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Unit 7 What's the highest mountain in the world?
单元话题满分范文必背
基础语篇巩固练
1．地球是一个形形色色的动物与人类共同居住的大家庭，我们居住环境不同，生活习性也不同，
请以My Favourite Animal为题，根据下列提示完成一篇作文，字数80字左右，题目已给出，不计入字数
中。
1. What does it look like?
2. What does it like/dislike doing?
3. How do you get on with it?
4. How do you protect it?
My Favorite Animal
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Animal
I like animals very much, such as horses, monkeys, cats, tigers and so on. But I like dogs best. Why?
Because they are very cute and nice. I have a white dog. Its name is Bobo. She is a female dog. She comes from
Beijing, China. She wears white clothes and he has two big eyes and a small month. She often walks round and
round at home. It has nothing to do. She likes eating ice-cream so much. So do I. When I eat ice-cream, she will
look at the ice-cream carefully, so I will give her some to eat.
I think Bobo is the cutest dog in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的动物——狗；
第二步，具体阐述其外貌、喜欢什么、相处情况以及保护的方式；
第三步，最后表达对于这个狗的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
① such as例如
② come from来自
③ look at看
[高分句型]
① When I eat ice-cream, she will look at the ice-cream carefully, so I will give her some to eat.（When引导时间
状语从句，so连接的并列句）
② I think Bobo is the cutest dog in the world.（省略that的宾语从句）
2．最近你听了一个关于我国野生老虎的报告，其中提到我国目前仅存不足 50只野生老虎。为此你
深感忧虑，于是决定给报社的编辑写一封信，说说自己的看法。
请参考所给的英文提示，写一封不少于80词的邮件。信的开头已给出 ，不计入总词数。
英文提示：
save tigers, the population of wild tigers, less than 50, in great danger, make money, cut
down, buy things made of tiger skins, take steps (采取措施), pass laws, protect...from
To the Editor,
I’m a middle school student. I think...
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【答案】Possible version:
To the Editor,
I’m a middle school student. I think it is important to save tigers. Yesterday I heard a report about saving
tigers. It said that the population of wild tigers in China now is less than fifty. That’s surprising! There are twomain reasons for this. One is that some people kill tigers to make money. The other reason is that people cut down
lots of forests, so tigers have fewer places to live and less food to eat. We must save the trees and ask people not to
buy things made of tiger skins. I also hope that the government will take steps to pass laws to protect tigers from
being killed. It’s not just for tigers.
We should all work together to make the earth a safe home both for humans and animals.
Yours sincerely
Li Lei
【详解】1.本文属于书信作文，就我国野生老虎的现状向报社编辑写一封信，注意书信的格式。采用两段
式。第一段描述出现这一现状的原因以及个人和政府应该采取的措施，第二段呼吁人们保护野生老虎。
2.写作指导：本文使用一般现在时以及一般将来时进行叙述。根据提示进行叙述，切记不要遗漏要点，可
以适当增加情节使行文连贯。多使用所学单词、短语以及句型增加得分点，如it is adj. to do sth., it is said
that, reason for, work together以及make sth. adj.等。
3．如何写世界知识话题的相关文章话题分析本单元以“世界知(Facts about the world)”为核心话题，
谈论大自然及保护野生动物。该话题取材广泛，包括濒危动物保护、环境保护等内容。写作实践你听说
过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗？请以“Protect Wild Animals”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明保护野生动物的
重 要 性 。 词 数 60—80 。
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【答案】例文
Protect Wild Animals
Now more and more wild animals like tigers and pandas are in danger. For one reason, people cut down
forests, so wild animals have no place to live in or food to eat. For another, people kill them for their fur or other
parts of the body to make money. As a result, wild animals face serious problems in the wild. If we do nothing,
there may be less and less of them left.We human beings could not live without wild animals. It is very important to protect them. So we should
help them have more babies, build more reserves for them, and make laws to stop people killing them.
Let’s take action right away to protect wild animals! Protecting them is just protecting ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题目介绍为什么野生动物处于危险之中，为什么要保护它们和如何保护它们；注意行文连
贯，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，介绍野生动物所面临的困境；
第二步，介绍动物面临困境的原因，以及保护它们的重要性；
第三步，呼吁人们立刻行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①be in danger 处于危险之中
②cut down 砍倒
③as a result 结果
[高分句型]
①If we do nothing, there may be less and less of them left.（if引导条件状语从句）
②It is very important to protect them.（动词不定式作主语）
4．请根据提示写一篇关于你最熟悉或印象最深刻的地方的报道，不少于60词。
要点提示：
1. 此地所处的位置、面积；
2. 此地的气候状况；
3. 此地的自然景观；
4. 此地的饮食等风土人情。
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【答案】One possible version:
My hometown is in Hainan. It is a beautiful island. And it is the second largest island in China. It is in the
south of China. The climate is neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter.
You can enjoy bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful beaches here. You can also eat the delicious seafood,
walk along the beautiful seaside or swim in the blue sea here.
People in my hometown are very easy to get along with. They are friendly and they are always ready to
help you.
I’m sure you’ll fall in love with my hometown as soon as you see it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意条理清晰、逻辑连贯、无语法使用错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这个地方是哪里，它所处的位置和面积；
第二步，介绍该地的气候状况和自然景观；
第三步，介绍该地的风土人情；
第四步，总结全文，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① in the south of 在……的南方
② neither ... nor 既不……也不……
③ get along with 与……和睦相处
④ fall in love with 爱上
[高分句型]
① You can also eat the delicious seafood, walk along the beautiful seaside or swim in the blue sea here.（or连接
的并列句）
② I’m sure you’ll fall in love with my hometown as soon as you see it.（as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
5．为响应我市某中学提出的“热爱自然，享受生活”的倡议，该校英语俱乐部将举行以“ My
Favorite Season”为主题的演讲活动。请根据表中的信息，以李华的名义写一篇英语演讲稿。季节名称 ……
天气特点 ……
喜欢理由 景物特征 ……
相关活动 ……
你的感想 ……
要求：
(1)包含全部要点，可适当发挥；
(2)不能出现真实的校名及姓名；
(3)开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
(4)词数在80~100左右。
Good morning, boys and girls!
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to speak here and I’d like to talk about my favorite season. My favorite season is
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That’s all. Thank you for listening.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Good morning, boys and girls!
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to speak here and I’d like to talk about my favorite season. My favorite season isspring. In spring, the weather gets warmer and the days get longer. The trees and grass turn green, and all kinds of
flowers come out. The scenery is as beautiful as a painting. I can do lots of outdoor activities. Sometimes I climb
the hill with my parents, and sometimes I fly kites with my friends in the park. When it rains, I like going out for a
walk. The rain makes the air fresher and it makes me feel relaxed. I think it’s wonderful.
“A year’s plan stars with spring. ” Let’s go outside to “love nature, enjoy life”.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给表格提示，介绍你最喜欢的季节，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍你最喜欢的季节。
第二步，介绍你喜欢它的理由；
第三步，最后表达你的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①come out开花
②fly kites放风筝
③go out for a walk出去散步
[高分句型]
①When it rains, I like going out for a walk.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I think it’s wonderful.（省略that的宾语从句）
6．水是生命之源。《长江保护法》 护佑一江清水向东流！我们同样要保护好家乡的河流。学校英
文网站将开展题为“Protecting rivers around us”的征文活动, 请结合上文内容和下列提示写一篇英语短文
投稿。
提示:
1. Why should we protect the rivers?
2. What can we do to protect them?
注意事项:
(1)词数: 90词左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数) ;
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包含所有要点, 可适当发挥, 使短文连贯、通顺。Protecting rivers around us
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【答案】例文
Protecting rivers around us
Rivers are very important to us. They provide clean water for us, so it’s our duty to protect them wisely.
However, many rivers have been seriously polluted. To solve these problems, some actions must be taken.
First, we should stop people from throwing litter into the rivers. Second, some laws should be made to
prevent factories from pouring dirty water into the rivers. Last, it’s necessary to plant more trees on both sides of
the rivers because trees can keep soil in place during storms.
The rivers will be more beautiful if we protect them well.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示问题，写出为什么要保护河流以及具体的保护措施等，可以适
当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，提出建
议可以多用情态动词，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
7．根据表格材料，用上比较级与最高级，不少于五句话。
Qomolangma
8,848.86 meters
(Xizang)
Mount Yu
3,869 meters
(Taiwan)Mount Tai
1,545 meters
(Shandong)
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【答案】例文
Qomolangma is 8848.86 meters high. It is the highest mountain in the world. Mount Yu is 3869 meters
high. Mount Tai is 1545 meters high. Mount Yu is higher than Mount Tai. Qomolangma is higher than Mount Yu.
It is the highest mountain of the three.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇小作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍西藏珠穆朗玛峰的高度；
第二步，介绍台湾的玉山以及山东泰山的高度；
第三步，用比较级和最高级进行对比。
[亮点词汇]
① the highest mountain最高的山
② higher than比……高
[高分句型]
①It is the highest mountain in the world.（形容词最高级的使用）
②Mount Yu is higher than Mount Tai. （比较级用法）
8．九江号称“三江之口、七省通衢”与“天下眉目之地”，有“江西北大门”之称。古称浔阳、
紫桑、江州，是一座有着2200多年历史的江南文化名城。九江是“三大茶市”和“四大米市”之一，是
江南地区的“鱼米之乡”。请根据下列提示写一篇作文My hometown(我的家乡)简单介绍下九江。
1.九江地处江西的北部，景色优美；
2.有悠久历史，庐山之美，吸引游客前来旅游；
3.人们都很有友好；4.城市越来越富裕，建筑越来越高。
提示词汇：在……北部in the north of 富裕rich
要求：
1.短文需包括所有提示，可适当发挥；
2.词数不少于80，短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数；
3.文中不能出现与你自己相关的真实信息。
My hometown
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【答案】例文：
My hometown
My hometown is Jiujiang, in the north of Jiangxi. It’s very beautiful.
Lots of visitors travel to Jiujiang because of its long history. You can learn a lot from the trip. What’s more,
you can not only enjoy the beautiful nature but also exercise in the Mountain Lu. The people in my hometown are
also friendly. They are always there to help you.
Now, my hometown is richer and richer. The buildings are higher and higher. So come and see how
beautiful it is!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，要求根据提示的内容从历史、人文、城市和建筑等方面介
绍一下自己的家乡九江。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时为主，讲述家乡九江的详细信息要叙述完整，
条理要清晰；注意使用题目中所给的词汇，保证文中无标点、单词和语法上的错误。
重难语篇拔高练
9．近年来，全球自然灾害频发，极端天气频频出现，环境恶化给全球带来的危害正日益凸显。地
球是人类共同的家园，时代的一粒灰，落在个人头上就是一座山，没有人能独善其身。作为达州的一名
学生，应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢？请以“Let’s try our best to protect the environment”为题，向达州
的学生发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，尽最大的努力保护环境！写作要点：
1. 了解并让更多的人知道环境保护的重要性；
2. 在日常生活中节约用水、节约能源；
3. 为了减少空气污染，最好乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行上学；
4. 学会垃圾分类，少用塑料袋。
写作要求：
1. 要点齐全并适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 条理清晰，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确；
4. 卷面整洁。
参考词汇：l. reduce减少；2. sort the garbage垃圾分类；3. four categories四类垃圾：recyclable, harmful,
dry and wet waste
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. As we know, we have only one Earth. But in recent years, many
disasters happened on the Earth and unusual weather appeared very often. All these bad things were caused by the
terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. As students in Dazhou, what should we
do?
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If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better.Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
【答案】One possible version:
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. As we know, we have only one Earth. But in recent years, many
disasters happened on the Earth and unusual weather appeared very often. All these bad things were caused by the
terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. As students in Dazhou, what should we
do?
First, we should spread something unusual to protect our environment. For example, we can give talks on
how important the environment is. Second, we should save water and electricity in our daily life. Third, in order to
reduce air pollution, it’s better to go to school by bus or bike or on foot. Fourth, we can sort the garbage into four
categories: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste. And we can reuse bags instead of plastic bags.
If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
【详解】题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“Let’s try our best to protect the environment”和提
示内容写一篇作文，倡议达州的学生保护环境。
写作指导：本文应用第一人称，时态选用一般现在时；写作时承接开头，阐述作为中学生具体可以从哪
些方面来保护环境。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，涵盖
所给提示。
