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第 22 讲 读后续写（新高考）（练）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
一、
Ariana Porter was very excited. Tomorrow will be anew day and a new beginning, well, kind of. Tomorrow
Ariana will go to a boarding school! No little sister to share a room with, peace and quiet. She ate her favourite
homemade curry for the last time that year. Then, she curled up in her clean bed and shut her eyes. Excited.
The next day, Ariana woke up, jumped into her best clothes and flew downstairs. After a quick breakfast, the
whole family lined up and said their goodbyes. Ariana’s little sister tried to hug her, but she shrugged Liliana off.
And off she went to boarding school. Happy.
However, when Ariana got there, everyone looked unwelcoming. A teacher showed her to her dorm. It was
cold and dark! A few days later, Ariana got several letters. The rainbow one was from her little sister and another
from her parents. Ariana couldn’t even be bothered to open them. She just threw them into the main hall’s fireplace
when nobody was around.
Every day, Ariana tried to make friends. It was an allgirls school. Unfortunately, she had no luck. She tried to
give girls gifts, she tried to be friendly, but they shrugged her off just like she did to her sister. Two months passed
trying to find new friends, but without success. Ariana felt more and more lonely. Something was missing in her
life. Something indescribable. Something, or maybe someone.
Week after week went by and then, one day, holding yet another batch of mail, Ariana’s heart trembled. She
realized what she was painfully missing, her FAMILY. Whenever she was down, whenever she needed help or
comfort, they were there for her. Always. This time she opened the little rainbow envelope and smiled. Reading it
filled her heart with joy. Ariana couldn’t reply, for the school didn’t allow that, so she decided to hide the letters
under her pillow. The pile grew larger and they were so important to her, for the letters gave her the greatest
comfort when she was away from home.
Months passed eagerly waiting for the day when the school year ends. No more dorm life and unfriendly girls.
Ariana skipped to math class excitedly, but couldn’t concentrate, she dreamed about going home.
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Finally it was the day to go home and Ariana started to pack.
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Ariana was leaving the dorm when she realized she forgot something important.
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【答案】Finally it was the day to go home and Ariana started to pack. She was so excited at the thought of seeing
her family, whom she had not seen for a long time, especially her cute little sister, that she could not stop packing.
At this moment, a feeling of happiness arose spontaneously. She couldn't wait to get out of the dorm, the unfriendly
classroom and the girls, and she was so excited to go back home.
Ariana was leaving the dorm when she realized she forgot something important. The piles of letters under her
pillow were of great importance to her. Because it was these letters that gave her the confidence and courage to
carry on when she was having the toughest time. Every word in the letter was the best encouragement which
inspired her not to give up. She picked up the thick stack of letters carefully and packed them up, while thinking of
the warm scenes at home with her family. At that moment, she realized that it was the warmth and company of her
family that enabled her to go through this difficult time. She wanted to sincerely say: I love you my family.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ariana在新学校遇到许多不愉快的事情：交不到新朋友以及不愉
快的同学关系。但就在这艰难的时光中，是家人们一封封的信件让她感受到了家庭的温暖，给了她鼓励和
信心。假期来临，她迫不及待的回到家中与家人们团聚。
1.续写步骤：
①由第一段首句内容“终于到了回家的日子，阿利安娜开始收拾行李。”可知，第一段可描写阿利安娜迫
不及待的收拾行李的兴奋和激动，想到和家人的团聚。
②由第二段首句内容“阿利安娜正要离开宿舍，突然意识到她忘了一件重要的东西。”可知，第二段可描
写的是阿利安娜想起了枕头下面的那一封封来自于家人们的信件，给予她莫大的关心和鼓励，让她意识到
家人们的重要性。
2.续写线索：进入新学校——冷落家人——遭遇困境——家人来信给予鼓励和关心——感悟二、
Almost all the possessions had been sold to buy food and clothing for the family. At last, nothing was left but
the pet lamb, Daisy. At the thought of parting with the little creature, Mrs. Grant’s felt sad because the children
loved it very much. Having struggled hard, she had to make up her mind to sell the lamb. But she could not ask any
child to go for the butcher. Finally, she went herself with a heavy heart, dragging her leaden feet, and bargained
with the butcher for the sale of Daisy.
While the children were all playing with the lamb, the butcher and his boy came to the door. “ You see I am
here for the lamb, ” said the butcher in a loud voice. Hearing this, one child ran to her mother’s side, and asked
what was happening in alarm. Mrs. Grant gently pushed the child aside, bent down and was about to tell the truth.
“That’s my lamb now, Charlie! ” said the butcher’s boy in a playful tone, going up to Daisy with a rope in his
hand.
“No, it is not your lamb. It is ours! ” said Charlie, placing himself in front of it.
But the boy, pushing him aside, threw a rope round Daisy’s neck, and began to drag the little creature away.
The poor lamb bleated (咩咩叫) very sadly. The cry of grief which fell upon the mother’s ears was too much for
her, and her heart sank within her. In a moment, begging with tearful eyes, the children were all around their mother
with voices choking with sobs for their little pet.
“Please tell your boy to stop a moment, ” she said in husky tones to the butcher. The boy, at a word from the
butcher, stopped dragging the lamb, and the little creature stopped its bleating.
In a trembling voice, Mrs. Grant explained to them how badly off they were after their father died. She also
added that the kind butcher had given the money for Daisy. With this money, she could buy her children bread to
eat.
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Para1:
But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy.
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The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy. “ No!-No!-No! ” they dashed to Daisy
and threw their arms around her, begging, “ Please, mother! We would rather go hungry than lose her! ” Hearing
this, Mrs. Grant was in great sorrow, her heart bleeding. After all, she clearly knew that the children had devoted so
much love to Daisy and that Daisy was more than a pet lamb to them; she was, in their eyes, a family member!
Having struggled hard, she turned to the butcher and decided that she would not sell Daisy and would return the
money.
Paragraph 2:
The Butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart. When Mrs. Grant took out the money and
gave it back, he just waved his hand and announced, “ I will not rob the children of their pet! ” He approached the
children, patted them on the shoulders gently and promised that he would buy Daisy from their mother and then
gave it back to them as a gift. The word left the children standing stunned. Then, looking up at him, one asked
seriously, “Sir, do you really mean that?” The butcher just replied seriously, “ I mean every word of it. She is OUR
Daisy. My boy and I will come to see her occasionally. ” Hearing this, all the children gathered round and stroked
the pet, their little hearts filled with joy.
【解析】本文以宠物羊Daisy为线索展开，讲述了贫穷的Grant太太在家里缺衣少食的情况下，决定卖掉孩
子们的宠物羊Daisy。但当屠夫要带走Daisy时，孩子们非常难过，苦苦哀求，希望能留下宠物羊。屠夫见
此情景，不忍心带走宠物羊，把它作为礼物送给孩子们的故事。
1.续写步骤：
①由第一段首句内容“但她解释得越多，她的孩子们就越强烈地要求黛西。”可知，第一段可描写孩子们
的苦苦哀求以及Grant太太的伤心。
②由第二段首句内容“屠夫一直在注视着这一切，他的心被触动了。”可知，第二段可描写屠夫不忍心带
走宠物羊Daisy，把它作为礼物送给孩子们，孩子们很高兴。
2.续写线索：伤心——祈求——归还——赠与——高兴
三、
Having struggled with financial difficulties for six months and failing to find a way out, I had to close my
technology writing business. Fortunately, I found a new job as a salesperson and soon got a client. At the time, I
wondered if it was too good to be true.
By the second month, something didn’t seem right, and I developed a bad feeling about the client and thework. When the third month’s check didn’t arrive on time, I sent the client an e-mail to find out what was going on.
But there was no reply. Then I sent another e-mail, and another. The check never arrived, and I never heard from
the client again. With no hope in sight, I hit rock bottom. Panic replaced cautious optimism along with my last self-
confidence.
I hid myself from friends and locked myself in my room. One night, the phone rang. The call was from Eric, a
friend of mine from high school. When he was in high school, he told me many times about his parents’ divorce and
his loss of confidence in the college entrance examination. During the difficult time, I gave him much comfort and
encouragement. Later, he went to college and was always grateful for what I had done.
After the greetings, I told my problems and challenges, hoping my friend would say something comforting.
What I didn’t expect was a string of sharp words. “What is wrong with you? You can do anything you want to do,”
he said. “You are a writer, so start writing. Write for magazine.” “Write for magazine? Are you out of your mind? I
don’t know the first thing about writing for magazine, let alone write things that anyone would want to read. And I
have to know where I can send an application form-to what magazine and to what editor,” I shouted at him.
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Surprisingly, I felt a little better after the shouting.
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On finishing the application form I sent it to the editor.
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Surprisingly, I felt a little better after the shouting. After a short silence, Eric replied in a firm voice. “I always
remember what you said when I was in trouble. You said ‘No one can get you out of trouble but yourself. ’ ”
Hearing that, I was speechless and struck by the fact that it was easier to convince others than to convince myself.
Inspired by Eric’s words, I started searching for magazines the next day and finally found one that accepted onlinecontributions with various topics. Then I began to prepare my application form.
On finishing the application form I sent it to the editor. Luckily, two days later I received a positive response
and an invitation to write. At first, I only wrote articles I was expert in. Gradually, I began trying new types. One
day, much to my amazement, one of my articles appeared on the first page of the magazine! Since then, I have been
on my way to becoming an excellent writer. That definitely should be credited to Eric. It was he who enlightened
me and helped me regain confidence to face challenges in my life.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者由于经济困难结束了自己的技术写作业务，找到一份新的销
售工作，很快找到第一个客户，但后来客户杳无音信，在作者对生活感到绝望时，高中时期的一个朋友
Eric打电话来，高中时期作者在Eric困难时作者曾给过他很多鼓励，Eric建议作者开始为杂志写作，作者
从没有为杂志写过文章，认为Eric一定是疯了。
1.续写步骤：
①由第一段首句内容“出乎意料的是，我在喊了一声之后感觉好多了。”可知，第一段可描写Eric鼓励作
者，作者受到启发开始联系杂志社。
②由第二段首句内容“填完申请表后，我就把它寄给了编辑。”可知，第二段可描写作者收到杂志社的积
极回复后开始写作并逐渐取得成功。
2.续写线索：
Eric鼓励——受到启发，开始行动——收到杂志邀请——逐渐成为优秀作家——自信面对挑战
四、
Flora and her dad were going to move to a new house. Friday, a truck would come for the furniture. Then the
next week, workers would dig up the yard. Where Flora and Papi had grown flowers, the workers would put in a
parking lot.
“Our poor flowers,” Flora sighed to herself, looking at the bright purple blooms and soft and green weed
coming out of the soil. She sat outside, selling things she didn’t want to take to the new house. Beside her hung a
sign that said “Yard Sale”. Her yard sale was the first one of the year on Apple Street, and several of her neighbors
had come over to have a look.
Papi came out. He held a dish piled high with nuts. “Here’s a snack for everyone,” he said. Flora’s dad loved
sharing things. Most of all he loved sharing jokes. He smiled when he saw Flora’s sign and winked (眨眼) at the
customers gathered around.
“Yard sale? What are you selling yards of? Or meters of?” he asked. “Ribbons? Carpet? Cloth? Where’s your
ruler?”
“Not that kind of yard,” joked Mrs. Ciro. “It must be this nice grassy yard we’re standing on that’s for sale.”“How much for the weed by your sign?” asked Mr. Johnson, joking.
Flora gave no response. She didn’t think their jokes were funny. She felt extremely in low spirits at the thought
that the lovely yard was already sold, and soon their poor flowers and weed would be ruined.” Deader than a
doorknob,’ Papi’s papi would say”, she thought to herself bitterly, “What’s worse, the new house doesn’t have any
flowers at all.”
With a sigh, Flora dug her heels deep into the grass. But when she felt the soft earth move under her heels, she
knew what she could do.
She whispered her clever plan to Papi. He nodded, smiling, and sat down in her seat instead.
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Flora fetched old flowerpots and found a trowel (园艺铲) to dig with.
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Now she was ready for selling the yard and joking with customers.
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【答案】Flora fetched old flowerpots and found a trowel to dig with. She walked to the yard, knelt down, and
found the right place to shovel. Carefully she dug up chunks of earth that had flowers growing out of them. Then,
she gently packed each chunk and more soil in a pot, deciding to carry two inside. They would come along to the
new house. The others she lined up near her sign. All the work finished, she came back. “Thanks, Papi,” Flora said
with smile, taking her seat again.
Now she was ready for selling the yard and joking with customers. Mr. Johnson was picking some toys from
the stand. Mrs. Ciro picked several story books. And the two asked jokingly again, “But how much for the yard?”
This time, Flora smiled. Her smile was just like Papi’s. “Zero cents!” she said, “Pick any pot of yard you like!”
Hearing this, all the neighbors burst into laughter. “Now our yard can survive,” Flora thought to herself delightedly,
“both in my new house and on Apple Street” she added.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个叫做Flora的女孩跟爸爸要卖掉房子及其旧物，搬去新家，
但Flora对院子里的花草十分不舍，害怕会被遗弃，因此将这些花草移植到花盆里赠送给购买旧物的人，因而保存了这些花草的故事。
1. 续写步骤：
①由第一段首句内容“Flora拿来旧花盆，找了一把铲子来挖”可知，第一段描写Flora想把花草移植到花
盆里，然后将它们带到新房子去。
②由第二段句首内容“现在她准备卖掉院子，和顾客开玩笑”可知，第二段描写了Flora将花草移植到花
盆之后，将等待买房人来并且计划把这下花草送给喜欢它们的人。
2. 续写线索：挖土——移植花草——等待买家——赠送花草——变得开心
五、
Rivaldo was playing football from the age of 4. When he was 7, he joined a local football club. He attended
the training regularly but never got a chance to play in matches. But the coach had faith in him. He told Rivaldo
that he should focus on hi training, and one day he would get the chance. Rivaldo had no other option but to
continue training in the club. He was training very hard and focused on improving himself.
Even after two years in the club, he never played in a match. He was not even allowed to travel along with the
team. One day their club had a charity match, where a famous footballer was a chief guest. While the team was
planning to travel, one of the support staff who used to take care of kits got ill. So, they needed someone for this.
The coach thought this should be an opportunity for Rivaldo. So, he told him to travel with the team and take
care of the kits. Other support staff objected to it, but he convinced them.
The team reached the stadium. There were a lot of crowds to witness the celebrity footballer. For Rivaldo, this
is his first-time experience in the stadium. He was helping the other players with the kits for the pre-match training.
The coach came for a chat with Rivaldo. He told Rivaldo, “You are playing today.”
Rivaldo, for a moment, got frozen and asked him why. He said, “One of the players from the team got injured
while training. So, we are short of players. We need someone to be in the field to make it 11. But I know you are
more than that. So, go and prove yourself”. There was resistance from the support staff. Luckily for Rivaldo, the
coach, through the organizing committee, convinced Rivaldo’s team management to allow him to play.
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When the match started, Rivaldo was running like a deer.
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When the match started, Rivaldo was running like a deer. Several times, he took the ball to the right side but
failed to score any goal. Soon the celebrity footballer scored a quick goal. There were deafening cheers from the
supporters. The rival team was very spirited and dominated the game. In the second half, Rivaldo won a chance to
penetrate into the defenses of the rival team. A goal was scored. With the morale boosted, Rivaldo’s team tightened
their belts and played with determination. Finally, the referee blew the whistle and the match ended with Rivaldo’s
team winning by 2-1 goals.
After the match, the celebrity footballer walked to Rivaldo. Wearing a note of excitement, he spoke highly of
Rivaldo’s performance. When he learned that it was the first time Rivaldo had played in a match, he immediately
invited him to play for the junior team. Rivaldo performed so well that later he went on to represent the senior team
and for his country. In life, there will be many roadblocks. But you have to continue and wait. When the moment
comes, grab it with both hands and fly towards your dream.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Rivaldo从4岁开始踢足球，努力训练，即使在俱乐部呆了两年，
他也从未参加过一场比赛。直到一次慈善比赛上，Rivaldo被派上场，最终赢得了比赛，得到了足球明星的
肯定。
1.续写步骤：
①由第一段首句内容“比赛开始时，Rivaldo跑得像只鹿。”可知，第一段可描写Rivaldo参加比赛并获胜
的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“比赛结束后，这位足球明星走向Rivaldo。”可知，第二段可描写足球明星对
Rivaldo的评价以及Rivaldo之后取得的成就。
2.续写线索：比赛开始——取得胜利——足球明星高度评价Rivaldo——Rivaldo代表国家参赛——感悟
六、
Grandfather was a wise and honorable man. His house was not far from ours, and I would visit him often
going home after school.
No matter how rotten I had been, I could tell Grandpa anything. My secrets were safe. Whenever there was a
problem, he gave me the tools to fix it. I knew I would always find the best answer from him. He alwaysunderstood. He loved me.
I remember a time when a bunch of us were playing baseball in the field behind Mrs. Ferguson’s house. I hit
one pitch just right and slam! It was a home run that soared high and away, and ended up breaking Old Lady
Ferguson’s kitchen window! We all ran! Walking home, my best friend, Tom, asked, “How will she ever know who
did it? She’s blinder than a bat!” He had a point.
I was afraid that Mrs. Ferguson would stay mad at me, so I ran. I didn’t know what she would do. I tried to
calm down. However, my stomach was in knots. On the way home. I imagined that she was a mean witch (女巫)
chasing me, and the further way I ran, the larger she grew... until finally she towered over the whole town, seeing
my every move with an evil eye. Thoughts rushed through my mind. Would Mrs. Ferguson stay mad at me? Would
she call police? Worse still, would she tell my parents I couldn’t even imagine the disappointment on Mom and
Dad’s face. They were hoping I would act honestly and in a responsible way
I decided to stop by Grandpa’s. I felt ashamed. I wanted to hide. I wanted to knock my head against a tree a
thousand times and make the world just go away —as if punishing myself could undo things.
“I would tell everything to Grandpa,” a voice inside me said.
“I was wrong.” I told him, with my head down. He must have known something was up by the expression on
my face. He knew we had been warned many times about the dangers of playing where we shouldn’t.
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Para 1: But he just listened while I continued talking.
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【答案】But he just listened while I continued talking. “I was wrong. I hate myself for what I did”, I told him,
with my head down. I didn’t know what to do to make things right. I had been afraid that Mrs. Ferguson would stay
mad at me. Finally my grandpa said, “What would you do if you were her?” After a while, I replied, “One solution
is to tell her that I am sorry and offer to fix her window.”Grandpa smiled when he knew I had figured it out. “Doing what is right is not always easy,” he said, handing
me the phone, “I am proud of you.” He did not make me do it. It was always my choice. As it turned out, Mrs.
Ferguson was very kind and we even became really close friends. “Admitting what you are not proud of is the
hardest thing,” said Grandpa. “Choosing to be honest makes others trust and respect you.”
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者在打碎了Mrs. Ferguson的厨房玻璃后，心理挣扎着要不要向她
道歉，随后向自己的祖父需求帮助，祖父给了作者非常诚恳和耐心的指引和建议。
1.续写步骤：
（1）由第一段首句内容“但是，在我继续描述着事情的时候，他只是在听着”可知，该段落可以描写作
者在做错事之后的内心挣扎和祖父引导作者做正确的事。
（2）由第二段首句内容“爷爷知道我已经明白了，他笑了。”可知，该段落可以描写在祖父的引导下，
作者决定做正确的事。
2.续写线索：向祖父诉说—内心挣扎—祖父的引导—作者决定做正确的事—向Mrs. Ferguson道歉
