I. 题型说明
概要写作题型是基于原文行文逻辑基础上的，对原文要点的提取和再
现。考查要点为：
(1) 对原文要点的理解和呈现；
(2) 所写语段的上下文连续性；
(3) 应用语法结构和词汇的准确性。
概要写作
I. 题型说明
提供一篇350字以内的文章，要求考生基于该短文写出一
篇60字左右的内容概要。
概要写作
基于该短文：不可有自己的观点
60字左右：精简至50-80字
内容概要：概括重要内容
I. 题型说明
概要写作
评分标准 (21-25)
1. 理解准确，涵盖所有要点
2. 准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇
3. 完全使用自己的语言
4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要结构紧凑
II. 典例示范
Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main
point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use you own words as far as
possible.
(A) When we wake up feeling sleepy and with dark circles under eyes, many of us
often think: “I'm going to go to bed earlier tomorrow!" But however determined we
are, chances are that we don't stick to (坚持) our promise. This behavior is called
"bedtime procrastination (拖延症)”.
(B) According to a study carried out by a group of health psychologists at Utrecht
University in the Netherlands in 2014, bedtime procrastination is a common
problem. In their study, 53 percent of the 2,400 participants said they didn’t follow
their sleep schedule, delaying it at least twice a week.
(C) It's found that they delayed bedtime not because they liked to stay up late, but
they couldn't stop doing other unimportant things, which were keeping them up in
the first place.
(D) "People who generally have trouble resisting temptations (诱惑) and sticking to
their intentions are more likely to delay going to bed." Floor Kroese, a psychologist
at Utrecht University, further explained to HuffPost.
(E) Yet, according to scientists, lack of self-control is not the only thing to blame.
Our body clock also plays an important role when it comes to bedtime. In order to
check the influence of the body clock on sleep, psychologists at Ulm University in
Germany studied the sleep patterns of 108 people in February. It was found that
those who get up late are more likely to postpone (推迟) their bedtime than those
who wake early every morning.
(F) "The intention to go to bed earlier is not enough," Jane Kuhnel, a psychologist at
Ulm University, concluded in Popular Science. "Biological processes need to
support this intention."
(G) People always think that bedtime procrastination isn’t a big problem, but as
Kroese told Popular Science, “the choices we make that affect our sleep could turn
out to be pretty important for our health.”
III. 阅读审题
1. 请快速阅读上文，圈出4-6 你认为重要的关键词。
bedtime procrastination
Netherlands
Floor Kroese
lack of self-control
body clock
Ulm University
sleep pattern
health
Popular Science
勘误
III. 阅读审题
1. 请快速阅读上文，圈出4-6 你认为重要的关键词。
bedtime procrastination
Netherlands
Floor Kroese
lack of self-control
body clock
Ulm University
sleep pattern
health
Popular Science
III. 阅读审题
2. 请再次阅读段 (A) 与段 (B)，完成以下填空，每空不超过3 个单词。
Paragraph (A) and (B) mentioned a common problem, ______________
_________________, which means not following ___________________
and delaying going to bed.
III. 阅读审题
2. 请再次阅读段 (A) 与段 (B)，完成以下填空，每空不超过3 个单词。
Paragraph (A) and (B) mentioned a common problem, ______________
_________________, which means not following ___________________
and delaying going to bed.
bedtime
sleep schedule
procrastination
(C) It's found that they delayed bedtime not because they liked to stay up late, but
they couldn't stop doing other unimportant things, which were keeping them up in
the first place.
(D) "People who generally have trouble resisting temptations (诱惑) and sticking to
their intentions are more likely to delay going to bed." Floor Kroese, a psychologist
at Utrecht University, further explained to HuffPost.
III. 阅读审题
3. 请再次阅读段 (C) 至段 (G)，完成以下练习。
① 请尝试为剩余段落划分层次。
A B // C D E F G
(E) Yet, according to scientists, lack of self-control is not the only thing to blame.
Our body clock also plays an important role when it comes to bedtime. In order to
check the influence of the body clock on sleep, psychologists at Ulm University in
Germany studied the sleep patterns of 108 people in February. It was found that
those who get up late are more likely to postpone (推迟) their bedtime than those
who wake early every morning.
(F) "The intention to go to bed earlier is not enough," Jane Kuhnel, a psychologist at
Ulm University, concluded in Popular Science. "Biological processes need to
support this intention."
(G) People always think that bedtime procrastination isn’t a big problem, but as
Kroese told Popular Science, “the choices we make that affect our sleep could turn
out to be pretty important for our health.”
III. 阅读审题
z
z
(C) It's found that they delayed bedtime not because they liked to stay up late, but
they couldn't stop doing other unimportant things, which were keeping them up in
the first place.
(D) "People who generally have trouble resisting temptations (诱惑) and sticking to
their intentions are more likely to delay going to bed." Floor Kroese, a psychologist
at Utrecht University, further explained to HuffPost. //
the first reason for delayed bedtime: lack of self-control
III. 阅读审题
3. 请再次阅读段 (C) 至段 (G)，完成以下练习。
① 请尝试为剩余段落划分层次。
A B // C D E F G
(E) Yet, according to scientists, lack of self-control is not the only thing to blame.
Our body clock also plays an important role when it comes to bedtime. In order to
check the influence of the body clock on sleep, psychologists at Ulm University in
Germany studied the sleep patterns of 108 people in February. It was found that
those who get up late are more likely to postpone (推迟) their bedtime than those
who wake early every morning.
(F) "The intention to go to bed earlier is not enough," Jane Kuhnel, a psychologist at
Ulm University, concluded in Popular Science. "Biological processes need to
support this intention." //
the second reason for delayed bedtime: the influence of the body
clock
III. 阅读审题
(G) People always think that bedtime procrastination isn’t a big problem, but as
Kroese told Popular Science, “the choices we make that affect our sleep could turn
out to be pretty important for our health.” //
the importance of earlier sleep
III. 阅读审题
A B // C D // E F // G
III. 阅读审题
② 请完成下列结构图。
bedtime procrastination
delaying going to bed
1.
_______________
2. ___________: have trouble
resisting temptations and
sticking to their intentions
the influence of 3. ________:
those who get up late are more
likely to sleep late
solutions
intention and
biological
processes
importance
important for our 4.
___________
bedtime procrastination
delaying going to bed
1.
_______________
2. ___________________: have
trouble resisting temptations and
sticking to their intentions
the influence of 3. __________________:
those who get up late are more likely to
sleep late
solutions
intention and
biological processes
importance
important for our 4.
___________
reasons
lack of self-control
the body clock
health
③ 请用上一题得到的结构图，比对
第一题中你圈出的关键词，看看自
己忽略了哪些要点。
IV. 复述要点
MAIN IDEA:
① (现象+定义) Studies carried out by psychologists find a common
problem called “bedtime procrastination”, which means not following
the sleep schedule and delaying sleeping.
② (原因) The reasons for this behavior are lack of self-control and the
influence of body clock on sleep.
③ (对策+重要性) Psychologists think the intention to sleep earlier and
biological processes are important, or your health will be affected.
IV. 同义改写
被动改主动，定语从句改非谓语，同义词替换
①
Studies carried out by psychologists find a common problem called
“bedtime procrastination”, which means not following the sleep
schedule and delaying sleeping.
→ According to studies, experts find a behavior called “bedtime
procrastination”, meaning not _________ the sleep schedule and
_________ sleeping.
A. sticking to; putting off
B. sticking to; taking off
C. turning up; looking down
D. turning up; starting off
IV. 同义改写
两句并一句，逻辑突出，适当增减
②
The reasons for this behavior are lack of self-control and the influence
of body clock.
→
Two studies carried out by experts find that lack of self-control and the
influence of body clock on sleep _________ “bedtime procrastination”,
the behavior of delaying going to bed.
A. result from
B. are caused by
C. are responsible for
D. are harmful to
IV. 同义改写
两句并一句，逻辑突出，适当增减
③
Psychologists think the intention to sleep earlier and biological
processes are important, or your health will be affected.
→
Considering its ______________________ on health, psychologists
_____________________ us to sleep earlier and keep a healthy sleep
pattern.
effect / impact / influence
advise / urge
改写练习-同义替换
学 而 思 网 校
Vacations are good for us.
Vacations benefit us.
Many
of
us
came
back
from
vacations.
Many of us returned home from
vacations.
The company’s promise to satisfy
customer’s need is important to its
success in sales promotion.
The
company’s
commitment
to
customer satisfaction is vital to its
sales promotion.
改写练习-句式转换
学 而 思 网 校
Many of us returned home with a feeling
that our last vacation was not great.
Many of us returned home, not feeling
very great.
There
is
no
doubt
that
celebrity
spokespersons can promote the sales of a
product.
Undoubtedly, celebrity spokespersons
can boost the sales of a product.
巩固练习
学 而 思 网 校
Sport tourism
Tourism is the world's largest industry and is predicted to grow well into the years to come. Increasingly, the
economic importance of tourism has been recognized by governments around the world. At the same time, the
tourism industry has become more complicated in its development and marketing new forms of tourism. One of
the fastest growing parts of the tourism industry is travel related to sport and physical activity. A recent survey
found that while the traditional beach and sight-seeing vacations continue to predominate, 22% of those
surveyed reported that opportunities to participate in sports were important when selecting a vacation.
The term sport tourism has been adopted in recent years to describe sport-related leisure travel. It is
generally recognized that there are three broad categories of sport tourism. The first category is watching
sporting events or Sports Event Tourism, including hallmark events such as FIFA World Cup Football
Championships, and the Olympic games. Tournaments sponsored by the Professional Golf Association or the
World Tennis Association are also part of the spectator-centered sector of sport tourism.
The second type of sport tourism, celebrity and nostalgia sport tourism involves visiting famous sports-
related attractions. Visits to the sports halls of fame fall into this category. Another form of celebrity and
nostalgia sport tourism that has emerged in recent years is meeting famous sports personalities. The cruise
industry has been experienced in this area. Sports theme cruise such as "the NBA basketball cruise" arranges
for passengers to meet personalities from sports while they are on board.
Active participation is the third category of sport tourism. This is composed of individuals who travel to
participate in golf, skiing, and tennis in particular, although other sports such as fishing, and scuba diving are
popular in the US.
巩固练习
学 而 思 网 校
Sport tourism
Tourism is the world‘s largest industry and is predicted to grow well into the years to come. Increasingly, the economic importance of
tourism has been recognized by governments around the world. At the same time, the tourism industry has become more complicated in its
development and marketing new forms of tourism. (总) One of the fastest growing parts of the tourism
industry is travel related to sport and physical activity. A recent survey found that while the traditional beach
and sight-seeing vacations continue to predominate, 22% of those surveyed reported that opportunities to participate in sports were
important when selecting a vacation.
The term sport tourism has been adopted in recent years to describe sport-related leisure travel.（总） It is generally
recognized that there are three broad categories of sport tourism. （分1）The first
category is watching sporting events or Sports Event Tourism, including hallmark events such as FIFA
World Cup Football Championships, and the Olympic games. Tournaments sponsored by the Professional Golf Association or the World
Tennis Association are also part of the spectator-centered sector of sport tourism.
（分2）The second type of sport tourism, celebrity and nostalgia sport tourism involves
visiting famous sports-related attractions. Visits to the sports halls of fame fall into this category. Another form of
celebrity and nostalgia sport tourism that has emerged in recent years is meeting famous sports personalities. The cruise industry has been
experienced in this area. Sports theme cruise such as "the NBA basketball cruise" arranges for passengers to meet personalities from
sports while they are on board.
（分3） Active participation is the third category of sport tourism. This is composed of individuals
who travel to participate in golf, skiing, and tennis in particular, although other sports such as fishing, and scuba diving are popular in the
US.
巩固练习
学 而 思 网 校
范文：
Sport tourism is growing fast recently, which means a new way of travel
related to sport and physical activity. There are 3 types of sport tourism.
The first type of sport tourism is watching some famous or typical sporting
events. The second one includes paying a visit to famous sites of sports
and meeting celebrities of sports. Besides, participating actively is the third
kind of sport tourism.
类型介绍
议论文是高考书面表达常考体裁，议论文通常分为论点，论据和
论证三部分，通过摆事实，讲道理的方式来表达观点。
近几年高考书面表达中，其主要命题形式是以提纲式和表格式来
呈现写作材料的，写作时常以三段式的形式展开议论。
在高考中常与概括材料结合考察，即先总结材料的主要内容，
再对相关话题表述观点。
任务型写作
江苏任务型写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，求考生基于该短文写出
一篇30词左右的内容概要。
分两个部分：
1. 概括材料。
2. 表达观点。
概括材料时要注意：
（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；
（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；
（3）上下文的连贯性；
（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。
总之，要把握主题句和文章结构；提炼关键词；省略细节；减少例子；
精简表达。
议论文写作
表达观点的议论文写作：
观点明确，有理有据，用好论证方法（举例论证；对比论证等）。
开头：可以巧引谚语，引述各方观点，表达自我观点。
正文：阐明理由，论据详实有条理。
结尾：总结观点，呼应主题。
开头表达
巧引谚语：
As the proverb says, …
It goes without saying that...
There is an old saying that…
引出话题：
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people's concern.
Nowadays, … has become a problem we have to face.
引述各方观点：
People's opinions about … vary from person to person.
When it comes to … , some people think (hold the opinion) that … However,
others ....
表达自我观点： As far as I'm concerned, ...；From my point of view, ...
正文表达
阐明理由：
There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.
Generally, the reasons can be listed as follows.
论据详实有条理：
First, … Second, … Third, …
For one thing …,for another…
On the one hand,... on the other hand...
结尾表达
总结观点：
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…
The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
范文讲解
请阅读下面文字, 并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。
Li Jiang: Have you heard this? A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our
school next month.
Su Hua: Yes, I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the
welcome ceremony.
Li Jiang: But it seems people have different opinions.
Su Hua: What do you think?
Li Jiang: I think it's a good idea. It's an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known
to international students.
Su Hua: I agree. But we don't have to dress that way. That's not our daily style. Besides, it's
not very convenient.
Li Jiang: You see, it's the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for. Just the right
occasion.
Su Hua: I prefer the school uniform. It's nice. It's also a better display of our school culture.
范文讲解
【写作内容】
1. 用约30 个词概括上述信息的主要内容；
2. 在上述场合，你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由（不少于两点）。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
范文讲解
请阅读下面文字, 并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。
Li Jiang: Have you heard this? A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our
school next month.
Su Hua: Yes, I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the
welcome ceremony.
Li Jiang: But it seems people have different opinions.
Su Hua: What do you think?
Li Jiang: I think it's a good idea. It's an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known
to international students.
Su Hua: I agree. But we don't have to dress that way. That's not our daily style. Besides, it's
not very convenient.
Li Jiang: You see, it's the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for. Just the right
occasion.
Su Hua: I prefer the school uniform. It's nice. It's also a better display of our school culture.
归纳Li Jiang的观点和Su Hua的观点
思路点拨
1. 先归纳两人观点
2. 再表达你的观点
3. 并说明原因
需要适当补充细节
可以进行对比论证
范文讲解
范文一
Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students
next month. Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school
uniform.
I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony.
Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting. They come to learn about
Chinese culture with their own eyes. Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress
would be highly impressive. The school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a
unique Chinese flavour. Secondly, the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to
share Chinese culture. It is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness,
delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.
The traditional Chinese clothes, it seems to me, will make the occasion very Chinese
and inviting to the British guests.
范文讲解
范文二
Li Jiang and Su Hua don't agree on what to wear when greeting the British students.
Li suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more
suitable.
I prefer the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome
ceremony next month. Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful
and stylish, it is a little bit strange to walk around in it. We feel at ease in our school
uniforms every day. What's more, the traditional Chinese dress can't reflect the unique
culture of our school. From the design and colour of our uniforms, the British friends will
learn more about our school. Besides, the choice of the traditional Chinese dress means
extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event.
So the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for
such an occasion.
巩固练习
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。
Recently, the State Administration of Cultural Heritage (SACH) issued a guidance to
open cultural heritage buildings to the public, encouraging local governments, cultural
heritage departments and organizations using or managing such buildings to better
bring these buildings' cultural and social value into play, on the precondition of full
protection. The SACH is clear that, no matter what their current conditions are, heritage
buildings should be opened as much as possible.
In the past, due to insufficient preserving technologies and lack of funds, repairing
work was seen as a major hassle, and thus opening the buildings to the public was
difficult. Even famous heritage places like the Palace Museum in Beijing were plagued by
such difficulties.
Today, China has dramatically increased its input into cultural heritage protection,
and archaeological protection technologies are improving. The time is ripe for heritage
buildings to be opened up.
巩固练习
【写作内容】
1. 用约30 个单词写出上文概要；
2. 用约120 个单词就“对公众开放文物建筑”这一话题，阐述你的看法，并用2-3
个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
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练习点拨
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。
1. Recently, the State Administration of Cultural Heritage (SACH) issued a guidance to
open cultural heritage buildings to the public, encouraging local governments, cultural
heritage departments and organizations using or managing such buildings to better
bring these buildings' cultural and social value into play, on the precondition of full
protection. The SACH is clear that, no matter what their current conditions are, heritage
buildings should be opened as much as possible.
1. 国家文物局要求开放文化遗产建筑。
练习点拨
2. In the past, due to insufficient preserving technologies and lack of funds, repairing
work was seen as a major hassle, and thus opening the buildings to the public was
difficult. Even famous heritage places like the Palace Museum in Beijing were plagued by
such difficulties.
3. Today, China has dramatically increased its input into cultural heritage protection,
and archaeological protection technologies are improving. The time is ripe for heritage
buildings to be opened up.
2. 在过去，由于保护科技不足和缺乏资金，维修工作是主要困难。
3. 由于文物保护的投入增多，现在开放的时机已经成熟。
练习点拨
抓住段落主旨句，总结文章大意
然而，很多同学写成了这样：
The State Administration of Cultural Heritage (SACH) issued a guidance to open cultural
heritage buildings to the public due to increased input and improved protection
technologies.
参考：With more input into cultural heritage protection, cultural heritage buildings to
the public are encouraged to be opened to the public to better bring these buildings'
cultural and social value into play.
重复度太高
可以做好同义词转换
or主动变被动
练习范文
你对向公众开放文化遗产建筑怎么看？
抓住文化遗产的
文化和社会价值来谈
构思ing
向公众开放文化遗产建筑的意义：
1. 它们具有考古意义。
2. 继承和传播传统文化，促进文化传播。
文化遗产的文化和社会价值：
1. 满足人们的精神生活需求。
2. 造福子孙后代。
写作词汇过关
1. 具有考古和历史价值
be of archaeological and historical significance/value
2. 继承传统文化
inherit traditional culture
3. 促进文化传播
help traditional culture (to) spread
promote cultural transmission
4. 满足公众的精神需求
satisfy people's needs for spiritual life
5. 惠及后代
benefit the future generations
benefit the generations to come
参考范文
With more input into cultural heritage protection, cultural heritage buildings to the
public are encouraged to be opened to the public to better bring these buildings'
cultural and social value into play.
I am in favour of this practice. The value of such buildings mainly lies in two aspects.
First, they are of archaeological significance; second, they inherit and spread traditional
culture and thus promote cultural transmission. If a heritage building is closed, only the
first aspect is made use of.
Only opening heritage buildings can fully display their social value, and to make
them so is the best way for us to show our respect for such buildings. Besides, opening
cultural heritage buildings to the public can best satisfy their demands for spiritual life,
thus benefiting the generations to come.
In short, opening cultural heritage buildings to the public is a win-win situation.
Only in this way can we inherit our cultural heritages better.
概要写作
One of the greatest killers in the Western world is heart disease. The death rate (率) from the
disease has been increasing at an alarming Speed for the past thirty years. Medical experts know that
people can reduce their chances of getting heart disease by exercising regularly, by not smoking, by
changing their diets, and by paying more attention to reducing stress (压力) in their work.
However, Western health-care systems are still not paying enough attention to the prevention of the
disease. There is a need for more programs to educate the public about the causes and prevention of
heart disease. In stead of supporting such programs, however, the U. S. health-care system is spending
large sums of money on the surgical (外科的) treatment of the disease, after it develops. This emphasis (
强调) on treatment clearly has something to do with the technological advances that have taken in the
past ten to fifteen years. In this time, modern technology, has enabled doctors to develop new surgical
techniques. Many operation that were considered impossible or too risky (有风险的) a few years ago are
now performed every day in U.S. hospitals. The result has been a huge in crease in heart surgery.
Although there is no doubt that heart surgery can help a large number of people, some people point
out that the emphasis on the surgical treatment of the disease has three clear disadvantages. First, it
attracts interest and money away from the question of prevention. Second, it causes the costs of general
hospital care to rise. After hospitals buy the expensive equipment that is necessary for modern heart
surgery, they must try to recover the money they have spent. To do this, they raise costs for all their
patients, not just those patients whose treatment requires the equipment. The third disadvantage is that
doctors are encouraged to perform surgery-even on patients for whom an operation is unnecessary--
because the equipment and expert skills are there. A government office recently stated that major heart
surgery was often performed even though its chances of success were low. In one type of heart surgery
,for example, only 15 percent of patients improved their conditions after the surgery. However, more
than 100,000 of these operations are performed in the United States every year.
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② 提取关键字
③ 辨析逻辑，衔
接成段
① One of the greatest killers in the Western world is heart disease. ②
The death rate (率) from the disease has been increasing at an alarming
Speed for the past thirty years. ③ Medical experts know that people can
reduce their chances of getting heart disease by exercising regularly, by
not smoking, by changing their diets, and by paying more attention to
reducing stress (压力) in their work.
Which one is the key sentence of this
passage?
① One of the greatest killers in the Western world is heart disease. ②
The death rate (率) from the disease has been increasing at an alarming
Speed for the past thirty years. ③ Medical experts know that people can
reduce their chances of getting heart disease by exercising regularly, by
not smoking, by changing their diets, and by paying more attention to
reducing stress (压力) in their work.
Which one is the key sentence of this
passage?
③
① However, Western health-care systems are still not paying enough attention to
the prevention of the disease. ② There is a need for more programs to educate the
public about the causes and prevention of heart disease. ③ Instead of supporting
such programs, however, the U. S. health-care system is spending large sums of
money on the surgical(外科的) treatment of the disease, after it develops. ④ This
emphasis on treatment clearly has something to do with the technological advances
that have taken in the past ten to fifteen years. ⑤ In this time, modern technology,
has enabled doctors to develop new surgical techniques. ⑥ Many operation that were
considered impossible or too risky(有风险的) a few years ago are now performed
every day in U.S. hospitals. The result has been a huge in crease in heart surgery.
Which one is the key sentence of this
paragraph?
+
③
① However, Western health-care systems are still not paying enough attention to
the prevention of the disease. ② There is a need for more programs to educate the
public about the causes and prevention of heart disease. ③ Instead of supporting
such programs, however, the U. S. health-care system is spending large sums of
money on the surgical(外科的) treatment of the disease, after it develops. ④ This
emphasis on treatment clearly has something to do with the technological advances
that have taken in the past ten to fifteen years. ⑤ In this time, modern technology,
has enabled doctors to develop new surgical techniques. ⑥ Many operation that were
considered impossible or too risky(有风险的) a few years ago are now performed
every day in U.S. hospitals. The result has been a huge in crease in heart surgery.
Which one is the key sentence of this
paragraph?
①
+
③
① Although there is no doubt that heart surgery can help a large number of people,
some people point out that the emphasis on the surgical treatment of the disease has
three clear disadvantages. ② First, it attracts interest and money away from the
question of prevention. ③Second, it causes the costs of general hospital care to rise.
④After hospitals buy the expensive equipment that is necessary for modern heart
surgery, they must try to recover the money they have spent. ⑤ To do this, they raise
costs for all their patients, not just those patients whose treatment requires the
equipment. ⑥The third disadvantage is that doctors are encouraged to perform
surgery - even on patients for whom an operation is unnecessary--because the
equipment and expert skills are there. ⑦ A government office recently stated that
major heart surgery was often performed even though its chances of success were
low. ⑧ In one type of heart surgery, for example, only 15 percent of patients improved
their conditions after the surgery. ⑨ However, more than 100,000 of these operations
are performed in the United States every year.
Which one is the key sentence of this
paragraph?
① Although there is no doubt that heart surgery can help a large number of people,
some people point out that the emphasis on the surgical treatment of the disease has
three clear disadvantages. ② First, it attracts interest and money away from the
question of prevention. ③Second, it causes the costs of general hospital care to rise.
④After hospitals buy the expensive equipment that is necessary for modern heart
surgery, they must try to recover the money they have spent. ⑤ To do this, they raise
costs for all their patients, not just those patients whose treatment requires the
equipment. ⑥The third disadvantage is that doctors are encouraged to perform
surgery - even on patients for whom an operation is unnecessary--because the
equipment and expert skills are there. ⑦ A government office recently stated that
major heart surgery was often performed even though its chances of success were
low. ⑧ In one type of heart surgery, for example, only 15 percent of patients improved
their conditions after the surgery. ⑨ However, more than 100,000 of these operations
are performed in the United States every year.
Which one is the key sentence of this
paragraph?
①
写作步骤
① 定位主题句
② 提取关键字
③ 辨析逻辑，衔
接成段
① One of the greatest killers in the Western world is heart disease. ②
The death rate (率) from the disease has been increasing at an alarming
Speed for the past thirty years. ③ Medical experts know that people can
reduce their chances of getting heart disease by exercising regularly, by
not smoking, by changing their diets, and by paying more attention to
reducing stress (压力) in their work.
Which one is the key sentence of this
passage?
③
① One of the greatest killers in the Western world is heart disease. ②
The death rate (率) from the disease has been increasing at an alarming
Speed for the past thirty years. ③ Medical experts know that people can
reduce their chances of getting heart disease by exercising regularly, by
not smoking, by changing their diets, and by paying more attention to
reducing stress (压力) in their work.
Which one is the key sentence of this
passage?
③
主旨: Medical experts believe that the key to
protecting
people
from
heart
disease
is
prevention.
① However, Western health-care systems are still not paying enough
attention to the prevention of the disease. ② There is a need for more
programs to educate the public about the causes and prevention of heart
disease. ③ Instead of supporting such programs, however, the U. S. health-
care system is spending large sums of money on the surgical (外科的)
treatment of the disease, after it develops. ④ This emphasis on treatment
clearly has something to do with the technological advances that have taken
in the past ten to fifteen years. ⑤ In this time, modern technology, has
enabled doctors to develop new surgical techniques. ⑥ Many operation that
were considered impossible or too risky (有风险的) a few years ago are now
performed every day in U.S. hospitals. The result has been a huge in crease
in heart surgery.
Which one is the key sentence of this paragraph?
①
+
③
① However, Western health-care systems are still not paying enough
attention to the prevention of the disease. ② There is a need for more
programs to educate the public about the causes and prevention of heart
disease. ③ Instead of supporting such programs, however, the U. S. health-
care system is spending large sums of money on the surgical (外科的)
treatment of the disease, after it develops. ④ This emphasis on treatment
clearly has something to do with the technological advances that have taken
in the past ten to fifteen years. ⑤ In this time, modern technology, has
enabled doctors to develop new surgical techniques. ⑥ Many operation that
were considered impossible or too risky (有风险的) a few years ago are now
performed every day in U.S. hospitals. The result has been a huge in crease
in heart surgery.
Which one is the key sentence of this
paragraph?
①
+
③
主旨: However, more emphasis is lain on treatment of the disease.
instead of supporting prevention programs.
① Although there is no doubt that heart surgery can help a large number of people,
some people point out that the emphasis on the surgical treatment of the disease has
three clear disadvantages. ② First, it attracts interest and money away from the
question of prevention. ③Second, it causes the costs of general hospital care to rise.
④After hospitals buy the expensive equipment that is necessary for modern heart
surgery, they must try to recover the money they have spent. ⑤ To do this, they raise
costs for all their patients, not just those patients whose treatment requires the
equipment. ⑥The third disadvantage is that doctors are encouraged to perform
surgery - even on patients for whom an operation is unnecessary--because the
equipment and expert skills are there. ⑦ A government office recently stated that
major heart surgery was often performed even though its chances of success were
low. ⑧ In one type of heart surgery, for example, only 15 percent of patients improved
their conditions after the surgery. ⑨ However, more than 100,000 of these operations
are performed in the United States every year.
Which one is the key sentence of this
paragraph?
①
Which one is the key sentence of this paragraph?
①
主旨: The emphasis on the surgical treatment of the disease has three advantages,
including diverting people’s attention from the prevention of the disease, increasing
patients’ costs as well as performing high-risk operations.
① Although there is no doubt that heart surgery can help a large number of people,
some people point out that the emphasis on the surgical treatment of the disease has
three clear disadvantages. ② First, it attracts interest and money away from the
question of prevention. ③Second, it causes the costs of general hospital care to rise.
④After hospitals buy the expensive equipment that is necessary for modern heart
surgery, they must try to recover the money they have spent. ⑤ To do this, they raise
costs for all their patients, not just those patients whose treatment requires the
equipment. ⑥The third disadvantage is that doctors are encouraged to perform
surgery—even on patients for whom an operation is unnecessary—because the
equipment and expert skills are there. ⑦ A government office recently stated that
major heart surgery was often performed even though its chances of success were
low. ⑧ In one type of heart surgery, for example, only 15 percent of patients improved
their conditions after the surgery. ⑨ However, more than 100,000 of these operations
are performed in the United States every year.
写作步骤
① 定位主题句
② 提取关键字
③ 辨析逻辑，衔接成段
Medical experts believe that the key to protecting people from heart
disease is prevention. Instead of supporting prevention programs, more
emphasis is lain on treatment of the disease. The emphasis on the
surgical treatment of the disease has three advantages, including
diverting people’s attention from the prevention of the disease,
increasing patients’ costs as well as performing high-risk operations.
