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Unit2 单元话题（志愿服务）写作满分范文 15 篇
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情
况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1．（23-24八年级下·辽宁抚顺·期末）某教育网站英语板块正在开展以“我的志愿服务经历(My
Volunteering Experience)”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李辉，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈一谈你最难
忘的一次志愿服务经历。
内容包括：
1. 具体志愿服务内容；
2. 你的感受；
3. 你的收获。
注意：
1. 词数80～100；
2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3. 稿件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文
I have done a lot of volunteer work. My most unforgettable volunteering experience was taking part in
Waste-sorting Activity in our community with my friend.
First, we introduced the importance of waste-sorting in our daily life. Second, we told the grandparents in
our community the differences among the dustbins. Third, we told them how to sort out different kinds of waste
and put them into different dustbins. We were busy all the afternoon. We were tired but we were happy becausewe thought we did something meaningful.
I have learnt a lot from the experience. If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the
amount of waste will be reduced and less waste will be burned or buried.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己最难忘的一次志愿服务经历是什么；
第二步，描述自己做了哪些工作以及表达感受；
第三步，总结全文，讲述这次经历后的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②sort out分类
③throw away扔掉
④the amount of……的数量
[高分句型]
①We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful.（because引导的原因状
语从句；省略that的宾语从句）
②If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced and less waste
will be burned or buried.（if引导的条件状语从句）
2．（23-24八年级下·河南商丘·期末）“践行文明礼仪，保护自然环境”是学校志愿者活动的主要
目的。学校英语杂志社以“I am a volunteer”为题开展征文活动。假如你是Li Hua，请结合表格内容，并
根据以下写作要求写一篇英语短文，向杂志社投稿。
文明礼仪方面 在图书馆……；在公交车上……
环保意识方面 过绿色生活……
学习生活方面 多阅读……；参加慈善活动……
感受 ……
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含上表提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。I am a volunteer
Hi, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I am a volunteer of our school. Let me tell you something about our
volunteer work.
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【答案】例文
I am a volunteer
Hi, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I am a volunteer of our school. Let me tell you something about our
volunteer work.
As volunteers, we take part in a lot of volunteering activities. We give talks on what we should and
shouldn’t do in the library. For example, in the library, we’d better keep quiet and not talk loudly. We should offer
our seats to the people in need on the bus. We encourage students to plant more trees and live a green life. We also
encourage students to read more to broaden their horizons. Taking part in charity activities is also of great
importance.
Through our hard work, most of the students have got good manners and our school has become a greener
one. If we can take action together, I believe we can create a more beautiful world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写自己的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；第二步，具体阐述在“文明礼仪、环保意识、学习生活”等方面开展的志愿工作；
第三步，谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②encourage鼓励
③broaden变宽
[高分句型]
①We give talks on what we should and shouldn’t do in the library.（what引导的宾语从句）
②If we can take action together, I believe we can create a more beautiful world.（if引导的条件状语从句，省略
that的宾语从句）
3．（23-24八年级下·江苏泰州·期末）用微笑播撒阳光，用行动践行梦想，我们每个人都要力争做
“阳光少年”。请你根据以下要点提示，以“A sunshine teenager”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一位你身
边的“阳光少年”。
要点：
1. Good personalities.
2. Meaningful activities.
3. Influence on me.
要求：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点, 并适当发挥；
3. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A sunshine teenager
Each of us should try to be a sunshine teenager. But what is a sunshine teenager like? Now I will introduce
one to you.
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A sunshine teenager
Each of us should try to be a sunshine teenager. But what is a sunshine teenager like? Now I will introduce
one to you.
He is my best friend Daniel. He is confident and always full of hope for the future. He is ready to take on
new challenges any time. He is also kind and helpful. He cares more about others. He will help us if something
difficult worries us. Daniel always works to high standards and gets high marks in exams, but he is modest and
easy to work with.
Daniel takes an active part in different kinds of voluntary work. He has devoted most of his free time to it,
such as helping with doing a bird count in Bird Watching Society, collecting books and clothes for children in
poor areas, planting trees at weekends. He wants to do his best to make our earth a better place.
Daniel is a good example to me. I have learned a lot from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，介绍这位阳光少年的优良性格；
第二步，介绍少年参加的有意义的活动，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，介绍这位少年对我的影响并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth.乐意做某事
②takes an active part in积极参与
③such as比如
[高分句型]
①He will help us if something difficult worries us.（if引导条件状语从句）
②He wants to do his best to make our earth a better place.（动词不定式作目的状语）
4．（23-24八年级下·吉林·期末）假如你是李华，你们学校校报正在就“帮助别人，快乐自己”这一话题
展开讨论。请你以“Helping Others Brings Me Joy”为题用英语写一篇短文来投稿，谈一谈你曾经助人为乐
的经历和你对帮助他人的看法。内容包括：
1. 说明帮助别人可以为我们带来哪些快乐；
2. 简述你曾经助人为乐的一次经历；3. 中学生可以在哪些方面帮助别人（至少两条）；
4. 对其他同学发出助人为乐的倡议。
写作要求：
1. 词数90—100；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2. 包含全部要点，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Helping Others Brings Me Joy
Helping others is the traditional virtue (美德) of Chinese.
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【答案】例文
Helping Others Brings Me Joy
Helping others is the traditional virtue of Chinese. I think helping others can not only bring us joy, but also
make us learn a lot.
One day, on my way home, I saw an old man crossing the road. He looked very worried and it seemed that
he had some difficulty. I quickly went up to help him and held his hand carefully. We crossed the road safely
together. The old man thanked me and I felt very happy.
As middle school students, we can help others in many ways. We can help our classmates with their studies
or give them a hand when they are in trouble. We can also do some volunteer work, such as cleaning up the park
or visiting the elderly in the nursing home.
In a word, I hope everyone can be ready to help others. Let’s try our best to make the world a better place.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时。
③提示：文章紧扣题目要求，包含了说明帮助别人带来的快乐、简述助人为乐的经历、列举中学生可以
帮助别人的方面以及发出倡议等内容，且适当发挥，逻辑清晰。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。文章开头直接点明主题，表明帮助别人既能带来快乐，也能让人学到很多。
第二步，具体阐述她取得这样成就的原因。
第三步，书写结语，总结可以从她身上学习的精神。
［亮点词汇］
①in a word总之②be ready to准备好
［高分句型］
I think helping others can not only bring us joy, but also make us learn a lot.（not only...but also...句型；宾语从
句）
5．（23-24八年级下·辽宁本溪·期末）亲爱的同学，请你为校报英语专栏投稿，本周征稿题目为
“My Volunteer Work”或“My Dream Volunteer Work”。如果你做过志愿者的话，请选择第一个标题，谈谈
你在哪里从事怎样的志愿者工作，并且谈谈你的感受；如果你没做过志愿者，请选择第二个标题，谈谈
你想去哪里当志愿者，并且说说你选择这个地方的理由和你想做的事情吧。
注意：
（1）词数为80词左右；
（2）选择一个标题写在答题卡上；
（3）文中不能出现真实的姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文1
My Volunteer Work
I was a volunteer last summer. I went to the old people’s home with some of my classmates. We went there
on the weekend. I bought some fruit for the old people there. When they saw us, they felt very happy. My
classmates and I sang and danced for them. And they told us many stories. We made dumplings for them and ate
dinner there. The old people had a good time with us. Everyone gets old, so we should love and respect old
people. What a good experience I had!
例文2
My Dream Volunteer Work
I want to be a volunteer in an old people’s home because everyone gets old. We should respect the old and
spend time with them as much as possible. If I have time, I want to visit them on weekends with my classmates.
We can bring some small gifts to them. We can also sing and dance for them. If they like, they can tell us stories.
Respecting the old is a good tradition for Chinese people. I hope I can be a volunteer and achieve my dream one
day.
【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：选择一个话题，结合题干中的提示完成写作；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；
写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，选择标题“My Dream Volunteer Work”；
第二步，介绍你想去的志愿者地点；
第三步，说明选择这个地方的理由；
第四步，描述你想做的事情；
第五步，总结全文，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time with sb as much as possible尽可能多地和某人待在一起
② achieve my dream实现我的梦想
[高分句型]
①I want to be a volunteer in an old people’s home because everyone gets old. (原因状语从句)
②If I have time, I want to visit them on weekends with my classmates. (条件状语从句)
③I hope I can be a volunteer and achieve my dream one day. (宾语从句)
进阶拓展训练5篇
6．（23-24八年级下·江西萍乡·期末）假如某视频网站上的一名英国公益活动博主 Jack发的一条公
益视频引起了你的共鸣，你打算在评论区分享自己的一次志愿活动经历（如学校义卖、访问敬老院等）
请用英语在评论区留言。
写作要点：
1. Why did you take part in this volunteer activity?
2. Where and when did you go?
3. What did you do during the activity?
4. What did you learn from this experience?
Jack, I really enjoyed your video. It reminded me of my volunteer experience.
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Jack, I really liked your video. It reminded me of my volunteer experience.
Last summer, I, together with some classmates, went to a nursing home to bring some joy and warmth to
the old people there. We sang songs, danced, and taught them how to use the smartphones. I also read stories to
them, and they shared their life experiences with me. It was so nice to see them smile and laugh.
This experience was very special to me. I learned that just spending time with them can make a big
difference in their lives. I feel satisfied while helping others. I hope more and more people can join in the
volunteer activities. Together we’ll make the world a better place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，介绍参加的志愿者活动的原因、时间和地点；
第二步，简要介绍在活动中做了什么，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发在活动中学到了什么及感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①together with和
②make a big difference产生重大影响
[高分句型]
①We sang songs, danced, and taught them how to use the smartphones.（疑问词+动词不定式）
②I learned that just spending time with them can make a big difference in their lives.（动名词作主语）
7．（23-24八年级下·甘肃平凉·期末）假设你是李华，6月26日这天，你们学校举办了义卖活动
(charity sale)。请根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇英文短文向校刊投稿，介绍本次活动的内容并分享感
受。
要求：1.包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；3.稿件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
4.词数：70左右。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Charity Sale
On June 26th, we had a school charity sale.
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The Charity Sale
On June 26th, we had a school charity sale. It was a sunny and hot day, so we held the charity sale in the
Sports Center. All the students were very excited. Some students sold old things. Some played the guitar and sang
songs. Others made nice food by hand and sold it for money. The charity sale was a great success. We made 1000
yuan in the end. And we wanted to give the money to Project Hope.
All the students were really tired but happy and they thought it was wonderful and meaningful to help
others.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍义卖活动的时间、天气和地点；
第二步，介绍义卖活动的具体内容；
第三步，介绍同学们的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① by hand手工
② in the end最后
[高分句型]
All the students were really tired but happy and they thought it was wonderful and meaningful to help others.（宾
语从句）
8．（23-24八年级下·江苏盐城·期末）很快就要到世界环境保护日，你校组织以“Being a volunteerof going green”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿参加比赛，提示如下：
1. What are you like?
2. What have you ever done for going green?
3. Tell us the reasons for going green and how to do it?
Being a volunteer of going green
Hello,everyone. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here.
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【答案】例文
Being a volunteer of going green
Hello, everyone. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here.
I’m kind to others. I’m willing to help others any time. I know the importance of good manners. In my free
time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I have ever worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I
have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.
Earth is our only home. We shouldn’t drop the litter carelessly. I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect
the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter
showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can
be recycled. I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，是一篇材料作文。
②时态：文章以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。表明作者想成为绿色环保志愿者并进行演讲的意图。
第二步，具体阐述原因。通过描述自己的性格、爱好和志愿者经历，说明自己具备成为志愿者的素质和
能力。
第三步，书写结语。文章结尾强调了保护环境的重要性，并表示自己会尽力为地球做出改变。
［亮点词汇］
①be willing to do sth愿意做某事
②raise money 筹款
③make a difference 产生影响
［高分句型］
①I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth.（when引导时间状
语从句）
②If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment.（if引导条件状语从句）
9．（23-24八年级下·湖南邵阳·期末）假如你是李华，是一名中学生。你会唱歌、弹吉它、讲故事、
做家务。很会照顾老人，善于与老人相处。你看到一则敬老院招聘志愿者的广告，请结合自己的实际，
给项目负责人Mr Li发一封邮件，表达你希望参加这个项目的愿望，并阐述理由。要求 70词以上。开头
结尾已给出，不计入词数内。
提示：old people’s home, be good with…, do well in…, tell stories, take care of
Dear Mr Li,
My name is Li Hua, I’m a 14-year-old students.
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例文
Dear Mr Li,
My name is Li Hua, I’m a 14-year-old students.
I am writing to express my interest in becoming a volunteer at the old people’s home. I am good with
elderly people and enjoy spending time with them. I can sing songs, play the guitar, and tell stories, which I
believe can bring joy to their lives. Additionally, I am experienced in taking care of elderly individuals and
understand their needs.
I hope my application will be approved. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：根据内容提示完成写作，保证内容完整，语言通顺，意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，承接短文开头；
②第二步，说明写邮件的目的，并介绍自己作为志愿者有哪些优势；
③第三步，表达希望自己的申请能够通过并尽快收到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①express one’s interest in对……感兴趣
②spend time with sb和某人共度时光
③Additionally此外
④approve通过
[高分句型]
①I am good with elderly people and enjoy spending time with them. I can sing songs, play the guitar, and tell
stories, which I believe can bring joy to their lives. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②I hope my application will be approved. (被动语态)
10．（23-24八年级下·四川成都·期末）假设你是Peter，你校劳动节正在招募志愿者，请根据下方
招募告示3种工作中选一种写一封申请邮件。
Helpers wanted this Saturday.E- mail: volunteers@ school. com.
内容包括：
1. 工种及目的；
2. 条件与优势；
3. 具体做法。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 词数：80-100，格式和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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I hope you can choose me as the volunteer.
Yours truly,
Peter
【答案】参考例文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I want to volunteer as a guide at a museum for Labor Day at our school. I want to help out as a volunteer inthe museum, because I believe it’s important for visitors to know more our history about China. I’m strong in
history and enjoy learning about different cultures. In my free time, I’d like to visit museums and read about
historical events, so I’d be good at this job. I’m free to help during the Labor Day event and would love the
opportunity to help guide visitors, organize exhibitions, and provide information that visitors need.
1 hope you can choose me as the volunteer.
Yours truly.
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出自己想担任哪方面的志愿工作；
第二步，详细介绍自己能够胜任这份工作的优势以及做法；
第三步，再次表达想成为志愿者的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①free time空闲时间
②historical events历史事件
③would like to想要
④be good at擅长做某事
[高分句型]
I want to help out as a volunteer in the museum, because I believe it’s important for visitors to know more our
history about China. (because引导的原因状语从句)
能力综合实践5篇
11．（23-24八年级下·陕西西安·阶段练习）让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动，对其成长
具有重要意义。可以帮助他们学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。
你们学校上周六与一个乡村学校开展了手拉手帮扶活动。你们乘公交车前往，开展了丰富多彩的活
动。如：捐赠书籍和学习用品、帮助辅导英语、帮助打扫教室和校园、体验农村生活、学习干农活、互
相了解学习与生活等。假如你是此次活动的志愿者之一，写一篇关于此次志愿活动的英文短文。
要求：
1. 根据提示，写出活动的具体内容，也可以再添加活动项目；
2. 根据提示，写出自己对本次活动的认识与感受；3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80至100。
Volunteer in the Village School
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【答案】例文
Volunteer in the Village School
Last Saturday, our school organized a volunteer activity with a village school. We went to the village by bus
and did all kinds of activities. We donated books and school things to the students there. We also helped them
learn English and cleaned the classroom and campus. In addition, we experienced rural life by learning to do farm
work. Through these activities, we got to know each other better and learned about each other’s study and life.
This volunteer activity is very meaningful to me. It not only allows me to help others, but also teaches me
new skills and improves my communication skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示具体描述活动的具体内容；
第二步，表达对这个活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②in addition此外
③allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
[高分句型]
It not only allows me to help others, but also teaches me new skills and improves my communication skills.（not
only...but also句型）
12．（23-24八年级下·甘肃兰州·期中）近年来很多人积极参加各种志愿者活动，为兰州创建“全国文明城市”做出了努力和贡献。作为学生,你也一定做过打扫社区卫生、捡拾公园垃圾、关爱敬老院老人
等志愿者活动。请以“One great thing about volunteering”为题，写一篇短文。
要点：
1. 描述你的一次做志愿者的经历。
2. 分享你的感受或收获。
注意：
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、地点等信息。
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【答案】例文
One great thing about volunteering
I’ve done one great thing about volunteering. It makes me so proud.
Last month, my school held an activity to do some volunteer work at an old people’s home. I joined the
activity. Most old people who live there are lonely, so we prepared a dancing show for them. After that, we
communicated with them and they shared their stories with us. I had a strong sense of satisfaction when I saw the
looks of joy on their faces.
One great thing about volunteering can help people in need and make the world a better place.
【详解】［总体分析］
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
［写作步骤］
第一步，点题，即引领全文;
第二步，具体描述自己的经历。第三步，描写自己的感受或收获。
［亮点词汇］
①communicate with 与……交流
②share sth with sb 与某人分享某物
③a sense of 一种……的感觉
［高分句型］
①Most old people who live there are lonely, so we prepared a dancing show for them. (who引导的定语从句)
②I had a strong sense of satisfaction when I saw the looks of joy on their faces. (when引导的时间状语从句)
13．（23-24 八年级下·安徽六安·期末）假如你是学校的一名小记者，你对学校“最美志愿
者”Abby 进行了一次采访。请你根据以下采访记录写一篇稿件，向读者介绍她的情况。
（1）喜欢看书
兴趣爱好
（2）喜欢旅游
（1）为患重病的同学筹集医疗费用
感人事迹
（2）……(自拟一点)
（1）参加慈善活动
暑假志愿计划
（2）……(自拟一点)
参考词汇： medical cost 医疗费用； charity 慈善
要求：
1. 词数80左右。短文开头已写好，不计入总词数；
2. 所写内容必须包括表格中的所有的信息，并作适当的发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Abby is presented with the Most Beautiful Volunteer in our school.
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【答案】例文
Abby is presented with the Most Beautiful Volunteer in our school.
Abby is a girl who has a passion for reading a wide range of books and also enjoys traveling to differentcities.
Last summer, she raised medical costs for a classmate who was suffering from a serious illness and even
visited the student in the hospital. She is a kind-hearted person who always helps classmates who are struggling
academically.
This summer, she plans to participate in charitable events and visit the elderly at a nursing home. Abby is a
role model for us all as the Most Beautiful Volunteer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍Abby的兴趣爱好；
第二步，介绍Abby的感人事迹；
第三步，描述Abby的暑假计划。
[亮点词汇]
①a range of一系列
②suffer from遭受
③participate in参加
[高分句型]
①Abby is a girl who has a passion for reading a wide range of books and also enjoys traveling to different cities.
(who引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Last summer, she raised medical costs for a classmate who was suffering from a serious illness and even
visited the student in the hospital. (who引导的限制性定语从句)
14．（23-24 八年级下·陕西咸阳·期末）假如你叫李华，国际奥委会(the International Olympic
Committee)在其官网上发布了招募2024年巴黎奥运会志愿者的海报。请你根据下列提示问题，用英文给
相关负责人Sam写一封自荐信。
提示问题： 1. What’s your personal information?
2. Why do you want to be a volunteer?
3. What can you do for the games?
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；4. 词数：不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。
Dear Sam,
I’m writing to express my interest in volunteering for the 2024 Paris Olympic Games.
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Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sam,
I’m writing to express my interest in volunteering for the 2024 Paris Olympic Games.
I’m Li Hua. I’m from China. I’m 15 years old. I study at Yucai Middle school. I’m good at English,
especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with the people all over the world. I like sports. I
know about the Olympic Games. I hope to take part in the Olympic Games one day. I am an outgoing girl and I
am ready to help others. So I can get on well with others.
I’m sure that I’ll be a good volunteer. I hope you give me the chance. I’m looking forward to your early
reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写
作重点。
[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图（文章已给出）；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍一下个人信息，为什么想当志愿者以及你能为比赛做些什么。
第三步，书信结尾。表达你希望Sam给你这个机会，期待他的答复。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自……
②be good at擅长
③ take part in参加
④be ready to help others乐于助人
⑤get on well with与……相处融洽，与……相处得好
[高分句型]
①I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with the people all over
the world.（定语从句）
② I’m sure that I’ll be a good volunteer.（宾语从句）
15．（23-24八年级下·浙江杭州·期末）假设你是李华，请根据以下校刊的征文海报，结合所给提示，
写一篇英语短文进行投稿。选择其中一项活动分享你的看法，并列举一次相关经历，谈谈你的收获。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等；
2. 词数 80﹣100 词, 标题已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：learn something about, get a feeling of, realize the importance of, understand the
meaning of
Free-time Activities Help Me Learn a Lot
In my free time, I often
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【答案】例文
Free﹣time Activities Help Me Learn a Lot
In my free time, I often volunteer outside. I think volunteering is not only to help others, but also to help
myself, because each of us needs help. I often go to the nursing home to help the elderly, pick up garbage in the
park and give out leaflets to let people care for the environment.
I still remember my experience of being a volunteer last year. I joined a group to help the neighbors throw
out their rubbish. Every day, I got up very early and collected the rubbish from door to door. At first, I found it
hard to get up early. It was very tiring, but I did it for two weeks. I got a thank-you letter from the neighbors in the
end.
I feel proud of being a volunteer, which means I am able to offer help. What is more, I am also thankful for
the people who have helped me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态主要用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已在海报中给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己空闲时间的活动——志愿活动；
第二步，介绍自己曾经的一次志愿活动的经历；
第三步，总结提升，讲述自己对志愿活动的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①from door to door 挨门挨户地
②feel proud of 对……感到骄傲
③What is more 此外
[高分句型]
①I think volunteering is not only to help others, but also to help myself, because each of us needs help. （not
only...but also不仅……还……；because引导原因状语从句）
②I feel proud of being a volunteer, which means I am able to offer help.（which引导定语从句）
