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Unit1 What's the matter
单元话题（健康与救护）写作满分范文18篇
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情
况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练6篇
1．小明在实践课上不小心割伤了自己，请你依据所学给他列举 3 条或以上建议，帮他处理伤口。
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【答案】例文：
First, run it under water. Next, put some medicine on the cut. Then put a bandage on it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：按照要求写出处理伤口的三点建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍第一点建议即在水下冲洗；
第二步，介绍第二点建议即在伤口上擦药；
第三步，介绍第三点建议即绑上绷带。
[亮点词汇]①Next接下来
②Then然后
[高分句型]
①Next, put some medicine on the cut.（祈使句）
②Then put a bandage on it.（祈使句）
1．你的朋友Jack由于长时间在手机(mobile phone)上玩游戏，现在头痛、眼睛痛、背痛，并且睡不
好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并提出你的建议。
要求: 1. 内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 书写正确，句子通顺；
3. 词数：60左右。
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【答案】例文
Jack is my friend. He likes playing games on his mobile phone very much. He often sits in the same way
for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesn’t sleep well at night. So
he feels tired every day. I think he should take breaks away from the mobile phone. He shouldn’t use the mobile
phone for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night. I think if he has a
good rest, he will feel better soon.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。针对朋友Jack的症状提出建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。先描述Jack因长时间使用手机而产生的一系列问题，接着针对此问
题提出相应的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
1．随着人们生活水平的提高，掌握一些卫生保健、急救护理知识成了现代社会的新时尚。某校针对
“学生了解急救知识的方式”，对1000名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种方式的好处。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 参考词汇仅供参考。
WORD BANK
survey n.调查
first aid 急救
Our school did a survey among 1,000 students about their favorite ways to learn first aid. Here are the results.
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【答案】One Possible Version:
Our school did a survey among 1,000 students about their favorite ways to learn first aid. Here are the results.
38% of the students choose to take first aid courses to learn first aid, and 25% like reading health magazines. 22%
of the students like learn-ins first aid through watching TV and the others choose other ways.As for me, taking first aid courses is my favorite way to learn first aid. Last sum-mar vacation, I took a first
aid course. With the help of my first aid teachers, I learned how to give first aid when someone had a nosebleed,
had a fever or cut his knee. The teachers were friendly and they made the lessons very interesting. After the course
came to an end, I learned a lot and found it really important and necessary to know how to give first and.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求包含图表信息，并结合个人经历谈论好处。
[写作步骤]
第一步：第一段阐述图表内容；
第二步：第二段阐述自己喜欢的方式并结合自己的经历说一说其好处。
[亮点词汇]
①as for sb至于某人
②with the help of...在……的帮助下
③come to an end结束
[高分句型]
①As for me, taking first aid courses is my favorite way to learn first aid.（动名词作主语）
②With the help of my first aid teachers, I learned how to give first aid when someone had a nosebleed, had a fever
or cut his knee.（when的时间状语从句）
③After the course came to an end, I learned a lot and found it really important and necessary to know how to give
first and.（find it adj. to do句型）
1．校园安全，人人有责。每年三月份最后一周的星期一是全国中小学生安全教育日。某英文网站正
在开展以“校园安全”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对校园急
救课的看法以及你在校园安全防范方面的一些做法。
提示词语：helpful, learn, run, warm up
提示问题：
What do you think of the first aid class in school?
How do you keep safe at school?
I’m glad to talk something about keeping safe in school. We should take it seriously.
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【答案】例文
I’m glad to talk something about keeping safe in school. We should take it seriously. In my opinion, the first
aid class in school is really important and helpful. I learnt a lot from the class. If someone is hurt, I can give him
basic medical help now. To keep safe at school, I always follow the school safety rules. For example, I never run
in my classroom and never enter the classroom with my classmates side by side. In PE class, I listen to the teacher
and warm up first carefully. I believe if everybody doesn’t take risks of accidents, we can be safe at school.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达对急救课程的看法；
第二步，阐述如何在校园里保证安全；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②for example比如
③warm up热身
[高分句型]
①If someone is hurt, I can give him basic medical help now.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I believe if everybody doesn’t take risks of accidents, we can be safe at school.（宾语从句）
1．学校近期鼓励各年级积极组织远足活动，增强学生的身体素质。校英文广播站就此开展关于
“远足安全”的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇文章向广播站投稿。
1.参加远足活动时的注意事项（带上必备物品，不要单独行动）；
2.发生事故后如何急救；
3. ……
WORD BANK
hiking n. 远足
a first aid kit一套急救用品
dress the wound包扎伤口要求：
1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Hiking can help us relax and keep fit, but we need to pay attention to our safety too. Here is some advice.
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【答案】例文
Hiking can help us relax and keep fit, but we need to pay attention to our safety too. Here is some
advice.
First, bring food, water, a smartphone and a first aid kit before setting off. Second, don’t go
hiking alone. Do it with our friends, classmates or family members and try to protect ourselves.
We should know how to give first aid when an accident happens. For example, if someone falls
when climbing up rocks, let the person lie down and dress the wound in time. Also, call for help
when necessary.
Remember, safety always comes first. Keeping cool can save our life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕提示展开作文，注意适当发挥，使文章语言表达准确、语义通顺连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，介绍远足活动的注意事项，包括带上必备物品、不要单独行动；并说明发生事故时应该如何急
救。
第三步，书写结尾，表达安全第一。
[亮点词汇]
①set off 出发
②alone 单独
③lie down 躺下
④come first 第一
[高分句型]①For example, if someone falls when climbing up rocks, let the person lie down and dress the wound in time (if
引导条件状语从句)
②Keeping cool can save our life. (动名词短语作主语)
1．假如你是李华，目前你们学校正在进行安全教育活动，并征集发生在学生身边的有关安全的事情，
请你根据以下提示，给校广播站投稿。
1. 周五放学，你看到几个男孩子在马路上踢足球。
2. 一位老人提着篮子经过，被足球击中。
3. 老人的篮子和帽子掉落在地上。
4. 孩子们向老人认错。
5. 你认为……。
要求：
1. 词数：80 词左右。
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Nowadays our school are teaching us to stay away from danger as the problem of safety is becoming more
and more serious. As a middle school student, we should always be careful. However, I saw
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If everyone tries to obey the traffic rules, I’m sure that we can enjoy a much safer life.
【答案】例文
Nowadays our school are teaching us to stay away from danger as the problem of safety is becoming more
and more serious. As a middle school student, we should always be careful. However, I saw some boys playing
football on the road on my way home from school on Friday. An old man carrying a basket passed by and was hit
by a football. The old man’s basket and hat fell to the ground. The children confessed their mistakes to the old
man. I think we should all learn from these children. When we make mistakes, we should take the initiative to
admit them. I don’t think we should play on the road. If everyone tries to obey the traffic rules, I’m sure that we
can enjoy a much safer life.
【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“你认为……”一项，适当添加细节，
并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出作为中学生应该重视安全问题；
第二步，具体阐述曾亲眼目睹的危险事件；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①As a middle school student作为一个中学生
② learn from sb.向某人学习
③ fall to the ground掉到地上
④make mistakes犯错误
[高分句型]
①An old man carrying a basket passed by and was hit by a football. (动词现在分词作定语和一般过去时的被动
语态)
② I don’t think we should play on the road. (否定前移)
进阶拓展训练6篇
1．假如你是李华，在昨天下午放学回家路上看到一起交通事故。请根据图片和文字提示，结合自己
对交通安全的认识用英文写一篇日记。
要求：
1.描述事故经过，适当展开想象，涵盖参考词汇；
2.根据需要增加细节，以使情节合理，行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息；
4.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Diary,Yesterday afternoon, I was on my way home from school. Suddenly,
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【答案】例文
Dear Diary,
Yesterday afternoon, I was on my way home from school. Suddenly, I heard a thump. A bicycle hit a car. The
young man on the bike was seriously injured. Maybe the young man was looking at his cell phone while riding his
bike. The car driver hurriedly called 120 for help and 110. About 20 minutes later, a police car and an ambulance
arrived. The wounded were carried to an ambulance and taken to hospital. The police recorded the details of the
accident, and the car driver told the police what he knew.
I think everyone should pay attention to the surrounding traffic. I hope the young man will get better soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为日记；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：本题要求根据图片和文字提示，结合自己对交通安全的认识写一篇日记，考生需要注意不要遗
漏自己对于交通安全的认识。
[写作步骤]
第一步，认真看懂图片内容，先介绍清楚事故发生的起因、经过和结果；
第二步，说明自己对交通安全的认识以及自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
① call for help打电话求救
② the details of ……的细节
③ pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
① Maybe the young man was looking at his cell phone while riding his bike.（while引导的时间状语从句）
② The police recorded the details of the accident, the car driver told the police what he knew.（what引导的宾语
从句）
1．请根据表格中的提示，写一篇关于火灾的报道。词数10左右，可以适当发挥。A report about a fire
时间 昨天下午三点钟
地点 李先生家
房子着火时，李先生的父亲独自一人在家，在客厅看电视；他很害
经过
怕，拨打了119电话；最终消防员们将他救出；他的右手臂受了伤。
逃生提示 给出火灾逃生提示（至少两点）。
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【答案】例文
A report about a fire
There was a fire at Mr Li’s home at three o’clock yesterday afternoon. When the house caught fire, his father
was alone at home, and he was watching TV in the living room. He was very frightened and he called 119. Finally
the firemen helped him out. His right arm was hurt.
Fire is very dangerous. We should be careful with it. When our building is on fire, try to get out as soon as
possible. We should use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground to protect ourselves
from thick smoke.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于火灾的报道的介绍要点，适当添加
细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“写一篇关于火灾的报道”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、经过等”几个方面重点介绍火灾的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，介绍“我们应该用湿毛巾盖住我们的嘴和鼻子，保持贴近地面，以保护自己免受浓
烟的伤害”的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①catch fire着火；
②help sb out帮助某人摆脱困境；③as…as possible尽可能……；
④protect…from…保护……不受……的伤害。
[高分句型]
①There was a fire at Mr Li’s home at three o’clock yesterday afternoon. (“there be”句型)
②When our building is on fire, try to get out as soon as possible. (when引导的时间状语从句)
1．安全对每个人都很重要。中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。请你根据以下提示，
写一篇英语短文，谈谈中学生应该如何保护自己。（注意：文中不能出现考生真实的姓名、校名和老师
名，否则不得分）
内容提示：
（1）交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红灯；
（2）食品安全：吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品；
（3）活动安全：进行体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己，不独自下河游泳。
参考词汇：focus n. 焦点；obey v. 遵守；traffic rules 交通规则；permission n. 准许
要求：
（1）短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）词数：80左右。
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【答案】例文
Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are the flowers of our country, so students’
safety is the focus of everyone’s attention. Here are some ways to keep safe.
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Never cross the street when the traffic lights are red.
Second, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruit and vegetables.Furthermore, don’t hurt ourselves while we are exercising. It’s dangerous to swim in the river alone, so
don’t go swimming without permission.
In a word, life is all, and safety is the first. As students, please remember all the above. They’re really
important to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，重视安全；
第二步，介绍中学生应该如何保护自己。
[亮点词汇]
①obey the traffic rules遵守交通规则
②healthy food健康的食物
[高分句型]
Never cross the street when the traffic lights are red.（时间状语从句）
1．安全（safety）是头等大事，作为中学生，日常生活中要注意校园、交通以及防震等各方面的安
全。请你用英语写一篇文章，简要介绍以上各方面的注意事项，词数不少于80，要点如下：
1. 交通安全：上学路上不要并排骑自行车；遇到红灯要停下；不能骑太快，更不要骑车时听音乐。
2. 校园安全：不要追逐打闹；万一严重受伤时，先保持不动，确保温暖舒适，然后再寻求帮助。
3. 地震时：先躲在桌子下面，不要跳楼；一旦停止震动，立刻离开楼转移到操场上。
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【答案】例文
Safety is of the utmost importance. As middle school students, we should pay attention to safety in various
aspects of our daily lives, such as on campus, in traffic, and during earthquakes.Firstly, when it comes to traffic safety, we should not ride bicycles side by side on the way to school. When
we encounter a red light, we must stop. We should not ride too fast and never listen to music while riding.
Secondly, for campus safety, we should avoid chasing and playing around. In case of serious injuries, we
should stay still first to ensure warmth and comfort, and then seek help.
Finally, in the event of an earthquake, we should hide under a desk at first and never jump off a building.
Once the shaking stops, we should leave the building immediately and move to the playground.
In short, safety is crucial. We should always keep these safety tips in mind and follow them strictly to
ensure our own safety.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括交通安全、校园安全和地震时的应对措施。考生需围绕这些要点展
开，确保内容全面，同时可以适当添加细节以增强文章的实用性和可读性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头可以直接点题，强调安全对于中学生而言是头等大事；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容：交通安全方面；校园安全方面；地震时应对方面。
第三步，书写结语。总结全文，再次强调安全对于中学生日常生活的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①of the utmost importance至关重要的
②pay attention to注意
③In case of 假如，如果发生
④move to 移动到
[高分句型]
①When we encounter a red light, we must stop. (时间状语从句)
②Once the shaking stops, we should leave the building immediately and move to the playground. (时间状语从
句)
1．安全对每个人都很重要。你校团委决定组织一次以安全为主题的英语征文比赛。请以“How to
keep safe at school”为题写一篇征文，谈谈你的看法和建议，内容包括：
1. 了解学校里的安全注意事项（如在教室里、楼梯上能做或不能做什么）；
2. 掌握必要的避险措施（如发生地震或火灾时要怎么做）；
3. 你的呼吁或倡议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：security considerations（安全注意事项），chase（vi.追逐打闹），grasp（vt.掌握），
emergency knowledge（避险知识）
How to keep safe at school
Safety is very important to everyone. Do you know how to keep safe at school?
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How to keep safe at school
Safety is very important to everyone. Do you know how to keep safe at school? First, we need to
understand the security considerations at school. In the classroom, we should not run or play roughly. On the
stairs, we must not chase each other and should walk carefully. Second, we need to grasp necessary emergency
knowledge. In case of an earthquake or fire, we should stay calm, follow the teachers’ instructions, and evacuate
in an orderly manner. I advocate that everyone takes safety drills seriously and participates in safety drills actively.
Let’s make our school a safer place together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍了解学校安全注意事项的重要性，包括在教室和楼梯上的行为规范；第二步，强调掌握必要的安全知识的重要性，如发生地震或火灾时的应对措施；
第三步，发出倡议，呼吁大家认真对待并积极参加安全演练。
[亮点词汇]
①in case of如果，万一
②stay calm保持冷静
③follow the teachers’ instructions听从老师的指示
④in a/an…manner以一种……的方式
⑤take sth. seriously认真对待某事物
⑥participate in参加
[高分句型]
①I advocate that everyone takes safety drills seriously and participates in safety drills actively.（that引导的宾语
从句）
②Let’s make our school a safer place together.（祈使句）
1．近几年来，校园欺凌(school bullying) 事件时有发生，学会自我保护是我们中学生需要具备的一
种意识和能力，我们应该珍惜生命，注意自己的人身安全，做好自我保护。请以“How Can We Protect
Ourselves”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈在生活中我们应该怎样自我保护。
提示：
1. 不单独游泳；
2. 谨慎交友；
3. 遇到危险报警或向老师求助；
4. 有健康的饮食习惯；
5. 遵守交通规则(并举例说明) ；
6. 上下楼时不要相互推搡 (push each other) 。
要求:
1. 词数80—100。
2. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥
How Can We Protect Ourselves
School bullying has happened frequently in recent years. Self-protection is one of the most important skills
for us teenagers. We should cherish
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【答案】例文：
How Can We Protect Ourselves
School bullying has happened frequently in recent years. Self-protection is one of the most important skills
for us teenagers. We should cherish life. Here are some suggestions.
First, in summer we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone. Second, we should be careful when we
make friends, especially online. Third, if we are in danger, we must call the police or ask teachers for help in time
so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. What’s more, we should obey the
traffic rules, such as waiting for the green light and walking on the sidewalk. Last, don’t push each other when
going upstairs or downstairs at school.
In short, we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【详解】[总体分析]
②题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法
错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：阐述自我保护的重要性；
第二步：展开阐述如何进行自我保护；
第三步：书写结语，呼应标题。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends交朋友
②in danger在危险中
③traffic rules交通规则
[高分句型]
①Third, if we are in danger, we must call the police or ask teachers for help in time so that we can keep ourselvessafe.（If引导的条件状语从句；so that目的状语从句）
②Last, don’t push each other when going upstairs or downstairs at school.（when引导时间状语从句）
能力综合实践6篇
1．安全无小事。学校将举行“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”的主题班会，请你写一篇演讲稿，谈
谈你的看法。
要点：1. 不同场景火灾发生时的注意事项；
2. 给出你的建议。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2. 文章结构清晰，内容需包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
3. 注意演讲稿的格式，词数90词左右。
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【答案】例文
Ladies and Gentlemen, teachers and fellow students,
Good afternoon! Today, our topic is “How to Protect Yourself in a Fire.” Safety is no small matter,
and knowing what to do in a fire can save lives.
In different situations, our actions vary. If a fire breaks out in a classroom, stay calm, cover your
mouth with a wet cloth to avoid smoke, and follow your teacher’s instructions to evacuate quickly. In a
dormitory, always ensure the exit is not blocked and know the fire escape route. If trapped, use a wet
blanket to seal the door and call for help.
My advice: Always keep a fire extinguisher accessible and learn how to use it. Practice fire drills
regularly and never play with fire. Remember, prevention is better than cure. Stay alert and stay safe.
Thank you for your attention. Let’s make our school a safer place!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇演讲稿。②时态：主要使用一般现在时。
③提示：根据题目要求，演讲稿需要包含不同场景火灾发生时的注意事项以及给出建议，同时要注意演
讲稿的格式，包括称呼、正文和结尾，并控制词数在90词左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头部分需要明确演讲的主题，并强调安全的重要性，引起听众的注意；
第二步，主体部分需要详细阐述在不同场景下火灾发生时的注意事项，如教室、宿舍等，并给出具体的
行动建议。同时，也要提出自己的建议，如保持灭火器可触及、学习使用方法等；
第三步，结尾部分需要感谢听众的聆听，并呼吁大家共同努力，使学校成为一个更安全的地方。
[亮点词汇]
①safety is no small matter 安全无小事
②thank you for 为某事感谢
③prevention is better than cure 预防胜于治疗
[高分句型]
①If a fire breaks out in a classroom, stay calm, cover your mouth with a wet cloth to avoid smoke, and follow
your teacher’s instructions to evacuate quickly.（条件状语从句和并列句）
②Remember, prevention is better than cure. Stay alert and stay safe.（祈使句和并列句）
1．某英文报正在举行以“防火安全教育”为主题的征文活动，假如你是八 (1) 班的李华，你打算
以“Away from Fires”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下提示，完成征文。
1. 遇到火灾，保持冷静，不要惊慌，尽快离开房间；
2. 尽量用湿毛巾捂住口鼻，弯腰低姿前进；
3. ……
要求：(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)词数80~100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Away from Fires
Safety comes first. I think it’s necessary for our middle school students to know some tips about how to
stay away from fires.
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【答案】例文Away from Fires
Safety comes first. I think it’s necessary for our middle school students to know some tips about how to
stay away from fires.
When a fire breaks out, stay calm and don’t panic. Try to leave the room as quickly as you can. Next, take a
wet towel to cover your nose and mouth tightly. Keep low to the ground as you move forward, this can help you
avoid the thick smoke. Also, never use the lift. Stairs are much safer. Finally, call 119 for help when you get to a
safe place.
In conclusion, by following these rules, we can better protect ourselves from fires. Let’s remember these
tips and stay away from fires.
Hope all of us can have a safe and happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体阐述如何远离火灾；
第二步，书写总结，说明遵循这些规则，我们可以更好地保护自己。
[亮点词汇]
①stay calm保持冷静
②avoid避免
③in conclusion总而言之
[高分句型]
①When a fire breaks out, stay calm and don’t panic. (when引导的时间状语从句)
1．安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生，我们可能会遇到哪些安全问题？该怎样处理并做
好自我保护呢？学校决定组织一次安全教育主题班会，请根据以下要点提示，以“How to Keep Safe”为题
写一篇英文发言稿。
提示：1. 不单独游泳；2. 谨慎交友；3. 遇到危险报警或向老师求助；4. 饮食及交通安全等。
要求：结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥；文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息；词数：80
左右；文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Keep Safe
Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves.
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例文
How to Keep Safe Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves.
Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
Firstly, we should be careful while doing sports. Remember not to swim in the river alone.
Secondly, we’d better not make friends online. We must stay away from dangerous people around.
Thirdly, if we get into trouble, we must keep calm and then call the police, the teachers or parents
for help. What’s more, we must follow the traffic rules. We should pay attention to the food safety.
Be sure not to eat too much junk food.
In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇英文发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，引出话题；
第二步、根据提示，介绍如何保持安全；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①stay away from回避
②get into trouble惹上麻烦
③keep calm保持冷静
④pay attention to注意
⑤in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.(倒装句)
1．中小学生的安全一直是广大家长关注的问题。假设你是王伟，你的英国笔友 David来信询问你
们学校在假期对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回一封邮件。要点：1. 家庭安全。小心用电用火，外出时关好门窗；
2. 自身安全。不要独自去河里、湖里滑冰、游泳；
3. 补充至少一条。
要求：1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
I’m very glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you our school’s safety rules for our holiday.
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【答案】例文
Dear David,
I’m very glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you our school’s safety rules for our holiday.
First, we should be careful with electricity and fire at home. And we must close the doors and windows
when we go out. Second, we are not allowed to go skating or swimming alone in rivers or lakes. Besides, we
should also pay attention to traffic safety and follow the traffic rules. Also, we are told to be careful with strangers.
We shouldn’t talk to them or go anywhere with them without our parents’ permission.
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first. Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述学校在假期对学生的要求；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。[亮点词汇]
①be careful with小心
②be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事
③pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①And we must close the doors and windows when we go out. (时间状语从句)
②I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first. (宾语从句)
1．学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请你根据以下学校安全教育周收集的自我
保护小贴士，并结合自己的观点，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题，写一篇小短文，谈谈在生活
中青少年应该怎样自我保护。
注意事项：
1.内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；
2.表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范；
3.词数80词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：personal (个人的), password (密码)
As teenagers, we must always keep safety in mind.
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How Can We Protect Ourselves?
As teenagers, we must always keep safety in mind. Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we cross the road. Try to look around before crossing the road.Second, when we surf on the Internet, we should try to protect ourselves by keeping our personal
information a secret and not making bad friends. Third, if an earthquake takes place and we are in
danger, we must hide under the table and not jump out of the building so that we can keep ourselves
safe. Also, we are supposed to eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other
when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.
In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“作为青少年，我们必须时刻牢记安全。”来引出重点介绍的内容。第二
步：具体阐述写作内容。依照所给的要点——交通安全、网络安全、地震中的自我保护、健康饮食等均
要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语——每个人都需要学会如何保护自己，远离危险。
[亮点词汇]
①be in danger处于危险
② jump out of... 跳出……
③each other彼此
[高分句型]
①Second, when we surf on the Internet, we should try to protect ourselves by keeping our personal information a
secret and not making bad friends. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. (“how +不定式”作宾
语）
1．英语课上老师请同学们讨论应对自然灾害的策略，假如你是八年级学生李华，请根据以下表格
提示，写一篇英文讲稿谈一谈如何在洪水中保护自己。
Listen to the weather report；
Before the flood Prepare water, food…
…
Move to a higher place；
During the flood Don’t try to swim in the water；
…要求：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数不少于90 词 (已给出的文章开头不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the face of the flood.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the face of the flood.
During the rainy season, we should listen to the weather report more often. This can help us have enough
time to get ready before the flood comes. Moreover, we need to prepare things such as water, food and so on in a
bag. When we leave our home, we can take this bag and go out right away.
When a flood happens, we must move to higher places as quickly as possible, stay there and wait for rescue
workers to come. If the flood washes us away, we shouldn’t try to swim in the water. Instead, we should calm
down and catch something made of wood, because it can help us get out of the water.
All in all, we should be ready for the flood and keep calm during the flood.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题（已给出）；
第二步，具体介绍洪水来临之前需要做的事情和洪水来临时的应对措施；
第三步，致谢（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①right away立刻
②as quickly as possible尽可能迅速地
③calm down保持冷静[高分句型]
①This can help us have enough time to get ready before the flood comes.（before引导时间状语从句）
②If the flood washes us away, we shouldn’t try to swim in the water.（if引导条件状语从句）
