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中学英语知识汇总·记叙文写作【全国版】
专题01记叙文写作模板
【命题探索】
记叙文分为记人和记事两种。记叙文的几个要点:
1.时间、地点、人物、事件，这几个要素在写作时要交代清楚,
2.人称:记叙文一般有第一人称和第三人称两种叙事方式。
3.记叙文的线索一般为时间，即按照事件的发展顺序来写。也可以按照地点的线索来写，即以地点的转移为顺序。
4.重点突出，层次分明，详略得当。
5.注意文章的完整性。
6.所用的时态通常为一"般过去时。
记叙文通常分为三段:
第一段：开篇点题。交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点等。
第二段：具体叙述。讲述事件发生的原因、经过和结果。
第三段：总结感受。根据写作要点进行取舍。
【经典模板1】
写人记叙文写作模板
写人 记叙文 | 引出人物 | Do you know (引出人物)? She / He is (人物身份). |
详细介绍人物 | She / He is (身材).She / He always wears(表情)and gives us the impression that(给人的印象).She / He is good at (特长).She /He always helps me out whenever I am in trouble / haveproblems.Once (列出事例). To my surprise, (她/ 他的做法). | |
作出评价，表达愿望 | She/ He isand I hope (表达愿望) |
Do you know Li Hua? He is the monitor of our class.
He is tall and a little fat.He always wears a smile on his face and gives us the impression that he is so positive that nothing can beat him.He is good at math.He always helps me out whenever I am in trouble.Once I failed in math,and I was so upset. To my surprise,he noticed this and comforted me that one failure could represent nothing.Then,he helped me to analyze the reason why I failed and shared his methods of learning.
He is so nice and I hope we could be friends for life.
你认识李华吗? 他是我们班的班长。
他个子很高,但有点胖。 他总是面带微笑,给我们的印象是他非常乐观,没有什么能打败他。 他擅长数学。 每当我遇到困难时,他总是会帮助我。 有一次我数学不及格,感到很沮丧。 令我惊讶的是,他注意到了我的情绪,并安慰我说,一次失败并不能代表什么。 然后,他帮我分析了不及格的原因,并分享了他的学习方法。
他人很好,我希望我们能做一辈子的朋友。
【经典模板2】
叙事记叙文写作模板
叙事记叙文写 | 开篇点题 | Everyone has an unforgettable(难忘的)memory and can’ t remove it.It is true of me,and I still remember the whole process clearly. |
体叙述事情 | It was a sunny / windy / rainy day,and a terrible thing happened to me suddenly.I(事件).At that time,I felt (感受). However, (人物)appeared.He / She (做的事情). | |
呼应主题 | I was very touched and I will never forget this experience.Because I learned that.(感悟) |
Everyone has an unforgettable memory and can’t remove it.It is true of me,and I still remember the whole process clearly.
It was a rainy day,and a terrible thing happened to me suddenly.I fell off from my bike.I hurt my right arm and I couldn’t get in touch with my parents.At that time,I felt so helpless.However,a policeman appeared.He sent me to the hospital and then brought me home.
I was very touched and I will never forget this experience.Because I learned that there will always be someone who is willing to give you love and warmth.
每个人都有难以忘怀的记忆,无法抹去。 我也是如此,我仍然清楚地记得整个过程。
那是一个雨天,一件糟糕的事情突然发生在我身上。 我从自行车上摔了下来。我的右臂受伤了,还无法和父母取得联系。 那时,我感到很无助。 然而,一个警察出现了。 他把我送去医院治疗,然后把我带回了家。
我很感动,我永远不会忘记这次经历。 因为我懂得了,总会有人愿意给你爱和温暖。
【经典词句积累】
1.个人基本情况、成长变化及感悟
佳句示范 | 迁移运用 |
1.回顾过去·开篇In primary school, I used tohave to sit in the stands because of my height. However, I practised even harder instead ofgiving up.（used to do sth“过去常常做某事”；however表转折） | 1.过去我不擅长英语。然而我没有放弃，而是积极向老师寻求帮助。 I used to be poor at English. However, I asked my teacher for help actively instead of giving up. |
2.展现变化·主体 As a result, I succeeded in gettinga scholarship.（as a result 引出结果） | 2.我每天练习跑步。结果，我成功完成了我的第一次5千米跑。 I practised running every day. As a result, I succeeded in finishing my first 5-kilometer run. |
3.展望未来·结尾 Through hard work, I proved that size and body type do not matter—I can do almost anything if I never give up. | 3.拓展坚持的结果通过永不放弃，我证明了过去的失败和疑虑不重要——努力最终会有回报。 By never giving up, I proved that past failures and doubts do not matter—hard work pays off in the end. |
2.自我反思、自我管理与自我提升
佳句示范 | 迁移运用 |
4.自我认识·开篇 I often have to stay up late to finish my homework. Then sometimes I find it hard tostay awake the next day. | 1.我经常不吃早餐就去上学，然后有时会发觉很难在课堂上保持专注。 I often go to school without having breakfast. Then sometimes I find it hard to stay focused in class. |
5.自我反思·主体 Perhaps I shouldmanage my time better and go to bed earlier. | 2.也许我该把闹钟调早15分钟，以便有时间吃早餐。 Perhaps I should set my alarm 15 minutes earlier to have time for breakfast. |
6.自我管理·结尾 You'll make mistakes along the way, but the key is tolearn from your mistakes and never give up. | 3.有时候你可能会在学习上遇到困难，但关键是要制订一个合理的学习计划并永不放弃。 You may have trouble learning sometimes, but the key is to make a proper plan for studying and never give up. |
3.如何成为新时代青年
佳句示范 | 迁移运用 |
1.引入·开篇 Today I see a room full of talented young adults whoare full of hope for the future. You've all grown up so much and I'm so proud ofyou.（who引导定语从句） | 1.作为勤奋向上、永不言弃的学生，我们已取得了巨大的进步，并为我们自己深感自豪。 As hardworking students who never give up, we've made great progress and are proud of ourselves. |
2.做法建议·主体 Life is like a race. You eithertake the lead orfall behind. | 2.成功就像梯子，你要么向上爬，要么待在底部。 Success is like a ladder. You either climb up or stay at the bottom. |
3.升华·结尾 Carry on and fight againstall the difficulties until you realize your dream some day. （祈使句） | 3.不断前进，勇敢面对每一次挑战，直到我们成功。 Keep going and face every challenge bravely until we succeed. |
4.个人喜好及业余爱好
佳句示范 | 迁移运用 |
1.点明爱好·开篇 Walkingin the park is one of my favoriteactivities. （动词的-ing形式作主语，简洁明了；“one of+可数名词复数”表示“……之一”） | 1.收集来自不同国家的邮票是我的爱好之一。 Collecting stamps from different countries is one of my favorite hobbies. |
2.表明原因·主体 I like smooth music thathelps me relax after a long week at work. （that引导的定语从句说明“喜好”的“原因”，逻辑清晰） | 2.我喜欢晨跑，它能让我一整天都充满活力。 I like morning jogging that makes me feel energetic all the day. |
3.升华主题·总结 Hobbies can makeyou grow as a person, developyour interests and helpyou learn new skills. （通过并列结构展现多重意义） | 3.运动可以使你保持健康，增强体力，并帮助你放松。 Sports can keep you healthy, build physical power and help relax. |
俗语谚语
1. Never say die. 永不言败。
2. How time flies! 时光飞逝!
3. No pain, no gain. 一分耕耘，一分收获。
4. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。
【中考真题练】
（1）
Hello,everyone!I'm looking for a partner to sing the English song “Auld Lang Syne”with me at the graduation ceremony. ①As we all know, friends play an important rolein our life, so does a partner. ②As for me, I'd like to find a girl of my age, so that we'll have no difficulty in communicating. ③Then, she should be good at singingand then we can well present the true feeling of the song. ④Also, she should have fluent spoken English, as it's a classic English song. ⑤Last but not least, she'd better be a good teammate, since good teamwork can help make our performance perfect. ⑥If you are interested in singing English songs and want to show your talent, please contact me. ⑦Let's create an unforgettable performance together. Thanks for listening! |
（2）
注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
2.巧立意·成佳作
Dear Henry,
I'm glad that you're interested in our school study tour last Friday. ①Let me tell you something about it.
②In the morning, we visited the History Museum. ③We learned about the history of the Long March. ④Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army, which greatly touched us. ⑤After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art. ⑥We also watched local opera performances that are educational.
⑦The tour not onlydeepens our love for our countrybut alsoenriches our understanding of traditional Chinese art!
⑧Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【话题预测】
（1）
泉州“海丝小导游 (Maritime Silk Road Young Guide)”项目正在招募暑期学生志愿者。假定你是李华，希望成为其中一员。请你结合以下提示，给项目负责人Ms. Chen写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Ms. Chen,
I am Li Hua. I am pleased to know that you need young guides for Maritime Silk Road.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ms. Chen,
I am Li Hua. I am pleased to know that you need young guides for Maritime Silk Road. I’d love to be one of them.
I believe I’d be a good fit for many reasons. Firstly, I can speak English fluently, which allows me to communicate well with international friends. At the same time, I have experience guiding visitors. I’ve also studied Quanzhou’s history and have introduced the Maritime Silk Road before. What’s more, I’m friendly and outgoing, so I enjoy being with people and making them feel welcome.
This would be a wonderful opportunity for me to learn, grow, and share my love for this city. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封自荐信，属于书信；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：需依据所给提示信息，涵盖语言能力、相关经验、性格特点以及参与该项目的益处等方面进行写作，不能遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明写信目的，即看到招募信息，希望成为“海丝小导游”；
第二步，分点阐述自身优势。从语言能力、导游经验、性格特点等方面说明适合该岗位；
第三步，结尾表达期待回复，并署名。
[亮点词汇]
① at the same time 与此同时
② what’s more 而且，此外
③ look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
① I can speak English fluently, which allows me to communicate well with international friends.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
② What’s more, I’m friendly and outgoing, so I enjoy being with people and making them feel welcome.（so表因果关系，后跟结果）
（2）
某英文公众号正在举办以“A meaningful birthday”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华， 请根据下面的提示信息，用英语写一篇征文，记录你经历的一次既难忘又有意义的生日。
注意：1.须包括以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息；
3.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
A meaningful birthday
Birthdays are always special, and this year, mine was truly unforgettable.
参考范文：
A meaningful birthday
Birthdays are always special, and this year, mine was truly unforgettable.
My birthday is on May 25, 2025. In the morning, my parents and I went to give away some used books and clothes to help people in need. After that, we went to an animal shelter and adopted a dog. For lunch, my parents, some friends and I enjoyed a big meal at a nice restaurant. How happy I was getting so many gifts from my friends! In the afternoon, we took part in a volunteer activity together. Though we were tired, we felt wonderful.
It was such a meaningful birthday, because I not only spread the warmth of love, but also discovered the true meaning of giving.
（3）
“水滴石穿”常用来比喻坚持不懈、持之以恒。在三年的初中生涯中，你一定有这样的经历。请以“Persistence（坚持）makes me grow”为题，从下列提示中选择一个话题写一篇英语短文，并讲述这背后的故事。
注意：1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Persistence makes me grow
Persistence has played an important role in my growth._____________________
【参考范文】
Persistence makes me grow
Persistence has played an important role in my growth.It helps me achieve my goals and teaches me the power of never giving up.
When I started junior high, English was my weakest subject. No matter how hard I tried, I kept failing my English exams and almost lost my confidence. My teacher reminded me that “Rome isn't built in a day.” Inspired by her words, I began to read English aloud every morning and review what I learned as often as possible. Gradually, my English improved a lot. Last term, when I finally won a school English competition, I felt a sense of achievement.
The experience taught me that persistence is the key to success and personal growth. I believe that as long as I keep going, I will finally achieve my dream.
（4）
有些“对不起”说出口的瞬间、才发现语言轻得像羽毛。或许是与好友赌气摔门的刹那，或许是无心之言刺痛家人的时刻——你经历过“道歉也无法挽回”的瞬间吗？请以 “When Sorry Isn't Enough”为题用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：1.Describe what happened;
2.Explain why “sorry” didn't work;
3.Share how the problem was solved or the lesson you learned.
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
When Sorry Isn't Enough
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【参考范文】
When Sorry Isn't Enough
Last term, while I was playing with my best friend Amy, I knocked her favorite pen off the table by accident and broke it.
As it was the last gift from Amy's grandfather before he passed away, its value was beyond words. My heart sank as I realized what I had done. I said sorry to her, but it didn't work. Tears fell from Amy's eyes as she ran out of the room. I was frozen with guilt, realizing how powerless my “sorry” was as it couldn't make the broken pen as good as new.
Determined to make it up to her, I spent the next week searching every stationery shop for a similar pen. When I finally handed it to Amy, she hugged me tightly. Through this experience, I learned that actions speak louder than words—especially a simple “sorry”.