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专题 32 读后续写之如何续写故事开头
《考点•题型 •技巧》
考点导航
1.开端布局方法1：副词突显动作等
2.开端布局方法2：形容词短语表明心态
3.开端布局方法3：非谓语动词的烘托
4.开端布局方法4：使用从句
5.开端布局方法5：使用介词短语
6.开端布局方法6：对话或独白
7.开端布局方法7：介绍人物身份
8.开端布局方法8：情绪烘托
9.开端布局方法9：背景烘托
10.开端布局方法10：人物动作特写
11.开端布局方法11：声音效果传情
12.开端布局方法12：设问激发思考
一个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入，能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的兴
趣，并且愿意听下去，跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香
味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读
者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么在时间紧
迫的考场上的英语读后续写的过程中，如何写出靓丽的开头呢？我们可以从语法手段和
写作涉及的内容来具体涉及故事的开端。
【题型分析】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a doctor, so I love my job. I always have, but I feel particularly proud to do it at the
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司moment. With COVID-19 sweeping through Wuhan, people are avoiding hospitals as possible
they can. However, pregnant women still need to come into the hospital. Babies still need to be
born.
Right now, it is even scarier for these women, as they have to come in on their own, often
feeling frightened. Their families are separated from them due to safety measures. We’ve always
provided physical support, but now we are doing so on a different level — we also have to keep
them company and offer emotional support. Unfortunately, some of the women have caught
corona-virus, and being at the hospital puts me at risk. Personally, I feel protected because we
have full personal protective equipment, which we wear all through our 13-hour shifts. You don’t
know if someone is carrying corona-virus or not.
I didn’t want to put my family in danger by bringing the virus home and possibly passing it
on to them. As a single parent to my children, Xiaohua, 12 years old, and Xiaoyong, 9, I realized I
had to make a very tough decision about my family’s safety when the country went into lockdown.
Giving up work wasn’t an option for me. I wanted to be able to look after the women who were
feeling poorly and very scared, but I could not leave my little angels behind either.
At this point, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband for the time
being and leave me to my hospital duties. I thought it was a great idea, so we set a date for her to
pick them up. When I explained the situation to my angels and told them they needed to stay with
their aunt for a while, they both seemed upset, but agreed to go. On the day I saw them off, they
kept looking back at me until they were too far to be seen.
注意：
1、续写词数应为150左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill.
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A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday.
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1、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some
people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.
People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting
the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she
would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a
man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy.
The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.
“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such
a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do.”
After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could
help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”
“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”
For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have
a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”
The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a
good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent
us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it
around to the houses and sell it.”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too.
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With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.
2. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I took a job as a receptionist for a veterinarian weeks ago. As an enthusiastic animal lover, I
accepted the position on the condition that I wouldn’t have to assist with any wounded animals. I
couldn’t bear to see any creature in pain.
At the end of my first week, we were about to close the office for the day when a young man
in his thirties ran up to us holding a severely injured Doberman pinscher puppy in his arms and
begging us to save his life. The four-month-old pup had been hit by a car.
The doctor and I rushed back into the operating room immediately. The poor creature was in
critical condition. The only place the skin was still attached to this poor little animal’s body was
around one shoulder. The vet worked tirelessly for what seemed like hours, stitching him back
together again. That was the easy part. The puppy had broken multiple bones, including his spine.
If he was lucky enough to survive the next few days, we were quite sure he would never walk
again.
The day forever changed my life. The veterinarian instructed me, and I became his assistant
in all things medical. One of my first jobs was to give that Doberman puppy daily physical
therapy. I moved his tiny legs on a regular basis to keep his muscles from weakening.
Weeks went by until one day, I felt this little fighter push back ever so slightly. And he
continued to push back till he could finally use his legs. What a miracle!
Day by day, the little fighter made a little bit progress until the vet called his owner telling
him that his puppy was ready to go home. Having accompanied the puppy for several months, I
could imagine how excited and relieved the young man was. And I was sure he would took good
care of. Two days later, the puppy was taken away by his owner.
1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
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I went on to be a vet tech for 14 years, and since retirement, I’ve volunteered at a no-kill
animal shelter.
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3、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A Vacation with My Mother
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my
mother---loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I
was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to
spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day
of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of
our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived,
and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely
drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse
and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨) while I go, and I’ll
stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey,
where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh…I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were
never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in
vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-
looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great
relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对). If a strange
family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in
the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. ______________
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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. ______________
4、
My school had a tradition during the ninth-grade graduation: a beautiful gold and green
jacket (the school colors), was awarded to the student who had maintained the highest grades for
nine years.
I had been a straight A student since the first grade and had looked forwards very much to
owning that jacket. My father was a farm laborer who couldn't earn enough money to feed five
children. I was given to my grandparents to raise. There would never be a school sports jacket for
us. This scholarship jacket was my only chance.
One day in May, I happened to overhear in the office. Mr. Schmidt, my history teacher, and
Mr. Boone, my math teacher arguing about me. “I refuse to do it! I don't care who her father is；
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司her grades can't match Martha's at all. I won't lie or falsify (伪造)records.” said Mr. Schmidt
angrily.
But Mr. Boone's voice sounded calm. “Joann's father is not only on the Board (董事会), he
owns the only store in town: we could say it was a close tie and…”
Shaking and sad, I, waited a few minutes and walked away.
The next day when the principal called me into his office. “Martha,” he said, “There's been a
change in policy this year regarding the scholarship jacket. This year the Board has decided to
charge fifteen dollars, which still won't cover the complete cost of the jacket. So if you are unable
to pay the money for the jacket, it will be given to the next one in line.”
Standing with all the dignity I could find, I said，“I'll speak to my grandfather about it, sir,
and let you know tomorrow.” I cried on the way home.
注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field.
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I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed.
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司5. 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was an Art lesson. Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water
jars and paints. She understood why Mrs. Weston asked her to sit down and got Lisa to fetch
everything for her. It was always a disaster when Rachel tried to do Art!
Rachel sighed and reached out to dip her brush in some black paint and—oh, no! She
knocked over the jar. The water spread across the desk and drowned the paper. Lisa called Mrs.
Weston to see what Rachel had done. Rachel went red in the face. She jumped to her feet to get a
cloth. Her chair fell over backwards. She turned round and her paintbrush caught Lisa across the
face, giving her a black moustache. Lisa was so surprised that she fell back against a wire
bookstand. It came crashing down and the books went all over the floor.
How clumsy (笨拙的)! Rachel thought as she went home on the bus. The bus stopped outside
her house. She jumped up and her elbow (肘部) knocked a woman’s hat right over her eyes. Oh,
no! Rachel said sorry, got off and ran indoors. Mum wasn’t in the kitchen but lay in bed as she
caught an awful cold. Rachel offered to make a cup of tea but Mum would rather wait for Dad.
Rachel sighed. She understood Mum was afraid she would spill (溅出) it.
“But would you go to Mrs. Willow for some cold cure?” asked Mum. Rachel turned to the
door at once. “But Rachel, Mrs. Willow’s house is full of beautiful things, so if she asks you to
come in, you’d better say no.” Rachel sighed and ran out.
Mrs. Willow was an old lady with white hair and sharp blue eyes living in an old house. She
opened the door and invited her in. Rachel said why she came and that she preferred to wait
outside remembering her mother’s warning. Mrs. Willow insisted Rachel come inside. Rachel
took a deep breath and stepped in. She looked round Mrs. Willow’s sitting room and saw at once
why Mum had been worried.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures(瓷雕) and delicate vases.
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With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before.
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6、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from
his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but
they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled
(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to
show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought.
But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly
catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired
the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back,
shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's
bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to
quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to
show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that zxxk once he hit the hill, he’d
be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later,
they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got
closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in
front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
7. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a doctor, so I love my job. I always have, but I feel particularly proud to do it at the
moment. With COVID-19 sweeping through Wuhan, people are avoiding hospitals as possible
they can. However, pregnant women still need to come into the hospital. Babies still need to be
born.
Right now, it is even scarier for these women, as they have to come in on their own, often
feeling frightened. Their families are separated from them due to safety measures. We’ve always
provided physical support, but now we are doing so on a different level — we also have to keep
them company and offer emotional support. Unfortunately, some of the women have caught
corona-virus, and being at the hospital puts me at risk. Personally, I feel protected because we
have full personal protective equipment, which we wear all through our 13-hour shifts. You don’t
know if someone is carrying corona-virus or not.
I didn’t want to put my family in danger by bringing the virus home and possibly passing it
on to them. As a single parent to my children, Xiaohua, 12 years old, and Xiaoyong, 9, I realized I
had to make a very tough decision about my family’s safety when the country went into lockdown.
Giving up work wasn’t an option for me. I wanted to be able to look after the women who were
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司feeling poorly and very scared, but I could not leave my little angels behind either.
At this point, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband for the time
being and leave me to my hospital duties. I thought it was a great idea, so we set a date for her to
pick them up. When I explained the situation to my angels and told them they needed to stay with
their aunt for a while, they both seemed upset, but agreed to go. On the day I saw them off, they
kept looking back at me until they were too far to be seen.
注意：
1、续写词数应为150左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill.
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A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday.
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