，the wrinkles stayed.
He wanted to teach an important lesson to Mike，the troublemaker.Then，a unique strategy came to
mind.He contacted Mike's mother，explaining the situation and discussing a plan with her to develop
empathy in her son.They agreed that over the weekend，Mike's mother would arrange for Mike to have
his hair cut extremely short.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
On Monday morning，Mike unwillingly approached the classroom.________
At that moment，Mr.Stone walked into the classroom with a ball of paper.________
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【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了小学四年级的班主任Mr.Stone在一次课间休息时发现新
学生Sara被同学Mike因为发型而嘲笑，感到伤心。Mr.Stone不仅安慰了Sara，还教育了Mike要尊重
他人，对Mike进行了深刻的反思，想起自己童年也曾因体重被嘲笑。为了帮助 Mike理解别人的感受，
Mr.Stone与Mike的母亲合作，计划让Mike体验被嘲笑的滋味，通过这种方式培养他的同理心。
高分句型一：Feeling nervous and embarrassed，his heart was heavy with worry that his classmates
would tease him.
翻译：他感到紧张和尴尬，心里很担心同学会取笑他。
分析：运用了现在分词Feeling nervous and embarrassed作状语。
51高分句型二：As Mr.Stone made his way to the platform，the room fell silent.
翻译：斯通先生走到站台时，房间里一片寂静。
分析：运用了As引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】On Monday morning，Mike unwillingly approached the classroom.Feeling nervous and
embarrassed，his heart was heavy with worry that his classmates would tease him.【高分句型一】His
hair had been cut so short that the skin under the hair was nearly visible.As he stepped through the
door，the room erupted in giggles，nicknaming him "Baldy." A few curious boys came up and
attempted to touch his newly shaved head.Overwhelmed by shame and anger，Mike shouted out，
"You are mean!" Tears welled up in his eyes as Mike stood up and ran towards the door.（描写他走
进教室后被同学们嘲笑，还有同学给他起外号，他羞愧且愤怒的跑出教室。）
At that moment，Mr.Stone walked into the classroom with a ball of paper.With a gentle pat on
Mike's shoulder，he guided him back to his seat.As Mr.Stone made his way to the platform，the
room fell silent.【高分句型二】Holding up the crumpled ball of paper，he began to smooth out its
wrinkles. "Each fold represented a scar of hurtful words.Even when we try to apologize，" Mr.Stone
explained softly， "the wounds remain.Let us always speak with kindness and warmth." From that
day on，Mike learned a valuable lesson：the importance of kindness and empathy.（描写引导Mike回
到座位，用褶皱的纸形象的说明伤人的话语对人造成的伤害，以及Mike的感悟。）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇
文章的写作线索。（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求要注意续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心
中有数"。（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路
结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句 拟写时，注意句子结构
的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
19．（2024•邵阳二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短
文。
It was a beautiful sunny morning in early summer，when the world seemed full of sunlight and
new green leaves.I was in a good mood as my parents had just given me ＄300 for my daily expenses
during the week that they would be away in Mexico to visit my mother's sick grandfather.I was
extremely overjoyed，thinking hard about the things I could do with the money.If I survived on bread
and butter the whole week，I would have an unexpected windfall of ＄200 to buy the latest Kobe
Bryant basketball shoes!What a terrific idea!
As usual，the physical education class was thrilling.I felt most at case on the basketball court.After
playing several fierce games，I could hardly catch my breath as I headed back towards the classroom，
52sweaty and exhausted.When I entered，I found my classmates gathered around Steven's desk as he
searched through his books and some other personal items anxiously.Steven had always been popular.Not
only was he intelligent and well﹣mannered，but he also came from a well﹣off family.And he shared
everything he had with us.
Right away，I learned Steven had lost the money he would donate to a children's welfare institute
that afternoon.Then I informed Miss Jones，the class teacher.She rushed over immediately and organized
a search around the classroom.We stood by our desks and emptied the contents of our schoolbags onto
the desk for inspection.
It was my turn.As Miss Jones took out the ＄300 from my wallet，the class fell into a shock.I
didn't know the amount lost was exactly ＄300 until then.I kept proving my innocence，but in vain.Miss
Jones confiscated （没收） the ＄300 and decided I was getting kicked out of the school.I stayed home
alone the whole week，living only on bread.I felt wronged，angry，and loss of self﹣esteem.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally，my parents returned home and talked with me.________
Miss Jones had just accepted my parents' advice when Steven came.________
【考点】读后续写．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了父母给了作者300美元作为一周的生活费，作者上完体育课
走进教室发现同学Steven把他当天下午要捐给儿童福利机构的钱弄丢了，Jones老师在班里进行搜查，
当从作者那里搜出300美元时把它没收了，作者被赶出学校，作者只靠面包一个人在家里熬了一个星
期，感到委屈、愤怒，失去了自尊。
高分句型一：It was during this emotional conversation that I heard about Steven's admission，which
would change the situation.
翻译：正是在这场情绪激动的谈话中，我听说了史蒂文的录取，这将改变局面。
分析：本句使用了强调句式以及which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高 分 句 型 二 ： Steven's sincere apology and our collective understanding brought us closer as
classmates，restoring the warmth of our friendship.
翻译：史蒂文真诚的道歉和我们的集体理解拉近了我们作为同学的距离，恢复了我们友谊的温暖。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语restoring the warmth of our friendship作状语。
53【解答】Finally，my parents returned home and talked with me.They patiently listened to my side of
the story，their understanding and support helping to boost my hurt feelings and self﹣esteem.I told
the whole story of what happened，including the expensive misunderstanding，and the relief of
sharing my tough experience was clear in the room.It was during this emotional conversation that I
heard about Steven's admission，which would change the situation.【高分句型一】（作者向父母倾诉
发生的事情）
Miss Jones had just accepted my parents' advice when Steven came.He genuinely looked sorry，with
a hint of regret in his eyes.To everyone's relief，he confessed that he had found the lost money in
his backpack.The immense relief and joy I felt were hard to put into words ， showing how
misunderstandings and hasty judgments can lead to serious problems.Steven's sincere apology and our
collective understanding brought us closer as classmates，restoring the warmth of our friendship.【高
分句型二】（向作者道歉，作者感到宽慰和喜悦，同学关系更加亲密）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
20．（2024•广州模拟）假定你是李华，你校计划在暑假期间重修图书馆，校英文报举办主题为"Small
changes make an ideal library"的征文活动，向同学们征求意见，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）提出建议；
（2）说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Small changes make an ideal library
_____
54【考点】提纲作文；校园文明与安全；其他应用文写作．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
Small changes make an ideal library
This summer，our university will be working to update our library，and I believe that small and
thoughtful changes can transform it into an ideal haven for seekers of knowledge.
Firstly，installing more comfortable seating areas with charging stations would encourage longer
study sessions，fostering a productive and relaxed atmosphere.Secondly，enhancing natural lighting and
air circulation would create a healthier environment，enhancing focus and well﹣being.Lastly，introducing
a quiet zone designated for silent reading or meditation would cater to students seeking solitude amidst
the bustle.These modest adjustments，when they are combined，would significantly elevate our library
into a cherished space where every visit is a delightful experience.
【分析】高分句型一：This summer，our university will be working to update our library，and I
believe that small and thoughtful changes can transform it into an ideal haven for seekers of
knowledge.
翻译：今年夏天，我们的大学努力更新我们的图书馆，我相信微小而周到的改变可以将它转变为求知
者的理想天堂。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：These modest adjustments，when they are combined，would significantly elevate our
library into a cherished space where every visit is a delightful experience.
翻译：这些适度的调整，当它们结合在一起时，将大大提升我们的图书馆成为一个珍贵的空间，每次
访问都是一次愉快的经历。
分析：本句运用了when引导的时间状语从句和where引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Small changes make an ideal library
This summer，our university will be working to update our library，and I believe that small and
thoughtful changes can transform it into an ideal haven for seekers of knowledge.【高分句型一】（提出
建议）
Firstly，installing more comfortable seating areas with charging stations would encourage longer
study sessions，fostering a productive and relaxed atmosphere.Secondly，enhancing natural lighting and
air circulation would create a healthier environment，enhancing focus and well﹣being.Lastly，introducing
a quiet zone designated for silent reading or meditation would cater to students seeking solitude amidst
55the bustle.These modest adjustments，when they are combined，would significantly elevate our library
into a cherished space where every visit is a delightful experience.【高分句型二】（说明理由）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
21．（2024•大连模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
I spotted my neighbor，Monica，working in her garden one day when I returned home from
school.It was sunny，and the smell of cut grass made me feel refreshed.I popped my head over the
fence，and Monica and I got talking.
"I've seen you're very good at using a lawn mower（割草机） and gardening tools，" Monica said.
"There's a hedge（树篱） growing over the pathway near here.It's so overgrown that it becomes a head
ache for the passers﹣by.I was planning to cut it back myself.Would you like to help out？"
I loved the idea of helping Monica and our community.We agreed to cut the hedge the following
Sunday.My brother Ivan，aged 10，also came along to help us.We wheeled Monica's garbage can down
to the hedge，which the community council was responsible for.All three of us cut it with shears （大
剪刀） until a trouble﹣free pathway came in sight.Mr.Brown，a wheelchair user，was grateful that he
didn't have to make a detour（绕行） any more to pass the hedge.Encouraged by his words，I
suggested doing more for our community，to make it a better place.
When we first started，we just made the best of the equipment we already had in my parents'
garage.But as time went on，donations came in from the local community.Our garage got filled up
quickly with brushes，gardening tools，and even donated power tools like leaf blowers.With everything
ready，our first project was to beautiful park near our houses，which looked a bit run﹣down.Ivan was
in charge of painting the fence around，Monica cleared the lawn with a leaf blower，and I was
responsible for repairing the benches where our neighbors usually sat at their leisure.After two weeks'
hard work，we felt stunned when stepping back and appreciating the clean and brand new small
park.My heart swelled with pride because our efforts paid off.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为 150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I posted photos of our hard work on our local Facebook Group.________
56With more neighbors joining in，we headed for the flower bed near the community center.________
【考点】读后续写．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】I posted photos of our hard work on our local Facebook Group.Shared and forwarded，the
photos made a splash immediately.Hundreds of likes poured in like snowflakes after people knew the
story.Someone commented that it inspired him to help the community.Thinking highly of the small
park，another expressed his gratitude for our effort to bring convenience to the residents here.With
our project getting around，we felt thrilled.Many people wanted to get involved to make our
community more beautiful.Then，the second project was born.
With more neighbors joining in，we headed for the flower bed near the community center.The task
of this time was heavier than before.Trimming the bushes with shears，turning the soil with spades，
and tidying the withered fallen leaves with leaf blowers，we put our project in full swing.Some time
later various beautiful flowers donated by our neighbors were transplanted perfectly.Seeing the brand
new flower bed，I was consumed with joy，because we all devoted ourselves to making a difference
to our community，making it a better place for the residents.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者与Monica以及10岁大的Ivan一起清理社区，得到了邻居们的
响应，越来越多邻居加入进来，共同提升社区环境。
高分句型一：Someone commented that it inspired him to help the community.
翻译：有人评论说，这激励了他帮助社区。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Thinking highly of the small park，another expressed his gratitude for our effort to
bring convenience to the residents here.
翻译：另一位网友高度评价这个小公园，并对我们为这里的居民带来的便利表示感谢。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Thinking highly of the small park作状语。
【解答】I posted photos of our hard work on our local Facebook Group.Shared and forwarded，the
photos made a splash immediately.Hundreds of likes poured in like snowflakes after people knew the
story.Someone commented that it inspired him to help the community.【高分句型一】Thinking highly
of the small park，another expressed his gratitude for our effort to bring convenience to the residents
here.【高分句型二】With our project getting around，we felt thrilled.Many people wanted to get
involved to make our community more beautiful.Then，the second project was born.（作者的事迹在
互联网上获得的响应）
With more neighbors joining in，we headed for the flower bed near the community center.The task
57of this time was heavier than before.Trimming the bushes with shears，turning the soil with spades，
and tidying the withered fallen leaves with leaf blowers，we put our project in full swing.Some time
later various beautiful flowers donated by our neighbors were transplanted perfectly.Seeing the brand
new flower bed，I was consumed with joy，because we all devoted ourselves to making a difference
to our community，making it a better place for the residents.（邻居们的努力带给社区的变化以及我
们的感受）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
22．（2024•长春模拟） I remember a time when I learned the true meaning of forgiveness.It was a
period in my life that tested my patience and my ability to understand others.
It all started when I was in middle school.I had a close friend named Emily，and we spent a lot
of time together.One day，Emily introduced me to a new girl in our class，named Olivia.Olivia was
quiet and shy，but we quickly became friends as well.
One afternoon，after school，we were all working on a project in the classroom.As we were
discussing our ideas，Olivia suddenly exclaimed out something that completely contradicted what I had
been saying.I was shocked and felt a little embarrassed.I tried to explain my point of view，but Olivia
was very stubborn and insisted on her own idea.
Emily，who was sitting next to me，tried to mediate （调节） the situation.But Olivia got angry
and said some unkind words to me.I was hurt and angry，and I couldn't believe that Olivia would treat
me like that.I stormed out of the classroom，leaving Emily and Olivia behind.
The next few days were very difficult for me.I avoided Olivia as much as possible，and our
friendship with Emily seemed to be stressed.I felt like I had been betrayed by Olivia，and I couldn't
understand why she would do such a thing.
58One day，I asked Emily why she was still friends with Olivia after what she had done.Emily
looked at me with a sad expression and said，"You know，Olivia has been through a lot lately.Her
parents are going through a divorce，and she's really struggling.Maybe she was rude to you because she
was feeling overwhelmed and insecure."
Hearing this，I felt a surge of guilt.I realized that I hadn't taken the time to understand Olivia's
situation.I had been too quick to judge her and too focused on my own feelings of hurt.I decided to
talk to Olivia and apologize for my behavior.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I found Olivia，she was sitting alone in the hallway.______
Olivia accepted my apology and we had a long conversation.__________
【考点】读后续写．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】 When I found Olivia，she was sitting alone in the hallway.I walked towards her slowly，
my heart pounding.As I reached her，I took a deep breath and sat down next to her.She looked up
at me，her eyes filled with sadness and uncertainty.I start to speak，telling her how sorry I was for
my actions and for not being more understanding.I conveyed my realization that we all have our
struggles and that I should have been more empathetic.Olivia listened quietly，and as I finished，a
small smile appeared on her face.
Olivia accepted my apology and we had a long conversation.She opened up to me about her
feelings during that difficult time.I listened attentively，feeling a deep bond with her.We discussed how
we could move forward and stand up for each other.We also discussed the significance of forgiveness
and how it can heal relationships.As we ended our conversation，I felt a weight lifted off my
shoulders.I knew that our friendship would be stronger than ever，and that this experience had taught
me a valuable lesson about empathy and forgiveness.
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者和Emily是好朋友。Emily又将Olivia介绍给作者，三个
人成为了好朋友。但是一次Olivia对作者说出无理的话，作者很伤心。她和Emily和Olivia疏远了。
后来作者询问Emily为什么还和Olivia做朋友。Emily告诉作者Olivia正在经历人生的困境，作者开始
反思自己。
高分句型一：I walked towards her slowly，my heart pounding.
译文：我慢慢地向她走去，心跳加速。
59分析：这句话使用了独立主格结构my heart pounding。
高分句型二：I knew that our friendship would be stronger than ever，and that this experience had
taught me a valuable lesson about empathy and forgiveness.
译文：我知道我们的友谊将比以往任何时候都更加牢固，这段经历给了我一堂关于同理心和宽恕的宝
贵一课。
分析：这句话使用了and连接两个that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 When I found Olivia，she was sitting alone in the hallway.I walked towards her
slowly，my heart pounding.【高分句型一】As I reached her，I took a deep breath and sat down
next to her.She looked up at me，her eyes filled with sadness and uncertainty.I start to speak，telling
her how sorry I was for my actions and for not being more understanding.I conveyed my realization
that we all have our struggles and that I should have been more empathetic.Olivia listened quietly，
and as I finished，a small smile appeared on her face.（作者为自己的行为向Olivia道歉，Olivia安静
地听，脸上露出了一丝微笑。）
Olivia accepted my apology and we had a long conversation.She opened up to me about her
feelings during that difficult time.I listened attentively，feeling a deep bond with her.We discussed how
we could move forward and stand up for each other.We also discussed the significance of forgiveness
and how it can heal relationships.As we ended our conversation，I felt a weight lifted off my
shoulders.I knew that our friendship would be stronger than ever，and that this experience had taught
me a valuable lesson about empathy and forgiveness.【高分句型二】（和Olivia交谈后，作者感到肩上的
重量减轻了。她们的友谊将比以往任何时候都更加牢固。）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
60意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
23．（2024•靖远县校级模拟）假定你是某国际学校学生李华，你的爱尔兰笔友 Kelly对你提到的学校"多
元文化日"（Multicultural Day）活动很感兴趣。请回信告知他关于该活动的相关信息。内容包括：1.活
动时间；2.活动目的和内容。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Kelly，
________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Kelly，
Knowing that you are interested in Multicultural Day of our school，I am writing to introduce it to
you.It is designed to increase the students' understanding of different cultures all over the world.We
celebrate it on July 1st every year，when we organize a variety of activities such as dance
performances，exhibitions and fashion shows and so on.It is through these activities that we can have
a deeper understanding of different cultures around the world.For example ， during the dance
performance，we can enjoy dances performed by students from different countries.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing that you are interested in Multicultural Day of our school，I am
writing to introduce it to you.
译文：知道你对我们学校的多元文化日感兴趣，我写信向你介绍。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语Knowing that you are interested in Multicultural Day of our school
作状语。
高分句型二：It is through these activities that we can have a deeper understanding of different
cultures around the world.
译文：正是通过这些活动，我们可以更深入地了解世界各地的不同文化。
分析：这句话使用了强调句。
【解答】Dear Kelly，
Knowing that you are interested in Multicultural Day of our school，I am writing to introduce it to
you. （活动时间）It is designed to increase the students' understanding of different cultures all over
the world.We celebrate it on July 1st every year，when we organize a variety of activities such as
61dance performances，exhibitions and fashion shows and so on.It is through these activities that we
can have a deeper understanding of different cultures around the world. 【高分句型二】For
example，during the dance performance，we can enjoy dances performed by students from different
countries.（活动目的和内容）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，
而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需
要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连
贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级
词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
24．（2024•上城区校级模拟） 假定你是学生会主席李华，将为获得校英语辩论赛第一名的学生代表
致颁奖词。请写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
（1）表示祝贺；
（2）回顾比赛过程；
（3）简述获奖理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【考点】提纲作文；课外活动；演讲稿．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：It is your convincing arguments and profound insights that have left a deep
impression on the judges.
翻译：正是你令人信服的论点和深刻的见解给评委们留下了深刻的印象。
分析：本句运用了强调句型"it is+被强调部分+that"。
高分句型二：Your achievement is not only a personal victory，but also a shining example of our
school's educational goal.
翻译：你的成就不仅是个人的胜利，也是我们学校教育目标的光辉典范。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but also...不但……而且……"连接对等成分。
【解答】I am honored to present this award and extend my heartfelt congratulations to the winners
of the school's English debate competition.（表示祝贺）
Throughout the competition，you have demonstrated your impeccable language mastery and quick﹣
62wittedness.（回顾比赛过程）It is your convincing arguments and profound insights that have left a
deep impression on the judges.【高分句型一】It was your remarkable talent and relentless persistence
that made you win this award.You have inspired us to pursue excellence in all aspects of our lives.
（简述获奖理由）
Your achievement is not only a personal victory，but also a shining example of our school's
educational goal.【高分句型二】Thank you.（结束语）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
25．（2024•辽宁模拟）近年来，许多城市都流行兴建"口袋公园"，曾经的社区边角地摇身一变，成了家
门口高颜值的小公园，给市民带来了惊喜。假定你是李华，你所在的城市也逐渐建了一些口袋公园，
为此你校英文报社正在组织以"Pocket Parks in My Eyes"为主题的征文活动，请你撰写一篇短文投稿，
内容包括：
（1）简要介绍"口袋公园"；
（2）阐述"口袋公园"的好处；
（3）号召绿色生活方式。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Pocket Parks in My Eyes
_____
【考点】提纲作文；环境保护．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
Pocket Parks in My Eyes
"Pocket Parks" is a term that refers to small，urban parks created in limited spaces within the city.
Pocket parks bring numerous benefits to our community from various perspectives.Firstly，they
attract visitors and stimulate local businesses，which contribute to the economy.Additionally，pocket
parks play a vital role in improving the life quality of residents.These small paradises offer a welcome
escape from our busy city life.
In conclusion，pocket parks have many advantages for our cities.Let us embrace a greener lifestyle
and make use of these parks，appreciating the beauty of nature right at our doorstep.
63【分析】高分句型一："Pocket Parks" is a term that refers to small，urban parks created in limited
spaces within the city.
翻译："口袋公园"是一个术语，指的是在城市有限的空间里建造的小型城市公园。
分析：本句运用了了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Firstly，they attract visitors and stimulate local businesses，which contribute to the
economy.
翻译：首先，他们吸引游客，刺激当地商业，这有助于经济。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Pocket Parks in My Eyes
"Pocket Parks" is a term that refers to small，urban parks created in limited spaces within the city.
【高分句型一】（简要介绍"口袋公园"）
Pocket parks bring numerous benefits to our community from various perspectives.Firstly，they
attract visitors and stimulate local businesses，which contribute to the economy.【高分句型二】
Additionally，pocket parks play a vital role in improving the life quality of residents.These small
paradises offer a welcome escape from our busy city life.（阐述"口袋公园"的好处）
In conclusion，pocket parks have many advantages for our cities.Let us embrace a greener lifestyle
and make use of these parks，appreciating the beauty of nature right at our doorstep.（号召绿色生活方
式）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
64考点卡片
1．书信类
【考点介绍】
书信写作是英语写作中的一种重要形式，主要用于人们之间的交流和沟通。书信写作需要遵循特定的格
式和规范，同时还需要注意语言表达的得体性和准确性。在各类英语考试中，书信写作通常是必考题型
之一，主要考查学生的实际应用能力和语言表达能力。
【典型例题】
假定你是学校学生会主席李华，请写封邮件邀请你校学生家长 Chris 参加家长会，内容包括：
（1）时间和地点；
（2）会议议程；
（3）表达期待。
注意：
（1）词数100词左右；
（2）文中不得透露个人及学校信息；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：学生会 the Student Union；家长会 parent﹣teacher meeting
Dear Chris，
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
分析：高分句型一：The parent﹣teacher meeting，to be held in the lecture hall this Friday，is
scheduled to last for 2 hours from 8：00 a.m.to 11：00 a.m.
译文：家长会将于本周五在演讲厅举行，时间为上午8点至11点，持续两个小时。
分析：这句话使用了不定式的被动形式to be held in the lecture hall this Friday作定语。
高分句型二：The meeting is said to begin with an inspiring speech delivered by the principal，followed
by a video featuring the colorful school life of students.
译文：据说，会议首先由校长发表了鼓舞人心的演讲，然后是一段视频，展示了学生丰富多彩的学校生
活。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语followed by a video featuring the colorful school life of students作状
65语。
解答：Dear Chris，
I am Li Hua，the president of the Student Union.Representing the school，I am writing to request the
pleasure of your participating in the parent﹣teacher meeting.（写信目的）
The parent﹣teacher meeting，to be held in the lecture hall this Friday，is scheduled to last for 2 hours
from 8：00 a.m.to 11：00 a.m.（高分句型一）（时间和地点）The meeting is said to begin with an
inspiring speech delivered by the principal，followed by a video featuring the colorful school life of
students.（高分句型二）Finally，you will be provide a chance to communicate with your child's head
teacher to have a further understanding of him/her.Please pay attention that during the meeting you
should be quiet to provide a good meeting atmosphere.（会议议程）
Looking forward to your coming.（表达期待）
Yours，
Li Hua
点评：这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，写作时要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要
组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，
缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求
的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
【解题思路】
1.审题与构思：首先明确题目要求，包括写信的对象、目的、内容和格式等。然后根据题目要求进行构思，
想好要表达的内容和层次。
2.确定格式：书信的格式包括信头、日期、收信人地址、信件内容等。
3.开始写作：在开头部分要明确表明写信的目的和主题，然后展开相应的内容。在写作过程中，要注意使
用得体的语言表达自己的观点和诉求，同时注意段落之间的衔接和连贯性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查信件的内容、语法、拼写和格式等方面是否存在错误。同时，检查
语言表达是否得体、清晰，是否达到了写作的目的。
2．通知类
【考点介绍】
通知是一种应用范围广、实用性强的文稿，通常用于传达信息、指示工作、发布政策等。在英语写作中
通知的写作需要遵循清晰、简洁、规范的原则。通知一般分为正式通知和非正式通知两种，其中正式通
知多用于正式场合，而 非正式通知则更为灵活。在各类英语考试中，通知写作是常考的作文题型之一，
主要考查学生的应用写作能力和表达能力。
66【典型例题】
假定你是李华，你校英语角（English Corner）计划下周举办一次关于垃圾分类的讲座，届时将进行同步
网络直播。请你代表社团写一则通知，内容包括：
（1）讲座目的、时间、地点；
（2）讲座内容；
（3）欢迎同学们踊跃参加。
参考词汇：垃圾分类 garbage classification 网络直播 live stream
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Notice
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
分析：高分句型一：To raise the awareness of rubbish pollution，an English lecture concerning garbage
classification is scheduled to be held in the auditorium next week，accompanied by social streaming.
翻译：为了提高人们对垃圾污染的认识，下周将在礼堂举办一场关于垃圾分类的英语讲座，并辅以社交
媒体。
分析：运用了不定式To raise the awareness of rubbish pollution和过去分词短语accompanied by social
streaming作状语。
高分句型二：Only with our joint efforts can we lead an eco﹣life and protect our planet.
翻译：只有我们共同努力，我们才能过上生态生活，保护我们的星球。
分析：运用了only+状语位于句首的部分倒装结构。
解答：
Notice
To raise the awareness of rubbish pollution，an English lecture concerning garbage classification is
scheduled to be held in the auditorium next week，accompanied by social streaming.（高分句型一）
（讲座目的、时间、地点）Knowledge and skills on sorting out garbage will be included.With this
lecture，we will learn how to classify rubbish.The way to watch social streaming will be shown
afterwards.（讲座内容）
Only with our joint efforts can we lead an eco﹣life and protect our planet.（高分句型二）Welcome to
attend the lecture!（欢迎同学们踊跃参加）
点评：提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯
67符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有
档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求写一篇什么样的通知，包括通知的目的、受众、内容和格式等。然后根
据题目要求分析目的、受众的特点，构思通知的内容和层次。
2.确定格式：正式通知和非正式通知的格式略有不同，一般由标题、正文和落款等部分组成。
3.开始写作：在标题部分要简明扼要地概括通知的主题和目的；在正文部分要清楚表达通知的内容和要求，
根据受众的特点进行措辞，可以采用直接、简洁的语言，同时注意段落之间的连贯性和条理性；在落款
部分要正确标注发布单位或组织。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查通知的内容、语法、拼写和格式等方面是否存在错误。同时，检查
措辞是否得体、清晰，是否达到了写作的目的。
3．演讲稿
【考点介绍】
演讲稿是一种用于表达观点、传达信息、宣传鼓动等目的的口头表达形式。在英语写作中，演讲稿的写
作需要遵循口头语言表达的特点和规律，注重表达的清晰性、准确性和感染力。在各类英语考试中，演
讲稿写作是常考的作文题型之一，主要考查学生的语言应用能力和表达能力。
【典型例题】
假如你是李华，最近你班将以"Will robots take the place of human beings？"为话题举办一个英语辩论会。
请你写一篇发言稿，代表反方发言，内容包括：
（1）亮明观点；
（2）陈述理由；
（3）得出结论。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析：高分句型一：Second，robots don't have feelings just like human beings though they can imitate
human beings in many ways.
翻译：其次，机器人不像人类那样有感情，尽管它们可以在很多方面模仿人类。
分析：本句使用了though引导的让步状语从句。
高分句型二：Most importantly，robots can't think by themselves，which makes them different from
human beings and put them at a disadvantage.
翻译：最重要的是，机器人不能自己思考，这使它们与人类不同，并使它们处于不利地位。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
解答：Robots have become more and more intelligent in recent years，so some people think they are
68likely to take the place of human beings one day.However.I have different opinions. （亮明观点）My
reasons are as follows.
First of all，robots are designed by human beings，so their intelligence is limited.（陈述理由一）
Second，robots don't have feelings just like human beings though they can imitate human beings in
many ways.（高分句型一）（陈述理由二） Most importantly，robots can't think by themselves，which
makes them different from human beings and put them at a disadvantage.（高分句型二）（陈述理由
三）
In conclusion，although technology makes it possible for robots to develop better intelligence and do a
variety of things for us，they can't replace human beings.（得出结论）
点评：提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯
符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有
档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求，包括演讲的主题、目的、受众和时间等。然后根据题目要求进行分析，
确定演讲稿的框架和内容。
2.确定结构：演讲稿的结构一般包括开场白、主体和结束语三个部分。开场白部分要简洁明了地引入主题，
吸引受众的注意力；主体部分要围绕主题展开，有条理地阐述观点和事例，注意段落之间的衔接和连贯
性；结束语部分要总结演讲内容，提出号召和倡议。
3.开始写作：在开场白部分要引入主题，吸引受众的注意力；在主体部分要阐述观点和事例，注意使用适
当的论证方法和表达方式；在结束语部分要总结演讲内容，提出号召和倡议。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查演讲稿的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在问题。同时，检
查语言表达是否清晰、准确、有感染力，是否符合口头语言表达的特点。
4．其他应用文写作
【考点介绍】
其他应用文写作是英语写作中的一类，除了常见的信函、报告、演讲稿、新闻稿等，还包括一些具有特
定格式和用途的文稿，例如备忘录、电子邮件、简历、说明书等。这些应用文在日常生活和工作中都有
广泛的应用。在各类英语考试中，其他应用文写作也是常考的题型之一，主要考查学生的应用写作能力
和表达能力。
【典型例题】
假定你是李华，你在暑期里参观了市博物馆举办的一次"遇 见中国戏曲（Meet the Chinese Opera）"的展
览请你为你校英文报写一则评论，内容包括：
（1）展览概况；
69（2）观展感受；
（3）提出建议。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析：高分句型一：To develop citizen's artistic accomplishment，the museum exhibited many fantastic
pictures，ranging from Peking Opera，Shaoxing Opera to Kunqu Opera，and bringing an audio﹣visual
feast for the art lovers.
译文：为了培养市民的艺术修养，博物馆展出了从京剧、越剧到昆曲的精彩画面，为艺术爱好者带来了
一场视听盛宴。
分析：这句话使用了不定式做目的状语，ranging from Peking Opera，Shaoxing Opera to Kunqu Opera，
and bringing an audio﹣visual feast for the art lovers是现在分词短语作状语。
高分句型二：Exposed to the plots，colors and affection，I seemed to be personally on the scene.
译文：暴露在情节、色彩和感情中，我似乎亲自出现在现场。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语Exposed to the plots，colors and affection作状语。
解答：This summer holiday witnessed numerous visitors to the "Meet the Chinese Opera" exhibition in
the city museum.（话题）
To develop citizen's artistic accomplishment，the museum exhibited many fantastic pictures，ranging from
Peking Opera，Shaoxing Opera to Kunqu Opera，and bringing an audio﹣visual feast for the art lovers.
（高分句型一）（展览概况）I enjoyed every second of the display and was particularly attracted by
Peking Opera Legend of the White Snake.Exposed to the plots，colors and affection，I seemed to be
personally on the scene.（高分句型二）（观展感受）
Sincerely，I hope in the future shows can last longer and more famous works can be displayed.（提出
建议）
点评：这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，写作时要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要
组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，
缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求
的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求写什么样的应用文，包括目的、受众、内容和格式等。然后根据题目要
求进行分析，确定应用文的关键要素和重点内容。
702.确定格式：不同类型的应用文有不同的格式和结构，在写作前需要认真阅读题目要求，按照规定的格式
进行写作。同时，要注意应用文的惯用语言表达和缩略语等细节问题。
3.写作内容：在写作过程中，要围绕目的和受众，明确传达信息的内容和重点。要注意语言表达的简练性、
准确性和逻辑性，尽可能精简语言，避免使用复杂的语句和表达方式。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查应用文的内容、语法、拼写和格式等方面是否存在错误。同时，检
查语言表达是否准确、清晰，是否达到了写作的目的。
5．提纲作文
【考点介绍】
提纲作文是一种较为灵活的写作形式，其考查的是考生在给定主题和提纲的前提下进行拓展论述的能力
在英语写作中，提纲作文通常涉及一些热门话题或观点，要求考生根据题目所给的提纲，以篇章的形式
展开讨论，表达自己的观点和见解。在各类英语考试中，提纲作文是常考的作文题型之一，主要考查学
生的语言表达能力、思维逻辑性和主题论述能力。
【典型例题】
假设上周三（11月9日）你校举办了主题为"预防森林火灾"的校园活动。请你为学校英语报写一篇报道，
内容包括：
（1）活动时间、地点、参加人员；
（2）活动内容：观看短片、制作黑板报等等；
（3）活动反响。
注意：词数120左右。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析：高分句型一：In this activity，we were aware of the actions we should take in our daily life to
prevent forest fires.
翻译：在这次活动中，我们意识到了我们在日常生活中应该采取的预防森林火灾。
分析：本句使用了不定式to prevent forest fires作目的状语。
高分句型二：Sincerely，I hope that the school can hold the similar activity again.
翻译：真诚地，我希望学校能再次举办类似的活动。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
解答：In order to promote the awareness of fire prevention and student safety，our school held a
campus activity with the theme of "Preventing Forest fires".（活动目的）The following are the specific
details of the activity.
First，last Wednesday，the event was held in the conference hall of the school.（活动时间地点）
Secondly，watching short films and making blackboard newspapers not only attracted the enthusiastic
participation of teachers and students ， but also improved the safety awareness of forest fire
71prevention.Finally，this activity was very successful and received unanimous praise from the participants.
（活动内容）In this activity，we were aware of the actions we should take in our daily life to prevent
forest fires.（高分句型一）Without doubt，this is very meaningful.（活动反向）
Sincerely，I hope that the school can hold the similar activity again.（高分句型二）
点评：提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯
符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有
档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：明确了解作文的主题和要求。观察题目所给的提纲，可以得知文章应由哪些部分组成以及
每部分的内容要点。
2.构建框架：即文章由哪几部分组成以及每部分的内容要点。注意整体逻辑性和连贯性，确保文章从开头
到结尾形成一个完整的故事或论述。
3.写作过程：根据题目所给的提纲逐一展开讨论。注意每部分的主题句要明确，论据要充分，段落间的过
渡要自然流畅。同时，运用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和见解。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否紧扣主题，论据是否合理，观点是否清晰明确。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自然、流畅，是否达
到了写作的目的。
6．图表作文
【考点介绍】
图表作文是一种较为综合的写作形式，主要考查考生对于数据、表格等图形的理解和分析能力，以及将
这些信息转化为文字描述的能力。在英语写作中，图表作文通常涉及一些数据的比较、趋势分析等内容
要求考生根据题目所给的图表或图形，以篇章的形式对数据进行描述、分析和比较。在各类英语考试中
图表作文是常考的作文题型之一，主要考查学生的语言表达能力、数据分析和对比能力。
【典型例题】
最近某中学发布了一项有关该校学生压力来源的调查结果。该调查反映了2018年到2023年该校学生最大
压力来源的变化。作为该中学英文报的编辑，请你根据图表反映的调查结果写一篇社评，内容包括：
（1）图表所反映的变化；
（2）变化发生的原因；
（3）你的建议。
72注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Managing Stress in High School
Recently a survey has been carried out about the major causes of stress among the students of our
school.
___________________________________________________
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分析：高分句型一：As the chart shows，the percentage of the students，who consider academics their
No.1 cause of stress，has doubled in the past five years，from 30% to 60%.
翻译：如图所示，在过去五年中，认为学业是压力最大原因的学生比例翻了一番，从30%上升到60%。
分析：本句使用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Integrating some stress management techniques into students' daily life may help ease the
tension.
翻译：将一些压力管理技巧融入学生的日常生活可能有助于缓解紧张情绪。
分析：本句使用了动名词Integrating some stress management techniques into students' daily life作主语。
解答：
Managing Stress in High School
Recently a survey has been carried out about the major causes of stress among the students of our
school.As the chart shows，the percentage of the students，who consider academics their No.1 cause of
stress，has doubled in the past five years，from 30% to 60%.（高分句型一）In contrast，social stress
73and family issues are less worrying.（图表所反映的变化）
Several reasons may account for the change.First，more frequent exams and constant rankings put
students under great pressure.Additionally，parents now have higher expectations and the students can get
burned out to achieve them.（变化发生的原因）
Integrating some stress management techniques into students' daily life may help ease the tension.（高分
句型二）For instance，they can stick to healthy eating and adequate sleep.Besides，channeling energy
into sports or other pursuits also makes sense.（建议）
From my point of view，high school life isn't easy.Develop some strategies and things will get better in
our school life.（总结）
点评：写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同
时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求写什么样的图表作文，包括主题、图表类型、数据内容等。然后仔细观
察图表，理解数据或趋势的含义和关系。
2.构建框架：通常来说，图表作文可以分为引言、主体和结论三个部分，其中引言部分需要简要介绍图表
的主题和目的，主体部分需要对图表中的数据进行详细描述和分析，结论部分需要总结图表中的主要信
息并给出自己的看法或建议。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简洁的语言引入主题和目的；然后写主体部分，详细描述图表中的数据
和趋势，并使用对比、因果等方法进行分析；最后写结论部分，概括图表中的主要信息并给出自己的观
点或建议。在写作过程中，要注意使用恰当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地描述了图表中的数据和趋势，是否进行了合理的分析和比较，是否达到了写作的目的。同时，
检查语言表达是否准确、自然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
7．读后续写
【考点介绍】
读后续写是一种结合阅读和写作的考查方式，主要考查考生的理解能力、想象力、创造力和语言表达能
力。在英语写作中，读后续写通常提供一段阅读材料，要求考生根据材料的内容和情节，发挥想象力，
续写接下来的故事或论述。这类题型在各类英语考试中较为常见，主要考查学生的阅读理解能力、思维
能力和语言表达能力。
1．选材特点
（1）所需阅读的短文动在350以内；
（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻
74辑性比较强．
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语猴接程度
（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词歌覆盖情况
（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性
（4）上下文的连贯性
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：理解材料的主旨和重要细节，注意把握材料中的人物、情节、时间和地点等信息。
2.确定主题和情节：注意与材料中的情节和人物保持连贯性，同时可以加入自己的想象力和创造力来丰富
情节。
3.构建框架：包括开头、发展和结尾三个部分。开头部分应与提供的阅读材料相衔接，可以简要概括前文；
发展部分应展开情节，使故事或论述更加丰富；结尾部分则应总结全文，并为读者留下一定的思考空间。
4.写作过程：首先写开头部分，与提供的阅读材料进行衔接，确保文章的连贯性；然后写发展部分，根据
自己确定的情节发展进行拓展，可以使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析。同时，注
意与前文保持逻辑上的连贯性；最后写结尾部分，总结全文，并为读者留下一定的思考空间。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否与阅读材料保持连贯性，是否遵循了给出的主题和情节发展进行拓展，是否达到了写作的目的。同时
检查语言表达是否准确、自然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
8．环境保护
【考点介绍】
环境保护是各类考试中常见的话题之一，尤其是在英语写作中。这个话题要求学生理解并掌握与环境相
关的基本知识，包括环境问题的重要性、现有的环境问题、以及如何采取措施保护环境等。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先仔细阅读题目要求，理解题目要求，是关于环境保护的一般性讨论，还是针对某一具
体环境问题进行分析？
2.确定主题：确定你的文章要讨论的具体环境保护主题。如：全球变暖、水污染、垃圾问题等。
3.列出要点：列出你要讨论的主要观点和论据。例如，你可以讨论环境问题的严重性，当前的环境问题，
以及政府、企业和个人可以采取的措施等。
4.写作与展开：开始写作，以清晰、流畅的英语表达你的观点。使用例子、事实和数据来支持你的论点。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查你的文章，确保语法、拼写和句子结构的正确性。如果有时间，可
以尝试从读者的角度来阅读你的文章，看看是否可以理解你的观点并接受你的解决方案。
6.注意事项：在写作过程中，注意使用正式、专业的语言，避免使用口语或缩写。同时，尽可能使用积极、
客观的词汇，避免使用过于情绪化或负面的词语。
759．校园文明与安全
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"校园文明与安全"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对校园文明与安全
的认知和理解。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就校园文明、校园安全等相关问题
进行论述、描述或表达观点。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及校园文明的重要性、校园安
全的现状和措施、学生安全教育等方面。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述校园文明与安全的相关问题，例如校园文明的重要性、校园安全的现状和措施、学生安全教育等
结论部分可以总结全文并强调校园文明与安全的重要性。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述校园文明与安
全的相关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并
强调校园文明与安全的重要性。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点
同时保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
10．学习生活
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"学习生活"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对学习生活的理解和关注。
这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就学习生活中的某个方面进行论述、描述或表达观
点。
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：首先仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的目的和要求，把握题目的主题和要点，了解需要涉及的
范围和重点。
2.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及学习方法的探讨、学习计划
的制定、时间管理技巧的分享、学习态度的反思等。
3.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述学习生活的相关问题，例如学习方法、学习计划、时间管理技巧、学习态度的分享等；结论部分
可以总结全文并强调学习生活中的收获和启示。
4.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述学习生活的相
76关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调学
习生活中的收获和启示。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时
保证语法和拼写的准确性。
11．课外活动
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"课外活动"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对课外活动的认知和理解。
这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就课外活动的某个方面进行论述、描述或表达观点。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及课外活动的种类、参加动机、
对学业和个性的影响等。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述课外活动的相关问题，例如课外活动的种类、参加动机、对学业和个性的影响等；结论部分可以
总结全文并强调课外活动的重要性和意义。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述课外活动的相
关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调课
外活动的重要性和意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时
保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
12．文娱与体育
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"文娱与体育"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对文化娱乐和体育活动
的了解、看法和体验。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生根据题目提供的材料或情境
对某一文化娱乐或体育活动进行介绍、评论或表达自己的看法。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及某一电影、电视剧、音乐、
舞蹈等文化娱乐活动的介绍和评价；也可以涉及某一体育项目、赛事、运动员等的介绍和看法。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述文化娱乐或体育活动的特点、优势或劣势等；结论部分可以总结全文并强调文化娱乐和体育的重
要性和适当的参与方式。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述文化娱乐或体
77育活动的特点、优势或劣势等，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部
分，总结全文并强调文化娱乐和体育的重要性和适当的参与方式。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉
和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
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