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►第 10 讲 心理描写之积极情绪
（讲义）
目录
目标1 开心、高兴的常用词、句
目标2 兴奋、激动的常用词、句
目标3 美好事物的常用词、句
目标4 感恩、感动常用词、句
目标5 经典赏析
目标6 真题感悟
开心、高兴的常用词、句
in cheerful spirits心情愉快；
be content with 对 ... 感到满意；
be delighted at对 ... 很高兴；
set one's heart at rest使某人安心；
brighten sb's heart使某人心情愉快；
词组 be powerfully attracted to被强烈地吸引；
be joyful over/about因 ...而高兴；
dance/jump for joy高兴地跳起来；
tears of happiness flowing down流下幸福的泪水；
a satisfied look/an encouraging expression appeared on her face满意的表情/一个令人
鼓舞的表情出现在她的脸庞上；
【精彩典例】
1.（湖南师范大学附属中学2023-2024学年高三摸底考试）My children happily accepted and warmly
took Steven to visit his new home and discussed making room for Steven.
我的孩子们高兴地接受了邀请，并热情地带史蒂文去他的新家，讨论为史蒂文腾出空间。
2.Her face lit up with pleasure.(容光焕发)
3. A smile of understanding flashed across his face.
他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
4.A smile played around his mouth.他的嘴角挂着一丝笑意。
5.His eyes twinkled with pleasure.
他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
6.They ran around after each other, their faces irradiated with joy.
他们互相追逐着，脸上充满了喜悦。
7.I was pleased beyond description.
我高兴得难以形容。
8. I was overjoyed and ran three steps at once.
我欣喜若狂，三步并作两步就跑了过去。
9.She wore a shining smile on her f ace.
她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
10.She was overflowing with happiness. 她洋溢着幸福。
11. I was floating on air. 我高兴得飘飘然。
12.Flowers are smiling brightly, birds are crying joyfully. My heart is as sweet as honey.
花儿在微笑，鸟儿在快乐地鸣叫，我的心情就像吃了蜜一样的甜。
13.When I turned around, I found John was grinning.
我转过身时， 发现约翰正咧着嘴笑。
14.The moment I wanted to shout at my son, my wife smiled and winked at me.
我刚想对儿子大喊大叫，我妻子微笑着对我眨了眨眼。
15.When everyone started/began to clap their hands, Mary gave them a shy smile.
大家开始鼓掌时，玛丽冲他们羞涩地微笑了一下。
兴奋、激动的常用词、句
feel a mixture of excitement and happiness感觉既兴奋又开心；
can hardly conceal his excitement几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋的心情；
quite flushed with excitement激动的满脸通红；
to one’s excitement/thrill令某人激动的是；
词组 conceal/heal one’s excitement难掩激动；
contain one’s excitement抑制内心的激动；
a ripple/shiver/wave/surge of excitement一阵兴奋；
a scream of thrill/excitement激动的尖叫声；
cheer up振奋起来；
【精彩典例】
1.（广东省六校2023-2024学年高三联考试题） Never in my wildest dream did I imagine that I was indeedassigned the intern job to act on a school life show and my first public appearance on TV was in five days.
在我最疯狂的梦中，我从来没有想过我确实被分配了实习工作，在学校生活节目中表演，而我第一次在
电视上公开露面是在五天内。
2. （2024 届浙江省强基联盟适应性考试试题）He jumped high and hugged every teammate excitedly.
Everyone could see tears welling in his eyes.
他高高地跳起来，兴奋地拥抱着每个队友。每个人都能看到他的泪水。
3.（2024届江苏省苏州市南京师大实验学校调研）At the news, Dave had to hold back his tears of joy and
couldn' t help jumping up.
听到这个消息，戴夫不得不忍住喜悦的眼泪，忍不住跳了起来。
4.Her face is red, excitement in the heart, as a deer jumping with joy.
她激动的满脸通红，心里像有只小鹿，在欢乐地蹦跳。
5.There was a sparkle of excitement in her eyes.
她的眼中闪烁着激动的光芒。
6.I was so excited inside, like a rough sea.
我内心十分激动，像波涛汹涌的大海一样。
7.Jessica sighing with relief, the pair hugged each other and shed
杰西卡如释重负地叹了口气，两人互相拥抱，留下了兴奋的眼泪。
8.Singing happily, that girl gazed at everything around her with innocent eyes.
那个女孩高兴地唱着歌，用天真的眼神注视着 周围的一切。
9.Quite flushed with excitement were their ruddy faces, as they swung in the wind.
他们十分兴奋，脸颊通红，在风中摇摆。
10.He got flushed and excited all at once.
他突然脸颊通红，兴奋不已。
11.The boy stopped short, his heart thumping with excitement and anticipation.
男孩停住了脚步,他的心怦怦直跳,充满了兴奋和期待.
12.A shiver of excitement passed through her stomach when she heard the news.
听到这个消息,一阵激动的战栗传到她的胃里。
13.Her heart was fluttering with anxiety as well as excitement.
她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦乱跳。
14.His voice was choked with emotion.
他情绪激动,难以成声
15.Her heart was beating like a freed bird's as she leaned down and gathered the gifts to her breast.
当她俯下身子将礼物抱在胸前时,她的心就像获得自由的小鸟一样跳动着。
16.My heart is in my mouth whenever I hear the national anthem.
每当我听到国歌就激动不已。
17.Unable to contain his joy and excitement, he threw himself into my arms, murmuring, “Thank you, dear
mum.” 不能抑制住他的高兴和激动，他一下子扑到我的怀里，喃喃道:妈妈，辛苦了。
18.The teacher's encouragement warmed his heart. He felt a surge of excitement.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,他感到一阵兴奋。
19.She laughed, her eyes shining/glowing/sparkling with excitement.
她笑了，兴奋得两眼放光/闪烁着光芒。
20.A weight off her mind/A weight lifted from her mind, she couldn’t help shedding tears of joy,
her heart overcome with immense happiness and her mind conscious of neither time or space.
她如释重负，忍不住落下开心的热泪，她的心充满着巨大的幸福，她的头脑完全忘记了时间和空间。
美好事物的常用词、句
【精彩典例】
1. （2024届广东省四校高三第一次联考试题） With the sun peeking over the horizon, John’s face glowed
with gratitude.
太阳在地平线上掠过，约翰的脸上洋溢着感激之光。
2. There are many kinds of flowers blooming in the comer of the park even in autumn. I smell the fresh scent
with cool breeze. How sweet!
即使在秋日里，公园里都开满了各式各样的鲜花，香气伴着微风四处弥漫。多么香甜啊!
3. White clouds flow in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in broad ocean.
朵朵白云飘在蓝天中,就像安静的鱼儿在广阔的海洋中畅游。
4. I was immediately stunned by the azure sky with thick silver lining clouds drifting around.
我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。
5. The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks.
天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩飞舞。
6. The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.
太阳下山,温和的光线落在肩头。
感恩、感动常用词、句
appreciate sb for sth;因某事感激某人
shed tears of gratitude 流下感激的泪水
have a deep gratitude towards 对……深怀感激
with gratitude/appreciation 感激地
词组
owe sb. a lot/a great deal 非常感激某人
be deeply moved/touched by ... 被……深深感动
be touched beyond words被感动得说不出话来
be moved to tears 感动得落泪thank sb from the bottom of one’s heart 从心底感谢某人
can’t thank sb more/enough for doing sth对某人做了某事感激不尽
owe/give credit to sb; 归功于某人
be overwhelmed with excitement and gratitude 感激万分
a warm current rise in one’s heart 一股暖流涌上心头
express one’s thanks/ gratitude/ appreciation to 表达......的感激
【精彩典例】
1. （广东省执信中学 2023-2024 学年高三开学试题）Deeply touched, dad held the flowers tightly and
gently, and immediately gathered us into his arms, saying, “You are my best flowers!”
爸爸深深地感动，紧紧而温柔地握着花，立刻把我们抱在怀里，说：“你是我最好的花！”
2. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears.
我感激地点点头，眼睛闪闪发光忍住眼泪。
3. After hearing the explanation, Bernard was overwhelmed with excitement and gratitude.
听到这个解释后，伯纳德激动万分，感激万分。
4. Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heart gratitude.
她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
5. With tears streaming down her face, he ran to mum’s warm hug, and said thank to her.
他泪流满面，跑到妈妈温暖的拥抱前，对她说了声谢谢。
6. So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali. “Thank you! Ali.” Tears of joy welled up their eyes as the
brother and sister hugged tightly together.
她激动得向阿里扑去。“谢谢你!阿里。”喜悦的泪水涌了出来。兄弟姐妹紧紧拥抱在一起时。
7. Touched immensely, we failed to utter a single word, tears blurring our eyes.
感动无比，我们一句话也说不出来，泪水模糊了双眼。
8. Albert was touched by the warmth of their welcome.
阿尔伯特被他们的热烈欢迎而感动。
9. Deeply moved, I thanked him again.
我深为感动，再次向他表示感谢。
10.I was overwhelmingly moved by his heroic deed.
我被他的英雄事迹所感动。
11.His boundless generosity moved us deeply.
他的无限的慷慨深深地感动了我们.
经典赏析【模拟速递】
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为
150左右。
During the summer of 2021, Makyla Linder, like many kids, was bored. School was out and the spread of
COVID-19 meant that most people had to stay at home. So the 12-year-old began watching videos about baking (烘
焙) online. The only baking she had done before was helping out her grandmother. Soon, Makyla started baking on
her own. She made cupcakes and chocolate-covered strawberries. She tested them out on her family and friends
who came over.
For most kids, picking up a new hobby would have been enough. However, Makyla had bigger ideas. She
asked her mom, Chelsea Hatcher, if she could start selling the treats she had created. “I said OK but I kept pushing
it off. But she asked me a couple more times,” said Makyla’ s mom Chelsea Hatcher. Hatcher eventually agreed to
let her daughter start a baking business. She helped Makyla buy more baking supplies. Meanwhile, Makyla focused
on her baking research and worked on perfecting her recipes.
Makyla started out small, with new customers coming from recommendations. Then her mom helped her set
up a business called Dolci Desserts and made an Instagram page. The page has a telephone number and an email
address so people can place orders. The Dolci Desserts Instagram account has photos of the cakes for sale. There
are chocolate-covered pretzeis and white chocolate-covered Oreos. There are also Rice Krispie treats and banana
pudding. Makyla says she has about 30 customers. Many of them are returning customers.
“I like baking, and I like making my customers happy,” said Makyla. She also likes making her own money
and saving it. She even bought herself a pair of new shoes.
Makyla’s success doesn’t surprise her mom. “She works hard,” said Hatcher. Still, lots of people have been
amazed at a baker who’s so young. Generally, nobody will naturally expect that such a young teenager could make
so wonderful cakes and even run an online company.
Para. 1: Shabria Miller, a neighbor of the family knows Makyla well and wanted to show support.
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Para.2: Makyla has many customers like Shabria, who make her so busy that her mom has had to remind her to
slow down, especially when school started.
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【答案】
Shabria Miller, a neighbor of the family, knows Makyla well and wanted to show support. So she ordered
some cupcakes for her family. Some of Mrs Miller’s family were unsure about the sweets at first because they were
made by a middle school student. However, as soon as they tried them, they wanted Mrs Miller to order more.
Shabria has ordered from Dolci Desserts seven times already. She’s a fan of the treats, but even more of their
baker.“ They are as sweet as the little girl” she said .“We often can’t wait to taste her new products.”
Makyla has many customers like Shabria, who make her so busy that her mom has had to remind her to slow
down, especially when school started. Makyla bakes on evenings of Friday, Saturday, and Sunday. She focuses on
her schoolwork on the other evenings. She understands that school is more important. When she is not studying,
Makyla spends much time watching the Food Channel to get new ideas. She plans to keep running Dolci Desserts.
She really enjoys baking, but what she enjoys most is the feeling of making people happy. “I will continue”
she said “as long as people love my cakes.
【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。本篇文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了12岁的女孩Makyla Linder 开烘
焙店的故事。2021年夏天因为新冠疫情在家无聊，Makyla Linder开始在网上学习烘焙，后来在妈妈的帮助
下开了一家Dolci甜品的公司，并在Instagram上建了一个页面。开学后她合理安排学习与烘焙，继续经营
甜品店。她真的很喜欢烘焙，但她最喜欢的是让人快乐的感觉。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他们家的邻居Shabria Miller很了解Makyla，她想表示支持。”可知，第一段可描
写邻居Shabria Miller在Makyla的店里为家人定了蛋糕，品尝后家人非常喜欢，店里有了很多回头客。
②由第二段首句内容“Makyla有很多像Shabria这样的顾客，他们让她很忙，她的妈妈不得不提醒她慢下
来，尤其是在学校开学的时候。”可知，第二段可描写Makyla如何平衡学业与烘焙，以及她对甜品店的
打算。
2. 续写线索：邻居下单——邻居家人很喜欢——生意繁忙——平衡学习与烘焙——未来打算
3. 词汇激活：
行为类
①品尝：taste/sample
②支持：show support/support sb
③专心学习：focus on her schoolwork/concentrate on her studies
情绪类
①喜欢：enjoy/be fond of
②让……高兴：make sb happy/bring happiness to sb
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some of Mrs Miller’s family were unsure about the sweets at first because they were
made by a middle school student. (运用because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Makyla has many customers like Shabria, who make her so busy that her mom has had to remind
her to slow down, especially when school started. (运用who引导的非限制性定语从句、so…that…句式以及
when引导的状语从句)【高分句型3】She really enjoys baking, but what she enjoys most is the feeling of making people happy. (运用
what引导的主语从句以及并列连词but连接的并列句)
【2021年新高考I卷】
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.
How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French
toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff
knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They
decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the
French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into
the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going
smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna
threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it
cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge
boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the
stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But
Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she
caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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【答案】
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father’s appearing was like a savior
to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. Theymade the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to
success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and
perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her
that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The
children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
【导语】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动
手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父
亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。
②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到
孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。
2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助：help/assist
②完成：finish/complete
③拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①高兴：happy/delighted
②感动：moved/touched
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性
定语从句)
[高分句型2]. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (固定短
语not only…but (also)和强调句型)
