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背诵版
一、以非谓语动词(短语)、with复合结构或独立主格结构开头
1.(2026·全国I卷)Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Realizing the wisdom in their advice, Emily agreed without hesitation.丹尼尔和瑞秋建议艾米丽继续乘坐火车前往。艾米丽意识到他们这番建议十分明智，便毫不犹豫地同意了。
【感悟】以suggest和advice为连接点，用现在分词短语作状语，表达原因和结果。
2.(2025·全国II卷)In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. Standing up, I felt a mix of nervousness and excitement.在一次课堂讨论中，我被邀请解释自己名字的含义。当我站起身时，心中涌起一阵紧张与兴奋交织的情绪。
【感悟】现在分词短语作伴随状语，人物的画面感跃然纸上。
3.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. With excited tears in my eyes, I thanked him again, adding that it was he who let me get a taste for writing.颁奖仪式结束后，我前往老师的办公室。眼中含着激动的泪水，我再次向他致谢，并补充说，正是他让我初次领略了写作的魅力。
【感悟】with复合结构和现在分词短语表示伴随,增加了文章表达的简洁性和语言表达的丰富性。
4.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me.Dropping his head, he was in low spirits.我们并排坐了下来，但大卫始终没有看我。他低着头，神情低落。
【感悟】开头用了分词充当时间状语,不仅使行文简洁,而且突出动作,惟妙惟肖。
二、以名词性从句、状语从句或定语从句等从句开头
5.(2025·全国I卷)I realized it was me who was at fault. I had been so focused on keeping the party under control that I failed to consider how important Toby was to my brother during this difficult time.我意识到问题出在我身上。我之前过于专注于控制这场派对，以至于忽略了在这一艰难时刻，托比对我的哥哥有多么重要。
【感悟】用状语从句和宾语从句，让内容表达紧凑，一个句子既表达了自己当时的状态，又表明了事情的原因。
6.(2021·浙江高考·1月卷)I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.How I wished I had not acted so foolishly, making myself a laughing stock of my family! 我被困了五六分钟，但感觉时间过得格外漫长。真希望当时自己没有那么愚蠢——那样我就不会成为家人嘲笑的对象了！
【感悟】由该段首句内容“我被困了五六分钟,但感觉要长得多。”可知,该段开始可描写作者是多么后悔把头插入南瓜中,此处用了感叹句,且wished后加了宾语从句。
7.(2021·浙江高考·1月卷)I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. My brother came up with an idea that he could cut the pumpkin with a knife.我卡住了五六分钟，但感觉时间过得更久。我哥哥想出了一个主意——用刀把南瓜切开。
【感悟】该句idea后面that引导同位语从句,对idea进行解析,同位语使文章更加紧凑,同时增加了文章表达的高级性。
三、以形容词/副词(短语)开头
8.(2026年1月·浙江卷)After we managed to secure the cow to a tree, we began to discuss what to do with it. Luckily, a farmer passing by recognized the cow immediately — it was his. 在我们将这头牛拴在树上后，我们开始讨论该如何处置它。幸运的是，一位途经此地的农民立刻认出了这头牛——它正是他的。
【感悟】此处副词Luckily巧妙地衔接了discuss what to do with it，给人柳暗花明的感觉。
9. (2018.06浙江高考)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 我们完全不知道自己身处何地，天色已暗。由于疲惫且饥饿，我思忖着是否还能找到回去的路。
【感悟】此处是形容词作状语的结构，作了后面句子的伴随状语。
10.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷) A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. Unexpectedly, I beat a lot of participants and won the first prize.几周后，当我几乎快要忘记这次比赛时，突然传来喜讯——出乎意料地，我击败了众多参赛者，荣获了一等奖。
【感悟】根据该段首句内容“几个星期后,当我几乎忘记比赛的时候,传来了消息。”可知,开始可以写作者得知这个消息时的感受,可以写兴奋、吃惊或意外,本句用了副词unexpectedly描述当时的意外的心情。
11.(2021·浙江高考·6月卷)I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished. Excited and overjoyed, I rushed into my room and lay in bed thinking about how to spend the money.我惊讶地发现，父亲允许我随心所欲地使用这笔钱。我兴奋不已、欣喜若狂，便冲进房间躺在床上，思考着该如何花掉这笔钱。
【感悟】由该段首句内容“我很惊讶,我爸爸允许我按照我的意愿使用这笔钱。”可知,本段可描写作者兴奋的心情,开始用excited and overjoyed准确地描写了作者的这种心情。
四、以倒装句、强调句等句型开头
12.(2022·浙江高考·6月卷)As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile.Nervous as I felt, I did my utmost to keep myself calm and hand out the delicately-wrapped meal to those in need, with my hands trembling.当他们朝我走来时，我绽放出最灿烂、最幸福的笑容。尽管内心十分紧张，我还是竭尽全力保持镇定，颤抖着双手将精心包装的餐食分发给那些需要帮助的人。
【感悟】这里“Nervous as I felt”用了倒装句,提高了文章表达的质量。
13.(2021·浙江高考·1月卷)That video was posted the day before Halloween. It was my brother who did that for amusement.这段视频是在万圣节前一天发布的；是我弟弟出于好玩而发布的。
【感悟】由该段首句内容“这段视频是在万圣节前一天发布的。”可知,该段续写开始部分可以补充说明谁发的,这里用了强调句,突出发视频之人。
五、以介词短语开头
14.When the girl was walking in the garden , a snake appeared suddenly.At the sight of the snake, she screamed at the top of her voice. 女孩正在花园里散步时，一条蛇突然出现。一看到蛇，她就以最大的声音尖叫起来。
【感悟】句中at the sight of 意为“一看到... ”，在句中作时间状语，用在此处，能完美地呼应段首句中的“suddenly突然”，与前一句衔接自然生动。
六、以时间状语开头
15.(2026·全国II卷)Struck by the doctor’s warning, I knew I had to make a change. That very night, I initiated my battle against my deep-rooted habits. I forcibly switched off my laptop and phone at 10 p.m., placing them completely out of reach.医生的警告让我深受触动，我意识到自己必须做出改变。就在当晚，我便开始了与那些根深蒂固的坏习惯的抗争——我在晚上10点强行关掉了笔记本电脑和手机，并将它们放在完全无法触及的地方。
【感悟】此处以That very night为连接点，前面是医生的忠告，后面是从那天晚上，自己就与坏习惯抗争，衔接自然。
16.I didn’t leave the injured dog.And then the inner voice whispered to me, “go all out to save the poor creature.”
就在那时/那个时刻，我内心有个声音低声说道“竭尽全力帮助这个可怜的小生灵吧。”
【感悟】此处加上时间状语then 使得句子与所给段首句的衔接更加自然，描写更加生动。
17.At that moment, I can’t help but shed tears of gratitude. 在那个时刻，我唯有流下感激的泪水。
【感悟】时间状语 at that moment 不仅起到衔接过渡的作用，还可以让文章更加生动自然。
七、以对话或独白开头
18.Then appeared a rescue boat with a pole attached to it.“Don’t worry, the rescue boat is on the way.” one of the men shouted.随后，一艘系着一根杆子的救援船出现在眼前。“别担心，救援船正在赶来，”其中一名男子喊道。
【感悟】此处借鉴一考生的文章，这里的语言描写使得文章画面感很强，与段首句完美衔接，符合故事发展的逻辑，反映了见义勇为者看到希望时的兴奋。
19.The car abruptly stopped in front of him.“Get into the car.” Paul shouted at Mac. 汽车突然停在他面前。“上车！”保罗对麦克喊道。
【感悟】该句简洁明了，刻画了一幅生动的画面即大难临头，恰逢有人拔刀相助的快意，生动形象，情节紧凑。
八、以连词开头
20.My mother had been preparing the dinner all the morning.nAlthough she was kind of tired , she felt very excited , expecting us to come back.我母亲整个上午都在准备晚餐。尽管她有些疲惫，但内心却感到十分兴奋，期待着我们回家。
【感悟】此处用连词“尽管”与段首句妈妈忙了一早上进行呼应，更反衬出妈妈为了孩子回家不辞辛劳。
默写版
一、以非谓语动词(短语)、with复合结构或独立主格结构开头
1.(2026·全国I卷)Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. __________________________, Emily agreed without hesitation.丹尼尔和瑞秋建议艾米丽继续乘坐火车前往。艾米丽意识到他们这番建议十分明智，便毫不犹豫地同意了。
【感悟】以suggest和advice为连接点，用现在分词短语作状语，表达原因和结果。
2.(2025·全国II卷)In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. __________________________, I felt a mix of nervousness and excitement.在一次课堂讨论中，我被邀请解释自己名字的含义。当我站起身时，心中涌起一阵紧张与兴奋交织的情绪。
【感悟】现在分词短语作伴随状语，人物的画面感跃然纸上。
3.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. With excited tears in my eyes, I thanked him again, __________________________.颁奖仪式结束后，我前往老师的办公室。眼中含着激动的泪水，我再次向他致谢，并补充说，正是他让我初次领略了写作的魅力。
【感悟】with复合结构和现在分词短语表示伴随,增加了文章表达的简洁性和语言表达的丰富性。
4.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me.__________________________, he was in low spirits.我们并排坐了下来，但大卫始终没有看我。他低着头，神情低落。
【感悟】开头用了分词充当时间状语,不仅使行文简洁,而且突出动作,惟妙惟肖。
二、以名词性从句、状语从句或定语从句等从句开头
5.(2025·全国I卷)I realized it was me who was at fault. I had been so focused on keeping the party under control __________________________.我意识到问题出在我身上。我之前过于专注于控制这场派对，以至于忽略了在这一艰难时刻，托比对我的哥哥有多么重要。
【感悟】用状语从句和宾语从句，让内容表达紧凑，一个句子既表达了自己当时的状态，又表明了事情的原因。
6.(2021·浙江高考·1月卷)I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.__________________________, making myself a laughing stock of my family! 我被困了五六分钟，但感觉时间过得格外漫长。真希望当时自己没有那么愚蠢——那样我就不会成为家人嘲笑的对象了！
【感悟】由该段首句内容“我被困了五六分钟,但感觉要长得多。”可知,该段开始可描写作者是多么后悔把头插入南瓜中,此处用了感叹句,且wished后加了宾语从句。
7.(2021·浙江高考·1月卷)I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. My brother came up with an idea __________________________.我卡住了五六分钟，但感觉时间过得更久。我哥哥想出了一个主意——用刀把南瓜切开。
【感悟】该句idea后面that引导同位语从句,对idea进行解析,同位语使文章更加紧凑,同时增加了文章表达的高级性。
三、以形容词/副词(短语)开头
8.(2026年1月·浙江卷)After we managed to secure the cow to a tree, we began to discuss what to do with it. ____________, a farmer passing by recognized the cow immediately — it was his. 在我们将这头牛拴在树上后，我们开始讨论该如何处置它。幸运的是，一位途经此地的农民立刻认出了这头牛——它正是他的。
【感悟】此处副词Luckily巧妙地衔接了discuss what to do with it，给人柳暗花明的感觉。
9. (2018.06浙江高考)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. __________________________, I wondered if we could find our way back. 我们完全不知道自己身处何地，天色已暗。由于疲惫且饥饿，我思忖着是否还能找到回去的路。
【感悟】此处是形容词作状语的结构，作了后面句子的伴随状语。
10.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷) A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. __________________________, I beat a lot of participants and won the first prize.几周后，当我几乎快要忘记这次比赛时，突然传来喜讯——出乎意料地，我击败了众多参赛者，荣获了一等奖。
【感悟】根据该段首句内容“几个星期后,当我几乎忘记比赛的时候,传来了消息。”可知,开始可以写作者得知这个消息时的感受,可以写兴奋、吃惊或意外,本句用了副词unexpectedly描述当时的意外的心情。
11.(2021·浙江高考·6月卷)I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished. __________________________, I rushed into my room and lay in bed thinking about how to spend the money.我惊讶地发现，父亲允许我随心所欲地使用这笔钱。我兴奋不已、欣喜若狂，便冲进房间躺在床上，思考着该如何花掉这笔钱。
【感悟】由该段首句内容“我很惊讶,我爸爸允许我按照我的意愿使用这笔钱。”可知,本段可描写作者兴奋的心情,开始用excited and overjoyed准确地描写了作者的这种心情。
四、以倒装句、强调句等句型开头
12.(2022·浙江高考·6月卷)As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile.__________________________, I did my utmost to keep myself calm and hand out the delicately-wrapped meal to those in need, with my hands trembling.当他们朝我走来时，我绽放出最灿烂、最幸福的笑容。尽管内心十分紧张，我还是竭尽全力保持镇定，颤抖着双手将精心包装的餐食分发给那些需要帮助的人。
【感悟】这里“Nervous as I felt”用了倒装句,提高了文章表达的质量。
13.(2021·浙江高考·1月卷)That video was posted the day before Halloween. ________________ for amusement.这段视频是在万圣节前一天发布的；是我弟弟出于好玩而发布的。
【感悟】由该段首句内容“这段视频是在万圣节前一天发布的。”可知,该段续写开始部分可以补充说明谁发的,这里用了强调句,突出发视频之人。
五、以介词短语开头
14.When the girl was walking in the garden , a snake appeared suddenly.____________________, she screamed at the top of her voice. 女孩正在花园里散步时，一条蛇突然出现。一看到蛇，她就以最大的声音尖叫起来。
【感悟】句中at the sight of 意为“一看到... ”，在句中作时间状语，用在此处，能完美地呼应段首句中的“suddenly突然”，与前一句衔接自然生动。
六、以时间状语开头
15.(2026·全国II卷)Struck by the doctor’s warning, I knew I had to make a change. __________________________, I initiated my battle against my deep-rooted habits. I forcibly switched off my laptop and phone at 10 p.m., placing them completely out of reach.医生的警告让我深受触动，我意识到自己必须做出改变。就在当晚，我便开始了与那些根深蒂固的坏习惯的抗争——我在晚上10点强行关掉了笔记本电脑和手机，并将它们放在完全无法触及的地方。
【感悟】此处以That very night为连接点，前面是医生的忠告，后面是从那天晚上，自己就与坏习惯抗争，衔接自然。
16.I didn’t leave the injured dog.__________________________, “go all out to save the poor creature.”
就在那时/那个时刻，我内心有个声音低声说道“竭尽全力帮助这个可怜的小生灵吧。”
【感悟】此处加上时间状语then 使得句子与所给段首句的衔接更加自然，描写更加生动。
17.__________________________, I can’t help but shed tears of gratitude. 在那个时刻，我唯有流下感激的泪水。
【感悟】时间状语 at that moment 不仅起到衔接过渡的作用，还可以让文章更加生动自然。
七、以对话或独白开头
18.Then appeared a rescue boat with a pole attached to it.“__________________________.” one of the men shouted.随后，一艘系着一根杆子的救援船出现在眼前。“别担心，救援船正在赶来，”其中一名男子喊道。
【感悟】此处借鉴一考生的文章，这里的语言描写使得文章画面感很强，与段首句完美衔接，符合故事发展的逻辑，反映了见义勇为者看到希望时的兴奋。
19.The car abruptly stopped in front of him.“__________________________” Paul shouted at Mac. 汽车突然停在他面前。“上车！”保罗对麦克喊道。
【感悟】该句简洁明了，刻画了一幅生动的画面即大难临头，恰逢有人拔刀相助的快意，生动形象，情节紧凑。
八、以连词开头
20.My mother had been preparing the dinner all the morning.__________________________ , she felt very excited , expecting us to come back.我母亲整个上午都在准备晚餐。尽管她有些疲惫，但内心却感到十分兴奋，期待着我们回家。
【感悟】此处用连词“尽管”与段首句妈妈忙了一早上进行呼应，更反衬出妈妈为了孩子回家不辞辛劳。
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