2026 高考英语·二轮复习专题突破
专题专题17：书面表达之读后续写（情节构建）
核
【核心知识·深度解读】
读后续写考查学生阅读理解与创造性写作的综合能力，情节构建是得分关
键。近年命题强调“故事合理延续、情感自然升华、价值观积极向上”。本
专题聚焦情节架构技巧，包含核心知识精讲、15 道情节描写词汇句型填空、
10 道句子翻译表达及 3 篇读后续写实战训练，帮助学生掌握“冲突—发展—
高潮—解决—升华”的完整故事脉络。
核心知识·读后续写情节构建五步法
情节 作用 常用表达/技巧 2026热考主题示例
阶段
冲突 制造矛盾， Suddenly, To one’s 人与自我（内心挣
引入 吸引读者 surprise, Much to one’s 扎）、人与社会（误解
dismay 冲突）
行动 角色应对挑 Without hesitation, 团队合作、突破困境
发展 战，推动故 Gathered courage, Decided
事 to
高潮 关键时刻， At that moment, It dawned 醒悟时刻、关键抉择
转折 情感爆发点 on him that...
问题 冲突化解， Eventually, In the end, 误会解除、困难克服
解决 结果呈现 Fortunately
主题 点明寓意， What mattered most was..., 成长感悟、文化传承
升华 价值观提升 It taught me that...二轮策略： 阅读原文时标记人物性格、情感基调及伏笔；续写时确保情节
连贯、逻辑自洽；结尾点明主题但避免说教。建议每篇练习前先列情节大纲，
再动笔写作。
题型训练一 · 情节描写词汇与句型填空
Instructions: 根据上下文和提示，在空白处填入恰当的词语或短语，完
成情节描写。(每题 1 分，共 15 分)
1. ________ (突然), a loud noise broke the silence of the night.
2. ________ (令我们惊讶的是 ), the old man agreed to help us
without hesitation.
3. She ________ (鼓起勇气) and stepped onto the stage.
4. ________ (就在那一刻), I realized how much my family meant to
me.
5. He stood there, ________ (一动不动), unable to believe what
he had just heard.
6. ________ (泪水模糊了他的双眼) as he read the letter.
7. Without ________ (片刻犹豫 ), she jumped into the river to
save the drowning child.
8. ________ (逐渐地), the truth began to emerge.
9. He ________ (深吸一口气) and pushed open the heavy door.
10. ________ (使……恍然大悟的是) that he had been wrong all
along.11. The two brothers finally ________ (和好如初) after years of
misunderstanding.
12. ________ ( 令 我 们 宽 慰 的 是 ), the lost dog returned home
safely.
13. She ________ (感到一阵内疚) when she realized her words had
hurt her friend.
14. ________ (时间一分一秒地过去), his anxiety grew.
15. What ________ (最重要的) was that we had tried our best.
题型训练二 · 情节构建句子翻译
Instructions: 根据中文提示，完成英文句子，使情节连贯生动。(每空
1.5 分，共 15 分)
1. 就在他快要放弃的时候，一个意想不到的想法突然出现在他的脑海里。
________ he was about to give up, an unexpected idea ________ his
mind.
2. 她屏住呼吸，小心翼翼地打开那个旧盒子。
She ________ her breath and opened the old box ________.
3. 尽管困难重重，他们还是坚持了下来，最终取得了成功。
Despite all the difficulties, they ________ and ________ succeeded
in the end.
4. 那一刻，他意识到真正的友谊比胜利更重要。
At that moment, he realized that true friendship ________ more than
victory.5. 听到这个好消息，她高兴得跳了起来。
________ the good news, she ________ with joy.
6. 他环顾四周，发现所有人都用期待的目光看着他。
He ________ and found everyone looking at him with ________ eyes.
7. 正是妈妈的鼓励给了他继续前进的勇气。
It was his mother’s encouragement ________ gave him the courage to
________.
8. 他们相视一笑，所有的误会都在那一刻烟消云散。
They ________ at each other, and all the misunderstandings ________
at that moment.
9. 无论结果如何，重要的是我们努力过。
No matter ________ the result, what mattered was that we ________
tried.
10. 带着希望和决心，他踏上了新的旅程。
With ________ and determination, he ________ on a new journey.
题型训练三 · 读后续写情节构建实战
要求： 阅读下面每篇材料，根据所给情节和续写段落首句，完成 150 词
左右的续写。注意情节连贯、逻辑合理、情感真挚。
【实战1 · 友情与信任】
原文： Tom and Jerry had been best friends since childhood. They
shared everything—dreams, secrets, and even the same passion for
music. However, a misunderstanding over a lost guitar pick drovethem apart. Jerry thought Tom had stolen it, while Tom insisted he
had never touched it. For months, they didn’t speak to each other.
One day, Tom found the pick under his bed— it must have fallen
there accidentally. He knew he had to make things right.
续写段落首句： Tom decided to visit Jerry with the pick in his
hand.
【情节构建提示】 见面时的尴尬→解释误会→情感转变→重归于好→主
题升华（友谊的珍贵）
【参考范文】
Tom decided to visit Jerry with the pick in his hand. His heart
pounded as he knocked on the door. When Jerry opened it, an awkward
silence fell between them. “I found it,” Tom said softly, holding
out the pick. Jerry stared at it, his eyes widening with surprise
and then guilt. “I’m so sorry,” Jerry whispered. “I should have
trusted you.” The two friends looked at each other, and then burst
into laughter. They embraced, realizing that a true friendship is
stronger than any misunderstanding. From that day on, they valued
their bond even more, knowing that trust is the foundation of any
lasting relationship.
【实战2 · 勇气与突破】
原文： Lily was a shy girl who never raised her hand in class.
She loved painting but was too afraid to share her work withothers. Her art teacher, Mr. Chen, noticed her talent and
encouraged her to enter a school art competition. Lily hesitated,
but deep down, she wanted to try. After weeks of secret practice,
she finally completed a painting that expressed her inner world.
The day of the competition arrived.
续写段落首句： Lily stood in front of the exhibition hall, her
hands trembling.
【情节构建提示】 紧张心理→看到老师的鼓励→鼓起勇气进入→作品获
得认可→自信成长
【参考范文】
Lily stood in front of the exhibition hall, her hands trembling.
She almost turned around, but then she saw Mr. Chen’s encouraging
smile through the window. Taking a deep breath, she stepped inside.
To her surprise, visitors were admiring her painting—a colorful
landscape filled with hope. One judge commented, “This piece shows
a unique voice.” Lily felt a warmth spread through her chest. At
that moment, she realized that courage was not the absence of fear,
but the decision to act despite it. From then on, she began to
share her art freely, discovering a new confidence that would shape
her future.
【实战3 · 亲情与成长】原文： Emma had always been close to her grandfather. He taught
her how to fish, told her stories of his youth, and always had a
smile for her. But as Emma grew older, she became busy with school
and friends, and their visits became fewer. One winter, her
grandfather fell ill. Emma visited him in the hospital, feeling a
deep regret for not spending more time with him. She wanted to do
something to make up for lost time.
续写段落首句： Emma decided to create a photo album of their
memories.
【情节构建提示】 收集照片→回忆往事→制作相册→去医院看望→爷爷
感动→感悟亲情
【参考范文】
Emma decided to create a photo album of their memories. She
spent the entire week gathering old photos, each one bringing back
a flood of memories—fishing trips, birthday parties, and laughter-
filled afternoons. She wrote down her favorite stories next to each
picture. When she brought the album to the hospital, her
grandfather’s eyes lit up. He turned the pages slowly, smiling and
sometimes wiping away tears. “This is the best gift I’ve ever
received,” he said, holding her hand. Emma learned that time spent
with loved ones is never wasted, and that love can bridge anydistance. From that day, she made sure to cherish every moment with
her family.
参考答案与核心解析
题型训练一 · 情节描写词汇填空答案
1. Suddenly 2. To our surprise 3. gathered courage 4. At that
moment 5. frozen 6. Tears blurred his eyes 7. hesitation 8.
Gradually 9. took a deep breath 10. It dawned on him 11. made up
12. To our relief 13. felt a pang of guilt 14. As time ticked by
15. mattered most
题型训练二 · 句子翻译答案
1. Just when / crossed 2. held / cautiously 3. persisted /
eventually 4. mattered 5. Hearing / jumped 6. looked around /expectant 7. that / carry on 8. smiled / disappeared 9. what / had
10. hope / set out
题型训练三 · 读后续写实战参考范文（见上文）
📌 情节构建核心要点：
1. 冲突设计：矛盾需自然，与原文伏笔呼应（如误解、恐惧、遗憾）。
2. 情感曲线：情绪应有起伏（紧张→释然，恐惧→勇气，内疚→弥补）。
3. 细 节 描 写 ： 运 用 动 作 、 神 态 、 心 理 描 写 增 强 画 面 感 （ 如 “ hands
trembling”“tears blurred his eyes”）。
4. 主题升华：结尾点明寓意，但避免生硬说教（如“友谊需要信任”“勇气
源于行动”）。
5. 语 言 风 格 ： 与 原 文 保 持 一 致 ， 使 用 恰 当 的 连 接 词 （ suddenly,
eventually, at that moment）使情节流畅。
