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读后续写 做人做事 课堂学案
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵
一、人物动作细节描写
女窃贼的动作细节描写
1.她没有四处寻找，而是径直走进储藏室，偷了奶酪、巧克力、黄油和其他做蛋糕的原料，
然后沿路跑走了。
Instead of searching around, she ______________________ into the storage room,
___________ cheese, chocolate, butter and other ingredients for a cake, and then
___________________ down the road.
2.她双手掩面坐到了地板上。
She _______________________________________ and sat down on the floor.
3.门打开出来一个瘦弱的女人。
The door opened and ________________________________________________.
两个警察的动作细节描写
4. 两名警察迅速赶到商店，却发现现场根本没有犯罪迹象。
The two policemen quickly arrived at the shop, ______________________________ that the
scene showed no sign of crimes at all.
5. 另一名警官鲍勃掏出了一把枪，准备破门而入。艾伦却让他把枪收起来，轻轻地敲了敲
门。
Bob, another officer, _________________________. But Alan told him to put the gun away and
________________________________.
二、人物的语言细节描写
1. 就在那时，一个孩子的声音打破了沉默:“妈妈，有人来参加我的生日吗? 请把他们请进
来。”
At that very moment, _________________________________, “Mom, is anyone coming for my
birthday? Invite them in, please.”
2. 克拉拉听了男孩的话后，站起来低声哀求道:“警官，我确实偷了东西，但我没办法。今
天是孩子生日，而我既没工作也没钱。请不要把这些东西拿走。我刚用它们给他做了个蛋
糕。”
After hearing the boy's words, Clara ___________________________, “Officer, I did steal those
things, but there's nothing else I could do. It's my baby's birthday, and I've got neither job nor
money. Please don't take those things away. I've just used them to make him a cake.”续写部分的语言应与原文特点保持一致
一、人物的动作和情感细节描写
1.在他眼前是一个营养不良的男孩，他忙着拿面粉，眉开眼笑。
① A undernourished boy was in front of his eyes. ___________________________________
while working busily with flour at hand. （神态+动作描写）
②_________________________________, ______________________________while working
busily with flour at hand. （倒装句+非谓语动词）
2.听了这话，鲍勃感到很尴尬，他不停地搓搓双手，似乎想在这寒冷的十二月里暖和起来。
①At this, Bob felt embarrassed, ____________________________________________seemingly
to get warm in this freezing December. （三连动词，情感+动作+环境描写）
②At this, Bob felt embarrassed,
_______________________________________________seemingly to get warm in this freezing
December. （非谓语动词）
二、人物的动作和语言细节描写
1.他抬头看到了艾伦，艾伦立刻解释道:“嘿，我是艾伦。我在这附近巡逻，是来祝你生日快乐
的。”
He looked up and saw Alan，_____________________, “Hey, I am Alan. I come to say
Happy Birthday to you as I am patrolling this neighborhood.”
2.Alan走出来，递给Clara一张20美元的钞票，微笑着说:“既然我还在值勤，你能帮我给你儿
子买一份漂亮的生日礼物吗?”
①Alan ___________, _____________Clara a twenty dollar bill, and ___________,“Would you
help me buy a nice birthday gift to your son now since I am still on duty?” (三连动词构
成动作链+对话描写）
②Alan _________________, and __________Clara a twenty dollar bill,
___________,“Would you help me buy a nice birthday gift to your son now since I am
still on duty?” （非谓语动词）
3.看着Clara那消瘦的身影渐渐远去， Alan坚定地说:“我会帮助弥补店铺的损失。”
①As Alan saw Clara's bean-pole figure gone into the distance, _______________________,“I
will help cover the loss of the shop.” （时间状语从句）
②______________________________________________________,
___________________________________,“I will help cover the loss of the shop.” （非谓语
动词）
4.最后，他鼓起勇气说:“兄弟，我也可以帮忙。我付钱把它们作为我送给这位母亲和她的孩子
的圣诞礼物。”
Finally, ____________________________________,“Buddy, I can also help. Let me pay for
them as my Christmas gift to the mother and her child."三、满分结尾句
1.神态+场景描写
阿兰凝视着鲍勃的眼睛，看到了一种真诚的善良，天空中飘下小小的雪花，白而纯净。
_____________________________________, Alan saw the genuine kindness glistening with
little soft snowflakes falling down from the sky, white and pure. （非谓语动词）
2.自然式结尾
Clara承诺她将通过自己的努力改善她的生活，不再做任何非法的事情。
______________________________________________________________and would no longer
do anything illegal again.
尝试续写
Looking into the woman's teary eyes, Alan understood and walked into the house.
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Bob nodded thoughtfully and asked, "What about the things she stole?” ____________
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答案
一、人物动作细节描写
女窃贼的动作细节描写
1.walked straight ; stole ; ran away2.buried her face in her hands 3. out came a very thin woman
4. only to find 5. pulled out a gun and was about to break in; knocked gently
二、
1. a child's voice broke the silence 2. stood up and begged in a low voice
续写部分的语言应与原文特点保持一致
一、
1. ① He was beaming from ear to ear ②In front of his eyes was a undernourished boy,
beaming from ear to ear 2. ①twisted and rubbed his hands over and over again
② twisting and rubbing his hands over and over again
二、人物的动作和语言细节描写
1. who immediately explained 2. ① stepped out；handed ； smiled② stepped out； handed
； smiling3. ① he answered in a firm voice ②Seeing Clara's bean-pole figure gone into the
distance； Alan answered in a firm voice 4.he gathered his courage
三、满分结尾句
1.Staring into the Bob's eyes 2. Clara promised that she would improve her life by her own efforts
