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作文题目：My Opinion on Material Rewards for Senior Three Students

《我对于给高三学生物质奖励的看法》

话题：学校该不该用零食、文具这类物质奖励激励高三学生

🌷（支持观点）

范文

My Opinion on Material Rewards for Senior Three Students

From my perspective, it is advisable for schools to use snacks and stationery as rewards to motivate Senior Three students.

Small material rewards can offer instant encouragement. Burdened with heavy academic pressure, we seniors are easily worn out. Those practical prizes serve as a timely reminder that our efforts are recognized. Nevertheless, material rewards should be applied moderately. Inner motivation is the root of long-term progress. If handled properly, such rewards can fuel our passion for study.

中文翻译

我对于给高三学生物质奖励的看法

在我看来，学校可以把零食和文具作为奖励，来激励高三学生。

小小的物质奖励能够带来即时的鼓励。承受着繁重的学业压力，我们高三学子很容易身心疲惫。这些实用奖品及时提醒着我们：我们的付出被看见。不过，物质奖励应当适度使用。内在动力才是长期进步的根本。如果运用得当，这类奖励可以点燃我们的学习热情。

✨高级句型翻译

1. From my perspective, it is advisable for schools to …

在我看来，学校做……是明智的。

2. Burdened with heavy academic pressure, we seniors are easily worn out.

承受繁重学业压力，我们高三学生很容易疲惫。（过去分词作状语）

3. Those practical prizes serve as a timely reminder that our efforts are recognized.

这些实用奖品及时提醒我们：付出被看见。（同位语从句）

4. If handled properly, such rewards can fuel our passion for study.

如果运用得当，这类奖励可以点燃我们的学习热情。（状语从句省略）

🌷（反对观点）

范文

My Opinion on Material Rewards for Senior Three Students

I hold the view that schools had better not rely on snacks and stationery to motivate Senior Three students.

For one thing, material rewards may mislead us, making us study merely for prizes rather than knowledge. For another, once the rewards stop, our enthusiasm may fade away. What really counts is our inner drive. Schools should inspire us spiritually instead. Only when we study out of self-awareness can we achieve lasting progress.

中文翻译

我对于给高三学生物质奖励的看法

我认为学校最好不要依靠零食、文具来激励高三学生。

一方面，物质奖励可能误导我们，让我们只为奖品而学习，不是为求知。另一方面，一旦奖励停止，我们的学习热情可能消退。真正重要的是我们内在的动力。学校应当从精神层面激励我们。只有自觉主动地学习，我们才能取得长久的进步。

✨高级句型翻译

1. making us study merely for prizes rather than knowledge

让我们只为奖品学习，而非追求知识（现在分词作结果状语）

2. What really counts is our inner drive.

真正重要的是我们内在动力。（主语从句）

3. Only when we study out of self-awareness can we achieve lasting progress.

只有出于自觉学习，我们才能获得持久进步。（only+状语从句，部分倒装）

🌷（折中观点！）

范文

My Opinion on Material Rewards for Senior Three Students

As far as I am concerned, schools can give material rewards like stationery and snacks to Senior Three students, but they should not overuse them.

Small prizes can bring immediate joy and acknowledge our hard work. However, if we focus too much on prizes, we may ignore the value of learning itself. Material rewards act as a temporary motivation. Ultimately, it is our inner ambition that pushes us forward.

中文翻译

我对于给高三学生物质奖励的看法

在我看来，学校可以给高三学生发放文具、零食这类物质奖励，但不可过度使用。

小小的奖品能够立刻带来喜悦，认可我们的辛苦付出。然而，如果我们过度看重奖品，就会忽略学习本身的价值。物质奖励只是一种临时激励。归根结底，正是我们内心的抱负推动我们不断前行。

✨高级句型翻译

1. As far as I am concerned 在我看来

2. acknowledge our hard work 认可我们的努力

3. it is our inner ambition that pushes us forward.

正是我们内在的抱负推动我们前行。（强调句）

📘加分替换词 中英对照

• motivate → inspire 激励

• important → count / vital 重要

• hard work → diligent efforts 刻苦付出

• happy → joyful 开心

• at last → ultimately 最终

• temporary 暂时的

• lasting 持久的

• academic pressure 学业压力

🌷写作思路模板

1. 开头：亮明观点（支持/反对/折中）

2. 主体：写1~2条理由 + 简单让步

3. 结尾：总结，点明内在动力才最重要