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读后续写 社会温情+人际关系课堂学案
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵
一、人物活动的场景描写
1.Nobody had expected something unusual would happen later and everyone was doing
their usual: a pretty girl _________________________________(和男朋友愉快地聊
天)about a newly-released film.
2.______________________（坐在我旁边）, a young woman with a suitcase and a
baby ________________________________ (从手提箱中拿出一条围巾) and made
her baby a nest, so that it could lie more comfortably.
3.A railwayman at last came down the length of the train to tell us that
_______________________________（电源发生故障）, and that we were not to worry
as they were working to put it right.
二、场景氛围描写
1.The weak signal ____________________________ (使手机无法使用). Besides, the
train was ______________________(变得闷热) .
2.In fact, the train had just left Green Park Station when, instead of speeding up, it
____________________________________________________(开始减速，然后停了下
来).
3.Ten minutes passed, though
____________________________________________( 虽然像半天), the train didn't
move.
三、心理活动描写
原文有大量的心理活动描写，细读原文并补全以下各句，并背诵
1.Had the railwaymen forgotten all about our existence? Had there been a crash on
the line in front? How serious was the breakdown? __________________ (我们无法知
道).
2.However, to anxious people who are stuck in the Tube, I suppose
____________________________________________________ (到底是什么坏了并不重
要). ___________________ (他们所在乎的) is when they can get out of the trouble.
3.___________________________（地铁真的坏了吗)? Several people thought so, but
they were wrong.
4.I even began to wonder ____________________________________________ (我
们是否要在那待上一整天).
续写部分的细节描写（与原文语言特点一致）
一、人物活动的场景描写
1. Heat and lack of fresh air ____________________ (使我们焦躁不安)and complaints
ran through us.
2. ①Those______________________________（站在窗边的人) attempted to open
them to let in fresh air but in vain. (定语从句)
②Those _______________________（站在窗边的人) attempted to open them to let in
fresh air but in vain.（分词做定语）
3._____________________________________________________________ (漂亮女孩
既恼火又焦虑). ________________ （她对她的男朋友皱起眉头）, and blamed himfor selecting the wrong route. (无灵主语句+神态描写+语言描写)
4.Some ______________________ (不耐烦地跺脚) while some angrily pounded on
the wall. (动作+副词)
5.Unexpectedly, the pretty girl and her boyfriend joined me immediately they heard
me. Then, ___________________________ ( 越 来 越 多 的 乘 客 跟 着 唱 起 来 ) .
____________________________________________ (宝宝不哭了，听着，咯咯地笑起
来) .
二、满分结尾句
①自然式结尾
Our faces beamed and ________________________________________________
(我们灿烂的笑容照亮了整个车厢).
②首尾呼应式结尾
There was cheer in every face. I knew
________________________________________（我会永远记得这不同寻常的一天）.
③ 场景+氛围描写式结尾
The light flashed and the train_____________________________________ (慢慢地向下
一站驶去). _______________________________________ (一种释然而愉快的气氛)
settled over the train. （无灵主语句）
尝试续写
The hopeless waiting in the darkness drove us crazy.
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As a commuter(上班族) who traveled to work on the train every day, I thought it
my duty to do something.
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答案
一、
1.chatted merrily with her boyfriend
2.Siting next to me；took a scarf out of her suitcase
3.the power supply had failed
二、
1.disabled cellphones; getting hot and stuffy(闷)
2.started to slow down and then came to a stand-still
3.it seemed like half a day
三、
1.We had no means of knowing
2.it doesn't really mater what it is that has broken down ；What they care
3.Had the train really broken down
4. if we were going to stay there for the rest of the day
续写部分
一、
1.made us restless 2 ①who stood by the windows ② standing by the windows
3.Annoyance and anxiety swallowed/seized/ swept over /flooded over the pretty girl;
She frowned at her boy friend 4.stamped impatiently 5.more and more passengers
sang along;The baby stopped crying，listened, and giggled.
二、满分结尾句
1.our bright smiles lit up the train
2.this would be an unusual day I would always remember3.the train moved slowly off towards the next station;An air of relief and delight
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵
一、描写背景和自然环境
1.Due to the pandemic, society was thrown into crisis mode. Schools were close，food supplies
and deliveries were suspended and ____________________________________ (孩子们被困在
家）.
2. It seemed that she came from _____________________ (经济苦难的家庭)，for she always
wore old clothes.
3.It was __________________ (极其寒冷) this winter.
二、描写人物动作和神态
1.Worse sill，in such cold days，she had no more clothes to wear and ________________(冷得
发抖).
2.In such discouraging times，however, they became good companions，_______________ (说
话玩耍) at home or around the houses.
3.Then，he _________________________ (过来看） whether I finished the scarf.
三、描写人物的对话
1.Every time David came back from outside，with red face，_______________ (他总大声说)，
“ Mum，it is freezing outside !"
2.But David ______________________________（安慰我说) he could wait a few days.
续写部分的细节描写（与原文语言特点一致）
一、情感细节描写
1. 他低头看着我刚刚完成的围巾，高兴极了。他的脸照亮了整个房间，黑色的眼睛像
钻石般闪烁。
① He looked down at the scarf l had just finished, he was overjoyed.
___________________________________________ . （情感词汇+神态描写+比
喻）
② Looking down at the scarf l had just finished, he was overjoyed,
____________________________________________ .（现在分词做状语+独立主
格）
2. 他既高兴又激动，不能自已。他一下子扑到我的怀里，喃喃道：妈妈，谢谢你。
①_____________________________________. He threw himself into my arms, and
murmured, “Thank you, dear mum.” （情感描写+具体动作+语言描写）
② ______________________________ ， he threw himself into my arms, murmuring,
“Thank you, dear mum.”(用形容词短语做状语+分词做状语)
3.看到大卫在外面玩得很开心，围巾为他遮风避雨，抵御刺骨的寒风，我欣慰而满足。
①__________________________, as I saw David play happily outside, and thescarf sheltered him to brave the bone-chilling wind.
②_________________________ , I saw David play happily outside,
_________________
_____________________________________________. (形容词短语做状语+with复合
结构）
4.看着大卫手里拿着围巾冲进简的家，我感到一阵骄傲。
①I saw David rush into Jane's house with the scarf in his hand, and
_________________________________ . (动作+情感描写）
②_______________________________________________________________
___________. （非谓语动词做状语）
二、动作细节描写
1.他像只快乐的小鹿一样蹦蹦跳跳地出去找Jane，脖子上的围巾在空中飞舞着。
①He skipped out to join Jane _____________________ , and
__________________________________ .（具体动作描写和修辞+场景描写)
②
_______________________________________________________________________
_
___________________________________________. （with 复合结构）
2.听到我的话，他低下了头，陷入了沉思，然后抬起头问他是否可以把他的围巾给Jane.
①At my words, he ________________________________, and he was lost in
thought. Then he raised his eyes and asked if he could give his scarf to Jane.
② At my words, _______________________________, before raising his eyes and
asked if he could give his scarf to Jane. ( 非谓语动词做状语; before+非谓语动词)
3. 他感激地笑了笑，跳了起来，吻了吻我的脸颊，然后一阵风似地冲了出去。
①He smiled gratefully, ___________________, kissed me on the cheek and
_______________________ . （四连动+比喻）
②
_______________________________________________________________________
____（非谓语动词做状语）
三、满分结尾句
1.看到这一切，我欣慰地觉得，我们可以用爱和善良度过这次疫情。
Witnessing all this, I was relieved to know that
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2.我清楚地认识到：一条温暖的围巾可以帮我们度过寒冬，而善良和爱心可以帮我们
战胜任何疫情。
I was fully aware _________________________________________________and
love and kindness can get us through whatever severe pandemic.
尝试续写
I wrapped the scarf around David's neck.
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Later that day David came back saying Jane also deserved a scarf.
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答案
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵
一、
1.children were stuck at home 2.a financially disadvantaged family 3.dreadfully cold
二、
1.trembled with cold 2.talking and playing 3.came over to see
三、
1. he always cried 2.comforted me saying
续写部分的细节描写（与原文语言特点一致）
一、
① His face lit up the whole room and dark eyes twinkled like diamonds.
② his face lighting up the whole room and dark eyes twinkling like diamonds2. ① contain his joy and excitement. ② Unable to contain his joy and excitement
3.①I felt relieved and content②Relieved and content；with the scarf sheltering him
to brave the bone-chilling wind
4.①I felt a burst of pride
②Seeing David rush into Jane's house with the scarf in his hand, I felt a burst of
pride.
二、动作细节描写
1.① like a happy deer； his scarf around his neck flew in the air
② He skipped out to join Jane like a happy deer, with his scarf around his neck
flying in the air.
2.① lowered/hung/bent/drooped his head
② he lowered/hung/bent/drooped his head, lost in thought
3. ① leaped to his feet, dashed out like wind
② Smiling gratefully, he leaped to his feet, kissed me on the cheek and dashed
out like wind.
三、
1.we could survive the pandemic with love and kindness.
2.a warm scarf can help us survive however cold weather
