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读后续写奇遇篇+肢体动作2 课堂学案
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵
一、动作细节描写（构建动作链，双连动词或利用非谓语动词）
1. 查理走进那家商店，把那枚湿漉漉的五十便士硬币放到柜台上。
Charlie entered the shop and _______ the damp fifty pence on the counter.
2. 查理抓住巧克力三两下撕去包装纸，狠狠咬了一大口。然后又是一口……再一口……啊，往嘴里赛
进大块大块香甜而硬实的东西那滋味真是美极了！
Charlie ________ it and quickly _________ the wrapper and bite_____________. Then he took
another... and another... and oh, the joy of being able to cram large pieces of something sweet
and solid into one’s mouth!
3.查理点点头，他的嘴里塞满了巧克力。
Charlie _________ , his mouth bulging with chocolate.
4.查理仍热狼吞虎咽地吃着那块巧克力。他根本停不下来。不到半分钟，整块巧克力就进了肚。
Charlie ______________. He couldn’t stop. And in less than half a minute, the whole thing
____________ down his throat.
5.他伸手去取找头，却又停住了。他眼睛的高度刚好超过柜台，他睁大眼睛看着放在柜台上的银币。
He ____________ to take the change. Then he paused. His eyes were just above the level of the
counter. They were ___________the silver coins lying there.
6.查理把它拿起来，撕开包糖纸……忽然之间……从包糖纸里……闪出一道耀眼的金光。
Charlie _________________ the wrapper...and suddenly...from underneath the wrapper.. .there
came a brilliant flash of gold.
7.查理的心停止了跳动。
___________________________.
二、胖店主的动作描写
1.”当然罗！“肥胖的店老板说，又从身后架子上拿出了一块高级惠普尔奶油巧克力软糖，把它放
在柜台上。
“Why not?” the fat shopkeeper said, ________ him again and taking another Whipple-
Scrumptious Fudgemallow Delight from the shelf.
2.店老板腾空跳了几乎一尺高，大叫着，“是一张金奖券！”
“It’s a Golden Ticket!” screamed the shopkeeper， __________________.
三、人群活动场景描写
不到几秒钟，二十几个人就围住了查理， 还有更多的人从街上挤进来。
In a few seconds, there was a crowd of about twenty people _________________ Charlie, and
many more ________________________________.
四、人物外貌描写
柜台后的男人十分肥壮。他脖子上面的肥肉肥都堆在了领口，就象套了个橡皮圈。
The man behind the counter looked fat. The fat around his neck bulged out all around the top of his
collar __________________.
续写部分的细节描写（与原文语言特点一致）
一、查理的动作、情感细节描写
1.查理站在那里一动不动地，手指摸着那张金奖券。① Charlie was fixed to the ground，and fingers stroked the golden ticket. (腿部+手部
动作）
② Charlie was fixed to the ground，________________________________. （独立
主格结构）
2.想到他贫困的家庭使他想卖掉票换钱。
______________________________________urged him to sell the ticket for money.
（无灵主语句）
3.他有一种奇怪的飘飘然的感觉，好像自己是个气球在空中飘来飘去。
There was a strange floating feeling coming over him as though
_________________________________________. （明喻）
4.他点点头，像鹿一样飞奔回家，急切地想分享这个令人难以置信的奇妙的消息。
①He nodded and darted home like a deer, and he was eager to share the incredibly
miraculous news. （双连动词）
②_____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________( 形
容词短语做状语）
二、胖店老板的动作、语言细节描写
1.他领着查理走到街上，看着查理的眼睛，低声说:“听着，孩子。不要卖掉它。没有什么
比快乐更珍贵。”
①He ______ Charlie out to the street, looked into Charlie’s eyes, and ________
,“Listen, kid. Don’t sell it. _______________. ” (三连动词）
② ________________, he looked into Charlie’s eyes, _________________,“Listen,
kid. Don’t sell it. ______________________________. ” （非谓语做哦状语）
2.“别打扰这孩子，好不好!”让让路!让他出去!”他把查理领到门口时，低声对他说:“别让任
何人得到它! 赶快拿着它直接回家吧!”
"Leave the kid alone , will you! Make way there! Let him out!” And to Charlie, as he led
him to the door, he _______ ,"Don't let anybody have it! Take it straight home quickly!”
人群活动场景描写
1.兴奋的人们伸出胳膊去抢他的票或拍他的肩膀，“卖给我吧!”我会给你很多钱!”
①Excited people reached/held out their arms to grab the ticket or pat on his shoulder,
“Sell it to me! I will give you a lot!” (手臂动作描写+语言描写）
②_____________________________________________________________________
________, “Sell it to me! I will give you a lot!” (被动句）
2.人群在他周围推着、喊着，他听见心在嗓子眼砰砰跳着。
①The crowd pushed and shouted around him, and he could hear his heart
thumping away loudly somewhere in his throat. (肢体动作+无灵主语句）
②______________________________________, he could hear his heart thumping
away loudly somewhere in his throat. （独立主格结构）
三、满分结尾句
① 呼应标题式+场景描写式
那天晚上，查理紧紧地抓着票，进入了梦乡。香甜的巧克力奇迹般从机器里流出，工厂里满是甜甜的味道。
That night, ______________________, Charlie slipped into a dream, where the river of
sweet chocolate streamed out of machines like a miracle,
____________________________. (非谓语做状语+定语从句+独立主格）
② 感悟升华式
晚上，查理躺在床上，脸上带着甜蜜的微笑。我们永远不知道生命中下一块巧克力的味道，但
充满期待的巧克力总是最美味。
At night, Charlie laid on the bed with a sweet smile. Never would we know the taste
of next chocolate in our life, but
_________________________________________________________.
答案
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵
一、动作细节描写（构建动作链，双连动词或利用非谓语动词）
1. laid 2. grabbed；tore off ；took an enormous bite 3.nodded
4. went on wolfing the chocolate； had disappeared
5.reached out a hand； staring at 6.picked it up and tore off7.Charlie’s heart stood still
二、胖店主的动作描写
1.reaching behind 2. leaping about a foot in the air
三、
gathering around ；were pushing their way in from the street
四、人物外貌描写
like a rubber ring
一、查理的动作、情感细节描写
1. fingers stroking the golden ticket
2.The thought of his needy family 3. he were floating up in the air like a balloon
4.He nodded and darted home like a deer, eager to share the incredibly miraculous
news.
二、胖店老板的动作、语言细节描写
1.① led； whispered； Nothing is more precious than joy.
②Leading Charlie out to the street； whispering；Nothing is more precious than joy.
”
2.whispered
三、人群活动场景描写
1.Arms of excited people were reached/held out to grab the ticket or pat on his shoulder
2.The crowd pushing and shouting around him
三、满分结尾句
① holding the ticket tightly；the sweet smell filling the big factory
② the chocolate full of expectation always tastes best
