重庆市2025-2026学年高三上期五校十月联考
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文。
The Fall and Rise of a Star
I was certain that every student in my high school drama class noticed the
paper shaking in my hands as I stood up to try out for the lead role in the play. I
wasn't there by choice, but rather because the teacher insisted that each of us
have a try for a part.
As a "model"student, I went along with the request, even though it filled me
with fear. I was small for my age, wore secondhand clothes, and cried easily. I
desperately wished to remain in my seat and disappear into the background.
However, there I was standing on stage. Reading lines , at least, was
(动名词短语做主语)
something I adored. So. I began to read.
Within moments, the fear was gone. I was reading the part for the main
character, “Star," who possessed an optimistic view on life despite being an orphan.
I wasn't an orphan myself, but I felt like one . My father had left us, and my
(伏笔)
mother worked during the day, attended school at night, and spent her
weekends buried in homework . It was easy for me to believe that
(过去分词做主语补语)
Star's words were also my own.
I finished reading and quickly returned to my seat. When the teacher announced
the cast list and called my name, I was lost in my thoughts.
“Patty," she repeated,“you are Star. Come and collect your lines.”
This cannot be! How is it possible ? With a racing heart, I approached the
teacher to get the pages.
I practiced every day-while walking to school, during lunch breaks, before
bedtime, and even on weekends. Initially, I was worried about forgetting my lines,
but I managed to learn them by heart. My confidence was gradually growing.
Then came the rehearsals . It was during this phase that I began to
(完全倒装句)
doubt my confidence once again.I was too nervous to act. I frequently forgot my
lines. Then after several failures , I finally reached my breaking point. I ran out
towards the stairs and started to cry , “I can't do it!”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: Suddenly, I felt several gentle hands on my arms.
Paragraph 2:The day finally arrived and the performance received a warm response.重庆市2025-2026学年高三上期五校十月联考
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
The Fall and Rise of a Star
I was certain that every student in my high school drama. class noticed the paper
shaking in my hands as I stood up to try out for the lead role in the play, I wasn't there
by choice, but rather because the teacher insisted that each of us have a try for a part
As a “"model"student, I went along with the request, even though it filled me
with fear. I was small for my age wore secondhand clothes, and cried easily. I
desperately wished to remain in my seat and disappear into the background. However,
there I was standing, on stage. Reading lines, at least, was something I adored. So. I
began to read.
Within moments, the fear was gone. I was reading the part for the main character,
“Star," who possessed an optimistic view on life despite being an orphan. I wasn't an
orphan myself, but I felt like one.My father had left us, and my mother worked during
the day, attended school at night, and spent her weekends buried in homework, It was
easy for me to believe that Star's words were also my own.
I finished reading and quickly returned to my seat. When the teacher announced
the cast list(演员名单) and called my name,I was lost in my thoughts.
“Patty," she repeated,“you are Star, Come and collect your lines(台词).”
This cannot be! How is it possible ? With a racing heart, I approached the teacher
to get the pages
I practiced every day-while walking to school, during lunch breaks, before
bedtime, and even on weekends Initially, I was worried about forgetting my lines, but
I managed to learn them by heart. My confidence was gradually growing.
Then came the rehearsals(排练). It was during this phase that I began to doubt my
confidence once again.I was too nervous to act, I frequently forgot my lines. Then
after several failures , I finally reached my breaking point I ran out towards the stairs
and started to cry , . I can't do it!”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, I felt several gentle hands on my arms.Paragraph 2:The day finally arrived and the performance received a warm
response.一、文章类型与续写思路分析
文章类型：个人成长型叙事（成长-挫折-突破模式）
续写构思框架：
构思要素 具体内容
情节布局 第一段：获得帮助→重拾信心；第二段：演出成功→个人成长
情感线索 自卑恐惧→获得支持→克服困难→建立自信
主题升华 从逃避到面对，从孤立到融入，发现自我价值
续写实施要点：
承接崩溃情绪，通过他人帮助实现情感转折
展现排练过程中的突破与进步
描写演出时的心理变化和成功体验
结尾体现人物成长和主题升华
二、故事山模式分析
开端：被迫参加试镜 → 发展：意外获得主角 → 转折：排练受挫崩溃 → 高
潮：获得帮助克服困难 → 结局：演出成功成长
三、续写衔接要素分析
原文关键要素提取表
分析
内容 原文反应句
角度
人物 自卑、敏感但热爱阅读 "I was small for my age wore secondhand
刻画 的学生 clothes, and cried easily."分析
内容 原文反应句
角度
情感 恐惧→投入→惊喜→自 "the fear was gone"; "With a racing heart"; "I
层次 信→挫折→崩溃 began to doubt my confidence"
关键
"you are Star"; "I ran out towards the stairs and
情节 试镜成功、排练崩溃
started to cry"
点
语言 第一人称内心独白，情
"I desperately wished to remain in my seat"
特色 感细腻
关键
star, lines, practice,
词分 "Star", "lines", "confidence", "doubt"
confidence, doubt
析
心理
强烈的自我怀疑和恐惧 "This cannot be! How is it possible?"
描写
动作 颤抖、逃跑、哭泣等体 "paper shaking in my hands"; "ran out towards
描写 现紧张 the stairs"
环境 舞台、座位、楼梯等场
"standing on stage"; "returned to my seat"
描写 景转换
隐含 克服恐惧、发现自我、
通过Star的角色实现自我认同
主题 成长蜕变
情感 从阅读时的投入到现实 "Initially...confidence was growing" → "began
转折 的挫折 to doubt"
空间
座位→舞台→楼梯 体现心理距离的变化
转换分析
内容 原文反应句
角度
时间 试镜→日常练习→排练
展现过程性
过渡 阶段
伏笔与冲突分析
伏笔处：
"Reading lines, at least, was something I adored" - 为后续克服困难埋下伏笔
"I felt like an orphan" - 与角色Star产生情感共鸣的基础
"confidence was gradually growing" - 为后面的挫折做铺垫
冲突点：
内在冲突：渴望消失与必须站上舞台的矛盾
技能冲突：会背台词但不会表演的现实差距
心理冲突：建立信心后又失去信心的波动
隐含线索：
与Star角色的身份认同和情感连接
从阅读热爱到表演困难的转变
孤立感到融入感的成长轨迹
解决方案方向：
通过他人帮助重拾信心，将阅读的热爱转化为表演的感染力，实现从"念台
词"到"成为角色"的蜕变。
四、续写注意事项
承接原文事项：
必须延续第一人称叙事视角保持情感描写的细腻性
衔接崩溃场景的自然过渡
体现Star角色与个人成长的呼应
整体注意事项：
情感发展要真实合理
成长转变要有过程性
结尾要点明主题但不说教
语言风格要与原文一致
巧妙设计建议：
让帮助者的话语与Star的台词产生呼应
在演出成功时体现主角与角色的融合
通过细节展现从技术熟练到情感投入的转变
结尾可暗示这种经历对未来的影响
3. 动作、环境、心理与高级词汇
动作描写
A gentle hand rested on my trembling shoulder.
（一只温柔的手放在我颤抖的肩上。）
She wiped my tears away with her thumb.
（她用拇指擦去了我的眼泪。）
I drew a shaky breath, trying to compose myself.
（我颤抖着吸了一口气，试图让自己镇定下来。）
He offered me a reassuring smile.
（他向我投来一个令人安心的微笑。）
I squared my shoulders and walked back onto the stage.
（我挺直肩膀，走回了舞台。）
My eyes scanned the silent, expectant audience.
（我的眼睛扫过寂静而充满期待的观众。）The spotlight followed my every move.
（聚光灯追随着我的每一个动作。）
I delivered the lines with a conviction I never knew I had.
（我用一种自己从未意识到的坚定念出了台词。）
A wave of relief washed over me as I heard the applause.
（听到掌声，一股宽慰的感觉席卷了我。）
I took a deep bow, my heart swelling with pride.
（我深深鞠了一躬，心中充满了自豪。）
心理描写
A glimmer of hope ignited within my despair.
（一丝希望的微光在我绝望的内心点燃。）
All my fears and doubts came crashing down on me.
（我所有的恐惧和怀疑都向我压来。）
I fought back the rising panic.
（我努力压制住不断上升的恐慌。）
A strange sense of calm descended upon me.
（一种奇怪的平静感降临到我身上。）
For a moment, I was no longer myself; I was Star.
（在那一刻，我不再是我自己；我成了Star。）
The words flowed out of me naturally, as if they were my own.
（台词自然地从我口中流出，仿佛它们就是我自己的话。）
I felt a surge of confidence coursing through my veins.
（我感到一股自信的激流在血管中奔腾。）
The weight of anxiety finally lifted from my chest.
（焦虑的重负终于从我胸口消散。）
I was fully immersed in the moment.
（我完全沉浸在了那一刻。）
A profound sense of accomplishment filled my heart.
（一种深刻的成就感充满了我的心。）环境描写
The backstage was dimly lit and hushed.
（后台灯光昏暗，一片寂静。）
The heavy velvet curtain muffled the sounds from the auditorium.
（厚重的天鹅绒幕布隔绝了礼堂传来的声音。）
The empty chairs in the rehearsal room stared back at me.
（排练室里空着的椅子仿佛在盯着我。）
The stage was bathed in a warm, golden light.
（舞台沐浴在温暖的金色灯光中。）
A hush fell over the crowd as the play began.
（戏剧开始，人群瞬间安静下来。）
The auditorium was packed to capacity.
（礼堂座无虚席。）
The silence in the room was deafening.
（房间里的寂静震耳欲聋。）
The familiar scent of dust and old wood filled the backstage.
（后台弥漫着熟悉的灰尘和老木头的味道。）
The cold, hard steps of the staircase felt real beneath me.
（我身下楼梯冰冷坚硬的台阶感觉如此真实。）
The spotlight created a solitary island on the vast stage.
（聚光灯在广阔的舞台上创造了一个孤岛。）
常见单词高级替换词（分类总结）
场景 基础词汇 高级替换词 (词性) 场景释义
情感类 sad melancholy (adj./n.) 忧郁的，愁思
happy elated (adj.) 兴高采烈的
afraid trepidation (n.) 恐惧，不安
行动类 try endeavor (v./n.) 努力，尽力场景 基础词汇 高级替换词 (词性) 场景释义
help bolster (v.) 支持，鼓励
程度类 very profoundly (adv.) 深刻地，极度地
enough sufficient (adj.) 足够的
4. 搭配、词法与语料积累
地道搭配与词法解析
The paper shaking in my hands: Object + V-ing 结构，生动地描绘了“纸在手中
颤抖”的画面，比 I shook the paper 更富表现力。
...filled me with fear: fill sb. with sth.（使某人充满某种情绪）是一个极其地道的
情绪表达。
...buried in homework: be buried in 形象地表达了“埋头于，沉浸于”的状态，
比 busy with 更生动。
...lost in my thoughts: be lost in 传神地表达了“陷入沉思，走神”的意思。
With a racing heart: with + a + adj. + n. 的独立主格结构，作伴随状语，简洁地
描述了主语的状态。
...learn them by heart: learn...by heart（熟记，背诵）是固定搭配。
...reached my breaking point: reach one's breaking point（达到崩溃的临界点）是
非常地道的表达。
可积累的语料与生词短语
1. desperate /ˈdespərət/
词性: adj.
词意: 绝望的；极度渴望的；危急的
近义词: despairing, frantic, hopeless反义词: hopeful, content, composed
例句:
I was desperate to remain in my seat and disappear into the background. （我极度
渴望留在座位上，消失在背景中。）
He made a desperate attempt to save the company. （他做了一次孤注一掷的尝试
来挽救公司。）
2. possess /pəˈzes/
词性: v.
词意: 拥有；具有（某种品质）
近义词: own, have, hold
反义词: lack, want
例句:
Star possessed an optimistic view on life. （Star拥有乐观的人生观。）
She possesses great confidence and determination. （她拥有巨大的信心和决
心。）
3. approach /əˈprəʊtʃ/
词性: v. & n.
词意: v. 接近；接洽；着手处理 n. 方法；途径
近义词: (v.) near, come close; (n.) method, tactic
反义词: (v.) leave, withdraw
例句:
I approached the teacher to get the pages. （我走近老师去拿台词页。）
We need a new approach to solving this problem. （我们需要一种新的方法来解
决这个问题。）
4. initially /ɪˈnɪʃəli/
词性: adv.
词意: 最初，开始近义词: at first, originally, firstly
反义词: finally, eventually, in the end
例句:
Initially, I was worried about forgetting my lines. （最初，我担心会忘记台词。）
Initially, the plan worked well. （起初，计划进行得很顺利。）
5. response /rɪˈspɒns/
词性: n.
词意: 反应；响应；回答
近义词: reaction, reply, feedback
反义词: query, question, request
例句:
The performance received a warm response. （演出获得了热烈的反响。）
She made no response to my question. （她没有回答我的问题。）5. Possible Versions(4)
Version1
Paragraph 1
Suddenly, I felt several gentle hands on my arms. I looked up through my tears
and saw my classmates gathering around me. Their eyes were filled not with pity,
but with encouragement. One of them whispered softly, “You’ve practiced the
hardest. We believe in you.” Their words, like a warm current, flowed through my
heart . Taking a deep breath , I wiped my tears and forced a
(无灵主语句) (现在分词做伴随动作)
smile. If Star could stay strong through darkness, why couldn’t I? I realized that
fear was part of performing, but surrendering to it wasn’t a choice.
(现在分词短语做主语)
Returning to the stage , I practiced again and again, each rehearsal
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
bringing me closer to confidence . Though my voice still trembled, my heart
(独立主格)
grew steadier. By the final rehearsal, I no longer feared forgetting lines—I feared
not giving my best. I knew I was ready for the real performance.
Paragraph 2
The day finally arrived and the performance received a warm response. As the
curtain rose, the bright lights blinded me for a second, but soon the stage felt like
home. Every word I spoke echoed with emotion every movement was
(无灵主语句);
alive. When the final scene ended, the audience broke into thunderous applause.
Tears welled up again, but this time they were tears of pride. I saw my teacher
smiling from the side, her eyes saying , “I knew you could.” It struck me that
(独立主格)
success wasn’t about perfection—it was about courage to stand up again after
failure. As the curtain fell, I realized something deeper: It wasn’t only Star who
had risen tonight—it was me.
亮点与语言分析
分类 表达亮点
心理 “Their words, like a warm current, flowed through my heart.” / “fear was part of
描写 performing, but surrendering to it was a choice.”分类 表达亮点
动作 “wiped my tears and forced a smile” / “took a deep breath” / “returned to the
描写 stage”
强调句“It wasn’t only Star who had risen tonight—it was me.” / 非谓语结构
语法
“Taking a deep breath, I wiped my tears…” / 虚拟语气“If Star could…,
亮点
why couldn’t I?”
地道 take a deep breath / break into applause / flow through one’s heart / fear doing
搭配 sth / be ready for
Version 2
Paragraph 1
Suddenly, I felt several gentle hands on my arms. Warmth replaced the cold
emptiness inside me . My teacher stood nearby, giving me a silent nod of
(无灵主语句)
support , while my classmates whispered words of comfort . At that
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
moment, I realized I wasn’t alone on this journey. Gathering my courage
(现在分词短语做伴
, I whispered to myself, “Star never gives up.” I picked up the script again, my
随动作)
fingers still trembling, but determination burning in my eyes . Each line I
(独立主格)
spoke from then on carried a piece of my heart . Late into the night, I
(无灵主语句)
practiced under the dim lamp, imagining the applause that awaited. I
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
was no longer running away from fear—I was dancing with it. By the final
rehearsal, I had transformed my fear into strength.
Paragraph 2
The day finally arrived and the performance received a warm response. As the
spotlight lit up my face, I felt calm, not scared. The theater fell silent as I spoke the
opening line. Time seemed to slow down; every word flowed naturally .
(无灵主语句)
When the play ended, a wave of applause filled the hall. My hands shook again,
but this time from excitement. Tears blurred my vision as I bowed deeply with
my classmates . I wasn’t just acting—I was living Star’s story. Looking back
(现在分
, I knew the real stage was not the one in front of me, but the one inside my
词做伴随动作)
heart. From that day on, I believed I could shine in any darkness.亮点与语言分析
分类 表达亮点
心理描 “I was no longer running away from fear—I was dancing with it.” / “Warmth
写 replaced the cold emptiness inside me.”
动作描
“picked up the script again” / “bowed deeply” / “looked back”
写
语法亮 倒装句 “Never had I felt such calmness before.” / 分词作状语
点 “Gathering my courage, I whispered to myself.”
地道搭 stand nearby / give a nod of support / carry a piece of my heart / bow deeply /
配 light up one’s face
Version 3
Paragraph 1
Suddenly, I felt several gentle hands on my arms. My classmates’ voices
surrounded me like a soft melody. “You can do this,” someone said quietly. I
nodded, though my heart still raced wildly. As I stood up, the script trembled in
my grasp , yet something inside urged me not to quit. Hadn’t I promised
(无灵主语句)
myself to be like Star—hopeful and brave? With that thought, I returned to
rehearsal. Each mistake hurt, but each try brought progress. Gradually, the fear
that once chained me began to fade . Under my teacher’s patient eyes, I
(无灵主语句)
rediscovered joy in acting. By the time the final rehearsal ended, my voice no longer
shook—it soared. I was ready to rise like Star.
Paragraph 2
The day finally arrived and the performance received a warm response.
Standing behind the curtain , I whispered my first line again and
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
again. When the music started, I stepped into the light, heart steady . The
(独立主格刻画人物)
audience’s eyes fixed on me, but instead of fear, I felt freedom. Every gesture,
every tone carried my story. When the last word fell, the applause thundered
through the hall. My tears sparkled under the stage lights. In that moment, Iunderstood—the true star wasn’t born from talent, but from courage. As I
bowed, I saw my reflection in the spotlight—small, but shining . I had found
(adj做主语补语)
my light.
亮点与语言分析
分类 表达亮点
心理
“the fear that once chained me began to fade” / “I felt freedom”
描写
动作
“stood up, the script trembled in my grasp” / “stepped into the light” / “bowed”
描写
定语从句 “the fear that once chained me began to fade” / 强调句 “It was
语法
courage that made me a star.” / 非谓语作伴随 “Standing behind the curtain, I
亮点
whispered my first line.”
地道 step into the light / under one’s patient eyes / thunder through the hall /
搭配 rediscover joy in sth / find one’s light
高考续写高级语料库
分类 常用表达 高级替换 / 联想词 例句
情绪 nervous anxious / uneasy / restless She felt restless before the show.
The audience looked thrilled by
excited thrilled / electrified / delighted
the performance.
burst into tears / tears welled
动作 cry Tears welled up as I took a bow.
up / choke with emotion
beam / flash a smile / break She beamed with pride after the
smile
into a smile show.
rehearse / polish lines / go over He rehearsed until every line
practice
the script sounded natural.
心理 become gain confidence / build up Gradually, she built up the
变化 confident courage / overcome fear courage to face the crowd.
描写 bright lights dazzling spotlight / shining Under the dazzling spotlight, she分类 常用表达 高级替换 / 联想词 例句
舞台 beams felt alive.
象征
star beacon / light / flame / spark She became a spark in the dark.
表达
写作技巧提炼
重点 做法
第一段结尾暗示“准备就绪”，为第二段“表演成功”埋伏
逻辑承接
笔。
由“崩溃—鼓励—觉醒—成长”递进，呼应标题“Fall and
情感主线
Rise”。
心理描写 用隐喻（light, warmth, current）比直接描写更生动。
语法亮点 恰当运用非谓语、倒装、强调句、虚拟语气，体现语言层次。
语言统一 保持第一人称、过去时叙述，风格与原文一致。官方读后续写:
Suddenly, I felt several gentle hands on my arms. Voices enveloped me , and
a warm hand took hold of mine. Through tear-filled eyes, I looked up at
concerned faces. Four of my classmates had followed me ." Please don't quit ," one
of them said firmly ." You can do it . Come on !" All of a sudden , the feeling of
being like an orphan disappeared. My heart was filled with warmth and caring.
Greatly encouraged and deeply moved , I bravely returned to the stage
(过去分词做原因状语)
after drying my tears. The rehearsals eventually went smoothly, setting the stage
for the final performance .
(现在分词短语做结果状语)
The day finally arrived and the performance received a warm response. The
audience erupted in thunderous cheers and the teacher smiled with satisfaction.
(环境描写)
I felt like a bird soaring through the sky.In the following days, more and more
students came to say hello to me; some even said, “You're remarkable!” or “Great
job!” From that day forward, whenever I encountered discouragement, I persevered.
I will never forget that I was once a “fallen star" who managed to rise and shine
through my own efforts, with the caring guidance of an exceptional teacher and the
unexpected support of a few kind classmates.
