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读后续写-----情绪描写
(每一篇都能用！)
情绪形容词 情绪名词
joyful 快乐的 joy 喜悦
delighted 高兴的 delight 喜
grateful 感激的 gratitude / gratefulness 感激
appreciative 欣赏的; 感激的 appreciation 欣赏
thankful 感谢的，感激的 thankfulness 感恩
annoyed 恼怒的，气恼的 annoyance 烦恼
furious 狂怒的 fury 愤怒
sorrowful 悲哀的 sorrow 悲哀
fearful 恐惧的 fear 恐惧
frightened 害怕的，惊吓的 fright 惊吓
panicked 恐慌的 panic 恐慌
regretful 后悔的 regret 内疚；悔恨
astonished 惊讶的 astonishment 惊讶
frustrated 沮丧的；挫败的 frustration 挫败；灰心
brave 勇敢的 bravery 勇气
1、无灵主语 · 解析
我开心：“ I am happy . ”
(换主语) ：“开心(的情绪)抓住了我”Delight seized me.
(加介短) ：“一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我” A wave of delight seized me.
(加并列) ：“开心与振奋(的情绪)抓住了我”Delight and excitement seized me.
(加副词) ：“即刻地，一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我”Instantly, a strong sense of
delight seized me.
(加时间状从) ：“听到那好消息，一股开心(的情绪)即刻抓住了我”Instantly, a strong sense of delight seized me as I heard the good news.
句式总结：
① 无灵主语 + 时间状语从句： 情绪名词+动词+sb+as/when sb do sth. 长句
Uncontrollably, nervousness overwhelmed Peter as he stepped onto the stage .
② 非谓语：情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2, sb do sth, doing sth. 加在你的“sb do sth”前
Nervous and slightly scared, Peter managed to step onto the stage, starting to deliver his speech.
③ 让步状语从句：情绪形容词+as sb+be动词, sb do sth. 加在你的“sb do sth”前
Nervous as he was, David plucked up courage and made his way to the stage.
④ 独立主格：身体部位+非谓语动词，sb do sth. 长句
Hands trembling slightly, peter still managed to step onto the stage.
Tears welling up in his eyes, he thanked the police with/in a trembling voice.
Eyes filled with regretfu l tears, sb do sth... (眼里满含着...)
Eyes glittering with relief/joy, sb do sth... (眼里闪着...)
Face gleaming with delight, Peter failed to utter a word. (脸上洋溢着喜悦)
Heart beating with happiness, sb... (某人的心因...而怦怦直跳)
其他部位：Arms/legs/muscles aching and knees shaking/trembling, I did sth...
(胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛，膝盖发抖/颤抖，我...)
(划横线的情绪词，可按需换掉)
练习：
1. 无灵主语： “情绪名词+固定动词+sb”+as/when sb do sth
当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时，我感到欣慰和开心。
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2. 非谓语：情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2, sb do sth, doing sth.
(感到) 放松的和快乐的，大卫在越过终点线后立刻向我挥手，表达他的快乐和感激。
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3. 让步状语从句：情绪形容词+as sb+be动词, sb (still) do sth.
尽管很着急和不情愿，我还是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。
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4. 独立主格：身体部位+动词非谓语，sb do sth. 、
Tears welling up in sb’s eyes /streaming down sb’s cheeks, sb do sth
Eyes glittering with relief/joy, sb do sth... (眼里闪着...)Face gleaming with delight, Peter failed to utter a word. (脸上洋溢着喜悦)
Heart beating with happiness, sb... (某人的心因...而怦怦直跳)
大卫自信而坚定，继续奔跑，汗水顺着他的脸流下来。
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句式特点+全文位置建议
① 无灵主语+时间状从：(情绪名词+动词+sb)+(as/when sb do sth). (独立长句) (重)
② 非谓语：情绪形容词1+,情绪形容词2, sb do sth, doing sth. (加在句首) (“浅写情绪”)
③ 让步状语从句：Adj.+as+sb+be动词, sb do sth. (加在句首) (“浅写情绪”)
④ 独立主格：肢体+非谓语, sb do sth. (独立长句) (着重突出情绪)
⭐情绪描写-位置建议：
续写首句
心理变化处 “首尾 + 变化处”
情节变化处
结尾句
