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2024 年高考新高考 I 卷续写解析
写作 【解析】
本题要求读完所给的故事的
第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所
前半段，根据其内容和所给段落开
给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
头语续写两段，使之够成一篇完整
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable 的短文。
evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna
为了形成合理的情节逻辑，考
and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a
生在阅读原文时要搞清楚故事中
big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a
的人物的性格特点和故事的情节
half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before
发展，清楚要解决的问题，实际上
the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I 就是要续写的内容。
got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport
本题所给材料：主人公“我”
building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank
在旅途中的一段经历，遇到了出租
without a second thought.
车司机Gunter，根据提示语暗示，
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I
在作者无法支付车费和时间紧急
was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus
的情况下，他们约定四天后再见面
station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem,
时付款。
so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked
confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished 第一段开头语：I ran back to
out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a Gunter and told him the bad
heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a news.根据逻辑关系判断，无法取
century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. 现金，无法付账；公共汽车很快
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we 就要发车，“I”不能错过这辆
rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a 车，所以，两人通过商量取得互
long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter 信，“I”承诺四天后付款。
parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and
第二段开头语：Four days later,
looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made
when I was back in Vienna, I
it,” he said.
called Gunter as promised. 按照
Just then I realized that I had zero cash in my
承诺“I”见面后付款，并感谢
wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out
Gunter的善良。升华部分应该是
my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but
人际交往中的互助和互信。
the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of
helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue
thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the
waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance,
was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a
mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only
to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry.”
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad
news._____________________________Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I
called Gunter as promised.______________________
【应试点拨】 【联想词汇】
1. 分析原文过程中要明确人物的姓名、性别、人物的性 nervous explained offered
格特点、相互关系，理清故事发展的关键情节，明白需 relieved kindness boarded
要解决的问题和可能的解决方案，等等。比如本题中， promised paid present inspired
Gunter的工作是出租车司机。为了送顾客到自己不熟悉
taxi fare wait for my return
的公共汽车车站打电话问朋友，到了车站后他的开心微
spreading kindness reflected on
笑，在无法得到车费后的相信顾客并达成协议，这些都
spared my trouble built our faith
是反映出他善良淳朴的性格特点。而“I”急着赶最后
一班车，不能耽误参加会议，但无法付出租车账单，遇
到Gunter的善良，非常感动。续写部分就要描写两人如
【思路和提纲】
何简短交流达成协议，并在四天后如何履行了协议。
1. His reaction and my offer.
2. 要注意续写中的“变化的过程”，比如人物的心理 2. Our discuss and deal.
3. I promised and departure.
变化的过程、解决问题的方式方法的形成和生效的过
4. We met and I paid.
程、人生观和价值观形成的过程，等等。这个过程就是
5. My thanks and praise.
层次安排的依据。一般我们安排层次要考虑逻辑关系和
6. Kindness warmed the world.
表达的需要，比如：一个互相的交流回合一个层次、一
个方法的试用过程一个层次、一个情绪或心理活动的变
化一个层次，等等。 【参考范文】
3. 注意三处衔接和一处升华。第一层和第一句提示语 I ran back to Gunter and
的衔接；第三层和第二句提示语的衔接；第四层和第二 told him the bad news. He was
句提示语的衔接；第六层升华。衔接要合理并且紧密。 obviously nervous, which made me
升华要依据故事的亮点、对人物的影响、宣扬积极正面 naturally guess that he was worried
的人生哲理和传递正能量。简单说就是“三层因果不加 about the taxi fare, so I quickly
戏，因果清晰正能量”。 explained my situation and offered
to give him something equal to the
4. 提纲和扩写提纲，注意词数的限制。考场上时间有
value of the fare. But Gunter
限，精神紧张，如果没有明确的构思和写作方向，不容
seriously refused and said he could
易得高分。扩写提纲过程中注意层次之间的连接，用好
wait for my conference ending and
连接词。平时的练习要注重表达方式的积累，使用复合
my next return to Vienna. Relieved
句和非谓语形式为文章添彩。每一层最好开展成两长一
and touched by his kindness, I
短的句子，容易形成较完整的情节，并且能保障住150
quickly put down my phone number
词的要求。
for him and asked for his. I boarded
5. 词汇和句式的使用一定要服务于表达的需要，不能 the bus as I promised to call and pay
仅仅堆砌现成的已有语料。 back the taxi fare.
Four days later, when I
was back in Vienna, I called
【原文译文】 Gunter as promised. He came to
meet me and greeted me with his
我在九月的一个寒冷、潮湿、难忘的夜晚遇见了甘
usual big smile. I paid him with a
特。我原计划乘飞机去维也纳，然后乘公共汽车去布拉
mountain of thanks and offered him
格参加一个会议。由于一场大风暴，我乘坐的航班延误
a special present which he accepted
了一个半小时。我抵达维也纳时，最后一班开往布拉格
delightedly. We talked for a
的公共汽车仅剩30分钟就要出发了。我一下飞机，就像
moment, during which I sent the
疯了一样穿过机场大楼，毫不犹豫地跳上了第一辆出租
praise and regards from my
车。
colleagues when they heard of the
就是那时，我遇到了甘特。我告诉他我要去哪里， story and he said that inspired him to
但他说他没听说过那个公共汽车站。我想是我的发音出 continue spreading kindness. After
了问题，所以我又更慢地解释了一遍，但他仍然看起来 our departure, I still reflected on the
很困惑。正当我要放弃的时候，甘特摸索出他的小手 whole incident: how a stranger’s
机，给一个朋友打了个电话。激烈的讨论似乎持续了一
kindness spared my trouble and how
个世纪，然后甘特放下手机，启动了汽车。
it built our faith in each other.最终，距发车只剩下两分钟的时候，我们开进了汽
车站。谢天谢地，还有很长的队伍在等着上车。甘特把
【范文译文】
出租车停在公共汽车后面，转过头来，满脸笑容地看着
我说：“我们到了。” 我跑回甘特那里，告诉他这个
坏消息。他显然很紧张，这让我很
就在那时，我意识到我的钱包里没有现钞。我快速
自然地猜到他是在担心出租车的
微笑了一下作为歉意，同时掏出我的葡萄牙银行卡。他
车费，所以我赶紧向他解释了我的
试了好几次，但那台读卡机就是没反应。当我看到排队
情况，并提出给他留下一些与车费
上公共汽车的人越来越少时，一种无助的感觉涌上心
等值的东西。但甘特严肃地拒绝
头。
了，说他可以等我的会议结束，等
这时，甘特指着汽车站的候车厅。在入口处，有一 我下次回维也纳。他的善意让我感
台取款机。我跳下他的车，疯狂地向那台机器跑去，把 到宽慰和感动，我赶紧写下我的电
卡插进去，却看到上面写着:“故障。抱歉。” 话号码，也问他要了他的电话号
码。我上了车，答应给他打电话还
车费。
四天后，当我回到维也纳时，
我如约打电话给甘特。他来见我，
用他惯常的灿烂笑容迎接我。我一
边付车费一边对他不停表示感谢。
我送给他一份特别的礼物，他高兴
地接受了。我们聊了一会儿，我向
他转达了同事们听到这个故事后
对他的的赞美和问候。他说这激励
了他继续传播善良。在我们分手
后，我仍然回想着整个事件:一个
陌生人的善意是如何为我省去了
麻烦，又是如何建立了我们对彼此
的信任。
