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2025年菁优高考英语解密之写作体裁
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•勐海县校级模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
When I was in middle school，my family moved to Seattle，where my parents started their new
business﹣a small grocery store downstairs my house.As a girl of shy and reserved nature，I had to take
a fresh start to fit into the sophisticated city life.
One sunny day，my school announced an exciting event，a talent show for the local food
bank.Students were encouraged to showcase their unique talents in front of the public in the city hall on
National Day.A buzz of excitement filled the school as everyone began preparing for the big day.Deep
down，I felt a spark of curiosity and a desire to participate.However，my self﹣doubt held me back，
"I don't have any special skills to share."
Days turned into weeks，and the talent show drew closer.I couldn't shake the upsetting feeling until
one day Emma，one of the most popular girls in my class，came to me while I was helping in the
grocery store after class. "How about singing together in the talent show？" She grinned， "I heard
you singing a tune，along the way back home.I can't help following you here." Gosh，I couldn't believe
my ears.Emma，with personality and popularity，acknowledged my little talent.Since Emma had the
world's prettiest voice，I felt like being favoured by fortune.
"You two？The talent show for the food bank？" My mum bent towards us and her face lit up."
A big occasion." Then a light bulb seemed to go in her head. "Why not practise right now upstairs？I
bet you'll be a perfect match." Winking at us，she seemed to know we were thinking alike.
Emma and I embarked on rehearsing almost every single day after school.We brainstormed，
exchanged ideas and rehearsed the scene.As the days rolled by，I was feeling pretty good about our
act.But the day before the performance，Emma called that she had an acute stomachache and was not in
any shape to perform.
注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
I was completely knocked out by the news.___________
Finally came the big moment.___________
12．（2024•杭州二模）本学期你校开设了每周一节的英语文学阅读课，请你就此写一篇短文向学校英文
报"Student Voice"栏目投稿，内容包括：
（1）课程介绍（目的、内容、上课方式等）；
（2）你的收获。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
_______
3．（2024•于都县校级模拟）
My Best Examination
One day，while at work in a coal﹣mine in Malden，I happened to overhear two miners talking
about a great school for poor people in Virginia.It was Hampton Institute.The school was established to
provide opportunities for poor but worthy students who could work out all or a part of the cost of
board，and at the same time be taught some trade or industry.
I was on fire constantly with one ambition，and that was to go to school.I decided at once to go
to that school.Finally the great day came and I started for Hampton.I had only a small，cheap bag that
contained what few articles of clothing I could get.The distance from Malden to Hampton is about five
hundred miles.I had not been away from home many hours before it began to grow painfully evident
that I did not have enough money to pay my fare （路费） to Hampton.
By walking and begging rides in some way，I finally reached the grounds of the Hampton Institute
after a number of days，tired and dirty.As soon as possible after reaching，I presented myself before the
head teacher for assignment to a class.Having been so long without proper food，a bath，and change of
clothing，I was like a worthless loafer （游荡者）.
I did not，of course，make a very favourable impression upon her，and I could see at once that
there were doubts in her mind about the wisdom of admitting me as a student.I tried to impress her in
all the ways I could with my worthiness.How I wished that I could get a chance to show what was in
me.
After some time，the head teacher said to me， "The adjoining （隔壁的） classroom needs
sweeping.Take the broom and sweep it."
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
2（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.______
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.______
4．（2024•碑林区校级模拟）假如你是李华，在你校举办的"用英语讲好中国故事"（Chinese Stories
Retold in English）活动中，你获得一等奖。你的英国笔友 John发来邮件向你表示祝贺并想了解你讲
的故事，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
（1）感谢关注；
（2）故事概况；
（3）参加活动的感受。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
5．（2024•河南模拟）假定你是李华，你校将举行以"My Favorite Food"为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一
篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）最喜欢的食物；
（2）喜欢的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Food
_______
6．（2024•萍乡二模）你校最近开展了一次消防演练活动，请你为校英文报写一份主题为"Focus on Fire
Safety，Cherish Life"的新闻报道，内容包括：
（1）活动目的；
（2）活动过程和感受。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右。
（2）参考词汇：灭火器fire extinguishers；消防栓fire hydrants
7．（2024•江西模拟） Bonnie raised her granddaughter alone after the girl's parents died.She hated
her granddaughter's art and wanted her to stop drawing.But everything changed when Mr.Henderson，
3a famous cartoonist，appeared at her doorstep.
One day，Bonnie called out to Amy as she took the chicken out."Dinner is ready，honey!Come
soon!"But Amy didn't answer.
Bonnie finished setting the table and served them dinner，but she still didn't hear a response from
Amy."Amy？Honey，your dinner is getting cold!Are you coming？"she asked her 10﹣year﹣old
granddaughter again.
When Amy didn't respond，Bonnie climbed the stairs to the girl's room and pushed the door
open.Amy sat at her desk，with her headphones on.At first，Bonnie thought Amy was studying，but
then she noticed the drawing sheet on the table in front of Amy.Bonnie frowned（皱眉） in anger.
"Amy!"Bonnie screamed，and the girl turned around and removed her headphones.
"Granny？L…I was just..."Amy said.
Bonnie stormed up to Amy's desk，and the little girl tried to cover the drawing，but it was too
late.
"Did you finish your math homework，little girl？Mrs.Warren called me today.And she told me
you've been ignoring her assignments!"Bonnie said angrily.
"I'll finish the homework，"Amy said."I was planning on doing it once I finished the sketch（素
描） I was working on，Granny."
"I'm tired of that hobby of yours，Amy!You're no longer doing those drawings!"Bonnie went
on."Those things you draw are not going to help you in the future!You finish your dinner，and then
you'll be doing your homework.You're not leaving the house to play with your friends until you finish
your homework.Am I clear？"Bonnie said and stormed out of Amy's room.
Minutes later，Amy walked into the kitchen and quietly sat at the table.They began eating dinner in
silence.Bonnie was already in a terrible mood，so she didn't ask about Amy's day like she usually
did.Suddenly，the doorbell rang.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr.Henderson._______
Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs.Warren for advice.________
8．（2024•上杭县校级模拟） I didn't like Del so much.He always called me the nickname
"Germy，" which meant"dirty，"instead of my real name"Jamie."Besides，he was known as a trouble
﹣maker in school.So when the head teacher Mr.Smith asked Del to come to his office，I naturally
4thought that Del had done something mean to someone.Through the window，I caught sight of a
smaller boy crying.Del seemed unhappy，too.
He did not return to class that day.All of us were discussing what had happened to him.What else
could such an annoying boy do？"He must have hit the boy and was sent home，"I whispered to my
friends.Their eyes widened.It felt good to see them so interested in what I said.
The next morning，the whole school was talking about Del being expelled （开除） for beating up
a kid.I was surprised that my assumptions were passed on so quickly.So when Del walked into the
classroom，all the kids were shocked.The kids next to him shifted their desks away."What's your
problem？"Del asked."I don't want you to attack me，"one kid said.Some laughed."Yeah，I might，"said
Del.I could tell he was joking，but many kids thought he admitted he did beat up someone.
During recess（课间休息），Del tried to join the kickball game."Neither team wants you，"one of
the players said."Why？"Del asked，looking confused."I always play with you guys."They ignored him
and went on playing.Del sat by himself while the rest of the school enjoyed their recess away from
him.Del looked lonely and sad，much different from before.I started to feel sorry for him.
Later that day，I learned what really happened.The kid was Del's little brother and he was crying
because their mother fell ill and was sent to hospital.I felt even sorrier for what I said before.I started a
rumor （谣言）.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At recess the next day，I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game.
Now that Del had forgiven me，I decided to do more before the recess was over.
9．（2024•涵江区校级模拟）假定你是李华，最近你校要举办主题为"The Elegance of Traditional
Chinese Culture"的校园文化节。请你写一封信，邀请对此感兴趣的美国外教David来参加。内容包括：
（1）举办的时间和地点；
（2）活动的内容。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
_____
5Warm regards，
Li Hua
10．（2024•湖北二模） I faced a tight budget when I was nine.On November 1st，I used up most
of the money I saved.With a small amount of pocket money left before Christmas I didn't have
enough to buy presents for the family.
I was seriously considering going to my dad and asking for an advance on the next year's pocket
money，so I could at least buy gifts for my family members.But then，one evening，I was sitting in
my room reading advertisements in the back of a magazine.Several greeting﹣card companies were telling
us how people could make money by selling their cards and stationery （文具）.Normally，I would
have passed right over the ads，but this time my situation was so difficult that I felt I had nothing to
lose.
The ad that attracted me most was one by a well﹣known greeting﹣card company in my nation，
whose products were of high quality.With my parents' help，I contacted the company，although they
preferred adults or older kids to advertise their products.After my sincere request，they agreed to give
me，a nine﹣year﹣old boy，a chance.
My sales materials arrived within the week.I had expected something small and neat，but the
package looked like a dinosaur's shoebox it was close to three feet long and nearly a foot wide，full of
stuff.There was a thick binder （活页夹） containing a complete selection of the cards and some
writing paper，which I would be selling for around ＄3 per box.
Although my parents supported my try to make money by myself，they had little confidence in my
success；after all，instead of an outgoing kid，I was somewhat shy.However，I was determined to have
a try to challenge myself.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Wasting no time，I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood.________
Eventually，I earned over ＄20，a large sum of money for a 9﹣year﹣old kid in 1954.________
11．（2024•仁寿县校级二模） 假定你是高三学生李华，现为某国际学校中国民乐社（Chinese folk
music club）社长。在该社的迎新大会上，你作为代表发言，内容包括：
（1）成立该社的意义；
（2）回忆过去一年该社组织的活动；
（3）对新成员的寄语。
6注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and friends，
______
Thanks for your listening!
12．（2024•海曙区校级模拟）假如你是李华，你校将要举办一场以"The Power of a Role Model"为主题
的英语演讲比赛。请结合一位对你有影响的中国杰出人物，写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）你对"榜样"的理解；
（2）该人物对你的影响。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Good morning，everyone!___________
Thank you for your listening.
13．（2024•黄陂区校级一模）假定你是李华，暑期想在家乡（杭州）寻找外国友人结伴"城市漫步"。请
通过社交媒体发布一篇帖子，内容包括：
（1）相关介绍；
（2）旅伴要求。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Join Me for a City Walk
______
14．（2024•怀仁市二模） 假定你是李华，你校广播站将增加 15 分钟的英语节目（Special
English）。请你给负责的外教Bob写一个邮件，内容包括：
（1）对该举措的态度；
（2）对内容的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Bob，
______
7Yours，
Li Hua
15．（2024•武汉二模） Most people think that procrastination （拖延症） is a negative habit.But
people like me who routinely put off doing assignments，are likely to defend our "slower" approach
to getting tasks done.
I'm the only procrastinator in my family.My parents and sister were all born with the "do it right
now" gift.They are always in a rush，as if closely rushed by an invisible deadline.Personally，I prefer a
more relaxed pace.When my parents voiced their concern about my tendencies，saying "Don't put off
until tomorrow what you can do today，" "No way!" I responded，confidently presenting my research as
a defense.It said people procrastinated when they need to solve a problem or commit to a topic or
project.In these cases，delaying a decision can be beneficial.This was because our minds continue to
reflect on problems even when we were not actively thinking about them，which could lead to more
creative solutions.My findings filled me with satisfaction and pride.My method of getting things done
was just as good as my sister's…or so I thought.
At school we'd been talking about architecture and design.As part of the final assessment my
teacher Mr.Smith announced an exciting project that each student would have a month to complete.We
were expected to choose our materials，construct a small building and make use of things we had
learned in class.Not only would the winners receive extra credit，but the winning constructions would be
proudly displayed in the cafeteria. "I have no clue how I could get it done，" my friend Nate sighed in
despair.I didn't say anything.Not because I shared his anxiety﹣but because I was not nervous at all.I
loved hands﹣on projects!Picturing my brilliant!work exhibited in the cafeteria，I was fully convinced
that I would definitely produce something that could impress everyone.So relaxed was I that I didn't
give it a second thought for weeks.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Before I knew it，I had only one day left for the project.
That taught me a great lesson.
16．（2024•南昌二模） Today was February 5th，a cold rainy morning，the sort of start that made
me wish that I could skip school and bead back to my warm home，and bed.Though it was my
senior year，most days seemed to remain the same boredom.
Being late for 5 minutes，I dashed up the stairs，swung open the door to my British Literature
8class like a sopping wet dog，and plopped down（砰然坐下） in my seat.The eyes around the room
glared at me as my teacher cleared her throat."Mathew maybe go and see the lost﹣and﹣found for a
change of clothes" I felt my face turn red and stormed out quickly.
The lost﹣and﹣found bin did not look promising，until I came across an oversized navy coat at
the bottom.I pot it on and zipped up，this would do for the next couple of hours.Freezing up.I dug my
hands deeper down into the pockets to keep warm.Then I hit something.and pulled out a somewhat
crinkled（皱巴巴的） piece of notebook paper with some words."To you，yes you."I read aloud，
realizing that this must be a letter from someone."Dear Person，I don't know exactly who you are，but
I believe that this letter found you for a reason.I am the least likely of people to write something of
this sort，but it'，my senior year，and I thought that I would make true friends.If you would like to
participate in this experiment ，please leave your response in locker 115，second floor."My eyes
brightened.
I finished my letter by the bell，as I made my way through the crowd，Charlie jammed his
shoulder into mine from the opposite direction."Hey!Out of my way!"I shouted.He just ignored me.not
looking back.Charlie is popular in our school and people like him （but not me）.I know Charlie never
likes me，ever since primary school.I finally made it to the second floor，slipped the letter unto the
locker.and left secretly.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1：
Soon my unseen pen pal and I wrote letters every day.______
Paragraph 2：
I waited for my pen pal in the stadium after school that day.______
17．（2024•张家港市校级模拟） By the age of sixteen years old，Ben had always been an
outstanding student.He went to great lengths to achieve high grades and managed to keep his parents
delighted and proud.Neither of his parents had the opportunity to attend university and it was their
biggest ambition that Ben could land a well﹣paid and decent job as a lawyer.He knew that achieving
this goal would make his parents walk on air，but he wasn't certain whether he would feel the same.
Since he was only a child，Ben had been passionate about computer programming.He taught himself
how to use a computer，and by the age of 12，he had been proficient in three different programming
languages.He did all of this in his spare time.He was quite an introvert （内向的人），so he preferred
9staying in with his computer，rather than going out socializing with his fellow classmates or playing
sports in the brilliant sunshine.It was acceptable with his parents，as long as he continued to focus on
his studies.
One day，while reading an article online about a young technology billionaire called Tom，Ben was
fascinated by the magical power of technology and the wisdom and innovation of the young CEO.The
inner voice told him that he longed to become a computer programmer.Everything changed for Ben.In
the article，the CEO said that his company was trying to create a new and improved way of paying for
goods online but that they were struggling with the security system.He said if they could overcome
this，they could launch the biggest and best online payment system in the world.It occurred to Ben that
he had an innovative idea on how to handle this problem.Thinking that it wouldn't come to anything，
he emailed the CEO，introducing himself and explaining his idea.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He forgot all about it，but then a month later；the most amazing thing happened.________
With all these concerns in mind，Ben determined to communicate with his parents frankly.________
18．（2024•渝中区校级模拟） 假定你是李华，为了弘扬科学精神，你校将举办一场主题为"科学就
在身边"的英语演讲比赛。你希望参加比赛。请根据以下要点撰写一篇英文演讲稿。内容应包括：
（1）你对科学的定义；
（2）科学在身边的实例；
（3）呼吁科学探索与实践。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students，
______
19．（2024•常德模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
At one time children made May Day baskets to celebrate spring and enjoy the rewards of giving
surprising gifts to their beloved ones.When I was in perhaps the third grade，our class took on such an
adventure.For several days，we worked on creating paper baskets.We cut colorful stripes of construction
paper and wove them together，following our teacher，Miss Anderson.We cut and wove and glued.Then
10we decorated them with our crayons and more cutting and gluing.Finally，we fitted paper handles onto
the tops so that we could secretly hang our creations on the doors of unsuspecting receivers：surely our
mothers.
We were finished right on time.Miss Anderson brought armloads of flowers for us to use in stuffing
our prizes.Lilacs and tulips and al the colorful flowers of spring.We had to wait until the day was
nearly over before we were allowed to choose the flowers that were just right for our baskets.I chose
the biggest，most beautiful blossoms，allowing myself to be selfish for the sake of my mother.Then we
fidgeted （烦躁） away what remained of our day，waiting for the clock to tick down the minutes to
our release.
Finally，mercifully，the bell rang!We threw on our coats，gathered our homework and our lunch
boxes，tied on our scarves and then，carefully，we cradled our offerings of love and off we ran to our
individual homes!I was so excited!I ran as fast as I could down the hill，across the street，up the
block ， heading home.I paused at the corner of my house ， to catch my breath and savor the
moment.Then I glanced down to admire my offering one last time before I hung it lovingly over the
doorknob.Horrors!Shock，dread and depression!My flowers were gone!Apparently，bouncing out on my
mad dash home，all that was left was a sad，messed﹣up，wrinkled little empty basket!I stood on the
doorway and burst into mournful sobbing tears.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Para 1
By and by，my mom came to the door to discover the source of the sorrow.___________
Para 2
Soon，my newly﹣decorated basket was ready to be offered again.___________
20．（2024•晋城三模） I was always afraid of water.This fear could not be explained，but I knew
that the moment I stepped near any body of water，my legs would turn to jelly （果冻）.I would
imagine myself drowning in the water and thrashing around （乱扑腾） helplessly.That was why I
had never gone into a swimming pool until swimming became a school requirement.My school
wanted all pupils to pass a swimming test，and if they could not，then they would have to attend
weekly swimming lessons in school，which made me tremble.
Thus，my parents signed me up for swimming lessons at the pool near my house.With great
11unwillingness，I attended those weekly lessons，and each one was great suffering for me.I was naturally
clumsy，and my fear of water did not help at all.Every lesson，I would be spending my time thrashing
about in the water，while my classmates would be swimming countless laps effortlessly and even turning
over like dolphins in the water.How was I going to pass the test at this rate？
In my swimming class，there was an exceptionally athletic girl.Tall and muscular，her name was
Kathy.She was the best swimmer in our class and always looked at me with disdain （鄙视），
especially when I thrashed about hopelessly in the water.
Once，after a particularly long and hard swimming lesson，I spotted Kathy swimming gracefully in
the pool.Gathering my courage，I asked gently， "Kathy，can you teach me to swim？" She stared at
me coldly.It was as if I stood at the edge of an endless ocean of inadequacy，my fears appearing like
dark storm clouds threatening to drown me.Yet，in that moment，a glimmer of hope flashed within
me，a desperate longing for guidance and acceptance.Would Kathy's icy exterior （外表） melt under
the warmth of empathy，or would I remain forever thrashing in the sea of my own fears？
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise，she nodded after a few moments of silence.
______
"Congratulations!" Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test.
______
21．（2024•厦门三模）假定你是李华，你参加了外教 Adam的英语戏剧选修课后，发现剧本选择和时间
安排存在问题。请你给外教写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）说明问题；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Adam，
_________
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua
22．（2024•民乐县校级一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
12My legs and arms were shaking.Sweat was tripping down my face.Every step felt like thousands of
needles were sinking into my legs.I couldn't take it.By that time I had got three blisters （水泡） on
each foot.It felt like I was in Sahara!
It was discovery week.Grade eight was visiting Altai for a week.We lived in camps near the
river.Now we were going up the mountain called The Devil's Finger.But the mountain was only getting
steeper （陡的）.Most of the people were already on the top，screaming，laughing and taking
selfies.Then I realized I had left my hat on the bus and I felt even worse.I touched my head.It was
warm，but I couldn't do anything about it.
Most of my friends were up the hill cheering me on. "Pointless!" I told them. "I can't go any
faster!" They looked at me and laughed. "They have got to be kidding me!Are they doing it on
purpose？"
I was making my way slowly up the mountain.My feet stepped on something.I thought it was a
rock，but whatever.The rock slipped from under my boot and went tumbling down the mountain.I lost
my balance and fell on the ground. "Are you OK？" I heard a voice behind me. "Just tired.I'm taking a
break." I didn't want to say that I fell.
There were only eight people behind me by that time.I decided to speed up because I didn't want
to be the last one up.I looked up.Yana was already on the top，waving to me. "It's like she isn't tired
at all，" I thought to myself.The sun was behind her so I could barely see her face.Actually，no.I could
see a huge smile on her face.She was shouting something，but I couldn't hear it.I decided that the rest
of the way up I would not stop to take any breaks.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However，my body wasn't listening and I sunk to the ground again.________
Finally，I reached the top of the mountain.________
23．（2024•宝安区模拟） To some people，the sizzle and clatter of restaurant kitchens might be
like an orchestra ； to me ， such sounds behind the swinging doors just meant chaos.However
unpleasant I felt the places were，I decided to apply for a part﹣time job at a popular restaurant.The
reason was simple：I needed money.I wanted to join a camping trip to the Blue Mountains with my
friends，but that would cost about 150 dollars."You have to pay for entertainment by yourself，"my
parents said.
So I applied，and Mr.Smith，the boss of the restaurant，allowed me to have a try.My job was
super easy and boring：the newly prepared dishes would be put at the counter between the kitchen and
13dining room，and it was my duty to deliver them to the right customers.
The first few days were tiring but OK.However，setbacks soon followed as I struggled to keep
pace during a particularly busy lunch rush.I awkwardly spilled a tray of drinks，making loud noises and
the floor messy.I was embarrassed and began to feel nervous.One evening，I mixed up orders for a
large party，causing chaos and frustration.
I felt desperate.I screwed everything up.Then I heard Mr.Smith call me，and I went into his office
with my head low.To my surprise，he didn't blame me.Instead，he made me a cup of coffee."Relax，
young man，"he said."Try to smile.Things always go wrong if you can't really enjoy what you're
doing.Feel the fun in the job，and you'll be OK!"
I thought he was right.The next day when I was working，I glimpsed into the kitchen and was
amazed：in the narrow and crowded space everyone was busy﹣the chefs swirling（翻动） pans，the
manager yelling customers" requirements ， others coming and going with dishes to deliver ﹣ but
everything went smoothly without any lumping or bumping.This was incredible!
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My attitudes towards the restaurant job began to change.
______
On the last day of my contract，I went into Mr.Smith's office again when I finished my job.
______
24．（2024•金安区校级三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
"This Saturday，we'll be visiting cats at the animal shelter.If you'd like to join us，here's an
application form"，said Ms.Delgado，the school librarian who had held the reading engagement event for
students.
Ben loved cats and he had always wanted one，so he hurried to take an application form.Then
Ms.Delgado added，"We'll be reading to the cats and award readers who make most progress."Ben
stopped.Reading aloud can be a challenging task.Ben might feel his heart racing，his palms sweating，
and his voice shaking as he read.He might stumble over words or lose his place in the text.He might
feel like everyone was watching him and judging him.Still，he really wanted to visit the cats，so he
took an application form anyway.
On Saturday，Ben arrived at the shelter with some of his classmates."This is Max，"the shelter
14worker told Ben as she handed him a gray cat.Ben carried Max to a bean bag chair and sat down.Max
settled onto his lap.He took a book he' d been working on and started reading.Max，very different from
other cats walking around the room while the kids read，purred（发出呼噜声） on his lap as if he had
understood what Ben read.
"I'm glad Max is staying and listening to my reading and he is the best cat ever，"Ben told Dad
excitedly."I'm glad you two are friends，"Dad said.All week，Ben's heart was filled with anxiety as he
waited for Saturday to arrive.He was eager to read to Max and the anticipation of spending time with
his feline（猫咪的） friend made him restless and nervous.When it arrived，Ben got to read to Max
again.
"What if someone adopts Max？"Ben asked Dad later."I guess you'd read to a different cat，"Dad
said."But I don't want a different cat.I wish we could adopt Max，"Ben said to Dad.He knew they
couldn't because Mom had allergies（过敏）.Ben loved the cat so much that he even told his next﹣
door neighbor，Mrs.Patel ，about Max."Max sounds like a special cat，"said Mrs.Patel.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Week by week，Ben realized that reading seemed easier with Max's company.
____
But on Saturday，Ben couldn't find Max at the shelter.
____
25．（2024•沙坪坝区校级三模） As I unzipped my lunchbox，the whole place was turned into a
spicy curry （咖喱） dream.I immediately hid it under my seat，hoping no one would take notice.
Mom had really outdone herself with masala —our family's all﹣time favorite dish back in India.But
today，it wasn't just about me and my lunch.A warm smile on his face，Ricky invited me，a new
transfer student from India to New York city，for lunch.
"Ava，come sit here!" Ricky called out，gesturing towards a vacant seat.
As I made my way over，memories of those awkward lunchtimes when I studied in Kansas，one
of the most conservative states，flooded back.I could still recall how everyone would wrinkle their noses
and stare curiously when I unpacked my Indian food.It always made me feel like an outsider，like I
didn't belong.
Therefore，before my first day in this school，I had demanded my mom pack "normal" western﹣
style food for me.I still remembered the look on her face upon hearing it ， as she signed in
15disappointment and confusion， "Isn't there a moment when you feel proud of your origin？" That was
hurting，but not more hurting than others' giggles and whispers.Honestly，long queues were common in
Indian restaurants in New York city，a cultural melting pot，but I wouldn't take that risk.
Unfortunately，this morning，Mom had forgotten to make sandwich or any "normal" food，so I had
to bring leftovers from our dinner.At the thought of the possible oh﹣no﹣second （社死），I felt like
being thrown into darkness.
However，before I came back to reality，Ricky noticed my sneaking （躲躲藏藏）. "What do you
have for lunch？" he asked，his eyes twinkling with interest.I tried to brush it off （搪塞），claiming I
wasn't hungry.But Ricky wouldn't let it go，and before I could protest，he had the lid of my lunchbox
open and I prepared myself for such familiar responses as "Ew" or "What is that？"
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However，I did not get what I was expecting.
______
After school，I found Mom preparing sandwich for tomorrow's lunch.
______
162025年菁优高考英语解密之写作体裁
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•勐海县校级模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
When I was in middle school，my family moved to Seattle，where my parents started their new
business﹣a small grocery store downstairs my house.As a girl of shy and reserved nature，I had to take
a fresh start to fit into the sophisticated city life.
One sunny day，my school announced an exciting event，a talent show for the local food
bank.Students were encouraged to showcase their unique talents in front of the public in the city hall on
National Day.A buzz of excitement filled the school as everyone began preparing for the big day.Deep
down，I felt a spark of curiosity and a desire to participate.However，my self﹣doubt held me back，
"I don't have any special skills to share."
Days turned into weeks，and the talent show drew closer.I couldn't shake the upsetting feeling until
one day Emma，one of the most popular girls in my class，came to me while I was helping in the
grocery store after class. "How about singing together in the talent show？" She grinned， "I heard
you singing a tune，along the way back home.I can't help following you here." Gosh，I couldn't believe
my ears.Emma，with personality and popularity，acknowledged my little talent.Since Emma had the
world's prettiest voice，I felt like being favoured by fortune.
"You two？The talent show for the food bank？" My mum bent towards us and her face lit up."
A big occasion." Then a light bulb seemed to go in her head. "Why not practise right now upstairs？I
bet you'll be a perfect match." Winking at us，she seemed to know we were thinking alike.
Emma and I embarked on rehearsing almost every single day after school.We brainstormed，
exchanged ideas and rehearsed the scene.As the days rolled by，I was feeling pretty good about our
act.But the day before the performance，Emma called that she had an acute stomachache and was not in
any shape to perform.
注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
I was completely knocked out by the news.___________
17Finally came the big moment.___________
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了不自信的作者在中学时期参加才艺表演的故事，原本与同学合作，但
同学突然生病无法表演，作者只好独自登台，最终获得了成功。
高分句型一：As I stood there，feeling at a loss，a gentle touch on my shoulder brought me back to
reality.
译文：当我站在那里不知所措时，轻轻地碰了碰肩膀，我回到了现实。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的时间状语从句，feeling at a loss是现在分词短语作状语。
高分句型二：The crowd watched in awe，their applause and cheers echoing in the hall.
译文：人群肃然起敬地看着，他们的掌声和欢呼声在大厅里回响。
分析：这句话使用了独立主格结构their applause and cheers echoing in the hall作状语。
【解答】I was completely knocked out by the news.Without Emma's voice to guide me，I would
definitely mess up and this was not how everything was supposed to go!As I stood there，feeling at
a loss，a gentle touch on my shoulder brought me back to reality.【高分句型一】It was my mom，
wearing a comforting smile.After having a brief idea of my story，she said in a firm tone，"You've
worked so hard.You can make it on your own." Memories of countless rehearsal came flooding
back，drowning my fears and losses.Swinging into action，I adjusted my performance to a solo，
practicing in no time.（作者得知Emma身体不适不能表演，心里忐忑不安，几番思索，决定独自登
台）
Finally came the big moment.Taking a deep breath，I stepped onto the stage，enveloped in the glow
of the lights.At first，my voice trembled with nervousness，but as the song progressed，my
confidence soared.I poured my emotions into the performance，letting my voice carry my feelings
into the air.The crowd watched in awe，their applause and cheers echoing in the hall.【高分句型二】
Faced with the overwhelming response，I knew that I had overcome my fears.Yes，the unexpected
discouragement can be a blessing in disguise on condition that we have a belief in ourselves and
never give up our dreams.（作者鼓起勇气终于战胜了恐惧，歌唱的很好，取得了成功和作者的感
悟。）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
18还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
2．（2024•杭州二模）本学期你校开设了每周一节的英语文学阅读课，请你就此写一篇短文向学校英文
报"Student Voice"栏目投稿，内容包括：
（1）课程介绍（目的、内容、上课方式等）；
（2）你的收获。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
_______
【考点】其他应用文写作；提纲作文；语言学习．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
This semester，our school has introduced a weekly English literature reading class，aiming to
broaden our horizons and enhance our appreciation of world literature.The class features diverse
content，ranging from classic novels to contemporary short stories，allowing us to delve into the
beauty of language and explore different cultures.We engage in lively discussions and share our
insights，fostering a vibrant learning atmosphere.
Through this class，I have gained immense knowledge and appreciation for English literature.Not only
have I improved my reading comprehension and critical thinking skills，but I have also discovered
the joy of reading and the power of words.This class has truly opened a new world for me，
inspiring me to embark on a journey of literary exploration.
【分析】高分句型一：We engage in lively discussions and share our insights，fostering a vibrant
19learning atmosphere.
翻译：我们进行生动的讨论，分享我们的见解，营造充满活力的学习氛围。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语fostering a vibrant learning atmosphere作状语。
高分句型二：Not only have I improved my reading comprehension and critical thinking skills，but I
have also discovered the joy of reading and the power of words.
翻译：我不仅提高了阅读理解能力和批判性思维能力，还发现了阅读的乐趣和文字的力量。
分析：本句使用了not only置于句首的部分倒装。
【解答】
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
This semester，our school has introduced a weekly English literature reading class，aiming to broaden
our horizons and enhance our appreciation of world literature.The class features diverse content，
ranging from classic novels to contemporary short stories，allowing us to delve into the beauty of
language and explore different cultures.We engage in lively discussions and share our insights，
fostering a vibrant learning atmosphere.【高分句型一】（课程介绍）
Through this class，I have gained immense knowledge and appreciation for English literature.Not only
have I improved my reading comprehension and critical thinking skills，but I have also discovered
the joy of reading and the power of words.【高分句型二】This class has truly opened a new world
for me，inspiring me to embark on a journey of literary exploration.（你的收获）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思
连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章
显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．（2024•于都县校级模拟）
My Best Examination
One day，while at work in a coal﹣mine in Malden，I happened to overhear two miners talking
about a great school for poor people in Virginia.It was Hampton Institute.The school was established to
provide opportunities for poor but worthy students who could work out all or a part of the cost of
board，and at the same time be taught some trade or industry.
I was on fire constantly with one ambition，and that was to go to school.I decided at once to go
to that school.Finally the great day came and I started for Hampton.I had only a small，cheap bag that
contained what few articles of clothing I could get.The distance from Malden to Hampton is about five
hundred miles.I had not been away from home many hours before it began to grow painfully evident
that I did not have enough money to pay my fare （路费） to Hampton.
20By walking and begging rides in some way，I finally reached the grounds of the Hampton Institute
after a number of days，tired and dirty.As soon as possible after reaching，I presented myself before the
head teacher for assignment to a class.Having been so long without proper food，a bath，and change of
clothing，I was like a worthless loafer （游荡者）.
I did not，of course，make a very favourable impression upon her，and I could see at once that
there were doubts in her mind about the wisdom of admitting me as a student.I tried to impress her in
all the ways I could with my worthiness.How I wished that I could get a chance to show what was in
me.
After some time，the head teacher said to me， "The adjoining （隔壁的） classroom needs
sweeping.Take the broom and sweep it."
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.______
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.______
【考点】记叙文；读后续写．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.Never did I receive an order with more
delight.I knew I could sweep，for my parents thoroughly taught me how to do that when I was
young.I swept the room three times.Then I got a dusting﹣cloth and I dusted it four times.All the
woodwork around the walls，every bench，table and desk，I went over four times with my dusting﹣
cloth，I had the feeling that in a large measure my future depended upon the impression I made
upon the teacher in the cleaning of that room.When I was through，I reported to her.
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.Then she took her
handkerchief and rubbed it on the woodwork about the walls，and over the table and benches.When
she was unable to find one bit of dirt on the floor，or a particle of dust on any of the furniture，
she quietly remarked， "I guess you will do to enter this institution." I was one of the happiest souls
on earth.The sweeping of that room was my college examination!I have passed several examinations
since then，but I have always felt that this was the best one I had ever passed.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者想要去一个为穷人开设的学校去上学，但是没能给班主
任留下好印象。最终作者因为打扫教室一尘不染通过了班主任的测验，被成功认可。
高分句型一：Never did I receive an order with more delight.
21翻译：我从未如此高兴地收到订单。
分析：本句使用了never位于句首的部分倒装。
高分句型二：When I was through，I reported to her.
翻译：当我结束时，我向她报告。
分析：本句使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.Never did I receive an order with more
delight.【高分句型一】I knew I could sweep，for my parents thoroughly taught me how to do that
when I was young.I swept the room three times.Then I got a dusting﹣cloth and I dusted it four
times.All the woodwork around the walls，every bench，table and desk，I went over four times with
my dusting﹣cloth ，I had the feeling that in a large measure my future depended upon the
impression I made upon the teacher in the cleaning of that room.When I was through，I reported to
her.【高分句型二】（作者认真打扫教室的经过以及完成后向班主任报告）
The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.Then she took her
handkerchief and rubbed it on the woodwork about the walls，and over the table and benches.When
she was unable to find one bit of dirt on the floor，or a particle of dust on any of the furniture，
she quietly remarked， "I guess you will do to enter this institution." I was one of the happiest souls
on earth.The sweeping of that room was my college examination!I have passed several examinations
since then，but I have always felt that this was the best one I had ever passed.（班主任检查的结果
以及作者被认可）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
4．（2024•碑林区校级模拟）假如你是李华，在你校举办的"用英语讲好中国故事"（Chinese Stories
Retold in English）活动中，你获得一等奖。你的英国笔友 John发来邮件向你表示祝贺并想了解你讲
22的故事，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
（1）感谢关注；
（2）故事概况；
（3）参加活动的感受。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；提纲作文；文化交流．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear John，
Having received your congratulations on my winning first prize in the activity，Chinese Stories
Retold in English，I'm writing to express my heartfelt thanks for your concern and introduce the
story —Chinese Silk.
Dating back to the Western Zhou period，Chinese silk boasts a long history of over 3，000
years.Legend has it that Leizu，the wife of the Yellow Emperor，discovered the silk﹣making
process.There was an ancient trade and communication route called "The Silk Road"，promoting the
exchange of ideas and goods between China and other civilizations.Soft and elegant，Chinese silk has
a significant economic impact and plays a crucial role in cultural exchanges.
The activity has not only deepened my understanding of Chinese culture，but also strengthened my
courage to speak English.I hope you can come to China to experience our culture.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Dating back to the Western Zhou period，Chinese silk boasts a long history of
over 3，000 years.
译文：中国丝绸可以追溯到西周时期，拥有3000多年的悠久历史。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语Dating back to the Western Zhou period作状语。
高分句型二：The activity has not only deepened my understanding of Chinese culture，but also
23strengthened my courage to speak English.
译文：这次活动不仅加深了我对中国文化的了解，也增强了我说英语的勇气。
分析：这句话使用了not only...but also...句型。
【解答】Dear John，
Having received your congratulations on my winning first prize in the activity，Chinese Stories
Retold in English，I'm writing to express my heartfelt thanks for your concern and introduce the
story —Chinese Silk.（感谢关注）
Dating back to the Western Zhou period，Chinese silk boasts a long history of over 3，000 years.
【高分句型一】Legend has it that Leizu，the wife of the Yellow Emperor，discovered the silk﹣
making process.There was an ancient trade and communication route called "The Silk Road"，
promoting the exchange of ideas and goods between China and other civilizations.Soft and elegant，
Chinese silk has a significant economic impact and plays a crucial role in cultural exchanges.（故事
概况）
The activity has not only deepened my understanding of Chinese culture，but also strengthened my
courage to speak English.【高分句型二】I hope you can come to China to experience our culture.
（参加活动的感受）
Best wishes.（祝福）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要
太多也不要太少。
5．（2024•河南模拟）假定你是李华，你校将举行以"My Favorite Food"为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一
篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）最喜欢的食物；
（2）喜欢的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Food
24_______
【考点】演讲稿；提纲作文；兴趣爱好．
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【答案】
My Favorite Food
Hello，everyone!I am glad to have the chance to stand here and share with you my favorite food，
Chinese dumplings，which are also called jiaozi in Chinese.
Chinese dumplings are a delicious food.There are all kinds of dumplings with different fillings，
depending on how the ingredients are mixed together.All my family members often gather together
eating dumplings，especially during festivals.So this is also a great time to share our lives and
happiness.
That's all.Thank you for listening!
【分析】高分句型一：I am glad to have the chance to stand here and share with you my favorite
food，Chinese dumplings，which are also called jiaozi in Chinese.
译文：我很高兴有机会站在这里和大家分享我最喜欢的食物，中国饺子，在中国也叫饺子。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：There are all kinds of dumplings with different fillings，depending on how the
ingredients are mixed together.
译文：饺子有各种各样的馅料，这取决于原料是如何混合在一起的。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语depending on how the ingredients are mixed together作状语。
【解答】
My Favorite Food
Hello，everyone!I am glad to have the chance to stand here and share with you my favorite food，
Chinese dumplings，which are also called jiaozi in Chinese.【高分句型一】（最喜欢的食物）
Chinese dumplings are a delicious food.There are all kinds of dumplings with different fillings，
depending on how the ingredients are mixed together.【高分句型二】All my family members often
gather together eating dumplings，especially during festivals.So this is also a great time to share our
lives and happiness.（喜欢的理由）
That's all.Thank you for listening!（感谢）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的
25单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要
太多也不要太少。
6．（2024•萍乡二模）你校最近开展了一次消防演练活动，请你为校英文报写一份主题为"Focus on Fire
Safety，Cherish Life"的新闻报道，内容包括：
（1）活动目的；
（2）活动过程和感受。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右。
（2）参考词汇：灭火器fire extinguishers；消防栓fire hydrants
【考点】报道；提纲作文；校园文明与安全．
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【答案】 To enhance the fire safety awareness and emergency response abilities of the students，a
fire drill themed "Focus on Fire Safety，Cherish Life" was successfully carried out in our school.
At first，professional firefighters were invited to deliver on﹣site explanations and showed the
correct usage of fire extinguishers and fire hydrants.Then，during the drill，the moment the alarm
sounded，all students covering their mouths and noses with wet towels bent down low，and promptly
evacuated to a safe area in an orderly manner according to the predetermined escape route.
Through this fire drill，not only did we learn essential fire prevention knowledge and skills but our
fire safety awareness was further strengthened.
【分析】高分句型一：Then，during the drill，the moment the alarm sounded，all students covering
their mouths and noses with wet towels bent down low，and promptly evacuated to a safe area in an
orderly manner according to the predetermined escape route.
译文：随后，在演练过程中，警报响起的那一刻，所有学生用湿毛巾捂住口鼻，弯下腰，按照预先确
定的逃生路线，迅速有序疏散到安全区域。
分析：这句话使用了the moment引导的时间状语从句，现在分词短语covering their mouths and noses
with wet towels作定语。
高分句型二：Through this fire drill，not only did we learn essential fire prevention knowledge and
skills but our fire safety awareness was further strengthened.
译文：通过这次消防演习，我们不仅学习了基本的消防知识和技能，而且进一步增强了我们的消防安
全意识。
分析：这句话使用了not only置于句首，后面接部分倒装。
【解答】 To enhance the fire safety awareness and emergency response abilities of the students，a
fire drill themed "Focus on Fire Safety，Cherish Life" was successfully carried out in our school.（活
26动目的）
At first，professional firefighters were invited to deliver on﹣site explanations and showed the
correct usage of fire extinguishers and fire hydrants.Then，during the drill，the moment the alarm
sounded，all students covering their mouths and noses with wet towels bent down low，and promptly
evacuated to a safe area in an orderly manner according to the predetermined escape route.【高分句型
一】（活动过程）
Through this fire drill，not only did we learn essential fire prevention knowledge and skills but our
fire safety awareness was further strengthened.【高分句型二】（总结）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要
太多也不要太少。
7．（2024•江西模拟） Bonnie raised her granddaughter alone after the girl's parents died.She hated
her granddaughter's art and wanted her to stop drawing.But everything changed when Mr.Henderson，
a famous cartoonist，appeared at her doorstep.
One day，Bonnie called out to Amy as she took the chicken out."Dinner is ready，honey!Come
soon!"But Amy didn't answer.
Bonnie finished setting the table and served them dinner，but she still didn't hear a response from
Amy."Amy？Honey，your dinner is getting cold!Are you coming？"she asked her 10﹣year﹣old
granddaughter again.
When Amy didn't respond，Bonnie climbed the stairs to the girl's room and pushed the door
open.Amy sat at her desk，with her headphones on.At first，Bonnie thought Amy was studying，but
then she noticed the drawing sheet on the table in front of Amy.Bonnie frowned（皱眉） in anger.
"Amy!"Bonnie screamed，and the girl turned around and removed her headphones.
"Granny？L…I was just..."Amy said.
Bonnie stormed up to Amy's desk，and the little girl tried to cover the drawing，but it was too
late.
"Did you finish your math homework，little girl？Mrs.Warren called me today.And she told me
you've been ignoring her assignments!"Bonnie said angrily.
"I'll finish the homework，"Amy said."I was planning on doing it once I finished the sketch（素
描） I was working on，Granny."
"I'm tired of that hobby of yours，Amy!You're no longer doing those drawings!"Bonnie went
27on."Those things you draw are not going to help you in the future!You finish your dinner，and then
you'll be doing your homework.You're not leaving the house to play with your friends until you finish
your homework.Am I clear？"Bonnie said and stormed out of Amy's room.
Minutes later，Amy walked into the kitchen and quietly sat at the table.They began eating dinner in
silence.Bonnie was already in a terrible mood，so she didn't ask about Amy's day like she usually
did.Suddenly，the doorbell rang.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr.Henderson._______
Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs.Warren for advice.________
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【答案】Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr.Henderson.He said he had received a
letter with some samples of Amy's art work and was so impressed by her talent.Mr.Henderson asked
if Amy would like to apply for an art training program this summer.He would personally teach Amy
and the other students.And if everything went well，Amy would be able to enroll at his academy
and pursue her dream for art.Although she wanted to go，she had to ask her grandmother for
permission.
Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs.Warren for advice.Bonnie called up
Mrs.Warren，who answered the phone and learned about Amy's situation.She said excitedly，"Since
Amy is gifted in drawing，this is a golden opportunity for her!"Bonnie finally accepted Mrs.Warren's
suggestion.Hearing their conversation on the phone.Amy promised to finish her math homework on
time in the future，and couldn't help jumping.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了Amy喜欢美术，Amy奶奶的态度从不支持到支持的改变。
高分句型一：Mr.Henderson asked if Amy would like to apply for an art training program this
summer.
翻译：Henderson先生问Amy是否愿意申请今年夏天的艺术培训项目。
分析：本句使用了if引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Although she wanted to go，she had to ask her grandmother for permission.
翻译：尽管她想去，但还是得征得祖母的同意。
分析：本句使用了although引导的让步状语从句。
28【解答】Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr.Henderson.He said he had received a
letter with some samples of Amy's art work and was so impressed by her talent.Mr.Henderson asked
if Amy would like to apply for an art training program this summer.【高分句型一】He would
personally teach Amy and the other students.And if everything went well，Amy would be able to
enroll at his academy and pursue her dream for art.Although she wanted to go，she had to ask her
grandmother for permission.【高分句型二】（Mr.Henderson来家里，希望Amy可以学美术）
Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs.Warren for advice.Bonnie called up
Mrs.Warren，who answered the phone and learned about Amy's situation.She said excitedly，"Since
Amy is gifted in drawing，this is a golden opportunity for her!"Bonnie finally accepted Mrs.Warren's
suggestion.Hearing their conversation on the phone.Amy promised to finish her math homework on
time in the future，and couldn't help jumping.（在征求了Mrs.Warren的意见后，奶奶同意了Amy学
美术）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
8．（2024•上杭县校级模拟） I didn't like Del so much.He always called me the nickname
"Germy，" which meant"dirty，"instead of my real name"Jamie."Besides，he was known as a trouble
﹣maker in school.So when the head teacher Mr.Smith asked Del to come to his office，I naturally
thought that Del had done something mean to someone.Through the window，I caught sight of a
smaller boy crying.Del seemed unhappy，too.
He did not return to class that day.All of us were discussing what had happened to him.What else
could such an annoying boy do？"He must have hit the boy and was sent home，"I whispered to my
friends.Their eyes widened.It felt good to see them so interested in what I said.
The next morning，the whole school was talking about Del being expelled （开除） for beating up
29a kid.I was surprised that my assumptions were passed on so quickly.So when Del walked into the
classroom，all the kids were shocked.The kids next to him shifted their desks away."What's your
problem？"Del asked."I don't want you to attack me，"one kid said.Some laughed."Yeah，I might，"said
Del.I could tell he was joking，but many kids thought he admitted he did beat up someone.
During recess（课间休息），Del tried to join the kickball game."Neither team wants you，"one of
the players said."Why？"Del asked，looking confused."I always play with you guys."They ignored him
and went on playing.Del sat by himself while the rest of the school enjoyed their recess away from
him.Del looked lonely and sad，much different from before.I started to feel sorry for him.
Later that day，I learned what really happened.The kid was Del's little brother and he was crying
because their mother fell ill and was sent to hospital.I felt even sorrier for what I said before.I started a
rumor （谣言）.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At recess the next day，I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game.
Now that Del had forgiven me，I decided to do more before the recess was over.
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章主要讲述了一个叫Del的男孩总是叫作者外号。作者不喜欢他。一天作
者看见Del在老师办公室，另外还有一个男孩在哭。作者告诉其他同学，Del欺负这个小男孩，被开除
了。这个谣言在学校传开。在Del回到学校后，同学们都不愿意和Del在一起。
高分句型一：I sat next to him and gradually uttered the whole thing about how my hasty assumption
turned into such a terrible rumor.
译文：我坐在他旁边，渐渐地说出了我草率的假设是如何变成如此可怕的谣言的。
分析：这句话使用了how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：His words soothed me，but I could feel he was still sad.
译文：他的话安慰了我，但我能感觉到他仍然很难过。
分析：这句话使用了省略了关系代词的宾语从句he was still sad。
【解答】 At recess the next day，I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game.I hated the
nickname "Germy，" but seeing him isolated was also not what I wanted.Guilt pushed me to him.
"What do you want，Germy？" Del asked，his voice sounding more hurt than angry.I sat next to
30him and gradually uttered the whole thing about how my hasty assumption turned into such a terrible
rumor.【高分句型一】 "I'm sorry.I wish I had never said that，" I apologized，daring not to look
into his eyes.Annoyance and surprise flickered across his face.But seconds later，he lowered his head
and said quietly， "It's okay.I guess I wasn't very nice to you，either." His words soothed me，but I
could feel he was still sad. 【高分句型二】（作者向Del道歉，Del也为之前给作者起外号向作者道
歉）
Now that Del had forgiven me，I decided to do more before the recess was over.I walked towards
the kickball players and called for their attention.Everyone stopped in surprise. "Del didn't beat up
anyone，" I stated，explaining what actually happened.Whispers of astonishment spread and finally one
player shouted， "Alright，Del，do you want to join my team？" A smile broke through Del's gloomy
face， "Yes，and I want Jamie on it，too!" He glanced at me shyly，and I could tell his use of my
real name was his way of making an apology.Soon the playground was filled with laughter and talks.But
this time they made me realize something—words have the power to hurt and heal. （作者向同学们解
释Del并没有欺负男孩，他们冰释前嫌，作者意识到语言有伤害和治愈的力量。）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
9．（2024•涵江区校级模拟）假定你是李华，最近你校要举办主题为"The Elegance of Traditional
Chinese Culture"的校园文化节。请你写一封信，邀请对此感兴趣的美国外教David来参加。内容包括：
（1）举办的时间和地点；
（2）活动的内容。
注意：
31（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
_____
Warm regards，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；提纲作文；文化交流．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear David，
Knowing your keen interest in traditional Chinese culture，I am delighted to extend an invitation to
you for our upcoming campus cultural festival.
Themed "The Elegance of Traditional Chinese Culture"，the event is scheduled for November 2nd
and will be held at the school Lecture Hall.It features an impressive program，including engaging
exhibitions of Chinese calligraphy，painting and interactive workshops that will allow our students to
deeply immerse themselves in the rich heritage of traditional Chinese culture.We believe your presence
would enrich the event.
Please let us know your availability.We will ensure your visit is both enjoyable and enlightening.
Warm regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing your keen interest in traditional Chinese culture，I am delighted to
extend an invitation to you for our upcoming campus cultural festival.
译文：了解到您对中国传统文化的浓厚兴趣，我很高兴邀请您参加我们即将举办的校园文化节。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语Knowing your keen interest in traditional Chinese culture作状语。
高 分 句 型 二 ： It features an impressive program ， including engaging exhibitions of Chinese
calligraphy，painting and interactive workshops that will allow our students to deeply immerse
themselves in the rich heritage of traditional Chinese culture.
译文：它以一个令人印象深刻的项目为特色，包括引人入胜的中国书法、绘画展览和互动工作坊，让
我们的学生能够深深地沉浸在丰富的中国传统文化遗产中。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear David，
Knowing your keen interest in traditional Chinese culture，I am delighted to extend an invitation to
you for our upcoming campus cultural festival.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
32Themed "The Elegance of Traditional Chinese Culture"，the event is scheduled for November 2nd
and will be held at the school Lecture Hall.（举办的时间和地点）It features an impressive program，
including engaging exhibitions of Chinese calligraphy，painting and interactive workshops that will allow
our students to deeply immerse themselves in the rich heritage of traditional Chinese culture.【高分句型
二】We believe your presence would enrich the event.（活动的内容）
Please let us know your availability.We will ensure your visit is both enjoyable and enlightening.
（表达信心）
Warm regards，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要
太多也不要太少。
10．（2024•湖北二模） I faced a tight budget when I was nine.On November 1st，I used up most
of the money I saved.With a small amount of pocket money left before Christmas I didn't have
enough to buy presents for the family.
I was seriously considering going to my dad and asking for an advance on the next year's pocket
money，so I could at least buy gifts for my family members.But then，one evening，I was sitting in
my room reading advertisements in the back of a magazine.Several greeting﹣card companies were telling
us how people could make money by selling their cards and stationery （文具）.Normally，I would
have passed right over the ads，but this time my situation was so difficult that I felt I had nothing to
lose.
The ad that attracted me most was one by a well﹣known greeting﹣card company in my nation，
whose products were of high quality.With my parents' help，I contacted the company，although they
preferred adults or older kids to advertise their products.After my sincere request，they agreed to give
me，a nine﹣year﹣old boy，a chance.
My sales materials arrived within the week.I had expected something small and neat，but the
package looked like a dinosaur's shoebox it was close to three feet long and nearly a foot wide，full of
stuff.There was a thick binder （活页夹） containing a complete selection of the cards and some
writing paper，which I would be selling for around ＄3 per box.
Although my parents supported my try to make money by myself，they had little confidence in my
success；after all，instead of an outgoing kid，I was somewhat shy.However，I was determined to have
33a try to challenge myself.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Wasting no time，I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood.________
Eventually，I earned over ＄20，a large sum of money for a 9﹣year﹣old kid in 1954.________
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，以人物为线索。作者九岁的时候预算紧张，没有足够的钱给家人买圣诞
礼物。一天他在看杂志的时候发现了一则关于如何卖贺卡和文具赚钱的广告，于是作者在父母的帮助
下联系了国内最知名的一家贺卡公司，请求给自己一个机会。作者收到贺卡公司寄来的销售材料后就
开始了行动，他挨家挨户地推销产品，获得了不错的反馈。这个经历不仅缓解了作者的财务状况，也
让作者产生了成就感和自信心。
高分句型一：Gathering my courage，I introduced myself as the young representative of the well﹣
known greeting﹣card company.
翻译：我鼓起勇气，介绍自己是一家著名贺卡公司的年轻代表。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语Gathering my courage作状语和as引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：The community's response exceeded my expectations，and the support that I received
went beyond mere financial transactions.
翻译：社区的反应超出了我的预期，我得到的支持也超越了单纯的金融交易。
分析：本句运用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Wasting no time，I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood.Gathering my
courage，I introduced myself as the young representative of the well﹣known greeting﹣card company.
【高分句型一】The initial responses were mixed — some were hesitant，while others were fascinated
by the idea of a child engaged in such a venture.As I showcased the high﹣quality cards and shared
the story behind each design ， the doubt began to fade away ， replaced by genuine
interest.Surprisingly，my shy character transformed into enthusiasm，and I found myself engaging in
conversations that extended beyond the purpose of sales.（描写了作者挨家挨户推销贺卡的经历）
Eventually，I earned over ＄20，a large sum of money for a 9﹣year﹣old kid in 1954.The
community's response exceeded my expectations，and the support that I received went beyond mere
financial transactions.【高分句型二】Neighbors were not just buying cards；they were encouraging a
34young entrepreneur.This unexpected journey into sales not only alleviated my financial concerns for
Christmas but also instilled a sense of accomplishment and self﹣confidence.It broadened my horizons
and laid the foundation for a newfound belief in the possibilities that determination and courage could
unfold，regardless of age.（描写了这次经历不仅给作者带来了经济收益，还让作者有了成就感和自信
心）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
11．（2024•仁寿县校级二模） 假定你是高三学生李华，现为某国际学校中国民乐社（Chinese folk
music club）社长。在该社的迎新大会上，你作为代表发言，内容包括：
（1）成立该社的意义；
（2）回忆过去一年该社组织的活动；
（3）对新成员的寄语。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and friends，
______
Thanks for your listening!
【考点】演讲稿；提纲作文；传统文化．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear teachers and friends，
On behalf of the president of the Chinese folk music club of our school，I am honored to deliver
my speech at the annual general meeting.Our club is aimed at helping students to learn more folk music
35art form and enrich our school life.
In the one years since the club was founded，we have organized a variety of activities，such as
the New Year Music Festival ， Chinese traditional culture exchange conference and other colorful
performances.All the club members participated actively and had a good performance.
I hope to attract more new members to join our club in the future，which will strengthen our club
strength.
Thanks for your listening!
【分析】高分句型一：Our club is aimed at helping students to learn more folk music art form and
enrich our school life.
翻译：我们的俱乐部旨在帮助学生学习更多的民间音乐艺术形式，丰富我们的学校生活。
分析：运用了动名词短语helping students to learn more folk music art form and enrich our school
life作宾语。
高分句型二：I hope to attract more new members to join our club in the future，which will
strengthen our club strength.
翻译：我希望将来能吸引更多的新会员加入我们的俱乐部，这将增强我们俱乐部的实力。
分析：运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear teachers and friends，
On behalf of the president of the Chinese folk music club of our school，I am honored to deliver
my speech at the annual general meeting.Our club is aimed at helping students to learn more folk music
art form and enrich our school life.【高分句型一】（成立该社的意义）
In the one years since the club was founded，we have organized a variety of activities，such as
the New Year Music Festival ， Chinese traditional culture exchange conference and other colorful
performances.All the club members participated actively and had a good performance.（回忆过去一年该
社组织的活动）
I hope to attract more new members to join our club in the future，which will strengthen our club
strength.【高分句型二】（对新成员的寄语）
Thanks for your listening!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思
连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章
显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12．（2024•海曙区校级模拟）假如你是李华，你校将要举办一场以"The Power of a Role Model"为主题
的英语演讲比赛。请结合一位对你有影响的中国杰出人物，写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
36（1）你对"榜样"的理解；
（2）该人物对你的影响。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Good morning，everyone!___________
Thank you for your listening.
【考点】演讲稿；提纲作文；人物人品．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：I hold the belief that a role model is someone worth learning from and
someone who inspires and guides others.
翻译：我认为榜样是值得学习的人，是激励和指导他人的人。
分析：本句运用了that引导的同位语从句和who引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：It is her hard training that makes her so successful.
翻译：正是她的刻苦训练使她如此成功。
分析：本句运用了强调句型"it is+被强调部分+that"。
【解答】Good morning，everyone!
I hold the belief that a role model is someone worth learning from and someone who inspires and
guides others.【高分句型一】（作者对"榜样"的理解）
The most influential role model for me is Quan Hong Chan，who is a 14﹣year﹣old girl.She began
to receive diving training in 2014，and won the gold medal in the 10﹣meter platform competition
on August 5，2021.It is her hard training that makes her so successful.【高分句型二】She also has a
strong will.I think I should learn from her.She never gives up however hard the life is.And at the
same time，she is also filial.Through her hard work and effort，she looks after her mother well.（该
人物对自己的影响）
Thank you for your listening.
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
13．（2024•黄陂区校级一模）假定你是李华，暑期想在家乡（杭州）寻找外国友人结伴"城市漫步"。请
通过社交媒体发布一篇帖子，内容包括：
37（1）相关介绍；
（2）旅伴要求。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Join Me for a City Walk
______
【考点】其他应用文写作；提纲作文；旅游与交通．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
Join Me for a City Walk
I，who am looking for a foreign friend to join me，am planning a city walk in Hangzhou this
summer.I'm planning a city walk in Hangzhou this summer and looking for a foreign friend to join me!
We'll take a leisurely stroll through the city，admire the beautiful scenery，savor the local cuisine，and
immerse ourselves in the local culture.If you're a friendly and easygoing adventurer，let's embark on this
exciting journey together and create unforgettable memories!Let's have a great time!Contact me now!
【分析】高分句型一：I，who am looking for a foreign friend to join me，am planning a city walk
in Hangzhou this summer.
翻译：我正在寻找一位外国朋友和我一起，我计划今年夏天去杭州城市漫步。
分析：本句运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：If you're a friendly and easygoing adventurer，let's embark on this exciting journey
together and create unforgettable memories.
翻译：如果你是一个友好、随和的冒险家，让我们一起踏上这段激动人心的旅程，创造难忘的回忆。
分析：本句运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】
Join Me for a City Walk
I，who am looking for a foreign friend to join me，am planning a city walk in Hangzhou this
summer. 【高分句型一】I'm planning a city walk in Hangzhou this summer and looking for a foreign
friend to join me!We'll take a leisurely stroll through the city，admire the beautiful scenery，savor the
local cuisine，and immerse ourselves in the local culture.（相关介绍）If you're a friendly and easygoing
adventurer，let's embark on this exciting journey together and create unforgettable memories!【高分句型
二】Let's have a great time!Contact me now!（旅伴要求）
【点评】写作步骤：
38第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
14．（2024•怀仁市二模） 假定你是李华，你校广播站将增加 15 分钟的英语节目（Special
English）。请你给负责的外教Bob写一个邮件，内容包括：
（1）对该举措的态度；
（2）对内容的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Bob，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；提纲作文；语言学习．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Bob，
I am glad to hear the news of the upcoming addition of Special English，not only does it increase
the chances for our students to practice English listening，but also enriches our campus cultural
atmosphere.
Given the limited time，I think the content should not only be novel but also short，including
campus news，student interviews，English knowledge and other forms.At the same time，we should
constantly listen to the opinions of our schoolmates and stimulate their enthusiasm for learning
English.
I believe that under your guidance，this program will be improved.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I am glad to hear the news of the upcoming addition of Special English，not
only does it increase the chances for our students to practice English listening，but also enriches our
campus cultural atmosphere.
译文：我很高兴听到"特殊英语"即将加入的消息，它不仅增加了学生练习英语听力的机会，而且丰富
了我们的校园文化氛围。
分析：这句话使用了not only置于句首，后面接部分倒装。
39高分句型二：I believe that under your guidance，this program will be improved.
译文：我相信，在你的指导下，这一进展将得到改善。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Bob，
I am glad to hear the news of the upcoming addition of Special English，not only does it increase
the chances for our students to practice English listening，but also enriches our campus cultural
atmosphere.【高分句型一】（对该举措的态度）
Given the limited time，I think the content should not only be novel but also short，including
campus news，student interviews，English knowledge and other forms.At the same time，we should
constantly listen to the opinions of our schoolmates and stimulate their enthusiasm for learning
English.（对内容的建议）
I believe that under your guidance，this program will be improved.【高分句型二】（表达信心）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要
太多也不要太少。
15．（2024•武汉二模） Most people think that procrastination （拖延症） is a negative habit.But
people like me who routinely put off doing assignments，are likely to defend our "slower" approach
to getting tasks done.
I'm the only procrastinator in my family.My parents and sister were all born with the "do it right
now" gift.They are always in a rush，as if closely rushed by an invisible deadline.Personally，I prefer a
more relaxed pace.When my parents voiced their concern about my tendencies，saying "Don't put off
until tomorrow what you can do today，" "No way!" I responded，confidently presenting my research as
a defense.It said people procrastinated when they need to solve a problem or commit to a topic or
project.In these cases，delaying a decision can be beneficial.This was because our minds continue to
reflect on problems even when we were not actively thinking about them，which could lead to more
creative solutions.My findings filled me with satisfaction and pride.My method of getting things done
was just as good as my sister's…or so I thought.
At school we'd been talking about architecture and design.As part of the final assessment my
teacher Mr.Smith announced an exciting project that each student would have a month to complete.We
40were expected to choose our materials，construct a small building and make use of things we had
learned in class.Not only would the winners receive extra credit，but the winning constructions would be
proudly displayed in the cafeteria. "I have no clue how I could get it done，" my friend Nate sighed in
despair.I didn't say anything.Not because I shared his anxiety﹣but because I was not nervous at all.I
loved hands﹣on projects!Picturing my brilliant!work exhibited in the cafeteria，I was fully convinced
that I would definitely produce something that could impress everyone.So relaxed was I that I didn't
give it a second thought for weeks.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Before I knew it，I had only one day left for the project.
That taught me a great lesson.
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Before I knew it，I had only one day left for the project.In a panic I hastily and quickly
glued together what I pulled out from our recycle bin，my hands shaking with the weight of each
hasty decision.The finished result looked miserable.Several of my classmates had created amazingly
detailed constructions.They used materials like clay，wood and so on and were highly praised by
Mr.Smith.When I saw their models，I felt even more embarrassed about mine.
That taught me a great lesson.I'm still more relaxed about deadlines than the rest of my family，but
something has changed.Now I tackle things a lot earlier than I would have in the past and my work
was chosen by Mr.Smith on another occasion.This means I don't have quite as much time for my
hobbies like drawing and gaming，but it is well worth it.I have the satisfaction of knowing that I
won't have to panic at the last minute.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文。拖延症者辩护"慢节奏"完成任务，自信认为延迟决定可促发创意。但在学
校项目中，我因拖延而错过准备，最终未着手完成。
高分句型一：In a panic I hastily and quickly glued together what I pulled out from our recycle
bin，my hands shaking with the weight of each hasty decision.
翻译：在恐慌中，我匆忙而迅速地把我从回收站里取出的东西粘在一起，每一个匆忙的决定都让我的
手颤抖。
分析：本句使用了what引导的宾语从句以及独立主格结构my hands shaking with the weight of each
hasty decision。
41高分句型二：I have the satisfaction of knowing that I won't have to panic at the last minute.
翻译：我很满意知道我不必在最后一刻惊慌失措。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Before I knew it，I had only one day left for the project.In a panic I hastily and quickly
glued together what I pulled out from our recycle bin，my hands shaking with the weight of each
hasty decision.【高分句型一】The finished result looked miserable.Several of my classmates had
created amazingly detailed constructions.They used materials like clay，wood and so on and were
highly praised by Mr.Smith.When I saw their models，I felt even more embarrassed about mine.（作
者最后匆忙完成了任务，完成情况很不乐观）
That taught me a great lesson.I'm still more relaxed about deadlines than the rest of my family，but
something has changed.Now I tackle things a lot earlier than I would have in the past and my work
was chosen by Mr.Smith on another occasion.This means I don't have quite as much time for my
hobbies like drawing and gaming，but it is well worth it.I have the satisfaction of knowing that I
won't have to panic at the last minute.【高分句型二】（作者决定改正自己拖延症的坏习惯）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
16．（2024•南昌二模） Today was February 5th，a cold rainy morning，the sort of start that made
me wish that I could skip school and bead back to my warm home，and bed.Though it was my
senior year，most days seemed to remain the same boredom.
Being late for 5 minutes，I dashed up the stairs，swung open the door to my British Literature
class like a sopping wet dog，and plopped down（砰然坐下） in my seat.The eyes around the room
glared at me as my teacher cleared her throat."Mathew maybe go and see the lost﹣and﹣found for a
change of clothes" I felt my face turn red and stormed out quickly.
42The lost﹣and﹣found bin did not look promising，until I came across an oversized navy coat at
the bottom.I pot it on and zipped up，this would do for the next couple of hours.Freezing up.I dug my
hands deeper down into the pockets to keep warm.Then I hit something.and pulled out a somewhat
crinkled（皱巴巴的） piece of notebook paper with some words."To you，yes you."I read aloud，
realizing that this must be a letter from someone."Dear Person，I don't know exactly who you are，but
I believe that this letter found you for a reason.I am the least likely of people to write something of
this sort，but it'，my senior year，and I thought that I would make true friends.If you would like to
participate in this experiment ，please leave your response in locker 115，second floor."My eyes
brightened.
I finished my letter by the bell，as I made my way through the crowd，Charlie jammed his
shoulder into mine from the opposite direction."Hey!Out of my way!"I shouted.He just ignored me.not
looking back.Charlie is popular in our school and people like him （but not me）.I know Charlie never
likes me，ever since primary school.I finally made it to the second floor，slipped the letter unto the
locker.and left secretly.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1：
Soon my unseen pen pal and I wrote letters every day.______
Paragraph 2：
I waited for my pen pal in the stadium after school that day.______
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Soon my unseen pen pal and I wrote letters every day.Our words flowed freely，sharing
secrets，dreams，and the struggles of our senior year.Each letter was a small gift，a surprise waiting
in locker 115.I found myself looking forward to these exchanges more than anything else in
school.Our stories intertwined ， building a bond stronger than any friendship I had ever
known.Gradually，the anonymity of our correspondence became less important.What mattered was the
connection we had formed through words on paper.
I waited for my pen pal in the stadium after school that day.My heart raced as I anticipated the
reveal of our secret identity.The crowd thinned out，and then I saw him.Charlie，standing there with
a nervous smile. "It's you!" we exclaimed in unison.The surprise was quickly replaced by a warm
43embrace.Our letters had bridged the gap between us，and now we stood as true friends.Charlie
apologized for his past behavior，and I admitted my own fears and misunderstandings.Together，we
walked out of the stadium，knowing that our friendship would be a lasting one.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者和他看不见的笔友之间发生的故事。
高分句型一：Our words flowed freely，sharing secrets，dreams，and the struggles of our senior year.
翻译：我们畅所欲言，分享秘密、梦想和高三的奋斗历程。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语sharing secrets，dreams，and the struggles of our senior year作状语。
高分句型二：Together，we walked out of the stadium，knowing that our friendship would be a
lasting one.
翻译：我们一起走出体育场，知道我们的友谊将是持久的。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语knowing that our friendship would be a lasting one作状语以及that
引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Soon my unseen pen pal and I wrote letters every day.Our words flowed freely，sharing
secrets，dreams，and the struggles of our senior year.【高分句型一】Each letter was a small gift，a
surprise waiting in locker 115.I found myself looking forward to these exchanges more than anything
else in school.Our stories intertwined，building a bond stronger than any friendship I had ever
known.Gradually，the anonymity of our correspondence became less important.What mattered was the
connection we had formed through words on paper.（作者和笔友之间保持着联系）
I waited for my pen pal in the stadium after school that day.My heart raced as I anticipated the
reveal of our secret identity.The crowd thinned out，and then I saw him.Charlie，standing there with
a nervous smile. "It's you!" we exclaimed in unison.The surprise was quickly replaced by a warm
embrace.Our letters had bridged the gap between us，and now we stood as true friends.Charlie
apologized for his past behavior，and I admitted my own fears and misunderstandings.Together，we
walked out of the stadium，knowing that our friendship would be a lasting one.【高分句型二】（两
人见面之后，发现作者的笔友是查理，两人延续了这场友谊）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
44路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
17．（2024•张家港市校级模拟） By the age of sixteen years old，Ben had always been an
outstanding student.He went to great lengths to achieve high grades and managed to keep his parents
delighted and proud.Neither of his parents had the opportunity to attend university and it was their
biggest ambition that Ben could land a well﹣paid and decent job as a lawyer.He knew that achieving
this goal would make his parents walk on air，but he wasn't certain whether he would feel the same.
Since he was only a child，Ben had been passionate about computer programming.He taught himself
how to use a computer，and by the age of 12，he had been proficient in three different programming
languages.He did all of this in his spare time.He was quite an introvert （内向的人），so he preferred
staying in with his computer，rather than going out socializing with his fellow classmates or playing
sports in the brilliant sunshine.It was acceptable with his parents，as long as he continued to focus on
his studies.
One day，while reading an article online about a young technology billionaire called Tom，Ben was
fascinated by the magical power of technology and the wisdom and innovation of the young CEO.The
inner voice told him that he longed to become a computer programmer.Everything changed for Ben.In
the article，the CEO said that his company was trying to create a new and improved way of paying for
goods online but that they were struggling with the security system.He said if they could overcome
this，they could launch the biggest and best online payment system in the world.It occurred to Ben that
he had an innovative idea on how to handle this problem.Thinking that it wouldn't come to anything，
he emailed the CEO，introducing himself and explaining his idea.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He forgot all about it，but then a month later；the most amazing thing happened.________
With all these concerns in mind，Ben determined to communicate with his parents frankly.________
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】He forgot all about it，but then a month later，the most amazing thing happened.He
received a response directly from the CEO，which informed him that his brilliant idea struck a chord
45and that he was welcome to fly to America to share his forward thinking on the security system.Ben
was overjoyed，staring at the email with his lips curving into a smile.But a wave of worry took hold
of him.What about his parents' ambition for him？Should he turn down the offer against his own
passion？Would he let his parents down if he followed his own heart to realize his potential？
With all these concerns in mind，Ben determined to communicate with his parents frankly.When Ben
got home from school，he took a deep breath and plucked up his courage to confess everything to
his parents.Ben told them he didn't think he would become a qualified lawyer.Instead，he guaranteed
that he could do something brilliant in a career as a computer programmer.Hearing this，his parents
felt very surprised，but they didn't blame him.They stroked his head gently，whispering that they
would accompany him to visit the CEO in person.Bathed in the harmonious atmosphere，Ben was
inspired to seize the opportunity to pursue his own dreams.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了Sam的父母一直希望他成为律师，而Sam也不想辜负父母的期望。
可是，Sam内心真正喜欢的是计算机。后来，Sam机缘巧合之下获得了一份科技公司的工作。
高分句型一：He received a response directly from the CEO，which informed him that his brilliant
idea struck a chord and that he was welcome to fly to America to share his forward thinking on the
security system.
翻译：他直接收到了首席执行官的回复，首席执行官告诉他，他的绝妙想法引起了共鸣，欢迎他飞往
美国，分享他对安全系统的前瞻性思考。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及两个that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Hearing this，his parents felt very surprised，but they didn't blame him.
翻译：听到这里，他的父母感到非常惊讶，但他们没有责怪他。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Hearing this作状语。
【解答】He forgot all about it，but then a month later，the most amazing thing happened.He
received a response directly from the CEO，which informed him that his brilliant idea struck a chord
and that he was welcome to fly to America to share his forward thinking on the security system.【高
分句型一】Ben was overjoyed，staring at the email with his lips curving into a smile.But a wave of
worry took hold of him.What about his parents' ambition for him？Should he turn down the offer
against his own passion？Would he let his parents down if he followed his own heart to realize his
potential？（CEO认可了Ben的想法，并邀请他一块讨论关于系统安全性的问题。但是Ben犹豫了，
不知道父母会不会同意他去）
With all these concerns in mind，Ben determined to communicate with his parents frankly.When Ben
got home from school，he took a deep breath and plucked up his courage to confess everything to
46his parents.Ben told them he didn't think he would become a qualified lawyer.Instead，he guaranteed
that he could do something brilliant in a career as a computer programmer.Hearing this，his parents
felt very surprised，but they didn't blame him.【高分句型二】They stroked his head gently，
whispering that they would accompany him to visit the CEO in person.Bathed in the harmonious
atmosphere，Ben was inspired to seize the opportunity to pursue his own dreams.（Ben和父母坦白了
一切，父母并没有责怪他，反而鼓励他去追求自己的梦想）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
18．（2024•渝中区校级模拟） 假定你是李华，为了弘扬科学精神，你校将举办一场主题为"科学就
在身边"的英语演讲比赛。你希望参加比赛。请根据以下要点撰写一篇英文演讲稿。内容应包括：
（1）你对科学的定义；
（2）科学在身边的实例；
（3）呼吁科学探索与实践。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students，
______
【考点】演讲稿；提纲作文；科技生活．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear fellow students，
Science is the systematic study of the natural world through observation，experimentation，and
analysis.It helps us understand the laws of nature and how things work.
From the simple act of boiling water to the complex process of photosynthesis，science is present in
47our daily lives.We use technology，medicine，and transportation，all of which are products of
scientific discoveries.
Let us embrace the spirit of curiosity，ask questions，and seek answers through scientific inquiry.By
encouraging scientific exploration，we can create a better future.
【分析】高分句型一：It helps us understand the laws of nature and how things work.
翻译：它帮助我们理解自然规律以及事物是如何运作的。
分析：本句使用了how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：We use technology，medicine，and transportation，all of which are products of
scientific discoveries.
翻译：我们使用技术、医学和运输，所有这些都是科学发现的产物。
分析：运用了介词of+which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear fellow students，
Science is the systematic study of the natural world through observation，experimentation，and
analysis.It helps us understand the laws of nature and how things work.【高分句型一】（对科学的定
义）
From the simple act of boiling water to the complex process of photosynthesis，science is present in
our daily lives.We use technology，medicine，and transportation，all of which are products of
scientific discoveries.【高分句型二】（科学在身边的实例）
Let us embrace the spirit of curiosity，ask questions，and seek answers through scientific inquiry.By
encouraging scientific exploration，we can create a better future.（呼吁科学探索与实践）
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，
同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19．（2024•常德模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
At one time children made May Day baskets to celebrate spring and enjoy the rewards of giving
surprising gifts to their beloved ones.When I was in perhaps the third grade，our class took on such an
adventure.For several days，we worked on creating paper baskets.We cut colorful stripes of construction
paper and wove them together，following our teacher，Miss Anderson.We cut and wove and glued.Then
we decorated them with our crayons and more cutting and gluing.Finally，we fitted paper handles onto
the tops so that we could secretly hang our creations on the doors of unsuspecting receivers：surely our
mothers.
We were finished right on time.Miss Anderson brought armloads of flowers for us to use in stuffing
48our prizes.Lilacs and tulips and al the colorful flowers of spring.We had to wait until the day was
nearly over before we were allowed to choose the flowers that were just right for our baskets.I chose
the biggest，most beautiful blossoms，allowing myself to be selfish for the sake of my mother.Then we
fidgeted （烦躁） away what remained of our day，waiting for the clock to tick down the minutes to
our release.
Finally，mercifully，the bell rang!We threw on our coats，gathered our homework and our lunch
boxes，tied on our scarves and then，carefully，we cradled our offerings of love and off we ran to our
individual homes!I was so excited!I ran as fast as I could down the hill，across the street，up the
block ， heading home.I paused at the corner of my house ， to catch my breath and savor the
moment.Then I glanced down to admire my offering one last time before I hung it lovingly over the
doorknob.Horrors!Shock，dread and depression!My flowers were gone!Apparently，bouncing out on my
mad dash home，all that was left was a sad，messed﹣up，wrinkled little empty basket!I stood on the
doorway and burst into mournful sobbing tears.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Para 1
By and by，my mom came to the door to discover the source of the sorrow.___________
Para 2
Soon，my newly﹣decorated basket was ready to be offered again.___________
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为母亲精心制作了花篮，结果作者放学回家路上因为跑
得太快导致花都掉了。作者十分伤心。好在母亲及时安慰了作者，让作者再次从花园里摘了花装饰花
篮，母亲还很配合假装惊讶，令作者非常难忘。
高分句型一：Seeing each petal radiating the purest colors of spring，I felt my enthusiasm began to
return.
翻译：看到每一片花瓣都散发着春天最纯净的色彩，我觉得我的热情开始回归。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语Seeing each petal radiating the purest colors of spring作状语。
高分句型二：My pride of giving barely allowed me to maintain the surprise but what mattered was
49to show mom she was remembered on this special day.
翻译：我对给予的自豪感几乎让我无法保持惊喜，但重要的是让妈妈知道，在这个特殊的日子里，我
记得她。
分析：本句运用了what引导的主语从句。
【解答】By and by，my mom came to the door to discover the source of the sorrow.As she let me
in and relieved me of my school things，I tried to relate my horrible dilemma and the depth of my
sadness.Mom listened attentively，and her comforting presence brought a glimmer of hope to my
disappointed heart.Having wiped my tears tenderly，she gave me the scissors fetched from the kitchen
and suggested I find some replacement flowers from our garden.This time，I chose smaller and more
resilient flowers，carefully arranging them inside the basket.Seeing each petal radiating the purest
colors of spring，I felt my enthusiasm began to return.【高分句型一】（描写了母亲安慰作者并建议
作者再次从花园里摘了花装饰花篮）
Soon，my newly﹣decorated basket was ready to be offered again.With the revived basket cradled in
my arms，I embarked on a second journey towards home.Awkwardly，I placed the paper handle over
the knob，knocked hesitantly，and made an embarrassed retreat.Mom slowly came and answered the
door.Oh!She was so surprised!I stepped out of my hiding place. "Well，Mary!" she exclaimed! "Look
what someone left here!Aren't they lovely! " With her excitement all my worries vanished.My pride
of giving barely allowed me to maintain the surprise but what mattered was to show mom she was
remembered on this special day.【高分句型二】（描写了作者给母亲送花篮以及母亲配合作者）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
20．（2024•晋城三模） I was always afraid of water.This fear could not be explained，but I knew
50that the moment I stepped near any body of water，my legs would turn to jelly （果冻）.I would
imagine myself drowning in the water and thrashing around （乱扑腾） helplessly.That was why I
had never gone into a swimming pool until swimming became a school requirement.My school
wanted all pupils to pass a swimming test，and if they could not，then they would have to attend
weekly swimming lessons in school，which made me tremble.
Thus，my parents signed me up for swimming lessons at the pool near my house.With great
unwillingness，I attended those weekly lessons，and each one was great suffering for me.I was naturally
clumsy，and my fear of water did not help at all.Every lesson，I would be spending my time thrashing
about in the water，while my classmates would be swimming countless laps effortlessly and even turning
over like dolphins in the water.How was I going to pass the test at this rate？
In my swimming class，there was an exceptionally athletic girl.Tall and muscular，her name was
Kathy.She was the best swimmer in our class and always looked at me with disdain （鄙视），
especially when I thrashed about hopelessly in the water.
Once，after a particularly long and hard swimming lesson，I spotted Kathy swimming gracefully in
the pool.Gathering my courage，I asked gently， "Kathy，can you teach me to swim？" She stared at
me coldly.It was as if I stood at the edge of an endless ocean of inadequacy，my fears appearing like
dark storm clouds threatening to drown me.Yet，in that moment，a glimmer of hope flashed within
me，a desperate longing for guidance and acceptance.Would Kathy's icy exterior （外表） melt under
the warmth of empathy，or would I remain forever thrashing in the sea of my own fears？
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise，she nodded after a few moments of silence.
______
"Congratulations!" Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test.
______
【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】 To my surprise，she nodded after a few moments of silence.From then on，Kathy
stayed back for about an hour after every swimming lesson to coach me.She taught me how to
propel myself forward in the water and I gradually gained confidence in the pool.Slowly but surely，
I improved under her guidance and encouragement.Four months later，it was time for me to take my
51swimming test.I jumped into the pool and followed all of Kathy's advice.I swam gracefully，just like
a fish，and passed the test with flying colours.
"Congratulations!" Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test.I threw my arms
around her and hugged her tightly. "Thank you!You're a wonderful friend!If it had not been for you，I
would not have done so well!" I exclaimed.Since then，our friendship has blossomed.We met frequently
to have fun with each other，sharing both joy and sorrow.Surprisingly，I grew to love the water.A
friend like Kathy is hard to come by.She has a heart of gold and I will definitely treasure our precious
friendship.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者非常怕水，但是学校要求所有学生都要通过游泳考试，
于是父母在家附近为作者报了游泳课程，作者不情愿地去上课，上课过程也非常痛苦，Kathy是游泳
课上表现最好的学生，一次艰难的游泳课后作者鼓起勇气问Kathy能否教自己有用，忐忑地等待Kathy
的回答。
高分句型一：If it had not been for you，I would not have done so well！
翻译：如果没有你，我不会做得这么好！
分析：本句运用了由if引导的虚拟条件句表示与过去事实相反。
高分句型二：We met frequently to have fun with each other，sharing both joy and sorrow.
翻译：我们经常见面，一起玩耍，分享快乐和悲伤。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语sharing both joy and sorrow作状语。
【解答】 To my surprise，she nodded after a few moments of silence.From then on，Kathy
stayed back for about an hour after every swimming lesson to coach me.She taught me how to
propel myself forward in the water and I gradually gained confidence in the pool.Slowly but surely，
I improved under her guidance and encouragement.Four months later，it was time for me to take my
swimming test.I jumped into the pool and followed all of Kathy's advice.I swam gracefully，just like
a fish，and passed the test with flying colours.（描写了Kathy指导作者游泳，作者顺利通过了游泳考
试）
"Congratulations!" Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test.I threw my arms
around her and hugged her tightly. "Thank you!You're a wonderful friend!If it had not been for you，I
would not have done so well!【高分句型一】" I exclaimed.Since then，our friendship has blossomed.We
met frequently to have fun with each other，sharing both joy and sorrow.【高分句型二】Surprisingly，I
grew to love the water.A friend like Kathy is hard to come by.She has a heart of gold and I will
definitely treasure our precious friendship.（描写了作者感谢Kathy并和Kathy成为了朋友）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
52每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
21．（2024•厦门三模）假定你是李华，你参加了外教 Adam的英语戏剧选修课后，发现剧本选择和时间
安排存在问题。请你给外教写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）说明问题；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Adam，
_________
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；提纲作文；语言学习．
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【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：I'm Li Hua，writing to share some concerns regarding our English drama
elective class.
译文：我是李华，写这封信是想和大家分享一下关于我们英语戏剧选修课的一些问题。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语 writing to share some concerns regarding our English drama
elective class作状语。
高分句型二：To address these problems，I suggest you choose scripts suitable for the students' level.
译文：为了解决这些问题，我建议你选择适合学生水平的脚本。
分析：这句话使用了不定式短语To address these problems作目的状语。
53【解答】Dear Adam，
Hope this email finds you well.I'm Li Hua，writing to share some concerns regarding our English
drama elective class.【高分句型一】It has come to my attention that the choice of scripts may not
be engaging enough for all students and the timing seems to conflict with other important school
activities.（说明问题）
To address these problems，I suggest you choose scripts suitable for the students' level. 【高分句型
二】What's more，you can arrange the classes according to the requirements of the students，and
satisfy all the students' requirements.（提出建议）
Hopefully，my advice will be of help to you. （希望）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要
太多也不要太少。
22．（2024•民乐县校级一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
My legs and arms were shaking.Sweat was tripping down my face.Every step felt like thousands of
needles were sinking into my legs.I couldn't take it.By that time I had got three blisters （水泡） on
each foot.It felt like I was in Sahara!
It was discovery week.Grade eight was visiting Altai for a week.We lived in camps near the
river.Now we were going up the mountain called The Devil's Finger.But the mountain was only getting
steeper （陡的）.Most of the people were already on the top，screaming，laughing and taking
selfies.Then I realized I had left my hat on the bus and I felt even worse.I touched my head.It was
warm，but I couldn't do anything about it.
Most of my friends were up the hill cheering me on. "Pointless!" I told them. "I can't go any
faster!" They looked at me and laughed. "They have got to be kidding me!Are they doing it on
purpose？"
I was making my way slowly up the mountain.My feet stepped on something.I thought it was a
rock，but whatever.The rock slipped from under my boot and went tumbling down the mountain.I lost
my balance and fell on the ground. "Are you OK？" I heard a voice behind me. "Just tired.I'm taking a
break." I didn't want to say that I fell.
54There were only eight people behind me by that time.I decided to speed up because I didn't want
to be the last one up.I looked up.Yana was already on the top，waving to me. "It's like she isn't tired
at all，" I thought to myself.The sun was behind her so I could barely see her face.Actually，no.I could
see a huge smile on her face.She was shouting something，but I couldn't hear it.I decided that the rest
of the way up I would not stop to take any breaks.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However，my body wasn't listening and I sunk to the ground again.________
Finally，I reached the top of the mountain.________
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【答案】 However，my body wasn't listening and I sunk to the ground again.It was too hot and
my lips were dried.I reached for my water bottle.My blisters were killing me and the pain was
unbearable.My lungs felt like they were about to explode.However，I pushed myself to get up.The
Devil's Finger laughed at me with its steep incline，but I refused to give in.My friends' cheers
echoed in my ears，reminding me that I wasn't alone.With each step，I felt like I was conquering
not just the mountain，but my own fears and limitations.For a moment I felt a cool breeze.
Finally，I reached the top of the mountain.The view was breathtaking.I could see everything from
this height.Giant clouds were rushing past me like ships on the ocean.At the same time，the sense of
accomplishment was indescribable.Yana ran to hug me，her smile wider than ever. "You made it!" she
shouted.I looked around at my friends，all celebrating our victory together.The exhaustion was worth it.I
had proven to myself that with perseverance and determination，I could overcome any obstacle.The
Devil's Finger no longer seemed so terrible，and I felt a newfound strength in myself.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友去爬山，一路上十分辛苦，作者几乎坚持不下去。
好在最后在朋友的鼓励下，作者克服恐惧和疲惫，成功到达山顶，感到自己有了一种新的力量。
高分句型一：My friends' cheers echoed in my ears，reminding me that I wasn't alone.
翻译：朋友们的欢呼声在我耳边回响，提醒我并非只有我一个人。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语reminding me that I wasn't alone作状语以及that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：I looked around at my friends，all celebrating our victory together.
翻译：我环顾四周，看着我的朋友们，他们都在一起庆祝我们的胜利。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语all celebrating our victory together作状语。
【解答】 However，my body wasn't listening and I sunk to the ground again.It was too hot and
55my lips were dried.I reached for my water bottle.My blisters were killing me and the pain was
unbearable.My lungs felt like they were about to explode.However，I pushed myself to get up.The
Devil's Finger laughed at me with its steep incline，but I refused to give in.My friends' cheers
echoed in my ears，reminding me that I wasn't alone.【高分句型一】With each step，I felt like I
was conquering not just the mountain，but my own fears and limitations.For a moment I felt a cool
breeze.（作者爬山途中感到不适以及坚持爬完）
Finally，I reached the top of the mountain.The view was breathtaking.I could see everything from
this height.Giant clouds were rushing past me like ships on the ocean.At the same time，the sense of
accomplishment was indescribable.Yana ran to hug me，her smile wider than ever. "You made it!" she
shouted.I looked around at my friends，all celebrating our victory together.【高分句型二】The
exhaustion was worth it.I had proven to myself that with perseverance and determination，I could
overcome any obstacle.The Devil's Finger no longer seemed so terrible，and I felt a newfound strength
in myself.（作者爬上山顶，作者的感想）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
23．（2024•宝安区模拟） To some people，the sizzle and clatter of restaurant kitchens might be
like an orchestra ； to me ， such sounds behind the swinging doors just meant chaos.However
unpleasant I felt the places were，I decided to apply for a part﹣time job at a popular restaurant.The
reason was simple：I needed money.I wanted to join a camping trip to the Blue Mountains with my
friends，but that would cost about 150 dollars."You have to pay for entertainment by yourself，"my
parents said.
So I applied，and Mr.Smith，the boss of the restaurant，allowed me to have a try.My job was
super easy and boring：the newly prepared dishes would be put at the counter between the kitchen and
56dining room，and it was my duty to deliver them to the right customers.
The first few days were tiring but OK.However，setbacks soon followed as I struggled to keep
pace during a particularly busy lunch rush.I awkwardly spilled a tray of drinks，making loud noises and
the floor messy.I was embarrassed and began to feel nervous.One evening，I mixed up orders for a
large party，causing chaos and frustration.
I felt desperate.I screwed everything up.Then I heard Mr.Smith call me，and I went into his office
with my head low.To my surprise，he didn't blame me.Instead，he made me a cup of coffee."Relax，
young man，"he said."Try to smile.Things always go wrong if you can't really enjoy what you're
doing.Feel the fun in the job，and you'll be OK!"
I thought he was right.The next day when I was working，I glimpsed into the kitchen and was
amazed：in the narrow and crowded space everyone was busy﹣the chefs swirling（翻动） pans，the
manager yelling customers" requirements ， others coming and going with dishes to deliver ﹣ but
everything went smoothly without any lumping or bumping.This was incredible!
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My attitudes towards the restaurant job began to change.
______
On the last day of my contract，I went into Mr.Smith's office again when I finished my job.
______
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【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，本文讲述了作者为了赚取露营旅行的费用，在餐馆兼职的经历。起初，作
者觉得厨房的噪音令人不悦，但随着时间的推移，他逐渐适应并喜欢上了这份工作。在老板的鼓励下，
作者变得更加自信和熟练，并在合同最后一天向老板表达感激之情。
高分句型一：I smiled to everyone I met，and they returned me with warmer smiles，which made
me relaxed and even more concentrated on my job.
翻译：我向遇到的每一个人微笑，他们也报以温暖的微笑，这让我放松下来，更加专注于我的工作。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I left the restaurant with a sense of accomplishment and pride，knowing that I had
overcome my initial doubts and fears to become a better version of myself.
57翻译：我带着成就感和自豪感离开了餐厅，知道我已经克服了最初的疑虑和恐惧，成为了一个更好的
自己。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语knowing that I had overcome my initial doubts and fears to become
a better version of myself作状语以及that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】My attitudes towards the restaurant job began to change.I smiled to everyone I met，and
they returned me with warmer smiles，which made me relaxed and even more concentrated on my
job.【高分句型一】Following the smiles were natural conversations，jokes and laughter，and an air
of harmony was created where I worked.I still made some mistakes like forgetting the change or
wrong deliveries，but they were easily corrected with a little kind reminding.I even tried helping out
in the kitchen preparing the food."You can be a good chef!"They encouraged me.Why not？Who
knew!（作者对这份工作态度的改变）
On the last day of my contract，I went into Mr.Smith's office again when I finished my job.I
expressed my gratitude for his kindness and guidance. "Thank you，Mr.Smith，" I said. "You've
taught me so much about work and life.I'll never forget your words of encouragement." He smiled
and shook my hand. "You're welcome，young man.I'm glad to see you've grown so much.Keep it
up，and you'll go far in life." I left the restaurant with a sense of accomplishment and pride，
knowing that I had overcome my initial doubts and fears to become a better version of myself.【高
分句型二】（作者表达对老板的感激之情）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
24．（2024•金安区校级三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
"This Saturday，we'll be visiting cats at the animal shelter.If you'd like to join us，here's an
58application form"，said Ms.Delgado，the school librarian who had held the reading engagement event for
students.
Ben loved cats and he had always wanted one，so he hurried to take an application form.Then
Ms.Delgado added，"We'll be reading to the cats and award readers who make most progress."Ben
stopped.Reading aloud can be a challenging task.Ben might feel his heart racing，his palms sweating，
and his voice shaking as he read.He might stumble over words or lose his place in the text.He might
feel like everyone was watching him and judging him.Still，he really wanted to visit the cats，so he
took an application form anyway.
On Saturday，Ben arrived at the shelter with some of his classmates."This is Max，"the shelter
worker told Ben as she handed him a gray cat.Ben carried Max to a bean bag chair and sat down.Max
settled onto his lap.He took a book he' d been working on and started reading.Max，very different from
other cats walking around the room while the kids read，purred（发出呼噜声） on his lap as if he had
understood what Ben read.
"I'm glad Max is staying and listening to my reading and he is the best cat ever，"Ben told Dad
excitedly."I'm glad you two are friends，"Dad said.All week，Ben's heart was filled with anxiety as he
waited for Saturday to arrive.He was eager to read to Max and the anticipation of spending time with
his feline（猫咪的） friend made him restless and nervous.When it arrived，Ben got to read to Max
again.
"What if someone adopts Max？"Ben asked Dad later."I guess you'd read to a different cat，"Dad
said."But I don't want a different cat.I wish we could adopt Max，"Ben said to Dad.He knew they
couldn't because Mom had allergies（过敏）.Ben loved the cat so much that he even told his next﹣
door neighbor，Mrs.Patel ，about Max."Max sounds like a special cat，"said Mrs.Patel.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Week by week，Ben realized that reading seemed easier with Max's company.
____
But on Saturday，Ben couldn't find Max at the shelter.
____
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59【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了Ben去动物收容所时，给只名叫Max的猫读书，发现它好像听得懂似
得，于是Ben提出想收养Max，但他妈妈有过敏症。他甚至告诉了他的邻居 Patel太太关于Max的事。
一周又一周，Ben意识到有了Max的陪伴，读书似乎变得更容易了，Ben还被老师授予"最进步读者
奖"。Ben想去收容所告诉Max得奖的事情，却得知Max被收养了，结果原来是邻居Patel太太收养了
Max.
高分句型一：He noticed that Max's purring had a calming effect on him，allowing him to focus
better on the words in front of him.
翻译：他注意到Max的呜呜声对他有镇静作用，让他能够更好地专注于面前的话语。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词短语allowing him to focus better on the words
in front of him作状语。
高分句型二：Of course，he didn't forget to hug Max tightly who gave a contented purr.
翻译：当然，他没有忘记紧紧地拥抱Max，Max满意地发出呜呜声。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的定语从句。
【解答】Week by week，Ben realized that reading seemed easier with Max's company.The presence
of the gray cat made him feel more relaxed and comfortable.He noticed that Max's purring had a
calming effect on him，allowing him to focus better on the words in front of him.【高分句型一】
Ben was amazed by how much he enjoyed reading aloud to Max.Still，he was surprised when
Ms.Delgado gave him the Most Improved Reader award.Ben felt a sense of pride and accomplishment
as he held the certificate in his hands.He couldn't wait to show it to Max.（一周又一周，Ben意识到
有了Max的陪伴，读书似乎变得更容易了）
But on Saturday，Ben couldn't find Max at the shelter."Someone must have adopted Max.What if I
never see him again？" Ben said，frowning as if he had lost his most precious friend.Just then，
Mrs.Patel walked into the visitors' room，carrying Max."I'm adopting him，"Mrs.Patel said."You can
come over every day to read to him."Hearing what Mrs.Patel said，Ben jumped with excitement and
threw his arms around Mrs.Patel.Of course，he didn't forget to hug Max tightly who gave a
contented purr.【高分句型二】（Ben得知Max被人收养后的反应，以及知道是Patel太太收养后的反
应）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
60（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
25．（2024•沙坪坝区校级三模） As I unzipped my lunchbox，the whole place was turned into a
spicy curry （咖喱） dream.I immediately hid it under my seat，hoping no one would take notice.
Mom had really outdone herself with masala —our family's all﹣time favorite dish back in India.But
today，it wasn't just about me and my lunch.A warm smile on his face，Ricky invited me，a new
transfer student from India to New York city，for lunch.
"Ava，come sit here!" Ricky called out，gesturing towards a vacant seat.
As I made my way over，memories of those awkward lunchtimes when I studied in Kansas，one
of the most conservative states，flooded back.I could still recall how everyone would wrinkle their noses
and stare curiously when I unpacked my Indian food.It always made me feel like an outsider，like I
didn't belong.
Therefore，before my first day in this school，I had demanded my mom pack "normal" western﹣
style food for me.I still remembered the look on her face upon hearing it ， as she signed in
disappointment and confusion， "Isn't there a moment when you feel proud of your origin？" That was
hurting，but not more hurting than others' giggles and whispers.Honestly，long queues were common in
Indian restaurants in New York city，a cultural melting pot，but I wouldn't take that risk.
Unfortunately，this morning，Mom had forgotten to make sandwich or any "normal" food，so I had
to bring leftovers from our dinner.At the thought of the possible oh﹣no﹣second （社死），I felt like
being thrown into darkness.
However，before I came back to reality，Ricky noticed my sneaking （躲躲藏藏）. "What do you
have for lunch？" he asked，his eyes twinkling with interest.I tried to brush it off （搪塞），claiming I
wasn't hungry.But Ricky wouldn't let it go，and before I could protest，he had the lid of my lunchbox
open and I prepared myself for such familiar responses as "Ew" or "What is that？"
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However，I did not get what I was expecting.
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After school，I found Mom preparing sandwich for tomorrow's lunch.
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【考点】记叙文；读后续写；生活感悟．
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【分析】本文以午餐为线索展开，讲述了作者从印度转学到纽约，作为午餐，妈妈准备了他们家在印
度一直以来最喜欢的菜——玛莎拉，但和其他同学的西餐不一样，其他同学感到很奇怪，作者感到自
己被孤立了，所以要求妈妈为自己做西餐。结果一天妈妈忘记了做西餐，又做了玛莎拉，作者怕被其
他同学看到，把午餐藏了起来。然而被同学Ricky发现了，Ricky打开了作者午餐盒的盖子，作者原想
Ricky可能又是一番讨厌，结果这饭菜却是Ricky感兴趣，爱吃的，作者很高兴自己的饮食文化被同学
认同，不再为自己的饭菜而尴尬了。
高分句型一：His face lit up with a broad smile，asking， "You mum made masala for your
lunch？".
翻译：他的脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容，问道："你妈妈给你做了玛莎拉午餐吗？"。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语asking， "You mum made masala for your lunch？"作状语。
高分句型二：I came over and asked if I could have palak paneer in my lunchbox，which made her
a bit confused.
翻译：我走过去问我能不能在午餐盒里放上palak奶酪，这让她有点困惑。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 However，I did not get what I was expecting.Ricky took a deep breath，closed his
eyes，and savored the aroma of the masala.Instead of the usual stares and whispers，there was only
interest on Ricky's face.His face lit up with a broad smile，asking， "You mum made masala for
your lunch？" 【高分句型一】Before I could make a response，he added： "I could be dying of
envy!You know what，last Sunday，my parents and I queued up for three hours in harsh cold in
fifth Avenue for the new India restaurant." He enjoyed every bite，nodding his head in approval.It
was a welcome change from the stares and whispers I had grown accustomed to.（描写了Ricky的表
现和作者的预料完全不同，他对玛莎拉很感兴趣）
After school，I found Mom preparing sandwich for tomorrow's lunch.I came over and asked if I
could have palak paneer in my lunchbox，which made her a bit confused.【高分句型二】Finally，I told
her about my experience with Ricky and how he had enjoyed my food.Mom's face lit up with joy. "I'm
glad he liked it，" she said. "And I'm even happier that you're starting to feel proud of your roots
62again." She paused and looked at me seriously. "Your culture，your traditions，and your food are all a
part of who you are." I nodded，feeling a sense of relief wash over me.Mom's words had given me the
courage to embrace my identity and share my culture with others.（写了作者告诉妈妈自己的饭菜得到同
学的认同，妈妈非常高兴）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还
是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做
到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连
贯。
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1．记叙文
【考点介绍】
记叙文是英语写作中常见的一种文体，主要通过叙述人物的经历、事件的发展和环境的描绘来表达情感
展示主题。在各类英语考试中，记叙文写作常常是作文部分的考查重点。
【典型例题】
观察下面的图片，根据图片内容和其中的角色分配，用第一人称写一个英文小故事，体现戴头盔的重要
性。
注意：
（1）可以适当添加细节，以使情节连贯；
（2）词数100左右；
（3）首句已经给出，不计入词数。
*词汇提示：helmet n.头盔，安全帽；crash v. & n.冲撞
分析：高分句型一：It happened so suddenly that we were shocked and lost control of our bicycles.
翻译：事情发生得太突然了，我们都惊呆了，自行车失控了。
分析：运用了so…that引导的结果状语从句。
高分句型二：Knowing what had happened，Dad said to me， "It would have been avoided if you had
worn your helmet."
翻译：知道发生了什么，爸爸对我说："如果你戴上头盔的话，这是可以避免的。"
分析：运用了what引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句。
解答：Last Thursday，I met David at the school gate and we decided to cycle back home together.All
the way we were chatting happily when a cat dashed out on the road，followed by an angry dog.It
happened so suddenly that we were shocked and lost control of our bicycles.
（高分句型一）Before realizing what was happening，I bumped into a rock and fell off the bicycle，
David falling too because of the crash.I was bleeding and sent to hospital immediately while David was
64slightly injured on his elbow.（因为没戴头盔路上发生的事情）Knowing what had happened，Dad said
to me， "It would have been avoided if you had worn your helmet." （高分句型二）I nodded
regretfully and promised I would never cycle without a helmet again.（认识到了头盔的重要性）
点评：写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同
时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与构思：明确题目要求的主题和内容后，根据主题构思故事的大致情节和人物。
2.确定时态和人称：根据题目要求，确定要使用的时态。
3.开始写作：首先写出一个简短的开头，引入主题。接着，按照时间顺序或情节发展，逐步展开故事。在
写作过程中，注意保持逻辑清晰、表达准确。
4.结尾：在故事的结尾部分，要对主题进行总结或给出一些启示。同时，也可以根据需要添加一些情感色
彩或寓意。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的语法、拼写和句子结构等，进行必要的修改和润色。
2．书信类
【考点介绍】
书信写作是英语写作中的一种重要形式，主要用于人们之间的交流和沟通。书信写作需要遵循特定的格
式和规范，同时还需要注意语言表达的得体性和准确性。在各类英语考试中，书信写作通常是必考题型
之一，主要考查学生的实际应用能力和语言表达能力。
【典型例题】
假定你是学校学生会主席李华，请写封邮件邀请你校学生家长 Chris 参加家长会，内容包括：
（1）时间和地点；
（2）会议议程；
（3）表达期待。
注意：
（1）词数100词左右；
（2）文中不得透露个人及学校信息；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：学生会 the Student Union；家长会 parent﹣teacher meeting
Dear Chris，
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65Yours，
Li Hua
分析：高分句型一：The parent﹣teacher meeting，to be held in the lecture hall this Friday，is
scheduled to last for 2 hours from 8：00 a.m.to 11：00 a.m.
译文：家长会将于本周五在演讲厅举行，时间为上午8点至11点，持续两个小时。
分析：这句话使用了不定式的被动形式to be held in the lecture hall this Friday作定语。
高分句型二：The meeting is said to begin with an inspiring speech delivered by the principal，followed
by a video featuring the colorful school life of students.
译文：据说，会议首先由校长发表了鼓舞人心的演讲，然后是一段视频，展示了学生丰富多彩的学校生
活。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语followed by a video featuring the colorful school life of students作状
语。
解答：Dear Chris，
I am Li Hua，the president of the Student Union.Representing the school，I am writing to request the
pleasure of your participating in the parent﹣teacher meeting.（写信目的）
The parent﹣teacher meeting，to be held in the lecture hall this Friday，is scheduled to last for 2 hours
from 8：00 a.m.to 11：00 a.m.（高分句型一）（时间和地点）The meeting is said to begin with an
inspiring speech delivered by the principal，followed by a video featuring the colorful school life of
students.（高分句型二）Finally，you will be provide a chance to communicate with your child's head
teacher to have a further understanding of him/her.Please pay attention that during the meeting you
should be quiet to provide a good meeting atmosphere.（会议议程）
Looking forward to your coming.（表达期待）
Yours，
Li Hua
点评：这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，写作时要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要
组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，
缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求
的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
【解题思路】
1.审题与构思：首先明确题目要求，包括写信的对象、目的、内容和格式等。然后根据题目要求进行构思，
想好要表达的内容和层次。
662.确定格式：书信的格式包括信头、日期、收信人地址、信件内容等。
3.开始写作：在开头部分要明确表明写信的目的和主题，然后展开相应的内容。在写作过程中，要注意使
用得体的语言表达自己的观点和诉求，同时注意段落之间的衔接和连贯性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查信件的内容、语法、拼写和格式等方面是否存在错误。同时，检查
语言表达是否得体、清晰，是否达到了写作的目的。
3．演讲稿
【考点介绍】
演讲稿是一种用于表达观点、传达信息、宣传鼓动等目的的口头表达形式。在英语写作中，演讲稿的写
作需要遵循口头语言表达的特点和规律，注重表达的清晰性、准确性和感染力。在各类英语考试中，演
讲稿写作是常考的作文题型之一，主要考查学生的语言应用能力和表达能力。
【典型例题】
假如你是李华，最近你班将以"Will robots take the place of human beings？"为话题举办一个英语辩论会。
请你写一篇发言稿，代表反方发言，内容包括：
（1）亮明观点；
（2）陈述理由；
（3）得出结论。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析：高分句型一：Second，robots don't have feelings just like human beings though they can imitate
human beings in many ways.
翻译：其次，机器人不像人类那样有感情，尽管它们可以在很多方面模仿人类。
分析：本句使用了though引导的让步状语从句。
高分句型二：Most importantly，robots can't think by themselves，which makes them different from
human beings and put them at a disadvantage.
翻译：最重要的是，机器人不能自己思考，这使它们与人类不同，并使它们处于不利地位。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
解答：Robots have become more and more intelligent in recent years，so some people think they are
likely to take the place of human beings one day.However.I have different opinions. （亮明观点）My
reasons are as follows.
First of all，robots are designed by human beings，so their intelligence is limited.（陈述理由一）
Second，robots don't have feelings just like human beings though they can imitate human beings in
many ways.（高分句型一）（陈述理由二） Most importantly，robots can't think by themselves，which
makes them different from human beings and put them at a disadvantage.（高分句型二）（陈述理由
67三）
In conclusion，although technology makes it possible for robots to develop better intelligence and do a
variety of things for us，they can't replace human beings.（得出结论）
点评：提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯
符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有
档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求，包括演讲的主题、目的、受众和时间等。然后根据题目要求进行分析，
确定演讲稿的框架和内容。
2.确定结构：演讲稿的结构一般包括开场白、主体和结束语三个部分。开场白部分要简洁明了地引入主题，
吸引受众的注意力；主体部分要围绕主题展开，有条理地阐述观点和事例，注意段落之间的衔接和连贯
性；结束语部分要总结演讲内容，提出号召和倡议。
3.开始写作：在开场白部分要引入主题，吸引受众的注意力；在主体部分要阐述观点和事例，注意使用适
当的论证方法和表达方式；在结束语部分要总结演讲内容，提出号召和倡议。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查演讲稿的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在问题。同时，检
查语言表达是否清晰、准确、有感染力，是否符合口头语言表达的特点。
4．报道
【考点介绍】
报道是一种以文字、图片、视频等手段，对新闻、事件、活动等进行详细、客观的描述和记录的文体。
在英语写作中，报道需要遵循准确、客观、公正的原则，同时要求结构清晰、表达简洁明了。在各类英
语考试中，报道写作是常考的作文题型之一，主要考查学生的新闻素养、写作技巧和语言表达能力。
【典型例题】
假定你是李华，上周你校举办了中国传统文化周活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
（1）活动目的；
（2）活动内容；
（3）活动反响。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
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分析：高分句型一：A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school
to raise students' confidence in our national culture.
译文：上周，我们学校发起了一项中国传统文化周活动，以提高学生对我们民族文化的信心。
分析：这句话使用了不定式to raise students' confidence in our national culture作目的状语。
高分句型二：The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students，which will
encourage us to further spread Chinese culture in future.
译文：这次活动很成功，在我们学生中越来越受欢迎，这将鼓励我们在未来进一步传播中国文化。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
解答：
A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to raise students'
confidence in our national culture.（高分句型一）（活动目的）
During the campaign，we students were encouraged to take part in a wide range of cultural activities，
including singing Chinese folk songs，attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional
Chinese festivals.Every one of us chose one to our taste and we had a good time very much.（活动内
容）
The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students，which will encourage us
to further spread Chinese culture in future.（高分句型二）（活动反响）
点评：这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，写作时要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要
组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，
缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求
的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求，包括报道的主题、内容、受众和形式等。然后根据题目要求进行分析，
确定报道的重点和角度。
2.确定结构：报道的结构一般包括标题、导语、主体和结尾四个部分。
3.开始写作：在标题部分要用简短、醒目的文字吸引读者的注意力；在导语部分要概括性地介绍事件的主
要内容；在主体部分要详细描述事件的经过、背景和影响等；在结尾部分要总结全文，提出自己的看法
或建议。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查报道的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。同时，检查
69语言表达是否准确、客观、简练，是否达到了写作的目的。
5．其他应用文写作
【考点介绍】
其他应用文写作是英语写作中的一类，除了常见的信函、报告、演讲稿、新闻稿等，还包括一些具有特
定格式和用途的文稿，例如备忘录、电子邮件、简历、说明书等。这些应用文在日常生活和工作中都有
广泛的应用。在各类英语考试中，其他应用文写作也是常考的题型之一，主要考查学生的应用写作能力
和表达能力。
【典型例题】
假定你是李华，你在暑期里参观了市博物馆举办的一次"遇 见中国戏曲（Meet the Chinese Opera）"的展
览请你为你校英文报写一则评论，内容包括：
（1）展览概况；
（2）观展感受；
（3）提出建议。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析：高分句型一：To develop citizen's artistic accomplishment，the museum exhibited many fantastic
pictures，ranging from Peking Opera，Shaoxing Opera to Kunqu Opera，and bringing an audio﹣visual
feast for the art lovers.
译文：为了培养市民的艺术修养，博物馆展出了从京剧、越剧到昆曲的精彩画面，为艺术爱好者带来了
一场视听盛宴。
分析：这句话使用了不定式做目的状语，ranging from Peking Opera，Shaoxing Opera to Kunqu Opera，
and bringing an audio﹣visual feast for the art lovers是现在分词短语作状语。
高分句型二：Exposed to the plots，colors and affection，I seemed to be personally on the scene.
译文：暴露在情节、色彩和感情中，我似乎亲自出现在现场。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语Exposed to the plots，colors and affection作状语。
解答：This summer holiday witnessed numerous visitors to the "Meet the Chinese Opera" exhibition in
the city museum.（话题）
To develop citizen's artistic accomplishment，the museum exhibited many fantastic pictures，ranging from
Peking Opera，Shaoxing Opera to Kunqu Opera，and bringing an audio﹣visual feast for the art lovers.
（高分句型一）（展览概况）I enjoyed every second of the display and was particularly attracted by
Peking Opera Legend of the White Snake.Exposed to the plots，colors and affection，I seemed to be
70personally on the scene.（高分句型二）（观展感受）
Sincerely，I hope in the future shows can last longer and more famous works can be displayed.（提出
建议）
点评：这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，写作时要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要
组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，
缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求
的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求写什么样的应用文，包括目的、受众、内容和格式等。然后根据题目要
求进行分析，确定应用文的关键要素和重点内容。
2.确定格式：不同类型的应用文有不同的格式和结构，在写作前需要认真阅读题目要求，按照规定的格式
进行写作。同时，要注意应用文的惯用语言表达和缩略语等细节问题。
3.写作内容：在写作过程中，要围绕目的和受众，明确传达信息的内容和重点。要注意语言表达的简练性、
准确性和逻辑性，尽可能精简语言，避免使用复杂的语句和表达方式。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查应用文的内容、语法、拼写和格式等方面是否存在错误。同时，检
查语言表达是否准确、清晰，是否达到了写作的目的。
6．提纲作文
【考点介绍】
提纲作文是一种较为灵活的写作形式，其考查的是考生在给定主题和提纲的前提下进行拓展论述的能力
在英语写作中，提纲作文通常涉及一些热门话题或观点，要求考生根据题目所给的提纲，以篇章的形式
展开讨论，表达自己的观点和见解。在各类英语考试中，提纲作文是常考的作文题型之一，主要考查学
生的语言表达能力、思维逻辑性和主题论述能力。
【典型例题】
假设上周三（11月9日）你校举办了主题为"预防森林火灾"的校园活动。请你为学校英语报写一篇报道，
内容包括：
（1）活动时间、地点、参加人员；
（2）活动内容：观看短片、制作黑板报等等；
（3）活动反响。
注意：词数120左右。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析：高分句型一：In this activity，we were aware of the actions we should take in our daily life to
prevent forest fires.
71翻译：在这次活动中，我们意识到了我们在日常生活中应该采取的预防森林火灾。
分析：本句使用了不定式to prevent forest fires作目的状语。
高分句型二：Sincerely，I hope that the school can hold the similar activity again.
翻译：真诚地，我希望学校能再次举办类似的活动。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
解答：In order to promote the awareness of fire prevention and student safety，our school held a
campus activity with the theme of "Preventing Forest fires".（活动目的）The following are the specific
details of the activity.
First，last Wednesday，the event was held in the conference hall of the school.（活动时间地点）
Secondly，watching short films and making blackboard newspapers not only attracted the enthusiastic
participation of teachers and students ， but also improved the safety awareness of forest fire
prevention.Finally，this activity was very successful and received unanimous praise from the participants.
（活动内容）In this activity，we were aware of the actions we should take in our daily life to prevent
forest fires.（高分句型一）Without doubt，this is very meaningful.（活动反向）
Sincerely，I hope that the school can hold the similar activity again.（高分句型二）
点评：提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯
符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有
档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：明确了解作文的主题和要求。观察题目所给的提纲，可以得知文章应由哪些部分组成以及
每部分的内容要点。
2.构建框架：即文章由哪几部分组成以及每部分的内容要点。注意整体逻辑性和连贯性，确保文章从开头
到结尾形成一个完整的故事或论述。
3.写作过程：根据题目所给的提纲逐一展开讨论。注意每部分的主题句要明确，论据要充分，段落间的过
渡要自然流畅。同时，运用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和见解。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否紧扣主题，论据是否合理，观点是否清晰明确。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自然、流畅，是否达
到了写作的目的。
7．读后续写
【考点介绍】
读后续写是一种结合阅读和写作的考查方式，主要考查考生的理解能力、想象力、创造力和语言表达能
力。在英语写作中，读后续写通常提供一段阅读材料，要求考生根据材料的内容和情节，发挥想象力，
72续写接下来的故事或论述。这类题型在各类英语考试中较为常见，主要考查学生的阅读理解能力、思维
能力和语言表达能力。
1．选材特点
（1）所需阅读的短文动在350以内；
（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻
辑性比较强．
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语猴接程度
（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词歌覆盖情况
（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性
（4）上下文的连贯性
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：理解材料的主旨和重要细节，注意把握材料中的人物、情节、时间和地点等信息。
2.确定主题和情节：注意与材料中的情节和人物保持连贯性，同时可以加入自己的想象力和创造力来丰富
情节。
3.构建框架：包括开头、发展和结尾三个部分。开头部分应与提供的阅读材料相衔接，可以简要概括前文；
发展部分应展开情节，使故事或论述更加丰富；结尾部分则应总结全文，并为读者留下一定的思考空间。
4.写作过程：首先写开头部分，与提供的阅读材料进行衔接，确保文章的连贯性；然后写发展部分，根据
自己确定的情节发展进行拓展，可以使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析。同时，注
意与前文保持逻辑上的连贯性；最后写结尾部分，总结全文，并为读者留下一定的思考空间。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否与阅读材料保持连贯性，是否遵循了给出的主题和情节发展进行拓展，是否达到了写作的目的。同时
检查语言表达是否准确、自然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
8．校园文明与安全
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"校园文明与安全"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对校园文明与安全
的认知和理解。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就校园文明、校园安全等相关问题
进行论述、描述或表达观点。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及校园文明的重要性、校园安
全的现状和措施、学生安全教育等方面。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述校园文明与安全的相关问题，例如校园文明的重要性、校园安全的现状和措施、学生安全教育等
73结论部分可以总结全文并强调校园文明与安全的重要性。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述校园文明与安
全的相关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并
强调校园文明与安全的重要性。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点
同时保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
9．语言学习
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"语言学习"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对语言学习的理解和关注。
这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就语言学习的某个方面进行论述、描述或表达观点。
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：首先仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的目的和要求，把握题目的主题和要点，了解需要涉及的
范围和重点。
2.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及语言学习的乐趣、挑战、学
习方法、影响因素等。
3.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述语言学习的相关问题，例如语言学习的乐趣、挑战、学习方法、影响因素等；结论部分可以总结
全文并强调语言学习的重要性和意义。
4.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述语言学习的相
关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调语
言学习的重要性和意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时
保证语法和拼写的准确性。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
10．生活感悟
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"生活感悟"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对生活的理解和思考。这
类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就生活中的某个事件或观察到的某个现象发表自己的
观点和感悟。
74【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：首先仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的目的和要求，把握题目的主题和要点，了解需要涉及的
范围和重点。
2.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及生活中的某个事件或观察到
的某个现象，以及由此产生的思考和感悟。
3.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述生活感悟的相关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；结论部分可以总
结全文并强调生活感悟的重要性和意义。
4.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述生活感悟的相
关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调生
活感悟的重要性和意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时
保证语法和拼写的准确性。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
11．文化交流
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"文化交流"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对文化交流的理解和掌握。
这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就文化交流的某个方面进行论述、描述或表达观点。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及文化交流的意义、文化差异
的认知与处理、文化传承与创新等。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述文化交流的相关问题，例如文化交流的意义、文化差异的认知与处理、文化传承与创新等；结论
部分可以总结全文并强调文化交流的重要性和意义。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述文化交流的相
关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调文
化交流的重要性和意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时
保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
7512．科技生活
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"科技生活"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对现代科技在生活中的应
用和影响的认知和理解。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就科技生活的某个方面进
行论述、描述或表达观点。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及现代科技的发展、对生活质
量的影响、对环境的影响等。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述科技生活的相关问题，例如现代科技的发展、对生活质量的影响、对环境的影响等；结论部分可
以总结全文并强调科技生活的重要性和意义。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述科技生活的相
关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调科
技生活的重要性和意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时
保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
13．人物人品
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"人物人品"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对人物性格、品质、行为
的描述和评价。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生根据题目提供的材料或情境，对人
物的性格特点、品质表现、行为举止等进行描述和评价。
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：首先仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的目的和要求，把握题目的主题和要点，了解需要涉及的
范围和重点。
2.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及对一位名人的品质评价、对
自己影响深刻的人的描述、对某个文学或历史人物的性格特点的分析等。
3.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述人物的性格特点、品质表现、行为举止等；结论部分可以总结全文并强调人物性格品质的重要性
和意义。
4.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述人物的性格特
76点、品质表现、行为举止等，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分
总结全文并强调人物性格品质的重要性和意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和
词汇来表达观点，同时保证语法和拼写的准确性。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
14．兴趣爱好
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"兴趣爱好"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对个人兴趣爱好的描述、
体验和看法。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就兴趣爱好的某个方面进行论述、描
述或表达观点。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及自己的兴趣爱好、喜欢的运
动或娱乐活动、对兴趣爱好的看法等。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述自己的兴趣爱好或对兴趣爱好的看法等；结论部分可以总结全文并强调兴趣爱好对个人的影响和
意义。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述自己的兴趣爱
好或对兴趣爱好的看法等，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，
总结全文并强调兴趣爱好对个人的影响和意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和
词汇来表达观点，同时保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
15．传统文化
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"传统文化"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对传统文化的了解、传承
和弘扬。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生根据题目提供的材料或情境，对某一传统
文化进行介绍、阐述或表达自己的看法。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及中国的传统节日、传统手工
艺、传统民俗等。
772.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述传统文化的内容、起源、传承和发展等；结论部分可以总结全文并强调传统文化的重要性和弘扬
意义。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述传统文化的内
容、起源、传承和发展等，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，
总结全文并强调传统文化的重要性和弘扬意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和
词汇来表达观点，同时保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
16．旅游与交通
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"旅游与交通"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对旅游景点和交通方式
的了解、选择和评价。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生根据题目提供的材料或情境
对某一旅游景点或交通方式进行介绍、对比或表达自己的看法。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及旅游景点的介绍、比较不同
交通方式的优缺点、旅游安全与交通规则等。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述旅游景点或交通方式的特点、优势或劣势等；结论部分可以总结全文并强调旅游与交通的重要性
和选择合适的旅游交通方式的意义。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述旅游景点或交
通方式的特点、优势或劣势等，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部
分，总结全文并强调旅游与交通的重要性和选择合适的旅游交通方式的意义。在写作过程中，要注意使
用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
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