台州高二期末考英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Lena's father had always been a man of few words(人物性格描写). Since her mother
passed away five years ago, he had shouldered the responsibility of raising her alone,
working
double shifts
(现在分词做伴随动作) as a taxi driver to support his family(刻画人物的坚毅和父爱的
深沉). Their small apartment was always filled with an unspoken tension - the kind
that comes from two people living together but never truly connecting(现在分词短语做后置定
语), except that, each night, he'd leave a glass of warm milk on her desk with his
usual “Don't stay up too late.”
One Saturday, while cleaning the store room, Lena came across an old shoebox.
Driven by curiosity( 过去分词短语做原因状语), she took it out and couldn't wait to find out
what was inside. When she opened it, a scent of old paper greeted her( 无灵主语句).
Inside were many black-and-white photos from her father(此处是我加的，卷子可能有误) before
she was born. One photo caught her eye(无灵主语句) - her young father kneeling in a
sunny field( 可理解为独立主格), smiling happily( 现在分词短语做后置定语) as he took pictures with a
camera. He looked so different from the tired man she knew now.
That evening, as they sat across from each other
at their usual silent diner
, Lena
gathered her courage. “Dad,”she began hesitantly, “I found some old photos today..",
Her father's fork froze mid-air.(细节动作描写) He quickly looked at her, then away. “That
was a lifetime ago," he murmured, pushing
his food around his plate
(现在分词短语做伴随动作).
After a brief silence, he added quietly, “Had to sell that camera when you started
middle school" The way his voice cracked on the last word made Lena's heart
ache.
The next day, she searched online and found Thompson's Vintage Camera Shop -
a family-owned store just three blocks from her school. Mr. Thompson, a kind-eyed
man in his sixties, had a similar camera her father once owned. When she
explained her situation, his face softened, “How about this?" he said, “You help me
around the shop after school for a month and the camera is yours.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: For a month. Lena raced between school. homework. and the camera
shop.
Paragraph 2: On Father's Day, Lena woke up early to prepare her surprise.
台州高二期末考英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Lena's father had always been a man of few words. Since her mother passed away
five years ago, he had shouldered the responsibility of raising her alone, working
double shifts as a taxi driver to support his family. Their small apartment was always
filled with an unspoken tension - the kind that comes from two people living together
but never truly connecting, except that, each night, he'd leave a glass of warm milk on
her desk with his usual “Don't stay up too late.”
One Saturday, while cleaning the store room, Lena came across an old shoebox.
Driven by curiosity, she took it out and couldn't wait to find out what was inside.
When she opened it, a scent of old paper greeted her. Inside were many black-and-
white photos from before she was born. One photo caught her eye - her young father
kneeling in a sunny field, smiling happily as he took pictures with a camera. He
looked so different from the tired man she knew now.
That evening, as they sat across from each other at their usual silent diner, Lena
gathered her courage. “Dad,”she began hesitantly, “T found some old photos today..",
Her father's fork froze mid-air. He quickly looked at her then away. “That was a
lifetime ago," he murmured, pushing his food around his plate. After a brief silence,
he added quietly, “Had to sell that camera when you started middle school.” The way
his voice cracked on the last word made Lena's heart ache.
The next day, she searched online and found Thompson's Vintage Camera Shop -
a family-owned store just three blocks from her school. Mr. Thompson, a kind-eyed
man in his sixties, had a similar camera her father once owned. When she explained
her situation, his face softened, “How about this?" he said, “.You help me around the
shop after school for a month and the camera is yours.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: For a month. Lena raced between school. homework. and the camera
shop.
Paragraph 2: On Father's Day, Lena woke up early to prepare her surprise.
1. 文章分类与续写思路分析
文章类型：情感修复/沉默型亲情唤醒类（父女关系修复）
续写构思方向：
情感递进：从“疏离”到“理解”再到“感动”。
核心冲突：父亲因生活压力放弃爱好，女儿通过行动弥补遗憾。
解决方案：女儿通过打工换取相机，在父亲节送上惊喜。
续写布局与框架：
段落
内容重点
衔接原文的关键点
第一段
描述Lena 在店铺打工的艰辛与坚
持，突出她对父亲的爱和决心。
提及相机、Mr. Thompson 的约
定、时间跨度。
第二段
父亲节的惊喜场景，父亲的情感
反应，父女关系升华。
呼应“玻璃杯牛奶”“沉默晚
餐”等细节。
续写注意事项：
承接原文：
保留父亲“沉默寡言”的性格，但通过动作/微表情体现情感变化。
沿用“玻璃杯牛奶”“旧照片”等意象增强连贯性。
设计技巧：
对比手法：父亲过去的笑容 vs. 现在的疲惫；Lena 的主动 vs. 父亲的被动。
伏笔回收：父亲“卖相机”的遗憾被弥补。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
故事山模式：
阶段
原文内容
续写对应部分
铺垫
父女关系疏离，Lena 发现旧照
打工的艰辛（上升行动）。
阶段
原文内容
续写对应部分
片。
冲突
父亲提及卖相机的往事，情绪低
落。
克服困难获取相机（高潮）。
高潮
Lena 决定打工换取相机。
父亲节惊喜（情感爆发）。
解决
（待续写）父女情感连接恢复。
父亲重新微笑（结局）。
原文关键点分析表：
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
父亲沉默寡言但默默付出。
“他每晚放一杯温牛奶，说‘别
熬夜’。”
情感层次
Lena 从好奇到心疼，再到决
心行动。
“他声音里的哽咽让Lena 心
痛。”
关键情节
发现照片→父亲提及卖相机
→Lena 找到店铺。
“不得不卖掉相机…”
“Thompson 复古相机店”。
隐含线索
相机象征父亲失去的快乐，
Lena 的行动是修复关系的钥
匙。
“跪在阳光下的田野里微笑拍
照”。
心理描写
Lena 的犹豫与父亲的回避。
“Lena 鼓起勇气…父亲僵住的叉
子”。
动作描写
父亲“推开食物”体现不安。
“他拨弄着盘中的食物”。
环境描写
公寓的“无言紧张”烘托关
系。
“小公寓充满无声的紧张”。
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
情感转折
照片引发Lena 对父亲过去的
认知。
“他看起来与现在疲惫的样子完
全不同”。
伏笔与冲突点：
伏笔：旧照片中父亲的微笑（暗示他曾有热情）、卖相机的无奈（经济压
力）。
冲突：父女的情感隔阂 vs. Lena 想重建联系的愿望。
隐含主题：爱与牺牲需要双向理解，沉默的爱更厚重
续写段落示范（提纲）
Paragraph 1:
时间管理：Lena 放学后直奔店铺，熬夜写作业，体现坚持。
细节衔接：Mr. Thompson 教她相机知识（呼应父亲曾爱摄影）。
伏笔：她擦拭相机时想象父亲的表情。
Paragraph 2:
场景对比：父亲节早餐代替“沉默晚餐”，Lena 递出包装盒。
情感爆发：父亲颤抖的手打开盒子，沉默后拥抱（突破“寡言”人设）。
回收意象：结尾父亲用新相机拍下女儿笑容，桌上仍有一杯牛奶。
3. 动作、心理、环境描写例句 & 高级替换词
动作描写（Action）
Her fingers trembled as she carefully lifted the old camera.
（她手指颤抖着，小心翼翼地拿起那台旧相机。）
He froze mid-step, his breath catching in his throat.
（他脚步一顿，呼吸凝滞。）
She clutched the shoebox tightly against her chest, as if afraid it would
disappear.
（她把鞋盒紧紧抱在胸前，仿佛害怕它会消失。）
His calloused hands gently traced the edges of the photograph.
（他粗糙的手指轻轻抚过照片的边缘。）
Lena dashed out of the shop, her heart pounding with excitement.
（Lena 冲出店铺，心脏因兴奋而狂跳。）
He let out a slow, shaky breath before speaking.
（他缓缓呼出一口气，声音微微发颤。）
She bit her lip, hesitating before knocking on his door.
（她咬着嘴唇，在敲门之前犹豫了一下。）
His shoulders slumped in defeat as he turned away.
（他肩膀耷拉下来，转身离开，一副挫败的样子。）
A single tear rolled down his weathered cheek.
（一滴泪水从他饱经风霜的脸颊滑落。）
She leaned forward, her eyes burning with determination.
（她向前倾身，眼中燃烧着决心。）
心理描写（Emotion/Thoughts）
A wave of guilt washed over her as she realized how much he had sacrificed.
（当她意识到他牺牲了多少时，一阵愧疚感涌上心头。）
Her mind raced with possibilities—what if he didn’t like the gift?
（她的思绪飞快转动——万一他不喜欢这个礼物怎么办？）
A lump formed in her throat, making it hard to speak.
（她的喉咙发紧，几乎说不出话来。）
His words echoed in her mind, leaving a dull ache in her chest.
（他的话在她脑海中回荡，胸口隐隐作痛。）
She fought back tears, unwilling to let him see her cry.
（她强忍泪水，不愿让他看到自己哭泣。）
A flicker of hope ignited in his weary eyes.
（他疲惫的眼中闪过一丝希望。）
Doubt gnawed at her—was this the right thing to do?
（疑虑啃噬着她——这样做对吗？）
His silence spoke volumes, louder than any words could.
（他的沉默比任何言语都更有力。）
Her heart swelled with a mix of pride and sadness.
（她的心中充满了骄傲和悲伤交织的情绪。）
For the first time in years, he allowed himself to feel vulnerable.
（多年来，他第一次允许自己展现脆弱。）
环境描写（Setting/Atmosphere）
The dim light of the evening cast long shadows across the room.
（傍晚昏暗的光线在房间里投下长长的阴影。）
The scent of old paper and dust lingered in the air.
（旧纸张和灰尘的气味在空气中萦绕。）
A chilly breeze seeped through the half-open window.
（一阵冷风从半开的窗户渗入。）
The quiet hum of the refrigerator was the only sound in the apartment.
（冰箱的低鸣是公寓里唯一的声音。）
Golden sunlight spilled through the curtains, painting the floor in warm hues.
（金色的阳光透过窗帘洒进来，在地板上投下温暖的色调。）
The shop smelled of polished wood and aged leather.
（店铺里散发着抛光木材和陈旧皮革的气味。）
Outside, rain tapped softly against the windowpane.
（外面，雨轻轻敲打着窗玻璃。）
The weight of unspoken words hung heavy in the air.
（未说出口的话语沉重地悬在空气中。）
The camera shop was a cozy haven, filled with relics of the past.
（相机店是一个舒适的避风港，摆满了过去的遗物。）
The morning light filtered in, bringing with it a sense of new beginnings.
（晨光洒进来，带来一种新的开始的感觉。）
高级替换词（场景分类）
情感表达（Emotion）
Sad (悲伤) → Melancholic / Heartbroken
His melancholic expression revealed years of unspoken pain.
Happy (快乐) → Elated / Overjoyed
She was elated when he finally smiled.
Angry (愤怒) → Furious / Seething
His seething silence was worse than shouting.
Nervous (紧张) → Anxious / Apprehensive
She felt apprehensive about his reaction.
Tired (疲惫) → Weary / Exhausted
His weary eyes told a story of endless work.
动作描写（Movement）
Run (跑) → Dash / Sprint
She dashed to the shop before it closed.
Walk (走) → Stride / Trudge
He trudged home after another long shift.
Look (看) → Glance / Gaze
She gazed at the photo, lost in memories.
Hold (拿) → Clutch / Grasp
He clutched the camera like a treasure.
Say (说) → Murmur / Whisper
“Thank you,” he murmured, voice barely audible.
4. 固定搭配、词法解析 & 语料积累
常见搭配（Collocations）
Shoulder the responsibility (承担责任)
He shouldered the responsibility of raising her alone.
A lump in one’s throat (哽咽)
She spoke with a lump in her throat.
Catch one’s eye (吸引注意)
The old photo caught her eye immediately.
Break the silence (打破沉默)
Finally, Lena broke the silence between them.
Softened one’s heart (软化某人的心)
Her words softened his heart.
可积累的生词短语
Worn-out (adj.) 破旧的 / 疲惫的
His worn-out shoes told a story of hard work.
近义词: Frayed, exhausted
反义词: New, energetic
Hesitantly (adv.) 犹豫地
She spoke hesitantly, unsure of his reaction.
近义词: Reluctantly
反义词: Confidently
Weathered (adj.) 饱经风霜的
His weathered hands held the camera gently.
近义词: Aged, worn
反义词: Youthful
Unspoken tension (n.) 无言的紧张
The unspoken tension between them was suffocating.
近义词: Silent strain
反义词: Easy comfort
Mid-air (adv.) 在半空中
His fork froze mid-air when she mentioned the photos.
近义词: Suspended
反义词: Grounded
5. Possible Versions(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: For a month, Lena raced between school, homework, and the
camera shop. Though exhausted(状从压缩), she never missed a single day. After school,
she would head straight to Mr. Thompson’s store, cleaning shelves, labeling
cameras, and even helping elderly customers(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Sometimes, when she
struggled with homework, she’d complete it while waiting for customers, her eyes
heavy with sleep(独立主格). But in her heart, she felt a strange sense of fulfillment,
imagining
the look on her father’s face
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)when he saw the camera.
Each time she dusted off the shelf holding
the model
(现在分词做伴随动作)identical to his
father
’ s (adj 做后置补语), she pictured him in that sunny field, young and passionate(adj 做补语).
The more she worked, the more she understood how hard her father must have
worked for her and this family, year after year, without complaint. Her
gratitude grew deeper with each passing day, and time slipped away unnoticed(无灵主
语句), and true to his word, Thompson presented me with the camera.
Paragraph 2: On Father's Day, Lena woke up early to prepare her surprise.
She placed the carefully wrapped box on his desk, along with a handwritten note:
“For the dreams you paused—for me.” When her father found it, he paused, his
fingers trembling slightly(独立主格). Slowly, he unwrapped the box and stared at the
familiar camera inside. For a moment, he said nothing, but his eyes shimmered
with something(无灵主语句) Lena hadn’t seen in years. He looked at her, voice low and
thick(独立主格), “Thank you, Lena.” Lena nodded, emotion welling up inside(独立主格刻画人物
心理). He reached out and placed a hand gently on her shoulder—a rare gesture.
“Maybe... we could take a picture together,” he whispered. The silence between
them didn’t vanish, but it changed. It became warm, shared, full of what didn’t
need to be said(名词并列). That day, the click of the camera captured more than an image
—it captured a healed bond.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: For a month, Lena raced between school, homework, and the
camera shop. Balancing everything(动名词短语做主语，谓语动词要用单数)was tough, but Lena never
once complained. Each afternoon, she swept the wooden floor, dusted glass
shelves, and watched Mr. Thompson carefully wrap fragile cameras(动词短语并列).
Gradually, she began to understand the craftsmanship—and the value her father
must’ve once placed on the camera he sold. She often imagined how painful it
must have been to let go of something he loved for her sake. Sometimes, she would
picture
herself smiling at the thought of him chasing sunsets with his lens
. As
her hands grew rougher from the work, her heart grew softer. She realized that this
wasn't just about
surprising her father
—it was about
reconnecting with him through
the very passion he had once buried. And so, with each shift, she wasn’t just
earning a camera. She was building a bridge.
Paragraph 2: On Father's Day, Lena woke up early to prepare her surprise.
She waited patiently in the living room, the wrapped box resting on the table(独立主格)
with
a glass
of
warm
milk
.When her father entered, his eyes fell on the package
and
the
same
set
of
lovable
breakfast
. “What’s this?” he asked, lifting
it with
curious hands(现在分词做伴随动作). As he opened the box, his expression shifted from
confusion to disbelief. “This… it’s just like my old one.” Lena nodded, her voice
barely a whisper(独立主格), “I wanted to give a part of you back.” Her father sat down
slowly, holding the camera(现在分词做伴随动作)silently. After a long pause, he looked at her
and said, “No one’s ever done something like this for me.” There was no dramatic
hug, no tears—but in the soft way he smiled, Lena saw everything she’d been
hoping for. That smile melted every silent moments, connecting
them
tightly(现在分词做伴随动作).
Version 3
Paragraph 1: For a month, Lena raced between school, homework, and the
camera shop. Though her days became longer and her energy often ran low, Lena
never wavered. She swept the store, organized camera lenses, and occasionally
chatted with Mr. Thompson about photography(动作串并列). It was in those quiet
moments that she slowly understood what photography might have meant to her
father—not just a hobby, but a window into another version of himself, now
long buried(过去分词做后置定语). The repetitive work gave Lena time to reflect. She
remembered how he always left warm milk, even after a long shift, never missing
a night(现在分词短语做伴随动作). That silent care echoed in her every task. Through Mr.
Thompson’s camera she earned, she wanted to tell him, not in words, but in
effort, “I love you too.”
Paragraph 2: On Father's Day, Lena woke up early to prepare her surprise.
She quietly placed the box near his breakfast plate, retreating
to her room to listen
for his reaction(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Minutes passed. Then came a knock. When she
opened the door, he stood there, holding the camera gently(现在分词做伴随动作). “This must
have taken you a while,” he said, his voice tight with emotion(独立主格). Lena nodded. “I
just thought maybe… you could use it again.” A long silence stretched between them.
Then he smiled faintly. “I think I still remember how.” That evening, for the first
time in years, Lena and her father walked to the park together. The sunset bathed
them in gold as he lifted the camera. Click. One photo, but a thousand unspoken
words captured in that moment(无灵主语句).
语言表达亮点与写作资源表
类别
高分搭配 / 替换表达
示例与积累
动作描写短语
race between… / head straight to… / sweep
the store / unwrapped the box / fingers
trembling / paused mid-air
Lena raced between
school, homework,
and the camera shop.
He paused, fingers
trembling.
情绪描写短语
her voice barely a whisper / eyes shimmered /
a rare gesture / voice tight with emotion /
smiled faintly / something she hadn’t seen in
years
Her eyes shimmered
with something she
hadn’t seen in years.
加分语法结构
- 现在分词做伴随：smiling faintly, holding
the camera
- 非限定性定语从句：which she placed on
the desk
- 倒装结构：Rarely had she worked so hard
for something so small.
Used to 提升句式复
杂度与书面表达感
类别
高分搭配 / 替换表达
示例与积累
高阶词汇替换
exhausted → drained / worn out
happy → content / moved
silent → wordless / unspoken
tired → weary / worn
“He looked so
different from the
weary man she knew
now.”
常见主题类短语
积累
build a bridge (between hearts)
unspoken love / silent care
captured more than an image—it captured a
bond
pause one’s dream for someone
Her gift wasn't a
camera—it was a
bridge between
hearts.
例句积累推荐（适合背诵与仿写）
The silence didn’t disappear, but it softened.
She wasn’t just buying a gift, but rebuilding a bond.
His voice cracked slightly, carrying the weight of the years.
The gift spoke more than words ever could.
With each step she took, she felt closer to him—not in distance, but in
heart.
官方：
For a month, Lena raced between school, homework,and the camera shop. Every
afternoon, Lena worked at the camera shop, helping
Mir. Thompson
and serving
customers(现在分词做伴随动作). Her hands grew rough from organizing film roll sand polishing
lenses, and her feet ached from standing for long hours. Though exhausted( 状从压缩), she
cherished the hope of seeing her father's smile again - the way he did in those old
photographs. One evening, Mr. Thompson handed her a box. “Your hard work paid
off," he said warmly. Lena's hands trembled as she
cradled
the camera
. Her eyes
glistening with gratitude(独立主格), she whispered, “Thank you, Mr. Thompson.”
On Father's Day, Lena woke up early to prepare her surprise. She placed the
camera on the kitchen table and waited nervously. When her father came in for
breakfast, his weary eyes widened at the sight. After a short pause
, his hardened fingers
traced the camera's edges gently, as if touching a memory(状语从句压缩). For a moment, there
was silence. Lena broke it with a soft “Happy Father's Day, Dad!" “Thank you! This
means more than you know. Let's take a photo together," his voice cracked with emotion.
Lena finally saw it - the smile form the photograph. The click of shutter dissolved years
of quiet tension, connecting them at last(现在分词短语做伴随动作).
