温暖亲情类故事
写作导图
一、冲突构建：情感的张力之源
（通过情感矛盾展现亲情的珍贵性）
1． 矛盾激化
【生气冲突】
例句：My mother glanced at me. Something she never did before I had a stepfamily. "You could have
picked it up," she said. "That would have been the kind thing to do."
（母亲瞥了我一眼——这在重组家庭之前她从未有过的动作。"你本可以捡起来的，"她说，"这才
是有教养的做法。"）
✅解析：虚拟语气（could have/would have）强化事后的懊悔感，暗示未完成的期待。肢体动作描
写（glanced）替代直接心理描写，更显克制张力。
【后悔心理】
例句：I realized how poorly I tied the string on my skirt which was over leggings. I should have asked
mom for help.
（当我意识到自己把罩裙带子系得一团糟时，真该让妈妈帮忙的。）
✅技巧：细节描写（skirt over leggings）具象化场景，should have done结构强化追悔莫及的心理。二 情感发酵（2种进阶写法）
【复合修辞】
例句：Thinking about what I had done to him, regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides.
（每当想起对他的所作所为，悔恨如无尽潮水将我淹没。）
✅亮点：比喻（tides）+ 夸张（endless）构建情感强度，现在分词前置营造沉浸感。
【动作暗示】
例句：Watching Shirley's smile fading away, Peter frowned.
（看着雪莉的笑容渐渐消失，彼得皱起眉头。）
✅解析：非谓语结构（watching）建立画面同步性，表情变化（smile→frown）暗示情感转折。
三、冲突化解：情感的治愈路径
（通过具体行动展现亲情的力量）
1． 和解三部曲
【真诚道歉】
例句："I’m so sorry," he said, gently petting Jackson’s head.
（"真的很抱歉，"他轻抚杰克逊的头说道。）
✅技法：伴随动作（petting）软化语言冲击，副词（gently）传达温柔态度。
【暖心原谅】
例句：His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips, gave a soft kiss on his forehead
and walked out of the study.
（母亲将手指轻按他嘴唇示意安静，在额头印下轻吻，悄然离开了书房。）
✅解析：动作链描写（putting→gave→walked）构建电影镜头感，无声举动胜于言语。
2． 情感升华【意象隐喻】
例句：Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the
music.
（欢快的歌声在房间飘荡，两姐妹沉醉于音乐之美。）
✅亮点：独立主格（singing floating）营造环境氛围，抽象概念（beauty）具象化亲情体验。
【顿悟时刻】
例句：It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family. I will treasure it with all
my heart.
（正是亨利的善良让我感受到家的温暖，我将用心珍藏这份情谊。）
✅技巧：强调句型（It was...that）突出情感核心，动词选择（treasure）体现珍视程度。
四、主题升华：情感的永恒价值
（通过象征手法深化亲情意义）
1． 象征物运用【延续性意象】
例句：From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie,
reminding him to be honest.
（自那以后，每当想要说谎时，三颗巧克力就会在心中敲响警钟，提醒他保持诚实。）
✅解析：具象物品（chocolates）承载抽象品质（honesty），建立持续性的道德隐喻。
2． 成长性表达【心理蜕变】
例句：I nodded firmly, knowing a flower of kindness and friendship began to blossom in both of our
hearts.
（我坚定点头，深知善意与友谊之花已在彼此心间绽放。）✅技法：植物意象（flower）隐喻情感成长，进行时态（began to）暗示持续发展。
背精彩句子，让表达出彩
1．Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters were absorbed in the beauty of the music.
欢快的歌声飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在美妙的音乐中。
2．A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, Mom kissed the two sisters gently.
一股幸福与温暖流遍她的全身，妈妈温柔地亲了亲两姐妹。
3．Every morning, my mother wakes up early to prepare breakfast for the family, filling the house with
the aroma of freshly cooked food.
每天早上，我的母亲早早地起床为全家准备早餐，让整个房子充满着新鲜烹制食物的香气。
4．Whenever I'm feeling stressed or overwhelmed, my parents are always there to offer a listening ear
and a shoulder to cry on.
每当我感到压力或不知所措时，我的父母总是在那里倾听我的心声并给我依靠的肩膀。
5．“I want to give you a surprise！” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes shining.
“我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。
6．Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my
family gave me the strength to keep going.
每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。
7．On rainy days, my family likes to stay indoors and watch movies, snuggled up under blankets and
enjoying each other's company.
在下雨的日子里，我的家人喜欢待在室内看电影，蜷缩在毯子下享受彼此的陪伴。
8 ． My parents always make sure to attend my school events and cheer me on, showing their
unwavering support and love.
我的父母总是确保出席我的学校活动，并为我呐喊加油，展现他们不动摇的支持和爱。
9．My parents often surprise us with small gifts or treats, showing their appreciation and love for us.
我的父母经常给我们惊喜，送上小礼物或小零食，表达他们对我们的欣赏和爱。
10.he trembling mother's voice was full of unselfish love as she gave her last instruction.
母亲发出最后的叮嘱时，颤巍巍的声音里充满了无私的爱。
11.Seeing his families sitting together and staying together harmoniously, Cater felt a sense of
happiness.
看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，Cater感觉到一种幸福感。
12.My parents often take us on nature walks, pointing out different plants and animals and teaching
us about the environment.
我的父母经常带我们去散步，指出不同的植物和动物，并教育我们环保知识。
13.My parents always make sure to prioritize family time over work or other obligations, showingus the value of spending time together.
我的父母总是把家庭时间放在工作或其他义务之前，向我们展示共度时光的价值。
14.The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family,
warmed us.
透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光和我们家人之间的爱，温暖了我们。
15.Dad fixed his eyes on the paper, a pleasant smile lifting the corner of his mouth.
爸爸眼睛盯着那张纸，嘴角上扬，露出愉快的微笑。
高考真题演练
2021年6月新高考卷（母亲节的惊喜）
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day.
How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French
toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff
knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They
decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the
French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into
the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going
smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna
threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it
cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge
boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But
the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But
Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she
caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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2017年11月浙江卷（和妈妈去旅行）
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother —
loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about
her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few
weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David,
my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them
again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment,
and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home
to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving
while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and
play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh…
I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about
to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some
time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we
could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom nevercould understand our objections. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been
delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
模拟演练
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段话，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As a young boy, I sometimes traveled the country roads with my dad. He was a rural mail carrier and on
Saturdays he would ask me to go with him. Driving through the countryside was always an adventure: There
were animals to see, people to visit, and chocolate cookies if you knew where to stop, and Dad did.
In the spring, Dad delivered boxes full of baby chickens, and when I was a boy it was such fun to stick
your fingers through one of the holes of the boxes and let the baby birds peck (啄) on your fingers.
On Dad’s final day of work, it took him well into the evening to complete his rounds because at least one
member from each fatuity was waiting at their mailbox to appreciate him for his friendship and his years of
service. “Two hundred and nineteen mailboxes on my route,” he used to say, and a story at every one. One
lady had no mailbox, so Dad took the mail in to her every day because she was nearly blind. He once lectured
me that to bring everyone plain pleasure is his greatest pleasure, which has clung to me so far.
Mailboxes were sometimes used for things other than mail. On cold days Dad might find one of his
customers waiting for him with a cup of hot chocolate. A young girl wrote letters but had no stamps, so she
left a few buttons on the envelope in the mailbox; Dad paid for the stamps.
With a heavy heart, I traveled back to my hometown on the sad occasion of Dad’s death, and the
mailboxes along the way reminded me of some of his stories. I thought I knew them all, but that wasn’t the
case.
As I drove home, I noticed two lamp poles, one on each side of the street. When my dad was around,
those poles supported wooden boxes about four feet off the ground. One box was painted green, and the other
was red, and each had a long narrow hole at the top with white lettering: Santa Claus, NORTH POLE. Foryears children had dropped letters to Santa through those holes. I was among the kids whose letters were
always answered in time.
I made a turn at the corner and drove past the post office and across the railroad tracks to our house. Mom
and I were sitting at the kitchen table when I heard footsteps. There, at the door, stood Frank Townsend, Dad’s
postmaster and great friend for many years. Threads of silver ran through his beard and the hair. Obviously,
time and sorrow for the past days ploughed deep wrinkles on his brow. Sitting down at the table, he began to
tell old stories.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150词左右；
2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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At one point Frank looked at me with tears in his eyes as if recalling something.
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Thinking of my father’s philosophy of pleasure, I resolved to be this year’s Santa Claus.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
School was over, the day was fading and it started to rain. I stood at the school gate, with a loaded
backpack on my shoulders. It was Friday again—a weekend of joy with unlimited sleeping hours and dinner
courses specially made to my taste. I waved goodbye to my friends as they jumped into their fathers’ warm
and comfortable cars. Curiously, this gave rise to a disturbing feeling in me. It was not exactly what theycalled jealousy (嫉妒), but something like depression. I knew all I could expect was an old bike Mom would
ride along on, with the badly-oiled chain creaking against the wheel to announce her arrival.
Every Friday when Mom came to pick me up, it was a moment full of great expectation and great unease.
I always felt my face burning as we rode our way in and out of the cars and saw my friends’ faces sticking out
of the car windows. It was like stepping into a ballroom with beautifully dressed ladies and finding yourself in
a smelly T-shirt.
To tell you the truth, Mom is quite a headache occasionally. She looks like a homely middle-aged
housewife. She knits (编织) most of my sweaters, chiefly in old styles. Whenever caught by some curious
classmates asking what brand my sweaters are, I’d force a smile and reply in a half-joking manner:
homemade. She simply doesn’t seem to understand what’s in fashion; Chanel or Gucci means nothing to her.
I couldn’t remember when I started to find her such an embarrassment. As a little boy, I relied on her so
much. She had been working at home, cooking in the kitchen, knitting by the lamp, or riding across town to
buy me a book I badly needed. It had always been fun riding with her. I had enjoyed watching our shadows
growing longer and shorter in an alternate fashion by the light of the streetlamps along the road. Just now there
seemed to be something standing between us, something that made her so strange to me and me to her.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Today Mom showed up in a raincoat.
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Mom tried to cover me with the raincoat again as a storm set in.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Todd was lying on the family room floor doing math homework, when he heard his mother, back from
her shift at the Crafts Cottage. She was later than usual, so she must have stopped on the way home to get
groceries after her work. Todd hoped so. Groceries were one of life’s good things. It was getting late, and Todd
felt a bit hungry. As a matter of fact, he could hear his stomach growling. He only had some cereal for
breakfast this morning. If only he could have a bite at his favorite food—the apple pie made by his mother!
But it had been a while since she made desserts for them, for she had been much occupied recently.
His mother came into the family room and clicked off the TV. Todd looked at Amy, who was so lost in
her book that she didn’t seem to notice their mother’s presence in the room. But their father, dozing (打瞌睡)
on the couch with the remote in his hand, came awake with a guilty startle (惊吓).
“David, Todd, Amy.” Quiet voices could sound so much more threatening than shouting ones. “I need
you to come into the kitchen. Now!”
Amy put her book down then, and the three of them dragged their feet into the kitchen. If they had tails,
they would have been tucked (藏住) between their legs.
“Look at this place.” Todd’s mother said.
It was bad: newspapers in an untidy heap on the table, dirty dishes everywhere, an empty milk carton
standing on the counter next to spilled cereal left over from breakfast, and two bags of groceries his mom had
just carried in from the car.
“I want this cleaned up. I want these groceries put away. I want a decent meal represented on the table in
sixty minutes. Call me when it’s ready. I’m going to be upstairs soaking in a hot tub.” Then she was gone.
Paragraph 1
Todd, Amy and their father quickly got down to work.
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After their discussion, they were ready to make dinner.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Larry had butterflies in his stomach. Today was the day for him to meet his girlfriend Kate’s parents. He
was planning to leave them a good impression, so he was in his finest suit. On the way, he secretly recited a
few jokes he picked up online the previous night. His weird behavior caught Kate’s attention.
“What are you doing, honey?” she asked. Blushing, Larry told her what he was doing. She, on the other
hand, actually found his eagerness to please her family quite cute. “Well, let’s hear your jokes.” she said
teasingly.
They were so immersed in their chatter and laughter that before they knew it, they had arrived at the
house of Kate’s parents, who gave them a warm welcome. As an orphan, that night, Larry felt the love and
warmth he had always longed for since childhood.
The next day, they drove downtown to pick their engagement ring. Everything was working out just
perfectly. However, on their way home, a truck driven by a drunk driver smashed into their car, sending it
flying off the roadside down a steep hill before it got stuck between several trees.
Larry struggled out of his seat to save the then unconscious Kate. As he made every effort to wake her up,
the car began to slip down again. With only seconds to act, he hastily removed her seat belt and pushed her out
of the car before it fell downhill again with him trapped inside.
A rescue team finally arrived and drove them to a nearby hospital. Under the doctors’ treatment, Kate
woke up the next day. She was only slightly injured, but Larry remained unconscious due to severe damage
done to his brain caused by the heavy impact.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右了；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1: The doctors were afraid Larry might never wake up again.
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Para 2: Larry told Kate to leave him and find someone else.
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At nine years old, I went through more than the usual amount of change for a girl of my age. In the past
few months, my stable and predictable life had been turned upside down when my parents lost their jobs
because of the economic crisis. This set into motion a series of events, including my parents losing our
beautiful Victorian home and forcing our family into a fifteen - foot pull trailer we’d previously only used for
weekend camping trips.
Life in the trailer was tough. We were incredibly crowded. When Mom, Dad, my brother and I all sat on
the sofa at the end of the trailer, the entire front end began to tip in our direction, forcing one of us to jump up
and rush to the front. Worse still, our food was not enough.
One day, my mother sat at the small table and casually wrote a wishing list on a paper towel — all about
food, while keeping an eye on the last of our food, fried chicken, on the stovetop. “We need to pray,” she said
aloud. “We don’t have enough food to last the week.” Then we joined hands and asked God to offer us some
food.
Then Mom left the wishing list on the table, got up and started putting the chicken on a plate for dinner. I
opened the tiny door and let the smell of dinner follow me as I wandered outside to find my dad. He wasworking on our broken-down truck. As Dad leaned over the engine, I noticed a disheveled man walking up to
our trailer.
“Can I help you, sir?” my dad asked in his friendly way.
“I’m hoping you can,” he said, “I’m hungry and was wondering if you had any food to spare.”
I looked up at Dad, knowing we didn’t have much.
“Sure!” Dad said without hesitation. He brushed off his hands and went inside, quickly returning with a
fresh piece of fried chicken wrapped in a paper towel. The man’s face lit up.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The man took the wrapped food and paused for a while.
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Actually, our family didn’t expect the man would return, so we got across the parking lot for a walk after
dinner.
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6.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It’s hard to talk to dads sometimes. The roles we often expect our fathers to play—protector, provider—
can make them seem impenetrable(不可理解的). That’s how it was with my dad. He came to Canada at the
age of ten and settled in an immigrant community. He was never much of a talker. He rarely drank, so we
didn’t get to see him loosen up after a few beers. He didn’t tell stories about himself at the dinner table orwhen we went for walks in the park. He was a private person and seemed to want to stay that way.
Bringing up the many questions I had about life before I was born-his early hopes and dreams, loves and
heartbreaks—let alone sharing my own feelings, felt like too much for us to handle. I didn’t want to threaten
the integrity(完整)of his hard shell. I had gotten used to it, and it made me feel secure.
But when my relationship and career took a hit a year ago at the same time, things had to change. I was
facing serious questions about my own nature, and I wanted to know that he had faced them, too. I needed to
know how he had found his way, because I felt like I had lost mine.
In a severe moment of desperation, it occurred to me that sending an email might be the key. An email
can be crafted(精心制作)slowly and carefully. I could speak at a comfortable distance and give him room to
adjust. He’d be up in his office—a comfortable place filled with bookshelves, dusty CD-ROMs and piles of
old newspapers. I’d be at my desk in an apartment 20 minutes away.
So I wrote to him. I told him about my regrets and fears, and I asked him to answer, if he felt like it, and
to share something about himself, something that would give me much-needed perspective on my life,
especially on relationship and career.
Para 1: Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box.
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Para 2: I closed the email and started to cry.
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7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Has Priya not come home as yet?” Surya asked. He had just returned from work. He was a cashier in the
State Bank of Hyderabad, while his wife, Sharada a lab assistant in Reddy College for Women. Their daughter,
Priya, was a Class X student in Saint Anne's School around six kilometers away. There was a direct bus from
Priya's school.
“She should have been here by 4.30. It is 5:30 now and she still has not come,"Sharada replied.＂
Yesterday too she was late. In fact, since the last few weeks she has been coming home late."
“Did you ask her?”
“Yes, I did, last week.”
“What did she say?”
“She numbed something about spending time with her best friend, then she kept quiet. You know she isnot very forthcoming.One day she would be become an engineer or doctor."Priya was to appear for the Class
X examination in April the next year. This was the month of July and her studies had started in real earnest.
Morning six to eight she went for Maths and Physics tuition, and in the evening seven to eight for Chemistry.
The next day, Surya happened to discus Priya's strange behaviour with his colleague, Durga, who too had
a teenaged daughter.
“Surya, you should not take it so lightly. I have an idea. My brother, Ajay, works in a Detective Agency. I
will tell him. I am sure he will agree to follow her. Since Priya does not know him, she will not get
suspicious.”
Surya kept silent for a while, finally agreed.
On Wednesday, Surya got a call in the office.
“Hello! Surya? This is Ajay?”
“Yes, Ajay. Any news?”
“Plenty. Can you come to Arts College at 4.30 in the evening?”
“Why?”
“I will explain when we meet.”
Sharp at 4.30, Surya parked his scooter in front of the Arts College Building. Ajay was waiting for him.
“Come with me, “he said. They went behind the building and took a path which led to a small Hanuman
Temple. Surya had been there with Priya a couple of times and they both quite liked the serenity of the
place.When they reached the place, Ajay asked him to quietly look from behind a boulder.
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As Surya looked, he was surprised
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“I left my paintings in the temple. I want to become a painter.” Priya answered on the sofa.
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A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of
visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents’ eagerly. On
the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying
their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting
for them joyfully.
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly
“Grandpa, we are back!”
Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair
but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly
and maybe couldn’t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔强地), “I can!”
Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time.
They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees
stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like
soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by
their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs...How many merry moments they spent with
Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn't get up. This made them worried. “We’d think out a way to cheer him up.” Jack
said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being
caged!” Jack shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Jack’s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”
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Berlin thought it was a good idea.
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Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
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Two months to save my girl’s life
As my feet pounded the pavement, sweat dripped down my forehead and back. “Just a little bit further,” I
told myself, determined to push forward. Though I’d never been much of a runner, I had a crucial motivation
to save my little girl, Bridie. Born in January 2017, she had beautiful big blue eyes. But shortly after her
arrival, doctors pointed out that her head was measuring quite large. Within days, she was diagnosed with
sagittal craniosynostosis. Doctors explained that she’d need surgery. They also noticed that her limbs and
fingers were measuring quite short, so Bridie went through genetic testing to find out why. When the results
came back, my wife and I met with the specialist. “Bridie has Mainzer-Saldino syndrome,” he said. He also
revealed the rare condition would cause reinal (视网膜的) degeneration, meaning she could go blind and
develop kidney (肾) disease.
So, when Bridie fell ill in 2019 with common flu, it caused a loss to her little body. Sadly, the
medications she needed to help her recover weakened her kidneys even further. By December that year, her
specialist revealed they were only functioning at 30 percent. “If it gets any worse, she will need to start
dialysis (透析),” he admitted, adding that a transplant might be required sooner than we first thought.
It broke my heart, and I knew I had to step up to help save my girl. So I volunteered to give her one of
my kidneys right away. After undergoing multiple tests, I was declared a match. But there were still several
barriers I had to overcome before I had the all-clear to donate.
“You’ll have to lose 15 kilos before we consider you fit to transplant,” the specialist told me in June. He
gave me two months to get into shape. At 96.5 kilos, I wasn’t overweight, but I needed to lower my BMI to be
fit for the surgery.
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In November, the big day finally arrived.
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It was six o’clock when Breanna heard her mother’s phone receive a text message as it’s at on the kitchen
bench. “Mum, I bet it’s Dad!” Breanna said and jumped up from the sofa, books spilling out in front of her.
She had been deciding which story her dad would read in one of his funny voices for the night. Breanna’s
mum rubbed her temples (太阳穴) and sighed softly. “Honey, would you mind seeing if that’s Daddy? I’ve got
a bad headache but I want to start cooking a lovely meal for us to enjoy tonight.”
“Sure, mum,” Breanna skipped into the kitchen to check the phone. Her dad had been away for two
whole nights working on a malfunction (故障) at his company’s warehouse that was at risk of theft. Breanna
felt sure he’d been able to act like a superhero and save the day — but did it have to take so long? She picked
up the phone and read the message, “Just leaving now — can’t wait to see you both.” Breanna confirmed
excitedly, “It’s from Daddy! He’s on his way home!”
Her mother managed a weak smile as her daughter clapped her hands with joy. It had been four months
since she’d lost her job and with only one income to support the family. Her husband had taken on as many
shifts and extra duties as he could to make ends meet. Times were tough and he was working long hours, but it
made the time Breanna spent with her daddy even more special. “Oh, that’s wonderful news. Now let’s see
what I can find to eat,” her mother rose painfully from the sofa and added.
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“Great! Mum’s got a bad headache but I’m going to help her cook dinner. See you soon!” Breanna sent
her dad a quick reply.
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