中考满分作文-活动计划类话题01

注意事项：

1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。

Dear Henry,

I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                                                            Yours, Li Hua

假定你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行，请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David写一封邮件，分享你的旅行计划。

注意：

1. 词数 100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。

Dear David,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Li Hua

三：

你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Getting Close to Nature”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，叙述一次你接近自然的经历及感悟（如郊游、研学、劳动实践等），或谈谈接近自然的好处。

要求：

1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；

2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；

3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 

参考范文：

一：Dear Henry,

I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. Let me tell you something about it.

In the morning, we visited the History Museum. We learned about the history of the Long March. Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army, which greatly touched us. After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art. We also watched local opera performances that are educational.

The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of Chinese traditional art!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：结合所给图示完成写作，注意不要遗漏信息；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开门见山，告诉对方自己去了历史博物馆场进行实践活动；

第二步，具体介绍活动的时间以及过程；

第三步，谈谈此次活动带给自己的感受。

[亮点词汇]

① learn about了解到

② not only...but also...不但……而且……

[高分句型]

①Let me tell you something about it.（祈使句）

②After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art.（定语从句）

二：

Dear David,

How’s it going?

With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing. Now I’d like to share my travel plan with you.

We’ll go there by plane in July and stay for 5 days. During that period, we’re going to visit the Palace Museum to know about stories of the past. Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world. We’re going to take a walk there and admire how great we Chinese are!

I believe we’ll enjoy ourselves in Beijing. What about your summer plan?

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；

②时态：以“一般将来时”为主；

③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开门见山，介绍文章的主题，即暑假去北京的旅行计划；

第二步，介绍什么时间出发、旅行的方式、和谁一起去以及计划待几天；

第三步，具体介绍计划在北京做什么活动以及原因。

[亮点词汇]

①promise to do sth.承诺做某事

②share sth. with sb.和某人分享某事

③admire钦佩

[高分句型]

①With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing.（that引导宾语从句）

②Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world.（which引导定语从句）

三：

Getting Close to Nature

Nature is the greatest gift of God to human beings. It is the source of our life and the most beautiful scenery in the world. It is very important for us to get close to nature.

First of all, getting close to nature can help us to relax. Second, getting close to nature can help us to build a healthy lifestyle. Finally, getting close to nature can help us to appreciate the beauty of nature. 

In conclusion, getting close to nature is very important for us. We should take some time to enjoy the beauty of nature and protect the environment.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：要求以“Getting Close to Nature”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明亲近自然的重要性；

第二步，具体介绍亲近自然的好处；

第三步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①get close to nature 亲近自然

②First of all 首先

③In conclusion 总之

④protect the environment 保护环境

[高分句型]

①It is very important for us to get close to nature.（It固定句型）

②We should take some time to enjoy the beauty of nature and protect the environment.（并列结构）