北京曲一线图书策划有限公司 2024版《5年高考3年模拟》A版
题型六 读后续写
Writing 1 (2022辽宁名校联盟3月联考)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
6⁃year⁃old Jesse was playing in the field when he suffered an electric shock, leaving him
unconscious. He was rushed to the hospital. When he opened his eyes, he found both his arms
gone.
His mother was concerned with him. She was aware that Jesse couldn't depend on his
parents all his life. So she guided Jesse to learn to use his feet. To her delight, within three
months, Jesse could do many things with his feet, even write.
It was time for Jesse to start school. On the first day, he was laughed at by other kids.
Then Jesse surprised everyone that he wrote much more beautifully than the normal kids.
While walking, Jesse often fell because it was hard for him to keep balance without arms.
He practiced again and again until he made it to walk steadily. Then he could even run fast.
At the age of 10, Jesse became an athlete of the disabled track and field team of his city.
He practiced very hard. At the age of 14, he was able to run 400 meters in 56 seconds. And it
was hoped that he could compete for the national champion. However, the international track
and field rules suddenly changed and his event was cancelled.
No one's life is easy, especially for the disabled. But Jesse didn't lose heart. He changed to
swimming. He was talented and became a professional member at the age of 17 with the hope
of winning the qualification of entering an international competition. But just before the
competition, his old injury returned and he only got the sixth place, which meant he could go
no further in sports. He was at a great loss, wondering where his future was.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
His father encouraged him to go back to high school for academic study after so
many years of sports life.
Once making up his mind, Jesse threw himself into what he was seeking.北京曲一线图书策划有限公司 2024版《5年高考3年模拟》A版
答案
写作提示
1.文章概述:儿时因意外事故失去双臂的杰西几经周折,克服重重困难,最终在学习上
取得成功。
2.续写段落:
①由第一段首句 “经过这么多年的体育生涯,他的父亲鼓励他回到高中学习。”可
知,第一段可写杰西在学习上遇到的困难以及直面挑战的决心。
②由第二段首句 “一旦下定决心,杰西就投身于他所追求的事业。”可知,第二段可
写凭借非凡的决心和努力,杰西终于在学业上取得成功并鼓舞了他人。
3.续写线索:返回学业—遇到困难—直面挑战—增强信心—取得成功—鼓舞他人。
One possible version:
His father encouraged him to go back to high school for academic study after so
many years of sports life. It can be imagined that he had lost too much time on studies. In
the first English test, he only got 20 points. He was lost in thought. If he wanted to live a good
life, he had no other choice but to go to college. Thanks to his years of sports training, he
developed the spirit of never giving up. He regained his confidence and decided to meet the
challenge bravely.
Once making up his mind, Jesse threw himself into what he was seeking. His
father set a goal for him to rank 200 at the end of the first year. But he managed to rank 17 in
the following examination, which strengthened his confidence of achieving his final goal.
Then he got the first place in all the following exams until the college entrance examination,
and was admitted into a famous university. He not only has used his own struggle to open up
a broad voyage in life, but also is using his strength to help more young people realize their
dreams.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇 regain one's confidence 重获自信 meet the challenge 迎接挑战 set a
goal 确立目标
2.出彩结构 But he managed to rank 17 in the following examination, which strengthened
his confidence of achieving his final goal.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Writing 2 (2022广东佛山质检二)北京曲一线图书策划有限公司 2024版《5年高考3年模拟》A版
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mai Lin wasn't doing well enough at school, or at least she wasn't satisfied with herself.
She wished she could do better.
“Let's review the material we learned in the last unit,” the history teacher said. “Who can
tell us what caused the War of 1812?” Mai Lin sat at her desk, staring ahead. She hoped the
teacher wouldn't call her name. They hadn't studied the War of 1812 at her old school and she
didn't know the answer.
“Alison?” the teacher asked instead. Oh, perfect, Mai Lin thought. Of course, Alison
would have the answer. She seemed to have all the answers. Alison was the most popular girl
in school—always surrounded by millions of friends. She was like a brilliant sun.
Mai Lin hadn't made one or two friends of her own so far. Her old school was small and
low⁃key, but a shy person like Mai Lin had a chance there. This new school, however, seemed
as big as an airport to Mai Lin, and it seemed very hard to get around in it. She still got lost
sometimes in the school.
Mai Lin frowned (皱眉) as Alison answered the teacher's question. Alison probably never
got lost, Mai Lin thought to herself. You could probably put Alison down in the middle of a
desert, and within five minutes she'd be able to tell you the best way to get home.
History class finally ended, and Mai Lin headed for the gym. The class had been playing
basketball. Alison, who was as tall and thin and attractive as a tree, was very good at it.
Beside her, Mai Lin felt like a very small and foolish ant. That day, however, the gym teacher
pointed to a thick rope hanging from the ceiling and said, “Everybody!You're going to climb
this rope today.”
注意:续写词数应为 150 左右。
Hearing the teacher's words, Mai Lin smiled.
Mai Lin stepped forward and got close to the rope.
答案
写作提示北京曲一线图书策划有限公司 2024版《5年高考3年模拟》A版
1.文章概述:麦琳从一个不起眼的小学校转到一所很大的新学校,看到优秀同学艾莉
森的表现后,感到不自信。后来,一次体育课的经历让她找回了自信。
2.续写段落:
①由第一段首句 “听到老师的话,麦琳笑了。”可知,第一段可写麦琳找到了自己擅
长的项目并勇敢表现自己。
②由第二段首句 “麦琳向前走去,靠近了绳子。”可知,第二段可写成功爬上绳子后,
麦琳找回了自信。
3.续写线索:艾莉森感到害怕—麦琳毛遂自荐—成功爬上绳子—找回自信。
One possible version:
Hearing the teacher's words, Mai Lin smiled. She knew what was coming. They'd
done lots of physical fitness training at her old school and she was quite good at rope
climbing. “Who's first?” the teacher asked. “Alison?” To Mai Lin's surprise, Alison turned as
pale as the moon and shook her head. “She's scared,” Mai Lin thought. “Perfect Alison was
scared.” Suddenly Mai Lin heard her own voice saying, “I'll do it.” Alison looked up at Mai
Lin in great surprise, and all the other classmates seemed surprised, too. The teacher nodded
and told Mai Lin to climb.
Mai Lin stepped forward and got close to the rope. She appeared calm but was
extremely excited. She climbed the rope very fast and reached the ceiling within what seemed
a few seconds, effortlessly. As she reached the top, she glanced down at her fellow students
below. Now it was Alison who appeared like a small ant. She saw Alison looking up, eyes
wide with admiration. Mai Lin clung to the top of the rope for a moment longer and then
headed down to join the class. Once she got on the ground, everybody cheered. Mai Lin knew
she would be different from that day on.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇 scared adj. 恐惧的 effortlessly adv.不需费力;容易 turn as pale as the
moon脸色像月亮一样苍白
2.出彩结构 She saw Alison looking up, eyes wide with admiration.(独立主格结构)
Writing 3 (2022山东德州4月联合质量测评)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。北京曲一线图书策划有限公司 2024版《5年高考3年模拟》A版
Kathy's family vacation to the beach was usually the highlight of her summer. This year,
however, her parents announced a new rule: no phones for the entire week.
“But my friends will be expecting updates about the trip,” Kathy complained. Kathy's
mom gave her a serious look. Unwillingly, Kathy handed her phone over and her mom locked
it away.
The drive to the beach house took most of the day. As they turned off the highway onto
country back roads, the clouds darkened. Rain started to pour. “Even more beautiful in the
rain,” her mother said. “What do you think, Kathy?” Kathy glared at her mom. “Beautiful,”
she muttered.
That night after dinner, Kathy wandered into the kitchen, where her father was washing
dishes. She gave her father a loving look and said in her sweetest voice, “Couldn't I have my
phone back, just for one second? Just so I can tell everyone what an amazing time I'm
having?”
“Can't,” he said. “It's not here. Remember?” Kathy was very annoyed. Having nothing
better to do, she examined the dusty bookcase in the living room. The books looked as dull as
the weather. On the top shelf, however, she spotted a puzzle. She took it, emptied the pieces
on the table, and began to sort them.
After what seemed like a few minutes, she looked up. It was past ten o'clock. She had
been working for almost two hours! She yawned. The puzzle was less than half done, but she
was exhausted. So, she went to bed.
When Kathy awoke the next morning, she jumped out of bed and threw open the curtains.
A blazing sun was rising over the blue ocean. The sky was cloudless. The scene reminded
Kathy of a photo that her friend Betty had recently sent her.
This view was even better. It would leave everyone speechless. Kathy dashed to her
bedside table and reached for her phone. But there was nothing there. She sighed. Still, she
wandered in front of the window, admiring the sunrise.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach.北京曲一线图书策划有限公司 2024版《5年高考3年模拟》A版
Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn't thought of her cellphone
for hours.
答案
写作提示
1.文章概述:Kathy一家去旅行,父母要求不带手机。开始Kathy不习惯,但又不得不遵
守规则。Kathy完成了拼图,欣赏到了平时看不到的美景,还尽情地享受了和父母在一起
的时间和温暖。
2.续写段落:
①由第一段首句 “Kathy快速地吃完早餐后,就跑去海边。”可知,本段可写Kathy
在海边所看到的壮丽的美景,并且感受到温暖的海风,然后回家完成昨天晚上没有完成的
拼图。
②由第二段首句 “欣赏着自己拼完的拼图,Kathy意识到她已经好几个小时都没有
想起手机了。”可知,本段可写在没有手机的打扰下,一家人在这里度过的温馨的时光,是
在平时感受不到的。回到家后,妈妈把手机还给Kathy后,Kathy似乎已经不需要手机了。
3.续写线索:去海边游玩—欣赏美景—回家完成拼图—与父母安静度假—不需要手机
—感悟。
One possible version:
After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach. Under no circumstances had
Kathy expected the scenery to be so spectacular! With the sea wind blowing against her face,
Kathy totally lost herself in the stunning views. After half an hour's leisure walk along the
beach, Kathy returned to the house. “How do I spend the rest of the day?” Kathy murmured to
herself. Suddenly, the unfinished puzzle caught her attention. She felt a little excited and
buried herself in it once again. Every time the shapes met, Kathy was overwhelmed by
happiness. Soon, all that were left were a few gaps. She quickly put the remaining pieces into
place. The puzzle was completed!
Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn't thought of her cellphone
for hours. Trying to preserve the image in her mind, she quietly started taking it apart rather北京曲一线图书策划有限公司 2024版《5年高考3年模拟》A版
than taking pictures to update her friends on the trip. “That,” she thought, “is just for me.”
Without the distractions from her cellphone, she found herself engaged in the story sharing
session with Mom and Dad willingly. They spent a high⁃quality family time together. On
arriving home, Mom gave her cellphone back. This time, however, she had no intention to
share but to keep all the great memories in her mind.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇 murmur to oneself自言自语 be overwhelmed by happiness 很高兴
2.出彩结构 Under no circumstances had Kathy expected the scenery to be so spectacular!
(倒装句)
With the sea wind blowing against her face, Kathy totally lost herself in the stunning
views.(with复合结构)
Writing 4 (2022重庆第一次联合诊断)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Children are like sweet⁃sour candy; no matter who you are or where you are, they please
you. Laughter tickles, and innocence is their beauty which everyone adores. They are rich
with joy, and purity. Yesterday, a sweet scene occupied me.
It was a summer morning. Sun poured its rays on the earth like holy wine. I was waiting
for the shuttle at the bus station wearing my uniform, a white shirt with gray bottoms. Few
people arrived and some departed from the bus stop to their destination. In a while, there
came a young couple with their daughter.
The little girl was around 4 or 5 years old. As they arrived, the baby caught everyone's
attention with her little naughty things.
She was wearing a yellow dress. Yellow was giving her a fresh look just like a sunflower:
rise and shine. Her red curly hair was like cotton candy. The most eye⁃catching factor was her
big round eyes. All black and dense having the glimpse of spark to explore everything. She
was observing and scanning everything with her little black eyes.
There came an ice cream man. I could see immediately after the van played music; she
asked her mother for something, but she denied it. Then she requested her father, and he
politely refused. She tied her hands and sat on the footpath as the sign that she is offended.
Red apple cheeks increased her cuteness.
