【题型训练】应用文写作+读后续写专题

应用文写作

假定你是李华，你看到了一则关于英语夏令营活动的广告，你计划暑假加入该夏令营以提高英语交际能力。请你给组织者Mr. Smith写封信，咨询有关情况。内容包括：

1. 为期多久；

2. 总费用是多少；

3. 需做哪些准备。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式作答。

Dear Mr. Smith,

______________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

审题分析

思路点拨

本题要求学生写一封咨询信，向英语夏令营组织者询问关于此次夏令营活动的相关信息。咨询信的主要目的是寻求所需信息，写作时要注意交代写信背景，以引出问题；罗列咨询的问题时，要有条理性，适当使用表列举的过渡词串联咨询内容，以增强文章的逻辑性和层次感。注意用语一定要礼貌、客气，措辞要得体。

参考范文

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am a Chinese student and plan to attend your English summer camp to improve my language skills.

Having seen your advertisement, I’d like to know more information about the summer camp. First, when does the activity start and how long does it last? Second, how much do I have to pay for the camp in total? Last, since I’ve never been in such a camp, would you please tell me what preparations I need to make in advance?

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

(80 words)

亮点词汇

1. pay for 支付……的费用

2. in total 总共

3. make preparations 做准备

4. in advance 提前

高级句型

1. I am a Chinese student and plan to attend your English summer camp to improve my language skills.（动词不定式短语作目的状语）

我是一名中国学生，打算参加你们的英语夏令营来提高我的语言技能。

2. Last, since I’ve never been in such a camp, would you please tell me what preparations I need to make in advance?（since引导原因状语从句；what引导宾语从句）

最后，因为我从来没有参加过这样的夏令营，您能告诉我我需要提前做哪些准备吗?

读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

One day, I visited my friend Marge to help with her spring household clean-up. A black-and-white cat met me at the door and he attempted to slip out. Marge quickly scooped him up (一把抱起). “Meow! Meow! Meow!” the cat’s cry filled the air. “This is Mr. Naughty. I’m watching him for Susan, my neighbour.” Marge then put him on the floor and gave him a pat. He curled himself into a furry little ball. We spent the afternoon sorting items for donation. When we finished, a towering pile of boxes lined the hallway.

Mr. Naughty strolled (溜达) over. I lifted the fluffy sweetheart. His fur glistened in the sunlight and his green eyes sparkled with curiosity. He rubbed his cheek against mine.

“When’s Susan picking him up?” I asked.

“This afternoon, as soon as her plane arrives. I’ll be glad when he’s back home. He is safe and sound with his mama,” Marge said.

I laughed and set Susan’s pet down on the hardwood floor. “Stop worrying. What could happen? Come on! I’ll help load these boxes in your car before I go.”

We lifted three boxes each. Piled up past eye level, they swayed (摇摆) in our shaking arms as we attempted to squeeze through the front door. Suddenly, I felt something furry brush against my ankle and saw him slide past with elegance. I watched in horror as he paced down the front stairs.

“No!” a scream burst from Marge’s lips as the cat leaped towards the fence and entered the bushes (灌木丛). “He’s not allowed outside! He’ll run away!” Marge cried. She dropped the boxes. “What will Susan do when she learns I lost her baby?”

“Calm down. I’ll get him.” I dumped my boxes and hurried down the steps to the far side of the fence.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式作答。

But he was nowhere in sight. ___________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Suddenly a faint sound reached our ears from a pipe on the house wall. _________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

文本解读

“我”帮Marge大扫除时，看到了Marge帮邻居Susan照顾的猫。“我们”搬着箱子挤出前门时，猫趁机溜出去跑进了灌木丛，“我们”赶紧去找却没找到。

思路点拨

续文第一段首句：“但它却不见踪影。”由此我们可以联想：Marge是什么反应？她做了什么？“我”是否会和Marge一起找猫？去哪里找猫？寻找的过程中“我们”的心情如何？根据续文第二段首句可知，我们经过寻找并没有找到猫，此时“我们”的心情如何？本段可以围绕以上几个问题进行续写。另外，续文第二段首句提示了“声音来自房子墙上的一根管子”，因此，本段如果涉及在外面找猫的情节，那么结尾一定要把场景切换回房子周围。

续文第二段首句：“突然，一个微弱的声音从房子墙上的一根管子里传到了我们的耳朵里。”由此我们可以联想：这是不是猫的声音？如何把猫引诱出来？猫是否会出来？“我们”的反应如何？Marge最终是否把这件事告诉了Susan？本段可以围绕以上问题进行续写。

参考范文

But he was nowhere in sight. Marge hurried to the bushes, calling out the cat’s name. Meanwhile, I searched the yard and combed the other possible hiding places, such as under the porch and behind the shed, but he was nowhere to be found. As the minutes ticked by, there was still no sign of Mr. Naughty. Our anxiety began to increase, and we determined to extend our search to the neighbourhood, but still in vain. At last, with heavy hearts, we dragged ourselves back to the yard.

Suddenly a faint sound reached our ears from a pipe on the house wall. It must be Mr. Naughty! Marge and I exchanged glances and dashed towards the sound. We knelt down, peered into the pipe, and spotted Mr. Naughty nestling inside, his green eyes gleaming in the darkness. We tempted him out with his favorite toy. It took us some time, but we made it. Relief swept over us, and we were overjoyed to see him safe and sound. Marge and I never told Susan about Mr. Naughty’s great escape. Nor, as far as we know, did Mr. Naughty.

(169 words)