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2025年菁优高考英语解密之写作话题
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•厦门三模） Javon was the shortest kid in the class.It had been that way since the third
grade.He'd had to ask to get his gym locker changed so that he didn't have to struggle so much to
reach it.For most kids，being short would be a problem，but Javon didn't let being short bother him
at all.
That was Javon's attitude about most things except school work.And Javon had worked hard.By the
middle of seventh grade，Javon was one of the top kids in the class.So，he hadn't been too concerned
when Mr.T announced they were starting a new unit in math.For Javon，math used to be easy.He
figured that since he had ten fingers，he could do most of it.But when Mr.T threw letters into math
problems，he couldn't wrap his mind around using these letters.Mr.T had given them all sorts of rules
for what to do when there were letters in math problems.But Javon couldn't remember what they all
were and he didn't think he even understood the rules he did remember.Soon he was hopelessly lost in
math class.Even worse，it was time for the class to take the chapter test.
The test was quite demanding.Javon was confused by the very first question.He was nervous and
kept losing track of what he was doing.When the class period ended，he hadn't finished all of the
problems.
The day came when the class finally got their papers back.Seeing"D"written in red ink on the
corner of the paper，he felt desperate.In the seat next to him，Tyler sighed slightly，catching Javon's
attention.He couldn't help but see the big，red"C"on Tyler's paper.He felt so upset.
When they started packing up to leave after class，Tyler accidentally told Javon he got extra time
on the test.Upon hearing this，Javon burst out，"It was unfair!"He dropped his books，face hot.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At this very moment，Mr.T came up to see what happened to them._____
Eventually，Javon understood what a reading disorder was and how to ask for help._____
2．（2024•贵溪市校级二模）
The Making of a Believer
It was Christmas Eve morning，and I awoke with a purpose：to find my lost cat，Baby﹣Girl.As I
got ready，I could hear icy rain beating against the window.Baby﹣Girl was out there somewhere in the
1storm；I could just feel her.Sure，it had been six months since she went missing，but I still had
faith.This was the season for miracles（奇迹），after all.
Earlier this summer，my sweet pet disappeared from my parents' house in Indiana.Baby﹣Girl had
been staying with them while I was between apartments.At the time ， I lived and worked in
Washington，D.C.I was staying with friends until I signed my lease（租约）on a new place.Baby﹣Girl
had gotten out of my parents' house three days before I was set to fly back home to pick her up.
My dad and I had spent that entire visit searching for her.Dad was the family's resident "realist，"
which meant he spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst. "She's either been hit by
a car or been taken in by someone who found her，" he said.However，I believed I'd see Baby﹣Girl
again.Even after I returned to D.C.without her and the weeks stretched into months，deep down I
had.this undeniable feeling that we would be reunited one day.
Now，home again in Indiana for the holidays，I was determined to pick up my search right where
I' d left off.I grabbed Baby﹣Girl's cat carrier，loaded it into the car，and then asked my dad to drive
me to the shelter.
"Sharon，you have to be realistic，" Dad said as we headed to the garage（车库）."She's been
gone too long.You' re not going to find her."
"Well，I disagree.Don' t you believe in miracles？" I asked.
Dad said nothing more but climbed into the driver's seat.At the shelter，a woman at the front desk
greeted my dad warmly."Good to see you again，Mr.Dillon!Still looking for your cat？" Ah，I
thought，maybe he's not such a pessimist after all.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We were led to the room where the abandoned cats lived.
Shortly after，my shocked Dad drove us back home.
3．（2024•德阳模拟）你校"英语园地"向全体高三学生征集优秀作文，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇题
为My Unforgettable Senior High School Life的文章投稿。内容如下：
（1）你的高中生活；
（2）你的期望与祝福。
注意：
（1）词数100词左右，标题已给出，不计入总数。
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2My Unforgettable Senior High School Life
________
4．（2024•鄄城县校级一模） One night，sitting on the cold steps at the back of my apartment in
Kansas，I'd been staring out into the darkness.The only light came from my cigarette.Rain soaked
（浸湿） through my pants，but I didn't care.Back in my room，there was a knife on the bedside
table and a note on my computer screen.I hoped that whoever read it first would understand why I
had the plan to end it all.
Six months before that night，a car accident caused a brain injury in me.I lost my job and had to
live on my savings in my lonely apartment.Since then，I had been suffering from depression and
struggling to get through each day.
I sat there on those cold steps just wanting to end it all. "Tonight.I will，" I thought as I took
another drag of my cigarette.
"Meow？"
I looked up.A black and white cat with round green eyes looked back at me.He meowed
again.Then，walking out from his hiding spot，he jumped at me.He was tiny and damp，but he rubbed
up against my legs.When I reached down to pet him，he leaned into my touch，purring （发出呼噜
声）.
That was all it took.I cried.The cat just watched me.I didn't scare him away.In fact，he stood there
as if he knew how desperately I needed a companion right at that very moment.
I looked into his big green eyes and he looked back.Clearly a stray （流浪的） cat. "When was
the last time you ate？" I said.My plan to end it all was put on hold，at least until I found this cat
some food.
It became a routine：Every day，I'd go to the back steps with some cat food.Usually，the cat，
whom I named Scout，was already waiting for me.He became more than something to live for.Over
time he inspired me to get help for my depression and even gave me the confidence to get into a
serious relationship with Becky in Pittsburgh，whom I had known for years.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Scout became my constant companion.
I was far from the lonely and depressed man that Scout had first approached in the rain，but I still
needed to make a few more changes.
35．（2024•鹤城区校级一模）假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了一场以"强体魄，健身心"为主题的体育文
化节活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
（1）活动主题和内容；
（2）活动反响。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
School Sports and Culture Festival Draws Excitement
______
6．（2024•上饶二模） Crane climbed into the last remaining lifeboat.Three men got into the boat
with him.They were the ship's captain，the cook and a sailor named Billie.For three days，the men
steered the small boat through high waves along the coast of Florida.At last，they saw land.
A long stretch of coast lay before the eyes of the men.Slowly，the land rose up out of the
mountainous sea.The men could see a small house against the sky.To the south，they could see a
lighthouse.Tide，wind and waves were pushing the lifeboat northward.The men thought someone on land
would have seen the boat by now.
The men waited and waited but nothing happened.
The waves grew stronger.They seemed always just about to break and roll over the little boat.The
coast was still far away.The sailor said："Boys，the boat won't live three minutes more，and we're too
far out to swim.Shall I take her to sea again，captain？"
"Yes!Go ahead!"said the captain.The sailor turned the boat and took her safely out to sea again.
"It's funny those life﹣saving people haven't seen us，"one of the men said.
"Maybe they think we're out here for sport!Maybe they think we're fishing.Maybe they think we're
fools."
The coast was still far away.The sun began to go down.It got dark and cold.Billie rowed，and then
Crane took his turn.They rowed and rowed through the long night.The land had disappeared but they
could hear the low sound of the waves hitting the shore.This was surely a quiet night.
A night on the sea in an open boat is a long night.The sailor continued to row until his head fell
forward and sleep overpowered him.Then he asked Crane to row for a while.They exchanged places so
the sailor could sleep in the bottom of the boat with the cook and the captain.
Crane thought that he was the one man afloat on all the oceans in the world.The wind had a sad
4voice as it came over the waves.
【注意】
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para.1 Suddenly，there was a long，loud swishing（嗖嗖声） sound behind the boat and a shining
trail of silvery blue.______
Para.2 When day came，the four men saw land again.______
7．（2024•武清区校级模拟）随着中国传统文化的复兴，汉服（Hanfu）作为一种独特的服饰文化，逐渐
受到人们的关注和喜爱。假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，你校正在向学生们征集新社团的创建意向。
作为汉服爱好者，你准备成立汉服社，请给校委会写一封邮件表达你的想法。内容包括：
（1）成立该社团的目的；
（2）社团拟开展的活动及原因。
参考词汇：校委会：School Committee
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。
8．（2024•商洛模拟）你校校报"校园天地"英语专栏向全校同学征稿。请你写一篇短文回顾过去一年的学
习，内容包括：
（1）自我认可；
（2）存在的问题；
（3）感受与期望。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）题目已为你写好。
9．（2024•南通四模）学校英文报正在开展以 How to manage after﹣school time 为题的讨论。请使用
图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）图表描述；
（2）简单评论；
（3）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How to manage after﹣school time
5______
10．（2024•河北模拟） In the busy city of Evercrest lived a young woman named Lily.She was a
recent transplant from a small town，chasing her dreams of becoming a successful graphic designer
（平面设计师）.With stars in her eyes and a heart full of hope，Lily had moved into a tiny
apartment in the city，ready to begin her new journey.
One chilly autumn evening，Lily got into an unexpected，tough situation.She had just left the local
library，her arms laden（装满的） with books on design theory and software guides，eager to dive into
her studies.As she walked towards the bus stop，her phone buzzed with a notification——her last email
informed her that the deadline for a crucial design competition had been brought forward
unexpectedly.Panic set in，she needed to submit her entry tonight.
With a growing sense of urgency，Lily quickened her pace，her heels clicking against the
pavement.But fate，it seemed，had other plans.Just as she turned the corner，one of her worn﹣out
shoes broke，leaving her walking awkwardly on one foot.The bus stop was still a good ten minutes
away，and there was no way she could make it in time like this.
Feeling a mix of frustration and despair，Lily leaned against a nearby lamppost，thinking about
what to do.It was then that a gentle voice interrupted her thoughts.
"Are you alright there，miss？"asked a tall，middle﹣aged man with kind eyes and a warm
smile.He was dressed casually，wearing a faded jacket and holding a leather bag.Lily looked up，
surprised by the stranger's concern."I…I'm okay，just my shoe broke，and I have to get home
urgently，" she explained，gesturing towards her useless footwear.
Without hesitation，the stranger introduced himself as Mr.Thompson."Please，let me help，" he
6offered，pulling out a small roll of tape from his bag."It won't be pretty，but it'll hold until you can
get a proper fix."Grateful for the unexpected assistance，Lily watched as Mr.Thompson skillfully repaired
her shoe.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
They chatted like friends while he worked.________
Putting on the shoe，she felt warm and inspired to join in the design competition.________
11．（2024•沧州模拟） 假定你是李华，你校英语报计划举办英语文化周系列活动，现向同学们征集
活动内容。请你给英语报的负责人Mr.Smith写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）提出建议；
（2）说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
12．（2024•河南模拟）假定你是李华，在某网站看到一则英语启事：外国中学生 Lily想找一位中国学生
帮她学习汉语，同时帮对方学习英语，请给她写一封邮件。
要点如下：
（1）说明自己能力，表达合作意向；
（2）询问对方汉语水平、合作学习方式等情况。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
13．（2024•朝阳区校级模拟）联合国将2024年世界水日的主题设定为"以水促和平"。你校英文报社举办
了征文活动，请你写一篇短文进行投稿。
内容包括：
（1）你对该问题的认识；
（2）提倡日常节水的做法。
7注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Save Water，Save the World
This year sees the 32nd World Water Day with the theme "Water for Peace".
14．（2024•浦东新区三模）假如你是明启中学的吴磊，高考结束之后，你的学校组织校友活动，请即将
毕业的高三学生进班给高一高二的学弟学妹们传授经验，请结合自身经历写一篇发言稿。你的发言稿
须：
（1）描述你在高中三年最大的收获；
（2）就如何过好高中生活，给出你的建议。
15．（2024•香河县校级模拟）假定你是李华，在英语学习方面有不少困惑。请你给外教 Mr Brown写封
邮件寻求帮助。内容包括：
（1）简述主要问题；
（2）请求给出建议；
（3）表示感谢。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Brown
____
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
16．（2024•宝山区二模） Before you head out to a run event where there will be many people，
you should be aware of the dangers of a crowd crush.
Though the risk of crowd crush is rare，it can be deadly when it happens.Crowd crush occurs
when many people are packed together and begin to fall over one another.In the past，such instances
have caused horrible injury and even death.To avoid such a fate，it's best to escape the crush before it
happens.
Before attending a crowded event，look up a map of the venue.This will give you an idea of the
surroundings ﹣ pay special attention to any exits.Once you arrive，choosing the right spot can be
crucial.Avoid the middle or front；instead，pick the back or edges of a crowd.It's also important to trust
your feelings.Stay aware to see if you feel packed in at any point.The more crowded the event
becomes，the sooner you may need to retreat to a safe place.
8If you do end up in a crush，here's how you can stay safe.The most important thing you can do is
stay on your feet.To do this，spread your feet apart and bend your knees a little.Also make sure to
move with the flow of the crowd.Trying to move against a crowd of people will only end in disaster.
Helping others is another great way to keep everyone safe.Once one person falls down，more
people tend to fall over them.So if your neighbor in the crowd falls to the ground，help them up.
A common cause of death in a crowd crush isn't being crushed but rather losing air.It's best to hold
out your arms in front of your chest.This allows space between you and the person in front of you.It
also protects your chest and lungs from being crushed on the ground should you fall.
There is usually fun where the crowds are，so enjoy yourself.But remember to stay alert!
___________
17．（2024•邯郸模拟）假定你是李华，你班上周末组织了一次登山活动，你的英国笔友Darren想了解相
关情况。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）旅行前准备；
（2）活动开展情况。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Darren，
Last Sunday I went trekking on the nearby hills with my classmates.________
Yours truly，
Li Hua
18．（2024•宝鸡模拟）假定你是学校英语俱乐部的负责人李华。为了给俱乐部招募新成员，请你用英语
在学校广播上发布通知，内容包括：
（1）向同学们发出邀请；
（2）介绍英语俱乐部的主要活动；
（3）分享本人的收获。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello，everyone!I'm Li Hua，president of the English Club of our school.______
19．（2024•河南模拟）假定你是李华，得知你的交换生同学Amanda今年将第一次在中国过春节。请你
给她发一封电子邮件，邀请她到你家做客。
内容包括：
9（1）表示欢迎；
（2）发出邀请；
（3）期待回复。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amanda，
How are you doing？______
Yours，
Li Hua
20．（2024•贵阳模拟）近期在网上有很多关于外国人体验汉服、中国书法、中国功夫的视频。对于中国
文化在海外流行的这一现象，请用英语表达你的看法并分析其原因。
（1）你的看法；
（2）中国文化流行海外的原因。
注意：
（1）可以增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（2）词数80词左右；
（3）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I find this phenomenon amazing.
21．（2024•未央区校级模拟）你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上
留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
（1）音乐会特点；
（2）观看感受；
（3）意见建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.______
22．（2023•思明区校级二模）为庆祝创刊 50周年，你校英文报以"The Power of Reading"为题举办征文
活动。请你以此为题写一篇征文稿。内容包括：
（1）阅读的意义；
（2）介绍一本你喜欢的书；
（3）你喜欢的理由。
10注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Power of Reading
_______
23．（2023•山东一模）你打算给某英语刊物投稿，文章以"Protect wild animals"为题，要点如下：
（1）我国野生动物现状；
（2）野生动物数量变少的原因：过度砍伐致栖息地（habitat）减少、滥用农药、珍稀野生动物被杀等；
（3）提出倡议。
注意：（1）100 词左右；
（2）可以适当添加内容，以使行文流畅。
_________
24．（2023•中山区校级一模）目前新冠病毒肆虐，很多人感染了新冠病毒。假设你是高中生李明，现得
知你的美国笔友Jack最近对新冠病毒深感恐惧，他很焦虑不知如何应对。请你给他发一封email，指导
他做好个人防护。
具体内容包括：
（1）安慰
（2）具体建议（心理方面，日常防护⋯⋯）
提示：感染 be infected with
字数：80词左右。
Dear Jack，
_____
Yours sincerely，
LiMing
25．（2022•河南模拟）假定你是新华中学高三学生李华，在新闻报纸上看到某外资出版集团 Mr Smith
刊登的招募翻译志愿者的广告，你的任务是把出版物中的英语翻译成中文。请根据广告写一封邮件，
内容包括：
1.自我介绍；
2.写信原因；
3.申请的优势。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已写好，不计入总字数。
11Dear Mr Smith，
__________
122025年菁优高考英语解密之写作话题
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•厦门三模） Javon was the shortest kid in the class.It had been that way since the third
grade.He'd had to ask to get his gym locker changed so that he didn't have to struggle so much to
reach it.For most kids，being short would be a problem，but Javon didn't let being short bother him
at all.
That was Javon's attitude about most things except school work.And Javon had worked hard.By the
middle of seventh grade，Javon was one of the top kids in the class.So，he hadn't been too concerned
when Mr.T announced they were starting a new unit in math.For Javon，math used to be easy.He
figured that since he had ten fingers，he could do most of it.But when Mr.T threw letters into math
problems，he couldn't wrap his mind around using these letters.Mr.T had given them all sorts of rules
for what to do when there were letters in math problems.But Javon couldn't remember what they all
were and he didn't think he even understood the rules he did remember.Soon he was hopelessly lost in
math class.Even worse，it was time for the class to take the chapter test.
The test was quite demanding.Javon was confused by the very first question.He was nervous and
kept losing track of what he was doing.When the class period ended，he hadn't finished all of the
problems.
The day came when the class finally got their papers back.Seeing"D"written in red ink on the
corner of the paper，he felt desperate.In the seat next to him，Tyler sighed slightly，catching Javon's
attention.He couldn't help but see the big，red"C"on Tyler's paper.He felt so upset.
When they started packing up to leave after class，Tyler accidentally told Javon he got extra time
on the test.Upon hearing this，Javon burst out，"It was unfair!"He dropped his books，face hot.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At this very moment，Mr.T came up to see what happened to them._____
Eventually，Javon understood what a reading disorder was and how to ask for help._____
【考点】生活感悟；记叙文；读后续写．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】At this very moment，Mr.T came up to see what happened to them.Javon，still feeling
13frustrated，complained loudly about the unfairness of Tyler getting extra time on the test.Tyler looked
embarrassed and ducked his head，remaining silent.Mr.T，maintaining his calmness，explained with
patience that Tyler had a reading disorder and found it challenging to complete the test within the
given time."Sometimes，we all need a lttle extra help.And it's okay to ask for it."Mr.T smiled and
gently patted Javon on the shoulder.
Eventually，Javon understood what a reading disorder was and how to ask for help.He felt guilty for
his outburst and apologized to both Mr.T and Tyler.Reflecting on his own struggles with math，Javon
realized that everyone has their own unique challenges.He decided to seek assistance from Mr.T after
class，who patiently guided him through the rules and concepts he had been struggling with.With
consistent effort and determination，Javon gradually improved his math skills，just as he had
overcome other obstacles in his life.
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章主要介绍了Javon是一名矮个子学生，但是他不为之难过。但是数学课
上加了一些新的元素，让Javon感到吃力。数学考试中Javon考了D，同桌Tyler考了C，而且Javon得
知Tyler有多余的时间考试，这让Javon感到不公平。
高分句型一：Tyler looked embarrassed and ducked his head，remaining silent.
译文：泰勒看起来很尴尬，低下头，保持沉默。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语remaining silent作状语。
高分句型二：He decided to seek assistance from Mr.T after class，who patiently guided him through
the rules and concepts he had been struggling with.
译文：他决定在课后寻求T先生的帮助，T先生耐心地指导他学习他一直在努力学习的规则和概念。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】At this very moment，Mr.T came up to see what happened to them.Javon，still feeling
frustrated，complained loudly about the unfairness of Tyler getting extra time on the test.Tyler looked
embarrassed and ducked his head，remaining silent.【高分句型一】Mr.T，maintaining his calmness，
explained with patience that Tyler had a reading disorder and found it challenging to complete the
test within the given time."Sometimes，we all need a lttle extra help.And it's okay to ask for it."Mr.T
smiled and gently patted Javon on the shoulder.（T先生保持冷静，耐心地解释说Tyler患有阅读障碍，
并发现在规定时间内完成测试很有挑战性。）
Eventually，Javon understood what a reading disorder was and how to ask for help.He felt guilty for
his outburst and apologized to both Mr.T and Tyler.Reflecting on his own struggles with math，Javon
realized that everyone has their own unique challenges.He decided to seek assistance from Mr.T after
class，who patiently guided him through the rules and concepts he had been struggling with.With
14consistent effort and determination，Javon gradually improved his math skills，just as he had
overcome other obstacles in his life.（Javen向T先生和Tyler道歉。在课后寻求T先生的帮助，在持
续的努力和决心下，贾文逐渐提高了他的数学技能）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
2．（2024•贵溪市校级二模）
The Making of a Believer
It was Christmas Eve morning，and I awoke with a purpose：to find my lost cat，Baby﹣Girl.As I
got ready，I could hear icy rain beating against the window.Baby﹣Girl was out there somewhere in the
storm；I could just feel her.Sure，it had been six months since she went missing，but I still had
faith.This was the season for miracles（奇迹），after all.
Earlier this summer，my sweet pet disappeared from my parents' house in Indiana.Baby﹣Girl had
been staying with them while I was between apartments.At the time ， I lived and worked in
Washington，D.C.I was staying with friends until I signed my lease（租约）on a new place.Baby﹣Girl
had gotten out of my parents' house three days before I was set to fly back home to pick her up.
My dad and I had spent that entire visit searching for her.Dad was the family's resident "realist，"
which meant he spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst. "She's either been hit by
a car or been taken in by someone who found her，" he said.However，I believed I'd see Baby﹣Girl
again.Even after I returned to D.C.without her and the weeks stretched into months，deep down I
had.this undeniable feeling that we would be reunited one day.
Now，home again in Indiana for the holidays，I was determined to pick up my search right where
15I' d left off.I grabbed Baby﹣Girl's cat carrier，loaded it into the car，and then asked my dad to drive
me to the shelter.
"Sharon，you have to be realistic，" Dad said as we headed to the garage（车库）."She's been
gone too long.You' re not going to find her."
"Well，I disagree.Don' t you believe in miracles？" I asked.
Dad said nothing more but climbed into the driver's seat.At the shelter，a woman at the front desk
greeted my dad warmly."Good to see you again，Mr.Dillon!Still looking for your cat？" Ah，I
thought，maybe he's not such a pessimist after all.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We were led to the room where the abandoned cats lived.
Shortly after，my shocked Dad drove us back home.
【考点】生活感悟；记叙文；读后续写．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】 We were led to the room where the abandoned cat lived.I tiptoed into the room with a
strong feeling of anticipation.Out of nowhere，I heard a familiar meow，which absorbed my prompt
attention suddenly.My eyes zeroed in on a little cat caged in the corner.She was skinnier than I
remember，but it was my Baby﹣Girl all right!Overwhelmed with extreme excitement and delight，I
opened the cage door.Baby﹣Girl practically jumped into my arms.I held her close，with my eye
swelling up tears，as my Dad looked on，his jaw dropping wide with shock.
Shortly after，my shocked Dad drove us back home.The instant we dropped Baby﹣Girl off，freeing
her from the carrier，she immediately dashed to the hearth，seeking her favourite spot.On seeing this
scene，we all roared with laughter，signaling that my Dad's doubts were removed as well.Against all
odds，my cat was home again，right before Christmas.It was such a miracle that my heart was filled
with gratitude，feeling blessed with Baby﹣Girl's long﹣awaited companion.As for my dear father who
always support me，it turned out that Baby﹣Girl's return made him a man of a believer.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者寻找失踪猫咪Baby﹣Girl的经历。在圣诞节前夜，作者
醒来时决心要找到失踪的猫咪，相信它仍在暴风雨中的某个地方。虽然已经过去了几周，但作者仍然
有信心。在之前的探访中，作者和父亲一起寻找Baby﹣Girl。但父亲是一个"现实主义者"，他试图让
作者为最坏的情况做好准备。作者深信，如果有任何一只猫咪能够完成不可能的任务，那就是她的
Baby﹣Girl。尽管作者未能在动物收容所中找到她，但她仍然相信她们将有一天能与所爱的宠物重聚。
16高分句型一：Out of nowhere，I heard a familiar meow，which absorbed my prompt attention
suddenly.
翻译：不知从哪里，我听到一声熟悉的猫叫，突然引起了我的注意。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Overwhelmed with extreme excitement and delight，I opened the cage door.
翻译：我激动万分，打开了笼子的门。
分析：本句使用了过去分词短语Overwhelmed with extreme excitement and delight作状语。
【解答】 We were led to the room where the abandoned cat lived.I tiptoed into the room with a
strong feeling of anticipation.Out of nowhere，I heard a familiar meow，which absorbed my prompt
attention suddenly.【高分句型一】My eyes zeroed in on a little cat caged in the corner.She was
skinnier than I remember，but it was my Baby﹣Girl all right!Overwhelmed with extreme excitement
and delight，I opened the cage door.【高分句型二】Baby﹣Girl practically jumped into my arms.I
held her close，with my eye swelling up tears，as my Dad looked on，his jaw dropping wide with
shock.（作者进入一所房子，听到了熟悉的猫叫声，找到了她的Baby﹣Girl）
Shortly after，my shocked Dad drove us back home.The instant we dropped Baby﹣Girl off，freeing
her from the carrier，she immediately dashed to the hearth，seeking her favourite spot.On seeing this
scene，we all roared with laughter，signaling that my Dad's doubts were removed as well.Against all
odds，my cat was home again，right before Christmas.It was such a miracle that my heart was filled
with gratitude，feeling blessed with Baby﹣Girl's long﹣awaited companion.As for my dear father who
always support me，it turned out that Baby﹣Girl's return made him a man of a believer.（作者和父亲
一起把猫咪带回家，猫咪非常开心，作者心中充满感激）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
173．（2024•德阳模拟）你校"英语园地"向全体高三学生征集优秀作文，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇题
为My Unforgettable Senior High School Life的文章投稿。内容如下：
（1）你的高中生活；
（2）你的期望与祝福。
注意：
（1）词数100词左右，标题已给出，不计入总数。
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Unforgettable Senior High School Life
________
【考点】环境保护；学习生活；其他应用文写作．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
My Unforgettable Senior High School Life
When I look back to my senior high school life，I am impressed with memorable moments，such
as interesting classes，attractive sports events and heated debates with my classmates.I am really grateful
for those bits of life as they shape my character and build who I am today.
Looking forward ， I will embrace new challenges ， expand my knowledge ， and pursue my
passions.Meanwhile，I'd like to extend my warmest wishes to my schoolmates.I sincerely hope they seize
every possible opportunity to create a bright future.
Furthermore，I will express my heartfelt gratitude to all my teachers who accompany me and
witness my personal growth.May all my classmates and teachers have a prosperous and fruitful future!
【分析】高分句型一：When I look back to my senior high school life，I am impressed with
memorable moments，such as interesting classes，attractive sports events and heated debates with my
classmates.
翻译：当我回顾我的高中生活，我印象深刻的难忘的时刻，如有趣的课程，有吸引力的体育赛事和激
烈的辩论与我的同学。
分析：本句运用了when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Furthermore，I will express my heartfelt gratitude to all my teachers who accompany
me and witness my personal growth.
翻译：此外，我还要感谢所有陪伴我、见证我个人成长的老师们。
分析：本句运用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
My Unforgettable Senior High School Life
18When I look back to my senior high school life，I am impressed with memorable moments，such
as interesting classes，attractive sports events and heated debates with my classmates.【高分句型一】I
am really grateful for those bits of life as they shape my character and build who I am today.（自己的
高中生活）
Looking forward ， I will embrace new challenges ， expand my knowledge ， and pursue my
passions.Meanwhile，I'd like to extend my warmest wishes to my schoolmates.I sincerely hope they seize
every possible opportunity to create a bright future.（期望与祝福）
Furthermore，I will express my heartfelt gratitude to all my teachers who accompany me and
witness my personal growth.【高分句型二】May all my classmates and teachers have a prosperous and
fruitful future!（表达感谢）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
4．（2024•鄄城县校级一模） One night，sitting on the cold steps at the back of my apartment in
Kansas，I'd been staring out into the darkness.The only light came from my cigarette.Rain soaked
（浸湿） through my pants，but I didn't care.Back in my room，there was a knife on the bedside
table and a note on my computer screen.I hoped that whoever read it first would understand why I
had the plan to end it all.
Six months before that night，a car accident caused a brain injury in me.I lost my job and had to
live on my savings in my lonely apartment.Since then，I had been suffering from depression and
struggling to get through each day.
I sat there on those cold steps just wanting to end it all. "Tonight.I will，" I thought as I took
another drag of my cigarette.
"Meow？"
I looked up.A black and white cat with round green eyes looked back at me.He meowed
again.Then，walking out from his hiding spot，he jumped at me.He was tiny and damp，but he rubbed
up against my legs.When I reached down to pet him，he leaned into my touch，purring （发出呼噜
声）.
That was all it took.I cried.The cat just watched me.I didn't scare him away.In fact，he stood there
as if he knew how desperately I needed a companion right at that very moment.
I looked into his big green eyes and he looked back.Clearly a stray （流浪的） cat. "When was
19the last time you ate？" I said.My plan to end it all was put on hold，at least until I found this cat
some food.
It became a routine：Every day，I'd go to the back steps with some cat food.Usually，the cat，
whom I named Scout，was already waiting for me.He became more than something to live for.Over
time he inspired me to get help for my depression and even gave me the confidence to get into a
serious relationship with Becky in Pittsburgh，whom I had known for years.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Scout became my constant companion.
I was far from the lonely and depressed man that Scout had first approached in the rain，but I still
needed to make a few more changes.
【考点】生活感悟；记叙文；读后续写．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】 Scout became my constant companion.His presence，a warm reminder of the unexpected
joys life could bring，filled the once empty corners of my apartment and my heart.We'd curl up
together，his gentle purrs harmonizing with my newfound peace.I documented our journey on a
blog，which unexpectedly garnered a community of supporters who shared their own tales of healing
through pets.Inspired，I began volunteering at a local animal shelter，dedicating my weekends to
giving back the love Scout had so generously bestowed upon me.
I was far from the lonely and depressed man that Scout had first approached in the rain，but I still
needed to make a few more changes.No longer the lonely soul Scout met，I embarked on deeper
healing：therapy to confront past traumas and mend relationships，including sharing my journey with
Becky，whose support fortified me.My home transformed into a warm haven of joy and laughter，
enriched by Scout.Restarting my career，I pursued work that let me give back，turning life into a
hopeful canvas.Scout，the stray who trusted a stranger in the rain，inadvertently saved us both.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开。一次车祸使作者失业、抑郁，计划终结生命。雨夜中，一只有着绿
色眼睛的流浪猫Scout出现，它的依偎打断了作者的绝望。之后的日子，作者为它提供食物，它成了
作者生存的意义，激励作者面对抑郁，甚至给了作者信心，让作者和匹兹堡的贝基开始了一段认真的
关系。
高分句型一：I documented our journey on a blog，which unexpectedly garnered a community of
20supporters who shared their own tales of healing through pets.
翻译：我在一个博客上记录了我们的旅程，出乎意料地吸引了一群支持者，他们分享了自己通过宠物
治愈疾病的故事。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及who引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Scout，the stray who trusted a stranger in the rain，inadvertently saved us both.
翻译：Scout，那个在雨中信任陌生人的流浪者，无意中救了我们两个。
分析：本句使用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】 Scout became my constant companion.His presence，a warm reminder of the unexpected
joys life could bring，filled the once empty corners of my apartment and my heart.We'd curl up
together，his gentle purrs harmonizing with my newfound peace.I documented our journey on a
blog，which unexpectedly garnered a community of supporters who shared their own tales of healing
through pets.【高分句型一】Inspired，I began volunteering at a local animal shelter，dedicating my
weekends to giving back the love Scout had so generously bestowed upon me.（Scout对于作者的陪
伴和激励）
I was far from the lonely and depressed man that Scout had first approached in the rain，but I still
needed to make a few more changes.No longer the lonely soul Scout met，I embarked on deeper
healing：therapy to confront past traumas and mend relationships，including sharing my journey with
Becky，whose support fortified me.My home transformed into a warm haven of joy and laughter，
enriched by Scout.Restarting my career，I pursued work that let me give back，turning life into a
hopeful canvas.Scout，the stray who trusted a stranger in the rain，inadvertently saved us both.【高分句
型二】（作者的改变）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
215．（2024•鹤城区校级一模）假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了一场以"强体魄，健身心"为主题的体育文
化节活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
（1）活动主题和内容；
（2）活动反响。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
School Sports and Culture Festival Draws Excitement
______
【考点】文娱与体育；报道；提纲作文．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
School Sports and Culture Festival Draws Excitement
Last Sunday witnessed a burst of excitement as the annual school sports and culture festival with
the theme of "Fostering Physical and Mental Well﹣being" took center stage.Students engaged in friendly
yet competitive matches in basketball，soccer，and track events.Additionally，cultural presentations which
included dance，theater，and art exhibitions highlighted students' creativity.
The festival was met with cheers and applause from enthusiastic supporters，bringing students
together in a display of school spirit.This event not only promoted fitness and the arts but also created a
joyful atmosphere that resonated with everyone involved.
【分析】高分句型一：Additionally，cultural presentations which included dance，theater，and art
exhibitions highlighted students' creativity.
翻译：此外，还有舞蹈、戏剧和艺术展览等文化表演，突出了学生们的创造力。
分析：本句运用了which引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：This event not only promoted fitness and the arts but also created a joyful atmosphere
that resonated with everyone involved.
翻译：这次活动不仅促进了健身和艺术，还创造了一个快乐的氛围，让每个人都产生了共鸣。
分析：本句运用了"not only...but also...不但……而且……"连接对等成分以及that引导的限制性定语从
句。
【解答】
School Sports and Culture Festival Draws Excitement
Last Sunday witnessed a burst of excitement as the annual school sports and culture festival with
the theme of "Fostering Physical and Mental Well﹣being" took center stage.Students engaged in friendly
22yet competitive matches in basketball，soccer，and track events.Additionally，cultural presentations which
included dance，theater，and art exhibitions highlighted students' creativity.【高分句型一】（活动主题和
内容）
The festival was met with cheers and applause from enthusiastic supporters，bringing students
together in a display of school spirit.This event not only promoted fitness and the arts but also created a
joyful atmosphere that resonated with everyone involved.【高分句型二】（活动反响）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
6．（2024•上饶二模） Crane climbed into the last remaining lifeboat.Three men got into the boat
with him.They were the ship's captain，the cook and a sailor named Billie.For three days，the men
steered the small boat through high waves along the coast of Florida.At last，they saw land.
A long stretch of coast lay before the eyes of the men.Slowly，the land rose up out of the
mountainous sea.The men could see a small house against the sky.To the south，they could see a
lighthouse.Tide，wind and waves were pushing the lifeboat northward.The men thought someone on land
would have seen the boat by now.
The men waited and waited but nothing happened.
The waves grew stronger.They seemed always just about to break and roll over the little boat.The
coast was still far away.The sailor said："Boys，the boat won't live three minutes more，and we're too
far out to swim.Shall I take her to sea again，captain？"
"Yes!Go ahead!"said the captain.The sailor turned the boat and took her safely out to sea again.
"It's funny those life﹣saving people haven't seen us，"one of the men said.
"Maybe they think we're out here for sport!Maybe they think we're fishing.Maybe they think we're
fools."
The coast was still far away.The sun began to go down.It got dark and cold.Billie rowed，and then
Crane took his turn.They rowed and rowed through the long night.The land had disappeared but they
could hear the low sound of the waves hitting the shore.This was surely a quiet night.
A night on the sea in an open boat is a long night.The sailor continued to row until his head fell
forward and sleep overpowered him.Then he asked Crane to row for a while.They exchanged places so
the sailor could sleep in the bottom of the boat with the cook and the captain.
Crane thought that he was the one man afloat on all the oceans in the world.The wind had a sad
23voice as it came over the waves.
【注意】
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para.1 Suddenly，there was a long，loud swishing（嗖嗖声） sound behind the boat and a shining
trail of silvery blue.______
Para.2 When day came，the four men saw land again.______
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【答案】 Suddenly，there was a long，loud swishing sound behind the boat and a shining trail
of silvery blue.It was a plane flying overhead，trailing a long line of bright light into the sky.As the
plane flew closer，the men could see a rescue boat being towed by it.Their hearts leaped with joy as
they realized that help had finally arrived.The plane flew over the lifeboat several times，signaling for
the men to prepare for rescue.Soon，the rescue boat reached them and the four weary survivors were
safely pulled on board.
When day came，the four men saw land again.The sun rose slowly over the horizon，bathing the
coastline in a warm golden light.They could see the outline of the small house and the lighthouse in the
distance，which had guided them through the dark night.The captain steered the boat towards the
shore，and soon they were able to disembark on the safe ground.They felt a sense of relief and
gratitude as they stepped onto solid land once again，knowing that they had survived the ordeal of
being lost at sea.
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，主要讲述了四名幸存者（Crane、船长、厨师和名叫Billie的船员）在海
上漂流三天后，终于看到陆地。他们等待救援无果，决定再次出海。夜里，他们持续划船，直到一个
飞机和救援船出现。最终，他们被安全救起，踏上了陆地。
高分句型一：It was a plane flying overhead，trailing a long line of bright light into the sky.
翻译：那是一架从头顶飞过的飞机，拖着一长串明亮的光线飞向天空。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语trailing a long line of bright light into the sky作状语。
高分句型二：They felt a sense of relief and gratitude as they stepped onto solid land once again，
knowing that they had survived the ordeal of being lost at sea.
翻译：当他们再次踏上坚实的陆地时，他们感到如释重负和感激，因为他们知道自己在海上迷路的磨
难中幸存了下来。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语knowing that they had survived the ordeal of being lost at sea作状
24语以及that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 Suddenly，there was a long，loud swishing sound behind the boat and a shining trail
of silvery blue.It was a plane flying overhead，trailing a long line of bright light into the sky. 【高
分句型一】As the plane flew closer，the men could see a rescue boat being towed by it.Their hearts
leaped with joy as they realized that help had finally arrived.The plane flew over the lifeboat several
times，signaling for the men to prepare for rescue.Soon，the rescue boat reached them and the four
weary survivors were safely pulled on board.（四名幸存者获救）
When day came，the four men saw land again.The sun rose slowly over the horizon，bathing the
coastline in a warm golden light.They could see the outline of the small house and the lighthouse in the
distance，which had guided them through the dark night.The captain steered the boat towards the
shore，and soon they were able to disembark on the safe ground.They felt a sense of relief and
gratitude as they stepped onto solid land once again，knowing that they had survived the ordeal of
being lost at sea.【高分句型二】（四人终于踏上了陆地，如释重负）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思
路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意
句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
7．（2024•武清区校级模拟）随着中国传统文化的复兴，汉服（Hanfu）作为一种独特的服饰文化，逐渐
受到人们的关注和喜爱。假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，你校正在向学生们征集新社团的创建意向。
作为汉服爱好者，你准备成立汉服社，请给校委会写一封邮件表达你的想法。内容包括：
（1）成立该社团的目的；
（2）社团拟开展的活动及原因。
参考词汇：校委会：School Committee
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
25（2）可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。
【考点】传统文化；书信类；提纲作文．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear School Committee，
I hope this email finds you well.My name is Li Hua，a student at Mingqi High School，and I am
writing to propose the establishment of a Hanfu Club within our school community with the purpose
of the revival of Hanfu clothing.
The activities that the Hanfu Club plans to undertake are as follows.At first，we will organize
workshops to teach interested students about the history of Hanfu，its significance in Chinese
culture，and how to wear it correctly.These sessions will be interactive and informative，allowing
students to appreciate the beauty and elegance of Hanfu.Besides ， the club will host cultural
performances showcasing various aspects of traditional Chinese culture，with a focus on Hanfu.By
engaging in these activities，we believe that the Hanfu Club can contribute to fostering a greater
sense of cultural pride and identity among our student body.
Thank you for considering our proposal.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The activities that the Hanfu Club plans to undertake are as follows.
翻译：汉服俱乐部计划开展的活动如下。
分析：本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：These sessions will be interactive and informative，allowing students to appreciate the
beauty and elegance of Hanfu.
翻译：这些课程将是互动式的，内容丰富，让学生欣赏汉服的美丽和优雅。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语 allowing students to appreciate the beauty and elegance of Hanfu作
状语。
【解答】Dear School Committee，
I hope this email finds you well.My name is Li Hua，a student at Mingqi High School，and I am
writing to propose the establishment of a Hanfu Club within our school community with the purpose
of the revival of Hanfu clothing.（成立该社团的目的）
The activities that the Hanfu Club plans to undertake are as follows.【高分句型一】At first，we will
organize workshops to teach interested students about the history of Hanfu，its significance in
Chinese culture，and how to wear it correctly.These sessions will be interactive and informative，
26allowing students to appreciate the beauty and elegance of Hanfu.【高分句型二】Besides，the club
will host cultural performances showcasing various aspects of traditional Chinese culture，with a focus
on Hanfu.By engaging in these activities，we believe that the Hanfu Club can contribute to fostering
a greater sense of cultural pride and identity among our student body.（社团拟开展的活动及原因）
Thank you for considering our proposal.（感谢）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思
连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章
显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．（2024•商洛模拟）你校校报"校园天地"英语专栏向全校同学征稿。请你写一篇短文回顾过去一年的学
习，内容包括：
（1）自我认可；
（2）存在的问题；
（3）感受与期望。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）题目已为你写好。
【考点】语言学习；其他应用文写作；提纲作文．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
A Year of Growth and Learning
As the new semester begins，I reflect on the year behind with a sense of accomplishment.I've made
progress in my studies，particularly in math，where persistence paid off.This progress is a testament to
my hard work and determination.
However，I've faced challenges with procrastination，which sometimes led to last﹣minute cram
sessions.This issue highlighted the need for better time management.
Looking to the future，I hope to cultivate more effective study habits.My expectation for the new
semester is to maintain a balance between learning and personal happiness.I long to welcome the
upcoming year with a new sense of mission and optimism.
【分析】高分句型一：As the new semester begins，I reflect on the year behind with a sense of
accomplishment.
27翻译：新学期开始了，回顾过去的一年，我有一种成就感。
分析：本句运用了as引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：I've made progress in my studies，particularly in math，where persistence paid off.
翻译：我在学习上取得了进步，特别是在数学方面，坚持不懈是有回报的。
分析：本句运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
A Year of Growth and Learning
As the new semester begins，I reflect on the year behind with a sense of accomplishment.【高分句
型一】I've made progress in my studies，particularly in math，where persistence paid off.【高分句型
二】This progress is a testament to my hard work and determination.（自我认可）
However，I've faced challenges with procrastination，which sometimes led to last﹣minute cram
sessions.This issue highlighted the need for better time management.（存在的问题）
Looking to the future，I hope to cultivate more effective study habits.My expectation for the new
semester is to maintain a balance between learning and personal happiness.I long to welcome the
upcoming year with a new sense of mission and optimism.（感受与期望）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
9．（2024•南通四模）学校英文报正在开展以 How to manage after﹣school time 为题的讨论。请使用
图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）图表描述；
（2）简单评论；
（3）你的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How to manage after﹣school time
______
28【考点】课外活动；提纲作文；图表作文．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
How to manage after﹣school time
As the chart shows，the majority of the students tend to spend their after﹣school time playing
online games，while only a minority opt for a good rest，reading and engaging in sports.
The survey findings reflect a common phenomenon that many students tend to lean towards E﹣
games rather than academic or physically beneficial pursuits after school.This tendency may pose
challenges in terms of time management and personal growth.
As students，it's crucial to manage after﹣school time wisely and maintain a balanced lifestyle.I
strongly recommend them to explore activities that promote both mental and physical well﹣being to
enrich their extracurricular experiences and cultivate healthier habits.
【分析】高分句型一：The survey findings reflect a common phenomenon that many students tend to
lean towards E﹣games rather than academic or physically beneficial pursuits after school.
译文：调查结果反映了一个普遍现象，即许多学生在放学后倾向于电子游戏，而不是学业或身体有益
的追求。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的同位语从句。
高分句型二：I strongly recommend them to explore activities that promote both mental and physical
well﹣being to enrich their extracurricular experiences and cultivate healthier habits.
译文：我强烈建议他们探索促进身心健康的活动，丰富他们的课外体验，培养更健康的习惯。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
29【解答】
How to manage after﹣school time
As the chart shows，the majority of the students tend to spend their after﹣school time playing
online games，while only a minority opt for a good rest，reading and engaging in sports. （图表描述）
The survey findings reflect a common phenomenon that many students tend to lean towards E﹣
games rather than academic or physically beneficial pursuits after school. 【高分句型一】This tendency
may pose challenges in terms of time management and personal growth. （简单评论）
As students，it's crucial to manage after﹣school time wisely and maintain a balanced lifestyle.I
strongly recommend them to explore activities that promote both mental and physical well﹣being to
enrich their extracurricular experiences and cultivate healthier habits.【高分句型二】（你的建议）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要
太多也不要太少。
图表作文是一种较为综合的写作形式，主要考查考生对于数据、表格等图形的理解和分析能力，以及
将这些信息转化为文字描述的能力。在英语写作中，图表作文通常涉及一些数据的比较、趋势分析等
内容，要求考生根据题目所给的图表或图形，以篇章的形式对数据进行描述、分析和比较。在各类英
语考试中，图表作文是常考的作文题型之一，主要考查学生的语言表达能力、数据分析和对比能力。
10．（2024•河北模拟） In the busy city of Evercrest lived a young woman named Lily.She was a
recent transplant from a small town，chasing her dreams of becoming a successful graphic designer
（平面设计师）.With stars in her eyes and a heart full of hope，Lily had moved into a tiny
apartment in the city，ready to begin her new journey.
One chilly autumn evening，Lily got into an unexpected，tough situation.She had just left the local
library，her arms laden（装满的） with books on design theory and software guides，eager to dive into
her studies.As she walked towards the bus stop，her phone buzzed with a notification——her last email
informed her that the deadline for a crucial design competition had been brought forward
unexpectedly.Panic set in，she needed to submit her entry tonight.
With a growing sense of urgency，Lily quickened her pace，her heels clicking against the
pavement.But fate，it seemed，had other plans.Just as she turned the corner，one of her worn﹣out
shoes broke，leaving her walking awkwardly on one foot.The bus stop was still a good ten minutes
away，and there was no way she could make it in time like this.
Feeling a mix of frustration and despair，Lily leaned against a nearby lamppost，thinking about
30what to do.It was then that a gentle voice interrupted her thoughts.
"Are you alright there，miss？"asked a tall，middle﹣aged man with kind eyes and a warm
smile.He was dressed casually，wearing a faded jacket and holding a leather bag.Lily looked up，
surprised by the stranger's concern."I…I'm okay，just my shoe broke，and I have to get home
urgently，" she explained，gesturing towards her useless footwear.
Without hesitation，the stranger introduced himself as Mr.Thompson."Please，let me help，" he
offered，pulling out a small roll of tape from his bag."It won't be pretty，but it'll hold until you can
get a proper fix."Grateful for the unexpected assistance，Lily watched as Mr.Thompson skillfully repaired
her shoe.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
They chatted like friends while he worked.________
Putting on the shoe，she felt warm and inspired to join in the design competition.________
【考点】生活感悟；记叙文；读后续写．
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【答案】 They chatted like friends while he worked.Mr.Thompson shared that he was once a
successful manager，but a series of unfortunate events led to his loss of bob.After that，he went
through many difficulties.Despite facing numerous challenges and setbacks，he never lost hope and
remained optimistic about the future.He believed that everything was an opportunity for growth and
learning，no matter what we experienced. "Finished，" he said，giving it back to Lily.
Putting on the shoe，she felt warm and inspired to join in the design competition.Once Lily arrived
home，she immediately began working on her design，drawing in pi ration from Mr.Thompson's
optimism and determination.Throughout the process，she poured her heart and soul into work，struggling
for perfection.In the end，she finished the design and submitted her entry.She sighed and dropped into a
nearby chair，thinking that she would have missed the chance without Mr.Thompson's help.With his
words echoing in her mind，she knew she would brave anything in her life.
【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了莉莉是一名设计师，某天她急着回家的时候鞋跟断了，一位名叫汤普
森先生的男士提出了帮助，最后莉莉及时回家完成了设计。
高分句型一：He believed that everything was an opportunity for growth and learning，no matter
what we experienced.
译文：他相信，无论我们经历了什么，一切都是成长和学习的机会。
31分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句，no matter what引导的让步状语从句。
高分句型二：With his words echoing in her mind，she knew she would brave anything in her life.
译文：他的话在她的脑海中回响，她知道她一生中会勇敢面对任何事情。
分析：这句话使用了 with 复合结构，knew后面是省略了连接词 that的宾语从句 she would brave
anything in her life。
【解答】 They chatted like friends while he worked.Mr.Thompson shared that he was once a
successful manager，but a series of unfortunate events led to his loss of bob.After that，he went
through many difficulties.Despite facing numerous challenges and setbacks，he never lost hope and
remained optimistic about the future.He believed that everything was an opportunity for growth and
learning，no matter what we experienced.【高分句型一】 "Finished，" he said，giving it back to
Lily.（两人对话的内容以及感悟）
Putting on the shoe，she felt warm and inspired to join in the design competition.Once Lily arrived
home，she immediately began working on her design，drawing in pi ration from Mr.Thompson's
optimism and determination.Throughout the process，she poured her heart and soul into work，struggling
for perfection.In the end，she finished the design and submitted her entry.She sighed and dropped into a
nearby chair，thinking that she would have missed the chance without Mr.Thompson's help.With his
words echoing in her mind，she knew she would brave anything in her life.【高分句型二】（莉莉完成
设计以及感悟）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索
还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。
续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的
思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注
意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
11．（2024•沧州模拟） 假定你是李华，你校英语报计划举办英语文化周系列活动，现向同学们征集
32活动内容。请你给英语报的负责人Mr.Smith写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）提出建议；
（2）说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】语言学习；书信类；提纲作文．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua.Learning that the English Culture Week is going to be held，I'm writing to propose
ideas for it.
Firstly，a Multicultural Day could be organized where students present English﹣speaking countries'
cultures.This will promote cross﹣cultural understanding.In addition，to enhance critical thinking and
spoken English，an English Debate Contest could be organized.Moreover，consider an English Movie
Night，screening classic English films followed by discussions，which will surely stimulate interest and
deepen our grasp of the language.
These activities are engaging and inclusive，suitable for diverse interests while promoting English
culture and language learning effectively.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Learning that the English Culture Week is going to be held，I'm writing to
propose ideas for it.
译文：得知英国文化周即将举行，我写信向大家提出一些想法。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语Learning that the English Culture Week is going to be held作状语，
that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Moreover，consider an English Movie Night，screening classic English films followed
by discussions，which will surely stimulate interest and deepen our grasp of the language.
译文：此外，考虑一个英语电影之夜，放映经典的英语电影，然后进行讨论，这肯定会激发我们的兴
33趣，加深我们对语言的理解。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua.Learning that the English Culture Week is going to be held，I'm writing to propose
ideas for it.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
Firstly，a Multicultural Day could be organized where students present English﹣speaking countries'
cultures.This will promote cross﹣cultural understanding.In addition，to enhance critical thinking and
spoken English，an English Debate Contest could be organized.Moreover，consider an English Movie
Night，screening classic English films followed by discussions，which will surely stimulate interest and
deepen our grasp of the language.【高分句型二】（提出建议）
These activities are engaging and inclusive，suitable for diverse interests while promoting English
culture and language learning effectively.（提出建议）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要
太多也不要太少。
12．（2024•河南模拟）假定你是李华，在某网站看到一则英语启事：外国中学生 Lily想找一位中国学生
帮她学习汉语，同时帮对方学习英语，请给她写一封邮件。
要点如下：
（1）说明自己能力，表达合作意向；
（2）询问对方汉语水平、合作学习方式等情况。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】语言学习；书信类；提纲作文．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Lily，
I came across your notice on a website and I would love to cooperate with you.
I'm a Chinese student who is also interested in language exchange.I am quite confident of my
Chinese level and I am sure that I can help you improve your Chinese skills.I am willing to learn
English from you as well.
34Can you tell me your Chinese proficiency and the best way for us to collaborate？Do you prefer
online communication，oral practice，or written practice？Any information that you can provide would
be helpful.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I am quite confident of my Chinese level and I am sure that I can help you
improve your Chinese skills.
翻译：我对我的中文水平很有信心，我相信我可以帮助你提高你的中文水平。
分析：本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Any information that you can provide would be helpful.
翻译：你能提供的任何信息都会很有帮助。
分析：本句运用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Lily，
I came across your notice on a website and I would love to cooperate with you.（写信目的）
I'm a Chinese student who is also interested in language exchange.I am quite confident of my
Chinese level and I am sure that I can help you improve your Chinese skills.【高分句型一】I am
willing to learn English from you as well.（自己的优点）
Can you tell me your Chinese proficiency and the best way for us to collaborate？Do you prefer
online communication，oral practice，or written practice？Any information that you can provide would
be helpful.【高分句型二】（询问对方的信息）
I look forward to hearing from you soon.（表达期盼）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
13．（2024•朝阳区校级模拟）联合国将2024年世界水日的主题设定为"以水促和平"。你校英文报社举办
了征文活动，请你写一篇短文进行投稿。
内容包括：
（1）你对该问题的认识；
（2）提倡日常节水的做法。
35注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Save Water，Save the World
This year sees the 32nd World Water Day with the theme "Water for Peace".
【考点】环境保护；提纲作文．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
Save Water，Save the World
This year sees the 32nd World Water Day with the theme "Water for Peace".It is universally
acknowledged that our world is faced with a severe lack of water resource.This clearly will lead to
crisis and even pose a threat to world peace.
Then what can we do in our everyday life？First，whenever we see a dripping tap，we ought to
fix the tap as soon as possible.Second，it is advisable to reuse water after a laundry for other household
purposes.Third，we can have a shower instead of a bath because a bath means far more water needed.
If we do not save water，the last drop of water will be a teardrop.
【分析】高分句型一：Third，we can have a shower instead of a bath because a bath means far
more water needed.
译文：第三，我们可以用淋浴代替洗澡，因为洗澡意味着需要更多的水。
分析：这句话使用了because引导的原因状语从句。
高分句型二：If we do not save water，the last drop of water will be a teardrop.
译文：如果我们不节约用水，最后一滴水将是一滴眼泪。
分析：这句话使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】
Save Water，Save the World
This year sees the 32nd World Water Day with the theme "Water for Peace".It is universally
acknowledged that our world is faced with a severe lack of water resource.This clearly will lead to
crisis and even pose a threat to world peace.（对该问题的认识）
Then what can we do in our everyday life？First，whenever we see a dripping tap，we ought to
fix the tap as soon as possible.Second，it is advisable to reuse water after a laundry for other household
purposes.Third，we can have a shower instead of a bath because a bath means far more water needed.
【高分句型一】（提倡日常节水的做法）
If we do not save water，the last drop of water will be a teardrop.【高分句型二】（呼吁）
36【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要
太多也不要太少。
14．（2024•浦东新区三模）假如你是明启中学的吴磊，高考结束之后，你的学校组织校友活动，请即将
毕业的高三学生进班给高一高二的学弟学妹们传授经验，请结合自身经历写一篇发言稿。你的发言稿
须：
（1）描述你在高中三年最大的收获；
（2）就如何过好高中生活，给出你的建议。
【考点】学习生活；演讲稿；提纲作文．
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear fellow students，
As a graduating senior，I am honored to share with you the most significant lessons I've learned
during my time here.
First and foremost，the greatest takeaway from my high school experience has been the importance
of perseverance and hard work.High school is not just about academics；it's also about personal growth
and development.
My advice to all of you is simple：embrace every opportunity and challenge that comes your
way.Step out of your comfort zone，join clubs，participate in extracurricular activities，and make new
friends.Moreover，never underestimate the power of time management and organization.Learn to prioritize
your tasks，set realistic goals，and manage your time effectively.Lastly，remember to take care of
yourself both mentally and physically.High school can be stressful，but it's essential to find healthy ways
to cope with the pressure.
In conclusion，high school is a journey filled with ups and downs，but it's also a time of
incredible growth and discovery.I wish you all the best in the high school journey and beyond.
Thank you.
【分析】高分句型一：My advice to all of you is simple：embrace every opportunity and challenge
that comes your way.
翻译：我对你们所有人的建议很简单：拥抱每一个机会和挑战。
分析：运用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：In conclusion，high school is a journey filled with ups and downs，but it's also a time
of incredible growth and discovery.
37翻译：总之，高中是一段充满跌宕起伏的旅程，但它也是一段令人难以置信的成长和发现的时期。
分析：运用了过去分词短语filled with ups and downs作后置定语。
【解答】Dear fellow students，
As a graduating senior，I am honored to share with you the most significant lessons I've learned
during my time here.
First and foremost，the greatest takeaway from my high school experience has been the importance
of perseverance and hard work.High school is not just about academics；it's also about personal growth
and development.（在高中三年最大的收获）
My advice to all of you is simple：embrace every opportunity and challenge that comes your way.
【高分句型一】Step out of your comfort zone，join clubs，participate in extracurricular activities，and
make new friends.Moreover，never underestimate the power of time management and organization.Learn
to prioritize your tasks，set realistic goals，and manage your time effectively.Lastly，remember to take
care of yourself both mentally and physically.High school can be stressful，but it's essential to find
healthy ways to cope with the pressure.（就如何过好高中生活，给出建议）
In conclusion，high school is a journey filled with ups and downs，but it's also a time of
incredible growth and discovery.【高分句型二】I wish you all the best in the high school journey and
beyond.
Thank you.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思
连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章
显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
15．（2024•香河县校级模拟）假定你是李华，在英语学习方面有不少困惑。请你给外教 Mr Brown写封
邮件寻求帮助。内容包括：
（1）简述主要问题；
（2）请求给出建议；
（3）表示感谢。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Brown
____
Yours sincerely，
38Li Hua
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【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mr Brown，
I'm writing to seek your guidance on some challenges I have been facing in my English study.
Firstly，I have trouble with grammar.I often get confused about the proper use of tenses.Secondly，
expanding my vocabulary is another challenge.I struggle to find the right words to express myself
accurately.Lastly，I feel that my speaking skills need improving.I find it difficult to speak English
fluently.
I'd appreciate it if you could give me some suggestions.Your guidance will undoubtedly contribute
significantly to my progress in English learning.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm writing to seek your guidance on some challenges I have been facing in
my English study.
分析：本句话运用了省略引导词that的定语从句 I have been facing in my English study。
翻译：我写信是为了寻求您对我在英语学习中遇到的一些挑战的指导。
高分句型二：Secondly，expanding my vocabulary is another challenge.
分析：本句话运用了动名词expanding my vocabulary作主语。
翻译：其次，扩大词汇量是另一个挑战。
【解答】Dear Mr Brown，
I'm writing to seek your guidance on some challenges I have been facing in my English study.【高
分句型一】（写信目的）
Firstly，I have trouble with grammar.I often get confused about the proper use of tenses.Secondly，
expanding my vocabulary is another challenge.【高分句型二】I struggle to find the right words to
express myself accurately.Lastly，I feel that my speaking skills need improving.I find it difficult to speak
English fluently.（英语学习方面的困惑）
I'd appreciate it if you could give me some suggestions.Your guidance will undoubtedly contribute
significantly to my progress in English learning.（请求给出建议并表示感谢）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思
连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章
39显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
16．（2024•宝山区二模） Before you head out to a run event where there will be many people，
you should be aware of the dangers of a crowd crush.
Though the risk of crowd crush is rare，it can be deadly when it happens.Crowd crush occurs
when many people are packed together and begin to fall over one another.In the past，such instances
have caused horrible injury and even death.To avoid such a fate，it's best to escape the crush before it
happens.
Before attending a crowded event，look up a map of the venue.This will give you an idea of the
surroundings ﹣ pay special attention to any exits.Once you arrive，choosing the right spot can be
crucial.Avoid the middle or front；instead，pick the back or edges of a crowd.It's also important to trust
your feelings.Stay aware to see if you feel packed in at any point.The more crowded the event
becomes，the sooner you may need to retreat to a safe place.
If you do end up in a crush，here's how you can stay safe.The most important thing you can do is
stay on your feet.To do this，spread your feet apart and bend your knees a little.Also make sure to
move with the flow of the crowd.Trying to move against a crowd of people will only end in disaster.
Helping others is another great way to keep everyone safe.Once one person falls down，more
people tend to fall over them.So if your neighbor in the crowd falls to the ground，help them up.
A common cause of death in a crowd crush isn't being crushed but rather losing air.It's best to hold
out your arms in front of your chest.This allows space between you and the person in front of you.It
also protects your chest and lungs from being crushed on the ground should you fall.
There is usually fun where the crowds are，so enjoy yourself.But remember to stay alert!
___________
【考点】校园文明与安全；说明文；概要写作．
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【答案】It's about how to keep safe in a crowd crush.Make a good preparation beforehand，
remembering exits in case of retreat.Once you are in a crowd，avoid falling down，move with the
crowd and help each other.Moreover，hold out your arms to breathe and protect your chest and
lungs.Anyway，be alert in such events.
【分析】这是一篇说明文，主要讲述了如何在拥挤的人群中保持安全。
高分句型一：Make a good preparation beforehand，remembering exits in case of retreat.
翻译：事先做好准备，记住撤退时的出口。
分析：本句运用了。
40高分句型二：Once you are in a crowd，avoid falling down，move with the crowd and help each
other.
翻译：一旦在人群中，避免摔倒，跟着人群移动，互相帮助。
分析：本句运用了once引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】It's about how to keep safe in a crowd crush.（这是关于如何在拥挤的人群中保持安全）
Make a good preparation beforehand，remembering exits in case of retreat.【高分句型一】（记住撤
退时的出口）Once you are in a crowd，avoid falling down，move with the crowd and help each
other.【高分句型二】（跟着人群移动，互相帮助）Moreover，hold out your arms to breathe and
protect your chest and lungs.（保护胸部和肺部）Anyway，be alert in such events.（保持警惕）
【点评】概要写作，简言之就是对所读过的文章简要概括，写出文章的中心大意，也可称之为摘要。
写概要时，读者要是把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章的原
句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章
的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准
确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把
握能力。因此，概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达，是二者的有机结合体，是阅读理解和书面表达
的沟通桥梁。
17．（2024•邯郸模拟）假定你是李华，你班上周末组织了一次登山活动，你的英国笔友Darren想了解相
关情况。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）旅行前准备；
（2）活动开展情况。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Darren，
Last Sunday I went trekking on the nearby hills with my classmates.________
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【考点】课外活动；书信类；提纲作文．
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【答案】Dear Darren，
Last Sunday I went trekking on the nearby hills with my classmates.Aiming to help us students keep
healthy，our school organized the mountain﹣climbing activity on August 1.We made full preparations
41for the activity.For instance，bring along some food，water and equip ourselves with a camera to
record the beautiful scenery.
At 8 am，we reached the foot of the Mountain，after which we began the journey with great
excitement.All the way we were chatting，singing and laughing，breathing the fresh air and enjoying
the beautiful scenery.At around 11 am，we reached the top.We jumped and shouted with joy in the
sunshine.
This activity really did good to us，through which we enjoyed nature to the fullest and were able to
develop our friendships too.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：At 8 am，we reached the foot of the Mountain，after which we began the
journey with great excitement.
翻译：早上8点，我们到达了山脚下，之后我们兴奋地开始了旅程。
分析：本句运用了"介词+which"引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：All the way we were chatting，singing and laughing，breathing the fresh air and
enjoying the beautiful scenery.
翻译：一路上我们聊天、唱歌、笑，呼吸着新鲜的空气，欣赏着美丽的风景。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语breathing the fresh air and enjoying the beautiful scenery作伴随状语。
【解答】Dear Darren，
Last Sunday I went trekking on the nearby hills with my classmates.Aiming to help us students keep
healthy，our school organized the mountain﹣climbing activity on August 1.We made full preparations
for the activity.For instance，bring along some food，water and equip ourselves with a camera to
record the beautiful scenery.（旅行前准备）
At 8 am，we reached the foot of the Mountain，after which we began the journey with great
excitement.【高分句型一】All the way we were chatting，singing and laughing，breathing the fresh
air and enjoying the beautiful scenery.【高分句型二】At around 11 am，we reached the top.We
jumped and shouted with joy in the sunshine.（活动开展情况）
This activity really did good to us，through which we enjoyed nature to the fullest and were able to
develop our friendships too.（收获）
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
42第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
18．（2024•宝鸡模拟）假定你是学校英语俱乐部的负责人李华。为了给俱乐部招募新成员，请你用英语
在学校广播上发布通知，内容包括：
（1）向同学们发出邀请；
（2）介绍英语俱乐部的主要活动；
（3）分享本人的收获。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello，everyone!I'm Li Hua，president of the English Club of our school.______
【考点】语言学习；通知类；提纲作文．
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【答案】Hello，everyone!I'm Li Hua，president of the English Club of our school.I'm here to invite
you to join us.It will be a good chance for the students who love English in our school.
The English Club in our school offers various interesting campus activities，including participating in
English speech contests，watching classic English movies，singing English songs and attending
inspiring lectures and so on.All of these will stimulate our much interest in learning English and
make our school life more enjoyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lot in the past two years.In the club，not only have I
improved my spoken English，but also made a lot of friends.
Now，it's your turn to make a good decision.We are looking forward to many new members in our
club!
【分析】高分句型一：It will be a good chance for the students who love English in our school.
译文：这对我们学校热爱英语的学生来说将是一个很好的机会。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：In the club，not only have I improved my spoken English，but also made a lot of
friends.
译文：在俱乐部里，我不仅提高了英语口语，还交了很多朋友。
分析：这句话使用了not only置于句首，后面接部分倒装。
【解答】Hello，everyone!I'm Li Hua，president of the English Club of our school.I'm here to invite
you to join us.It will be a good chance for the students who love English in our school.【高分句型
43一】（向同学们发出邀请）
The English Club in our school offers various interesting campus activities，including participating in
English speech contests，watching classic English movies，singing English songs and attending
inspiring lectures and so on.All of these will stimulate our much interest in learning English and
make our school life more enjoyable.（介绍英语俱乐部的主要活动）
The club activities have benefited me a lot in the past two years.In the club，not only have I
improved my spoken English，but also made a lot of friends.【高分句型二】（分享本人的收获）
Now，it's your turn to make a good decision.We are looking forward to many new members in our
club!（盼望）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要
太多也不要太少。
19．（2024•河南模拟）假定你是李华，得知你的交换生同学Amanda今年将第一次在中国过春节。请你
给她发一封电子邮件，邀请她到你家做客。
内容包括：
（1）表示欢迎；
（2）发出邀请；
（3）期待回复。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amanda，
How are you doing？______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】传统文化；书信类；提纲作文．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Amanda，
How are you doing？Knowing that you will spend the Spring Festival in China，I'd like to extend a
warm welcome to you.
As far as I know，you will celebrate the traditional Chinese festival here for the first time，which
may leave you slightly confused.Since where you live is not far from my home，it would be a great
44pleasure for me to have you as the distinguished guest of our family.If you come，I can introduce
various customs which are about the festival to you.
I'd be more than glad if you could accept my invitation.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：As far as I know，you will celebrate the traditional Chinese festival here for
the first time，which may leave you slightly confused.
翻译：据我所知，你们是第一次在这里过中国的传统节日，这可能会让你们有些困惑。
分析：本句运用了固定句型As far as I know和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：If you come，I can introduce various customs which are about the festival to you.
翻译：如果你来的话，我可以给你介绍有关春节的各种习俗。
分析：本句运用了if引导的条件状语从句和which引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Amanda，
How are you doing？Knowing that you will spend the Spring Festival in China，I'd like to extend a
warm welcome to you.（表示欢迎）
As far as I know，you will celebrate the traditional Chinese festival here for the first time，which
may leave you slightly confused.【高分句型一】Since where you live is not far from my home，it
would be a great pleasure for me to have you as the distinguished guest of our family.If you come，
I can introduce various customs which are about the festival to you.（发出邀请）
I'd be more than glad if you could accept my invitation.Looking forward to your early reply.【高分句
型二】（期待回复）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
20．（2024•贵阳模拟）近期在网上有很多关于外国人体验汉服、中国书法、中国功夫的视频。对于中国
文化在海外流行的这一现象，请用英语表达你的看法并分析其原因。
（1）你的看法；
（2）中国文化流行海外的原因。
注意：
（1）可以增加细节，以使行文连贯；
45（2）词数80词左右；
（3）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I find this phenomenon amazing.
【考点】传统文化；说明文；提纲作文．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】I find this phenomenon amazing.It shows the global appeal and influence of Chinese
culture.Hanfu，Chinese calligraphy and Kung Fu are typically traditional Chinese culture.Reasons for
their popularity abroad are as follows.
Firstly，globalization and the internet have made it easier for people from different countries to
explore and appreciate diverse cultures.Secondly，Chinese culture has a rich history and unique
charm，which can be quite attractive to foreign audiences.Lastly，the rise of social media platforms
enables individuals to share their experiences with a wider audience，further arousing the interest in
Chinese cultural practices.
【分析】高分句型一：Secondly，Chinese culture has a rich history and unique charm，which can be
quite attractive to foreign audiences.
翻译：其次，中国文化有着悠久的历史和独特的魅力，这对外国观众很有吸引力。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Lastly，the rise of social media platforms enables individuals to share their experiences
with a wider audience，further arousing the interest in Chinese cultural practices.
翻译：最后，社交媒体平台的兴起使个人能够与更广泛的受众分享他们的经历，进一步激发了对中国
文化习俗的兴趣。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语further arousing the interest in Chinese cultural practices作状语。
【解答】I find this phenomenon amazing.It shows the global appeal and influence of Chinese
culture.Hanfu，Chinese calligraphy and Kung Fu are typically traditional Chinese culture.Reasons for
their popularity abroad are as follows.（作者的看法）
Firstly，globalization and the internet have made it easier for people from different countries to
explore and appreciate diverse cultures.Secondly，Chinese culture has a rich history and unique
charm，which can be quite attractive to foreign audiences. 【高分句型一】Lastly，the rise of social
media platforms enables individuals to share their experiences with a wider audience，further arousing
the interest in Chinese cultural practices.【高分句型二】（中国文化流行海外的原因）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
46第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
21．（2024•未央区校级模拟）你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上
留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
（1）音乐会特点；
（2）观看感受；
（3）意见建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.______
【考点】课外活动；主题式．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality，which makes the concert
almost no different from a live one.
翻译：他们的表演无疑是高质量的，这使得演唱会与现场演唱会几乎没有区别。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and
girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song "Liang Zhu".
翻译：音乐会的每一秒我都很享受，特别是当来自英国的男孩和女孩开始唱中国传统歌曲"梁祝"时，
我被吸引住了。
分析：本句运用了when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】This online concert is absolutely fantastic.The performers from both schools did their best to
entertain the audience with song after song.Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality，which
makes the concert almost no different from a live one. 【高分句型一】（音乐会特点）I enjoyed
every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain
started to sing the traditional Chinese song "Liang Zhu". 【高分句型二】They performed the song in
a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection.（观看感受） I hope there will be
more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to learn about
and from each other.（作者的建议）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，
而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需
47要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连
贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级
词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
22．（2023•思明区校级二模）为庆祝创刊 50周年，你校英文报以"The Power of Reading"为题举办征文
活动。请你以此为题写一篇征文稿。内容包括：
（1）阅读的意义；
（2）介绍一本你喜欢的书；
（3）你喜欢的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Power of Reading
_______
【考点】文学诗歌．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
The Power of Reading
Reading is an essential part of our lives.It allows us to explore new worlds，gain knowledge，and
develop our imagination.Reading is not only a source of entertainment but also a means to expand
our minds and broaden our horizons.
One book that I particularly enjoy is "To Kill a Mockingbird" by Harper Lee.This classic novel set
in the 1930s American South tells the story of a young girl's coming of age and her father's battle
against racism and injustice.
I love this book because it is a timeless masterpiece that is still relevant today.It tackles important
themes such as racial inequality，social injustice，and moral courage.
【分析】高分句型一：One book that I particularly enjoy is "To Kill a Mockingbird" by Harper Lee.
翻译：我特别喜欢的一本书是哈珀•李的《杀死一只知更鸟》。
分析：运用了that引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：This classic novel set in the 1930s American South tells the story of a young girl's
coming of age and her father's battle against racism and injustice.
翻译：这部经典小说以20世纪30年代的美国南部为背景，讲述了一个年轻女孩长大成人的故事，以
及她父亲与种族主义和不公正的斗争。
48分析：运用了过去分词短语set in the 1930s American South作后置定语修饰novel。
【解答】
The Power of Reading
Reading is an essential part of our lives.It allows us to explore new worlds，gain knowledge，and
develop our imagination.Reading is not only a source of entertainment but also a means to expand
our minds and broaden our horizons.（阅读的意义）
One book that I particularly enjoy is "To Kill a Mockingbird" by Harper Lee.【高分句型一】This
classic novel set in the 1930s American South tells the story of a young girl's coming of age and
her father's battle against racism and injustice.【高分句型二】（介绍一本喜欢的书）
I love this book because it is a timeless masterpiece that is still relevant today.It tackles important
themes such as racial inequality，social injustice，and moral courage.（喜欢的理由）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思
连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章
显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
23．（2023•山东一模）你打算给某英语刊物投稿，文章以"Protect wild animals"为题，要点如下：
（1）我国野生动物现状；
（2）野生动物数量变少的原因：过度砍伐致栖息地（habitat）减少、滥用农药、珍稀野生动物被杀等；
（3）提出倡议。
注意：（1）100 词左右；
（2）可以适当添加内容，以使行文流畅。
_________
【考点】环境保护；主题式．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
Protect wild animals
In our country，the number of wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller.Some of them are even
dying out.Personally，the reasons are as follows：To start with，people have been cutting down trees
for building，causing some animals to lose their habitats.Besides，farmers use too much pesticide，
which endangers the lives of some animals.In addition，some people have been killing rare wild
animals to make money.
In my opinion，it's time we took immediate measures to change the situation.We should plant more
trees instead of cutting them down without permission.At the same time，more nature reserves are
49expected to be set up.
【分析】高分句型一：Besides，farmers use too much pesticide，which endangers the lives of some
animals.
译文：此外，农民使用过多的杀虫剂，这危及一些动物的生命。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：In my opinion，it's time we took immediate measures to change the situation.
译文：在我看来，是时候我们立即采取措施来改变这种局面了。
分析：这句话使用It's time+从句，意为"正是......的时候了"。
【解答】
Protect wild animals
In our country，the number of wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller.Some of them are even
dying out. （我国野生动物现状）Personally，the reasons are as follows：To start with，people have
been cutting down trees for building，causing some animals to lose their habitats.Besides，farmers
use too much pesticide，which endangers the lives of some animals. 【高分句型一】In addition，
some people have been killing rare wild animals to make money.（野生动物数量变少的原因）
In my opinion，it's time we took immediate measures to change the situation. 【高分句型二】We
should plant more trees instead of cutting them down without permission.At the same time，more
nature reserves are expected to be set up.（提出倡议）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思
连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章
显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
24．（2023•中山区校级一模）目前新冠病毒肆虐，很多人感染了新冠病毒。假设你是高中生李明，现得
知你的美国笔友Jack最近对新冠病毒深感恐惧，他很焦虑不知如何应对。请你给他发一封email，指导
他做好个人防护。
具体内容包括：
（1）安慰
（2）具体建议（心理方面，日常防护⋯⋯）
提示：感染 be infected with
字数：80词左右。
Dear Jack，
_____
Yours sincerely，
LiMing
50【考点】身心健康；书信类．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jack，
Thanks for your email.Recently，many people have been infected with Covid﹣19，causing great
panic.But you needn't be too concerned about it and I'd like to give you some practical suggestions，
which will surely help you a lot.
Firstly，what I want to stress most is that you should keep calm and positive.As we all know，
keeping a good mind state is the most important to defeat the virus.Secondly，better self﹣protection
is needed.For example，you'd better wear N95 masks，avoid gathering，wash hands more and prepare
some medicine in advance.In addition，eating more fruits and vegetables and drinking more water
can't be forgotten.Of course，proper amount of exercise is necessary to improve our immune system.
Do follow my advice，protect yourself wisely and everything will be ok.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
【分析】高分句型一：Firstly，what I want to stress most is that you should keep calm and positive.
译文：首先，我最想强调的是，你应该保持冷静和积极。
分析：这句话使用了what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句。
高分句型二：As we all know，keeping a good mind state is the most important to defeat the virus.
译文：众所周知，保持良好的精神状态是战胜病毒最重要的。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jack，
Thanks for your email.Recently，many people have been infected with Covid﹣19，causing great
panic.But you needn't be too concerned about it and I'd like to give you some practical suggestions，
which will surely help you a lot.（安慰）
Firstly，what I want to stress most is that you should keep calm and positive.【高分句型一】As we
all know，keeping a good mind state is the most important to defeat the virus.【高分句型二】
Secondly，better self﹣protection is needed.For example，you'd better wear N95 masks，avoid
gathering，wash hands more and prepare some medicine in advance.In addition，eating more fruits
and vegetables and drinking more water can't be forgotten.Of course，proper amount of exercise is
necessary to improve our immune system.（具体建议）
Do follow my advice，protect yourself wisely and everything will be ok.（表达信心）
51Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，
而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需
要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连
贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级
词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
25．（2022•河南模拟）假定你是新华中学高三学生李华，在新闻报纸上看到某外资出版集团 Mr Smith
刊登的招募翻译志愿者的广告，你的任务是把出版物中的英语翻译成中文。请根据广告写一封邮件，
内容包括：
1.自我介绍；
2.写信原因；
3.申请的优势。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已写好，不计入总字数。
Dear Mr Smith，
__________
【考点】招聘求职申请．
菁优网版权所有
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mr Smith，
I'm Li Hus，a Grade 3 student in Xinhua High School.I'd like to apply for the position as a
volunteer translator after reading your advertisement in a newspaper.I have studied English for five
years and have been working as a part﹣ time English tourist guide in the summer for four
years.What's more，I am skilled at Chinese and have some experience in translating English into
Chinese，so I think I am fit for your position.Furthermore，I can type quite well and use the
computer skillfully.
I want very much to be accepted.I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'd like to apply for the position as a volunteer translator after reading your
advertisement in a newspaper.
52译文：读完报纸上的广告后，我想申请志愿者翻译的职位。
分析：这句话使用了after doing sth"做完某事"，after后面接动名词。
高分句型二：What's more，I am skilled at Chinese and have some experience in translating English
into Chinese，so I think I am fit for your position.
译文：更重要的是，我精通汉语，并有一些将英语翻译成汉语的经验，所以我认为我适合你的职位。
分析：这句话使用了so引导的结果状语从句。
【解答】Dear Mr Smith，
I'm Li Hus，a Grade 3 student in Xinhua High School.（自我介绍）I'd like to apply for the position
as a volunteer translator after reading your advertisement in a newspaper.【高分句型一】（写信原
因）I have studied English for five years and have been working as a part﹣time English tourist
guide in the summer for four years.What's more，I am skilled at Chinese and have some experience
in translating English into Chinese，so I think I am fit for your position. 【高分句型二】
Furthermore，I can type quite well and use the computer skillfully.（申请的优势）
I want very much to be accepted.I'm looking forward to your early reply.（盼望）
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，
而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需
要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连
贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级
词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
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1．记叙文
【考点介绍】
记叙文是英语写作中常见的一种文体，主要通过叙述人物的经历、事件的发展和环境的描绘来表达情感
展示主题。在各类英语考试中，记叙文写作常常是作文部分的考查重点。
【典型例题】
观察下面的图片，根据图片内容和其中的角色分配，用第一人称写一个英文小故事，体现戴头盔的重要
性。
注意：
（1）可以适当添加细节，以使情节连贯；
（2）词数100左右；
（3）首句已经给出，不计入词数。
*词汇提示：helmet n.头盔，安全帽；crash v. & n.冲撞
分析：高分句型一：It happened so suddenly that we were shocked and lost control of our bicycles.
翻译：事情发生得太突然了，我们都惊呆了，自行车失控了。
分析：运用了so…that引导的结果状语从句。
高分句型二：Knowing what had happened，Dad said to me， "It would have been avoided if you had
worn your helmet."
翻译：知道发生了什么，爸爸对我说："如果你戴上头盔的话，这是可以避免的。"
分析：运用了what引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句。
解答：Last Thursday，I met David at the school gate and we decided to cycle back home together.All
the way we were chatting happily when a cat dashed out on the road，followed by an angry dog.It
happened so suddenly that we were shocked and lost control of our bicycles.
（高分句型一）Before realizing what was happening，I bumped into a rock and fell off the bicycle，
David falling too because of the crash.I was bleeding and sent to hospital immediately while David was
54slightly injured on his elbow.（因为没戴头盔路上发生的事情）Knowing what had happened，Dad said
to me， "It would have been avoided if you had worn your helmet." （高分句型二）I nodded
regretfully and promised I would never cycle without a helmet again.（认识到了头盔的重要性）
点评：写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同
时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与构思：明确题目要求的主题和内容后，根据主题构思故事的大致情节和人物。
2.确定时态和人称：根据题目要求，确定要使用的时态。
3.开始写作：首先写出一个简短的开头，引入主题。接着，按照时间顺序或情节发展，逐步展开故事。在
写作过程中，注意保持逻辑清晰、表达准确。
4.结尾：在故事的结尾部分，要对主题进行总结或给出一些启示。同时，也可以根据需要添加一些情感色
彩或寓意。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的语法、拼写和句子结构等，进行必要的修改和润色。
2．说明文
【考点介绍】
说明文写作是一种以说明、解释为主要表达方式的写作体裁，通常用来阐述某个概念、过程或原理等。
说明文写作通常要求学生能够根据给定的主题或情境，写出一篇具有清晰逻辑和准确表述的说明文。
【典型例题】
请根据下面内容提示，写一篇短文，简要介绍一下北京。
城市名称 北京
地理位置 中国的北部
面积 16，000平方公里
人口 14，000，000
其它 ……
要求：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析：高分句型一：Located in the north of China，Beijing is the capital city of the country.
翻译：北京位于中国北部，是中国的首都。
分析：本句使用了过去分词短语Located in the north of China作状语。
高分句型二：Beijing，a tourist destination，with many places of interest，such as the Forbidden City，
the Summer Palace and the Great Wall，attracts many tourists all over the world every year.
翻译：北京是一个旅游目的地，有许多名胜古迹，如紫禁城、颐和园和长城，每年都吸引着世界各地的
55许多游客。
分析：句子里，a tourist destination为同位语，解释说明主语Beijing。
解答：Located in the north of China，Beijing is the capital city of the country.（高分句型一）（地理位
置） It covers a total area of 16，000 square kilometers with a population of 14 million.（面积、人
口） Here it is hot and rainy in summer while cold and dry in winter.Beijing，a tourist destination，
with many places of interest，such as the Forbidden City，the Summer Palace and the Great Wall，
attracts many tourists all over the world every year.（高分句型二）What's more，it was the host city of
the 29th Olympic Games in 2008.（其它）
点评：写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同
时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.理解题目要求：在开始写作之前，需要仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的主题、情境和字数限制等。
2.确定说明对象：在写作时，需要明确说明的对象，并确定需要解释的概念或过程等。
3.构建文章结构：在写作前，需要设计好文章的结构，包括引言、主体和结论等部分。
4.注意语言表达：在写作时，需要注意语言的准确性，避免使用模糊或歧义的语言表达。同时，需要注意
语言的逻辑性和连贯性，确保文章的条理清晰、易于理解。
5.检查语法错误：在完成写作后，需要仔细检查语法错误、拼写错误等，确保文章的通顺和准确。
3．书信类
【考点介绍】
书信写作是英语写作中的一种重要形式，主要用于人们之间的交流和沟通。书信写作需要遵循特定的格
式和规范，同时还需要注意语言表达的得体性和准确性。在各类英语考试中，书信写作通常是必考题型
之一，主要考查学生的实际应用能力和语言表达能力。
【典型例题】
假定你是学校学生会主席李华，请写封邮件邀请你校学生家长 Chris 参加家长会，内容包括：
（1）时间和地点；
（2）会议议程；
（3）表达期待。
注意：
（1）词数100词左右；
（2）文中不得透露个人及学校信息；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：学生会 the Student Union；家长会 parent﹣teacher meeting
Dear Chris，
56___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
分析：高分句型一：The parent﹣teacher meeting，to be held in the lecture hall this Friday，is
scheduled to last for 2 hours from 8：00 a.m.to 11：00 a.m.
译文：家长会将于本周五在演讲厅举行，时间为上午8点至11点，持续两个小时。
分析：这句话使用了不定式的被动形式to be held in the lecture hall this Friday作定语。
高分句型二：The meeting is said to begin with an inspiring speech delivered by the principal，followed
by a video featuring the colorful school life of students.
译文：据说，会议首先由校长发表了鼓舞人心的演讲，然后是一段视频，展示了学生丰富多彩的学校生
活。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语followed by a video featuring the colorful school life of students作状
语。
解答：Dear Chris，
I am Li Hua，the president of the Student Union.Representing the school，I am writing to request the
pleasure of your participating in the parent﹣teacher meeting.（写信目的）
The parent﹣teacher meeting，to be held in the lecture hall this Friday，is scheduled to last for 2 hours
from 8：00 a.m.to 11：00 a.m.（高分句型一）（时间和地点）The meeting is said to begin with an
inspiring speech delivered by the principal，followed by a video featuring the colorful school life of
students.（高分句型二）Finally，you will be provide a chance to communicate with your child's head
teacher to have a further understanding of him/her.Please pay attention that during the meeting you
should be quiet to provide a good meeting atmosphere.（会议议程）
Looking forward to your coming.（表达期待）
Yours，
Li Hua
点评：这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，写作时要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要
组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，
缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求
57的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
【解题思路】
1.审题与构思：首先明确题目要求，包括写信的对象、目的、内容和格式等。然后根据题目要求进行构思，
想好要表达的内容和层次。
2.确定格式：书信的格式包括信头、日期、收信人地址、信件内容等。
3.开始写作：在开头部分要明确表明写信的目的和主题，然后展开相应的内容。在写作过程中，要注意使
用得体的语言表达自己的观点和诉求，同时注意段落之间的衔接和连贯性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查信件的内容、语法、拼写和格式等方面是否存在错误。同时，检查
语言表达是否得体、清晰，是否达到了写作的目的。
4．通知类
【考点介绍】
通知是一种应用范围广、实用性强的文稿，通常用于传达信息、指示工作、发布政策等。在英语写作中
通知的写作需要遵循清晰、简洁、规范的原则。通知一般分为正式通知和非正式通知两种，其中正式通
知多用于正式场合，而 非正式通知则更为灵活。在各类英语考试中，通知写作是常考的作文题型之一，
主要考查学生的应用写作能力和表达能力。
【典型例题】
假定你是李华，你校英语角（English Corner）计划下周举办一次关于垃圾分类的讲座，届时将进行同步
网络直播。请你代表社团写一则通知，内容包括：
（1）讲座目的、时间、地点；
（2）讲座内容；
（3）欢迎同学们踊跃参加。
参考词汇：垃圾分类 garbage classification 网络直播 live stream
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Notice
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
分析：高分句型一：To raise the awareness of rubbish pollution，an English lecture concerning garbage
classification is scheduled to be held in the auditorium next week，accompanied by social streaming.
翻译：为了提高人们对垃圾污染的认识，下周将在礼堂举办一场关于垃圾分类的英语讲座，并辅以社交
媒体。
58分析：运用了不定式To raise the awareness of rubbish pollution和过去分词短语accompanied by social
streaming作状语。
高分句型二：Only with our joint efforts can we lead an eco﹣life and protect our planet.
翻译：只有我们共同努力，我们才能过上生态生活，保护我们的星球。
分析：运用了only+状语位于句首的部分倒装结构。
解答：
Notice
To raise the awareness of rubbish pollution，an English lecture concerning garbage classification is
scheduled to be held in the auditorium next week，accompanied by social streaming.（高分句型一）
（讲座目的、时间、地点）Knowledge and skills on sorting out garbage will be included.With this
lecture，we will learn how to classify rubbish.The way to watch social streaming will be shown
afterwards.（讲座内容）
Only with our joint efforts can we lead an eco﹣life and protect our planet.（高分句型二）Welcome to
attend the lecture!（欢迎同学们踊跃参加）
点评：提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯
符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有
档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求写一篇什么样的通知，包括通知的目的、受众、内容和格式等。然后根
据题目要求分析目的、受众的特点，构思通知的内容和层次。
2.确定格式：正式通知和非正式通知的格式略有不同，一般由标题、正文和落款等部分组成。
3.开始写作：在标题部分要简明扼要地概括通知的主题和目的；在正文部分要清楚表达通知的内容和要求，
根据受众的特点进行措辞，可以采用直接、简洁的语言，同时注意段落之间的连贯性和条理性；在落款
部分要正确标注发布单位或组织。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查通知的内容、语法、拼写和格式等方面是否存在错误。同时，检查
措辞是否得体、清晰，是否达到了写作的目的。
5．演讲稿
【考点介绍】
演讲稿是一种用于表达观点、传达信息、宣传鼓动等目的的口头表达形式。在英语写作中，演讲稿的写
作需要遵循口头语言表达的特点和规律，注重表达的清晰性、准确性和感染力。在各类英语考试中，演
讲稿写作是常考的作文题型之一，主要考查学生的语言应用能力和表达能力。
【典型例题】
59假如你是李华，最近你班将以"Will robots take the place of human beings？"为话题举办一个英语辩论会。
请你写一篇发言稿，代表反方发言，内容包括：
（1）亮明观点；
（2）陈述理由；
（3）得出结论。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析：高分句型一：Second，robots don't have feelings just like human beings though they can imitate
human beings in many ways.
翻译：其次，机器人不像人类那样有感情，尽管它们可以在很多方面模仿人类。
分析：本句使用了though引导的让步状语从句。
高分句型二：Most importantly，robots can't think by themselves，which makes them different from
human beings and put them at a disadvantage.
翻译：最重要的是，机器人不能自己思考，这使它们与人类不同，并使它们处于不利地位。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
解答：Robots have become more and more intelligent in recent years，so some people think they are
likely to take the place of human beings one day.However.I have different opinions. （亮明观点）My
reasons are as follows.
First of all，robots are designed by human beings，so their intelligence is limited.（陈述理由一）
Second，robots don't have feelings just like human beings though they can imitate human beings in
many ways.（高分句型一）（陈述理由二） Most importantly，robots can't think by themselves，which
makes them different from human beings and put them at a disadvantage.（高分句型二）（陈述理由
三）
In conclusion，although technology makes it possible for robots to develop better intelligence and do a
variety of things for us，they can't replace human beings.（得出结论）
点评：提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯
符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有
档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求，包括演讲的主题、目的、受众和时间等。然后根据题目要求进行分析，
确定演讲稿的框架和内容。
2.确定结构：演讲稿的结构一般包括开场白、主体和结束语三个部分。开场白部分要简洁明了地引入主题，
60吸引受众的注意力；主体部分要围绕主题展开，有条理地阐述观点和事例，注意段落之间的衔接和连贯
性；结束语部分要总结演讲内容，提出号召和倡议。
3.开始写作：在开场白部分要引入主题，吸引受众的注意力；在主体部分要阐述观点和事例，注意使用适
当的论证方法和表达方式；在结束语部分要总结演讲内容，提出号召和倡议。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查演讲稿的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在问题。同时，检
查语言表达是否清晰、准确、有感染力，是否符合口头语言表达的特点。
6．报道
【考点介绍】
报道是一种以文字、图片、视频等手段，对新闻、事件、活动等进行详细、客观的描述和记录的文体。
在英语写作中，报道需要遵循准确、客观、公正的原则，同时要求结构清晰、表达简洁明了。在各类英
语考试中，报道写作是常考的作文题型之一，主要考查学生的新闻素养、写作技巧和语言表达能力。
【典型例题】
假定你是李华，上周你校举办了中国传统文化周活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
（1）活动目的；
（2）活动内容；
（3）活动反响。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
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___________________________________________________
分析：高分句型一：A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school
to raise students' confidence in our national culture.
译文：上周，我们学校发起了一项中国传统文化周活动，以提高学生对我们民族文化的信心。
分析：这句话使用了不定式to raise students' confidence in our national culture作目的状语。
高分句型二：The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students，which will
encourage us to further spread Chinese culture in future.
译文：这次活动很成功，在我们学生中越来越受欢迎，这将鼓励我们在未来进一步传播中国文化。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
解答：
61A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to raise students'
confidence in our national culture.（高分句型一）（活动目的）
During the campaign，we students were encouraged to take part in a wide range of cultural activities，
including singing Chinese folk songs，attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional
Chinese festivals.Every one of us chose one to our taste and we had a good time very much.（活动内
容）
The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students，which will encourage us
to further spread Chinese culture in future.（高分句型二）（活动反响）
点评：这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，写作时要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要
组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，
缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求
的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求，包括报道的主题、内容、受众和形式等。然后根据题目要求进行分析，
确定报道的重点和角度。
2.确定结构：报道的结构一般包括标题、导语、主体和结尾四个部分。
3.开始写作：在标题部分要用简短、醒目的文字吸引读者的注意力；在导语部分要概括性地介绍事件的主
要内容；在主体部分要详细描述事件的经过、背景和影响等；在结尾部分要总结全文，提出自己的看法
或建议。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查报道的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。同时，检查
语言表达是否准确、客观、简练，是否达到了写作的目的。
7．其他应用文写作
【考点介绍】
其他应用文写作是英语写作中的一类，除了常见的信函、报告、演讲稿、新闻稿等，还包括一些具有特
定格式和用途的文稿，例如备忘录、电子邮件、简历、说明书等。这些应用文在日常生活和工作中都有
广泛的应用。在各类英语考试中，其他应用文写作也是常考的题型之一，主要考查学生的应用写作能力
和表达能力。
【典型例题】
假定你是李华，你在暑期里参观了市博物馆举办的一次"遇 见中国戏曲（Meet the Chinese Opera）"的展
览请你为你校英文报写一则评论，内容包括：
62（1）展览概况；
（2）观展感受；
（3）提出建议。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析：高分句型一：To develop citizen's artistic accomplishment，the museum exhibited many fantastic
pictures，ranging from Peking Opera，Shaoxing Opera to Kunqu Opera，and bringing an audio﹣visual
feast for the art lovers.
译文：为了培养市民的艺术修养，博物馆展出了从京剧、越剧到昆曲的精彩画面，为艺术爱好者带来了
一场视听盛宴。
分析：这句话使用了不定式做目的状语，ranging from Peking Opera，Shaoxing Opera to Kunqu Opera，
and bringing an audio﹣visual feast for the art lovers是现在分词短语作状语。
高分句型二：Exposed to the plots，colors and affection，I seemed to be personally on the scene.
译文：暴露在情节、色彩和感情中，我似乎亲自出现在现场。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语Exposed to the plots，colors and affection作状语。
解答：This summer holiday witnessed numerous visitors to the "Meet the Chinese Opera" exhibition in
the city museum.（话题）
To develop citizen's artistic accomplishment，the museum exhibited many fantastic pictures，ranging from
Peking Opera，Shaoxing Opera to Kunqu Opera，and bringing an audio﹣visual feast for the art lovers.
（高分句型一）（展览概况）I enjoyed every second of the display and was particularly attracted by
Peking Opera Legend of the White Snake.Exposed to the plots，colors and affection，I seemed to be
personally on the scene.（高分句型二）（观展感受）
Sincerely，I hope in the future shows can last longer and more famous works can be displayed.（提出
建议）
点评：这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，写作时要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要
组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，
缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求
的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求写什么样的应用文，包括目的、受众、内容和格式等。然后根据题目要
63求进行分析，确定应用文的关键要素和重点内容。
2.确定格式：不同类型的应用文有不同的格式和结构，在写作前需要认真阅读题目要求，按照规定的格式
进行写作。同时，要注意应用文的惯用语言表达和缩略语等细节问题。
3.写作内容：在写作过程中，要围绕目的和受众，明确传达信息的内容和重点。要注意语言表达的简练性、
准确性和逻辑性，尽可能精简语言，避免使用复杂的语句和表达方式。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查应用文的内容、语法、拼写和格式等方面是否存在错误。同时，检
查语言表达是否准确、清晰，是否达到了写作的目的。
8．提纲作文
【考点介绍】
提纲作文是一种较为灵活的写作形式，其考查的是考生在给定主题和提纲的前提下进行拓展论述的能力
在英语写作中，提纲作文通常涉及一些热门话题或观点，要求考生根据题目所给的提纲，以篇章的形式
展开讨论，表达自己的观点和见解。在各类英语考试中，提纲作文是常考的作文题型之一，主要考查学
生的语言表达能力、思维逻辑性和主题论述能力。
【典型例题】
假设上周三（11月9日）你校举办了主题为"预防森林火灾"的校园活动。请你为学校英语报写一篇报道，
内容包括：
（1）活动时间、地点、参加人员；
（2）活动内容：观看短片、制作黑板报等等；
（3）活动反响。
注意：词数120左右。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析：高分句型一：In this activity，we were aware of the actions we should take in our daily life to
prevent forest fires.
翻译：在这次活动中，我们意识到了我们在日常生活中应该采取的预防森林火灾。
分析：本句使用了不定式to prevent forest fires作目的状语。
高分句型二：Sincerely，I hope that the school can hold the similar activity again.
翻译：真诚地，我希望学校能再次举办类似的活动。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
解答：In order to promote the awareness of fire prevention and student safety，our school held a
campus activity with the theme of "Preventing Forest fires".（活动目的）The following are the specific
details of the activity.
First，last Wednesday，the event was held in the conference hall of the school.（活动时间地点）
Secondly，watching short films and making blackboard newspapers not only attracted the enthusiastic
participation of teachers and students ， but also improved the safety awareness of forest fire
64prevention.Finally，this activity was very successful and received unanimous praise from the participants.
（活动内容）In this activity，we were aware of the actions we should take in our daily life to prevent
forest fires.（高分句型一）Without doubt，this is very meaningful.（活动反向）
Sincerely，I hope that the school can hold the similar activity again.（高分句型二）
点评：提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯
符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有
档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：明确了解作文的主题和要求。观察题目所给的提纲，可以得知文章应由哪些部分组成以及
每部分的内容要点。
2.构建框架：即文章由哪几部分组成以及每部分的内容要点。注意整体逻辑性和连贯性，确保文章从开头
到结尾形成一个完整的故事或论述。
3.写作过程：根据题目所给的提纲逐一展开讨论。注意每部分的主题句要明确，论据要充分，段落间的过
渡要自然流畅。同时，运用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和见解。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否紧扣主题，论据是否合理，观点是否清晰明确。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自然、流畅，是否达
到了写作的目的。
9．图表作文
【考点介绍】
图表作文是一种较为综合的写作形式，主要考查考生对于数据、表格等图形的理解和分析能力，以及将
这些信息转化为文字描述的能力。在英语写作中，图表作文通常涉及一些数据的比较、趋势分析等内容
要求考生根据题目所给的图表或图形，以篇章的形式对数据进行描述、分析和比较。在各类英语考试中
图表作文是常考的作文题型之一，主要考查学生的语言表达能力、数据分析和对比能力。
【典型例题】
最近某中学发布了一项有关该校学生压力来源的调查结果。该调查反映了2018年到2023年该校学生最大
压力来源的变化。作为该中学英文报的编辑，请你根据图表反映的调查结果写一篇社评，内容包括：
（1）图表所反映的变化；
（2）变化发生的原因；
（3）你的建议。
65注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Managing Stress in High School
Recently a survey has been carried out about the major causes of stress among the students of our
school.
___________________________________________________
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分析：高分句型一：As the chart shows，the percentage of the students，who consider academics their
No.1 cause of stress，has doubled in the past five years，from 30% to 60%.
翻译：如图所示，在过去五年中，认为学业是压力最大原因的学生比例翻了一番，从30%上升到60%。
分析：本句使用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Integrating some stress management techniques into students' daily life may help ease the
tension.
翻译：将一些压力管理技巧融入学生的日常生活可能有助于缓解紧张情绪。
分析：本句使用了动名词Integrating some stress management techniques into students' daily life作主语。
解答：
Managing Stress in High School
Recently a survey has been carried out about the major causes of stress among the students of our
school.As the chart shows，the percentage of the students，who consider academics their No.1 cause of
stress，has doubled in the past five years，from 30% to 60%.（高分句型一）In contrast，social stress
66and family issues are less worrying.（图表所反映的变化）
Several reasons may account for the change.First，more frequent exams and constant rankings put
students under great pressure.Additionally，parents now have higher expectations and the students can get
burned out to achieve them.（变化发生的原因）
Integrating some stress management techniques into students' daily life may help ease the tension.（高分
句型二）For instance，they can stick to healthy eating and adequate sleep.Besides，channeling energy
into sports or other pursuits also makes sense.（建议）
From my point of view，high school life isn't easy.Develop some strategies and things will get better in
our school life.（总结）
点评：写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同
时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目要求写什么样的图表作文，包括主题、图表类型、数据内容等。然后仔细观
察图表，理解数据或趋势的含义和关系。
2.构建框架：通常来说，图表作文可以分为引言、主体和结论三个部分，其中引言部分需要简要介绍图表
的主题和目的，主体部分需要对图表中的数据进行详细描述和分析，结论部分需要总结图表中的主要信
息并给出自己的看法或建议。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简洁的语言引入主题和目的；然后写主体部分，详细描述图表中的数据
和趋势，并使用对比、因果等方法进行分析；最后写结论部分，概括图表中的主要信息并给出自己的观
点或建议。在写作过程中，要注意使用恰当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地描述了图表中的数据和趋势，是否进行了合理的分析和比较，是否达到了写作的目的。同时，
检查语言表达是否准确、自然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
10．主题式
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"主题式"作文，通常是指给定一个主题或中心思想，要求考生围绕这个主题进行拓展和阐述。
这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，主要考查学生的审题能力、分析能力和表达能力。
【典型例题】
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点
并表达自己的看法。注意：写作词数应为80左右。
分析：高分句型一：Chatting online，students can more freely express their feelings and opinions，and
even get help with their foreign language studies.
67翻译：在网上聊天，学生可以更自由地表达自己的感受和观点，甚至在外语学习上得到帮助。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语Chatting online作状语。
高分句型二：They say making friends on line is a waste of time，which should be spent more
meaningfully on study.
翻译：他们说网上交友是浪费时间，这些时间应该花在更有意义的学习上。
分析：本句运用了that引导宾语从句making friends on line is a waste of time，which should be spent
more meaningfully on study，that省略了，和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
解答：Should students make friends online？Some people say yes.The internet helps make many
friends.Chatting online，students can more freely express their feelings and opinions，and even get help
with their foreign language studies.（高分句型一）（赞同者的观点）Others，however，think students
should not.They say making friends on line is a waste of time ， which should be spent more
meaningfully on study.（高分句型二）Besides，some students get cheated online.（反对者的观点）It is
my opinion that students should place their study ， health and safety before other things.As for
friendship，we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.（作者自己的观点）
点评：写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先明确题目所给的主题是关于什么方面的内容，仔细阅读题目要求，理解主题的含义和
要求。确定主题涉及的核心概念和要点。
2.确定框架：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并表明自己的观点或立场；主体
部分可以详细阐述与主题相关的各个方面或问题，并使用论据支持自己的观点；结论部分则总结文章的
主要观点并提出建议或看法。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，简要介绍主题并明确表达自己的观点或立场；然后写主体部分，详细阐述
与主题相关的各个方面或问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析。可以使用适当
的例子、数据和事实来支持自己的观点，使文章更具说服力。同时，注意段落的过渡和衔接要自然流畅。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否紧扣主题展开论述，是否使用合理的论据支持自己的观点，是否达到了写作的目的。同时，检查语言
表达是否准确、自然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
11．读后续写
【考点介绍】
68读后续写是一种结合阅读和写作的考查方式，主要考查考生的理解能力、想象力、创造力和语言表达能
力。在英语写作中，读后续写通常提供一段阅读材料，要求考生根据材料的内容和情节，发挥想象力，
续写接下来的故事或论述。这类题型在各类英语考试中较为常见，主要考查学生的阅读理解能力、思维
能力和语言表达能力。
1．选材特点
（1）所需阅读的短文动在350以内；
（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻
辑性比较强．
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语猴接程度
（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词歌覆盖情况
（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性
（4）上下文的连贯性
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：理解材料的主旨和重要细节，注意把握材料中的人物、情节、时间和地点等信息。
2.确定主题和情节：注意与材料中的情节和人物保持连贯性，同时可以加入自己的想象力和创造力来丰富
情节。
3.构建框架：包括开头、发展和结尾三个部分。开头部分应与提供的阅读材料相衔接，可以简要概括前文；
发展部分应展开情节，使故事或论述更加丰富；结尾部分则应总结全文，并为读者留下一定的思考空间。
4.写作过程：首先写开头部分，与提供的阅读材料进行衔接，确保文章的连贯性；然后写发展部分，根据
自己确定的情节发展进行拓展，可以使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析。同时，注
意与前文保持逻辑上的连贯性；最后写结尾部分，总结全文，并为读者留下一定的思考空间。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否与阅读材料保持连贯性，是否遵循了给出的主题和情节发展进行拓展，是否达到了写作的目的。同时
检查语言表达是否准确、自然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
12．概要写作
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"概要写作"，也称为"summary writing"，是一种较为常见的考查形式，主要考查考生的阅读
理解能力、概括能力和写作能力。在英语考试中，概要写作常以"Write a summary of the following
passage"等形式出现，要求考生在把握文章主旨和重要细节的基础上，用自己的语言简明扼要地概括文章
的主要内容或某个段落的主题。
1．选材特点
69（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；
（2）所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主．
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：
（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；
（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；
（3）上下文的连贯性；
（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况．
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：了解文章或段落的主题和主要内容，把握作者的观点和论据。
2.确定主旨和重要细节：思考如何概括主题和重要内容。要注意准确把握作者的观点、论据和支持性细节。
3.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简短地概括文章的主题；主体部分应详细地阐
述文章的主要内容或某个段落的主题；结论部分可以简单地总结文章的主要观点。
4.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言概括文章的主题；然后写主体部分，用自己的语言详细地阐
述文章的主要内容和重要细节；最后写结论部分，可以简单地总结文章的主要观点或提出自己的看法。
在写作过程中，要注意使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地概括了文章的主题和重要内容，是否达到了写作的目的。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自然
流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
13．环境保护
【考点介绍】
环境保护是各类考试中常见的话题之一，尤其是在英语写作中。这个话题要求学生理解并掌握与环境相
关的基本知识，包括环境问题的重要性、现有的环境问题、以及如何采取措施保护环境等。
【解题思路】
1.审题与分析：首先仔细阅读题目要求，理解题目要求，是关于环境保护的一般性讨论，还是针对某一具
体环境问题进行分析？
2.确定主题：确定你的文章要讨论的具体环境保护主题。如：全球变暖、水污染、垃圾问题等。
3.列出要点：列出你要讨论的主要观点和论据。例如，你可以讨论环境问题的严重性，当前的环境问题，
以及政府、企业和个人可以采取的措施等。
4.写作与展开：开始写作，以清晰、流畅的英语表达你的观点。使用例子、事实和数据来支持你的论点。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查你的文章，确保语法、拼写和句子结构的正确性。如果有时间，可
以尝试从读者的角度来阅读你的文章，看看是否可以理解你的观点并接受你的解决方案。
6.注意事项：在写作过程中，注意使用正式、专业的语言，避免使用口语或缩写。同时，尽可能使用积极、
客观的词汇，避免使用过于情绪化或负面的词语。
7014．招聘求职申请
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"招聘求职申请"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力和求职申请的技巧。这类题
型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生以求职者的身份撰写一篇求职申请信，内容包括自我介绍
求职原因、个人能力和对职位的理解等。
【解题思路】
1.了解职位：首先需要了解所申请的职位的职责、要求和公司的背景信息，以便在申请信中更好地展示自
己的能力和兴趣。
2.写作格式：求职申请信通常包括以下内容：自我介绍、求职原因、个人能力和对职位的理解等。在写作
过程中，需要注意信件的格式和礼仪，如使用正式的信头纸和恰当的语言。
3.自我介绍：需要简洁明了地介绍自己的姓名、年龄、教育背景和工作经历等。同时，需要突出与申请职
位相关的经历和技能。
4.求职原因：需要阐述为什么对这个职位感兴趣，以及为什么觉得自己是该职位的合适人选。可以提及对
该领域的热爱和对公司背景的了解等。
5.个人能力：需要突出自己的能力和技能，尤其是与申请职位相关的技能。需要结合自己的经验和实践，
具体阐述如何利用这些技能来完成该职位的工作任务。
6.对职位的理解：需要阐述自己对所申请职位的理解，包括该职位的主要职责、所需的技能和公司对该职
位的期望等。
7.结尾：在结尾部分，需要再次强调自己的热情和适合度，并对公司表示感谢，同时可以询问下一步的流
程。
15．身心健康
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"身心健康"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对于身心健康的理解和关
注。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就身心健康的重要性、身心健康的保持和维护
方法、身心健康对生活和工作的影响等方面进行论述、描述或表达观点。
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：首先仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的目的和要求，把握题目的主题和要点，了解需要涉及的
范围和重点。
2.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及身心健康的重要性、身心健
康的保持和维护方法、身心健康对生活和工作的影响等。
3.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述身心健康的相关问题，例如身心健康的重要性、身心健康的保持和维护方法、身心健康对生活和
71工作的影响等；结论部分可以总结全文并强调身心健康的重要性。
4.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述身心健康的相
关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调身
心健康的重要性。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时保证语
法和拼写的准确性。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
16．校园文明与安全
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"校园文明与安全"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对校园文明与安全
的认知和理解。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就校园文明、校园安全等相关问题
进行论述、描述或表达观点。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及校园文明的重要性、校园安
全的现状和措施、学生安全教育等方面。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述校园文明与安全的相关问题，例如校园文明的重要性、校园安全的现状和措施、学生安全教育等
结论部分可以总结全文并强调校园文明与安全的重要性。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述校园文明与安
全的相关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并
强调校园文明与安全的重要性。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点
同时保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
17．学习生活
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"学习生活"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对学习生活的理解和关注。
这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就学习生活中的某个方面进行论述、描述或表达观
点。
【解题思路】
721.阅读理解：首先仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的目的和要求，把握题目的主题和要点，了解需要涉及的
范围和重点。
2.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及学习方法的探讨、学习计划
的制定、时间管理技巧的分享、学习态度的反思等。
3.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述学习生活的相关问题，例如学习方法、学习计划、时间管理技巧、学习态度的分享等；结论部分
可以总结全文并强调学习生活中的收获和启示。
4.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述学习生活的相
关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调学
习生活中的收获和启示。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时
保证语法和拼写的准确性。
18．语言学习
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"语言学习"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对语言学习的理解和关注。
这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就语言学习的某个方面进行论述、描述或表达观点。
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：首先仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的目的和要求，把握题目的主题和要点，了解需要涉及的
范围和重点。
2.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及语言学习的乐趣、挑战、学
习方法、影响因素等。
3.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述语言学习的相关问题，例如语言学习的乐趣、挑战、学习方法、影响因素等；结论部分可以总结
全文并强调语言学习的重要性和意义。
4.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述语言学习的相
关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调语
言学习的重要性和意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时
保证语法和拼写的准确性。
5.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
19．课外活动
【考点介绍】
73英语写作中的"课外活动"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对课外活动的认知和理解。
这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就课外活动的某个方面进行论述、描述或表达观点。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及课外活动的种类、参加动机、
对学业和个性的影响等。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述课外活动的相关问题，例如课外活动的种类、参加动机、对学业和个性的影响等；结论部分可以
总结全文并强调课外活动的重要性和意义。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述课外活动的相
关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调课
外活动的重要性和意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时
保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
20．生活感悟
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"生活感悟"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对生活的理解和思考。这
类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生就生活中的某个事件或观察到的某个现象发表自己的
观点和感悟。
【解题思路】
1.阅读理解：首先仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的目的和要求，把握题目的主题和要点，了解需要涉及的
范围和重点。
2.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及生活中的某个事件或观察到
的某个现象，以及由此产生的思考和感悟。
3.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述生活感悟的相关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；结论部分可以总
结全文并强调生活感悟的重要性和意义。
4.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述生活感悟的相
关问题，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全文并强调生
活感悟的重要性和意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时
保证语法和拼写的准确性。
745.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
21．传统文化
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"传统文化"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对传统文化的了解、传承
和弘扬。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生根据题目提供的材料或情境，对某一传统
文化进行介绍、阐述或表达自己的看法。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及中国的传统节日、传统手工
艺、传统民俗等。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述传统文化的内容、起源、传承和发展等；结论部分可以总结全文并强调传统文化的重要性和弘扬
意义。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述传统文化的内
容、起源、传承和发展等，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，
总结全文并强调传统文化的重要性和弘扬意义。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和
词汇来表达观点，同时保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
22．文学诗歌
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"文学诗歌"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对文学诗歌的欣赏、分析
和评论。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生根据题目提供的材料或情境，对某一文学
诗歌进行介绍、阐述或表达自己的看法。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及某一文学诗歌的作者、作品
风格、主题、意象等。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述文学诗歌的内容、特点、影响等；结论部分可以总结全文并强调文学诗歌的重要性和欣赏价值。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述文学诗歌的内
75容、特点、影响等，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部分，总结全
文并强调文学诗歌的重要性和欣赏价值。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉和有把握的语言和词汇来
表达观点，同时保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
23．文娱与体育
【考点介绍】
英语写作中的"文娱与体育"话题，通常考查考生的写作能力、语言表达能力，以及对文化娱乐和体育活动
的了解、看法和体验。这类题型在各类英语考试中比较常见，一般要求考生根据题目提供的材料或情境
对某一文化娱乐或体育活动进行介绍、评论或表达自己的看法。
【解题思路】
1.确定主题和要点：根据题目要求，确定写作的主题和要点。例如，可以涉及某一电影、电视剧、音乐、
舞蹈等文化娱乐活动的介绍和评价；也可以涉及某一体育项目、赛事、运动员等的介绍和看法。
2.写作构思：包括引言、主体和结论三个部分。引言部分应简要介绍主题并引起读者兴趣；主体部分应详
细阐述文化娱乐或体育活动的特点、优势或劣势等；结论部分可以总结全文并强调文化娱乐和体育的重
要性和适当的参与方式。
3.写作过程：首先写引言部分，用简短的语言引起读者的兴趣；然后写主体部分，详细阐述文化娱乐或体
育活动的特点、优势或劣势等，使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析；最后写结论部
分，总结全文并强调文化娱乐和体育的重要性和适当的参与方式。在写作过程中，要注意使用自己熟悉
和有把握的语言和词汇来表达观点，同时保证语法和拼写的准确性。
4.检查与修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查文章的内容、语法、拼写和结构等方面是否存在错误。检查文章是
否准确地表达了自己的观点和论据，是否符合题目要求和字数限制。同时，检查语言表达是否准确、自
然、流畅，是否达到了写作的目的。
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