第33 讲 公益慈善篇
目录
知识点1 五大万能句型.................................................................................................................................. 2
知识点2 高频金句......................................................................................................................................4
奉献社会 是公益志愿主题中比较常见的情节之一，故事中的人物通常由于某个契机（如通过自己接触或由他人引
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导等发现他人的困难或某一群体的不幸）萌生帮助他人、奉献社会的想法。本情节一般包含 发现苦难伸出援手 和
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解决问题 三个部分（在具体文章中会有省略或合并的情况）。
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知识点1 五大万能句型
万能句式 1：发现苦难，引发共情
句式：As I saw ________, a wave of ________ washed over me.
（通过
视觉
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+心理反应
描写，突出
震撼
与
同情
，增强代入感）
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例句：As I saw the little girl writing on the ground with a broken chalk, a wave of sadness washed over me.
（当我看到那个小女孩用断了的粉笔在地上写字时，一阵悲伤涌上心头。）
仿写句 1：当我看到那位老人在寒风中翻找垃圾桶时，一阵心酸涌上心头。
As I saw the old man searching through the trash in the cold wind, a wave of sorrow washed over me.
仿写句 2：当我看到山区孩子背着书包走两小时山路时，一阵敬佩涌上心头。
As I saw the village children walking two hours to school with heavy bags, a wave of admiration washed over me.
仿写句 3：当我看到流浪狗蜷缩在纸箱里瑟瑟发抖时，一阵怜悯涌上心头。
As I saw the stray dog trembling in a cardboard box, a wave of pity washed over me.
万能句式 2：内心触动，下定决心
句式：In that moment, I realized I couldn’t just ________ — I had to ________.
（突出
觉醒
与
责任感
，体现从旁观者到行动者的转变）
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例句：In that moment, I realized I couldn’t just walk away — I had to do something to help.
（就在那一刻，我意识到我不能一走了之
我必须做点什么来帮忙。）
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仿写句 1：就在那一刻，我意识到我不能只发个朋友圈
我必须亲自参与志愿活动。
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In that moment, I realized I couldn’t just post on social media — I had to join the volunteer work myself.
仿写句 2：就在那一刻，我意识到我不能只感到难过
我必须为这些孩子筹集学习用品。
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In that moment, I realized I couldn’t just feel sad — I had to raise supplies for these children.
仿写句 3：就在那一刻，我意识到我不能只抱怨环境变差
我必须组织一次社区清洁活动。
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In that moment, I realized I couldn’t just complain about pollution — I had to organize a community cleanup.
万能句式 3：伸出援手，积极行动
句式：Together with ________, we ________ to make a real difference.
（强调
合作
与
行动
，体现公益的集体力量）
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例句：Together with my classmates, we collected books and schoolbags to send to the village school.
（我和同学们一起收集了书籍和书包，寄往乡村小学。）
仿写句 1：我和邻居们一起募捐，为那位生病的孩子筹集了手术费用。
Together with my neighbors, we raised money to cover the sick child’s medical operation.
仿写句 2：我和老师一起策划了一场义演，为流浪动物收容所筹集资金。
Together with my teacher, we organized a charity show to raise funds for the animal shelter.
仿写句 3：我和环保社团成员一起在河边植树，帮助恢复被破坏的生态系统。
Together with the environmental club, we planted trees along the river to restore the damaged ecosystem.
万能句式 4：问题解决，成果显现
句式：Thanks to our efforts, ________ was no longer a dream, but a reality.
（突出
从无到有
的转变，增强成就感与正面情绪）
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例句：Thanks to our efforts, clean drinking water was no longer a dream, but a reality.
（多亏了我们的努力，干净的饮用水不再是梦想，而是现实。）
仿写句 1：多亏了我们的努力，孩子们拥有了自己的图书角，不再是奢望。
Thanks to our efforts, the children’s reading corner was no longer a dream, but a reality.
仿写句 2：多亏了我们的努力，那位老人搬进了新家，不再是遥不可及的愿望。
Thanks to our efforts, the old man’s new home was no longer a dream, but a reality.
仿写句 3：多亏了我们的努力，这片荒地变成了社区花园，不再是幻想。
Thanks to our efforts, the empty lot turned into a community garden — no longer a dream, but a reality.
万能句式 5：感悟升华，心灵成长
句式：That experience taught me that ________ isn’t about how much you give — it’s about ________.
（结尾升华主题，从
行动
上升到
价值观
，体现深刻反思）
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例句：That experience taught me that kindness isn’t about how much you give — it’s about showing up when someone
needs you.（那次经历让我明白，善良不在于你给予多少，而在于别人需要你时你是否出现。）
仿写句 1：那次经历让我明白，公益不在于捐了多少钱，而在于你是否真正关心他人。
That experience taught me that charity isn’t about how much money you donate — it’s about truly caring for others.
仿写句 2：那次经历让我明白，改变不在于做了多大的事，而在于你是否坚持去做。
That experience taught me that change isn’t about doing something big — it’s about keeping going no matter how small the
act.
仿写句 3：那次经历让我明白，幸福不在于你拥有什么，而在于你为别人带来了什么。
That experience taught me that happiness isn’t about what you have — it’s about what you bring to others.
知识点2 高频金句
发现苦难
场景 1：目睹不幸
1.Many of the children had noticeable/visible physical scars.
许多孩子身上有明显的伤疤。
2.Unable to afford textbooks, many families often discouraged their children from attending school.
由于买不起课本，许多家庭不让自己的孩子上学。
场景 2：心情沉重
3.With a sinking heart, he sent the little girl back to her old house.
他怀着沉重的心情把小女孩送回了她的老房子里。
4.It shocked her deeply when she learned that attending school was uncommon in these parts.
当她得知在这些地方上学很少见时，她感到非常震惊。
场景 3：下定决心
5.A friend told me how much she loved working for the charity.
一位朋友告诉我她是多么喜欢在慈善机构工作。
6.Ready to help the children, she determined to/was determined to take on the challenges.
为了帮助孩子们，她决心接受挑战
伸出援手
场景 1：志愿服务
7. I made his bed and tidied his room.
我为他铺了床，整理了房间。
8. I checked with the nurse in charge to see if there were any particular patients that required some extra care.
我向护士长了解情况，看是否有特殊的病人需要额外照顾。
场景 2：募集捐款
9. These books were mostly acquired through donations and fundraising.
这些书大部分是通过捐赠和筹款获得的。
10. She took a picture of the girl in ragged shoes and posted it on Facebook, asking people to make a donation.
她拍摄了一张女孩穿着破旧鞋子的照片，并将它发布在 Facebook 上，呼吁人们捐款。
场景 3：呼吁关注
11. Through social media, he found a platform to tell his stories.
通过社交媒体，他找到了一个讲述自己故事的平台。
12. He appealed to people’s compassion, helping them better understand the relationship between humans and nature.
他唤起了人们的同情心，帮助他们更好地理解人与自然的关系。
解决问题
场景 1：情况改善
13. The changes that happened in the city might make a big difference.
城市中发生的变化可能会产生很大的影响。
14. She opened the door to wisdom for the children in the small village.
她为小村庄的孩子们打开了智慧之门。
15. My present brought the poor orphan a lot of joy and fun. Seeing her reaction as she opened it made my day.
我的礼物给这个可怜的孤儿带来了很多的喜悦和乐趣。看见她打开礼物时的反应，我开心了一整天。
场景 2：圆满解决
16. What she had done lit up their souls.
她所做的一切照亮了他们的灵魂。
17. He felt more than thankful to those who had helped make it happen.
他十分感谢那些让这一切发生的人。
场景 3：收获感悟
18. I had never been more grateful for all that I had.
我从未如此感激我所拥有的一切。
19. It was a profound time in my young life that I would never forget.
这是我年轻生命中意义深远的一段时光，我永远不会忘记。
20. Sometimes a small act of kindness can really make a difference to others.
有时候，一个小小的善意之举真的可以对别人产生影响。
21. Despite the pressure of the job, I have never regretted my decision to pursue my dream.
尽管工作压力很大，但对追求梦想的决定我从未后悔过。
练习
一 结合以上所学表达，翻译句子。
1.她决心接受这个挑战，出国当志愿者。
She ___________________________ and volunteer abroad.
2.无论善举有多小，都能对别人产生很大的影响。
No matter how small an act of kindness is, it can ___________________________ to others.
3.老师的话语帮我打开了智慧之门。
My teacher’s words helped me ___________________________.
4.这个孤儿院依靠捐赠和筹款来支付所有的费用。
The orphanage ___________________________ to cover all of its expenses.
5.我从未像现在这样感激妈妈那年夏天带我去了收容所。
I ___________________________ for taking me to the shelter that summer.
6.不可否认，艺术和音乐给偏远山区的孩子们带来了很多的喜悦和乐趣。
There was no denying that art and music ___________________________ to children in remote mountain areas.
7.怀着沉重的心情，我带着这个失明的女孩去了她最喜欢的玩具屋。
___________________________, I led the blind girl to her favorite dollhouse.
8.为了确保孩子们能读到更多的书，Sadiya 拍了一张图书馆的照片，并把它发布在 Facebook 上。
To ensure the children could get more books to read, Sadiya ___________________________.
二 结合以上所学，补全段落内容。
In many remote villages, families often discourage their children from attending school. When he learned the reasons, Zhang
Tian was determined to become a volunteer teacher. He believed that what he did would (1) ___________________________ (为
那里的孩子们打开通往更好的教育的大门). Meanwhile, he set up a platform to (2) ___________________________ (呼吁人
们关注偏远乡村的教育状况). A year later, things changed significantly. (3) ___________________________ (越来越多的书和
衣服涌向孩子们。) When interviewed, Zhang claimed that (4) ___________________________ (这是他生命中意义深远的一
段时光) that he would never forget. (5) “___________________________ (我从未后悔当初决定追求自己的梦想),” he said.
一、翻译句子详解
1.She determined to/was determined to take on the challenge and volunteer abroad.
语法：“determined to/was determined to” 是
决心做某事
表达，
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“take on the challenge” 为
接受挑战
，整体是
“
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主谓宾 + 目的状语（volunteer abroad）结构 。
用法：描述人物因公益志愿等场景下的决心，如 “She was determined to take on the challenge of helping poor children, so
she went to the mountain area.”（她决心接受帮助贫困儿童的挑战，于是去了山区 ）。
2.No matter how small an act of kindness is, it can make a big difference to others.
语法：“No matter how” 引导让步状语从句，“make a big difference” 是固定短语表
产生重大影响
，主句为主谓宾
“
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结构 。
用法：用于强调善意价值，比如公益宣传 “No matter how tiny your help seems, it can make a big difference to those in
need.”（无论你的帮助看似多小，都能对有需要的人产生重大影响 ）。
3.My teacher’s words helped me open the door to wisdom.
语法：“help sb. (to) do sth.” 结构，“open the door to...” 是
打开
之门
固定搭配，主谓宾
“
……
”
+ 宾补（open...）结
构 。
用法：描述启发、引导场景，像教育类 “A good book can help you open the door to a new world.”（一本好书能帮你打开
通往新世界的门 ）。
4.The orphanage relies on donations and fundraising to cover all of its expenses.
语法：“rely on” 表
依靠
，
“
”
“donations and fundraising” 是
捐赠和筹款
，不定式
“
”
“to cover...” 表目的，主谓
宾 + 目的状语结构 。
用法：说明机构运营资金来源，如公益报道 “This animal rescue center relies on donations and fundraising to save more
stray pets.”（这家动物救助中心依靠捐赠和筹款拯救更多流浪宠物 ）。
5.I have never been more grateful to my mom for taking me to the shelter that summer.
语法：“have never been more + 形容词
是
从未如此
强调结构，
”
“
……”
“be grateful to sb. for doing sth.” 表
因某
“
人做某事感激
，主谓宾
”
+ 原因状语（for...）结构 。
用法：用于回忆感恩场景，比如个人成长文 “I have never been more grateful to my friend for cheering me up in hard
times.”（我从未如此感激朋友在艰难时刻鼓励我 ）。
6.There was no denying that art and music brought a lot of joy and fun to children in remote mountain areas.
语法：“There was no denying that...” 是
不可否认
固定句式，
“
……”
“bring sth. to sb.” 表
给某人带来某物
，主
“
”
从复合句结构 。
用法：强调事物影响，像文化公益文 “There was no denying that online courses brought new learning chances to students in
poor areas.”（不可否认，在线课程给贫困地区学生带来新学习机会 ）。
7.With a sinking heart, I led the blind girl to her favorite dollhouse.
语法：“With a sinking heart” 是伴随状语，表
怀着沉重心情
，主谓宾
“
”
+ 伴随状语结构 。
用法：描述心情 + 行为场景，比如公益故事 “With a sinking heart, he saw the homeless dog in the rain and decided to help
it.”（他怀着沉重心情看到雨中流浪狗，决定帮助它 ）。
8.To ensure the children could get more books to read, Sadiya took a picture of the library and posted it on Facebook.
语法：“To ensure...” 是目的状语，“take a picture of...” 表
拍
照片
，
“
……
”
“post... on...” 是
发布到
，主谓
“
……”
宾 + 目的状语结构 。
用法：说明公益行动逻辑，如公益推广 “To let more people know the project, she took pictures of the activity and posted
them on Instagram.”（为让更多人了解项目，她拍活动照片发布到 Ins 上 ）。
二、补全段落内容详解
(1) open the door to better education for the children there
含义：呼应前文
想当志愿者老师
，用
“
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“open the door to...” 结构，表
为那里孩子打开更好教育的门
，体现教
“
”
育帮扶的意义 。
场景：公益支教、教育援助类语境，比如 “ Volunteers hope to open the door to better education for kids in backward
villages.”（志愿者希望为落后村庄孩子打开更好教育之门 ）。
(2) appeal to people’s attention to the education situation in remote villages
含义：“appeal to one’s attention to...” 是
呼吁某人关注
，说明
搭建平台
的目的是让大众重视偏远乡村教
“
……”
“
”
育问题 。
场景：公益宣传、社会问题呼吁语境，像 “We should appeal to people’s attention to the environmental protection in rural
areas.”（我们应呼吁人们关注农村环保问题 ）。
(3) More and more books and clothes flooded to the children.
含义：“flood to” 形象表
大量涌入
，体现前文行动后，物资向孩子汇聚的积极变化，突出公益成果 。
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场景：公益物资捐赠、帮扶见效语境，例如 “After the charity event, more and more supplies flooded to the disaster - hit
area.”（慈善活动后，越来越多物资涌入灾区 ）。
(4) it was a profound time in his life
含义：“profound” 表
意义深远的
，对应
收获感悟
类表达，总结支教经历对他人生的深刻价值 。
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“
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场景：个人成长回顾、公益经历感悟语境，比如 “Traveling alone was a profound time in her life that changed her a lot.”
（独自旅行是她人生中意义深远的时光，改变她很多 ）。
(5) I have never regretted my decision to pursue my passion/dream
含义：“regret one’s decision to...” 表
后悔做
的决定
，用否定强调
从未后悔
，体现对公益支教（追求梦
“
……
”
“
”
想）的坚定态度 。
场景：个人职业选择、梦想追求语境，像 “ He has never regretted his decision to start his own business, though it’s
tough.”（虽艰难，他从未后悔创业的决定 ）。
高考真题演练
2022 年6 月浙江卷（帮助无家可归的人）
I needed to do something in my community (社区) in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate
from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to
do.
I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from
preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparing the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still
needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasn’t until
a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner.
As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared. I’d come face to face with the homeless: How should I act? How
would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of
them looked so dangerous. I didn’t have too much time to worry about it. I was assigned (分配) to serve the salad with the lady
next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she’d be right there, which I found quite comforting.
I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were
torn and dirty. Some looked like they had tally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling
and joking. Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think of
how many people there were who didn’t have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2. 至少使用5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile.
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Paragraph 2: I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way.
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【答案】
范例一：
As they came in my direction I put on my brightest and happiest smile. I wanted to make them know that I was really
anxious to help them. To my relief, they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile, and I could see their exhaustion in
their eyes. I wanted to know what they were going through and I was desperate to know what I could do for them. They nodded
gratefully as I pushed my spoon into the pot and took a large spoonful and poured it into their bowls.
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. This experience made me realize that there are so
many people in this world who need our help. It also made me realize that our small act of kindness can make them feel warm and
make a great difference to them. I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food. I am anxious to urge
the world to do everything possible to help those in need.
范例二：
As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. Nervous as I felt, I did my utmost to keep myself
calm and hand out the delicately-wrapped meal to those in need, with my hands trembling. Upon seeing it, every one of them
beamed with smile, gently murmured “Thank you” and bowed to me sincerely, which brought warmth straight into my heart. The
passing time witnessed the smooth process of this event. It was not until the night wiped out the last ray of sun that we finished
our community service hours.
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. Not only did I clear my previous prejudice against those who
seemed to be dangerous and unamiable, but also I extended a helping hand to those who wanted food. I suddenly came to realize
that not everyone was blessed with fortune and born to be wealthy, therefore, we should always keep grateful for what life blessed
us with. However, we did have the power to share our happiness with others, that is, spreading love. Love is everything, like the
clear moon hanging high in the sky, spreading its mild moonlight selflessly to everyone.
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阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Grandpa Bill Rodgers has narrowly escaped a phone scam (欺骗). It all began with a telephone call.
Bill is an elderly man from Cincinnati, Ohio, who was looking forward to spending time with his family over the holidays.
They were all coming to visit him at his Elmwood Place home, including his adult grandson David. One afternoon, while napping
in bed, he was awakened by the sharp ringing of his telephone.
“Who will ring me up at this time?” He wondered. Peering towards the phone, he hesitantly picked it up. From the receiver
came an urgent voice. “Grandpa, this is David. I am in trouble.” Before Bill could ask him any question, he continued, on and off,
half crying, “I hit a woman’s car and she was seven months pregnant. And they charged me with drunken driving and I’m in
prison...” He sobbed loudly. His voice was so broken that Bill could hardly match it with the gentle and warm voice of his
grandson. Poor David! He must be suffering! Bill panicked (惊慌) immediately.
Without more detailed communication, the phone passed suddenly to another person — David’s lawyer who had a deeper
voice. Seemingly, he understood Bill’s anxiety and attempted to comfort him with a solution. “Now the only way to help David is
to go to Wal-Mart and transfer $2,300 to another store. I would pick up the money and then use it to post David’s bail (保释金).”
“I am sure everything would be OK as long as the money is in place,” he added. Ultimately, he lowered his voice, “Don’t tell
anybody. You don’t want to make your grandson look ugly in your neighborhood.” The lawyer hung up even before Bill could
give an answer.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【范文背诵】
Bill was totally at a loss. His mind went blank and David’s heartbreaking sobs were echoing in his ears. Without a second
thought, he quickly grabbed his bank card and decided to spare no effort to go to David’s rescue. With the card tightly in his hand,
he rushed out to the bank. After withdrawing the money, he went straight to the local Wal-Mart. He was overwhelmed by the
thought “Send the money and my grandson will be saved”.
The lucky part of Bill’s day was when he stepped into cashier Mary’s line in Wal-Mart. Noting Bill’s desperate and anxious
look, Mary instantly knew something was wrong. Yet, having the lawyer’s words in mind, Bill stubbornly refused to leak out any
information and insisted on transferring the money. Suddenly an idea hit Mary. “I guess you are worrying about somebody. I bet if
you call him right now, he will answer the call.” she suggested. Though doubtful, Bill pressed the telephone keys. The ending can
be expected: David was safe and sound and Bill realized that he nearly fell victim to a phone scam!
【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了老人Bill 一天突然接到一个电话，电话里称孙子David 遇到了麻烦，被指
控酒后驾车，现在关在监狱里。律师告诉老人唯一能帮助David 的方法就是去沃尔玛把2300 美元转到另一家商店，然后
用它来交David 的保释金。并且嘱咐老人不要把这件事告诉别人。
【写作提示】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容
①
“Bill 完全不知所措。
可知，第一段应该描写老人想尽办法救孙子，取了钱去沃尔玛转钱。
”
由第二段首句内容
②
“Bill 一天中最幸运的时刻是，他走进了沃尔玛并且遇到了收银员Mary。
可知，第二段应该描写
”
Mary 怎样帮助老人识破骗局，使钱财没有损失。
2.续写线索：取钱
匆忙去转钱
遇到
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Mary——询问
帮助老人
识破骗局
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The young woman sat crying at one of the back tables of a small restaurant at a fuel service station, on a highway where truck
drivers and traveller stopped. Two girls, perhaps four and five years old, watched their mother tensely.
I am a patrolman, which is a policeman who is assigned to patrol a specific route. I am with the Knox County, Tennessee,
Sheriff’s Department, and was sent to check on the family after someone telephoned, concerned about the woman’s weeping. A
flash of fear crossed the older child’s eyes as I approached her. “Daddy left us,” she said. “He just put our stuff out of the car while
we were in the bathroom.”
“Is that so, little lady?” I said. “I want you two to climb on those stools over there and order something to eat.”
Reluctantly they crossed to the stools. I called the waitress to take their order.
“Now, what’s the problem?” I asked the woman.
“Just what my girl said,” she replied, wiping her eyes with the back of her hand. “ My husband is not cruel — just at the end
of his rope. We have no money; we’re flat broke. He thought that we’d get more help alone than if he stayed.”
“Do you have family?”
“The nearest is in Chicago.”
We sat there discussing organisations and government agencies that could help her. When the waitress brought hot dogs and
French fries to the little girls, I went to the counter and took out my wallet to pay.
“The owner says no charge,” the waitress said. “We know what’s going on.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Officer, excuse me,” a man said to me.
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There was enough to buy bus tickets to Chicago and food along the way.
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【范文背诵】
“ Officer, excuse me,” a man said to me. He was a big man in jeans, T-shirt and baseball cap standing by the counter. I
noticed the restaurant was quiet; the customers, mostly long-distance truck drivers, sat staring in our direction.“Here,” he said,
giving me a handful of paper money. “We all passed the hat, and made a contribution. There should be enough to get the woman
and her girls on their way.” “I’m sure she’ll appreciate it,” I said. “Can I tell her your name?” “ No.” He raised his hands and
backed away. “Tell her it was from people here with families of their own.”
There was enough to buy bus tickets to Chicago and food along the way. When I handed the money to the woman, she began
to cry again. Moments later a couple with two children came to the table and offered words of comfort. I called the police station
and told the officer who sent me out that the situation had been resolved. A police officer sees the worst in person most of the time.
It is good to be reminded that kindness and love exist out there, even at a truck stop in East Tennessee.
【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位年轻女子坐在一家加油站的小餐馆后面的一张桌子旁哭泣。作者是一
名警官，前去了解情况，得知这位年轻的母亲和孩子被丈夫抛弃了。
【写作提示】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容
警官，打扰了，
一个男人对我说
可知，第一段可描这个男人拿过来一些钱以及与作者的对
①
“‘
’
”
话。
由第二段首句内容
这些钱足够买去芝加哥的汽车票和沿途的食物。
可知，第二段可描写作者将钱给了这个女人以
②
“
”
及这个女人和孩子的反应以及作者的一些感悟。
2.续写线索：陌生男子拿来一些钱以及与作者的对话
作者将钱给了这个女人
女人的孩子的反应
告诉自己的
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上司问题已经解决
感悟
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A worried call came into Jimmy Gill’s bar this past March. A newly married woman who had spent the afternoon at the
beach bar couldn’t find her wallet. She didn’t care about her ID, credit cards, or $150 in cash-but her wedding ring was put
inside.
Gill didn’t like the idea that a theft could have occurred at his place. So he set out to find the wallet. He spent hours scanning
footage(影片片段）from 16 different surveillance(监控)，cameras, watching the woman’s every step in the bar until she went to
sit on a bench outside and left when her ride arrived. Within minutes, a young man in a jacket approached the bench, put
something hurried in his pocket, and walked off. Gill posted a clip on the bar’s Facebook page. “I didn’t want to accuse him, ” he
said. “I just asked if anybody knew who the guy was.”
Within hours, Gill got a text from 17-year-old Rivers Prather, who’d heard about the post from one of his friends. Prather
admitted having taken the wallet and told Gill he’d done it because he hadn’t eaten in two days. He said he saw the ring but
thought it was fake, so he took the money and threw the wallet off the dock (码头)into the ocean. Then he bought a sandwich.
Gill, unsure whether he believed Prather, told the teen to meet him at the dock. There, they got to talking, and Prather
revealed that he wasn’t getting along with his family and had been living in the woods for a week. Gill, a father of two with
another on the way, look closely at Prather-his small build, his pale cheeks-and saw him for what he was: more of a kid than a
criminal.
But the police were already on the case, and because of the missing ring, Prather could be facing charges. “He would be
going to jail,” Gill says. “I had to help him somehow.”
注意：1.所续写的短文的词数应为150 左右；
2.至少使用5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使的关键词语。
Para 1: The next day, Gill hired two divers to search the waters.
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【范文背诵】
The next day, Gill hired two divers to search the waters. A police was waiting for them there. A crowd had together to watch
the two divers search in the strong current. More than an hour passed with no sign of the ring. Gill grew worried, especially when
the police begin questioning Peter, trying to get him to admit keeping the ring.
Suddenly a diver came out of the water. In his hand was the wallet, and inside was the ring. Cheers broke out in the crowd.
When Gill called the wallet’s owner, the woman burst into tears. She was more than delighted and promptly dropped the charge
against the Prather for stealing the ring. But it wasn't over for Gill. He’d been troubled about Prather sleeping in the cold woods.
Gill knew his home was big enough to give Prather a place to live in for a while. He told the teen he could stay with his family
until the boy got on his feet again.
【文章大意】这篇续写以故事情节发展为线索，海滩酒吧的老板Gill 接到投诉，一位女士的钱包被偷，里面有她的订婚
戒指。Gill 查了酒吧的监控，找到了线索，并将视频片段传到网上，想通过网络的力量找到拿走钱包的人。几小时后，
一个叫Prather 的17 岁少年主动联系了他。两人见面后，Prather 讲述了拿走钱包的缘由，作为两个孩子的父亲，Gill 决
定不追究其责任,觉得Prather 更是一个孩子。但警察正在跟踪此案，Prather 有可能面临严重的指控。Gill 决定帮助这个少
年，他请了两个潜水员去Prather 扔钱包的地方搜寻。
【写作提示】
段落续写：
由第一段首句内容
第二天
“
Gill 请了两个潜水员去Prather 扔钱包的地方搜寻。
可知第一段描写潜水员在水里搜钱包的
”
情况，以及岸上等待搜寻结果的警察、Gill 和 Parther 的情况。
由第二段首句内容
突然，一个潜水员露出水面。
可知第二段描述搜寻情况，按照读后续写积极向上的导向，应该是
“
”
找到了戒指，Prather 免除指控。
续写线索：潜水员搜寻
一直没搜到
警察审问
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Prather——潜水员搜到戒指
失主解除指控
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——Gill 继续帮助
Prather
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阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Maybe there is a Father Christmas!
Anna stood anxiously staring at the pouring rain while little Molly looked up at a pretty doll in the window of the toy shop on
the edge of town. "Mummy, "Molly said, "that's the doll I would like Father Christmas to bring me." A tear rolled down Anna's
cheek and she knew it would be impossible this year. They were supposed to start a new life in Spain one and a half years ago
before her husband Tim was cruelly taken from them by a car. Their small amount of savings were quickly spent on Tim’s funeral
costs and necessities, leaving her in heavy debt.
To her relief, the local people had helped to support her through these difficult times and especially Juan, owner of the local
grocery store, a single man, who would often put something special into her shopping bag, even though he himself had been going
through a difficult period — his mother died of cancer and he was busy handling the sale of his mother’s house on the edge of
town.
As the rain stopped, Anna and Molly started walking home. She was thinking about buying an umbrella after paying the rent
with her upcoming wage when Molly shouted excitedly, "Mummy, what’s that on the road?" Anna looked down and saw a bag
lying in the water, which was obviously lost because of the sudden rain.
They got home and dried themselves before Anna focused on the bag. Opening it and seeing bundles of money inside, she
stood back in shock and cried, "Is this a present from kindness? I can pay off my debt, buy Molly’s favorite doll and my new
umbrella ...” Then reality set in, Anna was a very moral person and would never steal even the slightest little thing, let alone
bundles of money. She went to bed with all thoughts in her mind.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：
Early next morning, Anna headed where she decided to go.
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At supper, Anna had an unexpected visitor—Juan with gift boxes in his hands.
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【范文背诵】
Possible version [1]
Early next morning, Anna headed where she decided to go. Anna walked directly to the police station. After figuring out what
had happened, the policemen kept note of her information and thought highly of her. She felt a little shy and said, “The huge
money would be a great help for me to get through the difficulties, but the owner would get into great trouble, instead.” Stepping
out of the station, Anna felt a fresh breeze on her face, making her relieved and comfortable.
At supper, Anna had an unexpected visitor—Juan with gift boxes in his hands. Seeing Anna's surprised look, Juan told her
that he was the owner of the bag and he came to show his thanks. That morning, because of the sudden rain, he was so hurried to
get on the taxi that he lost his bag. "Thank you so much for your help." Juan said to Anna and then turned to Molly, handing her
the boxes "Here you are, little girl." After opening the boxes, Molly cried with great joy, "Mom, look! Here it is! The doll Father
Christmas brings me!" Looking at her happy daughter, Anna smiled, murmuring "Maybe there is a Father Christmas!"
Possible version [2]
Early next morning, Anna headed where she decided to go. She held the bag tightly and walked firmly. “The owner must
have had a tough night.” A quarter later, Anna found herself in the police station. She handed the bag to the receptionist and said,
“I found this bag in the road yesterday. Maybe you can help to find its owner.” Seeing the bundles of money inside, the policeman
said in great admiration to Anna, who was filling out the firm, “You must be an angel.”
At supper, Anna had an unexpected visitor—Juan with gift boxes in his hands. “Juan? You are...” Anna said in a confused
voice. “Anna, I am the owner of the bag.” Juan said gratefully. “What a coincidence!” Anna exclaimed! Juan went on explaining
that he had just sold his mother’s house on the edge of town to pay for his mother’s treatment. “I don’t know how to show my
thankfulness. And these are for you and Molly. May you merry Christmas.” Later in the night, Molly exclaimed in great
excitement when she was unwrapping the box--it was the very doll she wanted! Anna smiled, “Maybe there is a Father
Christmas!”
Possible version [3]
Early next morning, Anna headed where she decided to go. She walked fast but gracefully to the destination, bathed in the
warm sunshine. As a moral person, honesty and justice always dominated her. She would always follow her heart even in heavy
debt. On arriving there, she told the police what had happened on that dark and stormy night and handed in the massive amount of
money. Two policemen kept necessary records seriously, spoke highly of her and promised to find its owner as soon as possible. A
deep sense of pride flooded over Anna when she left the station and headed for work.
At supper, Anna had an unexpected visitor—Juan with gift boxes in his hands. Anna invited him in and Molly greeted him
happily. After being seated there, Juan explained he was almost crushed when he found his money missing. It was Anna’s selfless
behavior that lighted up his world. Throwing them a warm smile, Juan handed them gifts. Unwrapping the gifts, Molly cried out
of joy, “The pretty doll in the window. Father Christmas!” Juan hugged Molly, giving her a kind and fatherly look. At the very
moment, they seemed like and might be one family.
Possible version [4]
Early next morning, Anna headed where she decided to go. With the money carefully packed in her handbag, she quickened
her pace. On arrival at the police station, she briefly told the officer what had happened and hoped they could help find the owner.
Police officer noted down her information. Leaving the station, she felt a fresh wind on her face, a sense of satisfaction filling her,
even greater than paying off her debts and buying the doll for Molly.
At supper, Anna had an unexpected visitor—Juan with gift boxes in his hands. Seeing so many gifts, she politely declined,
“You’ve already helped me a lot.” "But you deserve more!" said Juan. It turned out that Juan was the owner of the money. He
finally sold his mother's house but he lost the money on the way back because of the sudden rain. Thanks to Anna's help, he got
the money back. At the very moment, Molly, who was unwrapping the gift, let out a cry of joy, “Mummy, it’s the doll! Uncle Juan
must have met Father Christmas!” Anna nodded, “Yes, my dear”, looking into Juan’s eyes and smiling.
Possible version [5]
Early next morning, Anna headed where she decided to go. That’s where they found the bag last night. She held the “Lost and
Found” board she prepared beforehand, looking around anxiously. Soon after, she saw Juan was coming up. “Hello, Anna. I
finished the sale of my mother’s house yesterday, but I realized I lost the bag of money this morning. I wonder whether...” “Oh,
yes, how much money in it then?” After making sure of the right owner, Anna returned the money to Juan.
At supper, Anna had an unexpected visitor—Juan with gift boxes in his hands. “Hello, Juan, welcome!” Anna smiled shyly.
“Hi, Molly, this is for you.” Juan handed in the bigger box. “Is it from Father Christmas?” “Sure!” Anna and Juan responded
almost at the same time. At the sight of the doll she had been dreaming of, Molly grinned. “Thank you, Father Christmas!” Anna
whispered to Juan gratefully.
(Then Juan passed the smaller box to Anna. Opening the box, Anna’s face flushed red. “If I make a proposal to your mom, what
would you say, dear Molly?” “Well...,” Molly nodded her opinion with a smile.)
【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公安娜和她小女儿莫莉生活得很艰苦，但是当地人尤其是当地杂货店
的老板胡安经常帮助她们，在一个圣诞雨夜，安娜看到路上的一大笔钱犹豫过后还是将其交给警察，后来发现钱是胡安
的，后来胡安作为报答给小莫莉一个洋娃娃的故事。
【写作提示】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容
第二天一早，安娜去了她想去的地方。
可知，第一段可描写安娜将钱交给警察。
①
“
”
由第二段首句内容
晚餐时，安娜遇到了一位不速之客
胡安，手里拿着礼品盒。
可知，第二段可描写钱的主人
②
“
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”
报答安娜。
2. 续写线索：交给警察
舒心
感谢
送礼
感悟
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阅读下面文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整短文。
William Allard is a photographer for National Geographic magazine whose pictures often appear in it. As Mr. Allard travels
around the world, he looks for good photos to share.
All of Mr. Allard's pictures show interesting people and places. But one photograph of a young boy tending his sheep in Peru
is different.
One spring afternoon, he was driving down the road. The scenery was so peaceful and quiet, and the fresh air was fragrant
with scents, awakening all his cells to breathe them in. The sun cast a warm golden glow on his face. All these were enjoyable.
Suddenly, he saw a little figure standing at the edge of the road. One more look and he noticed a boy crying. William pulled over
and set the brake. He was told that another driver had come down the road and driven straight through the boy's dozen sheep.
About half of them were dead. The driver never stopped. But William did.
The boy was nine or ten years old. His name was Eduardo. Eduardo's family depended on those sheep to earn money and he
was responsible for them. Now he must go home and tell his family that half of their sheep were dead. However, he was frustrated
to imagine the disappointed look on his parents faces.
William just took a few photos. He saw that Eduardo was very upset, but left quickly. He did not give the boy anything
because he had nothing to give. He did not give the boy any money because it is not something he did when he was working.
However, when he got back to his hotel, he thought about Eduardo, his dead sheep and his tears. He also thought about Eduardo's
family. He realized what it would mean to lose that many sheep: the mountains of Peru can be a hard place to live and work.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
As soon as William returned home, he spoke with the people at National Geographic magazine.
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Thanks to the published pictures, William gave the money donated by readers to Eduardo's family.
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【范文背诵】
As soon as William returned home, he spoke with the people at National Geographic magazine. He tried to convince them to
print the pictures, describing Eduardo's situation in detail and showing them pictures of Eduardo's tears and the dead sheep,
hoping they could do the poor boy a favor. He also wanted people to see what it's like in Peru for the poor people. National
Geographic printed the pictures. William didn't expect what happened next. Readers from all over the world responded to the
photographs and were very generous, sending in a lot of money.
Thanks to the published pictures, William gave the money donated by readers to Eduardo's family. Holding the money,
Eduardo burst into tears. The money meant that they could survive. The family appreciated everyone who had helped them. With
this money, Eduardo and his family replaced their sheep, had enough money to build a pump for the village and help the local
school. Eduardo was also proud of his pictures which could improve a whole family's life. William made up his mind to help more
people like Eduardo. Sometimes a small act could make a big difference.
【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了William 是国家地理杂志的一位摄影师，一次他遇到一位在路边哭泣的小
男孩，询问得知小男孩的羊被路过的车辆撞死了一半并逃逸。这些羊是他家庭的主要收入，所以他正在为此伤心。
William 为他拍了一些照片并向杂志社寻求帮助。
【写作提示】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容
威廉一回到家，就和《国家地理》杂志的人进行了交谈。
可知，第一段可描写
①
“
”
William 建议杂
志社刊登照片来帮助Eduardo 并帮他筹到了钱等内容。
由第二段首句内容
多亏了这些照片，威廉把读者们捐赠的钱捐给了
②
“
Eduardo 的家人。
可知，第二段可描写
”
Eduardo 收到善款的反映，向帮助他的人表达感谢，用这些钱如何改善生活及William 对这件事情的感受等内容。升华可
以写一个小小的善举可以使别人的生活发生很大改变，体现人与人之间互助有爱的核心价值观。
2.续写线索：威廉和《国家地理》杂志的人交谈
杂志刊登了这些照片
读者看到照片寄来了钱
威廉把读者们
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捐赠的钱捐给了Eduardo 的家人
这家人感谢每一个帮助过他们的人
威廉感悟
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6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus(马戏). Finally, there was only
one family between us and the ticket counter.
This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of twelve. You could tell
they didn’t have a lot of money.
Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-
two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see
that night in a low voice.
It was clear that they had never been to the circus before. The father was at the head of the pack, and the mother was holding
her husband’s hand. The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, “Please let me buy eight
children’s tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.”
The ticket lady gave that price. The man’s wife let go of his hand, her head dropped. The father leaned a little closer and
asked,“How much did you say?” The ticket lady gave the price again. The man didn’t have enough money.
How could he turn and tell his eight children that he didn’t have enough money to take them to the circus?
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1:Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.
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Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. Then he
picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said, “Excuse me, sir. This fell out of your pocket.” The man turned around
and saw the money. He knew what was going on. He held my dad’s hands and received the bill with tears in his eyes. He said,
“Thank you so much. This means a lot to me and my family.”
That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. We didn’t go to the circus that night.
When I asked my father why he did so, he said, “My child, it was a heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely
he wasn’t begging for a handout, but he reminded me of my father,” He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory. “We
should appreciate what we have obtained from life and catch every opportunity to help others. We didn’t go to the circus tonight,
but we did a great thing”. Hearing my father’s words, I smiled happily.
【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候和父亲一起去看马戏，排队买票时他们前面只有一个家庭，这
个家庭有八个孩子，孩子们很兴奋地讨论即将看到的马戏表演，很明显这一家从未看过马戏。孩子们的父亲在得知他们
全家一起看马戏需要付的票价时尴尬地发现自己没有足够的钱。这时作者的父亲把自己的20 美元掏出来扔在地上告诉
这位男士这是他掉出来的。这位男士明白了一切，非常感激。作者从这次经历中明白我们应该珍惜我们从生活中得到的，
抓住每一个机会去帮助别人。
【写作提示】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容
看到发生了什么，爸爸把手伸进口袋，掏出一张
①
“
20 美元的钞票，掉在地上。
可知，第一段可
”
描写作者的父亲告诉这位男士钱是从他口袋里掉出来的，男士明白发生了什么，非常感激。
由第二段首句内容
那天，爸爸和我回到车里，没有买到票，开车回家了。
可知，第二段可描写作者的父亲向作者
②
“
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解释这样做的原因，并对作者进行教育。
2.续写线索：捡起
告知
明白
感谢
询问
解释
教育
理解
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7.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In early 2017, Kevin Duke started thinking about his beloved daughter’s very special upcoming birthday. Like every parent,
he wanted to gift his daughter with a truly perfect present, one that she would really appreciate and could enjoy for a long time. He
eventually settled on a second hand car.
This Duke purchased the car a few weeks ahead of his little girl’s 16th birthday. This meant he had plenty of time to give it a
good thorough cleaning and fix-up, and make sure it worked perfectly. But when he did clean-up, he suddenly noticed something
that grabbed his attention immediately.
It was a small envelope which said “New Car Owner: Important Info Inside” letter was from Archey and it began simply
enough: “To the person that gets this car,” “I just wanted to let you know what a special vehicle you’ve bought.” As the letter went
on, the tragic circumstances around the car’s previous owner began to unfold. “This car belonged to my mom, but she passed
away in a house fire along with my 6-year-olddaughter.”
“We took road trips and listened to country music with the windows open,” she recalled in the heartfelt letter. “Love, joy, and
adventures were all we had in this car,” she wrote. “Now that it’s yours, please remember it isn’t just a car. It’s a memory. It’s
really heartbreaking to part with it, but I have to. Finance permitting, I dream one day of being able to buy it back. So please be
nice to it…”
Despite the great tragedy she had been through, all Archey wanted, as the letter reveals, was for the new owner to experience
the same happiness that she had so cherished in the past. As Duke sat in the car reading this mysterious letter, his eyes began to fill
with tears. It soon became clear that it wouldn’t be enough simply to treat this car with love.
Paragraph 1：He had to do something—and he knew exactly what.
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【范文背诵】
He had to do something—and he knew exactly what. Staring at this car carefully, Kevin Duke lost in mind. He knew the car
is a priceless treasure which contained such sincere emotions. He went to the car, took out a towel and swept it with heart. After
cleaning, he came back to his computer and wrote down a post related to this heartbreaking story. He hoped that he could raise
enough money to help this poor owner. Each word was filled with his best wishes.
Quickly, the post online spread widely. When finishing reading this post, everyone was touched by the moving story and all
could experience the same happiness. A large quantity of money was donated by these readers. Hardly had Duke collected enough
money when he contacted the lady. Duke happily gave her all money and the car. From then on, making friends with her, Duke
also could experience the same happiness.
【文章大意】本文是一篇记叙文。讲述了Duke 在为女儿准备16 岁生日礼物的时候购买了一辆二手车。当他看到车上的
留言时被深深打动了，于是帮助原车主度过难关。
【写作提示】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容
他必须做点什么
他清楚地知道该做什么
可知，第一段可具体描写
①
“
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Duke 的内心活动，然后
写了一篇帖子并希望能够帮助原车主。
由第二段首句内容
很快，这篇帖子在网上广泛传播。
可知，第二段可描写读者在阅读完这个帖子之后深受感动纷
②
“
”
纷为原车主伸出援手，在筹集到足够的金额之后，Duke 将车和前都给了原车主，并且成为了朋友。
2.续写线索：做点什么
陷入思考
提笔写文
被广泛阅读
筹集资金
成为朋友
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The sky was dark. Rain fell in big drops and thunder and lightning flashed across the sky. I shivered with cold and fear as I
walked through the streams of muddy water. Some people were rushing by, completely bathed in the heavy rain.
Along the way, I saw some schoolchildren carrying their heavy schoolbags and rushing home. I also saw that some road
repair work had been abandoned by workers. Obviously, the workers had left in a hurry because of the storm. There were few
signs and it was hard to see what was on the road. There were pieces of wood and slabs of metal and a hole seemed to have been
dug and hurriedly covered with wooden boards.
I moved on but suddenly stopped as I heard someone crying. I quickly turned back to the place where the sounds came. I was
horrified! To my shock, there seemed to be a small child stuck in the big hole on the road. The wooden boards had moved away
with the force of the rushing water. Though I could barely identify how deep the hole was and whether there was any other victim
as it was dark all around me, I was sure, at least, the child was not only stuck in the hole, but faced the risk of getting drowned. I
told him that I was going to get help.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150 左右；
2.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for help.
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The parents of the child who just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had happened.
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【范文背诵】
Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for help. I charged away to knock
on the door on end. After a while, an athletic man of medium height opened the door. Panicked as I was, I endeavored to collect
my thoughts, trying to explain the situation in a way as concise as possible. While soothing me by patting my shoulder, the man
reached over to grab the torch on the shoe cabinet near the door. No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the
man started to scan the surroundings. Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child's hands, pulling him out
without reserve. Shortly afterwards, we sent the child to the nearest police station and waited for his parents.
The parents of the child who just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had happened. They were more
than grateful and thanked us profusely. With an outpouring of relief, I was also proud of myself, as I had never imagined I would
be part of a rescue party and the act of neighborliness could really make such a difference .While the mother and the father were
holding the child tight, I spotted the man beaming at the child with softness gleaming in his eyes. I was absorbed in my wild
thought, wondering whether he was also a tender father. All of a sudden, thunder crashed overhead, which jolted me back to
reality. I walked to the man and tugged his sleeve, whispering, "Thank you." I would never forget the good feeling of helping
someone in need.
【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者看见了有一个小孩被困在马路上的大洞里，作者寻求到一个男人帮助，
将小男孩救出，作者对于自己能够帮助邻居的事情感到震惊和美好的故事。
【写作提示】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容
事实上，我不知道该做什么或去哪里，但决定去最近的房子寻求帮助。
可知，第一段可描写作
①
“
”
者寻找别人去救小男孩。
由第二段首句内容
孩子的父母刚下班回来，听到发生的事情非常震惊。
可知，第二段可描写孩子的父母感谢作者
②
“
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。
2.续写线索：回家
发现
求救
安全
感谢
感悟
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tess was a five-year-old when she heard her Mom and Dad talking about her little brother, Andrew. All she knew was that he
was very sick and they didn't have money for the doctor's bills. Only a very costly operation could save him. She heard Daddy say
to Mommy sadly, "Only a miracle can save him now."
Tess went to her bedroom and pulled out her piggy bank. She poured all the change out and counted it carefully. No chance
here for mistakes. Carefully placing the coins back, she secretly went out the back door and ran to the drugstore in a comer.
She waited patiently for the chemist to give her some attention but he was too busy. So she took a quarter from her piggy
bank and hit it hard on the counter. That did it! "And what do you want?" the chemist asked in an angry voice. "I'm talking to my
brother from Chicago whom I haven't seen in ages."
“Well, I want to talk to you about my brother. He's really, really sick... and I want to buy a miracle.” Tess replied.
“I beg your pardon?” said the chemist.
“My brother has something bad growing inside his head and Daddy says only a miracle can save him now. So how much
does a miracle cost?”
“We don't sell miracles here. I'm sorry but I can't help you,” the chemist said, softening a little.
“Listen, I have the money to pay for it. If it isn't enough, I will get the rest. Just tell me how much it costs.”
The chemist's brother was a well-dressed man. He came over and asked Tess, "What kind of a miracle does your brother
need?”
“I don't know,” Tess replied with her eyes welling up. “I just know he's really sick and needs an operation. But my Daddy
can't pay for it, so I want to use my money.”
“How much do you have?” asked the well-dressed man. “One dollar and eleven cents,” Tess answered in a low voice.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Well, what a coincidence,” smiled the man.
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【范文背诵】
“Well, what a coincidence,” smiled the man. “One dollar and eleven cents. That is the exact price of a miracle for your little
brother.” He took her money in one hand and said, “Now, take me to your home. I want to see your brother and meet your parents.
Let's see if I have the kind of miracle you need.” The well-dressed man happened to be a famous doctor. After carefully examined
the little child, he helped the parents send the sick boy to the city’s best hospital, where he performed an operation on him.
The operation was completed for free. It wasn't long before Andrew was home again and doing well. Great joy filled in the
poor house again. The parents couldn’t thank the doctor enough. They simply couldn’t believe what had happened to their boy and
the whole family. Mom just kept saying, “That operation was a real miracle. I wonder how much it would have cost.” Tess smiled
brightly. She knew exactly how much a miracle cost—one dollar and eleven cents, plus the love of a little girl.
【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Tess 的弟弟生了重病，家里给不起手术费，说只有奇迹可以救弟弟，于是
Tess 来到药店，说要用一美元十一美分买一个奇迹，结果药剂师正好是给弟弟做手术的医生，医生治好了弟弟，并且收
了一美元十一美分作为手术费用。
【写作提示】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容
太巧了，
那人笑着说。
可知，第一段可描写药剂师救
①
“‘
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”
Tess 弟弟的经过。
由第二段首句内容
手术是免费完成的。
可知，第二段可描写手术完成后
②
“
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Tess 一家的情况。
2.续写线索：医生去见Tess 父母
医生帮助把弟弟送到医院
弟弟免费接受手术
弟弟康复回家
得知手术
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last year I graduated from college and landed a job in the local company. I was lucky because the economy was declining
and a lot of companies went out of business. There were many unemployed graduates. That was a difficult time for everyone. I
cherished my precious job and worked so hard. One day, I walked on the street after finishing my work. I saw many beautiful
decorations, such as colorful lights, the familiar song and so on. I suddenly realized Christmas was coming. I had promised my
nephew that when I found a job, I would send him a Christmas gift. Fortunately I still had a little time to buy one for him. And on
that very day I witnessed how people cared for each other,
I was doing some last-minute Christmas shopping in a toy store. A nicely dressed little girl was looking through the teddy
bears beside her father when she saw a little boy walk in and stop in front of the Pokemon toys. His jacket was obviously too
small. He had money in his hand. However, it looked no more than five dollars at most. He was with his father as well, and kept
picking up the Pokemon video games. Each time he showed one to his father, his father shook his head, “No”.
Rather disappointed, the boy gave up the video games and chose a book of stickers instead. After they walked away, the little
girl ran over to the Pokemon video games. She excitedly picked up one lying on top of the others, and raced down toward the
checkout. I picked up my purchases and followed the girl and her father.
注意.1.续写词数应为150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then, much to the little girl's delight, the little boy and his father got in line behind her and me.
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【范文背诵】
Then，much to the little girl’s delight，the little boy and his father got in line behind her and me. After the video game was
paid for and bagged, the little girl handed it back to the cashier and whispered something to her. The cashier smiled and put the
bag under the counter. I was putting things in my bag when the little boy came up to the cashier. The cashier said,
“Congratulations，you’re my hundredth customer today, and you win a prize！”and she handed the boy the Pokemon game.
The boy could only stare in disbelief. It was, he said, exactly what he had wanted！The little girl and her father had been
standing at the doorway, and I saw the biggest and prettiest smile on that little girl I have ever seen in my life. I suddenly
understood that the world is not divided into the strong who care and the weak who are cared for. We must each in turn care and be
cared.
【文章大意】本文以圣诞节买礼物为线索展开，讲述了作者在找到工作后为侄子买礼物时所见到的感人故事。一个男孩
由于钱不够多，买不到自己喜欢的玩具，一个小女孩暗中通过收银员帮助小男孩得到想要的玩具的故事。
【写作提示】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容
然后，让小女孩高兴的是，小男孩和他的爸爸排在她和我后面。
可知，第一段可描写小女孩实
①
“
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施自己的计划，暗中帮助小男孩。
②由第二段首句内容
男孩只能难以置信地瞪着眼睛。
可知，第二段可描写小男孩惊喜且满意，作者感悟到这个世界
“
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并不分为强者在乎和弱者被在乎。我们每个人都必须轮流关心和被关心。
2.续写线索：小女孩把游戏交给收银员
收银员微笑并放好
小男孩走近收银台
收银员祝贺小男孩赢得奖
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小女孩笑得很开心
感悟
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