专题 11 书面表达
2022-2023 学年九年级英语上学期期末高分冲刺专练
一、话题作文
1．你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步，比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌
握。良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面，结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何取得这
一进步的，以及毕业前你下一步的打算。请以My progress为题写一篇短文。
要求：（1）观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅；
（2）文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）卷面整洁，书写工整，词数80词左右。
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【答案】例文
My progress
I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing which I consider very
difficult.
The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it,
which makes me feel very depressed and upset. But I kept on reading difficult English articlesinstead of just giving up. And I also practiced English writing whenever I had a chance. Little
by little, I made much progress in English and gained a lot of confidence through my constant
effort. As you can imagine, nothing makes me prouder than feeling my progress in English.
I realize that as long as I bravely face my weaknesses and take effective ways to
overcome them, I believe I will be successful in the future. I will fight for my dream in the
following months!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。要求从生活技能的获得、学习方法的
掌握、良好习惯的养成等三个方面，来选择其中的一个，以“My progress”为题写一篇
作文，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的，以及毕业前你下一步的打算。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来书写；时态采用一般过去时为主；首先要选择写
什么内容，引出话题；然后根据你的话题来详细的陈述是如何取得进步的；最后要介
绍毕业前的打算。书写要工整，语言要简练，句子前后要连贯、通顺、符合逻辑。
2．“绿水青山就是金山银山。”请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法,以
“How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful"为题,写一篇英语短文。
写作要求:
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
参考词汇: environment ; pollution; reduce; sort the rubbish(垃圾分类)
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【答案】例文：
How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. It’s our dream to have a home
with a blue sky, green trees and clean water. So it’s very important for us to realize theimportance of protecting the environment and dealing with pollution. But what should we do?
We can take actions in our daily life. We can plant more trees to keep the soil in place.
Resources are very important, so we need to save resources to avoid polluting the
environment. For example, we can use both sides of the paper. Polluted water should be dealt
with in time to keep the river clean because we cannot live without water. When we go to
other places, we can choose public transport to reduce air pollution.
In my opinion, everyone can do something small to make a difference. When we see
rubbish on the road, we should pick it up immediately. We should also learn to recycle waste
by separating the waste into different groups. If all of us work together, we will have a more
beautiful home.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。主要以“How to Make Our Hometown
More Beautiful”为主题展开描写，主要从保护环境，节约资源，垃圾分类等方面做详细
的描述，写作时要注意文章的层次感和语言的逻辑性要合理。
2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段引出绿水青山很重要，我们应该如何做；第二
段给出一些具体的做法，第三段给出自己的一些观点，从生活出发要怎么做。整个文
章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达流畅，意思明确，通俗易懂。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：deal with；take actions；avoid doing；for example；in my opinion；pick up。
句型：because引导的原因状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；if引导的条件状语从
句。
3．节日是了解各国文化的窗口，中外节日中，最令你青睐的是什么节日？你对它
有什么了解？请以My favorite festival为主题写一篇短文。
要求：1. 词数不少于80词。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
3.包含以上提到的所有信息。
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【答案】 My Favorite Festival
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It is one of the most important festival in China
which always begins on the first day of the first lunar month in the Chinese calendar and ends
on the 15th day. This is a time for family reunions, visiting relatives and friends and
exchanging greeting for the coming New Year. It is also a time to ring out the old and ring in
the new.
There are various activities in each household to celebrate the spring festival. Days before
it, we clean our house with belief that cleaning sweeps bad luck. We also decorate our house
with paper cuts and spring couplets. On the eve of the festival, we get together with our
family members and have big meals while watching Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight,
we celebrate the New Year with spectacular fireworks.
I like the Spring Festival because it is the only time in a year that I can sit together with
every family member. As we are so busy studying or working. It is such a blissful moment
that we look back and look forward to the future. We visit our relatives and friends, wishing
each other a happy year and good luck. How happy we are!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：以My favorite festival为主题介绍自己最喜欢的传统节日的情况，可适当发
挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的节日是什么；
第二步，介绍节日的时间，活动以及意义等等；
第三步，介绍个人感受，喜欢这个节日的的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① at midnight 在午夜
② be busy doing sth 忙于做某事
③ such…that 如此……以至于[高分句型]
①It is one of the most important festival in China which always begins on the first day of the
first lunar month in the Chinese calendar and ends on the 15th day（which引导定语从句）
②It is also a time to ring out the old and ring in the new（动词不定式作定语）
4．提示： 情绪，是指人有喜、怒、哀、乐、惧等心理体验， 这种体验是人对客
观事物态度的一种反映。我们如果管理不好情绪，不但处理不好每天的生活，还会给
身体带来伤害。请你以“How to Keep Happy in Everyday Life”为题，分享你是如何保
持开心的。
要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
How to Keep Happy in Everyday Life
It is important to keep healthy in our everyday life. But how to keep happy? I’d like to
share some opinions with you.
First of all, if I get into trouble, I will talk about my problems with my parents, my
friends and my teachers instead of hiding in my heart. Then in my free time, I take up
different hobbies, such as paper cutting, collecting stamps and so on. They not only make me
relaxed, but also help me forget unhappy things. Finally, I keep doing sports twice a week.
I’m sure health can bring me happiness.
In a word, we need to face the problems properly, develop our own interests and keepdoing exercise. Then we can always have a good time.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“How to Keep Happy in Everyday
Life”为题，分享你是如何保持开心的。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第
一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己是如何保持开心的；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，
无语法和拼写错误。
5．自从“双减”政策实施以来，我们学生有更多的空闲时间参与文娱、体育、艺
术等方面的课外活动，这些活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“After-school
Activities Make My Life Colorful”为题，写一篇英语短文来介绍你参与的课外活动。
内容：1. 介绍你所参与的1至2项关于文娱、体育或艺术方面的课外活动；
2.谈一谈课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名校名或地名；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.词数在80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
After- school Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays, we have more free time to take part in after -school
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【答案】 After-school Activities Make
My Life Colorful
Nowadays, we have more free time to take part in after -school activities. There are many
different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I
am used to playing volleyball after school. In the volleyball club, I’ve made lots of friends.
We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I
feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I willcontinue to play volleyball after school in the future.
All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“After-school Activities Make My Life
Colorful”为题，写一篇作文来介绍你参与的课外活动。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时需介绍你所
参与的1至2项关于文娱、体育或艺术方面的课外活动，同时还需要谈论课外活动给
你带来的收获及感受，同时注意写作过程不要出现单词拼写和语法错误，保证语句通
顺，逻辑清晰。
二、材料作文
6．书面表达
76. 减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意
义？”展开了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示，以“How To Make Our Spare
Time More
Meaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意： (1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯;
(2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数;
(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
(4)参考词汇：提升素养promote literacy
How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our
spare time more meaningful?
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【答案】Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to
make our spare time more meaningful?
My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First, it's good to help our parents do some
housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by
reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.
In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can
take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.
In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.
【详解】本文属于材料作文，要表达如何让课外生活更有意义。根据要表达的内容确
定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语
习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如a good chance to do, get
close to, in my opinion, what’s more, take an active part in, in a word, make full use of, spare
time以及“比较级and比较级”等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，
句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词
数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表
达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是
使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的
准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时
还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，
还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正
确，词数是否符合要求等。7．2020年，因为疫情（COVID-19）我们第一次居家上网课；2022年，我们又有
了同样的经历。形式一样，感受不同。原来我们重视程度不够，听讲不够认真，课上
悄悄玩游戏、聊天；但这次我们有了变化：有的同学准备更加充分，笔记、作业完成
的更好，有的同学提高了自己的自控能力，学会了合理利用时间，还有的同学学会和
家人和睦相处，分享烦恼，解决问题……请以My Online Classes为题，总结自己眼中
的网课变化，并就如何更好的上网课给学弟学妹们提出至少两条建议。
注意：
（1）词数100词左右；
（2）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（3）短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
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【答案】例文:
My Online Classes
There are always changes in our lives, sometimes they can help us to grow up.
In 2020, we had to stay at home to have online classes because of the COVID-19. That
was not a happy experience for some of us. We were too young to control ourselves at that
time, therefore, we were absent for some online classes, we played games secretly and chatted
with our friends as well. This spring, we had online classes for a second time. But we are
different. We will graduate in less than fifty days after all. We are becoming more active, we
can put our time to better use. We prepare and finish our lessons better. Besides, many of us
learn to communicate better with our family: to share our happiness and worries.
My younger schoolmates, give up online games, learn to take notes by drawing mind
maps, finish the homework on your own, then you are sure to make your online classes better.
Hope everything goes well!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇命题作文，总结自己和去年相比网课变化，并就如
何更好的上网课给学弟学妹们提出至少两条建议，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；
注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，人称主要用第一人称。写作时，
写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符
合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
8．初中生活已近尾声，同学们即将步入高一级学校。请你仔细阅读下表中的内容
和所给提示，从下面两所学校中选择一所你喜欢的学校，并根据该校信息写一篇短文。
Names
Purple School Orange School
Items(条目)
Schools public, a long history private, well-known
Teachers hard-working young and active
Students less homework colorful activities
提示：(1) Which school would you like to go to?
(2) Why do you choose it?
注意：1. 短文须包括表格中你所选学校的全部信息和提示中的两个要点，可适当
发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
I would like to go to
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【答案】例文
I would like to go to Orange School.
I like Orange School better because it is a private school and it is well-known in our city.
There are a lot of new and modern teaching facilities. We can have access to the most
advanced equipment and experience the best teaching effects. What’s more, the teachers in
Orange School are young and active. I think it is important and helpful for us to develop a
good relationship with teachers. And it is good for our study. Last but not least, students there
have colorful activities and I hope the school life will be wonderful there.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，选择一所喜欢的学
校进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介
绍学校的特点、学校老师和学生的情况等。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
9．假如某中学生英文报开展关于生活变化的征文活动，请你根据下表中的提示，
以“Changes in Our Life”为题写一篇短文，简述社会及个人生活各方面的变化，展望未
来并浅谈如何为之努力。
家乡 老旧房屋→高楼林立
变化 交通 步行；骑车→乘坐公交车；开小汽车
个人 书本学习→网络学习
愿望 更加美好的生活（或自拟内容，说明自己的理想生活）
打算 ……
要求：1. 词数80左右； 2. 必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in Our Life
Great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
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【答案】例文
Changes in Our Life
Great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
In my hometown, people used to live in old and broken houses. Now, there are tall and
beautiful buildings everywhere. In the past, people had to walk or ride when they went out.
But now, they can take buses or drive to wherever they want to go. Several years ago, people
could only learn from books. Nowadays, they can also learn through computers.
I hope people from all over the country can live a better life in the near future. And I will
study hard and try my best to make it come true.
I believe that our life will be better and better.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于较为常见的描述变化的作文。需要根据表格提示，
将信息转化为语句。由于文章开头结尾已给，表格内容即为第二段，主要描述变化。
2.写作指导：本文主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。
已经产生的变化，用现在完成时进行总体概述。谈论到具体变化时，过去的状态使用
一般过去时，现在的状态使用一般现在时。词语应尽量丰富，体现出变化后的美好。
写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
10．阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请你结合下面图示信息，以“How reading
improves my English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专
栏投稿。
写作要求：
1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3)词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：improve 提高
How reading improves my English
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【答案】例文：
How reading improves my English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.
Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. It gives me
confidence when I talk in English. Secondly, reading helps make writing easier for me. When
I do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelled correctly. So I make fewer and
fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develops my thinking ability. What
I’ve read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more. What’s more, reading helps
me develop a good habit of learning English.
In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English
learning.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“How reading improves my
English”为题，结合提示内容介绍自己是如何提高英语的，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，
第一段引出话题；第二段从口语、写作和思维能力等方面介绍自己是如何提高英语的；
第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
三、看图作文
11．假如你是李华，最近，你看到TEENS上正在开展以“Colourful school activities”为
主题的征文活动。请结合图片提示，介绍学校开展的活动，并陈述你参加此活动的理
由或收获。
1. 征文稿要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 思维导图非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数 100个左右，征文稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 征文稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
My school life is colourful, especially the school activities.
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I like my school. Colourful school activities always make me happy.
【答案】例文
Colourful school activities
My school life is colourful, especially the school activities. In the past three years, I have
taken part in all kinds of school activities. I like singing and I’m a member of the Music Club.
We get together to practise singing twice a week. Singing can also cheer me up when I am in
a bad mood. I sometimes go to the Drawing Club. Everything is quiet and peaceful while
drawing. I hope to be a world-known artist.
Besides, our school held the sports meeting last week. I ran the third but I felt satisfied.
I’m looking forward to the Reading Week. We can share thoughts with each other. At the
same time, I also participated in the Hope Project and the Arbor Day activity as a volunteer.
Helping others and the environment makes me feel fulfilled.I like my school. Colourful school activities always make me happy.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文，以“Colourful school activities”为主题根据
内容提示介绍学校开展的活动，并讲述自参加活动的理由和收获。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时。正
文可分为两个部分：第一部分介绍自己平时会参加的社团活动；第二部分介绍自己参
加的某些学校组织的活动。写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示进行描述，同时注
意选用合适的连词、短语和句型来将内容进行串联和拓展；文章做到思路清晰，层次
分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
12．如今，很多父母望子成龙心切，给孩子安排很多任务，导致孩子没有了自己
的周末，如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法，以“Weekend or
Not?”为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文向Parents杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文
章能有所启发。
注意: 文中不得出现“Jack”以外的人名或任何学校名称。
Weekend or Not?
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Weekend or Not?
Jack has to attend lots of classes at weekends. He has little time for his favorite sport—
soccer. Still, his parents are pushing him to do more tasks, which worries him a lot.
Nowadays, many students are under much pressure like Jack. Their parents believe it
necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. As a
result, some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything. What’s
worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.
I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy
their weekends.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Weekend or Not”为题根据图片所示内容进行写作，分
析图中的现象并谈谈自己的想法，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和一般现在时为主。第一段描述图片中的现象；第二段
主要讲述自己对这种现象的看法；第三段进行总结。写作时需要叙述完整，保证条理
清晰；同时，注意合理拓展，逻辑顺畅。
13．越来越多的人将阅读作为一种生活习惯。假如你是李欣，你校校园电视台英
语栏目正在征集以阅读为主题的视频，请根据以下图示撰写视频文稿。1. ___ways___ 2. ___family___
注意：
1. 请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格（一空一词）；
2. 须全面反映图文信息；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 词数80—100，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Xin.
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Hello, everyone. I’m Li Xin. More and more people have a reading habit. So do I. I likereading very much. Because I think it can open up a new world for me. I can also learn more
from it.
I like reading books in the school library. There are different kinds of books in it. When
travelling, I enjoy reading on the plane to kill time. Now we not only read paper books, but
also read e-books. I prefer to read paper books. Because spending too much time on screen is
bad for my eyes. Our family all like reading books, especially my grandfather. He likes
reading books about travelling. Among the books, I like history books best. Because I can
learn more about Chinese culture. I always read books at least half an hour before bedtime.
So if you like reading, take action from now on.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。围绕“阅读”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称和第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第
一段讲述阅读的重要性；第二段介绍自己的阅读习惯；最后一段呼吁人们现在就开始
阅读。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
14．近些年，人们的交流方式有了许多改变，请根据图画写一篇80词左右的英语
短文，描述今昔通信方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。
注意：1. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
参考词汇：communicate with (与……交流)，efficient (效率高的)
The Changes of the Way of Communication
Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent
years.
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In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.
【答案】例文
The Change of the Way of Communication
Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent
years.
In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the
public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone. People can
communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people can
use the Internet to send and receive e-mails.
With these changes, our life is becoming better and better. People can work more
efficiently. It used to take many days to hear from each other, but now it takes only a minute,
even if they are in two different continents.
In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇人们交流方式的对比的文章，开头和结尾已给
出。要求根据所给图片提示来写一篇今昔通信方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活
带来的影响的文章，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主，用一般过去时
描述过去。描述内容时，内容应描写细致；要根据材料所给内容叙述完整，保证条理
清晰。
15．假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生，他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示
为他们写出前往的路线，并简介公园情况。
①路线(见下图)②公园环境优美、凉爽，还可以游泳、野餐等；
要求：①词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。②文中不能出现自己的姓名
和所在学校的名称。
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight
【答案】One possible version:
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the
first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down
the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.
The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers.
You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You my also get a
good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.
【详解】一、审题
本篇作文考查体裁为说明文，要求写出去翠湖公园的路线，并简介公园情况。时态可
用一般现在时。
二、列举写作要点
1. 去翠湖公园的路线
2. 简介公园情况。公园环境优美、凉爽，还可游泳、野餐等；3. 表达祝福的心愿。
三、列出重点短语及句型
far from, It is easy to do sth. go straight, turn left, at the first corner, on your right, across
from, have fun, play games, have a picnic, enjoy yourselves
四、书信作文
16．假如你是某中学生英语报刊的知心栏目负责人Sam，你收到一名学生Lily的
来信，请你根据信件内容及所给提示，给出建议。
Dear Sam,I am a grade 9 student. I often stay up late to complete my homework. In this
way, I feel tired during the daytime and fall asleep in class. As a result, I can’t get good
scores and I don’t have my personal time to relax myself. This makes me feel stressed and
unhappy. What should I do?
Yours,
Lily
内容提示：
（1）不要熬夜，熬夜对身体健康不好；
（2）合理安排时间，尽可能在学校多完成作业；
（3）周末适当放松，通过运动锻炼缓解压力；
（4）……（提出一个你的建议）
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语句通顺；
（2）要点必须包括上文所有信息并适当发挥；
（3）词数：80 词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lily,What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my
suggestions for you.
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Hope you can get out of your problems soon.
Yours,
Sam
【答案】例文：
Dear Lily,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions
for you.
I think you should change your ways of study. Don’t stay up late. Staying up late is bad
for your health and will lead to memory loss. You should arrange your time reasonably and
finish your homework at school as much as possible. To keep healthy, you should go to bed
early. Too much pressure is not good for your health and schoolwork. You should do
something to lower your pressure. For example, you can take more exercise. You can listen to
music.
Hope you can get out of your problems.
Yours,
Sam
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：提示内容已给出，要求我们作为某中学生英语报刊的知心栏目负责人Sam，
给学生Lily写封回信。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表明Lily的问题是很普遍的，然后给出建议；
第二步，具体描述各个建议；
第三步，总结，表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up熬夜②be bad for对……有害
③as much as possible尽可能
④listen to music听音乐
⑤get out of摆脱
[高分句型]
①I think you should change his ways of study.（“I think”后是宾语从句）
②Staying up late is bad for your health and will lead to memory loss.（动名词短语作主
语）
17．2020年3月3日是联合国第七个"世界野生动植物日"，我国提出了"维护全球
生命共同体"的主题。我们的世界因这些生物而丰富多彩、妙趣横生。保护它们，就是
守护我们的未来。下面，让我们一起来听听熊猫惜惜的倾诉吧！
假如你是熊猫惜惜，请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封80词左右的书信。
要求：1.信中包含所给信息内容；2.适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；2.书信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入
总词数。
1.基本信息：13岁，来自四川，中国的象征；爱好（自主发挥）。
2.我的烦恼：朋友少，家园常常遭到破坏……
3.我的愿望或建议（自主发挥，至少两条）。
参考词汇：symbol (n. 象征) 、destroy (v. 破坏)
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi.
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Yours,
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【答案】例文：
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. I’m one of your favorite animals — Panda. I come from Sichuan,
China. I am 13 years old. I am a national treasure of China and a symbol of China. I usually
like to play with my friends. I also like climbing trees and sitting on the trees. I like bamboos
best. It’s my favorite food.
But I’ve had some problems recently. My home is often broken and I don’t have much
room to move around. My friends are fewer and fewer because some people have destroyed
my home. There is no one to play with me and I am very lonely. My favorite food is getting
less and less. I’m really sad.
I hope human friends can help me. I hope that people can protect the environment and
give me more space to live. If you can cut down fewer trees, my friends and I will be very
happy.
Yours,
Xixi
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇书信作文。主要是以熊猫惜惜的身份向人类写一封
信。先是介绍自己，然后告诉自己的烦恼以及期待和愿望。要把题目中给出的要求都
写进去，要注意人称之间的转换和时态的应用，还要注意语句之间的连贯。
2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段是对自己简单的介绍；第二段介绍自己的一些
烦恼和忧虑；第三段写自己的期望。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确，意
思通俗易懂。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：one of；come from；play with；like doing；move around；cut down。
句型：because引导的原因状语从句；I hope+宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。
18．假设你叫李华，即将从初中毕业。请你根据下面表格中的信息给校长写一封
信，谈谈你对学校的一些看法。
优点 不足
优秀的老师 课外活动少友好的同学 休息时间短
美丽的校园 ……
你的建议……
提示词：schoolyard校园
要求：1.短文应涵盖上述所有内容，可适当发挥。
2.行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。
3.不得在文中出现学校名称和人名。
4.词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the
progress I have made in the past three years.
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Best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,
I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past
three years. I am writing to tell you some things that have affected our school life.
There are many advantages in our school. We have excellent teachers and friendly
classmates. Our schoolyard is beautiful and big. But there are still some problems. First of all,
we are faced with endless homework every day. Some students have to stay up very late to
deal with it, which makes us have less rest time. Secondly, as we all know, colorful out-of-
class activities are of great importance to our healthy growth, but we can hardly spare time toparticipate in them.
In my opinion, we should have more free time to balance our study and life. We should
have more colorful and meaningful activities.
Best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写信给校长谈谈学
校的优点与不足，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四
段，首尾两端已给出；第二段介绍学校的优点与不足；第三段给出建议。要保证语言
连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
19．假如你是李华，你的笔友Mark将要来你家做客，向你寻问如何在中国举止得
当。请根据下面的提示，给Mark写一封80~100词的回信。把答案写在答题卡上相应
位置。（可能用到的单词：chopsticks筷子）
1. 见面礼仪。 2. 餐桌礼仪。 3. 外出礼仪。
Dear Mark,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some
suggestions on how to behave properly in China.
When you come to my house,
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A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mark,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some
suggestions on how to behave properly in China.
When you come to my house, you need to buy some small gifts, such as some fruit. Thisis the basic etiquette for Chinese guests when they visit others.
When you are eating with us, you should let the elders move their chopsticks first before
we eat. Don’t make too much noise while eating. It’s impolite to point at others with your
chopsticks or stick your chopsticks into the food.
Before you go outside, you need to say goodbye to others. It’s polite.
A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据提示内容，给Mark一封信，告诉他
如何在中国举止得当。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第二人称为主。写作时需包含三个要
点：见面礼仪；餐桌礼仪；外出礼仪。承接作文每段开头，展开叙述，确保语句通顺，
无单词语法错误。
20．假设你是李华，你所在的国际学校下个月将会举行以“让世界听到中国声
音”为主题的中国文化节。请你写一封邀请信，邀请同学们参加此次活动。
内容包括：
1.举办此次活动的目的；
2.中国文化节的具体活动(举办汉语角、组织中国图书展览、举办关于中国传统文化的
讲座等)；
3.邀请大家参加此次活动。
注意：
1.词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.短文需包括所给信息，可以适当增加细节，使行文流畅；
3.在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实姓名和校名。
Dear fellow students,
There will be a Chinese culture festival in our school next month.
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【答案】例文：
Dear fellow students,
There will be a Chinese culture festival in our school next month. I’m writing to invite
you to come to the Chinese culture festival in our school. The purpose of holding this event is
mainly to promote Chinese culture.
Firstly, there will be a Chinese Corner. What’s more, you will have an opportunity to
listen to lectures about traditional Chinese culture. Above all, we will organize a Chinese
book exhibition, so you can read a lot of books.
If you come, you had better bring a pen and a notebook to take some notes. I am sure
you will enjoy it. I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写一封邀请信，邀请同学们参加你所在的国际学校下
个月举行的以“让世界听到中国声音”为主题的中国文化节。结合提示内容进行写作，
注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般将来时为主。作文可以分为三
段，第一段引出话题，写出举办此次活动的目的；第二段介绍中国文化节的具体活动；
第三段邀请大家参加此次活动并进行收尾。要求语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
五、电子邮件
21．假如你是李华，你所在的学校社团将举行一场交流分享会，主题是“如何准
备听说考试”（How to Prepare for the Listening and Speaking Test）。请你用英文给你
的交换生Peter写一封邮件，邀请他参加，告诉他具体的时间和地点，并建议他做一些
准备。
提示词语：discuss，practice，share
提示问题：When and where are you going to hold the sharing meeting？
What do you advise Peter to do?Dear Peter,
I’m writing to invite you to come to our sharing meeting.
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【答案】[例文]
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to invite you to come to our sharing meeting.
It will be held from 4:00 p.m. to 6:00 p.m. next Monday in a dining hall in our school.
On the topic How to Prepare for the Listening and Speaking Test, we are going to discuss the
preparation for listening and speaking test and how to practice listening and speaking.
If you would like to come, you can take a notebook to take notes. And you can also share
your own opinion with us.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为电子邮件写作，要求给交换生Peter写一封邮件，邀请他
参加一场交流分享会。根据所给提示问题，展开文章的思路，学生可自行发挥，所述
内容符合逻辑即可。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一、二人称，时态应用一般现在时或一般将来时。文
章按照问题提示展开即可，学生有很大的发挥空间，但要做到思路清晰、层次分明，
不要出现单词拼写及语法时态等方面的错误。
22．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友John来信表示他对中国的剪纸 ( paper cutting)
很感兴趣。请你用英文回复一封邮件向他介绍剪纸。
要点:
1. 剪纸是中国传统技艺之一，受到人们的喜爱；2. 剪纸有各种形状，如动物花和汉字 (character) 等；
3. 剪纸通常被贴在窗户门或者墙上，因为人们认为它能带来幸福和好运。
要求：
1. 必须包括所有内容要点，可适当增加细节；
2. 词数：80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese paper cutting.
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I truly hope this e-mail will help you understand more about Chinese paper cutting.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Dear John,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese paper cutting.
I love paper cutting, too. Paper cutting is a kind of traditional Chinese art. It has a very
long history. And it’s popular among Chinese people. Paper cutting can be made in different
shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings. Many
people put paper cutting on their front doors, the windows and walls of their houses. People
often decorate their homes with paper cutting because they think paper cutting can bring them
happiness and good luck.
I truly hope this e-mail will help you understand more about Chinese paper cutting.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是电子邮件写作，根据给出材料介绍中国的剪纸技艺，
开头结尾已给出，正文可以用一段介绍。
2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称和第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时。介绍时可多
应用复合句，注意人称和数的变化，保证内容完整，上下文连贯，单词拼写正确。23．假如你是Jim，正在美国学习。你的中国朋友Li Ping在学习英语过程中遇到
了一些困难，向你求助，请你给他写一封电子邮件，介绍一些你学英语的方法，并鼓
励他一定要动脑学，别放弃。
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【答案】Dear Li Ping,
I’m glad to help you. Here is my advice on learning English.
To improve your listening, I think you should do more listening exercise. You can learn
new words and sentences by listening to tapes or watching English movies. As for grammar,
you can try to improve it by reading. You’d better take notes when you read textbooks,
English stories, magazines and newspapers. I think that will help you a lot. And don’t be
afraid to speak English. You should do more speaking practice. It’s a good idea to join an
English club. Remember that the best way to learn English is to use it.
I suggest that you should learn English wisely instead of memorizing words only. Please
try it and don’t give up. I hope my advice will help you.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，按照邮件的格式书写。写作分为三段
式，第一段表达很高兴能够帮助你，第二段具体介绍英语学习的方法，最后一段对他
进行鼓励并希望他取得进步。
2.写作指导：本文使用一般现在时，针对英语学习方面的建议进行叙述。通过听力、
语法以及说英语方面进行详细地阐述。切记不要遗漏要点，可以适当增加情节使行文
连贯。
24．假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所
造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看
法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。要求：
（1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game…
【答案】Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's
not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too
hard on yourself.
You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters
is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think
about how you can do better next time.
As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit
down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to
better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】这是一篇给材料的书信作文。假如你是李华，就输球事件安慰Henry，谈谈
你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。人称为第二人称，时态以一般
现在时为主。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给
的信息，但不要逐句翻译，补充两条个人的观点并提出建议。注意表达的条理性，用
好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。高分句型
一：What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. 重要的
是你应该从比赛中吸取教训，也要从错误中吸取教训。What matters is that重要的是，
that引导的是表语从句。as well as常用来连接两个并列的成分，作“也，还”讲。高
分句型二：And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. 你可
以保证你会不遗余力地提高你的技能。that引导的是宾语从句，spare no efforts to do
sth.不遗余力做某事。高分句型三：If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the nextone. 如果大家齐心协力，你们一定会赢得下一场比赛。此句是if引导的条件状语从句；
be sure to do sth. 必定做某事。
25．假定你是李华，校摄影社团（Photography Club）负责人。社团计划近期举办
一期“外国人眼中的美丽深圳”摄影展。请你写一封email，邀请外教Jeff参加。
内容如下：
（1）举办摄影展的目的；
（2）作品要求与截止时间；
（3）你的愿望。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jeff,
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【答案】例文
Dear Jeff,
I am Li Hua, who is in charge of the school Photography Club. In order to let us find
more beauty about our Shenzhen, especially in the eyes of foreigners, our club plans to hold a
show recently.
The theme of the show is the Beauty of Shenzhen in the eyes of foreigners. We hope the
exhibition will offer everyone of us a chance to use cameras to describe the beauty of our
Shenzhen. We will be happy to see photos of different images, which have left a deep
impression on you and make you appreciate life in Shenzhen more. Besides, your photo
should be named. Most importantly, all the works must be original. Please hand in your worksin the office of Photography Club before this Friday or you can send your photos to
photoshow@gmschool.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。邀请外教Jeff参加“外国人眼中的美丽
深圳”摄影展，包括举办摄影展的目的，作品要求与截止时间以及自己的愿望。具体
的内容要包含所给的提示。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。第一段介
绍举办此次摄影展的目的；第二段介绍此次摄影展的主题，作品要求与截止时间以及
自己的愿望；最后一段表达自己希望收到对方的来信。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到
无语法和标点错误。
六、讲稿
26．近段时间，某中学不少学生因感冒不能正常上课，影响了学习。为此，学生
会主席李华准备利用English Broadcast时间建议学生养成良好的生活习惯和加强体育
锻炼，以提高身体素质。请你根据下表提示，为他准备一份英语，发言稿。
现
因感冒不能上课，影响了学习
象
健康饮食……
生活习惯
保证睡眠……
建
议
加强锻炼 参加体育活动……
其他 ……
期
……
望
参考词汇： affect vt. 影响
要求：
（1）短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）词数：80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Boys and girls,Welcome to our English Broadcast! I’m Li Hua, the chairman ofStudents’ Union.
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That’s all! Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
Boys and girls,
Welcome to our English Broadcast! I’m Li Hua, the chairman of Students’ Union.
Recently quite a few students in our school couldn’t have lessons as usual because they had a
cold. This affected their studies. In order to make you stronger, I’ll give you some useful
advice.
Firstly, it’s important to have a healthy eating habit. You should eat more vegetables and
fruit but less junk food. Secondly, you’d better sleep well. Don’t stay up late. Besides, do
exercise every day. You can take a walk or run. Lastly, a good attitude towards life is also
good for your health.
I’m looking forward to seeing you happier and healthier! That’s all! Thanks for your
listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。根据表格提示要点，写一篇关于学生养成
良好的生活习惯和加强体育锻炼的建议，以提高身体素质的作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第二人称为主。写作时可分为三段，
第一段承接开头，点明主题；第二段介绍具体的建议；第三段表示感谢。写作时可适
当使用过渡词使文章通顺，另外确保作文逻辑清晰，无单词拼写和语法错误。
27．假如你是李华，是一名学生。为大力推进生态文明建设，你所在的城市正开
展以“绿色生活，美丽家园”为主题的宣传月活动。请你根据以下提示以“共建美丽家园”为主题，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁大家爱护环境、保护生态，建设美丽家园。
1.要点：
主题 Build green and beautiful hometown together
绿色出行，避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染；
具体做法 不乱扔垃圾，让家园变得干净舒适；
植树造林，美化家园，保护环境。
你的建议 ……
2.要求：文章必须包含所给的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不要出现所在学校的名称和师生姓名；
4.词数100左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：垃圾箱dustbin；交通拥堵 traffic jams
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua, a student from No.1 High School. Today I’d like to share my opinions on
“Build green and beautiful hometown together”.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua, a student from No.1 High School. Today I’d like to share my opinions on
“Build green and beautiful hometown together”.
As middle school students, it’s our duty to help build a green and beautiful hometown.
First, we can ride bikes or walk to school if it’s not far away from our homes. The more
people choose the public transportation, the fewer traffic jams there will be and the cleaner
the air will be. Second, we mustn’t throw rubbish here and there. We must throw them into
the dustbin. If so, our hometown will be clean and tidy. We will feel more comforable, too.
Third, plant more trees. Trees are important to the environment. They can make the air much
fresher.We should do everything we can to protect the environment.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。根据表格要点提示，以“共建美丽家园”
为主题写一篇作文呼吁大家爱护环境、保护生态，建设美丽家园。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用以一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。写作时除了包含具
体的做法，还需要把自己的建议表达出来。文章行文要做到语句通顺，无单词语法错
误。
28．有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校English
Coner 将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发
言稿，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考词汇：anger n.[U] 愤怒
1.有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果）
2.你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……）
3. ……
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better?
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【答案】例文
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better? Here is my
experience.
Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it so much that I wascareful every time I carried it. But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without
telling me. When I found it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom
helped me when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship between us. So I
controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told him that he should tell me if
he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, our relationship became stronger.
From this experience, when we are angry, we should calm ourselves down and learn to
reflect. The most important is to communicate with others on time so that we can solve the
problems better.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”为题，结合
自己的经历讲述通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决一件小事，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。
第一段引入话题；第二段讲述自己有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事；第三段描
述自己的感悟。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单
词拼写和语法错误。
29．假如你是李华，即将参加你们班主办的“I love you, my dear teachers”英语主题演
讲活动，请你写篇演讲稿，内容要点如下：
1. 因为关爱，改变了很多坏习惯；
2. 上课生动有趣，成绩提升了很多：
3. 作业不多，选做自己感兴趣的作业：
4. 重视劳动教育和体育锻炼：
5. 补充一到两点个人想法。
注意：
1. 文中不能透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数60-80；
3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4. 开头和已给出，不计入总数。
参考词汇：lively adj. 生动 give importance to重视 labor education劳动教育
I Love You, My Dear Teachers
How time flies! Three years has passed. On this special day, I want to say “I love you, dear
teachers!” _______
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Thank you, my dear teachers and I love you from the bottom of my heart.
【答案】例文：
I Love You, My Dear Teachers
How time flies! Three years has passed. On this special day, I want to say “I love you,
dear teachers!”
First, I have given up many bad habits because of your love and concern. Second, the
classes are so interesting, lively and funny that I have improved a lot and got better grades
than before. Third, there are not much homework, and there are a few optional work. I can
choose which I’m interested in. Fourth, teachers pay special attention to and give importance
to labor education and exercise, so we have a healthy body and mind. Last but not the least,
teachers are always there and are ready to help me when I’m in trouble.
Thank you, my dear teachers and I love you from the bottom of my heart.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据
题目要求讲述因为老师的帮助和关爱，自身发生的变化。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和现在完成时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称
为主，讲述老师对自己的帮助以及自己的变化，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
30．生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The
Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母
亲、老师、 朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】例文
The Person I Want to Thank
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the
person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps
me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties
and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam
and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With
her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful for
all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for
my future development.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想
感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外
表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语
句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。
