独家原创:高中英语“文体写作(素材与运用)”系列5. 描写文写作3(景物描写)

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本节内容包含：写作概述 + 核心词汇（分类别）+ 提分词块（分类别）+ 经典佳句（分类别）+ 优美语段（分类别）+ 素材运用（分类别）

◆写作概述

以景物描写为主的描写文，旨在通过生动、细腻的语言描绘自然或人造环境中的景色，让读者如临其境，感受作者所传达的氛围与情感。

这类描写文具有鲜明的特点。其一，语言富有感染力。作者会运用大量的形容词、副词以及形象的动词，如 “the gentle breeze caresses the leaves（微风轻抚树叶）” ，“caresses” 一词生动展现微风轻柔的状态。其二，视角独特。可能从远及近，如先描绘远处连绵的山脉，再聚焦到山脚下的溪流；也可能从整体到局部，像先呈现一片花海，再细致刻画某一朵盛开的花朵。

在写作时，要点不容忽视。首先，要明确写作目的。是为了抒发对大自然的热爱，如 “Whenever I stand on the seashore, I'm deeply attracted by the vastness of the ocean, which fills me with a sense of awe and love for nature（每当我站在海边，都被大海的浩瀚深深吸引，心中满是对大自然的敬畏与热爱）” ；还是借景抒情，表达内心的孤寂或喜悦等情绪。其次，抓住景物特征。不同季节的景色各有特色，春天繁花似锦，夏天郁郁葱葱，秋天金黄灿烂，冬天银装素裹。比如描写秋天的树林，“The woods in autumn are a riot of colors, with leaves in shades of red, orange, and gold, creating a breathtaking sight（秋天的树林五彩斑斓，树叶呈现出红色、橙色和金色，构成了一幅令人惊叹的画面）” 。

最后，合理运用修辞手法，比喻、拟人、排比等能为文章增色不少，如 “the clouds are like fluffy cotton balls floating in the sky（云朵像蓬松的棉球飘浮在天空）” ，使景物描写更加生动形象。

◆核心词汇

自然元素类

1. mountain（n. 山）

2. valley（n. 山谷）

3. river（n. 河流）

4. stream（n. 小溪）

5. lake（n. 湖泊）

6. ocean（n. 海洋）

7. forest（n. 森林）

8. jungle（n. 丛林）

9. plain（n. 平原）

10. desert（n. 沙漠）

天气状况类

1. sunny（adj. 晴朗的）

2. cloudy（adj. 多云的）

3. rainy（adj. 下雨的）

4. snowy（adj. 下雪的）

5. windy（adj. 有风的）

6. foggy（adj. 有雾的）

7. stormy（adj. 暴风雨的）

8. thunderous（adj. 打雷的）

9. hail（n. 冰雹）

10. drizzle（n. 毛毛雨）

形状与色彩类

1. round（adj. 圆形的）

2. square（adj. 方形的）

3. triangular（adj. 三角形的）

4. rectangular（adj. 长方形的）

5. circular（adj. 环形的）

6. oval（adj. 椭圆形的）

7. blue（adj. 蓝色的）

8. green（adj. 绿色的）

9. red（adj. 红色的）

10. yellow（adj. 黄色的）

11. orange（adj. 橙色的）

12. purple（adj. 紫色的）

13. pink（adj. 粉色的）

14. brown（adj. 棕色的）

15. gray（adj. 灰色的）

16. black（adj. 黑色的）

17. white（adj. 白色的）

动作与状态类

1. flow（v. 流动）

2. wander（v. 漫步；蜿蜒）

3. ripple（v. 起涟漪）

4. sway（v. 摇摆）

5. flutter（v. 飘动；振翅）

6. glisten（v. 闪烁）

7. sparkle（v. 闪耀）

8. shine（v. 照耀）

9. glow（v. 发光；发热）

10. radiate（v. 辐射；散发）

11. linger（v. 徘徊）

12. drift（v. 漂移）

13. float（v. 漂浮）

14. rush（v. 冲；奔）

15. cascade（v. 倾泻）

16. erupt（v. 喷发）

17. settle（v. 沉降；平静）

18. quiver（v. 颤抖）

感受与氛围类

1. peaceful（adj. 宁静的）

2. serene（adj. 安详的）

3. tranquil（adj. 安静的）

4. magnificent（adj. 壮丽的）

5. gorgeous（adj. 华丽的；灿烂的）

6. splendid（adj. 辉煌的；极好的）

7. charming（adj. 迷人的）

8. enchanting（adj. 令人陶醉的）

9. mysterious（adj. 神秘的）

10. solemn（adj. 庄严的）

◆提分词块

自然元素类

1. a towering mountain（一座高耸的山）

2. a deep valley（一个深谷）

3. a meandering river（一条蜿蜒的河流）

4. a babbling stream（一条潺潺的小溪）

5. a crystal-clear lake（一个清澈见底的湖泊）

6. the vast ocean（广阔的海洋）

7. a dense forest（一片茂密的森林）

8. a tropical jungle（一片热带丛林）

9. a vast plain（一片广阔的平原）

10. a barren desert（一片荒芜的沙漠）

天气状况类

1. a sunny day（晴朗的一天）

2. a cloudy sky（多云的天空）

3. a rainy season（雨季）

4. a snowy landscape（雪景）

5. a windy morning（有风的早晨）

6. a foggy night（有雾的夜晚）

7. a stormy weather（暴风雨天气）

8. a thunderous night（雷雨交加的夜晚）

9. hail stones（冰雹）

a light drizzle（一场毛毛雨）

形状与色彩类

1. round-shaped objects（圆形物体）

2. square-shaped buildings（方形建筑）

3. triangular-shaped sails（三角形的船帆）

4. rectangular-shaped fields（长方形的田地）

5. circular-shaped ponds（圆形的池塘）

6. oval-shaped leaves（椭圆形的叶子）

7. bright blue eyes（明亮的蓝眼睛，可用于形容天空、湖水等）

8. dark green forests（深绿色的森林）

9. deep red roses（深红色的玫瑰）

10. pale yellow flowers（淡黄色的花朵）

11. bright orange sunsets（明亮的橙色日落）

12. violet-colored clouds（紫色的云彩）

13. light pink petals（淡粉色的花瓣）

14. dark brown soil（深棕色的土壤）

15. gray-colored rocks（灰色的岩石）

16. black-colored nights（漆黑的夜晚）

17. pure white snow（洁白的雪）

动作与状态类

1. flow gently（缓缓流动）

2. wander through the woods（在树林中漫步）

3. ripple on the surface（在表面泛起涟漪）

4. sway in the wind（在风中摇摆）

5. flutter in the breeze（在微风中飘动）

6. glisten in the sun（在阳光下闪烁）

7. sparkle brightly（明亮地闪耀）

8. shine down on the earth（照耀大地）

9. glow with warmth（散发着温暖的光芒）

10. radiate heat（散发热量）

11. linger in the air（在空中徘徊）

12. drift along the river（顺流漂移）

13. float on the water（在水面上漂浮）

14. rush down the hill（冲下山坡）

15. cascade down the cliff（从悬崖上倾泻而下）

16. erupt violently（猛烈喷发）

17. settle down quietly（安静地沉降）

18. quiver with cold（冷得颤抖）

感受与氛围类

1. a peaceful environment（宁静的环境）

2. a serene atmosphere（安详的氛围）

3. a tranquil setting（安静的场景）

4. a magnificent view（壮丽的景色）

5. a gorgeous sight（华丽的景象）

6. a splendid landscape（辉煌的风景）

7. a charming village（迷人的村庄）

8. an enchanting garden（令人陶醉的花园）

9. a mysterious forest（神秘的森林）

10. a solemn temple（庄严的寺庙）

◆经典佳句

自然元素类

1. Standing at the foot of the towering mountain, I was deeply impressed by its grandeur.（站在高耸的山脚下，我被它的雄伟深深震撼。）

2. The deep valley, surrounded by steep cliffs, is a place full of mystery.（被陡峭悬崖环绕的深谷是个充满神秘的地方。）

3. A meandering river runs through the small town, adding a touch of tranquility to it.（一条蜿蜒的河流穿过小镇，为其增添了一丝宁静。）

4. The babbling stream, with clear water flowing over the pebbles, creates a soothing sound.（潺潺的小溪，清澈的水流过鹅卵石，发出悦耳的声音。）

5. In the middle of the forest lies a crystal - clear lake, like a mirror reflecting the surrounding scenery.（森林中央有一个清澈见底的湖泊，像一面镜子倒映着周围的景色。）

6. The vast ocean stretches as far as the eye can see, making me feel small and insignificant.（广阔的海洋一望无际，让我觉得自己渺小而微不足道。）

7. A dense forest provides a habitat for a variety of wild animals.（茂密的森林为各种野生动物提供了栖息地。）

8. The tropical jungle is teeming with exotic plants and colorful birds.（热带丛林里充满了奇异的植物和色彩斑斓的鸟类。）

9. The vast plain is covered with golden wheat in autumn, forming a beautiful picture.（秋天，广阔的平原上覆盖着金黄的小麦，构成了一幅美丽的画面。）

10. Traveling through the barren desert, we could hardly see any signs of life.（穿越荒芜的沙漠时，我们几乎看不到任何生命迹象。）

天气状况类

1. On a sunny day, the sky is as blue as a sapphire.（在晴朗的日子里，天空像蓝宝石一样湛蓝。）

2. A cloudy sky often makes people feel a bit gloomy.（多云的天空常常让人感觉有点忧郁。）

3. During the rainy season, the rain pours down continuously, making the air fresh.（雨季时，雨不停地下着，使空气清新。）

4. A snowy landscape transforms the world into a white wonderland.（雪景把世界变成了一个白色的仙境。）

5. One windy morning, the wind blew so hard that it almost blew my hat off.（一个有风的早晨，风刮得很大，差点把我的帽子吹掉了。）

6. In a foggy night, everything around seems to be veiled in a mysterious mist.（在有雾的夜晚，周围的一切似乎都笼罩在神秘的雾气中。）

7. When a stormy weather comes, the wind howls and the rain lashes the windows.（暴风雨天气来临时，狂风呼啸，雨点拍打着窗户。）

8. On a thunderous night, the thunder rumbles and the lightning flashes across the sky.（在雷雨交加的夜晚，雷声轰鸣，闪电划过天空。）

9. Hail stones, like small balls of ice, fell from the sky during the sudden storm.（突如其来的暴风雨中，冰雹像小冰球一样从天而降。）

10. A light drizzle is falling, creating a romantic and dreamy atmosphere.（一场毛毛雨在下着，营造出一种浪漫而梦幻的氛围。）

形状与色彩类

1. The round - shaped moon hung high in the sky, shining brightly.（圆形的月亮高高挂在天空，明亮地照耀着。）

2. The square - shaped buildings in the city center look very modern.（市中心的方形建筑看起来非常现代。）

3. The triangular - shaped sails of the boats are billowing in the wind.（船的三角形船帆在风中鼓起。）

4. The rectangular - shaped fields are neatly arranged, waiting for the harvest.（长方形的田地排列整齐，等待着收获。）

5. The circular - shaped pond is filled with colorful lotuses in summer.（夏天，圆形的池塘里开满了五颜六色的荷花。）

6. The oval - shaped leaves of the plant are unique and eye - catching.（这种植物椭圆形的叶子独特而引人注目。）

7. The bright blue sky is dotted with white clouds, like a beautiful painting.（明亮的蓝天点缀着白云，像一幅美丽的画。）

8. The dark green forests in summer are a great place to escape the heat.（夏天深绿色的森林是避暑的好地方。）

9. The deep red roses in the garden are in full bloom, giving off a sweet fragrance.（花园里深红色的玫瑰盛开着，散发出甜蜜的芬芳。）

10. The pale yellow flowers along the path add a touch of warmth to the scenery.（小径旁淡黄色的花朵为景色增添了一丝温暖。）

11. The bright orange sunset painted the sky with beautiful colors.（明亮的橙色日落把天空染成了美丽的色彩。）

12. The violet - colored clouds in the evening sky are a rare sight.（傍晚天空中紫色的云彩是罕见的景象。）

13. The light pink petals of the cherry blossoms are so delicate and beautiful.（樱花淡粉色的花瓣是如此娇嫩美丽。）

14. The dark brown soil is rich in nutrients, suitable for growing various crops.（深棕色的土壤富含养分，适合种植各种农作物。）

15. The gray - colored rocks on the mountain seem to tell the story of the past.（山上灰色的岩石似乎在讲述着过去的故事。）

16. The black - colored night is full of stars, twinkling like diamonds.（漆黑的夜晚布满了星星，像钻石一样闪烁。）

17. The pure white snow on the ground makes everything look so clean and peaceful.（地上洁白的雪让一切看起来如此干净和平静。）

动作与状态类

1. The river flows gently, carrying the fallen leaves along.（河水缓缓流淌，带着落叶一起前行。）

2. We wandered through the woods, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.（我们在树林中漫步，享受着新鲜的空气和美丽的景色。）

3. The surface of the lake ripples when a gentle breeze blows.（微风吹过时，湖面泛起涟漪。）

4. The trees sway in the wind, as if they are dancing to the rhythm of nature.（树木在风中摇摆，仿佛在随着大自然的节奏跳舞。）

5. The flags flutter in the breeze, adding a lively atmosphere to the place.（旗帜在微风中飘动，为这个地方增添了活泼的气氛。）

6. The dewdrops on the grass glisten in the sun, like little diamonds.（草上的露珠在阳光下闪烁，像小钻石一样。）

7. The stars in the sky sparkle brightly, lighting up the dark night.（天空中的星星明亮地闪耀着，照亮了黑夜。）

8. The sun shines down on the earth, bringing warmth and energy.（太阳照耀着大地，带来温暖和能量。）

9. The fireplace glows with warmth, making the room cozy.（壁炉散发着温暖的光芒，使房间很舒适。）

10. The radiator radiates heat, keeping the room warm in winter.（暖气片散发热量，在冬天使房间保持温暖。）

11. The fragrance of the flowers lingers in the air, making people feel relaxed.（花香在空中徘徊，让人感到放松。）

12. The raft drifts along the river, allowing us to enjoy the scenery leisurely.（木筏顺流漂移，让我们可以悠闲地欣赏风景。）

13. The leaves float on the water, like small boats.（树叶漂浮在水面上，像小船一样。）

14. The children rush down the hill, laughing and shouting.（孩子们冲下山坡，笑着喊着。）

15. The waterfall cascades down the cliff, making a deafening sound.（瀑布从悬崖上倾泻而下，发出震耳欲聋的声音。）

16. The volcano erupts violently, spewing out lava and ash.（火山猛烈喷发，喷出岩浆和火山灰。）

17. The dust settles down quietly after the wind stops.（风停后，灰尘安静地沉降下来。）

18. The little girl quivers with cold in the freezing weather.（在寒冷的天气里，小女孩冷得颤抖。）

感受与氛围类

1. The peaceful environment by the lake makes me forget all my troubles.（湖边宁静的环境让我忘记了所有的烦恼。）

2. The serene atmosphere in the ancient temple makes people feel a sense of peace.（古寺里安详的氛围让人感到一种宁静。）

3. The tranquil setting of the countryside is a perfect place to unwind.（乡村安静的场景是放松身心的理想之地。）

4. Standing on the top of the mountain, I was amazed by the magnificent view.（站在山顶，我被壮丽的景色惊呆了。）

5. The gorgeous sight of the sunset over the ocean is unforgettable.（海上日落的华丽景象令人难忘。）

6. The splendid landscape of the national park attracts thousands of tourists every year.（国家公园辉煌的风景每年吸引成千上万的游客。）

7. The charming village, with its old - fashioned houses and friendly people, left a deep impression on me.（迷人的村庄，有着老式的房屋和友好的村民，给我留下了深刻的印象。）

8. The enchanting garden, filled with various flowers and sweet - singing birds, is like a fairyland.（令人陶醉的花园，满是各种花朵和婉转歌唱的鸟儿，像一个仙境。）

9. The mysterious forest, with its thick trees and strange sounds, makes people a little scared.（神秘的森林，树木茂密，还有奇怪的声音，让人有点害怕。）

10. The solemn temple, with its magnificent architecture and religious atmosphere, makes people feel respectful.（庄严的寺庙，有着宏伟的建筑和宗教氛围，让人感到崇敬。）

11. The romantic atmosphere created by the candlelight and soft music made the evening unforgettable.（烛光和轻柔音乐营造出的浪漫氛围让这个夜晚令人难忘。）

12. The lively atmosphere in the market is full of the hustle and bustle of daily life.（市场里热闹的氛围充满了日常生活的喧嚣。）

13. The festive atmosphere during the Spring Festival is everywhere, with red lanterns and firecrackers.（春节期间，到处都是喜庆的氛围，有红灯笼和鞭炮。）

14. The melancholic atmosphere in the rainy day makes me feel a bit sad.（雨天忧郁的氛围让我有点伤感。）

15. The magical atmosphere in the snow - covered forest at night is truly amazing.（夜晚白雪覆盖的森林里神奇的氛围真是令人惊叹。）

16. The harmonious atmosphere in the community makes people feel warm-hearted.（社区里和谐的氛围让人感到温暖。）

17. The mysterious atmosphere around the old castle attracts many adventure - lovers.（古老城堡周围神秘的氛围吸引了许多探险爱好者。）

18. The solemn atmosphere in the church during the wedding ceremony is very touching.（婚礼仪式上教堂里庄严的氛围非常感人。）

◆优美语段

一、自然风光：海边的一天

On a sunny summer day, I went to the beach. The moment I arrived, the vast blue ocean came into view. The waves were rolling onto the shore, making a rhythmic sound. Seagulls were flying overhead, their cries adding to the lively atmosphere. The sand was warm under my feet, and the sea breeze was so refreshing. I walked along the beach, collecting beautiful seashells. It was a perfect day to enjoy the beauty of nature.

在一个阳光明媚的夏日，我去了海滩。我一到那里，广阔的蓝色海洋就映入眼帘。海浪拍打着海岸，发出有节奏的声音。海鸥在头顶飞翔，它们的叫声增添了热闹的氛围。沙子在我的脚下很温暖，海风令人心旷神怡。我沿着海滩漫步，收集着美丽的贝壳。这是享受大自然美景的完美一天。

二、四季景色：秋天的公园

Autumn is a season full of charm, and the park in autumn is especially fascinating. The leaves on the trees turn into various colors, like red, orange and yellow, creating a beautiful and colorful scene. The ground is covered with fallen leaves, making a soft rustling sound when stepped on. The air is filled with the sweet smell of ripe fruits. People are strolling in the park, enjoying the pleasant weather and the beautiful scenery. It's a wonderful time to embrace the beauty of autumn.

秋天是一个充满魅力的季节，秋天的公园尤其迷人。树上的叶子变成了各种颜色，如红色、橙色和黄色，营造出一幅美丽多彩的景象。地面上铺满了落叶，踩上去发出轻柔的沙沙声。空气中弥漫着成熟水果的香甜气味。人们在公园里漫步，享受着宜人的天气和美丽的风景。这是拥抱秋天美景的美好时光。

三、城市景观：夜晚的城市

When night falls, the city takes on a whole new look. The skyscrapers are lit up, their lights twinkling like stars. The streets are filled with colorful neon signs, making the city look more vibrant. Cars are running on the roads, and the sound of traffic adds to the busy atmosphere. People are walking on the sidewalks, chatting and laughing. The city at night is full of energy and life, showing its unique charm.

夜幕降临，城市呈现出全新的面貌。摩天大楼灯火通明，灯光像星星一样闪烁。街道上布满了五颜六色的霓虹灯，使城市看起来更加充满活力。汽车在道路上行驶，交通的声音增添了繁忙的氛围。人们在人行道上走着，有说有笑。夜晚的城市充满了活力和生机，展现出它独特的魅力。

四、乡村风光：宁静的乡村

The countryside is a place full of peace and tranquility. In the morning, the sun shines gently on the green fields. The grass is covered with dew, sparkling like diamonds. Small houses are scattered among the fields, with smoke rising from their chimneys. Cows and sheep are grazing leisurely. The air is fresh and clean, filled with the fragrance of soil and grass. It's a perfect place to escape the hustle and bustle of the city and enjoy the simple beauty of nature.

乡村是一个充满宁静与平和的地方。早晨，阳光轻柔地洒在绿色的田野上。草上沾满了露珠，像钻石一样闪闪发光。小房子散布在田野间，烟囱里升起袅袅炊烟。牛羊在悠闲地吃草。空气清新洁净，弥漫着泥土和青草的芬芳。这是一个逃离城市喧嚣，享受大自然质朴之美的绝佳之地。

五、名胜古迹：古老的长城

The Great Wall, an ancient wonder, winds its way through mountains. Standing on the Great Wall, I was deeply impressed by its grandeur. The stones, some of which are huge, have witnessed the passage of time. Along the wall, there are watchtowers, which once served as important military facilities. The surrounding mountains are covered with lush forests. Looking into the distance, I could feel the long - standing history and the wisdom of the ancient people. It's truly a remarkable sight that attracts people from all over the world.

长城，一座古老的奇迹，蜿蜒于群山之间。站在长城上，我被它的雄伟深深震撼。那些石头，有些非常巨大，见证了时间的流逝。沿着城墙，有烽火台，它们曾经是重要的军事设施。周围的群山覆盖着茂密的森林。眺望远方，我能感受到悠久的历史和古人的智慧。这真是一处吸引着世界各地人们的非凡景观。

◆素材运用

经典考题1（自然景观 — 美丽的湖泊）

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 对中国的自然风光很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件，介绍你家乡附近的一个美丽湖泊。内容包括：湖泊的位置、景色特点以及你在湖边的一次难忘经历。词数 100 左右。

范文一（生动细腻型）

Dear Tom,

I'm glad to share with you a beautiful lake near my hometown. It lies at the foot of a mountain, surrounded by lush forests. The lake water is so clear that you can see fish swimming leisurely. In spring, colorful wildflowers bloom along the lakeshore, making it a paradise for butterflies.

Last summer, I went fishing by the lake with my grandfather. We sat on the grass, enjoying the warm sunshine and the gentle breeze. As the sun set, the lake was painted with a golden glow, which was truly breathtaking.

I'm sure you'll be attracted by its beauty if you come to visit. Looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Li Hua

亮点点评：

本文使用 “lush forests，clear，leisurely” 等形容词和副词生动描绘景物；运用 “making it a paradise for butterflies” 这样的现在分词短语，以及 “which was truly breathtaking” 非限定性定语从句，使句子更丰富；通过描写日落时 “the lake was painted with a golden glow”，画面感十足。

范文二（简洁抒情型）

Dear Tom,

My hometown has a charming lake near the mountains. The lake is a mirror reflecting the blue sky and the green trees around. It's peaceful and quiet, away from the noise of the city.

Once, I went to the lake alone on a moonlit night. The silver moonlight shone on the lake, creating a magical scene. I sat there, listening to the soft sound of the water, lost in thought. It was a moment of pure tranquility.

I hope you can experience its beauty someday. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮点点评：

以 “a mirror reflecting the blue sky” 形象比喻，简洁有力；“lost in thought” 等短语简洁地表达情感；整体语言简洁，却通过对月夜的描写营造出宁静美好的氛围。

经典考题2（城市生活 — 夜晚的步行街）

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Alice 即将来你所在的城市旅游，她想了解你城市的特色。请你写一篇短文，介绍城市里的一条著名步行街在夜晚的景象。内容包括：步行街的位置、夜晚的热闹场景以及人们的活动。词数 100 左右。

范文一（细节丰富型）

In the center of my city lies a famous pedestrian street. When night falls, the street comes alive. Colorful neon lights shine brightly, decorating the shops and restaurants on both sides. People are strolling along the street, chatting, laughing and bargaining. There are street performers showing their amazing skills, like juggling and magic. Some are taking pictures with the beautiful night view as the background.

The air is filled with the delicious smell of various snacks. It's a place where people can relax and enjoy the vibrant nightlife.

This is the charming pedestrian street of my city. I'm sure you'll love it when you visit.

亮点点评：

文章中“comes alive，shine brightly” 等动词短语生动展现步行街夜晚的活力；“like juggling and magic” 举例说明街头表演，丰富细节；“The air is filled with the delicious smell of various snacks” 从嗅觉角度丰富描写。

范文二（富有文采型）

At the heart of my city stands a renowned pedestrian street, which turns into a wonderland at night. The neon lights twinkle like stars, creating a dreamy atmosphere. The street is bustling with people, some are window - shopping, some are sitting in cafes, sipping coffee and enjoying the night view.

The sound of laughter and chatter blends with the music from the stores, forming a harmonious symphony. It's a place that combines the charm of modern city life with the joy of human interaction.

I can't wait to show you around this amazing place when you come.

亮点点评：

文章中“turns into a wonderland”“twinkle like stars” 运用比喻增添文采；“blends with”“forming a harmonious symphony” 等表达使句子富有节奏感，描绘出热闹又和谐的氛围。

经典考题3（历史遗迹 — 古老的寺庙）

你校英语报正在举办以 “Historical Relics” 为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文，介绍你参观过的一座古老寺庙。内容包括：寺庙的历史、建筑风格和你参观时的感受。词数 100 左右。

范文一（朴实叙事型）

Last month, I visited an ancient temple with a history of over 500 years. It's located in the mountains, away from the busy city. The temple's architecture is typical of the Ming Dynasty, with red walls and golden tiles. The main hall is solemn, with large Buddha statues inside.

Walking around the temple, I could feel the long - standing history. The ancient trees and the peaceful environment made me forget the hustle and bustle of daily life. It was a valuable experience that deepened my understanding of our traditional culture.

亮点点评：

文章以时间顺序叙述参观经历，简单明了；“typical of the Ming Dynasty” 准确描述建筑风格；“made me forget the hustle and bustle of daily life” 真实表达参观感受。

范文二（抒情感悟型）

Hidden in the mountains is an ancient temple that has witnessed centuries of history. Its architecture, a perfect blend of traditional elements, stands as a monument to the wisdom of our ancestors. The red walls tell stories of the past, and the solemn Buddha statues seem to be in deep meditation.

When I stepped into the temple, a sense of tranquility and respect filled my heart. The sound of bells and the smell of incense created a sacred atmosphere. I was deeply touched by the rich cultural heritage and the spiritual power of this place. It's not just a temple; it's a link to our glorious past.

亮点点评：

文章中“has witnessed centuries of history，a perfect blend” 等表达富有情感；“The red walls tell stories of the past” 运用拟人手法；结尾升华主题，表达对历史遗迹的深刻感悟。