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佳作抢鲜背 学写作思路，背精彩范文(人与自我——家庭亲情)
(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)母亲节到了，双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早
餐，自己动手来做饭，不幸的是，他们连连失败……
精彩范文
As the twins looked around them in disappointment ， their father
appeared.Their father seemed to understand exactly what had happened
and what to do next. He grabbed the handle of the pan and slipped a bar of
butter to melt before putting a slice of bread.Then he swiftly removed the
porridge away，and poured another cup of rice，starting to cook it all over
again.In between，he kept silent and focused on what he was doing.The
twins stood straight，watching the hustle and bustle from their father.At 7
o’clock，everything was done and perfect.The twins took over the tray ，
feeling guilty about being over-confident about their competence in performing
the house chores.
学习借鉴
1.富有表现力的副词
exactly，swiftly，straight
2.精彩的动作链描写
①grabbed the handle of the pan and slipped a bar of butter...
②swiftly removed...poured...starting to cook it...
3.提分高级句式
现在分词短语作状语：①starting to cook it all over again
②watching the hustle and bustle from their father
③feeling guilty about...
1.congratulate vt.向(某人)道贺；(因某事)为自己感到自豪→congratulation
n.祝贺；恭喜；(pl.)贺词
以练促学 单句语法填空/一句多译
①I am writing a letter of congratulation (congratulate) to you on your being elected
as chairman of the Student Association.(祝贺信)
②我想衷心地祝贺你在英语演讲比赛中获得第一名。(祝贺信)
→I’d like to offer/express/send my sincere congratulations to you on your winning
first place in the English Speech Competition.(congratulation)
→I’d like to congratulate you sincerely on your winning first place in the English
Speech Competition.(congratulate),
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·congratulate sb on (doing) sth 因(做)某事向某人祝贺
·express/offer/send one’s congratulations to sb (on sth) (因某事)向某人致以祝贺
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佳句背诵 After class，I approached Karan，expressed admiration for his team’s
project and congratulated on their success sincerely.(动作链)
下课后，我找到了卡兰，对他的团队的项目表示了钦佩，并真诚地祝贺他们的
成功。2.range n.一系列；(变化或浮动的)范围、界限 vi.包括(各种不同的人或物)；
(在一定范围内)变化
以练促学 单句语法填空/一句多译
①The temperature in Kunming usually ranges between 15 ℃ and 25 ℃.That is
why it is called “the Spring City”.
②此外，你可以组织各种各样的活动，从步行游览城市，探索北京的绿色空间，
到植树，为城市的绿色未来做出贡献。(建议信，2023·北京卷)
→Moreover，you can arrange a wide range of activities，which range from a
walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing to planting trees to
contribute to the city’s green future.(定语从句)
→Moreover，you can arrange a wide range of activities，ranging from a walking
tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing to planting trees to
contribute to the city’s green future.(分词短语作状语),
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·a full/wide range of... 大范围的……，各种……；一系列……
within range of... 在射程以内；在……范围内
out of range of... 在射程外；在……范围外
·range from...to... 包括从……到……之间
range between...and... 在……到……之间变动
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佳句背诵 Frankly speaking，there are a wide range of ways to learn English
beyond the class，but it is important to find one that suits you best.(短文投稿，
2022·全国乙卷)
坦率地说，除了课堂之外，学习英语的方法有很多，但重要的是找到一个最适合你的。
She has had a number of different jobs ranging from chef to swimming instructor.
她做过许多不同的工作，从厨师到游泳教练。
3.figure n.人物；数字；身材 vt.认为；认定
以练促学 猜测词义/补全句子
①All of us students figure that the fruit-picking activity is a great success.(2020·全
国Ⅱ卷) v t . 认为
②As for my favorite figure in Chinese history，it must be Wei Yuan，a great
thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. n . 人物
③Pacing back and forth，I shook my head trying to figure out what to do.弄清楚
④Only by means of balanced diets and regular exercise can you keep your figure as
well as stay healthy.(建议信)
只有通过均衡饮食，定期锻炼，你才能既保持体形又保持健康。,
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·figure out 理解；计算出；弄清楚
·keep one’s figure 保持体形
have a good figure 身材好
a political/historical figure 一位政治/历史人物
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佳句背诵 The terrible figure disappeared into the forest，after which Tom ran
all the way home，his heart wildly beating.
那个可怕的身影消失在森林后，汤姆一路跑回家，他的心狂跳不止。(动作描
写)
4.grateful adj.感激的；表示感谢的(thankful)→gratitude n.感激之情；感谢
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子①The homeless man was so grateful to Robby，saying with tears running down his
face，“I can’t thank you too much”.(情绪描写)
②To express our sincere gratitude (grateful) to you，we have carefully chosen a
present for you.
③I’d like to take this opportunity to express/convey my gratitude to you.Without
your help，I wouldn’t have adjusted to the new school so quickly.(感谢信)
我想借此机会向你表达我的感激之情。如果没有你的帮助，我就不会这么快就
适应这个新学校了。,
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·be grateful to sb (for sth)(因某事而)感激某人
be grateful that... 感激……
I would be grateful if you could do...如果你能做……，我将不胜感激。
·express/convey one’s gratitude (to sb) (for sth)(因某事)(向某人)表示感谢
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佳句背诵 We will be grateful if you could accept our invitation and give us
invaluable advice in the show.(邀请信，2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
如果您能接受我们的邀请并在节目中给我们宝贵的建议，我们将不胜感激。
5.significant adj.有重大意义的；显著的；重要的→significance n.重要性；重要
意义
以练促学 补全句子/一句多译
①I attach great significance to working out at school，so we students must have PE
class actively and punctually.(学校生活)
我认为在学校锻炼身体很重要，因此我们学生必须积极准时地上体育课。
②设立世界海洋日是为了让人们意识到保护海洋是很重要的。(短文投稿，2022·全国甲卷)
→World Oceans Day was set up to make people aware that protecting the oceans is
of great significance/importance.
→World Oceans Day was set up to make people aware that protecting the oceans is
very significant/important.,
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·be significant to/for 对……是重要的
It is significant that... 很明显……
·be of (great/no/little) significance to/for... 对……(很/不)重要
attach (great) significance to (doing) sth 认为(做)某事(很)重要
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佳句背诵 The spirit of Lei Feng，which is very significant/of great significance
to building a harmonious society，is the inheritance of China’s excellent traditional
culture.(和谐社会)
雷锋精神是对中国优秀传统文化的继承，对构建和谐社会具有重要意义。
6.reflect vt.显示；反映；反射→reflection n.思考；映射；反射；倒影
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①The young man lay on the grass quietly，reflecting(reflect) on what had happened
that day.
②She was extremely pretty，and her house was a reflection (reflect) of herself，
everything in good taste and in perfect order.(2021·浙江6月卷)
③She admired her beautiful face reflected in the mirror，lost in reflection.
她欣赏着映在镜子中自己美丽的脸庞，陷入了深思。,
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·reflect on/upon sth 反省/认真思考某事
be reflected in 倒映在；反映在
·be lost in reflection 陷入深思a reflection of... ……的反映/倒影
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佳句背诵 David lowered his head and sat on the ground quietly，reflecting on
what I said to him just now.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
大卫低下头，静静地坐在地上，回想着我刚才对他说的话。
7.represent vt.象征(symbolize)；代表；相当于；描述→representative
n.代表adj.典型的；有代表性的
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①They represented their concern for the safety of these children to the authorities.
②Li Bai was a representative (represent) of the poets in the Tang Dynasty，who
was also one of the poets I admire most.(短文投稿，2023·全国甲卷)
③Representing/On behalf of our school，I’m more than glad to tell you something
about the coming volleyball game.
我非常高兴代表我们学校告诉你们有关即将到来的排球比赛的一些事宜。,
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·represent sb/sth as/to be... 宣称某人为……；把某事叙述为……
represent sth to sb 向某人说明(传达)某事
·represent sb＝on behalf of sb 代表某人
·be representative of 是……的代表/典型
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佳句背诵 Last but not least，I feel it a great honour to represent my class to take
part in the group dancing competition.
最后但同样重要的是，我非常荣幸代表我班参加小组跳舞比赛。
8.respect vt.尊敬；尊重 n.尊敬；尊重；方面(aspect)→respectable adj.值得尊敬
的；体面的→respectful adj.恭敬的；表示敬意的
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①She has been devoted to her work，for which I respect her a lot.(2020·全国Ⅰ卷)
②The event is intended to raise our awareness of labour and remind us of howvaluable and respectable (respect) hard work is.
③In many respects of our life，there are always respectable people.With respect
to/In respect of the person I respect most，I have to mention my maths teacher.(2020·
全国Ⅰ卷)
在我们生活的许多方面，总有值得尊敬的人。关于我最尊敬的人，我不得不提
到我的数学老师。,
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·respect sb for sth 因某事而尊重某人
·have/show respect for sb 尊重某人
out of respect for... 出于对……的尊敬
in respect of/with respect to 关于
in this respect 在这方面
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佳句背诵 Our school English newspaper is calling for contributions themed “
Respect Teachers and Thank Teachers”，the purpose of which is to celebrate the
40th Teachers’ Day.(征文启事)
为庆祝第40届教师节，我校英语校报以“尊师谢师”为主题征集稿件。
9.set off出发；动身；启程；燃放(烟花)；引起；激起
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子/一句多译
①They set out/off for the local supermarket together and bought some paper bags for
popcorn.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)
②You had better set aside some time every day for sports so that you can keep
yourself energetic.
③Moreover，after the stadium is set up，a variety of sports events will be held.
此外，体育馆建成后，可以举行各种体育活动。
④他们着手打扫厨房，而他们的父亲帮忙做早餐。(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)→They set about cleaning up the kitchen while their father helped make the
breakfast.
→They set out to clean up the kitchen while their father helped make the breakfast.,
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set aside把……放到一旁；省出；暂时不考虑
set about(doing sth) 着手/开始做……
set out (to do sth) 出发；开始做……
set down 写下；记下；登记
set up 建立；树立；搭起
set free 释放，放走
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佳句背诵 At 7 am last Saturday we set off/out for the farm merrily like caged
birds newly set free.On arriving at the farm，we set up tents and then set
about picking fruits.(活动介绍，2020·全国Ⅱ卷)
上星期六早上7点，我们像刚放出来的笼中鸟一样，兴高采烈地出发去农场。
一到农场，我们就搭起帐篷，然后开始摘水果。
句型公式：现在分词短语作状语
【教材原句】 I’m finally back home now，feeling really tired，but celebrating
Naadam with my friend was totally worth it.
现在我终于回到家了，感到十分疲倦，但是和我的朋友一起欢度“那达慕”大
会是完全值得的。
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①He rose to his feet，crossed the room and hugged me tightly，crying (cry) without
control.(动作链)
②Hearing (hear) the exciting news，Karen wore a shining smile on her face.
③Hearing what the headmaster said，I was wild with joy，my eyes glittering withexcitement.(心理描写)
当听到校长所说的话，我欣喜若狂，双眼兴奋地闪闪发光。,
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·现在分词(短语)作状语除了表示伴随以外，还可表示时间、条件、原因、让步、
结果和方式等。
·现在分词(短语)除在句中作状语外，还可以作表语、定语、宾语补足语等。
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佳句背诵 Representing our school，I would like to convey my sincere welcome
for your visiting.All of you will visit the museum ， enabling you to fully
understand the brilliant history of our school.(发言稿，2021·浙江1月卷)
我代表我们学校真诚地欢迎你们的来访。你们所有人将参观博物馆，这使你们
能够完全了解我们学校的光辉历史。
维度一 语境辨义练——熟词生义/一词多义
1.写出加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①After all，coworking spaces also typically use an open office layout (布局).But
I recently came across a study that shows why his approach works.(2021·全国乙卷)
ad v . 一般地；通常
②The family called the Italian Culture Ministry；the official confirmed that the
paintings were originals and worth as much as $50 million.(2020·全国Ⅱ卷) n.原
作，原稿
③I dislike seeing TV commercials when enjoying a wonderful soap opera. n . 广告
2.选出harvest的汉语意思A.n.收获季节 B.n.收获；收成 C.vt.收割(庄稼) D.vt.收获
①Choose your favorite and stick to it，and I’m sure you will harvest both pleasure
and strength.D
②The poor harvest caused prices to rise sharply.B
③Farmers are extremely busy during the harvest.A
④These machines will also be able to identify and harvest all kinds of
vegetables.C
维度二 语境运用练——单句语法填空
1.By participating in this activity ， I have become aware of the
significance(significant) of showing respect for the old.
2.In my view，it’s our country’s being stronger that has made the cultural aspect of
our country more attractive and charming(charm).
3.Yuan Longping was a Chinese agricultural (agriculture) scientist and educator，
known for developing the first hybrid rice varieties in the 1970s.
4.As red represents(represent) life，wealth and good luck in Chinese culture，the
conductor likes to have his home decorated(decorate) with red lanterns.
5.I was so absorbed in the colorful pictures and the interesting story that I absolutely
(absolute) forgot my loneliness.
6.She will never forget the moment when she saw all the audience clapping (clap)
their hands and cheering after her performance.
7.Occasions are quite rare when I have the time to spend a day with my kids.
8.How pleased(please) and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast
in bed.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
9.People hold the belief that the Spring Festival and other traditional Chinese
festivals will not be replaced by foreign festivals.
10.After figuring (figure) out the final total number，those representing (represent)
the company were satisfied with the result.练一 单元话题作文(推荐信——向英国朋友Bill推荐中国传统节日)
1.根据提示，利用本单元所学知识完成作文
①了解到你将参加一个关于中国传统节日的分享会，我非常高兴向你推荐中秋
节。(pleased，现在分词短语作状语)
Learning that you are going to take part in a sharing session about Chinese
traditional festivals ， I’m more than pleased to recommend the Mid-Autumn
Festival to you.
②我推荐这个节日的原因是我们中国人认为庆祝中秋节是非常重要的。
(significant，the reason why...is that...，it作形式宾语)
The reason why I recommend the festival is that we Chinese think it very
significant to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival.
③无论我们多忙，我们一贯一起欣赏满月，一起吃月饼。(no matter how引导让
步状语从句，it is typical of sb to do)
No matter how busy we are ， it is typical of us to ,
admire the full moon and enjoy mooncakes together.
④这是因为月饼和满月一样圆，代表着家人团聚。(represent，现在分词短语作
状语)
It is because mooncakes are as round as the full moon ， representing family
reunion .
⑤我们会做一系列美食，从鱼肉、猪肉到蔬菜不等。(range，现在分词短语作状
语)We will cook a wide range of delicious foods ， ranging from fish ， pork to
vegetables.
⑥通过庆祝这个节日，我们也是表明我们对这一年的好收获的感激。(grateful，
harvest)
By celebrating the festival ， we are also to show that we are grateful for the year’s
good harvests .
⑦如果你需要更多关于这个节日的信息，我很乐意告知你。(pleased)
If you need more information about the festival ， I’m pleased to inform you of it .
2.使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇
Dear Bill，
Learning that you are going to take part in a sharing session about Chinese
traditional festivals，I’m more than pleased to recommend the Mid-Autumn
Festival to you.
The reason why I recommend the festival is that we Chinese think it very significant
to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival.No matter how busy we are，it is typical of
us to admire the full moon ,
and enjoy mooncakes together.It is because mooncakes are as round as the full
moon，representing family reunion.Meanwhile，we will cook a wide range of
delicious foods，ranging from fish，pork to vegetables.
By celebrating the festival，we are also to show that we are grateful for the year’s
good harvests.
If you need more information about the festival，I’m pleased to inform you of it.
Yours，
Li Hua
练二 续写能力升华(热考话题分步构思)
构思情节第三步：皆大欢喜结局
1.感激
Now，I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand.
现在，我非常感激她伸出的援助之手。
2.感动In a flash，with tears welling up in my eyes，I was touched beyond words.
刹那间，我热泪盈眶，感动得说不出话来。
3.升华
①Sometimes，a small act of kindness can be powerful enough to make a huge
difference.
有时，一个小小的善举足以产生巨大的影响。
②Just as the saying goes，“Roses given，fragrance in hand.”
正如谚语所说：“赠人玫瑰，手有余香。”
[小试身手]
When his eyes caught mine，① I was able to see tears shining in his grateful eyes.I
smiled back in tears.Not until that moment ②did I realize what a big difference one
small help had made to him.I even saw his mom and dad looking at me and ③they
felt moved beyond words.It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the
power of our actions.④With one small gesture we can change a person’s life.For
better or for worse.
当他的目光碰到我的目光时，我能看到他感激的眼睛里闪烁着泪光。我也含泪
而笑。直到那一刻，我才意识到一个小小的帮助对他产生了多么大的影响。我
甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我，他们感动得说不出话来。我突然明白了，我们
永远不应该低估我们行动的力量。用一个小小的手势，我们就可以改变一个人
的一生。无论好坏。
