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本节内容包含：试题解读＋写作要点＋可用素材（含词汇、句式）＋注意事项＋满分作文2篇（附亮点评析、满分揭秘）＋参考范文（附译文）
■经典考题（计25分）
你校英文报以“Give new life to old things”为题向全校中学生开展征文活动，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍一次你让旧物焕发新生的经历，内容包括：
1.旧物的名称、来历等；
2.你让旧物焕发新生的原因、方式(例如：修理、改造、赠送他人等)；
3.你的感受或收获。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥；
3.照抄试卷中的语篇内容不得分；
4.文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
Give new life to old things
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◆名师解析
1. 试题解读
本次征文为记叙文写作，是中考高频生活感悟类题型，主题“Give new life to old things”贴合低碳环保、勤俭节约的德育热点。试题要求考生讲述一次旧物焕新的亲身经历，必须包含旧物来历、改造原因与方式、个人收获三大核心要点。文章以叙事为主、感悟为辅，侧重考查学生叙事顺序、细节描写与结尾升华能力。词数要求100词左右，禁止抄袭原文、透露真实信息。话题贴近学生日常生活，易于拓展细节，既能检验基础句式运用，也能考察情感表达与主题升华能力，适配初三考场训练，实用性极强。
2. 写作要点
⑴开篇引入主题，介绍自己改造的旧物，简单交代物品名称与来历背景。
⑵说明改造旧物的原因，结合节约资源、留存回忆等角度，贴合主题立意。
⑶具体描写改造方式，通过修理、清洁、装饰、翻新等动作，丰富文章细节。
⑷结尾阐述个人收获与感悟，明白旧物价值，倡导旧物再利用、绿色生活。
3. 可用素材
⑴词汇：
leave unused 闲置不用；repair the broken parts 修理破损部件；refresh old items 翻新旧物；save resources 节约资源；reduce waste 减少浪费；carry sweet memories 承载美好回忆；practical and meaningful 实用且有意义；live a low-carbon life 过低碳生活
⑵句式：
Small changes can bring old things new life and make our life more wonderful. 小小的改造能让旧物重获新生，让我们的生活更美好。
Reusing old items is a good way to protect the environment and treasure memories. 旧物再利用是保护环境、珍藏回忆的良好方式。
4. 注意事项
⑴严格按照旧物来历、改造原因与方式、个人感悟的顺序行文，要点齐全，补充细节，杜绝空洞说理。
⑵控制词数在100词左右，严禁抄袭原文、出现真实信息，长短句结合，保证行文流畅自然。
满分作文展示1
Give new life to old things
It is meaningful to give new life to old things. Last weekend, I refreshed my old schoolbag, which I had used for two years. It was slightly worn out and looked plain, so I planned to give it a new look instead of throwing it away.
I did this mainly to reduce waste and keep my school memories. First, I cleaned the dirty surface carefully. Then I patched the broken corners and stuck lovely handmade stickers on it. Finally, I added a small hanging ornament by myself.
The old bag looks totally new now. This experience teaches me that old things still have value. Reusing old items helps save resources and lets me form a good habit of thrift.
亮点评析
①用词地道：worn out、handmade stickers、thrift等词精准贴合主题，替换基础词汇；
②句式丰富，运用定语从句、instead of结构，长短句搭配错落有致；
③结构清晰，遵循来历—改造过程—感悟升华，层次分明，过渡自然；
④写作特色选材贴近学生日常，细节真实，情感朴实，极易考场复刻。
满分揭秘
全文词数标准，完整覆盖所有写作要点，叙事完整流畅。以旧书包翻新为素材，贴合学生生活，清洁、修补、装饰等改造细节具体饱满。句式灵活多变，无语法错误，词块高级且贴合考纲。结尾升华节约资源、勤俭节约的主题，立意积极正向，文风简洁得体，是初三考场标准一类高分范文，适配背诵仿写。
满分作文展示2
Give new life to old things
In our daily life, many old things can be reused. I once renewed an old bicycle left by my cousin. It had been unused for a long time, with rusty chains and flat tires.
I chose to repair it rather than abandon it. On the one hand, it is a pity to waste a still-usable item. On the other hand, riding bikes helps me keep fit and live a low-carbon life. I replaced the broken tires, cleaned up the rust and painted the frame gray.
After my efforts, the bicycle became brand new. I often ride it for exercise now. I truly realize reusing old things is environmentally friendly and full of special meaning.
亮点评析
①词汇亮眼：rusty chains、abandon、environmentally friendly等加分短语提升文采；
②句型出彩，运用with复合结构、on the one hand...on the other hand分层句式；
③行文紧凑精炼，改造步骤清晰，原因阐释有理有据，无冗余语句；
④写作特色紧扣低碳环保主题，立意深刻，贴合校园征文正向基调。
满分揭秘
本文词数合规，三大核心要点全部覆盖，叙事逻辑完整清晰。选取旧自行车改造的经典素材，细节描写生动具体，改造理由兼顾环保与实用价值。熟练运用初三核心复合句式，衔接自然流畅，无低级语法错误。主题鲜明积极，语言正式得体，兼具叙事性与思想性，完全符合中考书面表达一类文评分标准。
◆参考范文
Give new life to old things
Giving new life to old things is a wonderful way to make life better. Last month, I transformed an old wooden box from my home. It was worn and useless, so my family planned to throw it away.
I decided to remake it because I wanted to save resources and create a unique storage box. I first sanded the rough surface and cleaned it thoroughly. Then I painted it pink and lined the inside with soft cloth.
Now I use it to store my stationery and small gifts. This meaningful experience makes me understand that no old things are useless. As long as we try to reuse them, they can shine again and bring us warmth.
英文：
旧物焕新
让旧事物重获新生，是美化生活的绝佳方式。上个月，我改造了家里一只旧木盒。它破旧不堪、派不上用场，家人原本打算把它扔掉。
我决定重新改造它，一方面节约资源，另一方面做出独一无二的收纳盒。我先打磨粗糙的表面，将盒子彻底清理干净，接着把它刷成粉色，还在盒子内部铺上柔软布料。
如今我用它收纳文具和小礼物。这段有意义的经历让我明白：没有无用的旧物。只要我们尝试重新利用，它们便能再次焕发光彩，带给我们温暖。
