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佳作抢鲜背 学写作思路，背精彩范文(征文——科学精神)
假设你校下个月要举办科技节，现面向全体学生征文，请用英语写一篇短文，
谈谈你对科学精神的见解。内容包括：1.科学精神应包括一些非常宝贵的品质，
如专心致志、坚持不懈、永不放弃、创造力等等；2.作为学生，我们应该把这
些科学精神应用于学习中，以实现我们的目标。
精彩范文
As far as I am concerned，scientific spirits include some noble qualities，
such as devotion，persistence，never giving-up and creativity and so on.
It is thanks to the scientific spirits that the great scientists have made many
outstanding achievements.For instance， if it had not been for Qian Xuese n’s
devoted work on missiles and rockets ， China wouldn’t have become such a
powerful country/so powerful a country in the world in a short time.It is the
same with Yuan Longping developing the hybrid rice.
As students，if we can apply the scientific spirits to our study，we will
certainly achieve what we want.In our daily life，we should also learn the
scientific spirits from the great scientists to handle the difficulties and
problems we meet with.
迁移运用
每日句型练透：If it had not been for.../Had it not been for...，...wouldn’t have
done...如果没有……(虚拟语气)
1.Had it not been for Mr.Rowe’s patience and encouragement，Steve wouldn’t have
achieved his dream at last.
要不是罗维先生的耐心和鼓励，史蒂夫是无法最终实现他的梦想的。2.If it had not been for this experience，I wouldn’t have realized that I should spend
more time with my family.
要不是这次经历，我就不会意识到我应该花更多的时间和家人在一起。
1.blame vt.把……归咎于；责怪；指责 n.责备；指责(criticize)
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①In my view，Li Hua，who broke the school rule，was to blame(blame).
②Don’t always blame your own failure on others.You should bear the blame for
failure.
③Blamed for the failure of the performance，Tim felt seized by a burst of sadness
and couldn’t help crying bitterly.(情绪描写)
蒂姆被责备为演出失败负责，一阵悲伤袭来，他忍不住痛哭。,
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·blame sb for sth 因某事责备某人
blame sth on sb/sth 将某事归咎于某人/某物
be to blame (for sth) (对某事)应负责任
·take/bear the blame for...承担……的责任
lay/put/place the blame (for sth) on sb/sth 把(某事)归咎于某人/某物
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佳句背诵 So instead of blaming others，we should communicate more and put
ourselves in others’ place.(建议信)
因此，我们应该多交流、换位思考，而不是指责其他人。
2.decrease n.减少；降低；减少量 vt.& vi.(使大小、数量等)减少；减小；降低
(decline)以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①To decrease (decrease) the amount of rubbish and to protect the environment，
more governments are requiring people to recycle materials.(环境保护)
②Over the past decades，sea ice has been on the decrease in the Arctic as a result of
global warming.
③The number of visitors to the museum has decreased by nearly 6% in the past few
years.
过去几年中，参观博物馆的人数下降了近6%。,
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·decrease by 减少/下降了
decrease (from...) to (从……)减少/下降到
decrease in 在某方面下降
·on the decrease/increase 在减少/在增加
a decrease in 某方面的减少
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佳句背诵 Furthermore，the number of new students in our school decreased from
2，100 to 1，600 last year.
此外，去年我们学校的新生人数从2 100人减少到1 600人。
3.defend vt.保卫；防守；辩解→defenc(s)e n.防御；保卫；保护→defender n.捍
卫者→defensive adj.防御的；自卫的
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①She stepped back appearing surprised and put up her hands as if in defence.(动作
＋情绪描写)
②He planned to learn kung fu in the summer holidays so that he can defend himself
against/from being attacked.
他计划在暑假学习功夫，这样他就可以保护自己免受攻击。,
用法归纳——————————————————————————·defend...against/from 保护……免受
defend oneself 自卫；为自己辩护
·in defence (of) 保护；为了保卫；(为……)辩护
in one’s defence 为某人辩护
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佳句背诵 Seeing the fierce snake，he rushed in defence of/to defend his son like
an arrow.(动作描写)
看到这条凶猛的蛇，他像箭一样冲过去保护儿子。
4.come down with患(病)；染上(小病)
以练促学 用come的相关短语填空
①Above all，tell me how the accident came about immediately.
②My assistant’s first novel came out，which made me proud of him.
③When it comes to English learning，I have the following practical suggestions to
share.Firstly，when you come across unfamiliar words，don’t always refer to the
dictionary.Besides，when teachers’ questions come up in class，you should try to
come up with answers.Lastly，if you fail，you must say to yourself，“Come
on！”(建议信)
用法归纳——————————————————————————
come across (偶然)遇见；碰见；被理解
come about 发生(无被动形式)
come on 加油；到来；得了吧
come out 出版；结果是；(花)开放
come up 走近；上来；被提出
come up with 提出；想出(主意、计划、回答等)
when it comes to... 当谈及……
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佳句背诵 Knowing that my partner came down with a serious disease，I hadknots in my throat and rushed to hospital anxiously.(情绪＋动作描写，2022·浙江1
月卷)
得知我的伙伴染上重病，我不禁哽咽，焦急地赶往医院。
5.above all最重要的是；首先；尤其是
以练促学 用all的相关短语填空/补全句子
①The university I recommend to you is Beijing Language and Culture
University.First of all/Above all，you’d better learn some basic Chinese before you
come.After all，you will be under completely unfamiliar circumstances.All in all，
studying for a degree in a different culture is not easy at all.(推荐信)
②Thanks to your timely and generous help，I managed to handle the four problems
in all.
多亏您及时慷慨的帮助，我成功地处理了全部四个问题。,
用法归纳——————————————————————————
after all 毕竟；终究
first of all 首先；第一
all in all 整体说来；总而言之
in all 全部；合计
at all (否定句)一点也不；(疑问句)到底；究竟
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佳句背诵 Above all，I hoped he wouldn’t assign me to work with the fiercely
competitive and extremely serious fellow.(2022·浙江1月卷)
最重要的是，我希望他不要安排我和这个好胜心很强、极其严肃的家伙一起工
作。
1.句型公式：until引导时间状语从句
【教材原句】 Cholera used to be one of the most feared diseases in the world，until a British doctor，John Snow，showed how it could be overcome.
在英国医生约翰·斯诺向人们展示如何战胜霍乱之前，霍乱曾是世界上最令人恐
惧的疾病之一。
以练促学 句式升级
I didn’t realize how important working with my own hands was until I took part in
the picking activity.(活动介绍，2020·全国Ⅱ卷)
→It wasn’t until I took part in the picking activity that I realized how important
working with my own hands was.(强调句型)
→Not until I took part in the picking activity did I realize how important working
with my own hands was.(倒装),
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·not...until...意为“直到……才……”。
·not until...倒装结构：Not until＋...＋助动词/系动词/情态动词＋主语＋谓语动词
＋...。
·not until...强调结构：It is/was not until＋时间状语从句或短语＋that＋主句部分。
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佳句背诵 The voice became louder and louder until David dragged his leg，
surpassing the finish line.(动作描写，2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
声音越来越大，直到大卫拖着腿越过终点线。
It was not until after what seemed half a century that we heard the roar of the
helicopter.
→Not until after what seemed half a century did we hear the roar of the helicopter.
直到过了似乎半个世纪后，我们才听到了直升机的声音。
2.句型公式：have＋宾语＋宾语补足语
【教材原句】 Accordingly，he had the handle of the pump removed so that it
could not be used.相应地，他让人把水泵的手柄拆了，这样水泵就不能用了。
以练促学 单句语法填空
①Now that you have realized that your time is limited，you must study harder to
have your goal achieved (achieve).
②Our headteacher can’t have us wasting(waste) our precious time.Even if we have
finished our homework，he always has us read (read) classics to broaden our
horizons.,
用法归纳——————————————————————————
·have sth done 使某事被做
have sb do sth 让某人做某事
have sb/sth doing sth 让某人一直做某事/让某物处于某种状态
can’t/couldn’t/won’t have sb doing sth 不能容忍某人做某事
·have sth to do 有某事要做
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佳句背诵 I am terribly sorry for having you waiting for me so long，because I
had an urgent thing to attend to just now.(道歉信)
我非常抱歉让你一直等我这么长时间，因为刚才我有一件紧急的事情要处理。
维度一 语境辨义练——熟词生义/一词多义
1.写出加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①The engine is used for pumping water out of the mine. v t . 用泵输送
②The research lacks solid proof，and therefore，its conclusions are doubtful. adj .
可靠的
③They shifted their viewpoints frequently.
(2020·江苏卷) v t . 改变 ( 观点或态度等 )
④He read through the papers and made an abstract of their contents. n . 摘要
2.选出handle的汉语意思A.vt.处理 B.vt.操纵 C.n.把手 D.vt.(用手)触，拿
①Consider turning your travel plan over to a travel agent and letting him double-
check all the details，make suggestions，and then handle the actual reservations.
(2023·浙江1月卷) A
②The way you handle chopsticks is important to avoid annoying your companions.
(2022·全国甲卷)D
③I wasn’t sure if I could handle such a powerful car.B
④Tea in China was traditionally drunk from cups without handles.C
3.选出subscribe to的汉语意思
①He subscribes to the view that we can tackle the severe problem in this way once
and for all.B
②This is the school the outstanding and patriotic scientist subscribed to generously
in the past.C
③Using the money I earned in the holiday ， I have subscribed to multiple
magazines recently.A
维度二 语境运用练——单句语法填空
1.She turned from person to person until she came to me.(2023·浙江1月卷)
2.Given that the driver injured the passer-by，he was so severely (severe) punished
that his parents were frustrated (frustrate).
3.The police believe more than one person is to blame (blame) for the fire.
4.Willing to help Bernard，the children got down to preparing (prepare) popcorn the
instant they got what they needed.
5.This battle was vividly (vivid) recorded in the documentary film.
6.Thanks to her patience and efforts，she finally contacted the man who was in
charge of the company.7.Your innovations should be linked to/with our school life and be able to make our
life better and more convenient.
8.At that time，people were advised to stay at home to reduce the risk of getting
infected (infect).
练一 单元话题作文(人物介绍——介绍身边值得尊敬的人)
1.根据提示，利用本单元所学知识完成作文
①流感一爆发，我的叔叔，一个聪明的医生，开始治疗那些感染了流感的人。
(the instant引导的时间状语从句，break out，brilliant，get down to，infect)
The instant the flu broke out ， my uncle ， a brilliant doctor ， got down to
treating those infected with flu .
②为了帮助那些感染病毒的人，他每天工作如此长时间以至于几乎没有时间陪
伴家人。(infect，so...that...引导结果状语从句)
To help those who were infected with the virus ， he worked so long every day
that he could hardly spare time for his family.
③由于他的不懈努力，很多感染流感的患者已经得到了治愈。(thanks to，come
down with，现在分词短语作定语)
Thanks to his tireless efforts ， many people coming down with the flu have been
cured.
④在他的领导下，他所负责的所有护士和医生都克服了许多挑战。(leadership，
in the charge of)
Under his leadership ， all the nurses and doctors in the charge of him have
overcome many challenges.
⑤他总是愿意鼓励那些感到沮丧的病人。(frustrated)
He is always willing to encourage those patients feeling frustrated .2.使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇
The instant the flu broke out，my uncle，a brilliant doctor，got down to
treating those infected with flu.To help those who were infected with the
virus，he worked so long every day that he could hardly spare time for his
family.Thanks to his tireless efforts，many people coming down with the flu have
been cured.Furthermore，under his leadership，all the nurses and doctors in the
charge of him have overcome many challenges.Above all，he is always willing to
encourage those patients feeling frustrated.
练二 续写增分技巧6——描写脚部动作
1.She dragged her feet as she unwillingly followed her parents home.
她拖着脚步很不情愿地跟随父母回了家。
2.At first，she planted her feet firmly to the ground and refused to move.
一开始，她把双脚牢牢地踩在地上，拒绝移动。
3.On arriving home，she pulled off her shoes and dashed into her bedroom，
barefoot and fast.
一到家，她就脱下鞋子，光着脚飞快地跑到自己卧室中。
4.We all jumped/leapt to our feet，dancing and screaming with joy.
我们都跳了起来，开心得欢呼雀跃。
5.Her father tapped/stamped his feet impatiently.
她爸爸不耐烦地跺着脚。
[小试身手]
Instantly I heard the news ， an idea floated into my mind ： it was a precious
opportunity for me to realize my dream of becoming a dancer！①I couldn’t wait to
share my decision with my mom.Then determined，②I leapt to my feet and dashed
home.However，instead of being keen to support me，Mom roared in a disappointed
voice，“Fancy that！You should ③attach great importance to science and study
hard in the hope of going to a key university！”
我一听到这个消息，脑海里就突然浮现出一个想法：这是我实现成为一名舞蹈
家梦想的一次难得的机会！我迫不及待地想和妈妈分享我的决定。下定决心后，我一跃而起，冲回家去。然而，妈妈没有热心地支持我，而是用失望的声音吼
道：“真想不到！你应该重视科学，努力学习，希望能考上重点大学！”
