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高考英语语法专题复习
专题 13 读后续写强化训练
目 录
一、读后续写....................................................................................3
Passage 1.......................................................................................3
Passage 2.......................................................................................5
Passage 3.......................................................................................7
Passage 4.......................................................................................9
Passage 5....................................................................................11
Passage 6.....................................................................................13
Passage 8.....................................................................................17
Passage 9....................................................................................19
Passage 10..................................................................................21
Passage 11...................................................................................24
Passage 12...................................................................................26
Passage 13...................................................................................29
Passage 14...................................................................................31
二．参考范文及解析......................................................................34
Passage 1.....................................................................................34Passage 2.....................................................................................37
Passage 3.....................................................................................40
Passage 4.....................................................................................42
Passage 5.....................................................................................45
Passage 6.....................................................................................49
Passage 7.....................................................................................52
Passage 8.....................................................................................55
Passage 9.....................................................................................58
Passage 10...................................................................................61
Passage 11...................................................................................64
Passage 12...................................................................................67
Passage 13...................................................................................70
Passage 14...................................................................................73一、读后续写
Passage 1
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。
Long ago ，in a remote village ，there was a place known
as the House of 1 ，000 Mirrors ，which a great number of
people visited every day.Nobody knew why the house had
been built with so many mirrors.
A small happy little dog heard of this place and decided to
pay a visit himself.He ran all of his way with a happy heart.So
long was the way that he spent many days on his way.When
he arrived ， although tired ，he jumped happily up the stairs
to the doorway of the house.There was a hole in the door.He
looked through the hole with his ears lifting high and his tail shaking
as fast as it could.To his great surprise ，he found himself looking
at 1 ，000 other happy little dogs with their tails shaking just as
fast as his.He laughed a lot ，and was answered with 1 ，000
great smiles just as warm and kind as his. As he left the
House ，he said to himself ，"This is a wonderful place.I will
come back and visit it often.And I will tell all my friends to comehere to enjoy the wonderful sight."
In this same village ，another little dog ，who was sad
and in blue all the day ，also decided to visit the House.After
running on the way for so long a time ，he felt tired as well
as depressed.He slowly climbed the stairs and hung his head low
as he looked into the hole in the door.To his great surprise ， he
saw the 1 ，000 unfriendly dogs looking at him ，so he barked at
them right away.
Then he was terrified to see the 1 ，000 little dogs barking back
at him.
Instead ，the happy little dog came back together with lots of
good friends.Passage 2
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。
I used to be very active in sports and games when I was in
primary school.I won the B Division long jump and was a good
sprinter(短跑运动员). As a result ，I was chosen to represent the
school in the long jump and relay events at the District Sports
Meet.Before the sports meet ，I had put in a lot of hard work and
dedication during the training sessions.I woke up early every
morning to go for runs and did countless drills to improve my
technique.My teammates and I supported and encouraged each other
during training ，pushing ourselves to do better and achieve
our goals.
The meet lasted two days.I had no events scheduled for the
first day.So I kept myself busy by watching the others
compete.Large tents were provided for the young competitors
on one side of the track.Despite being assigned the last tent
that was furthest from the track ， I made the best of the
situation by decorating it with our school colours and creating a
supportive atmosphere.The next day ，I was getting ready for my events.The long
jump was scheduled for the early afternoon ，followed by the
8×50 m relay later in the afternoon.I thought I was a pretty
good jumper ， but as the competition began ，I realized I
was vastly outclassed.We finished our jumps ，and I came in
fourth place ，just missing out on a medal.
That was disappointing ， but I reminded myself that we
still had a chance in the 8×50m relay ， for which I was
assigned to run the fifth leg.The race date arrived.We filed into
our assigned spots and prepared for the race.After a tense minute
or so ，I heard the starter's gun go off.When the first runners
took off ， I watched nervously and excitedly as my team
runners kept up with the others.As they got closer ，I realized
we were at least in second place.
My turn arrived and I took the baton(接力棒)cleanly and began
my run.
As a result，I left the meet empty-handed.Passage 3
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
It is hot in late July in Washington ，D.C.Lisa was familiar
with the heat waves.Every summer she and her brother Jamal
came to stay with their grandmother for the month of July.
It was a hot afternoon.Suddenly it occurred to Lisa that there
might be some secrets in the attic( 阁 楼 ) ，so she decided to
take a look around there.
Up in the attic ，Lisa found everything was covered in a fine
layer( 层 ) of dust.The heat in the house rose upwards.Lisa
thought briefly about turning around and heading
downstairs.But something pushed her to investigate the attic
further.She had the sense that in these dusty boxes something
important was waiting for her.
As Lisa began going through the boxes ，she came across
a picture of a pretty girl with"Maud"
written across the bottom.She stared at the photograph.Maud
was her grandmother ， and it was hard to believe that thewrinkled woman downstairs had been this laughing ，lovely girl.
"Lisa honey!"She heard her grandmother call."Come take a
break and have some tea."Lisa went downstairs and took the
picture with her."Grandma ，is this really you?"
Her grandmother laughed ，"What ，you can't believe it?
Yes ，that's me;it was taken almost sixty years ago."
"You'd be surprised ， Lisa ， "her grandmother
responded."Adults ， all of us ， were once young and
irresponsible like you."
"I don't think Mum was ever like that..."said Lisa.She
couldn’t imagine her strict ，hardworking mother doing anything
slightly irresponsible.Her mother held the family together and took
care of Lisa and Jamal.
"Your mother..."her grandmother's voice faded(逐渐消失) as
she carefully chose her words. "When your father died ，your
mother was just a girl herself.You were a baby ，and Jamal was
only two. She had to grow up fast.She loves you two so
much ，and that's why she's so strict."
Lisa nodded.She knew her grandmother was right.Lisa
finished her tea ，thanked her grandmother ，and turned to
go back upstairs.
"Lisa!"her grandmother called ， as Lisa climbed thestairs."There's a box of your parents'things in the corner up
there."
Opening the first letter ，she looked through until she saw
her father’s signature:Daryl.
Passage 4
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。
My name is John and I must share with you an event which took
place on Flight 1553 out of DCA.
My wife and I were travelling to Miami to celebrate an
achievement for her and as you can imagine ，we were looking
forward to fun ，sun and laughter.We boarded the aircraft ，without a care in the world.It was cold
in Washington and we were ready for Florida.
Shortly after taking my seat ，I began to feel sick.I knew
something wasn't right but just couldn’t find out what was
happening.Being a doctor and a stubborn man ，I resisted efforts
by my wife to call for assistance.As the aircraft began its
departure roll ， I lost consciousness for a short amount of
time.
As I came around ， I quickly realized a few
things.Firstly ， something very bad had happened to
me.Secondly ，the aircraft was too heavy with the fuel to go
back home.Thirdly ， my loss of consciousness had been so
deep that I found myself out of control.So not only did I have
a medical issue to deal with ，but also I had to figure out how to
deal with an embarrassing experience.
My wife gathered the crew as soon as it was safe to move about
and I made my way to the washroom to attempt to clean up.I did
my best and the flight crew members were so supportive ，
checking on me often and reassuring me that there was nothing to
be embarrassed about.
It was their sympathy and support that helped me so
much.During the flight they kept watching over me and Isuddenly had a small group of nurses ，bringing blankets ，
food ，drinks and caring and smile.I was thankful to them.
Upon landing ， I remained in my seat ， allowing other
people to go first.
Hearing that ， the captain left and returned a couple of
minutes later with a pair of his own blue jeans.
Passage 5
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。
Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old girl.
One day when she and her mother were checking out at thegrocery store ，Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace ，by which she
was totally defeated.How eagerly she wanted it!But when ，she
saw the price ， her heart sank a little.She gathered up her courage
and asked her mother if she would buy it for her. Her mother
said ，"Well ，it is a pretty necklace ，but it costs an awful
lot of money.I can buy you the necklace ， but when we get
home ，we should make up a list of housework that you can do to
pay for the necklace."Jenny agreed immediately ，feeling a burst
of joy.So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her.Jenny
worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every
day.Soon Jenny paid off the pearls.
Jenny had a very loving daddy.When Jenny went to bed ，he
would read Jenny her favourite story.
One night when he finished the story ， he
said ，"Jenny ，do you love me?""Oh ，yes ，Daddy ，you
know I love you ，"the little girl said delightedly ，with a
broad smile on her face."Well ， then ， give me your
pearls."Hearing that ， Jenny froze there ， an anxious
expression twisting her face."Oh!Daddy ，not my pearls!But you
can have Rosy ，my favourite doll.Remember her?You gave her to
me last year for my birthday.Okay?""Oh no ， darling ， that’s
okay."Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss ，gently andcalmly."Good night ，little one."
A week later ，her father once again asked Jenny after her
story ，"Do you love me?""Oh yes ， Daddy ，you know I
love you ，"the little girl murmured softly ，trying to escape from
her father's eyes. "Well ，then ，give me your pearls.""Oh ，
Daddy ，not my pearls!But you can have Ribbons ，my toy
horse.Do you remember her?She is my favourite ，"the little
girl begged."No ， that's okay ， "her father said ， smiling
broadly and sweetly and brushed her cheek again with a kiss."God
bless you ，little one.Sweet dreams."
Several days later ，when Jenny's father came in to read her
story ，Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed.
Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered ， the father
dragged out a blue box.Passage 6
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。
On a cold windy day ，a poor boy tried to pay his way through
school by selling goods door to door.
Wandering on the street ， he was not a successful
seller.What's worse ，he found that he only had one dime( 一
角 硬 币 ) left.His empty stomach reminded him constantly
that for days he hadn't eaten anything.He had no choice but to
beg for a meal at the next house.Hesitantly he knocked at the door
， thinking about what to say when it opened.However ，he
lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the
door."What can I do for you?"asked the young woman.The boy
paused for a while. "Would you please give me some...a drink
of water?"the boy dared not look directly into her eyes. She
looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give
him energy so she brought him a glass of milk.His head rising
and small hands taking the cup ，he drank it up slowly ，andthen asked ， "How much do I owe you?""You don't owe me
anything ， "she replied with a warm smile on her face. "My
mother has taught me never to accept pay for a
kindness."Deeply moved ，he said sincerely ， "Then I shall
thank you from the bottom of my heart."As the boy left that
house ， he not only felt stronger physically ， but it also
increased his faith in the whole human race.As a matter of
fact ，he was about to give up and quit before that point.
Years later the young woman became critically ill.However ，
the local doctors were unable to give the effective medical
treatment.Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city ，
where specialists could be called in to cure her rare
disease.Among those famous specialists ， Dr Howard Kelly
was called in for the consultation.When he heard the name of the
town she came from ， a strange light filled his
eyes.Immediately ， he rose and went down through the
hospital hall into her room.
Dressed in his doctor's gown ，he went in to see her.
The bill was sent to her room.
Passage 7
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。As he lay awake that night ，Tony could hear his parents
discussing his sister Alice's birthday.It was just two days
away.Birthdays were always a lot of fun ，even though there
was no money for store- bought gifts.Nearly all of toys he and
his sister had were homemade.There was nothing wrong with
that ，he knew.Like many families in this part ，they were
poor.
This birthday would be different ，though.Alice was older
now ，and he'd seen how her eyes lit up when she saw the
new doll at Honey House ，a neighbourhood store just down
the road from their house.
How he longed for her to have it!An idea finally came to him just
before he went to bed.After a quick breakfast the following
morning ，he placed a tin can and a piece of string in a large
bag.Then he tied the bag to the handlebars of his bike and
headed toward a village hill.
After a long journey ， he reached his destination ， the
mango forest.There were already two other boys there.Tony
grabbed his bag and set to work immediately.The smaller trees
had already been picked over pretty well ，but he was able to
find a half-dozen mangoes before noon.
When the sun was high overhead ， the hard workbegan.Nearly all of the taller trees held ripe mangoes but they
were well beyond reach.The other boys took their fruit and
went away.Tony used his pocket knife to cut a long piece of
bamboo.Then he took the tin can from the bag ，tied it to
one end of the bamboo stick ，and walked over to the base of
the mango tree.
He stayed there ， holding the tin can high up into the
tree.His efforts were occasionally rewarded when a mango
dropped into the can.After a while his neck ached from
looking upward ， and his arms grew sore.He kept at it ，
though ，and by late afternoon his bag was nearly full.
On the way back to town ，Tony began to worry that the other boys
might already have sold or traded their mangoes with Honey
House.
The following morning ，Alice walked into the kitchen and
took a seat at the breakfast table.Passage 8
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。
It was a Saturday afternoon.The colour of the sky was
changing ，first light grey ，then dark grey ， and finally
dark and dense.The wind was blowing heavily ，and the trees
were swaying in the strong wind.It began to rain cats and
dogs.Soon ，the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
On such a stormy afternoon ，my mother took my five-
year-old brother ，Christopher ，and me to a new big toy store
she had read about in the newspaper."So many toys ， "the
advertisement had shouted in full and flashy colour ，"that we
had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!"
Christopher and I couldn't have been more excited.We ran across
the parking lot ，through the cold and biting rain ，as fast as
our little legs could carry us.We left our mother outside to
battle with the frustrating umbrella ，which never worked whenshe wanted it to."Christine!Take care of your young
brother!"Mother shouted at the top of her voice.
"Christine!I'm going to find the Lego section(乐高积木区)!
There's a new pirate ship I want ，and I have four dollars!
Maybe I can buy it!"Christopher exclaimed and ran off
excitedly.I only half heard him.I took a right turn and ，to my
wide-eyed delight ，found myself in the midst of the Barbie( 芭
比)World.
I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple maths in my head
when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the
storm outside.I jumped at the noise ，dropping the doll to the
floor.The lights flickered( 闪 烁 ) once and died ， covering
everything in a blanket of blackness.Thunder continued to shake
the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds ，
casting frightening shadows on my mind.
"Oh no ，"I thought ，"where's Christopher?""Christine ，I'm here."
Passage 9
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。
Jim slumped on the couch.Mother's Day was coming up ，
and he didn't have a present."How can I buy a present without
any money?"he thought.
Jim picked up the newspaper that was lying on the couch.He
noticed a large advertisement on the front page.The local
department store was sponsoring a contest."Tell us why your
mum is special and win a shopping spree( 疯 狂 购 物 )for
her，"said the ad.
"This is perfect!"thought Jim.He ran to his room with the
newspaper.Taking a pencil and a blank piece of paper from hisdesk ，he started to write.
"My mum is the best mother in the world.She always makes a
lunch for me to take to school ， and she never forgets my
dessert.She reads as many books to me before bed as I
want.She always remembers to check under the bed for
monsters.And she gives the best hug ，but never in front of
my friends ，who would laugh at me for hugging my mum."
Jim liked what he had written.He copied it neatly and got an
envelope and a stamp from his dad. He ran to the mailbox with
his entry( 参 赛 作 品 ) . "Mum will love having a shopping
spree ，"he thought.
Jim checked the mailbox everyday for his prize.Days passed
by ， and then weeks.Soon it was the day before Mother's
Day.Jim sillhadn't heard anything about the contest.
"What am I going to do now?"he wondered.He didn't have
a present ，and he didn't have a shopping spree ，and he still
didn't have any money.He had to think of something.Jim
closed his eyes and curled his toes and thought so hard that his ears
hurt.
Suddenly he had an idea.The next morning Jim handed his present to his mum.
Passage 10
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。
An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along
with his 45-year-old highly educated son.Suddenly a crow(乌鸦)
perched( 栖 息 )on their window.The father asked his
son ，"What is this?"The son replied ，"It is a crow."
After a few minutes ， the father asked his son for the
second time ，"What is this?"The son said ， "Father ，Ihave just now told you.It's a crow!"
After a little while ，the old father again asked his son for the
third time ，"What is this?"
At this time some expression of irritation(恼怒)was felt in the
son's tone when he said to his father with a rebuff(生硬回绝)."It's a
crow ，a crow."A litle while later ，the father again asked his
son the fourth time ，"What is this?"
This time ，the son shouted at his father ，"Why do you keep
asking me the same question again and again ，although I have told
you so many times'IT IS A CROW’.Are you not able to understand
this?"
A little later thefather went to his room and came back with an
old tattered(破旧的)diary ，which he had kept since his son was
born.On opening a page ，he asked his son to read that page.When
the son read it ， the following words were written in the
diary:"Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa
when a crow suddenly landed on the window edge.My son asked me
23 times what it was ，and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a
crow.I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same
question.I did not at all feel irritated but instead felt affection( 喜
爱)for my innocent(天真无邪的)son."
After reading the diary ，the son's eyes were filled with tears.Feeling ashamed ，the son got down on his knees before his
father.
Passage 11
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。
After being busy for half a year ，my parents decided to drive
me to a scenic spot outside the city to have fun.Joyfully ， we
planned our driving route.Then ，on a December Saturday morning ，my dad started
his car and we set off with great expectation.Before long ，we
left the noisy city and came to the mountains.There were few
vehicles on the road and the trees alongside were pretty.We felt
so excited!
As a few hours passed ，we drove onto a narrow road.And
minutes later ， we found a river not far away from the
road.The beach was very wide ，and we wanted to have a rest
there for a while.So my dad turned our car and drove towards
it.Soon ， we were driving on the sandy beach.Moments
later ， our car wheels were struggling in the increasingly soft
sand.But my dad wanted to get closer to the river.
Before he regretted it ，our car had got stuck in the sand.My dad
tried to turn around or move back ， but the car didn't move.We
were worried ， trapped in the middle of nowhere.Even
worse ，it began raining and was cold.We got out of the car and
tried to push it ，but failed.After a couple of minutes ，we were
tired and our hair and coats were a little wet.But the car only sank
further into the sand.
Anxiously ， we walked to the road ， eager to stop a
vehicle and let it help pull our car out of the sand.Our coats
and hair were wetter and wetter.Before the journey ， wehadn’'t prepared umbrellas or carried any food.Now ，we were
hungry and cold ， standing in the rain.After waiting for a
long time ， there wasn't one vehicle passing.
Just when we were helpless ，we saw a farmhouse not far
away."Can they help us?"I asked.My dad was doubtful.Still ，
we reached there ， and found it was a big family.They
seemed poor and unfriendly.My dad told them our problem and
begged them to help us pull our car out.
To our surprise ，they nodded without thinking.
My dad was so grateful that he handed some money to the family
to thank them.Passage 12
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。
Mo was waiting in the corridor outside her class.She was feeling
sick.She had two exams that day and physics first.She really hated
physics.It was her worst subject.Terry looked back at her from
the front of the line ， and then looked away quickly.Mo
thought she looked guilty.She didn’t have a problem with
physics.She didn't have a problem with anything...Miss Perfect!
"Hi ， Mo ， it's your favourite exam today ， "said
Nima ，laughing as she joined the line.Terry was looking at
Mo again."So what's wrong with her?"asked Nima."I thought
you were friends.""Yes ，so did I ，"said Mo."But she hasn't
spoken to me for two weeks now.She promised to help me
review for the physics exam too ，but then she ignored all my
calls and texts.And when I rang her house ，her mum just told
me she was busy.She's forgotten who her friends are!"said Mo
angrily."Are you listening to me?"Mr Reed was talking to the classand the other students were going into the exam room.
Mo couldn't answer question number five.She looked up and saw
Terry sitting two rows in front of her.Mo couldn't believe it!Terry
was holding her phone on her knee under the table and reading
from it.Is that how Terry always got such good grades?She felt
really angry at Terry ，but she didn't know what to do.She
thought about telling the teacher ， but:what would everyone
else think of her?"Stop writing and put your pens
down ， "said Mr Reed as he started to collect the exam
papers.Oh ，no ，Mo hadn't answered two of the questions.She
was going to fail again!
Mo wanted to talk to Terry at lunch time ，but she couldn't
find her anywhere.The next exam was history.That was Mo's
favourite subject but she wasn't feling good.Mo went to the
library to study ， but she couldn't concentrate.She didn't
know what to do about Terry.She thought about telling a
teacher ，but everyone would hate her if she did that."It isn't
fair!"she thought."Terry was getting good grades by cheating
all the time ，"thought Mo.Just then ，Mr Reed walked
past her table."Mr Reed..."
Mo was sitting behind Terry again in the history exam that
afternoon.Mo was feeling terible.Why had she told Mr Reed?Butit was too late now.And anyway ，Terry didn't want to be her
friend! Mr Reed wanted her to look at him and nod if she saw that
Terry was cheating in the exam.
She was working on the last question when she saw that Terry
had her phone under the table.
Mo was walking towards the school gate ，when she heard
footsteps behind her.
Passage 13
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。One winter Sunday ，my little sister ，Colleen ，and I
built the greatest snowman ever.We gave him a carrot nose ，
beautiful hat ，cosy scarf and gloves.He was a masterpiece(杰作).
The next morning when looking outside ，we smiled lovingly
at him over our meal.We gave him a high-five as we passed by on
our way to school.A lot of kids went past our house ，so he was
the hot topic at our school that morning.It was our pride!
The day dragged on until finally we could rush home.But
as our yard came into sight ，we saw something wrong.The
snowman was gone!We only found a broken stick here ，a
torn glove there and balls of snow everywhere.Worst of all ，
the snowman's once-proud carrot nose lay limp(无力的) and
half-eaten.
What had happened?We were both astonished and angry.But
then ，we were only kids ，who wouldn't have anything taking
away our happiness.Actually we knew only one thing:Our
snowman would rise again.And so we rebuilt him.
The next day we came home to find another mess on the front
lawn( 草 坪 ) .For the rest of the week ， the destruction was
repeated daily.Each afternoon we'd return to find our snowman
had fallen apart ，and then we built him again.
By Saturday morning ，we had a plan.We borrowed a reallybig bucket( 水 桶 )from Mum ， filled it with water and left it
outside.The next morning ，it was frozen solid.We packed snow
all around the ice block as the base(底座)of the snowman.Then we
built the other parts of it once again.The trap was set ，and we
waited for the snowman bullies(破坏者)to come.
Monday morning ，hiding behind the window ，we soon saw
what we were waiting for.
Seeing their pained look ，we couldn't help laughing.
Passage 14
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。
After 21 years of marriage ，my wife wanted me to take another
woman out to dinner and a movie.
It's hard to imagine that the other woman was my mother ，who
has been a widow for 19 years ，but I am too busy to visit her
often.That night I called to invite her to go out for dinner and a
movie.
"What's wrong?Are you well?"she asked.My mother is the type
of woman who suspects that a late night call or a surprise invitation
is a sign of bad news.
"I thought that it would be pleasant to spend some time with
you ，"I responded."Just the two of us."
That Friday after work ，as I drove over to pick her up ，I was
a bit nervous.When I arrived at her house ，I noticed that she ，
too ，seemed to be nervous about our date.She waited in the
door with her coat on.She had curled her hair and was wearing
the dress that she had worn to celebrate her last wedding
anniversary.She smiled from a face that was as beautiful as an
angel's.
"I told my friends that I was going to go out with my son ，and
they were impressed ，"she said ，as she got into the car."They
can't wait to hear about our meeting."We went to a restaurant that ，although not elegant ，was very
nice and cosy.My mother took my arm as if she were the First
Lady.After we sat down ，I had to read the menu.Her eyes could
only read large print.Halfway through the entries ，I lifted my eyes
and saw Mum sitting there staring at me with a smile on her lips.
"It was I who used to have to read the menu when you were
small ，"she said."Then it's time you relaxed and let me return the
favour ，"I responded.
During the dinner ，we had an agreeable conversation—nothing
extraordinary but catching up on recent events of each other's
life.We talked so much that we missed the movie.
As we arrived at her house later ，she said ，"Ill go out with
you again ，but only if you let me invite you."I agreed.
At that moment I understood the importance of saying ， in
time ，"I LOVE YOU."二．参考范文及解析
Passage 1
【故事大意】一只快乐的小狗和一只悲伤的小狗分别去了一
个叫千镜屋的地方。快乐的小狗在屋 子里看到了 1000 只和他
一样快乐的小狗，他感到非常开心，决定经常来这里，并且告
诉他的朋友 们也来欣赏这个美妙的景象。而悲伤的小狗看到
1000 只对他不友好的小狗，他立刻向这些小狗 发出咆哮，却害
怕地看到 1000 只小狗也咆哮着回应他。
【参考范文】Then he was terrified to see the 1 ，000 little
dogs barking back at him.He felt depressed and frightened ，and
decided to leave.As he left ，he thought that place was a really
terrible place ， and there were so many unfriendly dogs who
barked at him.He decided that he would never come back and visit it
again and he would advise all his friends not to come here to see the
horrible dogs.Thus he left the house and never returned.
Instead ，the happy little dog came back together with lots of
good friends.They jumped and laughed around the House of 1 ，
000 Mirrors.Therefore ，they saw thousands of laughing dogs in
the mirrors.They felt happy.In fact ，all the faces in the world aremirrors.What kind of reflections you see in the faces of the people
you meet depends on what expression they find in your
face.Thus ， to live in a wonderful place full of kindness and
love ，you have to be a kind person with love in your heart first.
【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：depressed adj. 抑郁的，沮丧的
frightened adj. 受惊的，害怕的 terrible adj. 糟糕的；令人极为
不快的 horrible adj. 可怕的，令人恐惧的 depend on 取决于
句型：1. What kind of reflections you see in the faces of the
people you meet depends on what expression they find in your face.
(主语从句，定语从句，宾语从句)
释义：你在见到的人们脸上所看到的反应，取决于他们在你
的脸上发现的表情。
2.Thus ， to live in a wonderful place full of kindness and
love ，you have to be a kind person with love in your heart first.
(不定式短语作目的状语)
释义：因此，要生活在一个充满善意和爱心的美好地方，首
先你必须是一个心地善良、心怀爱意的人。
【范文点评】所给范文很好地延续了原文的情节和主题，给
出了一个积极向上的结局，体现了"积极的心态可以互相影
响"的主题。
原文主要叙述了一只快乐的小狗和一只悲伤的小狗分别前往
千镜屋的经历，反映了不同心态如何影响两者对同一环境的感知。在此基础上，续写通过细腻的情感描绘和对比，深入探讨
了心态与环境之间互相影响的关系。
首先，快乐的小狗的经历展现了积极情绪的力量。它在到达
千镜屋后，看到镜中映射出 1000 只快乐的小狗，情感上呈现
了"兴奋与期待的旅程 → 见到1000 只快乐的小狗的反映 → 愉
快地与 其他小狗互动 → 决定带更多朋友来共享快乐"的心路
历程。这只小狗及其经历充满了生机与活 力，彰显了积极心态
的美好影响。
与之形成鲜明对比的是，悲伤的小狗在同样的环境中却感受
到孤独与恐惧。续写中"He felt depressed and frightened ，and
decided to leave."这一句直接传达了他的绝望与无助。在看到镜
中 反射出不友好的小狗时，悲伤的小狗选择了逃避，反映出它
内心的封闭与消极态度。这种对比增 强了故事的张力，让读者
感受到不同情绪对生活体验的巨大影响。
续写中的细节描写也颇具画面感。例如，"They jumped and
laughed around the House.. Therefore ， they saw thousands of
laughing dogs in the mirrors."两句生动地展现了快乐的小狗与朋
友 们的欢聚场景，传达了无忧无虑的快乐。这不仅丰富了故事
的层次感，还增强了情感的共鸣，使读 者能够真切感受到那份
快乐与自由。
最 后 ， 结 尾 部 分 的 哲 理 升 华 尤 为 深 刻 。 "What kind of
reflections you see in the faces of the people you meet depends onwhat expression they find in your face."一句不仅深化了故事的主
题，也 引发读者对自身态度与内心世界的深思，强调了心态在
生活中的重要性。这种反思使得故事更加 引人入胜，充满了教
育意义。总的来说，范文通过生动的情感描写与深刻的哲理思
考，成功地延续 了原文的思想，给读者留下了深刻的印象，激
励人们以积极的心态面对生活中的每一次挑战。
Passage 2
【故事大意】作者小学的时候非常积极地参与体育活动并参
加体育比赛，在跳远和短跑两个项目 中表现出色。因此，作者
被选中代表学校参加地区运动会的跳远比赛和接力赛。比赛当
天，作者 在跳远这个项目上只获得了第四名，无缘奖牌。虽然
对这一结果很失望，作者提醒自己在接力赛 上仍有获得奖牌的
机会。
【参考范文】My turn arrived and I took the baton cleanly and
began my run.The air rushed past me as I moved closer to the next
runner.Then disaster struck!The baton flew out of my hand when I
moved forward.Because I was young and flexible ，I was able to
quickly pick it up and continue the race. However ，the accident
cost us valuable time.When I handed the baton to the next runner ，
I knew everything was lost.He ran with all his might ，but it was
too late.We'd blown our chance at a medal.As a result ， I left the meet empty-handed.I felt terrible for
letting the team down due to my fault.
Not knowing what to say to my teammates ，I cried sadly.I was
so guilty and ashamed.However ， instead of blaming the failure
on me ，my teammates gathered around me and kept comforting
me that what was done was done ， for which we had no
regret.From the experience ，I learned about failure and success
and how to deal with them.I have been bearing that lesson I learned
that day in mind ever since and it urges me to look forward.
【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：flexible adj. 灵活的 valuable adj.
宝贵的 with all one's might 竭尽全力 blow one's chance 错失良
机 urge sb to do sth 敦促某人做某事
句 型 ：1. Not knowing what to say to my teammates ，I cried
sadly. (现在分词短语作状语)
释 义：不知道对我的队友们说什么 ，我伤心地哭了。
2.However ， instead of blaming the failure on me ， my
teammates gathered around me and kept comforting me that what
was done was done ，for which we had no regret.(宾语从句，主语
从句，定语从句)
释义：但是，队友们没有将失败归咎于我，而是围在我身
边，不断地安慰我说，过去的事就让它过去吧，没什么好后悔
的。【范文点评】所给范文很好地延续了原文的情节和主题，呈
现了一个富有情感和教育意义的结局，强调了"团队精神与个人
成长"的主题。
原文主要叙述了作者在地区运动会中的经历，反映了竞技中
面对成功与失败的心态。在此基础上，续写通过细腻的情感描
绘和对比，深入探讨了个人在团队中的角色和应对挑战的能
力。首先，作者在接力赛中的经历展现了面对困难时的韧性。
续 写 中 提 到 "The baton flew out of my hand when I moved
forward."这一情节，直接反映了比赛中突发状况带来的压力。
作者迅速捡起接力棒 并继续奔跑，体现了在逆境中坚持不懈的
精神。这种反应不仅展示了个人的努力，也传达了团队 合作的
重要性。
与之形成鲜明对比的是赛后的失落感。 "I felt terrible for
letting the team down due to my fault."一句准确传达了作者对自
己表现的不满与自责。尽管遭遇挫折，队友们的安慰和支持突
显 了团队精神的力量，让读者感受到相互扶持的重要性。这种
情感的对比增强了故事的深度，让读 者思考在面对失败时如何
借助团队的力量继续前行。
续写中的细节描写也颇具画面感。例如，"...my teammates
gathered around me and kept comforting me..."一句生动展现了
团队成员之间的温情时刻，传递了友谊和团结的价值。这不仅
丰富了故事的情感层次，也让读者能够体会到团队协作带来的支持与鼓励。
最后，结尾部分的哲理升华尤其深刻。"I learned about failure
and success and how to deal with them." 一句不仅总结了此次经
历的教训，也引发读者对成长过程中遭遇的挑战的思考，强调
了面 对失败时应持有的积极态度。这种反思使得故事更加引人
入胜，充满了教育意义。总体来说，范 文通过生动的情感描写
与深刻的反思，成功地延续了原文的思想，激励人们在面对挑
战时以积极 心态迎接未来。
Passage 3
【故事大意】一个叫 Lisa 的女孩去外婆家过暑假。一个炎热
的下午，Lisa 决定去阁楼看看是否有什么秘密。在阁楼里，她
找到了一张外婆年轻时的照片，被这个发现吸引的 Lisa 询问外
婆照片上的人是否就是她。外婆说是她，成年人都曾经年轻
过，Lisa 的母亲也不例外。外婆接着讲述了 Lisa 父母的故事。
Lisa 的父亲早早去世，她的母亲经历了许多困难，出于对 Lisa
和她的弟弟的爱，母亲对他们极其严格。
【参考范文】" Lisa!"her randmother called ，as Lisa climbed
the stairs."There's a box of your parents'things in the corner up
there."Hearing this ，Lisa thought maybe it would help her better
understand her mother.She looked through several of the boxes
before she found the one her grandmother had mentioned.It wassmaller than the others ，with"Laura" ，her mother's name written
on it.When she opened the box ，she found a lot of old letters.
Opening the first letter ，she looked through until she saw her
father's signature:Daryl.These were love letters between her father
and her mother.After Lisa's father first met her mother ，they wrote
to each other regularly.Lisa read through the letters.Her mother was
humorous and charming in the letters.It was a side of her mother that
Lisa had never seen before.She was full of hope about the life that
they would have together.Lisa took these letters
downstairs."Grandma ，"Lisa asked."Will it be okay with Mum if I
read the letters?""Oh ，honey ，"said her grandmother."She was
the one who asked me to show them to you."
【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：mention v. 提及 humorous adj. 幽
默的 charming adj. 迷人的，有魅力的
look through 浏览，翻看
句型：Hearing this ，Lisa thought maybe it would help her
better understand her mother.(现在分词短语 作状语，宾语从句)
释义：听到这些，Lisa 觉得这也许能帮助她更好地理解母
亲。
【范文点评】所给范文很好地延续了原文的情节和主题，成
功展示了 Lisa 在探索父母的过去时光
时的情感变化。根据故事文本分析，续写第一段中，外婆的提示"There's a box of your parents' things in the corner up there"引
导 Lisa 去寻找更多关于父母的故事，呼应了 Lisa 对了解母亲
的渴 望。这一提示不仅激发了她的好奇心，也为接下来的情感
探索奠定了基础。 "When she opened the box ，she found a lot
of old letters."一句与后续内容紧密衔接，合理地铺垫了 Lisa 与
父母之间情 感的交织。
在续写第二段中，Lisa 发现的情书揭示了母亲年轻时幽默和
迷人的一面。通过这段描写，Lisa 感受到母亲在信中的生动个
性："Her mother was humorous and charming in the letters."这一描
写不 仅加深了 Lisa 对母亲的理解，也让读者感受到家庭成员
的情感纽带。 "It was a side of her mother that Lisa had never seen
before."这一强调句精准地传达了 Lisa 的发现与惊讶之情，彰显
了她对母 亲的全新认识，增强了情感的共鸣。
继续阅读信件时，Lisa 看到母亲对未来的希望，进一步丰富
了故事的情感层次。特别是"She was full of hope about the life
that they would have together."一句，展现了母亲对未来的期待和
对爱 的渴望，体现了家庭生活中的乐观与坚持，使读者对
Lisa 的母亲有了更深的理解。
整体而言，范文通过生动的情感描写和细腻的对话，成功地
延续了原文的思想，让读者不仅感 受到 Lisa 对过去的好奇，
更引发了对家庭关系和爱的思考。这种对比与反思，使得故事
更加引人 入胜，体现了家庭往事对个体成长的重要影响。通过Lisa 的探索，读者也能体会到代际之间情感的传递与连接，这
为故事增添了深刻的内涵。
Passage 4
【故事大意】John 和他的妻子乘坐 1553 次航班去迈阿密度
假。在飞机起飞前，John 突然感到不 适，失去了意识。当他
醒来时，他发现自己遇到了一些困难，不仅有健康问题需要处
理，还需要应 对一次尴尬的经历。然而，机组人员的同情和支
持给了 John 很大帮助，他们关心照顾他，给他提 供了心理安
慰和物质上的支持。 John 对他们表示感谢。
【 参 考 范 文 】 Upon landing ， I remained in my seat ，
allowing other people to go first.As I was in my seat ，I looked up
and saw the captain standing with a warm smile."What can I do for
you?"the captain asked.I told him I was OK.I was very embarrassed
and concerned because of the previous things.He said ，"What size
of pants do you wear?"His voice was full of care.I was puzzled and
replied ，"34×34.Why do you ask this?"
Hearing that ，the captain left and returned a couple of minutes
later with a pair of his own blue jeans.The man opened his own
luggage and gave a complete stranger his pants.I didn't know what to
say.Then I looked at my wife ，who smiled and ，without saying a
word ，let me know it was OK.I made my way to the exit and hesaid ， "Change on the aircraft.It is fine."Because of the
experience ，I was thankful to him for his kindness.I made up my
mind to treat others with kindness.
【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：embarrassed adj. 尴尬的 concerned
adj. 关心的，担心的 previous adj. 以前的，先前的 make one's
way to 向……走去 be thankful to sb for sth 因 ……感激某人
make one's mind to do sth 决心做 ……
句型：Then I looked at my wife ，who smiled and without
saying a word ，let me know it was OK.(非限 制性定语从句，宾
语从句)
释义：然后，我看了看妻子，她微笑着， 一言不发，让我知
道一切都没问题。
【范文点评】所给范文很好地延续了原文的情节和主题，给
出了一个符合道德标准的、积极向上的圆满结局，体现了"善待
他人"的主题。
原文主要叙述了 John 和他的妻子在飞往迈阿密的航班上，
John 突发健康问题并失去意识，机 组人员的同情和支持使他
在困难时刻得到了关怀与帮助。在此基础上，续写推理了机长
对 John 的关心，以及他为 John 拿来新裤子的举动，展现了人
性中的温暖。
首先，续写自然有效地承接了原文的情节。开头提到机长关
心 John 的情况，给读者留下了强 烈的期待感。 "The manopened his own luggage and gave a complete stranger his pants."一
句精准地 描述了机长的善意行为，展示了他对乘客的高度关心
和责任感。这种人性化的细节不仅使故事更 具真实感，还体现
了航空服务业中以人为本的理念，令读者对机组人员的关心产
生共鸣。
其次，范文通过 John 的内心独白，深入展现了他在经历这
次事件后的成长与反思。 John 在失 去意识并得到帮助后，重
新审视自己的处境和机组人员的善意。 "I was thankful to
him..."一句表 达了他对机长深深的感激之情，反映了他对人际
关系的重新认识。这种转变不仅提升了故事的情 感深度，还强
调了人与人之间相互关心的重要性。正如机长的举动激励了
John ，John 的反思也在 潜移默化中传达出对他人的善待和理
解。
续写的结尾部分，John 深受感动，并决心将这种善意传递
下去，形成一个良性循环。"I made upmy mind to treat others
with kindness. "这样的总结性表达不仅升华了文章的主题，还
呼应了故 事中最初的困境与解决方案。读者能够感受到，帮助
他人不仅是对他人的支持，也是对自己内心 的抚慰。
整体而言，范文通过细腻的情感描写、明确的情节发展和深
刻的思想反思，成功地延续了原文 的思想，强调了在困境中互
助的重要性。故事中的温情与关怀不仅让读者感受到人性的美
好，也 引发了读者对人与人之间关爱与支持的深思。通过John 的经历，读者意识到以善待他人的态度 去面对生活的重
要性，为故事增添了深刻的内涵。这种反思使得故事更加引人
入胜，展现了人性 中美好的一面，同时也激励读者在日常生活
中传播这种温暖的力量。
Passage 5
【故事大意】八岁的 Jenny 想要一串塑料珍珠项链，她请求
妈妈买给她，妈妈同意了，但要求她通过 做家务来还款。
Jenny 每天认真地完成家务，最终还清了珍珠项链的费用。后
来，Jenny 的爸爸在 给她读完睡前故事后问她是否爱他，
Jenny 迫不及待地说爱他，但当爸爸要求她给他珍珠项链时，
Jenny 开始犹豫。她提出可以给爸爸她最喜欢的娃娃或玩具
马，但爸爸都婉拒了。爸爸给了她一 个亲吻，祝她好梦。
【参考范文】Several days later ，when Jenny's father came in
to read her story ，Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the
bed.When listening to the story ， Jenny was totally absent-
minded ， with her hands holding the necklace tightly and
firmly.When the story came to an end ， unexpectedly ， Jenny
offered her beloved necklace to her father ， with her fingers
trembling automatically.No one knew what the necklace meant to
her.She whispered to her father ，softly and gently ，"Daddy ，
you know Ilove you more than the necklace."Then ，the necklaceslid into her father's hands determinedly.
Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered ， the father
dragged out a blue box.Much to Jenny's amazement ，a beautiful
genuine pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box ，which set her
heart racing. Jenny froze there ，a thrilled expression twisting her
face.Before Jenny was able to say something ，her father brushed a
warm kiss on her face and gathered her into his arms.Holding the
genuine necklace in her hand ， Jenny lifted her lip ， tears
beginning to blur her vision.
【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：absent-minded adj. 心不在焉的
tremble v.颤抖 automatically adv. 不假 思索地，无意识地
whisper v. 低声说 determinedly adv. 坚定地，坚决地 genuine
adj. 真正的； 真诚的 race v. (因害怕、兴奋等)急速跳动 freeze
v. 呆住 thrilled adj. 非常兴奋的，极为激动 的 twist v. 扭曲；
弯曲 blur v. (使)看不清，(使)视线模糊 come to an end 结束
slide into 滑 入 to one's amazement 令某人惊喜的是
句 型：1. When the story came to an end ，unexpectedly ，
Jenny offered her beloved necklace to her father ，with her fingers
trembling automatically.(时间状语从句，with 的复合结构)
释 义：出人意料的是，当故事结束时，Jenny 将心爱的项
链递给了她的父亲，她的手指不自觉地颤 抖着。
2.Much to Jenny's amazement ， a beautiful genuine pearlnecklace lay peacefully in the box ，which set her heart racing.(非
限制性定语从句)
释义：让 Jenny 感到惊讶的是，盒子里放着一条美丽的真的
珍珠项链，这让她心跳加速。
3.Holding the genuine necklace in her hand ，Jenny lifted her
lip，tears beginning to blur her vision. (现在分词短语作状语，独
立主格结构)
释义：Jenny 手中握着那条真的项链，嘴角微微上扬，泪水
开始模糊她的视线。
【范文点评】所给范文很好地延续了原文的情节和主题，给
出了一个感人且积极向上的结局，体现 了"无私与爱的回报"的
主题。原文主要叙述了八岁的 Jenny 对一串塑料珍珠项链的渴
望，她通过 做家务努力向妈妈偿还购买费用，并在爸爸的引导
下，经历了一次关于爱的考验。在此基础上，续 写展现了
Jenny 最终对父爱的回应，以及她所得到的意外惊喜。
首先，续写自然有效地承接了原文的情节。 Jenny 在等待
爸爸的过程中显得十分焦虑， "absent-minded" 一词反映了她
内 心 的 挣 扎 与 期 待 。 "When the story came to an end ，
unexpectedly ， Jenny offered her beloved necklace to her
father ， with her fingers trembling automatically."一句描绘了
Jenny 在情感上的转变，体现了她对父亲深厚的爱超越了物质
的束缚。她的手指不自觉地颤抖，展 现出她内心的紧张与不安，生动地传达出她对这一时刻的重视。
其次，范文通过细腻的情感描写，深入展现了 Jenny 对父爱
的理解和回应。"Daddy ，you know I love you more than the
necklace."一句不仅传达了 Jenny 对爸爸坚定的爱，还反映了她
在成长过 程中的一次重要领悟。她明白了亲情的珍贵，宁愿牺
牲自己的心爱之物，也要表达对爸爸的爱。 她将项链递给爸爸
的瞬间，蕴含着深厚的情感与决心，使得这一幕更加动人。
续写第二段，Jenny 发现爸爸拿出的蓝盒子里面竟然是 一
条真正的珍珠项链。 "Much to Jenny's amazement ，a beautiful
genuine pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box ，which set her
heart racing." 这一细节不仅描述了 Jenny 情感的升华，也向读
者展示了父爱的回馈和惊喜。父亲的举 动传递了爱与牺牲的真
正意义，强调了物质和情感之间的联系。
整体而言，范文通过细腻的情感描写、明确的情节发展和深
刻的思想反思，成功地延续了原文 的思想，强调了爱的无私与
互相回报的重要性。 Jenny 的成长不仅体现在放下对物质的渴
望，更在 于她对家人的爱的深刻理解和感恩。在这段故事中，
读者能够感受到父女之间的深厚情感，也引 发了对亲情与爱的
思考，展现了人性中最美好的一面。这种温情的传递使得故事
更加引人入胜， 激励着每一个人珍惜身边的爱与关怀。Passage 6
【故事大意】一个贫穷的男孩为给自己攒学费在挨家挨户推
销商品，由于饥饿，他向一个年轻女子 讨水喝。年轻女子不求
回报帮助了他，男孩因此心怀感恩。多年以后，女子重病，到
大城市去治 病。一位专家听说该女子来自哪个小镇之后，去了
那名女子的房间。
【参考范文】Dressed in his doctor's gown ，he went in to see
her.He saw her lie on the bed and recognized her at once.Her lovely
face looked pale.He went back to the consultation room and
determined to do his best to save her life.From that day on ，he
gave special attention to her case. Luckily ， after a long
struggle ， the battle was won.Dr Kelly requested the business
office to pass the final bill to him for approval.He looked at it and
then wrote something on the side.
The bill was sent to her room.Hesitantly she took it.She was
afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of
her life to pay it off.Finally she opened it ，on the side of which a
note
caught her attention.She read these words ，"Paid in full with a
glass of milk."signed Dr Howard Kelly.Tears of joy flooded her eyes
as she prayed silently ，"Thank You..."【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：hesitantly adn. 迟疑地 sth catch
one's attention 某物吸引某人的注意力 determine to do sth 决定
做某事 pay off(the debt) 偿清(债务)
句 型 ： Finally she opened it ， on the side of which a note
caught her attention.(which 引导非限制性定 语从句)
释义：最后她打开了账单，账单边上的一条批注引起了她的
注意。
【范文点评】所给范文很好地延续了原文的情节和主题，展
示了"善有善报"的道理。原文主要叙 述了一个贫穷的男孩在讨
水喝的过程中，年轻女子无私地帮助了他。多年后她因病住
院，当年被 她救助过的男孩恰巧是来为她治病的医生。续写自
然衔接了原文的情节，强调了人与人之间的温 暖与回报。
首先，续写有效地承接了原文的情节发展，开篇描绘了医生
看到病人时的情景。"He saw her lie on the bed and recognized her
at once."一句简洁明了，生动展现了医生与病人之间的情感联
系。 通过医生的惊喜和关心，读者能够感受到两人之间久违的
温暖回忆，这种情感的回归增强了故事 的感染力。
其次，范文通过医生对病人的深切关怀，深入展现了善良的
循环。医生决定全力以赴地帮助 她 ，"From that day on ，he
gave special attention to her case."一句不仅表明了医生的责任
感，也彰显 了他内心的感恩之情。这种反思让读者看到，曾经
那一杯牛奶的善行，如今回报为拯救生命的决 心，展现了人性之美。
续写的结尾部分，病人收到账单时的情感变化，体现了强烈
的对比与呼应。通过"Tears of joy flooded her eyes..."一句中细腻
的情感描写，读者不仅看到了她的惊喜与感动，还感受到她对
生活 的感激。这种由衷的感恩与对人性善良的信仰，进一步强
化了文章的主题，呼应了善有善报。
整体而言，范文通过细腻的情感描写、合理的情节推进以及
深刻的思想反思，成功延续了原文 的思想，强调了人与人之间
互相帮助的重要性。故事中充满温情与关怀，不仅让读者感受
到人性 的美好，也激发了读者对人与人之间关爱的深思。通过
这段故事，读者领悟到在日常生活中传递 善意的重要性，使得
整篇文章具有深刻的内涵与启示。
Passage 7
【故事大意】Tony 家境贫寒，他和妹妹所有的玩具几乎都
是自制的。为了给妹妹买她最喜欢的洋 娃娃作为生日礼物，
Tony 去芒果林摘芒果，最终通过努力，他收获了一袋芒果。
【参考范文】On the way back to town ，Tony began to worry
that the other boys might already have sold or traded their mangoes
with Honey House.When finally reaching Honey House ， Tony
just rushed in ， out of breath.The owner of the store looked at him
with a curious look.On hearing Tony's explanation ， the owneropened the bag to check the mangoes.To Tony's disappointment ，
they were not enough to exchange a lovely doll.He walked out with
tears rolling down his face when he met the other boys carrying bags
of mangoes.Knowing Tony's situation ，they decided to gather all
their mangoes to give his sister a dream present.
The following morning ， Alice walked into the kitchen and
took a seat at the breakfast table.When subconsciously reaching out
for a glass cup ，she found a card saying"Look at the sofa."Then
she surprisingly saw the doll she had been dreaming of for a long
time.When Tony said"Happy birthday" ， Alice couldn’t help
crying and hugged him tightly.Touched by the warm atmosphere ，
their parents smiled with pleasure ，knowing their son had grown
up and was reliable enough to take care of his sister. Wealth isn't
always where happiness comes from ，and love is something that
really makes a great difference.
【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：subconsciously adv. 下意识地
atmosphere n. 氛 围 reliable adj. 可靠的 out of breath 上气不接
下气 look at sb with a curious look 用好奇的目光看着某人 to
one's disappointment 令某人失望的是 with tears rolling down
one's face 泪水从某人的脸上滚落下来 reach out for 伸手去拿
hug sb tightly 紧紧拥抱某人 make a difference 起作用，有影响
句型：1. He walked out with tears rolling down his face whenhe met the other boys carrying bags of mangoes.(with 的复合结
构，when 引导时间状语从句)
释义：当他走出门遇到其他拿着一袋袋芒果的男孩们时，他
流下了眼泪。
2.Then she surprisingly saw the doll she had been dreaming of
for a long time. (定语从句) 释 义：然后，她吃惊地看到她长久
以来梦寐以求的洋娃娃。
3.Touched by the warm atmosphere ，their parents smiled with
pleasure ， knowing their son had grown up and was reliable
enough to take care of his sister. (过去分词短语作状语，现在分词
短语作状语，宾语从句)
释义：温暖的气氛感染了他们的父母，他们高兴地笑了，知
道他们的儿子已经长大了，足够可靠去照顾他的妹妹。
【范文点评】所给范文自然有效地延续了原文的情节和主
题，展现了亲情和无私的爱的力量。原文主要叙述了 Tony 为了
给妹妹 Alice 准备生日礼物而努力摘芒果，展现了家庭的贫困与
温暖的亲情。续写很好地承接了 Tony 的努力与期望，以及
Alice 收到礼物时的感动。
首先，续写有效地衔接了原文的情节发展。"When finally
reaching Honey House ，Tony just rushed in ，out of breath."一句
生动描绘了 Tony 心急如焚的状态，传达了他对送妹妹生日礼
物的迫 切期待。接下来商店老板检查芒果的情节，展现了Tony 面临的挫折和无奈。"To Tony's disappointment ，they
were not enough to exchange a lovely doll."一句通过对比，让读者
感受到他内 心的失落与焦虑。
其次，范文通过其他男孩的善良行为，深化了主题。"Knowi
ng Tony's situation ，they decided to gather all their mangoes to
give his sister a dream present."一句体现了邻里之间的团结与支
持，强调 了在逆境中人们相互帮助的精神。通过这一转折，故
事传达了乐于助人的温暖与力量，使得 Tony 的努力得到了更
大的回报。
在结尾部分，Alice 收到生日礼物时的情感描写充满温
情。"When Tony said‘Happy birthday’ ，Alice couldn't help
crying and hugged him tightly."一幕不仅展现了兄妹之间的深厚
感 情，也让读者感受到家庭的温暖与团结。父母看到这一幕，
内心的感动和欣慰也使故事的情感达 到了高潮。
整体而言，范文通过细腻的情感描写、合理的情节发展和深
刻的思想反思，成功地延续了原文 的思想，强调了爱与奉献的
主题。故事中充满了温情与关怀，不仅让读者感受到亲情的美
好，也引 发了读者对生活中爱与支持的深思。通过 Tony 和
Alice 的故事，读者意识到，真正的幸福并不在 于物质，而在
于彼此之间的关爱与陪伴，这使得整篇文章具有深刻的内涵与
启示。Passage 8
【故事大意】作者的母亲带她和五岁的弟弟去 一 家玩具
店。兴奋的姐弟俩先于母亲冲进了商店， 母亲在后面大喊让作
者照顾好弟弟。弟弟跑去了乐高积木区，作者还没来得及跟上
去就被芭比娃 娃吸引住了。沉迷于芭比娃娃的作者被外面的闪
电吓到了，店里的灯灭了， 一切都笼罩在黑暗之 中。作者找不
到弟弟在哪里了。
【 参 考 范 文 】 "Oh no ， "I thought ， "where's
Christopher?"Scared ，I was frozen to the spot ，overcome with
the need to see my brother ，to hug and make certain he was all
right.My stomach twisted and turned inside.I ran up and down the
aisles through the blackness ， panic filling my small chest and
making it difficult to breathe.I knocked into displays of candy and
tripped over toys ， all the while frantically calling my brother's
name.Anxious as I was ， I could barely see his figure.Tears of
frustration and fear trickled down my face ，but I continued to run.
"Christine ，I'm here."Excitement took my breath away—there
in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher.He was standing alone ，
perfectly still ，clutching tightly to the pirate ship set.I began to cry
out from relief ，throwing my arms around him and hugged him
tightly.He hugged me back ， saying ， "I knew if I waitedhere ，Christine ，you would be able to find me."Then ，I took
his hand in mine and we went to find our mother ，who must be
desperately searching the store for us.
【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：aisle n. 走道，过道 frantically
adn. 疯狂地 frustration n. 沮丧 trickle
v. 滴，淌 clutch v. 紧握，抓紧 desperately adv.拼命地 be
frozen to the spot 僵在原地不动 be overcome with 被……充满/充
斥 twist and turn 曲折，扭转 trip over 绊倒 take one's breath
away 令人惊叹 throw one's arms around sb 张开双臂搂住某人
句型：1. Iran up and down the aisles through the blackness ，
panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe. (独立
主格结构)
释 义：我在漆黑的过道里跑来跑去，恐慌填满了我小小的胸
膛，使我难以呼吸。
2.Anxious as I was ，I could barely see his figure.(as 引导让步
状语从句的倒装)
释义：尽管我很焦虑，但我几乎看不见他的身影。
【范文点评】所给范文自然有效地延续了原文的情节和情
感，描绘了作者在黑暗中焦急寻找弟弟 Christopher 的紧张与
恐惧。
原文中描绘了作者和弟弟在玩具店的兴奋情景，而续写则深
入探讨了随之而来的危机与情感 的波动。首先，范文通过细腻的 描 写 展 现 了 作 者 在 黑 暗 中 寻 找 弟 弟 的 焦 虑 与 恐 惧 。
"Scared ，I was frozen to the spot ，overcome with the need to see
my brother..."一句生动传达了她的恐慌和紧张，使 读者能够感
同身受。接下来的描述中，"I ran up and down the aisles through
the blackness ，panic filling my small chest and making it difficult
to breathe."一句通过独立主格结构，生动展现了她的慌 乱和无
助。这种细节描写不仅增强了故事的真实感，也让读者体会到
那种令人窒息的焦虑。
其次，续写中对寻找过程的描绘充满了动态感。"Iknocked
into displays of candy and tripped over toys ， all the while
frantically calling my brother's name."一句有效地表现了作者在黑
暗中不知 所措的状态，动作的连贯性与细节的丰富性使得场景
更具画面感。同时，情感的表达也十分到位， 像 "Tears of
frustration and fear trickled down my face..."这样的描写，令人深
切感受到她内心的挣 扎与无奈。
在续写第二段，作者终于找到了弟弟 Christopher ， 情感的
转折体现了温暖。"Excitement took my breath away—there in the
dark Lego aisle I found Christopher."一句突出了这一刻的激动与
喜悦， 通过生动的语言传达了姐弟之间深厚的情感纽带。 "He
hugged me back ， saying ， 'I knew if I waited here ，
Christine ，you would be able to find me.’"一句展现了信任与默
契，进一步突显了姐弟 间的亲密关系。整体而言，范文通过细腻的情感描写、连贯的情节发展和丰
富的动作细节，成功地延续了原文 的思想，强调了亲情的珍贵
与在危机中相互依靠的重要性。故事不仅让读者感受到惊险与
紧张， 还展现了团聚时的温馨与感动，这种情感的波动使得整
篇文章更具吸引力与深度。
Passage 9
【故事大意】母亲节就要到了，小男孩 Jim 没有钱给妈妈
准备礼物。他努力思索，怎样才能不花钱 给妈妈送礼物。这
时，他在报纸上看到一则广告——告诉我们你妈妈的特别之
处，为她赢得一个 购物狂欢。 Jim 立刻行动，写下妈妈的特
别之处，然后邮寄出去。 Jim 焦急地等着结果，然而直到 母
亲节前一天，他都没有得到任何回复。 Jim 知道自己必须得想
其他办法了。
【 参 考 范 文 】 Suddenly he had an idea.He fumbled in his
drawers and fortunately found a piece of delicate and fragrant
paper.He sat down straight on his chair ，and began to write a letter
in his best handwriting as a Mother's Day present."Dear Mum ，
I’m writing this to tell you that you are the best mother in the
world..."With a sincere heart ，Jim finished the letter and sealed it
in an envelope ，his lips curving into a smile.
The next morning Jim handed his present to his mum.Finishingreading the letter ，his mum swept him into her arms with her eyes
wet as if she wanted to squeeze the breath out of him."Thank
you ，my dear!"She sniffled ，hugging Jim more tightly.Leaning
against his mother's shoulder ，Jim slowly explained why he chose
to write a letter as a gift.After hearing the reason ，his mum gently
combed her fingers through his hair ，saying ，"To me ，your
letter is better than a thousand shopping sprees." Hugging each other
， they felt blissful as if they were in possession of
everything.Indeed ，love should be made known to loved ones.
【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：fumble v. 笨拙地摸找 delicate adj.
精美的 fragrant adj. 芳香的 seal
v. 封上(信封) blissful adj. 极乐的，幸福的 sniffle v.(因感动
或哭泣等)抽鼻子 sweep sb into one's arms 把某人拥入怀中
squeeze the breath out of sb 使某人喘不过气来 lean against one's
shoulder 靠在某人的肩上 comb one's fingers through one's hair 用
手指梳理某人的头发 in possession of 拥有
句型： 1. With a sincere heart ， Jim finished the letter and
sealed it in an envelope ，his lips curving into a smile. (独立主格
结构)
释义：怀着一颗真诚的心，Jim 写完信，把它封在一个信封
里，咧嘴笑了。
2.Finishing reading the letter ， his mum swept him into herarms with her eyes wet as if she wanted to squeeze the breath out of
him. (现在分词短语作状语，with 的复合结构，as if 引导状语从
句)
释义：看完信，他的妈妈眼睛湿润，把他抱在怀里，好像要
使他喘不过气来。
【范文点评】所给范文自然有效地延续了原文的情节和情
感，描绘了 Jim 在母亲节用信件表达对妈 妈的爱的温馨故
事。
首先，范文通过细腻的描写展现了 Jim 写信时的真诚与期
待。 "With a sincere heart ，Jim finished the letter and sealed it in
an envelope ，his lips curving into a smile."一句通过独立主格结
构，传达了 Jim 的真挚情感，让读者感受到他对妈妈的深厚爱
意。此外，"Dear Mum ，I′m writing this to tell you that you are
the best mother in the world..."这种具体的描述增强了情感的传
递，让 整个场景生动起来。
其次，续写中对妈妈收到信后反应的描绘也非常感人。
"Finishing reading the letter ，his mum swept him into her arms
with her eyes wet as ifshe wanted to squeeze the breath out of
him."一句生动 展现了妈妈的感动与爱意，该句使用了现在分词
短语作状语，增强了动作的连贯性。妈妈对 Jim 的拥抱，不仅
是对他表达爱的回应，也体现了母子之间深厚的情感纽带。
在结尾部分，Jim 解释了选择写信的原因，而母亲则感慨地说 ： "To me ， your letter is better than a thousand shopping
sprees." ，这种简单却深刻的回应，强调了情感的价值高于物
质，进一步深化了 故事的主题。
整体而言，范文通过细腻的情感描写、连贯的情节发展和丰
富的动作细节，成功地延续了原文 的思想，强调了爱的表达与
家庭的温暖。故事不仅让读者感受到母子间的亲密关系，还传
达了爱 的真实意义，令人感动。通过 Jim 的故事，读者意识
到情感的表达是最珍贵的礼物，值得在生活中 珍惜与传递。
Passage 10
【故事大意】一位八十岁的老人和他成年的儿子坐在沙发
上。老人重复问儿子同一个问题，才问 了三遍，儿子就已经十
分恼怒且没耐心了。到第四遍时，儿子开始对父亲大吼。伤心
的父亲拿出 一本破旧的日记，让儿子读其中一页的内容：儿子
小时候就同一个问题向父亲问了 23 遍，父亲每 次都耐心地回
复儿子。
【参考范文】Afer reading the diary ，the son's eyes were flled
with tears.He began to reflect on the days when he used to sit
together with his father.His father would patiently answer the same
question 23 times without feeling iritated while his father asked him
the same question just 4 times!The son thought to himself:If I am at
my father's age ，how will my son look at me?Will he think of meas a burden? Will he shout at me because of my poor sight ，poor
hearing or poor understanding?
Feeling ashamed ，the son got down on his knees before his
father.He made an apology to his father ， begging his father to
forgive him for his bad behaviour.He said this aloud ，"I promise to
make you happy forever ，Dad.It is you who have cared for me
ever since I was a little child ，showering your selfless affection on
me.You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to
university.You have always showered me with love.I will take care
of you in the best way no matter how you behave." 【亮点词汇/句
型】词汇：irritated adj. 恼怒的 reflect on 反思，思考，回顾
think of sb as a burden 把某人看作负担 make an apology to sb 向
某人道歉 shower sb with sth/shower sth on sb 给某人 大量的某
物 forgive sb for(doing)sth 原谅某人(做)某事
句型：1. He began to reflect on the days when he used to sit
together with his father.(when 引导定语从句)
释 义：他开始回忆起过去和父亲坐在一起的日子。
2.It is you who have cared for me ever since I was a little
child ，showering your selfless affection on me. ( 强调句，since
引导时间状语从句，现在分词短语作状语)
释 义：是您从我很小的时候就照顾我，给我倾注了您无私的
爱。3.I will take care of you in the best way no matter how you
behave.(no matter how 引导让步状语 从句)
释 义：不管您怎么做，我都会用最好的方式照顾您。
【范文点评】所给范文有效地延续了原文的情感与情节，描
绘了儿子在阅读父亲日记后的内心反 思与悔悟。在结构上，范
文流畅自然，第一段主要描写了儿子的内心变化，第二段则集
中于他对父 亲的歉意与承诺，使得情节层层推进，情感逐渐升
华。
首先，范文通过儿子的自我反省展现了他对过去与父亲关系
的深思。 "He began to reflect on the days when he used to sit
together with his father."一句通过定语从句的使用，让读者感受
到儿子 对过去的怀念与悔恨。同时，接下来的三个问句直接揭
示了儿子对未来可能发生的同样情境的担 忧，增强了故事的情
感深度。
其次，范文中儿子向父亲忏悔的段落描绘得非常生动。 "He
made an apology to his father ， begging his father to forgive him
for his bad behaviour."一句使用了直接的动作描写，展现了儿子
的 真诚与懊悔，让读者能够感同身受。随后，儿子对父亲的承
诺"I promise to make you happy forever ， Dad. "显示了他对父
亲的感激与决心，强调了亲情的重要性。
整体而言，范文通过细腻的情感描写与合理的情节构建，成
功地传达了原文的核心主题：父母 对我们无条件的爱与关怀不应被忽视。儿子在反思中的转变让读者意识到爱与耐心的重要
性，鼓 励大家珍惜与父母相处的时光。通过对人物心理的细腻
刻画与真实的情感表达，这个故事传达了 家庭关系中互相关爱
的本质，令人深思。
Passage 11
【故事大意】作者一家外出游玩的时候，汽车陷入了河边的
沙子里。作者一家无法把车子拉上来， 更糟的是开始下雨了，
他们又冷又饿，非常无助。这时他们发现不远处有一户农家，
这户人家看起 来贫穷且不友好，但爸爸仍决定向他们求助。
【 参 考 范 文 】 To our surprise ， they nodded without
thinking.They quickly found some ropes and tools. And they all ，
including a sixty-year-old man ，two tall sons ，their wives and
several cheerful children ， followed us.When reaching the
beach ，some of us pushed the car while others pulled it out with
all strength.We tried hard ，but the car didn't move.Just then ，my
father saw that many faces of this family were covered with
sweat ， but they didn't leave.Finally ， after we tried many
times ，the car was pulled out of the sand.
My dad was so grateful that he handed some money to the family
to thank them.However ，they refused.Instead ，they invited us to
have a meal and offered to dry our coats.At their insistence ，wereturned to their home again ，where the women went to prepare
the meal while the men lit a big fire using firewood.The family
offered us clean coats and hung our wet ones near the fire.We sat
around the fire ，and soon felt warm.Later ，we enjoyed their
delicious meal.That experience made me know that there are many
helpful people who don't expect anything in return.
【亮点词汇/句型】词 汇：insistence n. 坚持 delicious adj.
美味的 with all strength 用 尽 全 力 faces be covered with
sweat 满头大汗 in return 作为回报
句 型 ： 1.At their insistence ， we returned to their home
again ，where the women went to prepare the meal while the men
lit a big fire using firewood.(where 引导非限制性定语从句，现在
分词短语作 状语)
释义：在他们的坚持下，我们又回到了他们家，女人们去准
备饭菜，男人们用柴火生起了大火。
2.That experience made me know that there are many helpful
people who don't expect anything in return. (第二个 that 引导宾语
从句，who 引导定语从句)
释义：那次经历让我知道，有很多乐于助人的人不求任何回
报。
【范文点评】所给范文很好地延续了原文的情节和主题，给
出了一个符合道德标准的、积极向上的 圆满结局，体现了"乐于助人，不求回报"的主题。
在原文基础上，范文进一步描绘了这家人如何积极响应求
助，展现了人与人之间的团结与友 爱 。"To our surprise ，
they nodded without thinking." 一句生动地传达了农家人毫不犹
豫地表示愿 意帮助的情感，随后描述了他们如何齐心协力将车
子从沙子里拉出来。通过细致的动作描写，如 "We tried
hard ，but the car didn't move." ，让读者感受到那一刻的紧张与
团结。
第二段则聚焦于作者一家与这家人之间的互动，特别是父亲
想用钱来表示感谢的情节。 "However ，they refused.Instead ，
they invited us to have a meal and offered to dry our coats."一句展
现了这家人的慷慨和无私，进一步深化了"乐于助人，不求回
报"的主题。在与他们的共处中，作 者感受到温暖和友谊，形
成了积极向上的情感转变。
最终，范文通过"That experience made me know that there are
many helpful people who don't expect anything in retum."这句话，
升华了文章的主题，强调了在这个世界上，依然有许多无私的
好 人，值得我们去珍惜与学习。
整体而言，范文通过生动的细节描写和紧凑的情节构建，成
功地传达了人与人之间的关爱与 互助的价值观，让读者在阅读
中不仅感受到故事的紧张与温馨，还对"乐于助人，不求回
报"的精 神有了更深的理解。Passage 12
【故事大意】Mo 在考场上看到朋友 Terry 在看手机，以为
Terry 在作弊。 Mo 告诉了 Reed 老师这 件事，并和老师约
定，如果她在下一场考试中看到 Terry 作弊，就给老师打暗
号。
【参考范文】She was working on the last question when she
saw that Terry had her phone under the table.Though feeling uneasy
and restless ，she looked at Mr Reed and nodded.With her eyes
glued to the phone ，it wasn't until the teacher patted on her back
that Terry noticed Mr Reed.Immediately ， Terry was asked to
leave.Terry rushed out of the class ，crying all the way.Instead of
feeling relaxed ， Mo had ants in her pants.She felt guilty for
telling Mr Reed about it ， which had resulted in Terry's not
finishing her exam.
Mo was walking towards the school gate ， when she heard
footsteps behind her.She turned to find it was Terry who had just
come out of the teacher's office.Feeling embarrassed ，Mo wanted
to run away. Nevertheless ，Terry stopped her and said ，"Mo ，
I'm sorry I haven’t kept my promise to help you review because my
father has been badly ill for two weeks.Today he had a significant
operation.I was so worried about him that I kept on reading the textson the phone sent by my mother to get the latest news about him ，
so Mr Reed forgave me.Can you forgive me?""Of course!Let's go to
the hospital to see your father ，"Mo couldn't wait to reply.
【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：uneasy adj. 担忧的，不安的
restless adj. 坐立不安的，不耐烦的 guilty adj. 内疚的，羞愧
的 embarrassed adj. 尴尬的，窘迫的 nevertheless adv. 然而，
不过 forgive v. 原谅，宽恕 with one's eyes glued to 目不转睛地
注视着 rush out of 冲出 …… can't wait to do sth 迫不及待做某
事
句型：1. With her eyes glued to the phone ，it wasn't until the
teacher patted on her back that Teny noticed Mr Reed.(with 的复合
结构，强调句)
释 义：Terry 的眼睛一直盯着手机，直到老师拍了拍她的
背，她才注意到 Reed 先生。
2.I was so woried about him that Ikept on reading the texts on the
phone sent by my mother to get the latest news about him ，so Mr
Reed forgave me.(结果状语从句，过去分词短语作定语)
释义：我太担心爸爸了，所以不停地看妈妈发的手机短信，
想知道他的最新消息，所以 Reed 先生原 谅了我。
【范文点评】所给范文很好地延续了原文的情节，并有效地
展现了角色之间的互动与情感发展，体 现了故事的核心主题：
友谊、理解与宽恕。范文紧扣原文的故事情节展开，清晰地描绘了 Mo 内心的
挣扎和矛盾。开头部分"Though feeling uneasy and restless ，she
looked at Mr Reed and nodded." 生动地展现了她内心的冲突：
一方 面是对朋友的忠诚，另一方面是对作弊行为的道德责任
感。这种复杂的心理状态让读者能够深刻 感受到她在关键时刻
的痛苦选择。
随后，Terry 作弊被抓的情节通过 "Tery rushed out of the
class ，crying all the way."得以呈现， 进一步加深了 Mo 的内
疚感。这一描述不仅展示了 Terry 的脆弱和绝望，也让 Mo 面
临着友谊的考 验 。 Mo 的内心反应 "Mo had ants in her
pants."形象地表达了她内心的焦虑与不安，读者能够深切 地感
受到她的挣扎。
在续写第二段中，Terry 出 现 在 Mo 面前并解释她的行
为，揭示了她父亲生病的背景。 "Iwas so worried about him that
I kept on reading the texts on the phone sent by my mother.…"一句
不仅为 Terry 的行为提供了合理的解释，也让读者感受到她的
无奈与焦虑。这一情节的发展使得 Terry 的 角色变得立体，
Mo 对她的误解逐渐被理解所替代，体现了人际关系的复杂性
与多元性。
最后，Mo 的反应"Of course!Let's go to the hospital to see your
father.."展现了她的善良与理 解。这个转折不仅缓解了之前的紧
张气氛，也为整个情节带来了温暖的收束。这一行为不仅表达了 Mo 对 Terry 的支持，也强调了在困境中彼此扶持的重要
性。
整篇范文通过细致的情感描写和合理的情节发展，成功地传
达了友谊与诚信之间的复杂关 系。通过角色的内心变化与互
动，读者不仅看到了 Mo 的成长与觉悟，也感受到友谊的真正
含义： 在误解与冲突中寻找理解与和解的机会。这个主题让故
事更加深刻且富有教育意义，引导读者思 考在现实生活中如何
处理友谊与道德之间的冲突。
Passage 13
【故事大意】在冬天的一个星期天，作者和妹妹 Colleen 堆
了一个美丽的雪人。然而，当他们回家 时，发现雪人不见了，
只剩下一根断掉的树枝、 一只破破烂烂的手套和满地的雪球。
兄妹俩决定重 新堆一个雪人。然而，几天来，新堆的雪人每天
都被摧毁了。最后，兄妹俩设置了一个陷阱，等待 着雪人破坏
者的到来。
【 参 考 范 文 】 Monday morning ， hiding behind the
window ，we soon saw what we were waiting for.It turned out that
there were three of them from our school.They sneaked up on our
snowman and sneered.Taking their places on either side ， they
pulled back their legs to deliver powerful kicks.But the moment they
hit the hard ice block of the base ，sneers turned into shock ，thenagony and tears. They howled and cursed ，gritting their teeth and
stomping their feet.
Seeing their pained look ，we couldn't help laughing.They were
too funny as they hopped away holding their injured feet.We just
couldn’t contain our happiness and excitement.With a hearty
laugh ， we came out of hiding and sprang into the yard from
inside the house."An eye for an eye!Justice done!"we yelled behind
them.And that was the end of our problems with the snow
bullies.Ever since then ，our snowman was kept guarded and intact
until it happily melted into spring water and finally wove into our
sweetest childhood memories.
【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：snee r v.&n. 嘲笑，讥讽 agony n.
(精神或肉体的)极度痛苦 howl v. 大声叫喊 curse v. 咒骂 melt
v. 融 化 sneak up 悄悄接近 grit one's teeth 咬紧牙关 stomp
one's feet 跺脚 hop away 跳着离开 a hearty laugh 爽朗的笑声
句型：Taking their places on either side ，they pulled back
their legs to deliver poweful kicks.(现在分 词短语作状语)
释 义：他们在两边各就各位，把腿向后拉，踢出有力的一
脚。
【范文点评】原文主要叙述了兄妹俩在一次次重堆雪人后，
最终设下陷阱来对付那些破坏他们作 品的同学。这一过程充满
了坚持与创造力，反映了孩子们在面对困难时的勇气和机智。所给范文 很好地延续了原文的情节，成功地展现了故事的核心
主题：勇气、幽默、正义感以及童年的欢乐。
范文通过细致的描写和生动的语言，增强了故事的可读性和
趣味性。开头部分"It turned out that there were three of them from
our school."明确地指出了破坏者的身份，并为后续的冲突设置
了 背景。通过"sneaked up on our snowman and sneered"这一描
述，读者能够直观地感受到这些同学 的挑衅态度，同时也为作
者兄妹的计划增加了悬念。
接着，范文通过"But the moment they hit the hard ice block of
the base ，sneers turned into shock ， then agony and tears."一句
生动地描绘了雪人破坏者遭遇的反转。这一幕不仅让人忍俊不
禁，也 让读者感受到了一种"正义得以伸张"的快感。通过对他
们反应的细腻刻画，如"howled and cursed ，griting their teeth
and stomping their feet" ， 成功营造了幽默而又略带戏谑的氛
围，体现了孩 子们对不公平行为的反击。
通过"We just couldn't contain our happiness and excitement."这
一句的动作描写可以看到，兄 妹俩的欢笑不仅是对破坏者遭遇
的戏谑，也是他们对自己坚持不懈努力的庆祝。这种对立中的
幽 默感增强了故事的趣味性，也让读者产生了共鸣。
最后 一 句"And that was the end of our problems with the
snow bullies." 完美地收尾，既解决了故 事的主要矛盾，又带出
了堆雪人的快乐，暗示了童年回忆的珍贵和美好。"until ithappily melted into spring water and finally wove into our sweetest
childhood memories"这种表述表达了时间的流逝 与童年回忆的
永恒，这种对美好时光的怀念使故事更具情感深度。
整篇范文在语言表达、情节构建和角色刻画上都表现得十分
出色，展示了孩子们在逆境中展 现出的勇气与创造力，也传达
了正义感的重要性。通过幽默而温暖的叙述，故事成功地捕捉
了童 年无忧无虑的快乐的真谛。
Passage 14
【故事大意】结婚21 年后，作者的妻子要求作者带另 一 个
女人出去吃饭和看电影。令人惊讶的 是，这个女人是他的母
亲，她已经守寡 19 年了。作者很忙，无法经常去看望母亲。应
妻子的要求， 那天晚上他打电话邀请母亲出去共度母子时光。
作者在开车去接母亲时感到紧张，母亲也同样对 这次约会感到
紧张。他们去了一家不太高雅但舒适的餐厅，享受了一顿美好
的晚餐，因为交谈甚 欢，错过了电影。
【参考范文】As we arived at her house later ，she said ，"Il
go out with you again ， but only if you let me invite you."I
agreed.When I got home ，my wife gave me a smile.I sat down and
talked with her about my feeling together with my mother.My wife
was proud of what she did for me.She said when she was young ，
she was very naughty ，and her mother often punished her for herwrong deeds.Later when she grew up she became aware of her
mother's heart.But her mother died of lung cancer and she never had
time to thank her.So she decided to invite my mother for me to eat
out.I kissed her with my eyes full of tears.
At that moment I understood the importance of saying ， in
time ，"I LOVE YOU."I thanked my wife and that dinner date was
another time for me to remember.You could hardly imagine how
happy I am to have the chance to say these words and return the
favour in time.Nothing in the world is more important than this.
【亮点词汇/句型】词汇：naughty adj. 顽皮的，淘气的
punish v. 处罚，惩罚 be proud of 为……感 到自豪 wrong deeds
错误的行为 become aware of 意识到 die of 死于 with one's
eyes full of tears 眼眶里充满泪水
句 型 ： She said when she was young ， she was very
naughty ，and her mother often punished her for her wrong deeds.
(宾语从句，时间状语从句)
释义：她说她小时候很淘气，她妈妈经常因为她做错事而惩
罚她。
【范文点评】所给范文通过细腻的情感描写与生活细节，成
功延续了原文的情节，深入探讨了亲 情、爱情与感恩的重要
性。整体结构清晰，前后呼应，意义深刻，令人深思。
范文开头描绘了作者回到家后的场景，生动呈现了妻子对他的关心和支持。"When I got home ，my wife gave me a smile."一
句不仅描绘了家庭的温馨氛围，也反映了妻子对这一家庭时刻
的重视。接下来，作者与妻子的对话深入探讨了两代人之间的
情感连接，展现了妻子在成长过程 中与母亲的复杂关系。
"she was very naughty ，and her mother often punished her for her
wrong deeds" 一句不仅回忆了妻子童年时的顽皮，也揭示了她
对母亲教育方式的反思。这种细致的情感 描写，丰富了人物背
景，让读者了解到每个角色在家庭中的成长与变化。通过这些
细节，读者能够 感受到母亲对孩子的爱与期待，以及随着时间
推移而形成的深刻理解。
范文在强调母亲重要性的同时，借助妻子的故事，传达了表
达"I LOVE YOU"这一情节的重要 性，引发了读者对亲情与爱
情的思考。特别是在现代生活的快节奏中，人们往往忽视了对
家人的
关心，这种反思不仅具有普遍性，也为读者带来了情感共
鸣。
最后一 句"Nothing in the world is more important than this."将
主题推向高潮，强调了表达爱意 的必要性。这样的结尾，不仅
为整个故事画上了完美的句号，也鼓励读者在生活中珍视与家
人的 关系，勇于表达爱意。这种情感的共鸣和思考，令故事更
具吸引力，同时也让读者感悟到深刻的生 活哲理。
整篇范文在语言表达与情感升华上都表现得非常出色。通过对日常生活的细腻描写和真实 情感的流露，成功传达了对亲人
和爱人的珍视。作者通过这一经历，不仅重拾了与母亲的联
系，也 让自己在婚姻中更加珍惜与妻子的感情。这种情感的真
挚与深刻，使得故事不仅动人心弦，也引 发了读者对生命中最
重要关系的反思与珍惜。
