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读后续写 汪星人与喵星人 课堂学案
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵
一、背景描写
1.直到最近我才知道，一只小宠物可以成为一个无助的妈妈的助手。
Not until recently __________________that a little pet can be such a helpful
assistant to a helpless mom.
2.这都要归功于我们的新家庭成员，一只名叫苏拉的小猫。
This is all due to what our new family member,__________________, has done.
3.似乎在任何时候都她清楚Iris需要什么。
She seems to understand exactly _______________ at any given time.
二、女儿 Iris 的动作细节描写
1.一天晚上，Iris睡不着。当她越来越沮丧时，她开始哭，她的抽泣声充满了安静的房间。
One night, Iris_____________.As her frustrations mounted, she started to cry,
and __________________________.
2. 除了她最喜欢的书，似乎没什么能安慰她。我渴望得到帮助，但除了我，她推开了所有
的人，让我几乎崩溃。
Nothing seemed to comfort her apart from her favorite book and I longed for
some help, but she _____________ all who tried except me, making me on the
edge of __________________.
三、猫咪 Thula 的动作细节描写
1.在楼下，我丈夫惊讶地看着突然从他的腿上站起来的Thula。
Downstairs, my husband looked at Thula in surprise who had suddenly
__________ his lap.
2. 她的眼睛盯着门，一只爪子高高地抬起，悬在空中。
Her eyes focused towards the door and she ______________, perfectly poised
in the air.
3. Iris的哭声吸引了她的注意力，然后她的四条腿飞快地动起来。
Something _______________________ - the crying of lris. Then
________________________________________.
4.她嗖的一声转过拐角，跃上楼梯，进了Iris的卧室，跳到床上。
Zooming round the corner, she ________________ the stairs into Iris's bedroom
and _________________ the bed.
5.她蜷缩在Iris身边，不搭理她的哭声，开始给自己梳理毛发，舔爪子，在耳朵上蹭来蹭去。
She __________________ next to lris, ignored the crying and started grooming
herself, ________________________________.
续写部分的细节描写（与原文语言特点一致）
一、女儿 Iris 的动作细节描写
1. Iris 放下书看着小猫,双眸满是好奇。
① Iris’s eyes glittered with curiosity.___________________________________
___________________________ . (双连动词）
② ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ . （ 独 立 主
格）
2. Iris 的手搭在 Thula 的肩上，我听到了轻轻的咕噜声。
________________________ and I could hear a gentle purr.
3.Iris 伸出手，用手指拢了拢小猫蓬松的皮毛。
Iris ______________________ and ___________________________________
the puffy fur of the kitten.
二、猫咪 Thula 的动作细节描写
1.就像施了魔法一样，苏拉的大耳朵向前耷拉着，然后又向后弹。她对着苏拉的大
耳朵咯咯地笑了起来。
As if by magic, she giggled at Thula's huge ears as they were
_________________forward and then pinged back.
2.小猫咪发出一声柔软的喵喵叫，然后蜷成了一个毛茸茸的小球。
The little creature____________________ and ___________ into a furry little
ball.（双连动词）
三 、“我”的动作和场景细节描写
1.我如释重负地溜出房间，在楼下等着，听着不可避免的哭声，那哭声会把我拉回
到她身边。
①I was relieved. I________________________ , waited downstairs, and listened
for the inevitable crying that would take me back to her side. (动词链， 三连动
词）
② ________________________________the inevitable crying that would take
me back to her side. (形容词做状语+分词做状语）
2.片刻之后，一片寂静：没有咯咯的笑声，没有翻书的声音，也没有哭声。
Moments later,_________________ : no giggling, no pages being turned, and no
cries. （排比）
四、满分结尾句
首尾呼应式
1.虽然 Thula 还是一只小猫咪，是我们家的新成员，但她已经开始照顾 Iris 了。
①-____________________________ and a new member of our family, Thula
was already caring for Iris. (让步状语从句）
②_____________________________________________ , Thula was already
caring for Iris. (省略句）
2.这只神奇的小猫正改变我们的生活，而这仅仅是个开始。
This magical kitten was changing our lives and _________________________ .
尝试续写
Almost immediately, Iris's mood changed. _________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I was curious about the silence, then returned to the door of Iris's room and
looked in. ______________________________________________________
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答案
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵
一、背景描写
1.have I known 2.a little kitten named Thula
3.what lris needs
二、女儿 Iris 的动作细节描写
1.refused to sleep； her sobs filled the quiet room
2. pushed away；breaking down
三、
1. got up off his lap 2. had one foot raised 3. had grabbed her attention； her
legs were moving fast 4.flew up the stairs； jumped onto 5.curled up；licking
her paws and rubbing them over her ears
续写部分的细节描写（与原文语言特点一致）
一、
1. ① She put down her book and looked at the kitten ② Her eyes glittering
with curiosity, Iris put down her book and looked at the kitten
2. Iris's hand rested on Thula's shoulders 3. reached out her hands； ran her
fingers through
二、 1.folded down 2. made a soft meow；curled itself
三、1.① slipped out of the room ② Relieved, I slipped out of the room, waited
downstairs, listening for 2.there was silence
三、满分结尾句
1. ①Although Thula was still a tiny kitten ②Although still a tiny kitten and a
new member of our family 2.this was just the beginning
