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结合北京高考英语题型（应用文 + 读后续写两大板块），区分格式、句式、场景，整理全套万能模板、高分句型、衔接语，适配北京卷评分标准，分档位使用，可直接背诵套用。
全篇控制篇幅，适配考场书写，标注加分表达和避坑提示。
一、应用文写作（北京必考，满分模板 100词左右）
北京卷应用文以书信为主：建议信、邀请信、介绍信、求助信、倡议书、通知六大高频题型，统一采用标准书信格式。
通用格式：称呼 → 开篇 → 主体 → 结尾 → 落款
（一）通用基础句式（所有书信通用，必背）
开头句
1. I'm writing to give you some suggestions / invite you / introduce sth to you.
（我写信是为了给你提建议/邀请你/向你介绍某物）
2. Glad to receive your letter. Knowing that you..., I'd like to share my opinions.
（很高兴收到你的来信，得知你……，我想分享我的看法）
过渡衔接句（加分）
- What's more / Besides 此外
- As far as I am concerned 在我看来
- In addition 另外
- It is a good choice to do sth 做某事是个不错的选择
结尾句（万能收尾）
1. I hope my advice will be of great help to you. 希望我的建议对你有所帮助。
2. Wish you a wonderful time / great success! 祝你玩得开心/取得成功！
3. Looking forward to your early reply. 期待你的早日回复。
（二）分题型专属模板（北京高频考题）
1. 建议信（近三年高频，重点背诵）
模板
Dear ______,
Glad to receive your letter. Learning that you _______, I'm writing to offer some practical suggestions.
First of all, I suggest that you ________, which can help you ________. Besides, it's a good idea to ________. What's more, you can also ________. These ways are very useful for you.
I sincerely hope my advice will work well for you. Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
例句填充参考（环保/活动/学习通用）
Learning that you are preparing for an environmental activity...
2. 邀请信（活动、比赛、展览常用）
模板
Dear ______,
How is everything going? I'm glad to invite you to take part in ________.
The activity will be held +时间+地点. During the activity, we will ________. I believe you will have a great time and learn a lot from it.
Would you like to come? I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 介绍信（介绍人物、城市、文化、科技成就，北京真题常考）
模板
Dear ______,
I'm delighted to know that you want to learn about ________. Now let me introduce it to you.
________ is very famous. It stands for ________. Not only can it ________, but it also ________. It plays an important role in our daily life and culture.
I hope my introduction can help you have a clear understanding.
Yours,
Li Hua
4. 求助/咨询信
模板
Dear ______,
I'm writing to turn to you for help. I have some trouble in ________.
I really don't know what to do. Could you please give me some useful advice? Besides, I wonder if you can tell me ________.
I would appreciate it if you can help me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
5. 倡议书（校园/社会公益类）
模板
Dear friends,
Nowadays, ________ has become a serious problem / is very important for us. So we are calling on everyone to take action.
First, we should ________. Second, it's our duty to ________. Small actions can make a big difference.
Let's work together to ________!
Students' Union
6. 书面通知（Notice，格式固定）
模板
Notice
To enrich our school life, an activity about ________ will be held in 地点 on 时间.
During the activity, we will ________. Everyone is welcome to take part in it. It is a good chance for us to ________.
Please get ready and come on time.
Students' Union
二、读后续写（北京高考重难点，高分模板+场景句型）
读后续写核心：情节连贯 + 情绪描写 + 动作/环境描写 + 主旨升华，两段续写，每段80词左右。
（一）万能行文结构
第一段模板（承接原文 + 情节推进）
Hearing what happened, I felt ________. Without hesitation, I ________. At that moment, ________. We tried our best to ________. Gradually, things got better and better.
第二段模板（结局 + 感悟升华，必拿高分）
Finally, everything returned to normal. Looking back on the experience, I realized that ________. From then on, I understood that ________. This unforgettable experience will stay in my mind forever.
（二）高分细分场景句型（直接套用）
1. 情绪描写（替换简单词汇，大幅提分）
- 开心：A big smile appeared on my face. / My heart was filled with joy.
- 紧张/害怕：My heart beat wildly. / I felt so nervous that I could hardly breathe.
- 感动：Tears welled up in my eyes. / I was deeply moved.
- 失落/难过：I felt upset and helpless.
2. 动作描写（故事核心）
- 立刻行动：Without thinking twice, I rushed to... 我不假思索冲向……
- 互相帮助：We reached out to help each other. 我们伸出援手互相帮助。
- 停下脚步：I stopped and turned around. 我停下脚步转过身。
3. 环境描写（烘托氛围，加分项）
- 阳光：The warm sunshine shone down on us. 暖阳洒在我们身上。
- 夜色：The sky gradually turned dark. 天色渐渐暗了下来。
- 微风：A gentle wind blew softly. 微风徐徐。
4. 哲理升华句（结尾万能，适配所有主题：善良、坚持、友谊、勇气）
1. Kindness is the most beautiful light in the world. 善良是世间最美的光。
2. As long as we hold on, we will finally succeed. 只要坚持，终会成功。
3. True friendship will never fade away. 真正的友谊永不褪色。
4. Courage helps us overcome all difficulties. 勇气助我们战胜一切困难。
三、高分替换词&衔接短语（全题型通用，告别低级词汇）
1. 动词/形容词替换（阅卷老师偏爱）
1. many → a large number of / numerous 许多
2. important → vital / significant / crucial 重要的
3. good → excellent / remarkable 优秀的
4. help → assist / be helpful to 帮助
5. happy → delighted / joyful 开心的
6. think → consider / hold the view that 认为
2. 逻辑衔接词（串联全文，提升流畅度）
递进
Besides / In addition / What's more 此外，而且
转折
However / On the contrary 然而，相反
因果
Therefore / As a result 因此，结果
总结
In a word / All in all 总而言之
四、考场硬性规则&避坑（北京卷扣分点提醒）
1. 格式优先：书信称呼、落款、通知标题必须规范，格式错误直接扣2-3分；
2. 字数控制：应用文90–110词，读后续写每段70–90词，不要过长/过短；
3. 时态统一：故事类多用一般过去时，建议/介绍类多用一般现在时；
4. 书写：衡水体，字母工整，不要连笔、涂改，卷面额外加分；
5. 句式搭配：长短句结合，不要通篇简单句，适当使用 定语从句、状语从句 拔高档次。
五、完整版组合范文（套用示范）
建议信（套用模板成品）
Dear Tom,
Glad to receive your letter. Learning that you will take part in an environmental activity, I'm writing to offer some practical suggestions.
First of all, I suggest you organize a garbage classification game, which can raise people's environmental awareness. Besides, it's a good idea to plant trees in the park. What's more, you can also hand out leaflets to call on people to protect the environment.
I sincerely hope my advice will work well for you. Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
近期北京高考英语应用文（书信）满分范文，覆盖近三年真题，100词左右、地道高级、可直接背诵；再附万能模板+高频句型，冲刺20分满分。
✅ 2025 北京卷（倡议建议信）
题目：李华给Jim回信，建议联合国青少年倡议主题（环保/健康/文化）
满分范文（环保主题）
Dear Jim,
Glad to hear you’re joining the UN proposal campaign! I strongly suggest focusing on “Reducing Single-Use Plastics.”
Plastic pollution severely harms marine life and ecosystems, which is a global concern. You can propose promoting reusable bags and biodegradable alternatives in schools. Many teenagers are leading eco-friendly projects, so your idea will inspire more action. Besides, the UN emphasizes sustainable development, making this topic highly relevant.
I’m sure your proposal will stand out. Looking forward to your success!
Yours,
Li Hua
✅ 2024 北京卷（介绍信）
题目：给Jim介绍中国发展成就（高铁/科技/文化）
满分范文（高铁主题）
Dear Jim,
Glad to hear you want to introduce China’s achievements in your school newspaper column Asia Today.
I strongly recommend writing about high-speed trains, a symbol of China’s technology. They run at over 300 km/h, greatly shortening travel time and connecting people closely. High-speed trains reflect China’s rapid development and have become a bridge linking China and the world.
Hope your article will be a wonderful window for your schoolmates to know China.
Yours,
Li Hua
✅ 2023 北京卷（活动建议信）
题目：给Jim建议“绿色北京”社团活动形式与内容
满分范文
Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear you’re planning a “Green Beijing” club activity. Here are my suggestions.
For the form, I recommend an outdoor walking tour to explore Beijing’s green spaces, such as parks and ecological gardens. For the content, you can organize garbage classification games and tree-planting activities. These interactive activities help participants experience eco-friendly efforts and raise environmental awareness.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Wish your activity a great success!
Yours,
Li Hua
✅ 北京英语应用文「万能满分模板」（直接套）
开头（3句）
1. Glad to hear from you! / I’m writing to give you some suggestions about…
2. Knowing that you plan to…, I’m happy to share my ideas.
3. Here are my detailed suggestions.
主体（2段，每段2-3句）
- 建议+理由：I suggest you…, because… / It’s a good idea to…, which can…
- 补充细节：Besides, you can also… / What’s more, …
结尾（2句）
1. Hope my suggestions will be helpful.
2. Looking forward to your success! / Wish you a good time!
✅ 高频高级替换词（加分必背）
- 重要：crucial → vital → significant
- 建议：suggest → recommend → advise
- 帮助：help → benefit → assist
- 许多：many → numerous → a large number of
- 因此：so → therefore → thus
