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八年级下学期期末重难知识点串讲+精练
专题14 书面表达专练
一、同步作文
1．良好的习惯让人受益终身。如何培养良好的习惯？请根据以下内容提示，以“How to develop a
good habit”为题，用英语写一篇短文，可以适当发挥。
要点：1. 坚持锻炼，不要熬夜，睡眠充足；
2. 多吃水果蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品；
3. 努力学习，广泛阅读；
4. 体贴父母，多做家务；
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注意：要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，不需逐条翻译；短文不少于80词。
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【答案】高分范文：
How to develop a good habit
It’s very important for us to develop good habits. As teenagers, what should we do?
In my opinion, it is a good habit to keep exercising and get enough sleep. Remember not to stay up late.
What’s more, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s necessary for us to study hard
and read some books to get more knowledge. We should also care for parents and help them do more housework in
our spare time. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean.
I hope everyone can keep healthy and strong.
【解析】
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求根据以下提示内容，以“How to develop a good habit”为题，写一篇短文，包括锻
炼、饮食、学习、家庭生活等方面的内容，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍怎样养成一个好习惯时，
应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
2．假如你是Jack，你班打算本周日在人民广场举办一次义卖活动来帮助那些有需要的同学。请你用
英语写一篇短文，说明此活动的相关内容，并谈谈你的想法。
提示：
1. 义卖旧书和旧衣物等；
2. 还有一场歌舞表演；
3. 邀请老师和家长参加。要求：80词左右，可适当增加细节。
提示词：People’s Square人民广场 charity sale义卖
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【答案】例文
I’m Jack. To help some students in need and cheer them up, my classmates and I are going to have a charity
sale at People’s Square this Sunday. We will sell some old books and old clothes. We hope to buy some school
things for some poor students with the money. There will be a song and dance performance, too. It’ll be exciting.
We’d like to invite our teachers and parents to come. We think the activity will be interesting and meaningful.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给内容写一篇关于本周日举办义卖活动的作文。
2.写作指导。本文时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时；人称以第一人称为主。文章要紧扣题目要点，围绕
主题，准确使用一定的语法，词汇和短语句型。注意不要遗漏要点，逻辑清晰。
3．假如某报社正在以“We should do chores at home”为题进行征文比赛，请你根据下面的提示，用英
语写一篇80词左右的短文参加比赛，可适当发挥。
提示：1.许多学生不愿意做家务，他们认为做家务是父母的工作，而且做家务浪费他们的时间；2.列
举你常做的家务；3.你自己的内心体会。
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【答案】范文
We should do chores at home
Now many students don’t like doing chores at home. Some students think it’s the parents’ job to do chores at
home and that doing chores is a waste of their time. But I think we should help do chores at home because our
parents are busy with their work and often tired after work. I often do chores at home, like making the bed,
watering flowers, cleaning the rooms, taking out the rubbish and so on.
In my opinion, doing chores is relaxing. And it feels great to help my parents.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据“We should do chores at home”为题进行写作，需要根据所给
提示，用英语写一篇短文来参加比赛。
2.写作指导：本文应采用一般现在时，人称采用第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，文章开篇需先点明主
题：许多学生不愿意做家务；接着阐述理由；然后表达自己的观点，并说明自己的具体行动；最后陈述自
己的心得体会。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句
成篇，要层次分明，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表达符合语法的结构，词汇拼写准确，词汇、
句式要丰富多样。最后要细心检查，确保正确无误。
4．假设你是Gina的笔友Alice，读完Gina的来信后，请给她写一封回信。要求：不少于80词。
Dear Alice,
I have some problems. I need your help. I think I’m very shy and that I can’t get on well with my classmates.
But I really want to be popular at school. Besides, I want to join a guitar club, but I don’t have enough money to
buy a guitar. Now I’m upset. Could you give me some advice?
Yours,
Gina
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【答案】高分范文
Dear Gina,
I am sorry to hear that you have some problems. I hope I can help you.
In order to be popular at school, maybe you should try to be more outgoing. How about joining some clubs
and helping others when they’re in trouble? You could also take part in after-school activities. If you don’t have
enough money to buy a guitar, why not borrow some money from your friends? I’m sure they will help you.
I hope that my advice can help you.
Yours,
Alice
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求根据Gina的来信中提到的“害羞而不能和同学友好相处”等问题，
给她回信，针对这些问题提一些建议。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和一般现在时为主来行文；写作时，可以交替使用一些提建议的句型：
How about...；Why not...；You should...等来给文章增色；写作时要符合书信格式，介绍内容时，力求语言
准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
5．假如你是林海，昨天下午5点，你在上学回家的路上目睹了一场可怕的交通事故。请根据下列提示，
用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，描述事故的经过。可适当发挥。
Weather Snowy
What happened A red car ran fast and hit a big tree.
What you did Called the police.
What you learned from it …
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【答案】One possible version:
It was snowing heavily at 5 o’clock yesterday afternoon. At that time, I was on the way home from school.
Suddenly, a red car appeared at a street corner. It was running very fast, and the road was icy. Unluckily, it hit a big
tree. The driver tried to get out of the car, but he couldn’t open the door of the car. Seeing that, I called the police
for help at once. A few minutes later, some policemen came and saved the driver. I think drivers should always
drive carefully and that they should be more careful on snowy days.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据题干信息和表格提示的要点，写一篇短文描述路上目睹的事故经过，
属于给材料作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应该用第三人称，以一般过去时和过去进行时为主，以第一人称和一般
现在时为辅进行叙述。写作中紧扣要点提示，介绍清楚事故发生的时间、地点和主要经过，最后写一下感
想。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
6．同学们，你们一定听过《守株待兔》这则故事吧。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短
文介绍一下这则故事。
提示:
—位农夫在田里干活的时候看到一只野兔撞在了树桩上； 2. 农夫把野兔拿回家，做了一顿美餐；3.
之后，农夫每天都守在树桩旁，希望能再次碰到撞死的野兔。
提示词： hare 野兔；tree stump 树桩；by accident 偶然；run into 遇到；撞到
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【答案】例文
Once upon a time, there was a farmer. One day, while he was working on the farm. He saw a hare ran into a
ties stump by accident and died. The farmer took the hare home and cooked a delicious meal for himself, That
night, he thought, “I don’t have to work so hard. All I have to do is wait for a hare every day by the tree stump.” So
from then on. He gave up farming, and waited by the tree stump. But just from then on, he never saw another hare
run into the tree stump.
This story tells us we will get nothing unless we work hard. Remember: No pain. No gain.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍《守株待兔》这则寓言故事。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时。按照提示内容，讲述这个寓言故事，在最后一段发表自己的哲理感悟。
写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
7．由于人类大量砍伐树木、猎杀动物，地球上的动植物越来越少，有些动植物正面临着灭绝的危险。
请你写一篇不少于80词的发言稿，呼吁人们保护动植物。
提示词：fur皮毛 bone骨头
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【答案】高分范文
Hello, everyone! As we all know, plants and animals are very important to us. Plants can make the air fresher.
They can also keep the beauty of nature. Animals are our friends. They are an important part of nature. But now
people are cutting down trees for wood and killing animals for their fur, meat or bones. Some kinds of plants and
animals are becoming fewer and fewer. They are really in danger now.
We share the world with plants and animals. So we should try our best to protect them.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿，来呼吁人们保护动植物，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时态，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，用到文中所给提示词，内容
上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
8．音乐可以展现人的内心世界，听音乐也是人们辛苦之余最简单、最有效的缓解疲劳的妙策。你平
时喜欢听音乐吗？你最喜欢的歌手是谁？他/她的哪首歌是你百听不厌的呢？请你以“My favorite song”为
题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的一首歌。
提示词：melody旋律；曲调
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【答案】高分范文：
My favorite song
I have many hobbies and listening to music is one of them. I have already listened to many songs. Of all the
songs, Invisible Wings is my favorite. Angela first sang it in 2006. The words of the song can always give people
energy. Many people say their hearts are full of hope after they listen to the song. The melody is so beautiful that it
has been popular all over the world. And it has won many prizes. Have you listened to the song yet? If not, I hope
you can listen to it.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“我最喜欢的歌曲”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。先介绍自己最喜欢的歌曲是什么，再介绍这首歌曲的相关情况，包括
由谁演唱，给予人们哪些正能量等信息。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．旅游可以让人放松身心，增长见识，所以很多人都想利用闲暇时间去旅游。请你根据下列提示，
写一篇80词左右的文章介绍你最近的一次旅行。
提示：1. When did you have the trip?
2. Where did you go on the trip?3. Who did you go on the trip with?
4. What did you do during the trip?
5. How did you like the trip?
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【答案】高分范文：
I like traveling and I have been to many places of interest on vacation. Last summer vacation, I went to Mount
Tai with my parents and sister by train. When we climbed up the mountain, I was so tired that I wanted to give up.
But all my family encouraged me to keep going. At last, I had the chance to see the beautiful sights from the top.
While we were walking around, we took lots of nice photos. It was an exciting and wonderful experience. From the
trip, I have learned that we can succeed only if we never give up.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己最近的一次旅行。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。文章开头先引出主题，再介绍自己去年暑假的旅行经历。写作时
保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
10．假设你是Mike，你有一件很喜欢的物品，而且保存了很久。请根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右
的英语短文，介绍这件物品的来历以及你喜欢的原因。
提示：1. What is the thing that you like best and how long have you kept it?
2. Who gave it to you?
3. Does it have special meaning to you? Why?
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【答案】高分范文
I have had a toy car for about ten years. And I still like it a lot although it looks old. When I was a little child,
my parents were so poor that they couldn’t buy any gifts for me. I had no toys to play with. One day, when I was
alone at home, my aunt sent a toy car to me. I was very happy to get it and loved it very much. And it has brought
me much happiness since then. It has become my best friend. I love the toy car.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。要求根据所给的问题提示介绍一件你最喜欢的物品，包括该物品的来
历以及你喜欢它的理由。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和一般过去时为主来介绍。介绍该物品的来历和喜欢它的理由时，可以
用故事来完美呈现；写作时注意保持主谓一致性，除所给信息外可适当展开，注意语言的准确性，不要有
语法和拼写错误。
二、预测作文
1．童年是人生中最美好的一段时光。尽管我们已告别童年，但童年中总有那么一件你最爱的并能给
你带来甜美回忆的物品值得我们珍藏。假设你叫李华，是一名八年级学生，你的学校校刊正在举行“美好
童年”的征文比赛。请以“My favorite _____in childhood”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东
西，你拥有它有多长时间了，是怎样得到它的，以及你喜欢它的原因。
要求：1. 内容包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文章结构完整，语句通顺，条理清楚；
3. 80词左右。
My favorite ________ in childhood
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My favorite gift in childhood
Since I was born, I have received a good number of gifts. But the best one is a watch, which my dad gave me
when I entered senior middle school. At that moment, my family are living a hard life. Although it was not
expensive, in order to buy me the gift, my dad made every effort to earn money. Each time I see the watch, I think
about my great dad. He always tries his best to support our family and he is the greatest man in my heart.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，以“My favorite _____in childhood”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年
你最喜欢的东西，拥有的时间，怎样得到的以及喜欢的原因。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，
介绍童年最喜欢的礼物时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
2．美好的生活和学习中，总会有些东西值得我们回忆或珍惜，可能是一本书，一个玩具，一件物
品……，请根据下面提示和要求，写一篇英文短文，讲讲你最喜欢的这件东西吧！
1. How long have you had it?
2. How did you get it? Who gave it to you?
3. Why do you like it so much? Why is it special?
4. What has happened to it?
注意：
1.词数80左右；2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3.文中请勿提及真实姓名和学校。
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【答案】例文：
My favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years.
My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday.
I like it very much because it is so cute. It’s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day untilI was ten years old. I think it was one of my best friends. The toy bear has left me so many memories.
I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. Now, I don’t want to give it up, but
to be honest, I have to. Because I’m getting older!
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。结合题目提示，描述自己最喜欢的东西。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；首先第一段开篇点题，介
绍最喜欢的物品是什么，以及你拥有了多长时间；第二段表达你是什么时间的得到的这个物品，以及如何
得到的；第三段介绍喜欢这个物品的原因以及它为什么特殊；最后则表达我与它之间发生了什么以及我对
这件物品的感受；保证内容完整，结构清晰条理，无单词拼写和语法使用错误。
3．某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示，以“The changes in my
hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
过去：生活贫困，房屋破旧；污染严重，垃圾遍地；交通不便，游客很少。
现在：环境：山更绿了，水更清了，天更蓝了；
生活：住房宽敞明亮，许多人有了自己的汽车。
旅游：每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。
要求： 1.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.文中不能出现真实的人名。
参考词汇：house房屋 ；convenient便利的； pollution污染；mountain山 ；future未来
The changes in my hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small, and people lived a poor life. ______________________________
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【答案】参考范文：
The changes in my hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small, and people lived a poor life. The houses were old and small.Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came
here.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The
mountains have turned greener, the rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass
everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every
year, thousands of people from all over the world come to our city.
I’m sure it will get richer and more beautiful in the future. I love my hometown.
【解析】
【详解】
1、题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，写作时应承接短文开头，然后分别从环境、生活、旅游介绍过
去和现在的变化，最后介绍自己对家乡的感情，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般过去时和一般现在时；介绍家乡的变
化时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
4．健康的身体是我们中学生学习的保证。但是网络抢走了我们的锻炼时间，垃圾食品威胁着我们的
健康。请根据下面的提示，以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示：1.坚持锻炼；2.健康饮食；3.合理上网；4.充足的睡眠；5.保持愉快的心情。
要求：1.不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥。
2.词数：80字左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy.__________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文：
How to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy. As a middle school student, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here aresome suggestions.
First, we should do exercise at least one hour a day, such as running or walking. Second, have a healthy diet.
Eat more fruit and vegetables. Try not to eat junk food. Third, we’d better not spend too much time going online. It
is bad for our studies and eyes. Fourth, go to bed early and don’t stay up too late, because enough sleep is good for
our health. Finally, be happy as possible as we can. Learn to smile at ourselves at any time.
If we do so, I believe we can keep healthy.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文是材料作文。要求以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，根据所给提示内容进行写作。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出，可以接着介
绍保持健康的重要性；第二段具体展开介绍如何保持健康；最后一段表达自己的展望。写作时保持主谓一
致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
5．同学们，我们每个人在成长的历程中，既会与快乐相伴，也会遇到各种烦恼。请以“My biggest
problem”为题，按照下面思维导图的内容提示，用英文描述一下你生活或学习中曾遇到过的最大烦恼。
写作要求：
1.写作内容要包含思维导图中相关的要点，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数不少于80词，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Biggest Problem
During my growing-up years, I had a happy time, but I had some problems. My biggest problem was
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【答案】参考范文（One possible version）
My biggest problem
During my growing-up years, I had a happy time, but I had some problems. My biggest problem was that I
used to be alone because I didn’t have friends. And I didn’t know who I should ask for help when in trouble.
Then how did I solve it? First, I tried to communicate with others more often and make as many friends as
possible. And when I was in trouble, I told my friends and classmates about my trouble because we were the same
age and we could understand each other easily. I also asked my teachers and parents for help. Now, I can get on
well with people around me so I don’t feel lonely anymore.
From then on, I learn that we should face the problem and try to find ways to solve it. Anything is possible if
we try our best.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作。在写作时需认真阅读给出材料，要包含思维导图中相关的要点。
第一段应承接短文开头，写明自己的烦恼是什么；第二段叙述如何解决这一烦恼；第三段谈谈自己的看法。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来组织内容，要求能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句
型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。注意检查确保无单词拼写及语法错误。
6．良好的家庭关系对青少年的健康成长很重要。但现实生活中，不少孩子和父母之间缺乏必要的沟
通和交流。作为晚辈，我们应该如何和父母友好相处呢？请根据下面的提示，以“How to get on with
parents?”为题写一篇70词左右的文章。（文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数）
提示：
1. 主动和父母交流，说一些学校发生的事情；
2. 每周至少跟父母一起做一件事，比如做饭、逛商场等；
3. 遇事多与父母讨论，他们会帮你更好地解决问题。
How to get on with parents?
As teenagers, it’s important to get on with parents. What should we do?______________________________
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【答案】例文
How to get on with parents?
As teenagers, it’s important to get on with parents. What should we do?
Firstly, we should spend some time communicating with our parents. For example, we may talk about our
teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school. Secondly, we should do something with our parents each
week, such as making dinner or going shopping. We’ll improve our relationship with them in this way. Thirdly,
we’d better discuss our problems with them. They will help us find better ways to solve them.
It’s not easy to get on with parents. So we should learn to be understanding first.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示以“How to get on with parents?”为题，谈谈如何和父母和睦相处，给出自
己的建议。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来写作文本；时态采用一般现在时；短文开头已给出，第二段详细介绍
怎么做；最后一段总结；描述自己的建议要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
7．最近你们班要举办一次英语读书报告会的分享活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文为此次
活动做准备。
1.要点提示：
（1）简单介绍一下你阅读的书。
（2）请你写出书中的大概内容，以及你读完之后的感受。
（3）这本书对你有什么影响。
2.注意事项：
（1）80词左右。
（2）行文应连贯流畅。
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。
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【答案】例文：
I’ve read Who Moved My Cheese. It’s so educational that I’ve read it twice. There are four characters in the
book. One day, they find lots of cheese and then they live a happy life. Unluckily, some days later, they can’t find
cheese in other places. But the others just feel upset and don’t take any action. The book tells us that there are
changes in our life. We must change ourselves to face the changing environment, or we won’t succeed. I think if we
adapt ourselves to society, we’ll get more returns and feel more satisfied.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇英语短文介绍自己读过的一本书及感受，并讲明这本书对
自己的影响。要做到要点齐全，书写无误。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称书写，时态以一般现在时为主。首先要说明自己读过什么书，书的内容是什
么，然后说明自己的感受，最后讲明这本书让自己学会了什么，对自己有什么影响。要做到无语法和单词
拼写错误。
8．丰富多彩的课外活动（after-school activities）不仅帮助我们放松，也为我们的生活增添了生机和活
力。请你以“My After-school Activities” 为题写一篇短文，说说你参加过的课外活动（至少两项，包括活
动时间、地点、内容）、参加的原因、给你带来的收获及感受等。
要求：
（1）80词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】例文
Today, in China, more and more schools pay attention to after-school activities. My parents also think it’s good
for me to have some appropriate activities after school, and it is a good way to communicate with each other.Normally, I always go to swimming pool with my parents two or three times a week, it is healthy and gives us
time to play together. All of us like swimming.
Besides, we would like to jog together, after dinner, we go out for jogging, talking, seeing something happen
around. Tell my parents my life in school.
Through these activities, I feel relaxed and healthy.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我的课外活动”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为四段式：第一段介绍课外活动的好处；第
二段和第三段介绍自己曾经参加过的课外活动；最后一段表明自己的收获。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到
无语法和标点错误。
9．假设你是李华，你的朋友Mike在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到焦虑
和郁闷。请你根据以下内容用英语给他发一封电子邮件帮助他克服焦虑和情绪，轻松快乐地学习和生活。
内容包括：
1. 每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候，要告诉他人你的烦恼。
2. 遇到困难时，多与同学交流或者和老师、家长及时沟通，用这种方法我们可以获得更多的理解和支持。
3. 听轻音乐或参加户外活动也是让人放松的另一种好方法。
4. 无论我们遇到怎样的困难，我们都可以克服的。
5. 可以就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活等适当发挥。
注意：1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数：80左右；
3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：outdoor adj. 户外的 be supposed应该 support n.支持
Dear Mike,
It is common that _________________________________________________________________________
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Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mike,
It is common that everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. It’s all right to tell others your bother when
you are anxious.
I think communicating with your classmates, teachers or parents is a good choice. Then you’ll find that you
can solve the problems from study or life easily. What’s more, we are supposed to have a heart-to-heart
communication with our parents or friends around us. In this way, we can get their more understanding and support.
Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed. Try to smile at
yourself and never keep silent about your problems.
No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件，结合所给提示，给Mike写一封电子邮件，给他一些建议，帮助他轻松、
快乐地生活。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第二人称。写作时，首先承接开头，安慰对方每个
人都会感到焦虑；然后针对问题给出合理的建议；最后进行总结。注意条理清晰、无拼写和语法使用错误。
10．假如你是某英文杂志“知心问答”栏目编辑牛牛，最近你收到初中生李伟的来信，请根据信件内
容给他写一封回信。
Dear Niuniu,
I’m Li Wei. I came to a new school last week. My Putonghua is not good, I’m afraid that my classmates laugh
at me, so I don’t talk much. My English is also poor. And I have no friends here. I’m not happy every day. What
should I do?
Yours,
Li Wei
要求：80词左右，可适当发挥，信件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Wei,
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Cheer up! I believe everything will be OK.
Yours,
Niuniu
【答案】例文：
Dear Li Wei,
I’m so sorry to hear you aren’t happy these days. Here is some advice for you.
First, don’t be shy. Try to practice your Putonghua. When talking with your classmates, be confident. Don’t
refuse to talk with them. You should show them you are a smart and friendly boy. Second, study harder. Spend
more time on English than other subjects and ask your teachers for help when you have problems. Read and speak
English as much as you can. Third, do more activities together with your classmates. During those activities, you
will be able to make some friends.
Cheer up and be happy! I believe everything will be OK.
Yours,
Niuniu
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇书信作文，要求根据李伟的来信内容写一封回信，帮助李伟解决在新学校遇到的问
题。回信需要围绕三个李伟遇到的问题：普通话不好怕同学嘲笑；英语不好；没有朋友。必须要点齐全，
可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般现在时，句式主要使用祈使句。正文给出关于
李伟遇到的三个问题的建议，同时注意选用合适的连词、短语和句型来将内容进行串联和拓展；信的最后
要鼓励祝福李伟。文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、
单词拼写和标点错误。
